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beta

Postby DarkWiccan » Thu Jul 25, 2002 11:17 am

sure...i can beta read... if you like. I have in the past... not for this board... but I am fully capable of it.



email me



Cheers

DW

DarkWiccan
 


Re: beta

Postby Loco2 » Thu Jul 25, 2002 11:21 am

thank you! :D



and i knew you were reading...heh heh.

"Dr. Becker, have you seen the skeleton?" "What do you think I am, a skeleton thief? You want to search me?!"
"Oh, bugger off, you brolly!" - Anya to Giles on his use of the english language
"We'll all be a lot happier without the constant whining....Mom, Buffy, Tara, Waah" - DMW to Dawn

Loco2
 


Re: beta

Postby kukalaka » Thu Jul 25, 2002 12:15 pm

Ok then: Go, DW, go!





--

Life is what happens to you while you're busy making other plans.

kukalaka
 


Re: beta

Postby Loco2 » Thu Jul 25, 2002 12:27 pm

ooh, reflecty bouncy smilie? now that just awesome! :grin

"Dr. Becker, have you seen the skeleton?" "What do you think I am, a skeleton thief? You want to search me?!"
"Oh, bugger off, you brolly!" - Anya to Giles on his use of the english language
"We'll all be a lot happier without the constant whining....Mom, Buffy, Tara, Waah" - DMW to Dawn

Loco2
 


....hidden comment?

Postby DarkWiccan » Thu Jul 25, 2002 12:39 pm

Quote:
and i knew you were reading...heh heh.




Yes... well... *shrugs sheepishly* I tend to lurk in other story threads rather than post... but... I'm always around...



And I am enjoying this fic :grin



Cheers

DW



DarkWiccan
 


Re: ....hidden comment?

Postby Loco2 » Thu Jul 25, 2002 1:18 pm

hee hee, i knew you were there, lurking in the shadows. you and your nasty little raven ;)



edited to add: you don't offer creative help? how about if i beg? :p

"Dr. Becker, have you seen the skeleton?" "What do you think I am, a skeleton thief? You want to search me?!"
"Oh, bugger off, you brolly!" - Anya to Giles on his use of the english language
"We'll all be a lot happier without the constant whining....Mom, Buffy, Tara, Waah" - DMW to Dawn

Edited by: Loco2 at: 7/25/02 12:35:03 pm
Loco2
 


begging...

Postby DarkWiccan » Thu Jul 25, 2002 1:49 pm

well... it depends... does this begging involve cookies? ;)



Cheers

DW

DarkWiccan
 


Re: begging...

Postby Loco2 » Thu Jul 25, 2002 1:58 pm

oh, yes, i am quite the baker! you've read my profile, right? i think the more appropriate thing to do would be to not offer you my cookies! but if you like i'll make you some! :evil *goes off to bake, adds flour, eggs, sugar, curry powder, looks around, checking no-one is watching, proceeds to add various other things that look suspiciously squirmy*



enjoy!

steph

"Dr. Becker, have you seen the skeleton?" "What do you think I am, a skeleton thief? You want to search me?!"
"Oh, bugger off, you brolly!" - Anya to Giles on his use of the english language
"We'll all be a lot happier without the constant whining....Mom, Buffy, Tara, Waah" - DMW to Dawn

Loco2
 


Re:

Postby gmackie » Thu Jul 25, 2002 2:01 pm

I finally had a chance to catch up. I am glad I did. I love the way you write Willow and Tara, it is so much like them. I was having a less than great day, but the last two updates were so sweet and happy and they seeped into my head and changed my whole perspective. Steph, you are a great writer, this is phenomonal stuff here. Please keep it up. I really hope Tara and Willow have that "talk" soon. REAL SOON. *hint, hint* I love your work. :bounce

Heather



P.S. Is this the only story you have posted online? I would love to read some of your other work. (Not just W/T stuff)

