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Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (UPDTED: 4/03/18)

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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (11/28/11)

Postby xlaurax1 » Mon Dec 12, 2011 10:32 pm

Hey Shel,

I don't even remember the last time I left feedback, I suck, I know, so let me just say that the whole Tkanksgiving trip so far has been a brilliant, funny, angsty, sweet ride. I have enjoyed every second of it (yes, I read every week even if I don't comment. Better than not reading right?).

So, I loved meeting the rest of the family ie Adele and Gerty, and enjoyed seeing everyone interact as well as Tara being welcome by almost everyone.

I knew that Robby jerk was gonna be a problem, and I was majorly glad to see him get a smack down from Gray. It was heartwarming to see everyone rallying around Willow and I particulary liked Ira's conversation with Sheila. Glad to see he tried to talk some sense into her, yet still showed that some restraint since they are a family and all. I'm also happy that Willow didn't come out too badly from that whole situation, yes she had that little break down with Tara there to support her, but she hasn't let it completely overwhelm her.

On to last update,

Tara's sleepy comforting of Willow was too cute. And I looooved how Tara took control of the converstation with Rachael to put a stop to the squabling.
And,
“What? Nobody messes with my girl.”
Where was the axe?

I liked the school talk but the ending was pretty sucky. I think that maybe what Willow has to say won't be as bad as what Tara's gut reaction is. Still it's gotta be a pretty overwhelming thought for Tara, without having the full story. The thought of being seperated from this girl who as given her love, stability and a family in such a short amount of time.

Anyway, it's been two weeks which I definitely think is enough time to be left hanging here, and look, it made me come out to play!! So let's have it!

Oh yeah, I'd say this one for me...well, points for morning snuggles, points for sibling-ness which reminds me of my sister and I, a point for the angst coz it makes the story that more interesting, but take a point for the wait. So I give 8 'squabling siblings' out of 10 (because of the cliffy).

Looking forward to my next fix,

Laura.

P.S. How about Alirio's "Veruca, I think she's a she-wolf" prediction. Ya gotta give the boy credit...

Edit: I've decided to revise my rating. You now get a 10 out of 10 just coz you're awesome!!
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (11/28/11)

Postby leos_pride » Sat Dec 17, 2011 5:00 pm

:aww :aww :aww :aww update please? I'm dying over here not knowing how the rest of this conversation goes! I know it will work out but how? Please, update soon? :pray pretty please?

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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (11/28/11)

Postby Finey_McFine » Sun Dec 18, 2011 12:10 pm

AstronSoul:
I think Willow’s propensity to take the weigh of the world on her shoulders stems from being the youngest in a large family. It comes from a deep seeded desire to please everyone. So you don’t get teased as much, then when you do...you pout. Hence Rachael knowing exactly what Willow’s reaction would be.

Tara is becoming more and more protective over Willow, especially after what happened with Robby, even Rachael doesn’t stand a chance, lol.

Willowbabble is the absolute best and if THAT were an Olympic sport, she would get a gold medal every time!

Don’t worry about Tara’s heart...it gets put back together in the following chapter.

Thanks for the feedback!


vampyregurl73:
Soooooooooory...I had to end the chapter somewhere. Besides, Willow was in babbly-rambly mode...she could have meant anything.

Thanks for the feedback and anniversary wishes!


Grimm:
Technically it wasn’t really a cliffhanger...just the end of a chapter. No? Ok you’re right, it did suck but all is well in the next chapter:) Willow has been contemplating vet school for awhile, even before Tara, and I think she is just in that almost post college transitional period. She rambles her way through her thoughts in the next chapter.




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wimpy0729:
I think Tara’s feeling a tad overprotective of Willow considering the previous events. Even Rachael doesn’t stand a chance.

Willow is having rambly thoughts and it continues in the next chapter...don’t want to give too much away.

Boo for the dog/pumpkin pie debacle! But it sounds ablut right for a family gathering, lol. Our Thanksgiving was pretty low key and I didn’t over pepper the stuffing this year, so all was well:)

Thanks for the feedback and the anniversary wishes!


zampsa19752001:
Sibling banter is always fun and seems to be a national pastime for this family.

College is most definitely going to be an issue, but I’m sure Willow has a plan.

Thanks for the feedback!


bouncer73:
Hey...no fainting! Afterall this IS the Kitten...right??

Thanks for the feedback!


leos_pride:
Awwww, it wasn’t that bad, was it? I mean, it’s not like Willow’s gonna jump up and leave...or is she...hmmmm, lol.

Sorry it took me so long to update and I left you hanging. I didn’t plan on it being this long between updates, but you know how life is..........

Thanks for the feedback and the anniversary wishes!!!


Alex_Vixen:
YAY! Glad you’re reading and that you like! :grin And hey...no heart breaking!!

I have to agree with you on the super angsty stuff, but this is just day to day drama and I think it would get boring if I didn’t throw some in. So, I’m glad that you like!

YAY for smutty goodness!! :p

Thanks for the feedback!!


beautiful_love:
Tara is definitely the definition of sweet and she’s just gonna have to get used to the teasing between the siblings...ciz that’ll never end, lol.

Such a cliffhanger is just cruel.
Well, well little Miss Car Accident...pot meet kettle. Hahahahahahahahahahaha!

Thanks for the feedback and anniversary wishes!!


True_Love:
Thanks for the anniversary wishes...it so doesn’t feel like 20 yrs:)

I don’t think Tara has to worry about being alone...I’m sure they’ll come up with some sort of compromise.

Thanks for the feedback!

Ariel:
They’ve always been sweet waking up together. ;-)

Willow is most definitely suffering from youngest child syndrome...she has an innate need to please.

It’s so important that they talk and figure it out together. Tara can’t leave. Willow can’t stay. There’s got to be a compromise somewhere. Plus, their current busy schedules...

Thanks for the feedback.


JustSkipIt:
Tara most definitely has a high school education, albeit a TV/movie set hs education, but she has one none the less. Just no college.

Yes they have been down on the farm for awhile and I’m kinda looking forward to them getting back to their ‘normal’ lives. They’ll be super busy, but then there’s the trip to NY in Dec:)

I think that Tara getting confirmation that Willow will eventually have to leave to further her education just kind of hit her all at once. Especially with everything that has been going on, it was just a bit overwhelming. Rest assured, she gets past it. You are right though, they do have it a billion times better than the rest of us. My poor wife has followed me all over the country because I had the better job and then she had to start over every time. If you want to be together...you sacrifice for the greater good. Something Tara is definitely not used to.



Thanks for the feedback, the anniversary wishes and a big HAPPY BIRTHDAY to Chiara!


Mgraham93:
Thanks! I’m glad you are enjoying the family dynamic...it’s fun to write:) They will find a way, but the initial panic can be overwhelming and that’s what they’re going to have to deal with.

Thanks for the feedback!!

Wills Redemption:
I don’t think Willow’s schooling was something that Tara had actually given any real thought to. She’s the one that people are always changing their lives for and not the other way around. So this is a big thing for her. I’m sure they will work it out, but etting there may be rough.

Thanks for the feedback and the anniversary wishes!


Willowtaralover:
Thanks for the feedback on all the previous chapters! A lot has happened since they arrived in Texas, but hopefully the high drama is over.

The sibling teasing will continue as long as they’re all together and will probably continue until the end of time, lol.

Typically college is a time when things change quite a bit. Tara never had that experience, so she has no real understanding of going from a ‘normal’ life and transitioning into adulthood. She has basically worked her entire life. No to mention that people are always changing for her and her changing to meet someone else’s needs, well, just never occurred to her before now. So, we’ll just have to wait and see where it all ends up.

Thanks for the feedback and the anniversary wishes!!

Babbles4Twillow:
Thanks!!! And sorry about the cliffhanger:(

love_2003:
They will make it work, afterall...it’s The Kitten. :p They will figure it out, but it may not work the way thy initially plan....

Thanks for the feedback!

xlaurax1:
Hey there college graduate! :bigwave

I don’t remember the last time you left feedback either, but you were busy getting good grades, so I totally understand:)

I’m glad you’ve been keeping up and enjoying the fic...it’s a pleasure to write.

Robby certainly deserved the smack down and getting it by a guy he thought was a friend and ‘on his side’...boy was he surprised! Afterall, blood is thicker than water and there was no way Greyson would side with him over his sister.

Where was the ax?
Well, I couldn’t very well have Tara ax Willow’s sister...or could I....???????? lol

Yeah, sorry about that ending, but the chapter had to end somewhere! Don’t worry, they’ll work it out.

An initial 8 out of 10??? Gah! Well, I guess there was no Bronze and no bras. I may just have to fix that soon!

Thanks for the feedback!!


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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (12/18/11)

Postby Finey_McFine » Sun Dec 18, 2011 12:17 pm

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TITLE: Racing The Rain

AUTHOR: Finey_McFine

RATING: R (Language)

DISCLAIMER: Willow, Tara and any other BtVS characters, as well as some random dialog, belong to Mutant Enemy. ALL other original characters belong to me! This includes: Willow’s siblings and teammates, plus Tara’s friends and co-workers. Mention of any ‘real’ people in this fic is brief and pure fantasy.

SUMMARY: Totally AU! Set in LA with lots of W/T fluff and some angst, but no Hellmouthyness; just good old regular day-to-day drama. Willow is attending college on an athletic scholarship and Tara is Hollywood royalty. They meet and fall in love, of course, but will they be able to survive the pitfalls of a public romance? Well, you’ll just have to read and find out! ;-)



FEEDBACK: Yes! Any glaring issues…please send me a PM!

AUTHOR’S NOTE: Hi Everyone and happy Sunday! Sorry for the extended break between updates...you know how life is. This chapter seemed choppy to me, but I’m sick and my head is a little fuzzy, so anything is possible. Anyway, happy reading:)


Chapter 54: Decisions

All Tara could do was stare as Willow’s eyes landed on the bed sheets and her shoulders sagged. The reality of the situation hit Tara like a ton of bricks. This wonderful woman, that she’d just found, was leaving her? She was having a very hard time wrapping her mind around this concept. She finally blinked several times trying to get the logical side of her brain to kick in. She knew she was overacting and that Willow was not leaving tomorrow, but just the mere thought of having to live apart was enough to send Tara into panic mode. She took a deep breath to calm her nerves; after all they had plenty of time to work things out. Her brain finally kicked in and she gently squeezed Willow’s hands, knowing that right now, she just needed to listen.

“Truthfully, Tare I…I don’t know. I think that eventually, I will have to leave LA if I want to continue on but…” Willow’s voice trailed off as she tried to gather her thoughts and tried to explain it coherently to her girlfriend, but she was having a tough time.

Tara was a bit confused, “You um, you aren’t sure if you want to be a vet after all? Are there no vet schools here in LA?”

Willow looked up, meeting Tara’s deep blue eyes and shaking her head.

Tara was still confused, “No? To which question sweetie?” She asked taking Willow’s hands in hers.

“Maybe both? The um, the closest school is UC Davis, up near Sacramento.”

Tara stiffened, “Will…”

“Tare, I’ve thought about this more than you could ever imagine and I made lists and charts went through dozens of different colored pens and it all came back to one thing…I love you Tara, and I don’t want us to live apart.” Willow’s teary green eyes met Tara’s, “That’s a huge part of this and I’d be lying if I told you otherwise. I want to go to vet school, I just didn’t know where or even if I want to start right away after graduation. Heck, I don’t even think I can. The last eight years I’ve been pushing myself so hard and quite frankly, I’m kind of tired. This semester has been tough and the next will be even worse. Right now, I just want to make it through my senior year. I’ve been debating this decision since before I met you, but after I did…there was no question about leaving LA. I just didn’t know how to tell you without you feeling guilty or responsible.”

Tara half smiled, “I guess you know me pretty well.” She reached up and cupped Willow’s face, wiping a few tears from her cheek.

