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First Night

Postby SquishyTrishy » Tue Apr 16, 2002 9:56 pm

Ask any one thats knows me, and you will find out that I am not a patient person. I try to be when it comes to fanfic other wise I really would go insane. *thinks* O, right this had a point. How much longer and I going to have to wait for your absutely woundering amazing story?



~Trish~





Ps (makes funny faces at BBL)

SquishyTrishy
 


Re: First Night

Postby WitchSara » Wed Apr 17, 2002 3:30 pm

Sorry this took so long to post but I'm getting ready for vacation and have been really busy. But I have time to work on it now so I'll put another chapter up tonight or first thing tomorrow. And this could be a **SPOILER** chapter. The rest of the story will be for sure.



SPOILERS TO FOLLOW

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Prelogue…



“In the beginning…there was nothing. Then a single thought, and existence as we know it came into being. But there was dissension amongst the Angels, whom would be favored above this new existence, but were not. War broke out. Those who had rebelled were cast down to the lowest plane of existence. Where they would spend eternity in the only place devoid of the love of God.’



“From time to time, these fallen angels have found ways to escape. Appearing to mankind in the form of demons, with some even taking control of human bodies, and becoming vampires. But one of the fallen had loftier goals. He wanted to reshape all of existence in his own form. So, in the latter part of the nineteenth century, this fallen angel opened a gateway from Hell…to Earth. Then some asshole built a city on it. Go figure.’



“My name is Summers. Buffy Summers. I’m a vampire slayer. Correction…I’m THE Vampire Slayer. The only one. The only one left anyways. Drusilla killed Kendra. Faith finally bit the big one that Spring Willow went insane. And Bekka…Bekka didn’t deserve to die the way she did. She was my friend. And that’s all I’m going to say about that.”



The reporter writes as fast as she can trying to keep up. “This, um…Ms Summers, this is the first interview you’ve given in ten years. Does it have anything to do with her? With Willow Rosenberg, I mean? You mentioned the spring of 2002. Are you…?”



“I did, didn’t I? I haven’t spoke about that in so long.” Buffy stands up and walks over to the window to look out at the city far below. “It’s funny…when I look at it from up here it almost looks…” she turns back to the reporter. With her arms folded at her chest and her right hand playing with her necklace the way she does, you would never know that this was the most powerful person on the planet. She looks just like your average twenty-something year old woman. But in reality she’s over forty. Older than any Slayer has ever lived before. Her power has grown considerably and she hasn’t aged a day in twenty years.



“But that’s what everyone wants to hear about isn’t it? Why I decided to go public. After six years of being the Slayer and over two thousand years of secrecy behind it. I’ll tell you this much…none of the rumor mongers got it right.”



“Then…then Willow Rosenberg didn’t turn evil and try to take over the world? I thought…?”



“Willow! Evil? Oh god no,” Buffy laughed at the thought of it. “Willow was the sweetest most giving person I’ve ever known. She was never evil…just…confused. She had lost the thing she loved most dear. She couldn’t handle it. But it began long before that. It was our first year in college, and Willow had just started hanging out with Tara. None of us knew how deep their relationship had become. Or that theirs was a love foretold for over a millennium. It’s funny, none of us remembered what had happened for years afterward. Magic, y’know,” she says as if it’s the most natural of things. “But I remember it now. I remember the first time I saw her. She was with Willow in the cafeteria, but when I said hi to them Willow acted like they weren’t together. When she finally introduced me to Tara I must have blind not to see what they meant to each other. That’s where it starts, I guess. The day I first met Tara.”



First Night Chapter 7

“The Doll’s Eye Crystal”



In her place of confinement, the enemy struggled to break free. She pulled at the ties that bound her, but they would not break. Not yet.



When Willow called Buffy and asked to meet her in the park, she had every intention of telling her all about what was going on in her life. The “Tara” thing mainly. She wanted to tell her all about Tara and how she had finally found what was missing in her life. Buffy would be so happy for her. Buffy would understand. Wouldn’t she? Of course she would. She might be a little freaked out at first but she would be happy that Willow wasn’t still pining over Oz like some lost little puppy dog wanting it’s mommie. At least Tara being there with her would make it a little easier.



Tara: “S…Scooby gang? As in “Scooby Doo where are you?”

Willow: “Yeah, except that we don’t have a big talking dog. We kinda substitute Giles for that.”

Tara: “And you, um…solve mysteries?”

Willow: “Well…yeah. But it’s more along the lines of fighting vampires and other monsters.”

Tara: “But w…why are you called the Scooby gang? It doesn’t…”

Willow: “Oh, that’s because of all the spooky stuff. Plus we’re all teens like Fred and the gang. And we’re…um…y’know, now that I think of it, maybe we need a Mystery Machine.”



Tara laughs. Willow closes her eyes for just a moment. Almost a blink. When she opens them again she’s not sitting under the tree in the park anymore. She’s in a dark room that she doesn’t recognize. She’s sitting at a table with several candles set out in a certain pattern in front of her. There are seven candles of different colors, all lit, and as she looks at them she almost recognizes the pattern, but the memory slips away almost as soon as it comes into her mind. She feels confused and tries to stand but can’t. She goes to put her hands on the armrests of her chair to try to push herself up. That’s when she feels them. One on either side of her chair. Wheels! She closes her eyes again, and when she opens them she’s back in the park with Tara.



Tara: “W…why w…would you s…say that t…to me?”

Willow: “What? I…what did I say?”

Tara: (She starts to stand up and has an angry look on her face) “Y…you d…don’t have to p…play games with m…me, Willow. I …”

Willow: (…grabs Tara’s arm to stop her from getting up.) NO! Wait, please! I…I’m sorry. Tara, I just blanked out for a sec. Please, I didn’t mean it. Whatever IT was. Just talk to me. Please.”



Tara eases back down to a sitting position. She looks at Willow with hesitation on her face.



Tara: “What…what do you mean? You blanked out?”

Willow: “Yeah, I was sitting here talking to you and the next think I know I’m in some old room calling the spirits. Really! What did I say to you that made you so mad?”

Tara: (She hesitates…as if she doesn’t know how to put it into words.) “You…you said…”

Willow: “What?”

Tara: “You said…not to fall in love with you.”

Willow: “I…”



Before she can finish her sentence…



Buffy: “Will, hey. I’m here. What did you wanna see me about?”

Willow: “Buffy, hi.(Willow and Tara both stand.) Glad you could make it. This…um…this is Tara. My…new…friend.”

Tara: “Hi.”

Buffy: “Oh, yeah. Hi Tara. Willow mentioned you once before. You guys met in that witch class, right?”

Tara: “N…no…um, actually it was a Wicca group.”

Buffy: “Oh. Sorry. I’m not too up on the differences in Wicca and witchcraft. I guess Willow is gonna hafta sit down with me one day and get me caught up on it. Right, Will? Willow?”



Willow doesn’t answer. Instead she stands there staring into space like she’s lost in the world.



Buffy and Tara together: “Willow??”

Willow: “What? (She looks confused.) Um…what did you say?”