Edited by: gmackie at: 7/25/02 1:04:00 pm
gmackie
 


wow

Postby Loco2 » Thu Jul 25, 2002 2:26 pm

gmackie: wow. i am glad i made your day a little better, :D i'm flattered, i think you're lying, but am flattered none the less. they do talk soon. promise ;) and i don't have any other stories online, i have no webspace and the only stories i have written are ones that have been forced upon me in english. and they mostly revolve around murder mysteries, or death, or zombies and rocket launcher showdowns in graveyards which involve old ladies who have big hair... oh, and old, hairy, stinky, mouldy, lumpy, wrinkly, crumbly, brown armchirs, but let's not go into that... i am, however, currently co-writing a fic with trish, which should be up on the board, soon. :D and i have plans for another, but that one's all dark and gloomy, if i ever get around to it. and WOW, i really rambled on for a very very long time about all sorts of crap already, heh heh, this will probably make my update look small!



and if you hadn't all guessed - here's an update ( THANK YOU, DW!!)





(1/2)



Buffy knocked loudly on Giles’ door. She had class in an hour so they had scheduled the Scooby meeting to fit in with everyone’s plans. Unfortunately, this meant she was standing here, knocking on Giles’ door at eight thirty in the morning, and none of them had had anywhere near enough sleep last night. They had only gotten home five hours ago. Why the hell did I ever agree to this? Am I crazy? No – just sleep deprived. she grunted disapprovingly.



After a minute or two, the drowsy Watcher opened the door, but only enough to let the people standing on his doorstep in, he didn’t want to let the fresh, cool morning air into his apartment. He was tired, and therefore, cold. Why ever did I suggest meeting here at this hour? he grunted disapprovingly.



Buffy stepped past the disgruntled Watcher into the apartment and made a bee-line for the couch. Willow followed her in, gesturing for Tara to enter, also. The hacker still wasn’t 100% by any stretch of the imagination, but after an aspirin, and a night in Tara’s arms, she was feeling a little better. I’d probably be feeling a lot better if I had had more than four and a half hours sleep last night! she was just about to grunt disapprovingly, when she received an expectant, hopeful look from Tara, who had just taken a seat next to her. Willow smiled; whereas she and Buffy had sprawled themselves lazily across the couch, Tara had perched politely on the edge of her seat, looking nervous.



Willow took note.



As soon as Giles had shut the door and walked over to sit in a chair opposite from the girls, Willow decided that an introduction was in order.



“Giles? I’ve never really had the chance to introduce you to before now and you know what they say: ‘better late than never.’ This is Tara,” she gestured toward the shy blond, then turned to face her, “and this is Giles,” she gestured towards the Watcher.



“N-nice to meet you, again, Mr. Giles,” Tara managed.



“Call him Giles,” Willow instructed.



“I dare say she can call me Mr. Giles if she wants to, it is my name, after all, and she is a darn site politer than the rest of you,” Giles said, though not unkindly, to Willow.



Willow sniffed, indignantly, “Shouldn’t you be offering us tea?” she asked.



“I thought you young people today preferred coffee?” Giles asked, clearly having no intention to get up and actually make any tea.



“We do,” Willow stated, looking over to Buffy, who was currently half asleep on the couch next to her. Mmm, sleep. But then, waking up this morning wasn’t so bad, either… She fondly remembered Tara gently nudging her awake, so that they could extract themselves from each other before Buffy awoke and saw them snuggling.



“When are the others coming, so we can start this and go home to our comfy beds?” Willow asked, wanting nothing more than to go home to bed and snuggle up with Tara. They could talk later, after sleep was had.



“Xander should be arriving shortly. I just hope he doesn’t bring that devil-woman with him,” Giles answered, referring to Anya. No sooner was the sentence out of his mouth then the door burst open and a whining voice was heard chastising Xander.



“…because it certainly sounded fake. And I’ve faked enough to know when someone isn’t giving it their all! Damn it, Xander, you had better try harder, in fact, we should go home right now and make up for it…”



“Anya, please, do shut up,” Giles commented exasperated, in an attempt to silence the woman.



Xander closed the door behind him and dragged himself over to the group, slumping into an armchair.



Willow winced. Not something you want to be hearing first thing in the morning, she looked at Tara as if to say You see what I have to put up with?! And you ask why I don’t like her… The blond smirked back at her, finding the woman – Anya – to be rather amusing.



Anya marched over to the group, but didn’t sit down, choosing rather to stand against the wall with her arms folded and a dejected look on her face.