Willow returned the smile, “I’d like to think I do, I mean, I’m still learning and I want to know it all, but I can’t if I’m four hundred or four thousand miles away. Tare, my Dad said something to me yesterday that really hit home, he said that in order for us to work, that we need to talk honestly and make decisions together. We have time, it’s not something that has to be decided in a day, a week or even a month.”

Tara nodded, “But what about application deadlines and such? I’m not the most knowledgeable person on the subject, but I do know that you have to apply and commit early if you want a spot in a certain program.”

Willow was impressed and made a mental note to ask Tara how she knew these details, but that was another conversation altogether, “Yes, and that’s where the complications come into play. See, another reason why my Mom is so gung ho about me attending an in state school is because of the cost. It’s less than half of what it would cost to go out of state. It’s been pretty cheap for them so far because of all the scholarship money, but grad school is a whole other thing. My Dad makes good money, I guess, but I don’t think they can afford to send me out of state.”

“How expensive? I-If you don’t mind me asking?” Tara asked sheepishly.

“Over fifty thousand a year and that’s on the low end; it would end up somewhere around a quarter of a million dollars, maybe more?”

“So, why not just become a resident and get a cheaper tuition?”

“Well, that sounds easy enough, but this residency thing is super complicated and until now, I wasn’t really sure where I even wanted to go.”

“S-So you checked out other schools too?”

Willow nodded, “I’m nothing if not thorough,” she laughed nervously, “Yeah, I wanted to cover all the bases. When going up against my mother, you kind of want to have the answers before the questions.” Tara nodded knowingly. “Anyway, I wanted to go somewhere really good. So I checked out all of the top schools, Cornell, Colorado State, North Carolina, Ohio and so on. Then I narrowed it down to my top 5 and collected info on scholarships, fellowships, financial aid, etc.”

“Who was your number one?”

Willow momentarily dropped her eyes and inwardly cringed, “ Colorado,” She said flatly. “But only because it was a little cheaper and that was before I met you! Davis was actually second followed by Florida, Auburn and just for kicks I threw in Cornell.” Willow spoke confidently, “I could totally get in to Cornell, but the costs are way out of my league. It’d be fifty just for tuition there not to mention living expenses, even though it’s number one in the nation and you know getting a degree from there I could write my own ticket and-”

Tara’s lips cut off Willow with a gentle kiss, “You’re babbling sweetie.”

Willow swooned, “Oh, sorry. Where was I anyway?” She asked Tara.

“You were bragging about getting into a prestigious university three thousand miles away.” Tara replied, arching her eyebrows; amused with her girlfriend’s swagger.

“Don’t worry Tare, it was just for fun. It’s way too cold up there anyway.”

“And Colorado is what, warm and balmy?

“Colorado is beautiful and contrary to popular belief, it’s not always snowing. Cold yes, but that’s trumped by the school being in the super awesome little college town of Ft. Collins.”

Tara shrugged her shoulders, “I don’t know. I’ve only been to Aspen and Vail.”

Willow’s jaw dropped, “You ski?”

Tara giggled, “Well, if you want to call it that, then yes, I do.”

Willow smiled sweetly, “See? I just learned something new,” She said as she leaned and kissed Tara; briefly deepening the kiss and pulling away with an audible pop.

“Mmmhhh,” Tara grinned.

“There’s more where that came from,” Willow said seductively.

Tara grinned, playing along with the cuteness that was inherently Willow, “Yes and I know exactly where to find it, but no getting off track.”

Willow ducked her head and batted her eyes, “Yes, but maybe just one more kiss to get the wheels back on the track?”

“You’re incorrigible, you know that?”

“Yep and that’s why you love me!”

“Well, I don’t know if it’s number one, but maybe in the top 5.” Tara teased.

Willow giggled and settled for kissing Tara’s hand with soft lingering kisses, since the blonde was withholding a real kiss.

“Willow…” Tara’s voice had shifted to a more serious tone as she reluctantly pulled her hand away, “Please? I…I need to know what’s on your mind or I’m gonna be constantly wondering.”

Willow could see the worry and concern reflected through Tara’s eyes and understood where it was coming from, “So, I’m a planner, as you know and since I’ve had about a month to obsessively think…I came up with a plan of sorts. I use the term loosely because it’s more of a series of random thoughts strung together loosely to vaguely resemble an outline of what could be construed as a plan.” She babbled and Tara smiled. “Like I said this residency thing: Complicated. Basically, I have to establish a residence for at least 366 days prior to applying.”

Tara furrowed her eyebrows in thought, “But you have been here for three years, isn’t that enough?”

“Well, in a normal state one would think so, but not in California. Since I don’t turn 24 before December 31st and my parents are still financially responsible for me and I have to become independent of them for at least a year. So, that clock won’t even start to tick until after I graduate.”

Tara couldn’t help but smile a little, “So, we’re looking at the fall year after next?”

Willow nodded, “At the earliest, but since my residency won’t become official until sometime during that summer, I may not even be able to get in until the winter term the following January and I may even have to wait until I turn 24. Plus, I’ll need all that waiting time to work, save money and then I’ll probably have to apply for some financial aid. It’s going to be expensive no matter what, especially without a scholarship and I don’t want my parents to shoulder all the costs. I’ve done well with my grades, but with softball, I’m just not sure that it’s good enough. I’ll just have to apply and see what happens.”

Tara bit her bottom lip and the concern spread across her face, “Two years? Are you sure you want to wait that long?”

“Hey, I just figured out a way to stay here for the next year or two years and you wanna get rid of me?” Willow said, playfully poking her tongue out between her teeth.

Tara snorted, “Yeah, because I really can’t stand having you around…doofus.”

Both girls giggled, but Tara quickly slipped back into serious mode, “That’s um, that’s a long time to wait and I was thinking…I don’t want you to lose track of what you want to do. I c-could help, you know.” Tara said meekly, bracing herself for Willow’s reaction.

Willow sat up straight and sternly shaking her head, “Tara no, I’m not expecting and I would never ask.”

“I know, but I have the means to do it and-”

“Baby, no. This is exactly what my mother is expecting and I need to prove that I can do this on my own; that I can be an adult and figure out a way on my own.”

Tara dipped her head, “S-She’s going to b-blame me, regardless of what you tell her a-and I’m ok with it. In fact, I’m kind of g-getting used to it,” She said with a chuckle, “So, i-if you let me h-help at least it will sort of soften the blow. You k-know, because at least you’ll be in s-school…”

Willow’s heart literally felt like it was being crushed listening to Tara’s stutter get progressively worse. She reached forward and tucked some loose hair behind Tara’s ear, “C’mere,” Willow said as she pulled Tara close, “Let’s not talk about this anymore today, ok? The bottom line is, I’m not coming back here to go to grad school, period. No matter what my Mom says, she can’t force me. This decision is for us to make, we have plenty of time to make it and we’ll figure it out together…you and me. Ok? This kind of stuff happens to couples all the time. One gets transferred with a job or something and the other follows. Tara, I understand that I’m the follower right now and you have no idea how ok I am with that. Your adult life started a long time ago, you have this amazing career, a house, responsibilities and I’m still on hold. I’m the more flexible half and I get it. I’ll never, ever regret choosing to be with you.”

Tara nodded into Willow’s chest, “I love you Will and I’m behind what ever you decide,” She whispered, tightening her grip on Willow’s waist.

“I love you too and it’s what we decide remember?”

“I-I know, but I mean about wanting or not w-wanting to be a vet. That’s your decision and I support you either way. I don’t want you doing it because you think that’s what everyone else wants you to do, but I also don’t want you not doing it because of me. Does that make any sense?”

“It does, but like I said, it’s not a 911 situation and hey, no more sad faces. We’re gonna have fun today...just us girls. Oh shit! Girls! I need to call the girls!” Willow exclaimed as she clambered around looking for her cell in a mild state of panic; much to Tara’s amusement.

“Willow,” Tara said calmly as she stopped Willow’s erratic movements with a soft touch to her arm, “Your phone is right here sweetie. How about you call Molly and Stella while I go shower and get ready.”

“Ok Tare. Hey, can I have that kiss now?” Willow asked and was immediately rewarded.
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (11/28/11)

Postby AstronSoul » Sun Dec 18, 2011 12:17 pm

DIBS!!!!


I love my new comp so fast!!

hehe ok now....

“Truthfully, Tare I…I don’t know. I think that eventually, I will have to leave LA if I want to continue on but…” Willow’s voice trailed off as she tried to gather her thoughts and tried to explain it coherently to her girlfriend, but she was having a tough time.

Tara was a bit confused, “You um, you aren’t sure if you want to be a vet after all? Are there no vet schools here in LA?”

Willow looked up, meeting Tara’s deep blue eyes and shaking her head.

Tara was still confused, “No? To which question sweetie?” She asked taking Willow’s hands in hers.


Ya know I would be unsure myself with someone just shaking their head no, but that is so Willow when she is trying to think of what to say.

"Right now, I just want to make it through my senior year. I’ve been debating this decision since before I met you, but after I did…there was no question about leaving LA. I just didn’t know how to tell you without you feeling guilty or responsible.”

Tara half smiled, “I guess you know me pretty well.” She reached up and cupped Willow’s face, wiping a few tears from her cheek


The only woman in the world who would get Tara, this is such a nice moment within the discussion.

Willow returned the smile, “I’d like to think I do, I mean, I’m still learning and I want to know it all, but I can’t if I’m four hundred or four thousand miles away. Tare, my Dad said something to me yesterday that really hit home, he said that in order for us to work, that we need to talk honestly and make decisions together. We have time, it’s not something that has to be decided in a day, a week or even a month.”


This is I think one of my favorite parts of this chapter, because Willow starts thinking as 'us' not just herself.

Tara dipped her head, “S-She’s going to b-blame me, regardless of what you tell her a-and I’m ok with it. In fact, I’m kind of g-getting used to it,” She said with a chuckle, “So, i-if you let me h-help at least it will sort of soften the blow. You k-know, because at least you’ll be in s-school…”


After offering to help Willow (which is like a mind blowing amazing thing) I like how Willow wants to do it herself, but if she keeps doing the 'Us' thing maybe she should accept Tara's help. I mean she said already she wants to marry the actress, it could just be their money instead of Tara's.

“It does, but like I said, it’s not a 911 situation and hey, no more sad faces. We’re gonna have fun today...just us girls. Oh shit! Girls! I need to call the girls!” Willow exclaimed as she clambered around looking for her cell in a mild state of panic; much to Tara’s amusement.

“Willow,” Tara said calmly as she stopped Willow’s erratic movements with a soft touch to her arm, “Your phone is right here sweetie. How about you call Molly and Stella while I go shower and get ready.”

“Ok Tare. Hey, can I have that kiss now?” Willow asked and was immediately rewarded.


Lol a funny moment with Willow looking for her phone. I am so glad that there was no earth shattering brokenness. Great Job!!!!

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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (11/28/11)

Postby Babbles4Twillow » Sun Dec 18, 2011 12:33 pm

Glad to see you back. Feel better Shel! :bigwave

Here we go! Yippee!

I'm really glad that they talked. Being able to talk to your partner like that is huge. Now they know where they stand and can go from there!

“Well, I don’t know if it’s number one, but maybe in the top 5.” Tara teased.

Love this!

No matter what my Mom says, she can’t force me. This decision is for us to make, we have plenty of time to make it and we’ll figure it out together…you and me.

So happy that Willow had realized this. It shows a maturity that I wasn't sure she had until this point. When you're the baby, there's always the fear that you will let your parents down, but it's not about that, it's about proving to them that you can stand on your own. Something that Willow will know in time (and I'm hopig fervently that this happens) her parents will only be more proud to see their little girl grow up and stand on her own two feet than they would if she only did what they wanted. I'm positive that things will work out with Shiela once she sees that Willow is her own person.