Buffy: “Hey, are you okay? You kinda zoned out on us for a minute there.”

Tara: “Willow…”

Willow: “N…no, I’m fine. Um…I hafta go.”

Buffy: “What? But…”

Willow: “I’m sorry. Um…just…I’ll talk to you guys later.”



Willow doesn’t give any more explanation. She walks away leaving Tara and Buffy standing there not knowing what the hell just happened. Willow heads for the college as if she has a mission to do. And she does. In her mind there is only one thought. One goal. She knows what she has to do. She has to kill Warren.”



Prologue…



The place of confinement is empty now. The enemy has escaped.



Next….”Of war and roses.”







Edited by: xita  at: 4/18/02 11:50:39 pm
WitchSara
 


Re: First Night

Postby jdcioffi » Wed Apr 17, 2002 8:15 pm

Ooooooo ... nicety, nice nice. Don't leave for vacation, please ... we need more updates. :D

JD

...but if I did call, she wouldn't hang up on me.

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Re: First Night

Postby WitchSara » Wed Apr 17, 2002 8:31 pm

First Night

“Of war and roses”

by Sara Poe



With a sudden jerk, the chair rolls back and crashes into the wall. Willow almost falls out but catches herself just in time. She tries to stand but her legs won’t work for her. Then she realizes that she can’t even feel her legs. She’s in the dark room again. The candles are arranged in the same pattern in front of her. She looks around, trying to peer through the darkness to make out more of the room. Above her there is a string hanging down from a ceiling fan. The string hangs low, as if made for someone…in a wheelchair. Willow pulls it and the room seems to explode in light. It’s a circle room. A place made especially for calling the spirits. Willow has seen pictures of them on the Internet while surfing for info on her new hobby.



There are no windows in the room. And Willow soon realizes that there’s not a door either. She remembers that these places are usually hidden so that the unwanted visitor doesn’t chance upon them. She tests the wheels on the chair to make sure they work, and beings to roll herself around the small room. Looking for anything that might be helpful in getting out. Or finding out what was going on.



In one corner of the room sits the only bookcase. “The obvious,” Willow thinks to herself. She rolls over to the bookcase and begins pulling out books at eye level. The ones that are easy to reach for a person in a wheelchair. By the fifth book she’s found what she was looking for. The book comes halfway out then stops. Slowly the bookcase slides away from the corner. Behind it another bookcase facing the adjoining room slides away too and Willow rolls out into the other room.



Now she’s in what looks like a master library. The room is huge. Ceilings reach the twenty feet high level. Large wooden rafters run both ways across the ceiling and she knows right away that she’s in an old castle. She’s smart, this girl is. She figures things out in her head that most people would be oblivious of. This is how she’s survived for four years as a “Slayerette.” Because she thinks.



There is a movement in the rafters. She looks up quickly but it’s too fast for her to catch. She hears it behind her. Again she tries to stand but this time she does it out of fear and almost makes it. But instead she falls sideways bringing the chair down with her, Laughter echoes throughout the room. Followed by the sound of two hands clapping.



“We’re nervous today aren’t we. Red?” It’s in the rafters again, trying to stay hidden from her. “Don’t you worry now, I haven’t come to torment you today. Just checking to make sure you haven’t kicked it yet. Know what I mean.” She knows the voice. She recognizes it’s English accent and tone of cruelty. “Spike?” she says.



Spike: “Who else, Red? Now, don’t you try none of that witchiepoo stuff with me again. The misses said to be good to you but she didn’t say how good.”

Willow: “What have you done to me? When Buffy finds out…”

Spike: (Laughs louder this time.) When Buffy finds out? What the bleeding hell are you talking bout. You playing the amnesia game with ole Spike today, Red? Won’t work! I’m game to all your tricks.”



She’s smart, remember. That’s how she’s survived when someone else might have bit the big one by now. Her mind begins to reason out the situation and quickly comes to the most logical conclusion.



Willow: ”Ohmygod! Spike! I know…I know what’s happening! We’re in another alternate reality! That’s why you’re all “Mr. Shadows Man” and I’m in this chair! Someone musta…”

Spike: “Alternate reality my arse, Red. I told you not to try any of your tricks. I been dealing with you long enough to know what you’re up to.”

Willow: “No, Spike I…”

Spike: “Save it for somebody who gives a damn. I did my job. You’re still alive. You ain’t escaped or tapped into the cable so you could control Nevada again. Your food and magazines are in the cubby. Now, the misses is waiting outside so if you don’t have any special requests…”

Willow: “No, Spike please! If you just listen to…”

Spike: “Riiiight. Last time I spent any length of time listening to you, you almost had me believing Xander was talking to you from the beyond. Me and the misses agreed to watch you for the Slayer but that don’t mean we become friends again.”

Willow: “Buffy left me in your and Drusilla’s hands? God, I must be worse than I thought.”

Spike: “Drusilla! You are daft today aren’t you? Nuff games, Red. I’ll tell Buffy you said hello.”



Willow hears him moving across the ceiling and just glances a dark figure as it exits the open window on the far side of the room. She pulls the chair from atop her and crawls as fast as she can to the open window. The job is more difficult than she thought it would be. She feels so weak and tired. But she makes it to the window and even manages to pull herself up enough to peek out over the windowsill. She sees trees. Lots and lots of trees. “The country,” she thinks. “And theres Spike walking away from the castle. He has his arm around a woman she doesn’t recognize. She jerks her hand forward trying to reach the outside windowsill so she can pull herself up for a better view, but her hand hits an invisible barrier and the force of it knocks her back away from the window.



She’s not hurt, but feels more tired than ever. Then she notices the envelope. It’s hanging off the windowsill. She must not have noticed it before. Her mind was too deep into thoughts of the outside. She manages to pull herself back over to her chair and, after several tries, sets her chair upright and climbs back into it. She wheels her way back to the window and picks up the envelope. There’s a card inside that she reads.



Dearest Willow,

Please don’t be angry that I’ve stopped coming up with Spike to visit you. You know that I love you as much as I love my own sister, but you’re so harsh sometimes. I’ll come up next time but only if you promise to stay in control. Buffy sends her love. Take care of you. Love, Dawn



“Dawn?,” she thinks. “Spike has an old lady named Dawn and she sent me her love. THIS…is one weird world. And who the heck is her sister?”



She wheels herself out of the library and into the huge castle hallway. The place is old and abandon looking. Except for the few rooms that must be hers the entire place looks like it hasn’t been used in forever. Then she sees a ramp running along side the main staircase. She makes her way to it, wheeling past a huge antique mirror on her way. Suddenly her mind catches what her eyes just saw. She stops. Almost in disbelief, she rolls herself backward to the mirror. What she sees stuns her. Her reflection…but she’s old.



To be continued……





WitchSara
 


Re: First Night

Postby The Rose24 » Wed Apr 17, 2002 8:53 pm

Huh? What just happened?



This is a really unexpected turn of events.

Tara: My heart doesn't stutter.

Tara: Willow, I got so lost.
Willow: I found you. I will always find you.