“Let’s get this done, so we can go home,” Buffy asked impatiently.



“Very well,” Giles replied, “So, Tara has explained to me that a demon attacked her and Willow last night and that it somehow altered Willow’s magic, causing her to ‘zap’,” he used the term he was given, “a tree, which then proceeded to hit her with a falling branch,”



Willow frowned at Tara, she had not been told this. This was quite alarming information.



Tara shrugged apologetically to her. I’ll make it up to her, someday…







edited to add: look at me! with all of my 12 pages!! yipee! :grin

"Dr. Becker, have you seen the skeleton?" "What do you think I am, a skeleton thief? You want to search me?!"
"Oh, bugger off, you brolly!" - Anya to Giles on his use of the english language
"We'll all be a lot happier without the constant whining....Mom, Buffy, Tara, Waah" - DMW to Dawn

Edited by: Loco2 at: 7/25/02 1:44:02 pm
Loco2
 


Re: wow

Postby shootingstar » Thu Jul 25, 2002 2:45 pm

Oooo...an update, and here I was about to bug you about when the next one was :)



That was really sweet, god bless Willow's thoughts about snuggling with Tara. They're so damn cute.



Well I'm gona hide out here at the campsite of luv with a bag of marshmellows and some chocolate-goodness and re-read the update :)



Luv Star x

***
No it was the frogs! Take them! They stole the pie...
-Sleeping Willow in Loco2's >insert imaginative title here<

shootingstar
 


Re: wow

Postby foreverpiper » Thu Jul 25, 2002 2:48 pm

hehe...Willow's lacking snuggle time with Tara...whatever shall be done...? hmm...i wonder...

foreverpiper
 


Re: wow

Postby kukalaka » Thu Jul 25, 2002 2:51 pm

Quote:
(1/2)
Dare I hope this means there'll be a (2/2) soon?



Because I really agree with Willow. They have to get back to bed and snuggle

--

Life is what happens to you while you're busy making other plans.

kukalaka
 


Re: wow

Postby MissQuirky » Thu Jul 25, 2002 2:52 pm

Great update!! Can't wait 4 the scooby meeting to get over w/ so Tara n Willow can have some more snuggles! Can't wait 4 more!! :)

"W-well, I-I was wondering, maybe, you would wanna go out sometime? For coffee ... food ... kisses and gay love?" - Willow (Normal Again)

MissQuirky
 


Re: wow

Postby ally02 » Thu Jul 25, 2002 2:54 pm

Grrr ur updates need to be longer missy!! It just wont do!! :p

Well they will do, but not if they are always gonna be this short and okay stopping now.



love Aly xxx

"And I happen to believe mine is the level head and yours is the one things would roll off of!"

ally02
 


Re: wow

Postby spazz07 » Thu Jul 25, 2002 2:57 pm

Willow thinking about snuggles, he he :) Anya was as hilarious as ever. :lol Cant wait for more Steph.



Cheers

Nath

If life was meant to be a bed of daisy's we'd have chicken crap thown on us all the time.

spazz07
 


Re: wow

Postby Loco2 » Thu Jul 25, 2002 3:23 pm

ooh, replies....



shootingstar: you were gonna bug me? hee hee, bugs - today i saw a hairy brown caterpillar blobbing along the path, needless to say, i found this highly amusing! :D *joins star in the campsite of luv* i brought curry powder! mmm, curry flavored s'mores....um, i'm hyper, probably best to ignore me....:p



piper: hmm, methinks mehears hintingness....;) me also thinks meneeds a dictionary...



kukulaka: i knew that would come up, i knew it! and there will be a 2/2 as soon as i can be arsed to write it and send it to dw, :grin hee hee, nice smilie.



missquirky: oh, but who says there will be more snuggles? ...me? ...when did i say that?! aw, crap. you got me. there will be snuggles, soon, :D



aly: hmmph! and when was the last time you updated 5 weeks of bliss, eh? EH?! i'll be ready and waiting for that, btw, ;)



spazz07: aw, anya is hilarious, isn't she? anmd wouldn't you be thinking about snuggles? if you were W or T? it must be, like, second nature to them! (1st would be sex, of course, i mean, that's like all they do) ;)







steph, or squinty, if you like, :D









"Dr. Becker, have you seen the skeleton?" "What do you think I am, a skeleton thief? You want to search me?!"
"Oh, bugger off, you brolly!" - Anya to Giles on his use of the english language
"We'll all be a lot happier without the constant whining....Mom, Buffy, Tara, Waah" - DMW to Dawn