Great stuff, Shel! Keep it up!
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (12/18/11)

Postby Wills redemption » Sun Dec 18, 2011 2:52 pm

Yay, finally the update we've been waiting for, that really made my evening! I'm glad they talked things about Wilows plans for grad school out, loved that Willow insisted that they will decide together. I can understand that Willow wants to make it without Taras financial help but I also find it natural that Tara wants to support her. Let's face it, the expected costs for Willows whole grad school education are just a fraction of the salary Tara gets for 1 episode of Grants Park, right? Willow will just have to learn to accept in the future that Tara wants to share her wealth with her girlfriend and future wife.

Now I'm really looking forward to the "girls day"!
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (12/18/11)

Postby zampsa19752001 » Sun Dec 18, 2011 3:52 pm

Yay for great update-y goodness... I'm really glad that they have started to talk about their plans for the future... Can't wait for the girls night...
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (12/18/11)

Postby leos_pride » Sun Dec 18, 2011 8:51 pm

Hurray update-y goodness! :applause Sorry for the previous begging but I just had to know! Sorry to hear you aren't feeling well now :(

I'm so glad our girls have talked and they have at least a year, and more likely two to figure out what works for both of them! It sounds like Willow has thought a lot of it out and it is probably good for her to take a year off before diving into grad school.

So glad things are back on track with our girls :) Now I'm eager to see the fun "girls day" and curious to see how Shelia leaves things with our girls leaving soon.

Thanks for the update and I hope you are feeling better soon!

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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (12/18/11)

Postby True_Love » Mon Dec 19, 2011 2:29 pm

Hey Shel,

Sorry to hear you were or are out sick. Hope you feel better soon!

I'm so happy to see your girls being so solid for one another. Realizing that there may be some difficult times ahead, but they are both willing to put in the effort so it works out. Hopefully, the angstiest parts of your story are over with and there will just be a pleasant little hilly path to the end. They sound like they have their priorities in the right places and their hearts set on one another. What else could you ask for?

Now on to a fun day with the girls!
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (12/18/11)

Postby beautiful_love » Tue Dec 20, 2011 8:23 am

Hey Kettle, I mean Shelby. So I wrote of this wonderful feedback and for some reason it didn't submit correctly. So I'll try again. Glad you're feeling a little better though I hope your 100% soon.

A nice update. I knew when the cost issue was brought up that Tara's offer wasn't going to be to far behind. It's a very generous offer but I totally understand Willow's reaction. It's hard trying to pull tens of thousands of dollars out of your ass but I totally respect her wanting to do it herself. Been there, done that. I just hope whatever choice Willow makes, it's for the right reasons.

Looking forward to the next update.
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (12/18/11)

Postby Ariel » Wed Dec 21, 2011 10:42 pm

Hey, Shelby

Hope you're on the mend, colds are lousy!

Enjoyed the update. Really liked Willow's remembering Ira's comment about making decisions as a couple and of course I loved this moment:
Tara’s lips cut off Willow with a gentle kiss, “You’re babbling sweetie.”

Willow swooned, “Oh, sorry. Where was I anyway?” She asked Tara.

“You were bragging about getting into a prestigious university three thousand miles away.” Tara replied, arching her eyebrows; amused with her girlfriend’s swagger.
Willow-babble, swooning, and swagger - how adorably Willow can you get! :bounce :pinky :eatme

Humor and banter between them is a huge part of who they are, so I love seeing that in the fic. :applause

Questions, yep - they ARE a couple and it's exciting!

Okay, no more reading - chicken soup and lots of :love from Mrs. McFine and here's a flower to help you get well. :flower

Take care,

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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (12/18/11)

Postby willowtaralover » Thu Dec 22, 2011 10:47 am

WOW, it sounds really complex going in for higher education over in the U.S. No wonder Willow is having problems deciding where to go. At least they see to have some time to decide what's best for them to stay together but also allow Willow to complete her studies.

Tara dipped her head, “S-She’s going to b-blame me, regardless of what you tell her a-and I’m ok with it. In fact, I’m kind of g-getting used to it,” She said with a chuckle, “So, i-if you let me h-help at least it will sort of soften the blow. You k-know, because at least you’ll be in s-school…”

The bottom line is, I’m not coming back here to go to grad school, period. No matter what my Mom says, she can’t force me. This decision is for us to make, we have plenty of time to make it and we’ll figure it out together…you and me. Ok?


Nice to see that Sheila's attempt's to come between our girls has instead strengthened their resolve and love for each other

I may not even be able to get in until the winter term the following January and I may even have to wait until I turn 24.

I have always wondered when Willow's birthday actually is. Is it in January or much later in the year?????

This is such a neat chapter as the girls try to work out Willow's college choices which also helps relieve Tara's hurt heart. It's good to see you writing again Shel even while feeling poorly which I commiserate with as I have a bit of a cold myself.
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (12/18/11)

Postby Finey_McFine » Sat Dec 24, 2011 1:56 am

AstronSoul:
The good thing about you getting dibs all the time is that I never have to change the frist name in my feedback file. :p

Yes, you are correct...typical Willow in thinking mode. :grin Tara just needs to become more in tune to her body movements. But they do get each other and that connection will continue to grow as they spend more time together.

Ira struck a chord when he had his little talk with Willow. Neither she nor Tara have been in a serious long term relationship, so this is new ground for both.

At some point Willow is going to have to concede to Tara’s significant wealth, but not just yet. They’ve been teasing each other with little quips here and there (ie. alluding to marrying one day) but the fact of the matter is, they are only 4 weeks into it and accepting money at this point would be a recipe for disaster.


Thanks for the feedback!


Babbles4Twillow:
Thanks...hopefully I’ll be feeling better soon!

Yes, talking things out with your partner is huge. I always felt that if you were with someone you felt awkward around or didn’t communicate with...then you were doomed, lol. Communication is the key to longevity:)

I think the maturity has always been lingering. I mean, she was mature enough to get out of a bad situation and get her own place, etc. It’s just these recent big life decisions that have tripped her up a bit and also getting away from being “the baby.” I believe that no matter how old you are...when you come home, that old feeling of being a child takes over and you tend to revert back to those childhood tendencies. Does that make any sense?

Anyway, I do have some Willow-y things up my sleeve that I’m saving for later. ;-)


Thanks for the feedback!


Wills redemption:
Glad I made your night!! :p

It was incredibly important for them to decide together, even though the relationship is new.

I get what you’re saying about Willow accepting Tara’s help, it’s crazy the amount of money she makes. But remember, vet school is a couple years down the line and by then money might not be such a big issue. I think Willow just wants to know feel like she can do it herself and not take the easy way out. But who knows what might happen before it’s time to decide.

Thanks for the feedback!


zampsa19752001:
Future plans are always fun and girls day out will be fun as well!!

Thanks for the feedback!


True_Love:
Thanks...I’m definitely feeling better:)

I think they are both just getting used to being in a relationship and learning about the give and take stuff. I’m not sure if all the angst is behind them, but we’ll just have to wait and see.

Thanks for the feedback!


beautiful_love:
Hey Pot!!

Grrr...I hate when I lose great feedback! I got into the habit of copying my fb a long time ago because sometimes the KB just randomly boots you out and everything disappears.

Anyway, Willow’s schooling is a bit down the road and who knows what will be going on by then. Tara has 2 years on her contract, she’s making a big movie, so you never know. By then Willow may not want to go or she may be more willing to accept the money from Tara. But in the mean time, I think that it is important that Willow prove to herself, as well as her parents, that she is mature enough to handle her own life.

Thanks for the feedback!


Ariel:
Feeling better...thanks! ;-)

The girls are definitely settling into the relationship and realizing that if they want to make it work, then they have to communicate.

Anything Willow is adorable...you know me. :p

Glad you liked the update! More fun to come!!


Thanks for the feedback!!!


Willowtaralover:
The complications come in when you are trying to figure out the residency stuff. I did some research and it was craziness! But they will figure it all out in the end:)

Sheila’s shenanigans only pushed them closer together…her plan definitely backfired.

Ahhh, Willow’s birthday…see next chapter!

Willow has a lot of options and who knows where life will take her in the next couple years. Tara dos as well, although she doesn’t realize it right now.

Thanks for the feedback!!




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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (12/24/11)

Postby Finey_McFine » Sat Dec 24, 2011 1:58 am

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TITLE: Racing The Rain

AUTHOR: Finey_McFine

RATING: R (Language)

DISCLAIMER: Willow, Tara and any other BtVS characters, as well as some random dialog, belong to Mutant Enemy. ALL other original characters belong to me! This includes: Willow’s siblings and teammates, plus Tara’s friends and co-workers. Mention of any ‘real’ people in this fic is brief and pure fantasy.

SUMMARY: Totally AU! Set in LA with lots of W/T fluff and some angst, but no Hellmouthyness; just good old regular day-to-day drama. Willow is attending college on an athletic scholarship and Tara is Hollywood royalty. They meet and fall in love, of course, but will they be able to survive the pitfalls of a public romance? Well, you’ll just have to read and find out! ;-)



FEEDBACK: Yes! Any glaring issues…please send me a PM!

AUTHOR’S NOTE: Hi Everyone and Merry Christmas Eve! I hope you are all enjoying the holiday season. ;-) This chapter is light and fun, for the most part. So, I hope you enjoy. It’ll probably be a few weeks before I have an update to you…taking a much-needed break. See you on the flipside! Happy New Year!!:)


Chapter 55: Mallrats

Tara finished getting ready while Willow showered and headed downstairs, desperate for a cup of coffee. She entered the kitchen to find the men of the house sitting around the table enjoying a late breakfast with Hunter surfing his iPad while Ira and Grandpa Leo read the newspaper.

“Good morning Tara,” Leo greeted Tara briefly looking up from his newspaper.

“Hi, good morning everyone,” Tara replied, receiving a return greeting from Hunter and Ira.

Tara poured herself a cup of coffee and sat down next to Hunter. “So, I hear ya’ll have a big girl’s day’ planned today. Sooo, what’s on the agenda?” Hunter asked curiously.

Tara replied as she added cream and sugar to her cup, “I think we’re going to Rachael’s to see the nursery and then doing lunch. Beyond that, I have no idea.”

Grandpa Leo scoffed, “You couldn’t pay me enough to go out of the house today. All the crazies are out shopping like the world’s ending tomorrow. Sheesh…” He grumbled, searching through the paper that was strewn across the table. “Where the devil is the sports page?”

Ira sighed deeply, folding the open paper he’d been reading and reluctantly handing it over to his father-in-law. Leo mumbled a quick under his breath, knowing that Ira was reading it, but taking the paper anyway.

Tara watched the little exchange and laughed quietly to herself as Ira caught her eye; smiling in return and giving the blonde a knowing wink.

“Um Tara, have you seen this?” Hunter asked with a tinge of concern clearly evident in his tone.

“Hmm?” Tara shifted in her seat and leaned towards Hunter. She craned her neck to look at the iPad screen that Hunter was viewing.

Tara read it to herself... PH has learned that embattled super star, Tara “I’m Gay” Maclay, has lost the opportunity for the lead in an upcoming Ron Howard project AND has been iced out of the second installment of the widely popular, ‘Against The Grain’ sequel, which thrust Maclay into the national spotlight five years ago, firmly cementing her position as the perennial 'girl next door.' PH has also learned from a source close to the actress that “she is devastated and regretting her decision to come out.” Maclay is currently hiding out at the Texas ranch of her new gal-pal, Willow Rosenberg. Rumor has it that Rosenberg is experiencing problems of her own with the high maintenance actress; seen here sitting curiously close to one of Rosenberg’s brothers. The fiery redhead was extremely unhappy and could soon become an ex-gal pal…from the looks of this next picture. Just another example of a child actress spinning out of control.

Hunter rested his hand on Tara’s arm; his eyes full of concern, “Tara, are you ok?”