Willow: Hi, um Tara. I was wondering maybe you want to go out some time for coffee? food? Kisses and gay love?

The Rose24
 


Re: First Night

Postby WitchSara » Thu Apr 18, 2002 12:09 am

First Night

Chapter 8

“No Future”

Scene 1;

“This body is wonderful,” she thinks. “So young. So full of life.” Willow makes her way through the college hallways like a woman with a mission. And she does have a mission doesn’t she. It’s the reason she’s here in the first place. The same reason that she does everything else in her life. The reason she eats and breaths and gets out of bed every morning. For her. She’s doing it all for her. She would do anything for her. That’s why she’s here. That’s why she has to kill Warren.



She gets to the cafeteria and starts looking around, hoping that she’s not too late. But she is. She sees Warren and Johnathan sitting together at a table near the back. Just where she remembered they would be. This is where she told them to meet after all. She and Tara introduced them because they knew that Johnathan and Warren were both the friendless loner type and that they might click. They might become friends. But the first time she saw them here she was with Buffy and Tara, and it was a joyful moment. She felt like she had actually done something good for two people outside of the Scooby Gang thing. This was something Willow Rosenberg, regular girl, had done. With Tara’s help, of course. This was something THEY had done. Together.



And now she would undo it. Stop it from going any further than this. She knew what the results of this meeting would eventually be. The event was still over two years away, but this is where it began. And she was the one that introduced them. She unknowingly put together the men that would one day kill the thing she loved most in the world. That’s why she was here. She was going to kill Warren before he could kill Tara.



It would be a simple thing. Just walk right up to him, smiling of course, put her hand on the back of his head, and release enough raw energy to blow his brains all over the cafeteria. This body was young and lacked the mystical experience, but it was powerful. This body had the ability to tap into energies never utilized by a human being before. In time, her power would come to surpass even that of the goddess Glory.



She slowly walked toward the table. Why was she nervous? It’s not like she never killed Warren before. Johnathan had gotten away then, thanks to Buffy, but as long as she was here why not kill him too. She would have done it before if Buffy hadn’t played dirty. Yep, bestest friend in the world, good ole Buffy the Vampire Slayer. The one who put a stake into her spinal column so she could never walk again. Then that bitch Amy, with Giles help, bound her to that wretched castle. She spent the last twenty years there trying to escape. Trying to find a way to make things right. Then HE came. And he had an ideal. He could gather what was needed, smuggle it into the castle, and with the power at Willow’s command, she could travel back in time and switch bodies with her younger self. Then she could kill Warren before he killed Tara. And then Xander wouldn’t have to die.



She never meant to kill Xander. But, damnit, he got in the way. She couldn’t bring Tara back because her death wasn’t by mystical means, but she would have revenge on the ones that killed her. And anyone getting in the way would be moved. Even if she had to move them the hard way.



Now the moment she waited twenty years for had come. In seconds, Warren would be dead, and Tara wouldn’t have to die. Nothing would stop her now.



“Willow?”



Willow’s heart stopped. The voice coming from behind her was one she recognized as well as her own. One she had heard in her dreams every night for the last twenty years. An acid drop of fear shot through her body. She couldn’t move. Couldn’t turn around even to face the voice. Twenty years of anger and loathing and hatred, built up to such a point that her every waking thought was of revenge seemed to, for just a moment, fade away. The voice was at her side now.



“W…Willow? Are you okay?”



That stutter…that wonder, beautiful stutter. Willow felt a lump in her throat and fought to choke back the tears that she knew were coming. She wanted desperately to turn and look at her. Wanted more than life itself to take her in her arms and hold her so tight that she could never escape. For the first time in years she felt that cool wetness on her face that comes with crying. She turned, looked into Tara’s eyes, and broke down into tears.



“Willow!” Tara steadies her and helps her to the girl’s bathroom. When they get inside Willow pulls away from her and walks to the sink. She splashes cold water on her face and tries to pull herself together. When she first seized control of this younger version of herself, she was in the park with Tara. She managed to utter only six words before the spell broke and she was pulled back into the future. It was two years before she had the materials to try again. This time she once more appeared in the park, but a few minutes after her first appearance. Her thoughts were still muddy from the time jump and she didn’t really see Tara. Her thoughts were singled minded. But now they’re clear. And standing not five feet away from her is her reason for existing.



“Willow, are you okay?” She doesn’t answer. She can’t answer. She’s afraid that if she opens her mouth the only sound that will come out will be a loud moan filled with twenty years worth of pain. “What, did I embarrass you in front of your friend again?” Anger was in Tara’s voice now. So much anger that it makes Willow turn around and face her again.



“Tara, n…no! It’s not…you could never do anything wrong. I…I just…it’s just me. I’m…”



“Look, Willow, if this is going to make you this upset…”



“No, honey you don’t understand. I…I…” Willow can’t find the words. How does she tell her about the last twenty years? How? “I’m sorry, Tara. It’s nothing to do with you. It’s…um…to tell you the truth, I’m just a little homesick. That’s all. Okay?”



Tara smiles, “Okay. If you’re sure?”



“I am,” Willow answers, smiling too. Feeling something she hasn’t felt in years.



“Well, then m…maybe we could, I dunno, spend the day together?”



This was something that Willow couldn’t pass up. To spend one more day with Tara before she changed everything. After all, once Warren was dead, things…everything would be different. She wouldn’t even remember this. Her future would be one in which Tara never died. This was her chance to do what she’s wanted to do since that horrible, horrible day.



“O…okay,” Willow says as she takes Tara’s hand.



Tara blushes. “Great. What should we do?”



The other things she has to do can wait. Now was the time to pretend. Pretend that she was just an eighteen-year-old college student discovering the wonders of gay love for the first time. “Ooooooh, I think I can think of something.”



To be continued……



WitchSara
 


Re: First Night

Postby mollyig » Thu Apr 18, 2002 2:30 am

Oh I do like the twist that this has taken. Nicely done!

I could paint you in the dark, 'cause I've studied you with hunger as a work of art - Collecting you (Indigo Girls)

mollyig
 


Re: First Night

Postby hellmouthhottie20 » Thu Apr 18, 2002 7:47 am

Iam liking this a lot, poor willow.

and who the hell is spike with!!

I cant wait for the next update.

one by on the penguins stole my sanity

hellmouthhottie20
 


Re: First Night

Postby BigMac » Thu Apr 18, 2002 8:30 am

Willow goes back in time ok I get it go willow fix it.

Tara: Assume Crash
Positions

BigMac
 


Re: First Night

Postby WitchSara » Thu Apr 18, 2002 9:10 pm

First Night ch7

***Scene 2***



Dawn: “You’re joking, right?”

Spike: “Wish I was, love. But that’s what she said.”

Dawn: “But it doesn’t make sense. Why would Willow claim that she’s from another dimension when she knows that I control the gateway. If anyone, or any thing, had came here from an alternate dimension I would be the first to know about it. Willow knows this.”

Spike: “Like I been telling you for years, she’s gone over the deep end. Not only is she mad, but she’s pretty well daft, too. Write it off, love. It’s not worth worrying your pretty head over.”



