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Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (UPDTED: 4/03/18)

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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (11/06/11)

Postby DaddyCatALSO » Sat Nov 12, 2011 2:38 pm

I had printed off my "Kitten Stuff" and was numbering the pages but I couldn't help but stop and read this and not wait until Monday. (Helped that it was the last in the pack.) Wow. I mean, I knew *soemthing* like this had to happen, but this was wondrous beyond my expectations.

Let's leave aside that what Robby did was just plain wrong on every level, but it was also not very bright to try that with a woman who has 3 older brothers. And I agree on the Grayson cheering. (And btw I was kididng before; my niece is the only one who calls *me* "Robby" anymore so it really wasn't a problem for me:-).)
Especially for his trying to set Sheila right on this, as hopeless as that is. (I'm not the kind who needs to smash thigns when I get mad but my father was so i can see Grayson's acts with the flour bag.) And Sheila's trying to blame Tara for what other people did is typical of too many folks like her.
Bravo to Ira as well. (My ex father in law as like that; he didn't goo off often or quickly, but when he did evryone paid attention.) And yes, he was right to tell Willow and Tara to get out of the kitchen; soemtimes the only way to calm things down is to separate all parties, and they need the two-time now.

Poor Tara, having exactly what would make her imagiantion run in bad channels thrust in her face. And they *so* need to talk it out. I agree, good use of series dialogue in a new place; and again with this story being so role-reversed from canon. (Still, as I mentioned in an earleir comment, there aren't that many good vet schools and this has to be part of what's talked out.) And she's too upset ot hear Willow's disclaimers, "Waht's this?" and "We never decided."

Bravo to grandmother also!

Seriously, I think that like "Neverland" and "Meeting Expectations," this could be "deBuffyized" and submitted for publication.
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (11/06/11)

Postby JustSkipIt » Sun Nov 13, 2011 5:58 am

I'm on my phone so I will just checkin with a quick well done. Grayson surprised me for the better.
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (11/06/11)

Postby Finey_McFine » Sun Nov 13, 2011 12:25 pm

Vazy:
Hey Vazy! Long time no see…glad I could give you a nice break. :grin

Glad you like the progression! I think that if they can get through the week on the ranch…they can get through anything, lol.

Yay Grayson!! He’s just kind of this super macho guy, but he loves his sister and there was no way he was gonna let Robby get away with that behavior.

I’m sure Ira will have some choice words for his wife; hopefully some of them will sink in. Yeah, it is too bad Rachael is 5 months pregnant because I’m sure she would have been right in the middle of everything. Willow’s a lucky girl with those brothers!

Thanks for the feedback!


Babbles4Twillow:
Hahaha…it did kinda play out like a boxing match and definitely yell worthy!

When you think about it, the physical fight was a blip compared to the importance of the verbal sparring with W/T/S. It will definitely have more long term effects. Ira & Sheila will have words, let’s just home Sheila gets it!

Thanks for the feedback Vive Presidente’!!!


willowtarabuffyfaith:
YES!! An ass kicking was handed out! Go Team Grayson!

Thanks for the feedback!


SMGOVAN:
Yeah, big brother came through!! What will be interesting, going forward, is how Sheila will feel about her “Golden Child.” Grayson has always been her favorite so, I wonder how long before she forgives him.

It’s hard to really know who wins the “biggest asshole” award, but I think Robby’s role is just the spark that started the fire. Sheila’s reaction and the fight will have a more long term effect.
Thanks for the feedback!


AstronSoul:
Yeah, good old Robby deserved everything he got and then some. I don’t think Tara would have stood much of a chance, so I’m glad big bro came through:)

No, it wasn’t something that Willow deliberately kept from Tara. It just hadn’t come up and Willow was/is still undecided. Plus, they’ve only been together for a month. In love, yes, but still only a month. She doesn’t really need to make a decision until Jan/Feb anyway.

