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W/T "The Body" Poem: "Strength"

Postby Annie » Mon Aug 20, 2001 8:03 pm

TITLE: Strength
AUTHOR: Annie (cutelittlepsycho@hotmail.com)
DISCLAIMER: I own nothing, it's all FOX's, la de da
SPOILERS: Through "The Body"
OTHER STUFF: I was reading my high school's literary magazine and had a brief moment of poetic inspiration. And I'd just watched The Body, so I was very upset but comforted with W/T love. It was a very weird emotional place...So it very well may suck
For Jenny. Just cause.

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Her lover looks into blue eyes
Large, calm, comforting eyes
Deeper than any ocean imaginable
The calmness is intoxicating
Soothing to her frayed nerves and overloaded heart
Taking deep breaths, she looks into Strength’s eyes and is calmed
Though she looks at them through her own tears

Strength looks down at her lover
Caressing her with her gaze
And Strength tells her lover to calm, it’ll be alright
We’ll get through this, my love
We’ve gone through pain before
I’m here for you, love
I’ll comfort and protect you
She tells her lover to be strong
And tells her she loves her
Without moving her lips

Strength’s lover takes another deep breath
Trying to stop her heart’s painful pounding
And the aching tears falling
And draws strength from the deep, blue eyes

Then Strength cups her lover’s pale cheeks in her own small, strong hands
(hands which have caressed her
touched her
pleased her
loved her
clung to her
stroked her
clutched her
felt her
needed her)
Bringing the small face to her own
Strength’s full, soft lips caress her lover’s forehead
Calming the brilliant, busy, aching mind within
And then Strength kisses her red, thin lips
Smoothing and soothing the fears with her tongue
Providing her lover strength from the source

Her lover speaks to Strength in a child’s tone
Begging and pleading
Imploring her approval and love
(“strong like an amazon?”)
A loving smile appears on Strength’s face
And Strength responds in kind
(“strong like an amazon, right?”)
Her lover’s smile brightens up her still-aching heart
And Strength caresses her curly red hair
And though her heart still throbs with grief and pain
Strength’s lover offers a look
One of gratitude and newfound courage

And then Strength tells her sincerely
Without ever moving her lips
Everything will be fine, my love
You’ve been Strength for me countless times before
Making me happy
Lifting me up
Loving me strong
Defending me fiercely
Being my rock
Kissing me tender
Touching my soul
Melting my heart
You’ve been Strength for me countless times before, my love
And I now must be Strength for you


love, Annie
"Seize the moment, cause tomorrow you might be dead."
-Buffy Anne Summers

[This message has been edited by Annie (edited August 20, 2001).]

Annie
 


W/T "The Body" Poem: "Strength"

Postby Scout » Tue Aug 21, 2001 3:56 am

Wow - I really love this! You did a wonderful job of capturing the moment and all its meaning. Thanks for posting it!
Scout
 


W/T "The Body" Poem: "Strength"

Postby Beautiful Tara's Girl » Tue Aug 21, 2001 4:50 am

Wow, can I stick that on my website? Just tell me the name and (optional) email address you'd like to be credited under. Check out my poems page for examples at http://www.queenanthai.com/Poems/poems.html
Beautiful Tara's Girl
 


W/T "The Body" Poem: "Strength"

Postby tommo » Tue Aug 21, 2001 5:28 am

Some really nice images here, especially Tara's eyes being intoxicating. I mean, I've always thought so.

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"She looked across at Willow, whose face was filled with light. She had never felt so calm and happy, and strong..." ~ Unseen: Door To Alternity

tommo
 


W/T "The Body" Poem: "Strength"

Postby Annie » Tue Aug 21, 2001 5:29 am

quote:
Originally posted by Beautiful Tara's Girl:
Wow, can I stick that on my website? Just tell me the name and (optional) email address you'd like to be credited under. Check out my poems page for examples at http://www.queenanthai.com/Poems/poems.html

Sure you can post it! Just under Annie and my e-mail is cutelittlepsycho@hotmail.com Thanks for...liking it, I guess

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love, Annie

"Seize the moment, cause tomorrow you might be dead."
-Buffy Anne Summers
quote:

Annie
 


W/T "The Body" Poem: "Strength"

Postby KittyKo » Tue Aug 21, 2001 7:38 am

*kittyko starts breathing again*

Wow! This poem is amazing Annie! So beautiful... if "the body" was written in poem, it would be more than perfect!
You have captured everything so well! wow...

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Yippie! We have the information!

KittyKo
 


W/T "The Body" Poem: "Strength"

Postby minion » Tue Aug 21, 2001 10:46 am

That was wonderful Annie, you really captured the scene beautifully!

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I am in thunderous agreement, oh glittering, glistening Glorificus! : Jinx in Tough Love

minion
 


W/T "The Body" Poem: "Strength"

Postby xita » Tue Aug 21, 2001 8:29 pm

OH lovely, Tara was the picture of strength. Thank you.
xita
 


W/T "The Body" Poem: "Strength"

Postby Annie » Wed Aug 22, 2001 6:12 am

quote:
Originally posted by xita:
OH lovely, Tara was the picture of strength. Thank you.
I just know that every time I watch The Body I just worship Tara in every scene she's in, becuase she is strength in that episode. She's wonderfully beautiful

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love, Annie

"Seize the moment, cause tomorrow you might be dead."
-Buffy Anne Summers
quote:

Annie
 


W/T "The Body" Poem: "Strength"

Postby WiccanBex » Thu Aug 23, 2001 6:07 pm

that's a really amazing poem, annie

you captured it beautifully.

WiccanBex
 


W/T "The Body" Poem: "Strength"

Postby Beautiful Tara's Girl » Fri Aug 24, 2001 5:07 pm

quote:
Originally posted by Annie:
Sure you can post it!

Consider it done!

http://www.queenanthai.com/Poems/poems.html

~BTG
(free publicity makes the world go 'round)

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"It's non-toxic. You're fine." -Amber Benson
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Beautiful Tara's Girl
 


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