The nights are quiet in Sunnydale these days. All the spooky monsters stay home now. They should. For Sunnydale is the home of a pretty astonishing array of individuals. There’s the Slayer, of course. Who just happens to be the most powerful human being on the planet. She lives in her mile high glass tower overlooking the world. Protecting it from any and all evil. Then there’s the Key. The Key is a being made of pure energy. She has learned to harness her power over the years and has complete control over the dimensional gateway. Her name is Dawn and to the general public she’s the sister of the Slayer. And lets not forget the Dark One. William the Bloody. The last vampire. Better known to all as “Spike.” The mystery about this one is how he’s managed to stay alive when the Slayer and her crew destroyed all Earth’s vampires years ago.



Then, of course, there are the “Slayerettes.” Or the “Buffy groupies” as the media likes to refer to them. They handle the everyday evil happenings. Only calling on the Slayer for the big jobs. Led by Cordillia Chase, they have been well trained to handle any situation that may come up. Cordillia rejoined Buffy in Sunnydale after being away for years. It was the events of ten years ago that brought the two back together. Willow had tried to escape and Cordillia and Angel came to help stop her. In the end, Angel was dead and Willow was once again imprisoned in her castle.



Dawn shifted the castle into another, unpopulated dimension so that if Willow escaped again, she still wouldn’t be able to get to Earth without Dawn knowing about it. She would take Willow food and magazines to read every week until Willow began to get belligerent with her. Then she stopped coming all together and let Spike handle it. After the weekly visit she and Spike would head on over to Slayer Tower to fill Buffy in on how Willow was doing. Tonight was no different.



Tonight the only thing that was out of the ordinary was Willow’s obvious attempt to trick Spike again. Just the way she did ten years ago. But this attempt was by far the lamest one ever. Willow knew that nobody could transcend from one dimension to another without Dawn feeling and investigating it. Dawn was still thinking about this when she and Spike arrived at Buffy’s tower.



Dawn: “Okay, I won’t be too long in here.”

Spike: “No problem, love. As a matter of fact, I think I’ll go in with you tonight. See what the old girl’s done by the way of decorating.”

Dawn: “you’re joking, right? (Dawn smiles.) Buffy will…”

Spike: “Buffy won’t even see me. I’ll stay in the downstairs lobby and since the Slayer never comes down past the two hundredth floor anyways, I reckon I should be okay. Just…don’t take too long.”

Dawn: “I won’t.”



They enter through the huge glass doors and while Spike waits in the glass lobby, Dawn makes her way through the glass tower and to the glass elevator. A world of glass. She gets on the elevator and goes to the far side so she can watch the city get smaller as she goes higher. Spike watches her through glass walls and smiles because he knows how much she loves looking out over the city. The glass city. He starts to turn back toward the glass doors, thinking that he should wait outside after all, and stumbles right into the Slayer.



Buffy: (A very angry Buffy at that)”What the hell are you doing in my home?”

Spike: (Steps backward and has a nervous look on his face.) “Hey, pet. Um…I was just waiting for the misses. She went up to give you all the lowdown on Red. How…how did you know I was here?”

Buffy: “Did you think that a vampire, even one with an invitation, could walk into my home without me knowing it. And I never thought I’d see you in here again.”

Spike: “To be honest, pet, you had your chance to see me here all the time and you passed it up. And look what came and found me.”

Buffy: “You’re lucky she did find you. My sister is the only reason you’re still alive.”



She takes a step toward him. He stumbles backward and nearly falls, just catching himself.



Buffy: “Y’know, Spike, since you’re the last vampire, technically I could kill you and then I wouldn’t have to be the slayer anymore. And the responsibility wouldn’t need to pass on to the next generation.” (She walks toward him.) “Yep, all I have to do is stake you, vacuum up the dust, and tell my sister that you ran out on her like the scum you are.”



At one time Spike would have relished in this. He and the Slayer had many go arounds in the day. But this was a different Slayer then the one he once loved. This Slayer still looked and sounded like the Buffy he knew, but she wasn’t. This was a hard, cold warrior that saw too many friends die to care about the life of one vampire. Especially him. He slowly walks toward the door. Never taking his eyes off of her.



Spike: “You still holding a grudge then, pet? I thought you woulda gotten over it by now. It’s been ten years after all.”

Buffy: “You helped her escape! It’s because of you that Xander’s dead! I should…”

Spike: (He thinks quickly, trying to distract her.) “Willow’s got a new game. She’s up to her old tricks again.”

Buffy: (She stops.) “What…what do you mean?”

Spike: “She’s claiming that she’s not the real Willow. That she’s from another dimension. Probably trying to make us think that she’s been replaced or something. But Dawn…”

Buffy: “…Would have known if Willow had done an inter-dimensional switch. I know this. So what’s the problem?”

Spike: “Well, pe…um, Slayer, me and Dawn were wondering why the witch would try something so bloody obvious. It’s not like her. She’s more clever than that.”



She turns away from him and starts to walk toward the elevator.



Buffy: “I’ll check it out. And Spike…if you ever come into my home again…”



She stops at the elevator door, turns to look at him…and smiles. “I’ll kill you.”



To be continued……..



WitchSara
 


Re: First Night

Postby tommo » Fri Apr 19, 2002 12:51 am

You have some really nice ideas in this fic and I like the way you're incorporating flashbacks into what you're currently writing.



Just a few words about style. Style is really important when you're trying to engage the reader, as the consistency of this generally keeps your audience happy. Your style seems a little uncertain throughout. You oscillate between a script style and a prose narrative, also your tense is sometimes present tense and sometimes past tense in the same section. I can't help feeling that this is a bit confusing for the reader and detracts a little bit from what is generally a really enjoyable and original idea.



You might want to get yourself a beta reader; check the list at the top of the Pens board where there are plenty of reliable people to choose from. You can thrash these kinds of things out with your beta, who will be able to offer advice and suggestions on keeping your style consistent with the story you're telling. :)


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No metaphors...just fucking.

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Re: First Night

Postby mollyig » Fri Apr 19, 2002 3:03 am

Wow, Spike's the only vamp left?



And how come Dawn doesn't know about the switch?



Looking forward to wherever it is you're bringing us with this.

I could paint you in the dark, 'cause I've studied you with hunger as a work of art - Collecting you (Indigo Girls)

mollyig
 


Re: First Night

Postby jdcioffi » Fri Apr 19, 2002 3:40 pm

Excellent update(s)!



I like where this is going -- and love the reaction Willow had to seeing Tara again.



Wonderful

JD

...but if I did call, she wouldn't hang up on me.

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Re: First Night

Postby Emily First » Sat Apr 20, 2002 3:34 am

Yep,heading down a new road...Looking forward to the journey...

vive,valeque.

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Re: First Night

Postby Willow Rocks » Sat Apr 20, 2002 6:19 pm

Yay! Brillant just make sure it has a happy ending! ;)

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Re: First Night

Postby xita » Sun Apr 21, 2002 1:27 pm

I think this is very interesting. It was moving to see Willow's reaction to Tara. But Willow is a broken soul still. She doesn't see that all the things she did were wrong. Maybe Tara can make this Willow see this and they can be together again somehow.