Tara looked up surprised, “Huh? Oh yeah, I’m fine. Why?”

“I just…well, I’m sorry about the movie, but there’ll be others.”

“Thanks Hunter, but it’s ok I didn’t lose any movie roles,” She said giving his hand a reassuring squeeze.

“But it said…” Hunter said quietly as his voice trailed off.

“I’m not upset because none of it is true. It’s completely made up. I turned down the ‘Grain’ sequel because number one, their shooting schedule overlapped my schedule on ‘Grant’s Park,’ and number two, the script was awful. As for the other project, we’re still in talks and it could go either way right now.” She said relaxing in her chair and nonchalantly popping a piece of fruit in her mouth.

Hunter shook his head and smiled, “Wow, you’re one cool customer Tara, but I think my sister might not be when she sees these pics. She’s gonna flip out.”

“What am I flipping out about?” Willow asked cheerfully as she entered the kitchen.

Ira folded his paper down and peered over the top, “Flipping? There will be no more flipping. This is a flip free zone.” He declared, waving his hand in a circular motion as he eyed his children before going back to reading the paper.

Tara snickered, “Will, you’re timing is impeccable. Maybe you should take up acting?”

“Hmm, maybe I should,” She spun dramatically, lowering herself to one knee; placing a hand her hand over her heart and reaching toward Tara with the other. “But soft! What light through yonder window breaks? It is the East, and Juliet is the sun! ”

Tara smiled, taking Willow’s outstretched hand, “O Romeo, Romeo! Wherefore art thou Romeo?”

Grandpa Leo rolled his eyes, “Do you two have any idea how much you skipped in between?”

Willow grinned as Tara pulled her up from the floor, “I know,” She replied taking a seat in Tara’s lap and popping some cut melon into her mouth, “But we don’t have time. Molly and Stella will be here soon and we need to get going.” Willow smiled towards her grandfather as she wrapped an arm around her girlfriend’s shoulders.

Tara blushed at Willow’s bold move and felt a little awkward, having no idea what she should do with her hands. Deciding to wrap one around Willow’s back and rest the other on the table.

“So, what cha guys lookin’ at?”

Hunter squirmed uncomfortably and turned the tablet away from his sister.

“Come oooon, let me see,” Willow whined as she pulled the device out of his hands and began reading.

Willow soon found a frown creasing the corners of her mouth, “Damn,” She said causing Tara and Hunter to cringe, “What is with these pictures? I look like a sweaty angry demon! Dark Willow or something...I’m generally a happy person, why can’t they put those pictures online?” Willow continued to rant, sparking her father’s attention.

“Hey, let me see,” He said reaching out a free hand.

Willow got up and handed it over to her Dad as Hunter and Tara gathered up their dishes and headed to the sink, “See, I told you.” Hunter said, catching Tara’s eye; the blonde simply smiled knowingly.

Ira examined the pictures closely and read the article; shaking his head as he handed the iPad back to his daughter. “You know Willow, you need to be more careful.”

“Hey! What’s that supposed to mean?” Willow answered slightly defensive.

Ira continued, “I’m just saying that you’re in the public eye now more than ever and you need to be mindful of what you do or say and apparently, how you look,” He smirked as he noticed Tara at the sink washing out her coffee mug. “And you Miss ‘high maintenance’ Maclay...you really need to tone down that outlandish behavior!” Ira joked.

Tara glanced over her shoulder laughing and held up her wet hands, “Willow, come hither and dry my hands. I just can’t be bothered with such trivial things. Afterall, I am the Tara Maclay.” Everyone began laughing as Willow rushed over to dry Tara’s hands and then curtseyed.

“Anything else, Milady?” Willow asked mimicking Tara’s British accent.

Hunter snorted, “I like how high maintenance equals a British accent. Just what are you two implying?”

Tara continued to giggle, “I don’t know, I guess I just Shakespeared out for a minute.”

The group continued to chat, laugh and poke fun at “High Maintenance Maclay” until Molly and Stella arrived and the four girls left for Rachael’s house.

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“Rach, this is adorable!” Willow gushed getting her first look at the nursery, “I LOVE retro Pooh! Where did you find all this stuff?”

“Oh you know, here and there...”

“Willow is right, this is so cute. Did you and Jeff do everything?” Molly asked.

“Yep! Jeff put everything together and I painted and decorated.” Rachael said proudly.

Willow wandered around the room, spotting a vintage Pooh Bear lamp sitting on the dresser. Tara watched as Willow cocked her head curiously and gently ran her hand over the body of the lamp. Tara noticed the moisture forming in her girlfriend’s eyes and came up behind her; snaking her arms around and snuggling her from behind.

“Hey, are you ok?”

Willow closed her eyes and sank into the soothing warmth of her girlfriend. It never ceased to amaze her how Tara instinctively knew just what she needed and when she needed it most. “Yeah, I just...” Willow turned her head towards her sister, “Rach?”

Rachael simply nodded as Willow turned her head back towards the lamp, “This was mine and Hunters when we were little. It sat on the table between our beds. I’d forgotten all about it until now,” She whispered softly. “Rachael, where did you find this? I...I thought Mom got rid of all that stuff.” Willow said turning towards her sister.

Rachael shook her head, “No, she kept it all Will, right down to the sheets,” She said glancing towards the crib. “I-I hope you don’t mind...it’s just that I really loved it and I didn’t think that you’d need it just yet and I promise to take really good care of it so whenever your ready...” Rachael rambled nervously.

“It’s fine Rach, I...I don’t think I’ll need it just yet,” Willow said glancing at Tara, who winked back; causing Willow’s face to flush.

Tara snickered, giving Willow a final squeeze as she turned away; suddenly very interested in the rest of the room. She wandered to the crib and ran her hand across the cool sheets and the fluffy Pooh comforter. She reached up and lightly tapped the stuffed Piglet hanging in the mobile. Tara smiled as she imagined a tiny redheaded baby lying on those sheets; giggling and cooing as she peered at the swinging animals. Someday... washed through her mind as the conversation continued on behind her.

“So, all this was mine?”

“Well, everything except the crib, but I’m sure she would have kept that too if you and Hunter hadn’t destroyed it.”

“What are you talking about? We did no such thing!” Willow replied indignantly.

“Uh, I beg to differ,” Rachael said as Tara turned away from the crib and her baby daydream to catch up on the conversation. “Mom used to put you and Hunter in the crib together to play and nap. Anyway, you guys were in there one day when she heard this loud crash. She came running in and found all four sides of the crib on the floor and you and Hunter were sitting on the mattress in the middle looking shocked and guilty.” Rachael looked towards Tara, “Apparently, they started jumping and rocking the crib until it just exploded.”

“That never happened,” Willow scoffed; folding her arms defiantly across her chest as everyone else in the room started to giggle.

“Did so and there’s a picture to prove it!”

Willow thought for a few seconds until she finally realized that her sister was right. “Oh shit, she’s right...I forgot all about it!” Willow joined in the laughter, “Tare, I’ll have to dig it out and show you when we get home later. It is pretty funny.”

“So, are you ya’ll hungry, because I’m STARVING!” Rachael exclaimed, “And I have this intense craving for Cheesecake.” Everyone nodded enthusiastically except Willow who groaned.

“You don’t like cheesecake sweetie?” Tara asked.

“No, I love cheesecake, but the only Cheesecake Factory is at the mall and...”

Tara’s eyes lit up, “Oh yay, shopping!”

“I could shop,” Molly chimed in.

“Oh, me too!” Rachael added.

“But Tara, it’s Black Friday!” Willow whined.

“Oh Will, buck up and take one for the team. Besides, I have pregnancy cravings of the cheesecake variety.”

“Uuugghh,” Willow groaned looking towards Stella as they both rolled their eyes.

“Ok good, now that that’s settled, let’s go before this baby eats a hole in my stomach.”

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Several hours later Willow found herself sitting on a comfy leather couch next to Stella in the middle of the mall with several despondent boyfriends, and husbands sitting in the surrounding chairs. Every now and then Molly, Rachael or Tara would show up and drop another shopping bag at their feet. Willow and Stella had given up trying to keep pace with the trio nearly an hour earlier and had decided to camp out and people watch instead.

“Oooh, what about those two?” Willow asked Stella.

“Hmm let’s see, they’ve been together for about six months. She’s a high-powered lawyer and he’s a cable repairman. Um, that’s how they met; he came to her house to repair her box...if you know what I mean??” Stella wriggled her eyebrows causing Willow to snort with laughter. “Anyway, she has a secret life and he has no idea. It’s easy for her to be sneaky because they don’t live together. Ok, your turn.” She said to Willow.

The redhead cleared her throat, “But recently, he found something when he spent the night at her house and he got curious. So, he decided to snoop around when she was taking a shower and found a hidden stash of....hmmm...of...oh I got it! Whips, chains and leather S&M gear!” Willow shouted a little too loudly and piqued the interest of several young men sitting near them.

“Ssshhhh....” Stella giggled.

Willow chuckled, “This is fun, thanks for hanging out with me Stella. I just couldn’t do anymore ‘shopping’...it’s not so much fun when you’re broke.”

Stella nodded, “Tell me about it.”

Willow’s face suddenly felt hot, “Oh God Stella, I’m sorry. I didn’t mean...”

“Willow, it’s ok and it’ll get better one day,” Stella shrugged, “I hope.” She said with a nervous laugh. “I um, I signed up for night classes over at the community college and I start in January.” She blurted out, ducking her head.

Willow’s eyes lit up, “Really! Stella that’s great!” She rewarded her sister in law with a tight hug.

“I knew you’d be happy for me.”

“Well you know me and school,” Willow beamed, “What do you plan to study?”

“Um, I thought maybe elementary education? I’m not really sure yet, I just want something more...for me. Pretty much my entire adult existence has been about other people. First it was Eli and then it was Milo; now it’s both. I figure I’ll start slow next semester with just a couple classes and once Milo is in kindergarten next fall, I can take a full load.”

“That’s really great Stella, I’m so happy for you.”

“Thanks Willow, I’m uh...I’m happy for you too.” Stella admitted shyly.

Willow looked at her curiously, “For what?”

“I’m happy for you and Tara. She’s so nice and not at all what I expected.”

“I’ll take that as a compliment?” Willow joked. “No, I know what you mean. She’s not your typical celebrity, plus she’s pretty much the best person I’ve ever known.” Willow’s eyes shined with love when she spoke about Tara and she blushed furiously.

“Uh oh,” Stella said.

“What?”

“Incoming,” Stella replied pointing across the mall at the three women that were heading in their direction; laughing and chatting with their arms full of shopping bags.

Willow jumped up to help her girlfriend, “Baby, what is all this stuff?”

“Just you know...stuff. They h-had deals and what’s a girl supposed to do...just pass them up?”

Willow smiled sweetly and shook her head. She relieved Tara of several bags, getting a kick out of the cuteness that was pout-y Tara. She knew that if Tara wanted to, she could probably buy the entire mall and certainly didn’t have to worry about catching something on sale. She was just too adorable for words.

“Well, I think this calls for a much needed coffee break and if the Starbucks just happens to be across from the Apple store, well then...that would be a weird coincidence.”

Molly and Tara shared a knowing smirk and hi-fived as Tara spun towards Rachael, “I believe someone owes me a coffee?”

Rachael made a face, “Fine,” She said reluctantly.

“Hey! You guys bet on me? My own girlfriend bet on me?”

Tara stiffened a bit worried that Willow would be upset and wondering if they were talking about her behind her back or something. She was relieved to see a wide grin appear and quickly spread across Willow’s face.

“Alright! Go Tara it’s your birthday...free coffee..” Willow began to sing and do an awkward little dance.

“Oh good grief! Come on, let’s go,” Rachael said as she tugged on her sister’s sleeve.