Thanks for the feedback!


faolan228:
Yay for big brothers! Go Grayson it’s your birthday! Wow, that was dorky, lol. I guess it would have been nice to see Tara get a few licks in, but she stood up where it was more important. Robby is insignificant, but Sheila...a whole different story.

Sheila’s passive aggressive behavior most definitely spurred him on; no doubt about it. After the debacle at the BBQ, Sheila should have told Robby not to come back but instead she ignored the situation, essentially putting Willow in the crosshairs.

Thanks for the feedback!


zampsa19752001:
See, I told you guys not to give up on Grayson! :banana

Ira will definitely have some choice words for his wife, but I doubt they’ll break up.

I debated having them call the cops, but it would really cause a shit storm of problems for them with Tara’s celebrity status. Plus, Robby has been close to the family for years and I think’s it’s better handled this way. The face punching way, that is. :p

Thanks for the feedback!!!


leos_pride:
Robby certainly did deserve it and I’m glad it was Grayson that handed him his ass on a platter! And equally that you enjoyed it:)

Yes, Grayson is a bit of a sleazy guy, but I think he had an awakening of sorts and hopefully it will change him for the better. It’s kinda how brothers/siblings are, especially those with a bit of a rivalry. They argue and disagree, but when it come down to it...they’ve got your back.

Hurricane Sheila cat 5! Remember back a few chapters ago when Sheila was talking to Tara and told how she gave up her professional life to marry Ira and have kids?? I think she see’s a bit of herself in Willow and is trying to live vicariously through her, maybe? Not to mention that she likes to “keep appearances” and being the center of town gossip...not in her plans.

Ira will definitely voice his opinion!

Thanks for the feedback!!


wimpy0729:
YAY! I’m glad you liked it!! Robby is a sleaze and Grayson really came through for his sister. I think everyone was equally surprised, especially when he went off on his mother...of course no one was more shocked that Sheila. There’s nothing quite like having your “perfect” son rip you a new one, lol.

The confrontation with Sheila/Willow/Tara and how Tara stood her ground was what I always wanted to see from Willow in Family. Willow got snippy and yelled at Tara’s father, but I always felt she should have said more; should have taken Tara’s hands, kissed her and reminded her how much she really did love her. In reality, I know that because of the TV restraints of the time they couldn’t...but it really would have been something if they could have:)

Hmmm, running away and leaving...not sure they will, but we’ll see.

Nanna slapping Sheila...well, I didn’t want it to turn into a HIMYM “Slapsgiving.” Although, it would have been satisfying!

Thanks for the feedback!!


Nenyath:
Hi Neny!!

So glad that you are enjoying my little fic:) Yes, you would think that Tara’s celebrity would in fact be the biggest issue here, but family always trumps the rest of the world on the drama scale...it would seem at least. You are indeed lucky to have such an understanding Mom:)

Grayson as the hero was a surprise to many...I’d been planning that since the start! :grin

*Post #100* :banana

Thanks for the feedback!

beautiful_love:
Hi Jess! :bigwave

So glad you liked it...I enjoyed writing it as well and thanks for the applause:)

See...I told you guys not to give up on Grayson. There was a method to my madness. :p When you have older brothers, I think that no matter what the relationship, they will always be there for you in your time of need. Grayson’s hackles were already up when Robby pushed Tara down and what happened with Willow was just the last straw for him. You’re right, he was ready to “fucking kill” Robby! But then again, so were all of us, lol.

I think the other, albeit silent, hero to emerge will be Ira. I think this was it for him as well. We will definitely see a bit of the Ira/Sheila showdown.

Tara standing up for her girl was the turning point, in my opinion, and will turn out to be more important than the incident with Robby.

Thanks for the feedback.

ps. Play the Movie game!!!! Especially now that you know our little secret!! :grin

vampyregurl73:
Yeah, Grayson may come off as a shallow guy, but not when it comes to protecting those he loves and when you have a guy like him...you certainly don’t mess with his baby sister right in front of him. I think he is getting over his crush on Tara and actually has a genuine affection for her, but well see, lol.