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"Everything is turning out so dark..."

"No, it's okay. Lost is good. Willow and I always know how to find each other!"

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Re: FIC: First Night - SPOILERS

Postby WitchSara » Tue Apr 23, 2002 7:27 pm

Scene 3…



Two days. That’s how long she’s been here. Two days. Two days and twenty years. Tara is lying on the bed asleep. It’s almost morning. That time when the birds are starting to sing but it’s still dark out. Willow is sitting on the windowsill, her attention divided between looking at the stars and watching Tara sleep. This is where she’s been for twenty years. But only in her mind.



In reality she’s been here for two days. She traveled back in time to kill Warren before he could kill Tara, thus altering a reality in which she has only Tara’s memory to keep her safe. But it’s been two days since she arrived. So why hasn’t she killed Warren yet?



A cool breeze blows her hair into her face and she smiles. This is where she wants to be. She wants to be with Tara as they’re just starting to discover each other. She wants to be young and free and in love. She wants to be where she was happiest in her life. That place is here…with Tara. With the Scooby Gang, (God, she hasn’t thought of that name in years.) fighting vampires and demons and correcting all the mistakes she made in the past. Isn’t that what everyone wants after all. To correct the mistakes we’ve made in the past?



Willow knows now that she didn’t come back just to commit something as petty as murder. She came back to start over. To give herself a second chance. She’s going to stay in this time period and live her life over again. This time she could make sure that it turned out the way she wanted. The way it should have turned out in the first place. But one thing hadn’t changed…she still had to kill Warren. Although she could probably stop him from killing Tara in some other way, (Cast a spell to make him move to Alaska or something) killing him would be for the best. After what he did…or, what he was going to do? Sometimes that part became confusing to her still. Keeping “what happened then” separate from “what hasn’t happened yet.” She made the same mistake earlier when she was telling Tara about the time she took Dawn trick-or-treating and she met Spike for the first time. Tara asked who Dawn was and she almost said, “Buffy’s sister,” but then she remembered that this was the time before Dawn existed. Before she was created and the memories of her life planted in their minds. Even the memory of trick-or-treating with her wasn’t real. Sometimes…sometimes these things could be so confusing.



Tara mumbles something in her sleep. Taking it as a signal, Willow stands and walks over to the bed. She slides under the blankets behind Tara and snuggles up close to her back, wrapping her arm around her waist resting her chin in that spot between Tara’s neck and shoulder. This is where she wants to be. Where she’s wanted to be for nearly two decades.



Other than having to look up her class schedule, the next day goes well for her. Willow had forgotten how much fun college life had been. She even sees Warren during lunch, makes a mental note to kill him later, and goes on about her day. Tara says that she’s acting a little different. More mature. But in time she’ll learn to act like the young Willow again. Because she is the young Willow again. This was her life now and she was going to live it to it’s fullest. There was just one little problem.



She met with the gang that night and Buffy noticed almost immediately the change in Willow. “Your new friend must be having an affect on you, Will, you haven’t made one of your snappy Willoisms all night.” She said to her. Willow tried to play it off like she had things on her mind, but Buffy gave her that look that says “hmmmm.” That was the problem. Buffy had been trained to notice things that were out of place. How long would it take before she started asking Willow questions that she couldn’t answer? How long would it be before Willow slipped up and told one of the gang about something that hasn’t happened yet?



There was a very real possibility that they would discover she wasn’t the young college girl that they all knew and loved. They might even be able to send her back. If that happened before she killed Warren then all would be lost. Tomorrow night everyone would be at the Bronze. Everyone except her and Tara. All she had to do was cast a simple memory spell on Tara (she was good at that one, wasn’t she.) and then she would have an alibi. Warren would die tomorrow night. Tomorrow night for sure.



*****



Sunnydale was dark as usual. The get together at the Bronze had to be put off due to an unexpected event. Faith woke up from her coma. Willow remembers when this happened in her past and decides that she’s going to change things a little bit. After all, if she was going to start putting things right then she might as well start with Faith.



She still takes Tara with her in search of Faith, just as she had done those many years ago. Only this time Willow knows where Faith is NOT going to be, so she can avoid looking in the places she’s already searched. This time she was determined to find her.



Tara: “B…but I thought you said that there was only one Slayer every generation?”

Willow: “Yes, well, if a Slayer dies then she’s replaced. Buffy died, just for a minute, and Kendra was summoned. Then Kendra died and Faith took her place.”

Tara: “And Faith is bad, right?”

Willow: “No, not really. Faith is more misguided than anything. In a few years…um, she…um…she should realize her mistakes and…come to her senses.”

Tara: “In a few years? You sound like there’s a time limit on her evilness.”

Willow: “Do I? Sorry, I just meant that she’ll come around. It just might take time.”

Tara: “Oh. So what do we do if we find her tonight?”

Willow: “We stay out of site and call Buffy to handle it.”

Tara: “I…I don’t mean to ask so many questions but…”

Willow: “Hey, that’s okay. I like hearing your voice. Ask whatever questions you want.”

Tara: “Okay. Um…how long are we going to keep this up? We’ve been at it all day. I…I mean, I like doing things that you’re interested in but…maybe we’re just not going to find her. Aren’t you getting tired of all this walking?”

Willow: “No…I don’t think I’ll ever get tired of walking anymore. I spent so much time in that…” (She catches herself before she says “…that chair.”)

Tara: “That what?”



Another slip up. She’s done this too much lately. If she does it in front of Buffy then her plan could surely be lost. There was only one answer. The memory spell that she planned to use on Tara to cover her tracks when she killed Warren would have to be worked on herself too. She would have to erase her own memory of the last twenty years. This way she would be the young Willow in mind as well as body.



Willow explains away her slip up and quickly changes the subject. But she notices a look on Tara’s face that says maybe she was starting to get suspicious of what was going on. But before Willow has time to think about it a sharp pain hits her in the back of the head. The next realization she has is that she’s on her hands and knees, and someone is yelling at her. She looks up through blurred vision and sees someone standing over her.



Willow: “F…Faith?”

Faith: “Heya, Willow. I was looking for B but you’ll do. Give her a message for me, okay?”



She kicks Willow hard in the side, knocking her into the air and onto her back. Willow feels her chest tighten and can’t breathe. She sees stars. But through the stars she can see Tara. Tara, quiet, shy, never-hurt-a-fly Tara, was on Faiths back with both of her hands in her hair. “LEAVE HER ALONE!,” she screams, pulling at Faith’s hair and clinging on to her like a mad woman. Her teeth clinched together and lips snarled up in anger. Faith reaches back, grabs Tara by her hair, and throws her forward to the ground.



Faith: “Fine. I don’t know who the hell you are, but if you wanna take the beating for her then I’ll be glad to oblige.”



Suddenly the air grows still and feels as if it’s full of electricity. Faith feels all the hair on her body stand on end. She turns to look at Willow but sees that she’s no longer lying on the ground. Instead, she’s floating several feet above it. Her eyes are black, her hair a dark shade of red. And the look on her face…for just a moment, Faith feels afraid.