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Willow got her mocha and true to form, wandered over to the Apple store while the four other women sat around a table enjoying each other’s company. Molly and Stella left to use the restroom, leaving Rachael and Tara with some one on one quality time together.

“Tara, I just um...I just wanted to say thanks.”

Tara looked at Rachael with a bewildered expression on her face, “Hmm?”

“For not bolting out of here yesterday. If it was me, I’m not sure I would have stayed. You are most definitely a better person than I,” She finished as she sipped her tea.

“Well, I don’t know about that,” Tara said sweetly giving Rachael’s arm a gentle squeeze, “I might be an only child, but I’m definitely no stranger to family strife. Besides, your sister’s worth it.”

Rachael returned Tara’s smile, “You really love her don’t you?”

Tara nodded and smiled sweetly.

“Well, you’re fairly awesome yourself,” Rachael replied eliciting a deep blush from Tara, “I have to admit Tara, You’re not at all what I expected.”

“You mean I’m not a pretentious high maintenance celebrity?”

Rachael giggled, “Been reading the gossip columns I see. No, you’re not a nerdy comic book loving lesbian or the butchy athletic type or all of the above? Although, you most definitely got your butch on yesterday.”

“Wow, stereotype much?”

“No, I’m just describing what I thought would be my sister’s type?”

“Well, you know what they say about opposites attracting? Anyway, I don’t think Willow is the least bit nerdy or butchy; beautiful, smart, funny...but definitely not nerdy and butchy.” Tara responded as she looked up to see Willow playing with an iPad across the mall in the Apple store. The redhead was engrossed with her brow furrowed, her tongue poking out between her teeth and her body leaning every which way as she played the game. “Ok, maybe a little nerdy,” Tara conceded and enjoyed a good laugh with Rachael.

“So, do you know what you’re getting her for her birthday yet?” Rachael asked.

Tara sighed, puffing out her cheeks slightly, “I don’t know. What do you get a Jewish girl that just happens to share her birthday with Christmas?”

Rachael glanced across the mall again at Willow, “Hmmm, I wonder....uh oh.”

“What?” Tara eyed Rachael curiously.

“I think the word is out,” She replied as a small group of people approached Tara for autographs and another crowd with cameras was forming outside the coffee shop.

“Damn,” Tara sighed in defeat realizing that the hat, scarf and glasses hadn’t worked as well as planned.

Across the mall Willow was starting to have issues of her own, as numerous fans also approached her. Some wanted her autograph and picture, but most were asking about her famous girlfriend. Then her phone started to buzz furiously.

The text was from Rachael, ‘Will, time to go. NOW.

Willow did her best to politely excuse herself and with the help of several Apple employees and was finally able to exit the store; only to be met with a mob scene across the mall in front of the coffee shop.

The crowd was large, there were dozens of people and it was growing by the minute. It took some time before Willow was able to fight her way through to reach her slightly panicked girlfriend.

“Tara! Are you ok?”

“Yes, but I think w-we need to get out of here.”

Willow nodded and looked at Molly, who was trying to keep the mob from crushing them, “Where’s Rachael?!”

“She’s fine, she and Stella took all the bags and went to get the car. They’re meeting us out front.” Molly replied seeing Willow instantly relieved; guessing that she was worried about the possibility of her pregnant sister getting trampled.

“Good, cuz we need to make with the speedy exit.” No sooner had the words left Willow’s mouth when mall security showed up to try and help escort Tara from the building. Willow received another text from Rachael stating that she was at the entrance with the car as Tara did her best to be cordial to her fandom without getting caught on tape completely losing it. It was the last thing she needed.

Willow’s phone began to vibrate again, “They’re at the entrance, let’s blow this popsicle stand!” She exclaimed and even amidst the chaos, received a somewhat amused look from Tara.

They tried to make a hasty exit as the crowd began to surge forward with Willow and Molly flanking Tara in the middle; arms linked and protected by about a half dozen swarly mall cops. Unfortunately, it turned to a snails pace as the mob increased in size and they had to navigate the narrow aisles lined with busy kiosks and holiday shoppers. Once outside the doors Stella lunged forward, grabbing Willow by the shirt, and shoving them unceremoniously into the back seat; but not before she shouted at a couple of over zealous women that had tried to throw themselves at Tara.

“I’m in...DRIVE! DRIVE!” Stella shouted as Rachael sped away from the curb.

They girls in the back were panting and still slightly out of breath from their ordeal. Willow was concerned and turned in her seat, looking back to see if they were being followed.

Rachael was the first to speak as she turned on to the freeway, “What the fuck was that?!”

“It was fucking awesome!” Stella chimed in. “Exhilarating! I was so ready to kick those chicks asses! Just a little bit closer...” She said as she punched the air with her hands.

The stunned spectators glanced at each other and then all burst out in a fit of laughter.
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (12/18/11)

Postby True_Love » Sat Dec 24, 2011 2:14 am

Dibs! :whip

Hey Shelby, Thanks for the the holiday gift. It was a non-stressed, fun, and happy read.

A couple things stood out to me that showed the family connection between Willow and her father and Willow and Rachel.
Ira folded his paper down and peered over the top, “Flipping? There will be no more flipping. This is a flip free zone.” He declared, waving his hand in a circular motion as he eyed his children before going back to reading the paper.

and
“Oh Will, buck up and take one for the team. Besides, I have pregnancy cravings of the cheesecake variety.”

Both of these quotes could be Willow-speak, but the fact you used them for her family members is great. It shows that her word choices aren't so unique to Willow, but a family speech pattern.

I love this new side to Stella. I'm glad she can finally feel like one the the Roseberg 'girls'. She really opened up to Willow about her furture dreams and the things that matter to her. This post definately adds some depth to her character.

Looking forward to more! Happy New Year!
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (12/18/11)

Postby AstronSoul » Sat Dec 24, 2011 7:10 am

Sadly no dibs this time, I WILL get it next time MUAHAHAHA (will edit post later tonight ^^)

Tara read it to herself... PH has learned that embattled super star, Tara “I’m Gay” Maclay, has lost the opportunity for the lead in an upcoming Ron Howard project AND has been iced out of the second installment of the widely popular, ‘Against The Grain’ sequel, which thrust Maclay into the national spotlight five years ago, firmly cementing her position as the perennial 'girl next door.' PH has also learned from a source close to the actress that “she is devastated and regretting her decision to come out.” Maclay is currently hiding out at the Texas ranch of her new gal-pal, Willow Rosenberg. Rumor has it that Rosenberg is experiencing problems of her own with the high maintenance actress; seen here sitting curiously close to one of Rosenberg’s brothers. The fiery redhead was extremely unhappy and could soon become an ex-gal pal…from the looks of this next picture. Just another example of a child actress spinning out of control.


Gotta love tabloids and newspapers that print fake stuff, sometimes I wish those people would spontaneously combust.

Willow soon found a frown creasing the corners of her mouth, “Damn,” She said causing Tara and Hunter to cringe, “What is with these pictures? I look like a sweaty angry demon! Dark Willow or something...I’m generally a happy person, why can’t they put those pictures online?” Willow continued to rant, sparking her father’s attention.

“Hey, let me see,” He said reaching out a free hand.

Willow got up and handed it over to her Dad as Hunter and Tara gathered up their dishes and headed to the sink, “See, I told you.” Hunter said, catching Tara’s eye; the blonde simply smiled knowingly.

Ira examined the pictures closely and read the article; shaking his head as he handed the iPad back to his daughter. “You know Willow, you need to be more careful.”

“Hey! What’s that supposed to mean?” Willow answered slightly defensive.

Ira continued, “I’m just saying that you’re in the public eye now more than ever and you need to be mindful of what you do or say and apparently, how you look,” He smirked as he noticed Tara at the sink washing out her coffee mug. “And you Miss ‘high maintenance’ Maclay...you really need to tone down that outlandish behavior!” Ira joked.


Priceless, I love how everyone is making fun of what's in the pages, great to see them bonding in a weird way.

The redhead cleared her throat, “But recently, he found something when he spent the night at her house and he got curious. So, he decided to snoop around when she was taking a shower and found a hidden stash of....hmmm...of...oh I got it! Whips, chains and leather S&M gear!” Willow shouted a little too loudly and piqued the interest of several young men sitting near them.

“Ssshhhh....” Stella giggled.

Willow chuckled, “This is fun, thanks for hanging out with me Stella. I just couldn’t do anymore ‘shopping’...it’s not so much fun when you’re broke.”

Stella nodded, “Tell me about it.”


Wow, those two are definitely bored as hell! Haha hilarious though.

Rachael was the first to speak as she turned on to the freeway, “What the fuck was that?!”

“It was fucking awesome!” Stella chimed in. “Exhilarating! I was so ready to kick those chicks asses! Just a little bit closer...” She said as she punched the air with her hands.

The stunned spectators glanced at each other and then all burst out in a fit of laughter.


After all that chaos...laughter to end it all. YAYNESS!!!!

Great update girl!!

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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (12/24/11)

Postby Ariel » Sat Dec 24, 2011 4:16 pm

Hey Shelby,

First GLAD you are feeling better! :eatme :party :eatme

Really enjoyed this update, first this true bit of in-law dynamics:
Ira sighed deeply, folding the open paper he’d been reading and reluctantly handing it over to his father-in-law. Leo mumbled a quick under his breath, knowing that Ira was reading it, but taking the paper anyway.
God, been there!

PH has learned that embattled super star, Tara “I’m Gay” Maclay, has lost the opportunity for the lead in an upcoming Ron Howard project AND has been iced out of the second installment of the widely popular, ‘Against The Grain’ sequel, which thrust Maclay into the national spotlight five years ago, firmly cementing her position as the perennial 'girl next door.' PH has also learned from a source close to the actress that “she is devastated and regretting her decision to come out.” Maclay is currently hiding out at the Texas ranch of her new gal-pal, Willow Rosenberg. Rumor has it that Rosenberg is experiencing problems of her own with the high maintenance actress; seen here sitting curiously close to one of Rosenberg’s brothers. The fiery redhead was extremely unhappy and could soon become an ex-gal pal…from the looks of this next picture. Just another example of a child actress spinning out of control.
I liked this for a lot of reasons, first you nail the chatting tone of a scandal rag and it’s fun. Second you show how a picture can be used as “evidence” in a totally twisted way but mostly because you show Tara with enough star savvy and self-esteem to roll with it. It makes sense that she’s been around long enough in the business not to let every bit of negative press turn her inside out. Like the growth and maturity you give her.

I also loved their banter and yes, I’m a sucker for RJ so enjoyed the brief bit we got. Hey, that reminds me. I wonder about Tara’s theatrical background. Does she have any classical training? Has she done Shakespeare in the Park for some city? Every actress/actor that I’ve ever heard of takes classes, wonder who she may have studied with. One thing I love about this fic is the possibilities. In the 30’s a bunch of stars did an amazing production of “A Midsummer Night’s Dream” in a sports stadium and it was brilliant. Maybe Tara does a charity show that includes stars and spouses and Willow does a bit. Could be fun/funny – AIDS benefit? Who knows? Anyway, the possibilities are endless and the story itself could literally go on for years. Sign me up if it does!

The bit with Rachel’s nursery was incredibly sweet. Love Willow being so touched seeing her old Pooh lamp and Tara picturing Willow’s fascination with the piglet mobile. Then the crib being destroyed - :laugh :lmao :rofl

Another nice return to humor:
“You don’t like cheesecake sweetie?” Tara asked.

“No, I love cheesecake, but the only Cheesecake Factory is at the mall and...”

Tara’s eyes lit up, “Oh yay, shopping!”

“I could shop,” Molly chimed in.

“Oh, me too!” Rachael added.

“But Tara, it’s Black Friday!” Willow whined.

“Oh Will, buck up and take one for the team. Besides, I have pregnancy cravings of the cheesecake variety.”