Glad you liked the ‘Family’ turnaround! It was always one of my favorite scenes when Willow gets snippy old Donald Maclay, so I thought it would be fun to see it from Tara.

Thanks for the feedback!


Mgraham93:
Yeah, I doubt we see Robby again...at least I hope not.

I think Nanna was maybe the most embarrassed in the room, more like appalled that her daughter would act like that in the first place.

Tara may have stood back and not said anything up to this point, but it was out of respect and that’s pretty much flown out the window...the gloves are off, no way she’ll stand by and let Sheila hurt Willow.

Willow needed to stand up for herself here just as much as the others needed to say their peace as well. It’s Willow’s fight and her voice needed to be heard.

It was a good thing that Ira sent Robby packing, because the boys were pissed and a severe beat down was definitely on the horizon.

Thanks for the feedback!!

Ariel:
Julie,

Thanks for your kind words...they are always much appreciated:)

I’m glad the fight came off well, I didn’t want to go into too much detail and for it to become mechanical. I think it really was a blow to Sheila that the prodigal son was the one to step up and put her in her place. He really came through as the hero.

Grayson may come off as a shallow womanizer type, but deep down he gets it and with all of his faults, he would never do something so egregious to a woman.

Yeah, Sheila slapping Grayson in the state he was in was cold, to say the least...even if he did call her a bitch. He basically saved Willow and got punished for it from his mother. I guess now it’s tie for “Ira to the rescue!”

Willow needed to speak up and for her voice to be heard. This wasn’t something that was caused by Tara coming into her life, but now that she has, it definitely changes things.

Glad you liked!!! And I think you’ll REALLY enjoy a bit of the next chapter. :grin

Thanks for the feedback!


sacinema:
Hi there! :bigwave

Thanks for sticking with me! I’m glad you like the direction we’re going, even celebs have family drama:)

Mother/daughter relationships are always intense and full of drama...even the best ones. And I’m not really sure how that happens, lol. I think Sheila see’s a lot of herself in Willow and wants her life to be different...better maybe? It’s a natural instinct for parents to want better for your kids, but I think some people take it to the extreme...like our darling Sheila.

No, Sheila is not directly responsible for Robby’s behavior, but her own passive aggressive behavior spurred him on. You are right when you say that it is her fault for not accepting Tara and taking that relationship seriously. She is in deep, deep denial.


Thanks for the compliments and the feedback as well!


DaddyCatAlso:
Hey...that was a lot of feedback for you...glad you liked!!!

Not only does she have those 3 older brothers, but the moron did it right in front of them AND her father. Yes, yay Grayson! I didn’t think it would be enough for him to just beat the living crap outta Robby, I really felt that he needed to get some things off his chest as well.

I don’t think he’s EVER acted like that, with the flour throwing, before but his adrenaline was pumping, etc.

Ira is the consummate calm and collected level headed father figure. I’m sure that with raising 5 kids, he’s had his share of breaking up fights...especially with having 3 boys so close in age.

Yeah, Tara never heard details in the conversation, her mind was whirring after she heard “Leave California,” after that all rational thought was gone, lol. You’re right also about the lack of good vet schools, I’ve done quite a bit of research and there aren’t many. This will be huge for Willow.

Thanks so much for putting my little fic in the company of the great ones:)

And thanks for the feedback!

JustSkipIt:
Deb...thanks for checking in with a quick note and for our fb chat earlier this week. :grin

BTW...I had a dream you appeared in last night! It’s kinda sketchy, but you worked for Rosie O’Donnell and were in charge of the “Kitten Nation.” LOL :lmao I’ll have to try and remember more and put it in the dream thread later today.

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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (11/13/11)

Postby Finey_McFine » Sun Nov 13, 2011 12:27 pm

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TITLE: Racing The Rain

AUTHOR: Finey_McFine

RATING: R (Language)

DISCLAIMER: Willow, Tara and any other BtVS characters, as well as some random dialog, belong to Mutant Enemy. ALL other original characters belong to me! This includes: Willow’s siblings and teammates, plus Tara’s friends and co-workers. Mention of any ‘real’ people in this fic is brief and pure fantasy.