Willow: “YOU…WILL NOT…TOUCH HER!!”



A burst of pure raw energy bursts forth from Willow’s body. Faith is sent flying through the air, landing two blocks away on top of a parked car. Shattering all it’s windows when she hits. Willow grows calm and gently sets herself back on the ground. She looks at Tara, who is still lying where Faith threw her, but she’s staring back at Willow with a confused look on her face. Willow rushes to her side.



Willow: “Ohmygod, Tara! Are you okay, baby?” (She helps Tara to her feet.)

Tara: “Willow? W…what did you d…do? H…how…”

Willow: “Shhhh, its okay now. She won’t hurt you ever again. I promise.”



Tara pulls away from her. Willow looks at her face and sees something that terrifies her to the bone. She sees fear. Even if its only for the briefest of moments…its fear.



Tara: “What did you do?”

Willow: (She stammers for an answer, but comes up empty.) “I…I…(she thinks as quickly as she can.) “ Tara, I’m sorry. Napracotea!”



Tara starts to fall but Willow catches her, and lays her down gently. Her spell has put the entire town to sleep Humans, vampires, and demons alike. All sleep now. Willow leaves Tara on the ground under a tree and heads off to the dorms. She knows that she never should have put this off. Waiting was only making things worse. So was her knowledge of future events. She had to erase her own memory so that she could be the young Willow again. But before she could do that, she had to complete her original mission. Right now!!! Warren had to die.



To be continued…



WitchSara
 


Re: FIC: First Night - SPOILERS

Postby xita » Tue Apr 23, 2002 7:56 pm

Willow needs to learn her lesson! God when will she. sigh. Thanks for the update.

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"Everything is turning out so dark..."

"No, it's okay. Lost is good. Willow and I always know how to find each other!"

xita
 


Re: FIC: First Night - SPOILERS

Postby The Rose24 » Tue Apr 23, 2002 8:09 pm

Thanks for the update. Good job. I can't wait to see how you resolve this.

Tara: My heart doesn't stutter.

Tara: Willow, I got so lost.
Willow: I found you. I will always find you.


Willow: Hi, um Tara. I was wondering maybe you want to go out some time for coffee? food? Kisses and gay love?

Edited by: The Rose24  at: 4/23/02 7:10:14 pm
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Re: FIC: First Night - SPOILERS

Postby WitchSara » Tue Apr 23, 2002 10:00 pm

First Night

Chapter 9

“The Enemy”

by Sara Jane Poe



Time. “The fire in which we burn,” she thinks. Over the last twenty-four hours Willow has explored the castle from top to bottom. She’s read journals written in her own hand but she knows she never wrote them. At least, she hasn’t written them yet. The journals tell a story of madness. Madness caused by the loss of her truest love. She is horrified at the events of the last two decades. Even more horrified at the actions her future self is responsible for.



She knows the whole story now. How Warren, Jonathan, and Andrew teamed up to take over Sunnydale. Warren, trying to kill Buffy, shot Tara through the heart with a sniper’s rifle. How the bullet had passed through Tara and struck the Doll’s Eye crystal, destroying it. How she walked in the bedroom and found Tara lying there…not breathing. She summoned all the power at her command trying to save her but because her death wasn’t a mystical death, and because her powers were at such a low level due to the fact she hadn’t been using them, Tara died. And Willow took revenge on Warren. From what it says in the journals, her revenge was terrible. In the end Warren died because his human body couldn’t take the punishment Willow put him through.



But this didn’t stop her. Willow went after Jonathan and Andrew, and would have killed them too, if it hadn’t been for Buffy. Willow read in the journals how Buffy and she were locked in a death battle. One of them could have easily died, for Willow was completely insane by then. Instead, Buffy ended the fight with one swift movement. She stabbed willow in the back with a wooded stake and severed her spinal cord. Reading about this, Willow was sure that Buffy did what she had to do.



After that Giles and Amy bound her to this castle. She stayed here for ten years until she finally tricked Spike into helping her to escape. Xander, Angel, and Faith were all killed then. Xander’s life was taken by her hand. He stood in her way and she killed him for it. And in all the writings since, there’s not one word of mourning for him.



After her escape ten years ago, Dawn (She still hasn’t found out who this Dawn person is.) placed the castle into a Nth dimension. One devoid of all life. This would be Willow’s prison for the remainder of her time in this castle. Then, three years ago, HE came. His name isn’t written down in any of the journals. Willow only refers to HIM, or HE. He came and made a deal with Willow. He would get her the supplies that she needed to cast a time spell, and in return, she would own him a favor. It didn’t matter what favor he wanted. Willow would do whatever it took to bring Tara back. Or ensure that she never died in the first place.



The old Willow somehow cast a spell and switched bodies with her younger self. Now, the younger Willow was the one trapped in this castle. But not only that, she was trapped in the body of a forty year old, wheelchair bound version of her older self.



She went through all the recent notes her older self had made regarding the spell that switched them, but there was nothing to help her break the spell. Old Willow must have destroyed them so her younger self wouldn’t be able to escape.



She could tell that the body she was in had great power, but she wasn’t experienced enough to tap into it. And even if she could, there was no way to get out of the castle. All she could do was wait for Spike to return and try to convince him that she didn’t belong here. But after Spike was tricked ten years back, would he even listen to her now? On top of that, he wouldn’t be returning for a week to drop off her food. What was she going to do til then?



It was late on her second night of imprisonment, that she received an unexpected visitor. The quietness of the castle made it easy to tell that someone had just come in the main entrance. Unlike Spike, this visitor made no attempt to hide from Willow. She could hear the footsteps coming up the stairs toward her living quarters. At first she was excited about it. Maybe it was someone that would actually listen to her. Then, after remembering the journal entries she read regarding HIM, she became a little nervous.



She heard the door to the library open, then close a moment later. Willow slowly wheeled herself out of her circle room and into the library. A figure stood in the darkness looking out of the window.



Willow: “H…hello?”



The figure turns toward her, and begins to speak. “What game are you playing this time?”



Willow: “BUFFY! Ohmygod, I’m so glad you’re here!” (Her old face lights up when she sees that Buffy is young. She starts to wheel her way over to her.)

Buffy: “STOP! Don’t come any closer.” (Buffy steps back as if she’s afraid of her.)

Willow: “No, Buffy, it’s me! I…I mean, it’s not ME me, it’s…”

Buffy: “I know the story already. You’re from another dimension, right?”

Willow: “NO! I thought that was it, but its not. I’m from the past. My older self switched bodies with me and…”

Buffy: “Riiiiiiight. Sure she did. Look, I don’t know what you’re trying to do this time…”

Willow: “Buffy, please! Just listen to be. Let me try to convince you that…”

Buffy: “Oh sure. I’ll just sit here and let you work your magic on my brain and the next think you know, I’ll believe anything you tell me. Save it, Will, it’s been done to death.”

Willow: “That’s not how it is now. Please, I have proof. If you just read her journals then you’ll believe me.”