“Uuugghh,” Willow groaned looking towards Stella as they both rolled their eyes.

“Ok good, now that that’s settled, let’s go before this baby eats a hole in my stomach.”


The mall trip, many many laughs. But one of the best parts for me was knowing Stella a little better. She’s not just a crappy partner or a bad mother; she’s a real person who feels in some ways that it’s her turn. And yes, I think she could totally be a better mom and partner but I appreciate the insight into her character so that she’s more believable and likeable.

Rachael was the first to speak as she turned on to the freeway, “What the fuck was that?!”

“It was fucking awesome!” Stella chimed in. “Exhilarating! I was so ready to kick those chicks asses! Just a little bit closer...” She said as she punched the air with her hands.

The stunned spectators glanced at each other and then all burst out in a fit of laughter.
Funny and awesome, go grrrl power!!! This was a real Christmas gift (Holiday Gift, Kwanza Gift, Hannukkah gift – whatever!)

Soooo Merry Christmas Shelby to you and yours! :bigwave :brr :grin :flower

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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (12/24/11)

Postby wimpy0729 » Mon Dec 26, 2011 4:52 am

Hi Shel! Happy Holidays to you all!

Sorry for lack of FB on the last chapter, but something about it made me want to go back and reread this from the beginning, and I was noticing some interesting little bits. Willow did make mention of vet school, yes, and I believe said something about not sure where yet. Also, Tara just happens to have an apartment in a town where one of the vet schools is that Willow mentioned in the last chapter. I could be totally wrong in making any assumptions there, but it just got my curiosity piqued.

So many other lovely goodies to mention in what I've reread, and these last 2 chapters, but I'm just too damn tired and my brain is mush right now. I loved the mall, at least where they were having fun, but the mob scene and Tara getting ready to panic had me very worried. I really hope they can avoid that kind of thing, cause it's just downright scary.

Happy New Year to you and the family. Hope it brings many new and wonderful things to you all.

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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (12/24/11)

Postby zampsa19752001 » Mon Dec 26, 2011 2:17 pm

Yay for great update-y goodness... I'm glad that Tara didn't take the tabloid "news" too seriously... I absolutely loved the moment in the nursery... Yay for Stella showing a new side of her....
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (12/24/11)

Postby leos_pride » Sat Dec 31, 2011 4:31 pm

Resurfacing from the holidays and catching up with the feedback!

What a fun “girls day” from sweet moments in Rachel’s nursery, to crazy Black Friday shopping (I for one don’t go within 10 miles a mall or department store for the entire weekend after Thanksgiving) Kudos to our girls being brave (crazy?) enough to face that madness. :) It was nice to see a different side of Stella and see her as an actual person. She hasn’t been big with the sharing and interacting before so it was nice to see her open up a bit.

And then crazy papparazzi madness at the end! Glad our girls were able to handle it pretty well and that mall security was able to get them out before they were completely mobbed.

Great update and can’t wait to see what is in store for our girls when they return to LA! :bounce

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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (12/24/11)

Postby willowtaralover » Sun Jan 01, 2012 1:44 pm

“Where the devil is the sports page?” Grandpa Leo grumbled

Ah, some things never change the world over. Always the men reading the sports pages. Apart from your self of course to see where your beloved Miami Dolphins are in the leagues.

Wow, the people who write PH ( I'm trying to think of good insulting title for them but can only come up with PissHeads) are really mean aren't they. It makes me so glad that Amber and Alyson keep such low profiles. It's so good to see Hunter being so concerned for her too, acting as much a brother to Tara as he does to Willow.

“What is with these pictures? I look like a sweaty angry demon! Dark Willow or something...I’m generally a happy person, why can’t they put those pictures online?”

This reference really made me giggle, I do love how you are able to take stuff from (I)Buffy(I) and rework it for your story Shel, it's certainly a talent I wish I had.

I loved the scene in Rachel's baby's room with Willow remembering her infancy and of course the story of the exploding crib, but darn it, it's made me wish I had kids now. Hmmm Amber's newly single, I wonder...

Tara smiled as she imagined a tiny redheaded baby lying on those sheets; giggling and cooing as she peered at the swinging animals. Someday... washed through her mind as the conversation continued on behind her.

Hopefully by the end of this story our girls will be married or at least one of them expecting a little bundle of joy.

The people watching game that Willow is Stella play is hilarious, certainly one to I will have to try and get my friends to play.

It's nice to see that the whole family actively support each other, eg Willow and Stella & Rachel and Tara.

HEY, what's wrong with being a comic book loving nerd????

Rachael was the first to speak as she turned on to the freeway, “What the fuck was that?!”

“It was fucking awesome!” Stella chimed in. “Exhilarating! I was so ready to kick those chicks asses! Just a little bit closer...” She said as she punched the air with her hands.

The stunned spectators glanced at each other and then all burst out in a fit of laughter.


The escape from the mall sounded a whole lot of fun, one of those rare moments that I'd love to have seen caught on film
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (12/24/11)

Postby Grimm » Thu Jan 05, 2012 6:56 pm

Shelby, I loved the update. For Xmas, My Mom gave my daughter my favorite childhood stuffed animal. She had it re-stuffed and dry cleaned and I had a very simular reaction to Willow's when she saw her keepsakes.

Did Tara really think she would go unnoticed in the mall :glasses ? Silly girl! I loved Stella's reaction. She was ready to kick some ass and take some names!

Maybe Willow should scrap the whole Vet thing all together. Perhaps she could become interested in management of the entertainment variety :hmm ?
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (12/24/11)

Postby Finey_McFine » Sun Jan 08, 2012 11:36 am

True_Love:
Hey Lexi!

I’m happy to see that you picked up on the speech patterns, it was absolutely done deliberately to tie them all together and show the family cohesion.

Initially, I planned to make Stella the family pariah with no redeemable qualities, then I just decided to make her misunderstood. All she really needs is for them to let her in and stop blaming her for every little thing that happens. Yes, she has issues, but there are valid reasons and as soon as they start to be addressed, things for Stella will begin to change.

Thanks for the feedback!


AstronSoul:
How did you miss dibs? I mean, I only posted at 4am on Christmas Eve…sheesh! :p

I love tabloids. Yeah, I went there. They are just so full of shit sometimes and sometimes not. It seems to me they are either completely wrong or there is some truth in what they report. It’s scary how accurate they are sometimes though.

They have a pretty laid back family dynamic and yes…weird bonding methods, lol.

Willow and Stella…who woulda’ thunk it? BTW, I love playing that game:)

Thanks for the feedback!


Ariel:
Glad you liked the update! Yeah, the in-law dynamics, definitely aggravating.

In a weird, twisted way…I enjoy the rag mags. They print these ridiculous pics of people, then make shit up that eventually seems to come to fruition in some form or another, lol. They take a pic of someone turning their head and the camera catches their face a bit twisted and suddenly it’s the end of the world! Lol

Tara, at some point, will talk about her love of acting, etc…I just need to figure out where to slip it in.

I think it’s always fun for a partner to see a little of the others childhood. I love getting little pieces of my wife’s childhood…they are few and far between as her mother refuses to give up even a single pic of adorable baby Chris:(

Stella has her issues, but I just don’t think Willow was old enough or mature enough to understand. When Stella and Eli got pregnant, Willow was still in HS and a teenager. She didn’t understand what it meant to be in love, in a serious relationship and then have family not accept you. Since bringing Tara home to meet Sheila…she gets it.

Thanks for the feedback!


wimpy0729:
Glad to see you again! :bigwave

No worries on the feedback…the holidays are always crazy!

Hmmm….doing some investigative work, I see. The only thing is that Cornell in in upstate NY about 4-5 hours from the city and Tara’s apt. So, we’ll just have to wait and see how things shake out. I have plans…

Glad you liked the mall scene…I actually wrote it while sitting in said mall resting chairs waiting on my kid, lol. It was fitting. The scary mob scene…well, it’s expected and I’ve scene it go down exactly the same with a celeb once. I’m not sure how they cope sometimes.

Anyway, happy new year to you and yours as well!!

Thanks for the feedback!


Zampsa19752001:
Thanks...It would be easy for Tara to lose it over the rag mags, but she knows that it’s not true. Yay for baby goodness!! Who wouldn’t want a baby Willow of their own:)

Thanks for the feedback!


leos_pride:
I’ll let you in on a little secret…that Black Friday incident that Willow recounted a few chapters back, totally true story. Just substitute me for Willow, lol. I still go out, but not until mid-morning when the crowds have thinned and there’s no more mad rush.

Stella still has issues, but she’s working on them. See feedback above:)

The girls did well with the paps, let’s just hope things don’t get so out of hand in the future…like when they return to LA.

Thanks for the feedback!


Willowtaralover:
The newspaper thing made me laugh when I re-read the chapter…reminded me of my grandfather, lol.

LOL…pissheads, good one! They are tabloid bloggers, not much higher on the food chain than pond scum.

Glad you liked the Dark Willow reference, it’s fun to throw those little things in.

Some of the things in this story have been taken from real life experiences; the crib was one of them. Except it was just my nephew, he didn’t have a partner in crime like Willow.

Hmm, married with children, maybe. We’ll see…….

The great escape was fun, but harrowing at the same time. Let’s hope we don’t see that again, although the return to LA should be interesting.


Thanks for the feedback!!!


Grimm:
I hear you! That section on the fic with Willow reacting to her childhood things, was directly related an experience I’d had a few days earlier. When I was unpacking all the Christmas stuff I came across a few things I’d made as a child mixed in with J’s homemade things and I got teary and nostalgic.

Tara hopes to always go unnoticed…it’s her dream, lol.

I have no idea what Willow is going to do…ok, maybe I do but I don’t want to spoil it!

Thanks for the feedback!!




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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (1/8/12)

Postby Finey_McFine » Sun Jan 08, 2012 11:40 am

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TITLE: Racing The Rain

AUTHOR: Finey_McFine

RATING: R (Language)

DISCLAIMER: Willow, Tara and any other BtVS characters, as well as some random dialog, belong to Mutant Enemy. ALL other original characters belong to me! This includes: Willow’s siblings and teammates, plus Tara’s friends and co-workers. Mention of any ‘real’ people in this fic is brief and pure fantasy.

SUMMARY: Totally AU! Set in LA with lots of W/T fluff and some angst, but no Hellmouthyness; just good old regular day-to-day drama. Willow is attending college on an athletic scholarship and Tara is Hollywood royalty. They meet and fall in love, of course, but will they be able to survive the pitfalls of a public romance? Well, you’ll just have to read and find out! ;-)



FEEDBACK: Yes! Any glaring issues…please send me a PM!

AUTHOR’S NOTE: Hi Everyone and Happy New Year! I made this update fairly long because there won’t be one next week…my wife are going to New Orleans…KID FREE!!! :banana Sorry, do I seem a little excited? Anyway, this chapter is unproofed, so I’m sorry for any errors that I’m sure will arise, even though I re-read it like 90x. Have a great week! Oh, just a few more things…HAPPY BIRTHDAY AMBER! :balloons :dumbo ROLL TIDE and GO TEXANS!!!!!!!!


Chapter 56: Brainy Willow

Willow groaned in frustration, sitting on the floor of the family room, as she flipped through page after page of baby photos. She’d gone through several albums and still had not found the elusive picture she was looking for. Internally, Willow knew that she could just ask her mother, but then that would mean they would have to speak to each other. So Willow continued on her blind quest to find the broken crib photo.

Tara was sitting on the couch chatting with Molly when she noticed Willow’s frustration, “Sweetie, it’s no big deal, really.” She said as she joined her girlfriend on the floor.

“No, I promised I’d show you and-”

“Willow,” Sheila interrupted.

Willow turned her hear towards her mother, “Yes?”

“May I see you in the kitchen please?”