Loco2
 


Re: wow

Postby Jennpurr » Thu Jul 25, 2002 3:27 pm

Oooh... Updates. Awww... I loved the snuggles once they got back to the dorm. :) They are so cute. But, what was Giles thinking, having a meeting that early in the morning?? Sheessh.. Hope our girls get their much needed talk and snuggle time soon. OH.. and you could add some smoochies too. I wouldn't complain. :grin



Looking forward to 2/2.



Jen

------------------------"Give me them lips, honey." - Lisa Vidal to Laura Innes

Edited by: Jennpurr  at: 7/25/02 2:28:38 pm
Jennpurr
 


Re: wow

Postby shootingstar » Thu Jul 25, 2002 3:29 pm

Teehhe, I have bug fear so I'm I see a big bug I run...but I'm only afraids of relly big bugs and ones that can fly! Wasps and stuff scare the **** out of me :(



Wow, it seems like your always hyper, I'm kinda hyper too :) hyper-ness rocks! But erm...curry-flavoured-s'mores? That sounds kinda scary.



I come baring Hageen-Daz :)



Luv Star x

***
No it was the frogs! Take them! They stole the pie...
-Sleeping Willow in Loco2's >insert imaginative title here<

shootingstar
 


Re: wow

Postby TheWhiz » Thu Jul 25, 2002 3:32 pm

Hiya Squinty my mate!



Yay! Update!

Snuggles= very cute!

Anya= :lol !!

Looking forward to part 2/2!



Squinty2 (They should so have a squinty emoticon!)

"I am a whiz...If ever a whiz there was"

TheWhiz
 


Re: wow

Postby LeatherQueen » Thu Jul 25, 2002 4:11 pm

Nice update. I'm looking forward to seeing them talk finally about what happened the night before. :)








--------------------------------


"But when they're playing your song on the jukebox in Hell, you might as well dance." - K. Simpson


"Futile... like a FOX, baby!" - Tara in The Late Shift by wiccachica

LeatherQueen
 


Re: wow

Postby foreverpiper » Thu Jul 25, 2002 4:37 pm

piper: hmm, methinks mehears hintingness.... me also thinks meneeds a dictionary...





then methinks you be hearing right :)

foreverpiper
 


Re: wow

Postby kukalaka » Thu Jul 25, 2002 4:40 pm

Quote:
i knew that would come up, i knew it!
Well, you kinda asked for it, didn't you?



Just in case someone missed it:

There was a (1/2) at the beginning of that last part!!!



OK, I'm done with the shouting now

--

Common sense is the collection of prejudices acquired by age 18. - Albert Einstein

kukalaka
 


Re: wow

Postby gmackie » Thu Jul 25, 2002 4:50 pm

I most certainly, am not lying. Some of my friends think I am a huge bs'er (slang for full-of-it, where I'm from), but I sincerely mean what I say about your story. I am also sure all the dreaded stories you've written for English are equally great. One thing I don't BS about is writing. Writing is religion to me, I love to write and I love to read, especially about Willow and Tara. You see, I am a bonafide writer, :sh , shhh don't tell anyone, thats my little secret. Anyway the update is great as usual, and I can't wait to read your other stories once you have them posted. I am still waiting for the "talk". Your biggest fan.

Heather



P.S. In case you aren't sure *bonafide* is another local word meaning certified or professional. Sorry I'm southern, I can't fight it, therefore I embrace it. :grin

gmackie
 


Re: wow

Postby kukalaka » Thu Jul 25, 2002 5:05 pm

gmackie, you should put that quote from your personal bio where it belongs: your signature :grin



Also, if I may ask, where have you been in Germany?