SUMMARY: Totally AU! Set in LA with lots of W/T fluff and some angst, but no Hellmouthyness; just good old regular day-to-day drama. Willow is attending college on an athletic scholarship and Tara is Hollywood royalty. They meet and fall in love, of course, but will they be able to survive the pitfalls of a public romance? Well, you’ll just have to read and find out! ;-)



FEEDBACK: Yes! Any glaring issues…please send me a PM!

AUTHOR’S NOTE: Hi Everyone and Happy Sunday! So, another unproofed chapter and even though I’ve gone through it at least a dozen times as always, I probably missed something. Just PM me if you catch a little misstep. Happy reading:)

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Chapter 51: Aftermath


The rest of the family began the tedious task of cleaning up the flour-y mess Grayson had made and tried to ignore the heated discussion coming from the back porch. Rachael met Hunter’s eyes and they both cringed. In their entire lives they could not ever remember hearing their parents fight, and it was quite unsettling to them both.

“Sheila, what is wrong with you! Have you completely lost your mind?” Ira asked his wife.

“Don’t you try to turn this around on me! This is about our daughter and her relationship with that woman! She’s throwing her future away Ira and I won’t allow it!”

Ira was incensed with Sheila, he cupped his jaw; taking a deep breath in an attempt to calm his nerves, “You are totally missing the point here. Our daughter was attacked! Attacked Sheila, by a man that you invited into our home with the expressed intent that he was to pursue her romantically. He forced himself on our child, our baby!”

“How was I supposed to know he would act like that? I didn’t put him up to anything, and quite frankly I resent the implications! I love Willow and would never knowingly put her in harms way. Robby has been part of this family for as long as I can remember, he’s never acted inappropriately and has always had an open invitation to family gatherings.”

“That may be true in the past, but after the debacle on Sunday...like it or not Sheila, this is your fault and you need to take responsibility for this disaster. Willow is an adult and she is entitled to make her own decisions. Trying to force her to do something against her will is just pushing her further away. She is happy and in love for the first time in her life, and you’re just going to have to deal with it.”

“I don’t have to deal with anything. I am sick and tired of dealing with the fallout from the heinous decisions our children make and their less than stellar partners.”

Ira’s eyes widened in horror; as he realized that Eli and Stella were within earshot of the heated conversation. As if on cue, he glanced past Sheila, and saw his son. Eli said nothing; instead he picked up Milo, took Stella by the hand and the three of them left.

Ira turned away from his wife and slapped the side of the house hard, causing everyone inside to jump. “Who our children choose as partners is none of our business, and if you bothered to take even a millisecond of time to get to know Tara, you’d see how much she genuinely cares for Willow. And as for Willow’s decisions…they are intelligent and well thought out, which is more than I can say for yours.”

“What the hell is that supposed to mean?”

Ira replied through clinched teeth, “It means that you need to butt out and stop sticking your nose where it doesn’t belong! Applying to college for Willow, inviting Robby the rapist to dinner, questioning Eli and Stella’s parenting abilities…enough is enough. It’s time to cut the cord Sheila! For God’s sake, let them live their lives!”

“Well isn’t this just typical of you, always taking their sides as if they can do no wrong.”

“Oh they can do plenty wrong and have on many occasions, but this isn’t one of them. You need to make this right Sheila. You need to make it right before Willow leaves, or you risk never seeing your child again.”

Ira was still livid with her, but decided not to say another word for fear of saying something he knew he’d regret later. He turned and headed back inside; slamming the door behind him

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After everything that had transpired, Willow was sure that Tara would be ready to leave; hop on the next available flight and head back to California. Why would one of the most famous, sought after women in the entire world want to stick around with her screwed up and dysfunctional family? Everything is a mess and it’s all my fault.