Buffy: “How stupid do you think I am. If I read one of your spells then I’ll…”

Willow: (Frustrated now) “It’s not a spell. Buffy, please. You know me. You trust me. I just need…”

Buffy: “That’s enough, Willow. Spike said that I should check on you and I have. I don’t think there’s anything else to say. I’m leaving.” (She turns and walks toward the library door.)

Willow: “Buffy, please don’t leave. I…I don’t know how to convince you that I’m not Miss Old-and-Twisted here. It’s me! It’s Willow. Y’know…your friend to the end. Good ole reliable Willowicious.”

Buffy: (She freezes in her tracks, turns around, and looks into Willow’s eyes.) “What? What did you say?”



*****



Prologue



The dorm is quiet as the boy makes his way to his room. How he fell asleep in the middle of dinner is beyond his understanding but so many strange things happen in Sunnydale most people don’t even question the little weirdies anymore. The boy’s name is Andrew. He was supposed to meet his new friend Jonathan at the McDonalds across the park but Jonathan never showed up. Now Andrew wasn’t the type to get mad over little things, but Jonathan was his new roomie and, gotdamnit, roomies were supposed to be there for each other. When he opened the door to their room he expected to see Jonathan sitting on the floor in front of the television vegged out in video games. Or, god help him, doing what he was doing the last time Andrew walked in on him. (eeeeeeeeeeww!)



Instead he walks in and there’s blood everywhere. And Jonathan is lying on his bed…minus his head.



To be continued…



WitchSara
 


oh my god.

Postby Rane018 » Tue Apr 23, 2002 10:40 pm

drama! you killed jonathon? sniffle... ok, yeah he indirectly lead to what happened but still... na dwillow's in the future adn the other willwo's in the past and i sure hope this mess clears up soon. well, not soon soon cause then you'd stop writing but soon and then happy stuff can happen. hehe.. dont mind me. i've got a headache

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Re: oh my god.

Postby mollyig » Wed Apr 24, 2002 2:47 am

Chapter 8



This time she could make sure that it turned out the way she wanted I see Willow hasn't changed that much in twenty years - she's still trying to fix things.



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Chapter 9



Poor young Willow trying to convince the now cynical Buffy.



And headless Jonathon?

Adding up the total of a love that's true, multiply life by the power of two
Indigo Girls

mollyig
 


Re: oh my god.

Postby WitchSara » Wed Apr 24, 2002 4:17 am

***Thanks everyone for your kind words. This chapter was an experiment for me. I'm trying to cover 3 stories in 3 different time periods at the same time with all three stories tying into each other. let me know how i did with it:) thanks, Sara





**Prelogue

May, 1971. The young man is running. Behind him lays a town in utter chaos. His doing. No one else’s. He had not meant for things to turn out like this. The deaths. Her death. This time he was trying to do what was right. After so many years of living on the edge. Of being bad. This time he was actually going to atone somewhat for his past. What a fool he was.



The demon came, saw what he faced, and he stomped his way through his adversaries without looking back. It was only thanks to a miracle that the young man was able to send the demon back into the pit. But it cost the life of a dear friend. And caused the betrayal of another one.



He was the one that brought Ethan and Julia into that mess. She trusted him with her life, and he failed her. All because he thought that he was powerful enough to defeat the demon. His arrogance. Her life. Ethan’s betrayal.



July, 2025. The old man makes his way up the hill. The sand is hot and the air even hotter, but after ten years here he’s quiet use to it. It takes forever to get to the top of the hill. The sand makes his journey a “two steps forward, one step back” one as it continuously slides his feet out from beneath him.



He finally makes it to the top of the hill and after bending over and holding on to his knees for a few minutes while he catches his breath, he stands and looks out over an endless sea of bronze sand. No plants or rock can be seen anywhere. He’s been here, alone, for ten years. And everyday he climbs the hill. And everyday he looks out over the ashes of his troubled soul.



First Night

Chapter 9, Scene 2

“the Heart of the Dragon”

by Sara Poe



September, 1999. The man wakes up with a jolt. He had been making his tea just a moment ago. Now he found himself laying on the floor with a lump on his head the size of an acorn. The sound of the whistling teapot was what woke him. He staggers to his feet, dazed but in control, and takes the teapot off the fire. “What just happened?” he thinks.



May, 1971. The young man presses the peddle to the floor. He wants the car to go faster. He wants to get as far away from that place as he can. It’s not fear that drives him. It’s rage. Rage at himself for allowing this to happen. It’s sorrow. Sorrow for the friendships and lives now forever lost. Pity. For a man that at one time could have aspired to greatness. But most of all he feels hopelessness. And he just wants to get as far away from the world as humanly possible.



July, 2025. The old man is alone. Has been alone for ten years. Ten years since he failed, once again, to protect the lives of those he loved. But today something doesn’t feel right to him. Today something is missing.



September, 1999. The man knows something is wrong. He’s made several phone calls and no one has answered. He’s tried calling the Bronze, which is the most popular club in town, but the phone just rings. Even Joyce, who had told him earlier that she and Buffy were spending a mother/daughter night in, wasn’t answering.



He grabs his coat and heads out into the night in search of some signs of life. This was Sunnydale after all. For all he knew everyone in town could be dead. He walks the streets that are usually bustling on the weekend and finds nothing but bodies lying around. Thankfully, none of those bodies are dead. For some reason everyone in town has fallen asleep. It was only the sound of the whistling teapot that kept him from suffering a simalure fate. “One more point for the British,” he thinks.



May, 1971. The young man made his way out of London. By morning he found himself somewhere in Wales. But this wasn’t where he wanted to be. He only came here to collect a debt owed to him. He needed the cash so he could leave this country. He would go east. Or maybe north. Anywhere that was as far away from humanity as he could get.



The roads were wet this time of year. The roads are wet most times of the year. The night fog doesn’t help as he speeds toward his destination.



July, 2025. The old man is back in his cabin in the sand now. His climb to the top of the hill seems to take longer each day lately. But he can still put dinner in the oven before he leaves and be home before it’s finished cooking. That’s been the routine for six years. Start dinner, climb the hill, come home, eat, write in his journal. “Sometimes,” he thinks, “sometimes they would talk for hours about…” Then he catches himself. There was no “they.” There was only him.



He sets the table, wondering all the while why he was thinking “they” instead of just “him?” Was he perhaps, going senile in his old age? Perhaps. Or perhaps after ten years of being alone he just wanted, for an instant, to have someone to talk to. He takes the food out of the oven and puts it on the table. That’s when he sees what he’s done. After ten years of being alone, tonight, of all the nights, he’s set the table for two.



September, 1999. The man reaches the Slayer’s house. He pounds on the door but there’s no answer. Looking through the window he can see the Slayer and her mother lying on the floor. He reaches into his pocket and pulls out a thin sliver of metal. In less than a second he’s opened the lock on the front door and is inside.



He wakes the Slayer up and tells her what’s happening. “No,” he tells her, “he hasn’t seen Willow or Xander. But with everyone in town asleep how much danger could they be in?” After making sure that Joyce is comfortable on the sofa, they go out into the night to search for their friends.