“Yes Ma’am,” Willow cringed and her entire body tensed at the request. Since the Thanksgiving catastrophe twenty-four hours earlier, mother and daughter had avoided each other like the plague.

Tara gave Willow’s arm a reassuring squeeze as Willow sighed; placing the photo album in Tara’s lap and rising off the floor. As the redhead left the room, Tara’s brow furrowed and she strained her neck trying her best to nonchalantly eavesdrop on the conversation. Unfortunately and much to Tara’s chagrin, their voices were muffled and she couldn’t make out anything.

Tara sighed and began to idly flip through the pages of Willow’s early childhood. The book Willow had laid in her lap was the toddler years and Tara was actually impressed by Sheila’s organization and thankful to her for going to such great lengths to preserve Willow’s childhood, as well as the family history.

Tara couldn’t help but smile; baby Willow was adorable. She was tiny in comparison to her siblings with an unruly shock of bright red hair that set her apart from the others. Tara noticed in the majority of the pictures, that it was Grayson that was constantly carrying or holding Willow and not Rachael, as she had imagined. Needless to say, this was a surprise to Tara; he definitely doted on his sister and their affection for each other was obvious. She now understood a little better about his protective nature towards his baby sister. Tara flipped through the entire album, but did not come across the infamous broken crib photograph. She placed it back on the shelf and was about to pull out another when she heard Willow’s raised voice. The conversation had obviously taken a turn and Tara was on her feet immediately. The blonde wrapped her arms protectively across her chest and glanced towards Hunter and Molly on the couch. Hunter simply shrugged his shoulders and shook his head as his eyes met Tara’s. All of the tension in the house was weighing heavily on everyone.

It was all Tara could do to stay in the family room and not throw herself between mother and daughter. She began to pace and that’s where Willow found her five minutes later. “Tara, baby,” She said as she soothingly rubbed Tara’s upper arms, “We have an issue.”

Tara looked at her quizzically, “What’s wrong? Are you ok?”

Willow nodded, “I’m fine. There’s um…there’s about a dozen or so photographers out at the gate and they kinda harassed my Mom at the grocery store.”

Tara pushed away from Willow, “Oh God, I’m s-so sorry. Maybe I s-should just leave.”

“What?! No, baby…please,” Willow muttered no louder than a whisper.

Tara closed her eyes, rubbed her temples and slipped into business mode, “Ok, they just want a picture and we need to give them what they want or they’ll never leave us alone.”

“How about we get a couple horses and ride down? That way we can make with the hasty retreat.” Willow said, stepping forward and reaching for Tara; only to have her girlfriend shrink back and step away again.

Tara nodded, “Let me go freshen up and I’ll meet you down at the barn.”

Willow stood in the middle of the room and watched sadly as Tara retreated up the stairs. A few seconds later she felt a strong-arm across her shoulders; she turned and dropped her head on Hunters chest, “I feel like I’m loosing her,” she whispered as the tears welled in her eyes.

He vehemently shook his head, “No you’re not. She’s just tired and stressed. You would be too Will, if you were in her shoes. I mean, she can’t seem to get a break. Ya know?”

Willow nodded weakly, “Go, you need to freshen up as well. She’s not the only one getting photographed,” Hunter smiled and patted his sister’s back, “I’ll get Artemis and Sammie saddled up.”

“Thanks Hunt,” Willow broke away from her brother and headed upstairs.

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Willow stood at the bottom of the attic stairs and tried her best to shake away her somber mood before facing Tara. Willow’s mind was churning with scenarios, there were several ways things could go when she entered the bedroom. Don’t say a word and change clothes, babble and possibly start an argument, or kiss her senseless and diffuse the entire situation. She took a deep breath and finally ascended the stairs.

“Hey,” Willow said as she entered the room.

“Hey…” Was about all Tara could muster before Willow’s lips were on her. Whatever jumbled emotions Tara was harboring, completely disappeared when Willow’s lips crashed into hers. They froze for several seconds as if they were fused together, until Willow brought her hands to Tara’s face and began moving her lips slowly. Willow’s kiss relaxed Tara’s entire body as they melted together. Willow slowly covered the blonde’s mouth with her own and deepened the kiss; running her tongue over Tara’s bottom lip and begging for entrance. Tara complied instantly as their tongues entwined in a sensuous and erotic dance.

Willow smiled internally, this was definitely the best option and it had been far too long since they’d shared a kiss today. Tara felt Willow pull away and noticed that she wasn’t the only one affected by the passionate kiss. Willow’s breathing was ragged and her pupils dilated.

Willow smiled softly, “Your chariot awaits, my love.”

“Thank you.”

“For what?”

“For knowing just what I needed,” Tara half smiled and leaned in once again.

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The girls finally found their way out to the barn where Hunter already had both horses saddled up and ready to go. Willow took Tara’s hand and led her to Sammie; the blonde gulping audibly as she stared up at the large equine.

Willow smiled when she noticed Tara’s trepidation and gave her a reassuring squeeze, “Tara this is Sammie,” She said as she reached her free hand up and gently pet Sammie’s muzzle. The gentle giant responded in kind by nuzzling Willow’s neck and tickling the sensitive skin just below her ear; causing Willow to giggle and squirm.

“Hey, no getting fresh with my girlfriend…that’s my job,” Tara quipped as she too reached out a hand to pet the horse. “Willow, she’s um, she’s kinda big, don’t cha think?”

Willow nodded, “Actually, she’s a he. Sammie is a Paint Gelding; he’s 18 and very sweet. He’s actually much more reserved than Artemis, but we can switch if it’ll make you feel better.”

“He is beautiful,” Tara said as she admired the light brown and white spotted horse, “I-I guess it’s ok…”

Willow turned to Tara and took both of her hands, “Sweetie, I would never, ever put you in harms way. If you don’t feel comfortable, we can ride together or not at all or-”

“I’m ok Willow…I trust your judgment, I’ll ride Sammie.”

This pleased Willow tremendously and she couldn’t stop the grin that was quickly spreading across her face. “Great!”

Willow helped Tara mount Sammie and led her around for a few minutes so she could get her balance and get her confidence level up. Willow finally turned the reigns over to Tara, mounted Artemis and began a slow walk side by side towards the front gate.

“Hey Tare, do I look ok?” Willow asked as she futzed with her jacket and hair.

“Sweetheart, you could be wearing a burlap sack with your head shaved and you’d still be beautiful.”

Willow snorted, “I can see it now, a picture of me in Us Weekly next to a picture of the Scarecrow from the Wizard of Oz… ‘Who Wore It Best?’ Vote now for the Scarecrow!”

“Willow…”

“I just…I don’t want people thinking your dating a schmoo.”

Tara raised an amused eyebrow, “A schmoo? What exactly is a schmoo?”

Willow scrunched her shoulders, a bit embarrassed, “You know, a plain Jane.”

“Will, you are anything but plain and since when are we just dating?”

“You know what I mean.”

“If it makes you feel better dressing up a bit, that’s fine. If you just wanna wear sweats and a t-shirt, that’s fine too. Just be you sweetie.” Tara reached across the gap between them and met Willow’s hand in the middle.

Willow shook her head, “How about we just get this over with so we can ride some more before it gets dark. I mean, if you want.”

“I do, this is fun and I need to practice so that one day I can keep up with you!”

As they rode closer, the throng of photographers began snapping away, climbing on the fence as well as leaning through the slats; anything to get that one special shot. Willow had decided that it was best to keep a bit of distance between the horses and the flashing cameras, so they made their turn and stayed about twenty to thirty yards back. They each smiled and shot a little wave towards the photographers, but mostly just chatted and laughed at the absurdity and awkwardness of the entire situation. After making their pass, they turned into a vigorous trot and rode away; spending the next hour before the sunset riding through the vast pastures of the Seven Rose Ranch and just enjoying their time together.

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Willow squatted on the concrete floor, as still as a statue and staring intently at the large serpent not more than a foot in front of her. The object of her affection was staring back and the only movement between the two was the snakes flickering tongue. Willow leaned closer and now only inches away from seven foot King Cobra, “What do you suppose he’s thinking, right now?” Willow said as she cocked her head and examined the snake thoroughly.

“How he can get through that glass and eat you for lunch,” Tara said, standing several feet behind the crouching redhead.

“They don’t eat people,” Willow scoffed, still staring with rapt fascination. “They’re extraordinary, the perfect creature. Don’t you think? Just look at him…no arms, no legs just seven feet of pure muscle…millions of years of evolution…”

“I’m thinking that you wouldn’t feel this way if that glass wasn’t separating the two of you.”

Willow chuckled, “Well, you’re right about that. I’d probably be running in the opposite direction and knocking all these people over in the process.” Willow stood, stepping back from the glass enclosure and next to Tara, “Did you know that the King Cobra is the longest venomous snake in the world and can grow to nearly twenty feet in length? Ophiophagus Hannah.”

Tara shook her head, looking at Willow quizzically, “Ophio- what?”

Willow smiled and slid into a parcel tongued babble, “The King Cobra is the sole member of the genus Ophiophagus, which is a Greek word meaning ‘snake eater,’ cuz their diet consists mostly of other snakes. All other true cobras are members of the genus Naja. It’s all a matter of size and hood marks. See the stripe on his neck? It’s like an inverted ‘v’ instead of the double or single eye shapes that distinguish most other Asian cobras. Kings are often depicted with the eye shapes, like in Ricki Ticki Tavi, but it’s a misnomer. Sometimes it’s hard to see, but if you look at the back of it’s head closely, you can see a pair of large scales called occipitals. Cobras usually have a ‘nine plate’ arrangement, but these are specific to the King. It’s a foolproof method of identification!”

Tara stared slack jawed at her girlfriend’s ramble and caused Willow to squirm under the intense scrutiny. “What? TMI?” She squeaked, “That was really nerdy wasn’t it?”

Tara nodded in agreement, “And possibly the sexiest thing I’ve ever heard you say. I love the way your brain works…”

“Good grief! Get a room!” Grayson exclaimed, rolling his eyes as he brushed past them on his way to the next exhibit in the reptile house at the Houston Zoo, “You two really are made for each other.”

Willow’s face fell and she began to pout at the ribbing she was once again getting from her older brother.

Tara squeezed Willow’s hand, “Come on, let’s see what’s in here,” Tara pulled Willow over to the next display case. “Aww, this one is so pretty!”

“Pretty deadly,” Grayson said flatly before moving on and leaving Willow and Tara peering at the colorful snake curled up under some leaves at the bottom of the exhibit.

Tara glanced in Grayson’s direction as he moved away, “Really?” She asked Willow.

“Umm hmm, Micrurus tener…sorry,” She said looking sheepishly at her girlfriend. “It’s a Texas Coral Snake, the only venomous snake in the US to make the list of top ten deadliest in the world.”

“Have you ever um, run into one before?”

“Noooo, a few copperheads and a rattler once, but no coral snakes. They’re pretty shy; hiding under rocks and leaves, burrowing in the ground. I mostly come across rat snakes and these cute little earth snakes that I used to catch and play with when I was a kid.”

Tara smiled at Willow, finding her utterly adorable. “What?” Willow asked.

Tara giggled, “You’re like cool snake hunter!”

Willow returned the smile, “Well, technically, I’ve never really hunted them; just run across them from time to time.”

Tara smiled again, conjuring an image of her girl friend sitting out in the pasture with a snake weaving between her fingers; then she cringed, “Ugh, I’m not so good with the whole…” She raised her hands, deciding to demonstrate her thoughts by putting her palms together and wiggling them in unison, as her body joined in as well.

Willow looked at Tara as she attempted to put her thoughts in motion. Tara looked so incredibly cute, that Willow couldn’t help but tease her just a bit, “Belly dancing?” She asked.

Tara stopped her awkward dance; glancing at her hands, realizing how ridiculous she must look. She sighed deeply, “That was supposed to be my rendition of a snake. I’m uh, not so much into identifying hood marks or length and such.”