They entered Willow’s room and Tara shut the door behind them. Willow was terrified, too frightened to see the look of disappointment she knew was waiting for her.

“Willow,” Tara breathed.

The redhead stiffened, but still did not turn.

“Look at me, please?” Tara begged.

Willow finally turned to face her girlfriend, expecting total rejection, but was met instead with love and understanding. Seeing the unspoken words in Tara’s beautiful teary blue eyes, Willow flung her arms around the blonde and completely let loose. She sobbed hysterically as they sank to the floor; Tara cradling Willow in her strong arms and rocking her back and forth.

After several long minutes, Willow finally sat up; wiping her face on her shirtsleeve, “I’m s-so sorry,” She sobbed.

Tara shook her head, cupping Willow’s cheeks and kissing her gently on the lips. “You stood up for yourself, for us, and I’m so proud of you.”

“B-But I…I should have talked to you. I…I just don’t know what to do. It’s so overwhelming and…” Willow’s voice trailed off as she began to lose control of her emotions once again.

Tara could sense what was happening and decided to intervene, “Sssshhhhh, we don’t have to talk about it right now. I just want you to try and calm down, ok?” She smoothed some errant red hair back behind Willow’s ears and kissed her several times.

“Hey,” Willow said, her voice laced with concern, “You’re bleeding.”

“What?” Tara asked as Willow examined the bloody sleeves surrounding her elbows.

Willow’s brow furrowed tightly, “He hurt you,” She said flatly, “I let him hurt you.”

“I’m fine, it’s just a few minor scrapes.”

“Scrapes as in plural. Where else are you hurt?” Willow met Tara’s eyes with a pained expression.

Tara ducked her head, not wanting this to be about her; looking up and seeing Willow’s resolve face, she knew she would have to confess, “M-My knees, they’re scraped up as well.”

“Tara! Why didn’t you say something?” Willow asked, it was more of a rhetorical question and Tara responded by just shrugging her shoulders.

Willow hopped to her feet, “I’ll be right back,” She mumbled and left the room. Only to return minutes later with a wet cloth and the first aid kit.

“It’s ok Will, I-I need to shower anyway.”

“Well at least let me clean them up so they don’t get infected and then I’ll patch you up after your shower, deal?”

Tara couldn’t believe how sweet Willow was, after everything that had happened, all she was concerned about was Tara’s scrapes and cuts, “Deal.”

Willow took Tara’s shirt by the hem and pulled it over her head, then turned each arm over, patting the wounds with the cool cloth. She then unscrewed the cap on the hydrogen peroxide, “This is gonna sting,” She said as she poured it over Tara’s right elbow.

“Ouch!” The blonde cringed. It stung like crazy, but she soon felt the soothing sensation of her girlfriend blowing on the fizzy liquid.

Willow repeated the process three more times, first with her left elbow and then both knees. “Better?” She asked.

Tara nodded and smiled, “Thank you.”

Willow returned the smile; leaning forward to kiss Tara when she heard a soft knock at the door.

“Willow, it’s Dad. Can I come in?”

“Yeah, hold on a second.”

They rose from the floor and Willow slid a robe on Tara.

“Ok,” She called to her father.

Ira entered the room and upon seeing Tara clad in a bathrobe, felt slightly embarrassed. He didn’t want to intrude on their private moment.

“Um, should I come back later?” He asked.

“Oh no it’s fine. I was just going to take a shower,” Tara answered, gathering her things and quietly exiting the room, giving Willow and Ira some time to talk.

Ira glanced at the floor and saw the open first aid kit, “Are you hurt?” He asked with fatherly concern.

Willow shook her head, “No, but Tara got pretty scraped up when she fell…um got pushed I mean.”

Willow shrank back and sat awkwardly on the side of the bed, nervously fidgeting and preparing herself for the worst. Not only had she talked back to her mother, but also cursed and said some very hurtful things. It was the worst family fight ever; Thanksgiving was ruined and it was all her fault.