May, 1971. The car slides to the right. The young man pulls the steering wheel hard to the left and pushes down on the gas pedal. The car roars forward and straitens up, speeding on its way. Nothing is going to stop him. Not tonight.



He’s done a lot of bad things in his lifetime. This was his chance to make up for them. Yes, when this thing first started he was thinking about the money. Rid the town of a demon and get ten thousand pounds. But in the two months he lived in that small town he got to know its people. When they found out who he and Ethan were, and why they came to town, they were treated like royalty. No…more than that. They were treated like family. And then he met Julia. In 1971, the rain starts to fall.



July, 2025. The old man walks out of the cabin and sits in the sand. “Is this how it will end?” He thinks. “Losing my mind in the middle of nowhere.” Ten years ago he was a powerful man. He was a Watcher. Not just A Watcher, he was the Watcher of a Slayer that had outlived any before her. His Slayer was thirty years old. The nearest a Slayer had ever come to living that long was in ancient Egypt. But then there came the dark time. The time when one of his own betrayed them again.



Willow had been as much of a daughter to him as Buffy. The two of them were more to him than just his students. They were his children. He taught Willow in the mystical arts nearly as much as he taught Buffy in Slayer ways. Perhaps it was his fault for encouraging Willow in the arts. Perhaps insanity in this bronze hell was exactally what he had earned in his life.



September, 1999. The Slayer vaults over fences and cars and seems nearly unstoppable as she searches the city for her friends. The man tries to keep up but even though he is in great shape, he’s still a man in his forties trying to do the same things as a eighteen year old girl enhanced by mystical forces.



He has to stop to rest. Just for a moment. He leans against a tree and wipes the cold September sweat from his brow. A girl is lying under the tree. The man notices something strange. The girl is propped up against the tree with a sweater under her head. As if someone put it there to keep her comfortable while she slept. The only other reason she would be like that would be if she had put the sweater under her head herself. Perhaps to take a nap. But this was Sunnydale. YOU DO NOT SLEEP IN THE PARK AT NIGHT IN SUNNYDALE!



May, 1971. The rain makes it even harder for the young man to drive, but he still speeds on. Julia was dead and Ethan, his dear friend Ethan Raine, had betrayed him for a mere ten thousand pounds. Hell, after two months in that little town the young man was ready to just give the money to Ethan. All he wanted was to be there. In that town. With that woman. But now all that was gone. In the past.



The car slides right again. He tries to pull left but the damn thing is stubborn and keeps sliding right. The young man floors the pedal again, this time turning the steering wheel into the spin. The car begins to straiten, but the young man doesn’t see the bridge. The young man doesn’t see the other car coming at him either. It’s raining, you see.



July, 2025.The old man has sat in the desert sand for hours now. The sun has already begun to burn his already too tanned skin. But the old man refuses to move. The old man isn’t even there.



He’s doing something he learned to do long ago in Tibet. The old man is tapping into his inner spirit. He’s reaching way down deep into his soul, trying to find…something. Something’s missing. He can feel this. He doesn’t know what it is but he knows that he’s not alone. At least he’s not supposed to be.



Ten years ago he left behind all that he knew and loved. Not out of fear, but out of hopelessness. He’s done this before. He was betrayed by a dear friend and lost the life of the woman he could have loved. When that happened he ran. It was only after the accident…but wait! The old man feels something. Ten years past. He remembers the battle. Two people he loved dearly died saving the life of…someone. But who was it? Willow tricked Spike into helping her escape so she could…what? What was the old man missing?



September, 1999. The Slayer doubles back to look for the man. Her watcher. She finds him under a tree with a girl. “Molesting a young girl under a tree, didn’t think that was your style,” she jokes. Then the man tells her of his discovery, and how he believes that this girl was with whomever may have had something to do with all of this. The Slayer looks at the girls face. “Ohmygod!” she says. “That’s Tara! She was with…Willow!”



May, 1971. The young man’s car races forward. The oncoming car can’t stop in time, so it veers to the right, trying to avoid the collision. It heads straight for the bridge. The young man finally sees the other car as it crashes through the guardrail of the small bridge and plunges forty feet into the water below.



The young man slams on his breaks. The car slides uncontrollable and flips over twice before coming to a stop. “NO MORE!!” The young man screams as he pulls himself from the still wobbling car. “No more will die because of me!” He rushes to the bridge and without thinking, he throws himself over the rail. He hits the water below hard only three feet from the quickly sinking car.



Dazed, he struggles with the door. He still has time. Through the rain he thinks that he can see someone moving inside. The young man smashes his elbow into the driver’s side window. The elbow breaks, but so does the window. Ignoring the rain and the pain, the young man pulls the driver out of the car. He can see no one else in there and starts to swim to the shore. Pulling the driver with him.



There, on that riverbank in the rain, the young man pulled his charge onto the shore. He had just done something that he would never thought himself capable of before. He saved a man’s life. The first. The first life in a long line that this young man will save. Only the first. His destiny was set. He would become a Watcher.



July, 2025. The old man knows now. After seven hours of sitting in the sun, the old man stood up, and started walking into the desert.



Ten years ago, the most horrible day of his life happened. He lost two people he loved more than life itself. And he was nearly killed by a woman whom he thought of as a daughter. “How could she do this,” he thinks. “How could she do this and think that I wouldn’t know.” Everything has a reason. Ten years ago Willow broke out of her prison for a reason. There was a man she wanted to kill. She failed. But that man was forevermore in fear for his life. That man knew that some day Willow could escape again. And she would surely come after him.



So when the old man left Sunnydale, the man Willow was trying to kill came with him. And the two of them had lived here in the desert every sense. They became friends. But now…now he was gone. No…no, not gone. He was never here. The man was never here because he was mysteriously murdered in his college dorm that night twenty years ago. The night that all of Sunnydale was put to sleep by a cause never found.



“How could you do this and think that I wouldn’t know?” the old man thinks. His self-exile is over. “My god, Willow! How could you!” The old man is going home.



To be continued…



Edited by: WitchSara  at: 4/24/02 3:21:12 am
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Re: oh my god.

Postby mollyig » Wed Apr 24, 2002 4:29 am

Oh oh is Giles gonna go Ripper on Willow?



I like the backstories you've inserted with the story of hermit Giles.

Adding up the total of a love that's true, multiply life by the power of two
Indigo Girls

mollyig
 


Re: oh my god.

Postby ExtraFlameyWT » Wed Apr 24, 2002 1:54 pm

Wow, that was really great. Giles is too smart to not have figured it out... What's he going to do?



Need update!



-Aimee :)

*****
"Hey Will, this is me. It doesn't all have to be good and fine. This is the room where you don't have to be brave. I still love you. If you're worried, you can be worried." -Tara to Willow in ep. 603 Afterlife

ExtraFlameyWT
 


Re: oh my god.

Postby WitchSara » Sat Apr 27, 2002 1:19 am

I'm going on vacation this weekend but I'll put up several chapters before I leave and the rest next weekend.:) Thankx for all the complaments, too. They make me want to write more.

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