Edited to add: You make me talk too much, Steph. I'm already halfway through to losing my "Flaming O" :(

And congratulations for your imminent Sassy-Eggness :D

--

Common sense is the collection of prejudices acquired by age 18. - Albert Einstein

Edited by: kukalaka  at: 7/25/02 4:11:24 pm
kukalaka
 


Re: wow

Postby willowsgrrl » Fri Jul 26, 2002 12:04 am

hmmmmm love the willow thoughts and will definitally beg for more snugglies and smoochies ;) i think i might have picked up a few great begging moves so just let me know and i will show u all of them ;) ;) ;) :angel hhmmm maybe not :devil hmmmm you'll just have to wait and see :p

christina



edited to start my begging :bounce PLEASE please me want more

Edited by: willowsgrrl at: 7/25/02 11:08:31 pm
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Re: wow

Postby Loco2 » Fri Jul 26, 2002 5:05 am

hee hee, would you look at us - this is like a big ol' chat thread with the occasional update thrown in! :D (but not this morning, though, heh heh)



jen: i can honestly say i have no idea what giles was thinking - i don't even know how that got onto the paper, this early morning meeting is pretty pointless....talk soon. i'm not telling if there will be snuggles, or even smoochies, now though. you'll have to wait and see :evil .



star: hey, it's ok. i don't have bug fear in the slightest (except spiders, *shudder*) i'll be your personal protector from the wasps! yep, i am quite a scary person at times :grin



thewhiz: hey there, other squinty! part 2/2 will come....when i can be arsed to type it :grin and you just know that now i'm gonna make it my aim to find a squinty emoticon!



leatherqueen: ah, they will talk soon. update after next, actually :D



piper: i'll bear that in mind...;)



kukulaka: yep, i did. i wanted to see what would happen :D and lol, nice yelling! now i'm sure everyone knows! :lol imminent sassy-eggness? *looks confused for a minute* ooh! i'm a sassy eggs! yipee! aw, i'm sorry, i bring that out in people (make them talk about stuff they didn't even know they wanted to say) :D



gmackie: ooh, well i think your little secret's out, but i'm sure people will be muchly of the respect for you! the story i'm writing with trish should definitely be up, soon. we have three and a bit parts, so far :D The Talk will commense shortly, honest!



willowsgrrl: ooh, i think i will wait and see, i'm now quite nervous.....





steph (squinty, stpeh, stepoh, strph, 'fuck off and leave me alone' heh heh, the latter one is getting more and more common.....)









"Dr. Becker, have you seen the skeleton?" "What do you think I am, a skeleton thief? You want to search me?!"
"Oh, bugger off, you brolly!" - Anya to Giles on his use of the english language
"We'll all be a lot happier without the constant whining....Mom, Buffy, Tara, Waah" - DMW to Dawn

Loco2
 


Re: wow

Postby Jennpurr » Fri Jul 26, 2002 5:20 am

Steph,



Your a tease, you know that?? :p



It's okay. I guess I'll just bite my nails all day in anticipation. ;)



More, soon? Please??



Jen

------------------------Willow: strong like an amazon?
Tara: Strong like an amazon, right.

Jennpurr
 


Re: wow

Postby Loco2 » Fri Jul 26, 2002 5:27 am

eh, you think everyone's a tease! and i most certainly am not! ;)



i might update tonight, i might not. but i'll tell you what, i'll start typing up what i have, now, k? then send to DW if i don't get interrupted, and when it's back, i'll update that evening. sound fair to you? ...no? ...tough. :D



steph

"Dr. Becker, have you seen the skeleton?" "What do you think I am, a skeleton thief? You want to search me?!"
"Oh, bugger off, you brolly!" - Anya to Giles on his use of the english language
"We'll all be a lot happier without the constant whining....Mom, Buffy, Tara, Waah" - DMW to Dawn

Loco2
 


Re: wow

Postby Jennpurr » Fri Jul 26, 2002 5:30 am

:lol I was just giving you a hard time.



I'm being patient, honest. Take your time, girl. ;)



OH... thank you for the pictures. :bounce I got all 7 of them. The one that was sent by itself the other day, made the 7th one. Where did you find those??



Thanks again, Steph. :)



Jen



I'll be back later. ;)

------------------------Willow: strong like an amazon?
Tara: Strong like an amazon, right.

Edited by: Jennpurr  at: 7/26/02 4:30:59 am
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