Willow looked Tara in the eye before she broke out laughing, “That’s what she said,” The redhead joked.

Tara rolled her eyes and giggled, “Oh my God!”

The girls were still giggling when Milo burst between them jumping up and down, trying to get a better view into the case. “Pick me up! Pick me up! I can’t see!” He shouted.

“Ok, ok clam down,” Willow said as she picked up her nephew.

“Wow…” He breathed.

“Do you remember what kind of snake that is?” She asked.

He nodded his head in recognition, “A Coral Snake and it has poisons.”

“Why don’t you tell Tara the easy way to figure out the difference between a coral and other harmless snakes?” Willow asked.

Milo pressed his little finger to the glass of the display case and pointed to the colorful snake, “Red touch yellow kill a fellow – red touch black friend of Jack. Hey, Rattlesnakes!!” The little boy exclaimed, jumping out of Willow’s arms and dashing across to the rattlesnake display.

“Geez, talk about short attention span theater,” Willow said as she took Tara’s hand and filed in behind Milo and a small group of children at the rattler case.

“Will, how do you know so much about snakes? I mean, I thought you were a Lesbian.” Tara whispered as she playfully hip bumped Willow.

The redhead blushed at the double entendre, “Tara, there’s kids…” Willow motioned with her hand and laughed. “I did a paper in a class last year on venomous snakes. The professor was so impressed with my reptile research that he asked if I wanted to do a summer internship with him studying poisonous frogs in South America.”

“That actually sounds pretty interesting-”

“TARA! Are you crazy? We’re talking slimy frogs here!” Willow shouted so loudly that the entire group of children turned and stared at her. “Uh, sorry…hey look, it’s rattling its tail.” She said pointing at the case trying to get their attention back to the snake.

Tara was biting her bottom lip in a veiled attempt not to burst with laughter, “Are you kidding?”

“No,” Willow said as her eyes darted about and she ducked her head, “I…I have a frog fear ok. There, are you happy now? Your rough and tough girlfriend is terrified of frogs.”

Tara smiled sweetly, once again unable to resist the adorable pout on Willow’s face, “Awww, poor baby…c’mere.” She said as she tossed a reassuring arm across her girlfriend’s shoulders and squeezed tightly. “So, I guess you don’t think those poisonous dart frogs over there are very pretty?” Tara said pointing towards a glass display next to the rattlesnakes. Willow shivered and took a step backwards. Once again, Tara was near hysterics, “This coming from the woman whose face, just minutes ago, was inches form a King Cobra.”

Willow looked at Tara completely horrified, “Yeah well, that’s because I’ve never woken up to multiple King Cobras in my bed or in my locker or down my pants…uh, lets just pretend like I didn’t say that last part.” Willow said squeamishly.

“You had frogs in your pants? But who…?”

Willow raised her eyebrows, “Brothers…remember?”

“Oh, got cha. Well, how about we just skip this last section, sit outside and wait for the others then?”

Willow smiled, “Sounds like a plan to me. Unless you wanna…”

“No, I’m good. Come on you.” Tara said as she grabbed ahold of Willow’s arm; pulling her past the multiple frog displays and towards the exit.

Once outside in the warm Texas sun, they found an empty bench and sat down to await the rest of Willow’s family. The simple excursion to the zoo with Milo, Eli and Stella had quickly blown up into a large scale family outing. Nearly everyone had decided to go, including both grandmothers, Willow’s siblings and their respective mates. Ira stayed behind, doing his son-in-law duties by taking the grandfathers golfing, while Sheila opted to show a house instead of spending the day with her family. She had been noticeably aloof and keeping her distance from Willow. Ira had suggested, however, that they all meet later for dinner since it was Willow and Tara’s last night; knowing that there was no getting out of it for Sheila.

As the girls sat on the bench waiting for the others, Willow dug into her pocket and nervously checked her cell.

“What’s wrong sweetie?” Tara asked.

“Oh nothing, just checking the time. I-I don’t want to be late tonight.”

Tara half smiled, “It’s barely noon, we have seven hours.”

“I know...”

Tara looked at her apprehensive girlfriend with love in her eyes, “What’s bothering you Will?”

“You know me WAY too well, Tara Maclay.” Willow turned towards Tara, bending her knee and pulling her leg underneath her to face her girlfriend. “It’s just that, we’re leaving tomorrow and nothing’s been resolved. I…I feel like things are worse between us than they were before and now I’m going fifteen hundred miles away…” Willow trailed off as she noticed Tara duck her head. “Hey, look at me Tara, it’s not your fault, ok? I-It’s mine, it wouldn’t have mattered who I brought home, her problem is with me, not you. I just should’ve thought things through better. See, I had this fantasy in my head…that the minute that she met you everything would be perfect. She would see, finally see me for me and see how wonderful you are. It was so stupid and childish of me.”

Tara shook her head, “No, it was hopeful, not stupid or childish. All you did was hope for the best and there’s nothing wrong with having hope.”

“I really need to talk to her before we go, get some closure or just clarify some things, but she just keeps avoiding me. Plus there are just too many people around and-”

“Willow, there you are!” Nana Adele shouted when she spotted her granddaughter, “We’ve been looking everywhere for you and Tara.”

“See what I mean?” Willow quietly grumbled, “Sorry, there was um, there was…”

“Frogs? Yes dear, I saw them and I told Rachael you probably ran out the door screaming as soon as you spotted them.”

Willow glowered thinking of what lurked just inside the doors to the reptile house, “Yep, you were right about that.”

Willow brought her leg down and scooted closer to Tara so Nana Addy could take a seat. “What’s next on the agenda?” Willow asked, but before she had a chance to answer, Rachael appeared as if out of nowhere.

“Food. I need to eat.”

“Me too!” Milo added, “Then we’re heading to Africa!”

Everyone agreed and the large group headed off in the direction of the food court before making their way to the African plains.

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“Giraffa camelopardalis!” The redhead exclaimed proudly. Which was met with a resounding, “WILLOW!” from all four of her siblings.

“Will, you promised you would STOP doing that,” Rachael added.

Willow shrugged her shoulders, quirking her mouth in a sneer as she turned and leaned across the rope next to Tara.

An amused Tara playfully shoulder bumped her girlfriend, “Go ahead sweetie.”

Willow smiled happily, leaning in and whispering in Tara’s ear, “Its name refers to its camel-like face and irregular patches of color on a light background, which bear a vague resemblance to a leopard's spots.”

Tara smiled, not really caring what Willow was saying, as long as she kept up the ear ticking whisper that caused her spine to tingle and a soft moan to escaper her lips.

Willow smiled seductively; cupping her mouth with both hands and leaning in once more, “Giraffa camelopardalis,” She whispered again, this time blowing lightly on her girlfriend’s ear and smiling smugly.

As Willow started to pull away, Tara pulled her back; cupping her own hands around her mouth, “I love you Willow,” She whispered as she gently teased Willow’s ear with the tip of her tongue.

Willow gasped, gripping the rope to steady herself and suddenly finding it difficult to stand, “That’s not fair,” She breathed.

Tara giggled, “You’re adorable.”

“You’re pretty darn cute yourself,” Willow replied, winking at her girl and leaning in once again, “By the way…I love you too Tare and boy do I wish I could kiss you right now.”

“Oh brother!” Grayson exclaimed as he once again wondered up on another private moment between the girls. “Do you two ever stop?”

Willow opened her mouth to speak, but was immediately cut off by her brother, “I know what will take your minds out of the gutter, gorillas. Big, fat, poo slinging gorrilas. Now come on, the faster we get this over with, the sooner we can go out and partay!”

Tara looked at Willow quizzically and was met with shrugging shoulders.

“Gray, I thought we were just going out to dinner with the family?”

“We are, but it’s ya’lls last night and we are going out! No arguments. Everyone’s in and Dad already agreed to keep Milo overnight. So, get you’re dancing shoes on, tonight you guys belong to me.”

Willow swallowed thickly, “Oh boy.”
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (12/24/11)

Postby Ariel » Sun Jan 08, 2012 11:41 am

DIBS!!!! :bigwave :eatme :party :pinky :whip

Wow, bagging a Finey! I should get points for that! Wait! Uh, that didn't come out right! :blush Moving RIGHT along!

Yes, Sheila issues are NOT resolved! I was like Tara, actually felt myself leaning in my chair trying to eavesdrop! I liked the riding solution; gave the photo op but entirely on their terms. Willow's pleasure at Tara's trust in her judgment was true to life and really sweet.

Tara giggled, “You’re like cool snake hunter!”

Willow returned the smile, “Well, technically, I’ve never really hunted them; just run across them from time to time.”

Tara smiled again, conjuring an image of her girl friend sitting out in the pasture with a snake weaving between her fingers; then she cringed, “Ugh, I’m not so good with the whole…” She raised her hands, deciding to demonstrate her thoughts by putting her palms together and wiggling them in unison, as her body joined in as well.

Willow looked at Tara as she attempted to put her thoughts in motion. Tara looked so incredibly cute, that Willow couldn’t help but tease her just a bit, “Belly dancing?” She asked.

Tara stopped her awkward dance; glancing at her hands, realizing how ridiculous she must look. She sighed deeply, “That was supposed to be my rendition of a snake. I’m uh, not so much into identifying hood marks or length and such.”
Okay! Nod to canon just rocks! :eatme :pinky :applause :eatme :bounce As a safety person, appreciated you identifying how to ID a coral snake since plenty of harmless king snakes get killed by people not knowing the difference. God, that cobra moment just CREEPED ME OUT - just sayin'!

Willow looked at Tara completely horrified, “Yeah well, that’s because I’ve never woken up to multiple King Cobras in my bed or in my locker or down my pants…uh, lets just pretend like I didn’t say that last part.” Willow said squeamishly.

“You had frogs in your pants? But who…?”

Willow raised her eyebrows, “Brothers…remember?”
:lmao Actually the only frog phobia explanation I've ever heard that makes utter sense! Thank you! :clap :clap :clap

Liked geeky Willow doing the biologist animal ID stuff - cute. But I'm with Tara, my favorite part would be the ear tickling - but yeah, loved the San Diego Zoo and the Wild Animal Park, too!

God, the family dinner followed by the night on the town just sounds utterly horrific!!! Bet Tara can hardly wait to get back to the Hollywood craziness! Although sharing the same bed is fantastic!

Enjoy New Orleans, you too! OH, on the baby pics of Chris. Show up, kidnap the book, and make copies! It CAN be done, it's just like a commando raid, only harder! :wink Thanks for the update, I needed it! :flower

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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (1/8/12)

Postby AstronSoul » Sun Jan 08, 2012 11:57 am

Man workin and havin late hours doesn't help lol. No dibs again but that's ok.
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (1/8/12)

Postby zampsa19752001 » Sun Jan 08, 2012 2:40 pm

Yay for great update-y goodness...I'm really glad that they decided to deal with the paps on their own terms... Willow really needs to sort out things with Sheila... I really loved the family zoo outing... Frogs in the pants is a really good reason to dislike those slimy amphibians... I'm kinda worried about the party outing Gray organized...
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (1/8/12)

Postby Babbles4Twillow » Mon Jan 09, 2012 7:36 pm

Yay! *giggles at Ariel's 'bagging' comment*
Great job Shel! I enjoyed this chapter a lot and I'm crossin my fingers for Shiela coming around before the girls leave. Keep it up!
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (1/8/12)

Postby JustAKitty » Tue Jan 10, 2012 2:41 pm

Hello - long time lurker, first time responder (to my shame).

I really like this work - the characters are so well fleshed out they feel like real people to me (often with those little details that mean so much).

I especially cheer for the part with seductive whispering of the giraffe name - glad to see Tara can appreciate smart is sexy :) .

Anyway, just wanted to say thank you for the update - I'm already looking forward to the next one!
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