Hi, Rauko, thank you so much for stopping to add some feedback. Very nice of you and pure coincidence I noticed so soon after you left it! please excuse any nonsense below, predictive text sucks...
You may have noticed in my feedback responses my memory isn't what it was so I am sure you know this story much better than I now
It was enormous fun to do all that stuff you described, taking it to dark places. All but one thing... Faith's end was not so fun, but it was the making of the story and the only thing that would make it all work. So it had to be.
I just love the fact that you found so many things worked so well for you and you can recall them after so much material! It's only thanks to Xita that the story went through that whole transition at the end of first chronicle. I was really going to leave it on a high, but brief, note! Obviously I kept going!
It changes a lot in second chronicle. The darkness was further away and had I known at the very start I'd be going there, maybe first chronicle wouldn't have ended where it did? Bu there was plenty of story there, one of those moments of inspiration that just laid it all out for me. Rare, I can tell you!
Third chronicle is different again, shorter, more concise and more like a novel but... Rounds things off nicely. As you may have noticed, I hate loose ends or questions being left unanswered!
Thank you so much for your kind words, they mean a lot and equally that someone is still enjoying this. It's been a part of about a quarter of my life to date so... Yeah, this means a lot to me and its special when someone finds it for the first time so thank YOU very much and well done for being so bold as to read it all even knowing how big it got!
Katharyn