Her head was down, as she stared mindlessly at her hands when she felt the bed give next to her and Ira put an arm around her shoulders; pulling Willow close.

“Sweetheart, I’m so sorry. Are you ok?” He asked.

Willow was stunned, “What? But, I’m the one that should be apologizing Dad. I said some horrible things and-”

Ira pulled back and lifted Willow’s chin, “My darling daughter, you always take the weight of the world on your shoulders,” he sighed deeply, “When you were born, you were so tiny and I…the first time I held you, I promised to always protect you, and I…I failed you Willow. I’m so sorry.”

Willow couldn’t believe her ears. Her father had failed her? What was he talking about? “No Dad, you could never fail me.”

Ira shook his head, “But I did, I just never thought I’d have to protect you from the one person that you should never need protecting from.”

“Dad, you can’t control what she thinks and feels. It’s not your fault.”

Ira nodded his head slightly, “This is your home Willow, you should never feel unwanted or uncomfortable here, and I’m sorry that you felt like you needed to escape. You’re my daughter, I accept you for who you are and I love you so very much.”

Tears welled in Willow’s eyes as her father pulled her close. She always felt so safe and secure in her father’s arms; she was a Daddy’s girl through and through. “Dad, about vet school…I, I just…I don’t…”

“Sweetie, I’ll support whatever decision you make and I’ll help you in any way that I can.”

“Thank you. The only thing I know for sure is that,” Willow took a deep breath, exhaling slowly, “I don’t want to leave Tara.”

Ira smiled, “You really care about her don’t you?”

Willow nodded in agreement, “I love her Dad…I’m in love with her, she’s everything to me.”

“And how does she feel?”

“The same.”

“Well do you mind if your old Dad gives you some advice then?” Willow smiled and shook her head. “If you want your relationship to have a chance, then you’ll need to make decisions together. Don’t take it all on yourself, be honest about your feelings Willow. Whether you want to continue and attend med school or you aspire to wash dishes…Tara needs to know. Just as you need to know her feelings, what she wants; it’s a give and take and you both need to agree. You have to do what’s best for you both, it’s the only way to make it work.”

Willow nodded and squeezed her Dad tighter, “Have I ever told you that you’re the best Dad ever?”

“I’m your only Dad ever,” He replied in amusement.

“Then I guess you win,” Willow giggled.

“This thing with your Mom…she loves you Willow, and in her mind she is doing what she thinks is best. I’m not making excuses for her, because God knows I do not approve, but she’s going to have to work through it on her own and it’s going to take time. I’m less than thrilled with her behavior this week and I’ve voiced my opinion more than once.”

“I…I don’t want to be the source of badness between you and Mom. I mean you’re not splitting up are you?” Willow’s eyes were full of anxiety. Her Mom was a pain in her ass, but she loved her dearly and the mere thought of her parents breaking up terrified her.

Ira chuckled, “No Sweetie, we’re not going to break up. I love your Mom very much...even though she’s as stubborn as a mule. We all make mistakes and she’ll eventually realize that she’s making a big one. I can’t change her, all I can do is try to influence her behavior, maybe steer her in the right direction.”

“So what are we supposed to do the rest of this trip? Hide out up here? Avoid her? Maybe go to Rachael’s o-or a hotel?”

Ira’s shoulders slumped, “I hope you decide to stay here, in your home where you belong. I don’t want you and Tara hiding up here. I’d like to spend a little time with you Sweetheart, even if we just hang out and watch TV. What were your plans before all of this?”

“Well, Mom said that she’s going shopping tomorrow, so I thought maybe I’d take Tara down to Kemah, but now the weather...I dunno. Eli mentioned maybe all of us going to the Houston Zoo on Saturday and then we leave Sunday. I’m ok here Dad, but I’m leaving it up to Tara, I don’t want it uncomfortable for her. She deserves better than to have to deal with dirty looks and snide remarks.”

“I understand,” Ira said as he gently squeezed Willow and kissed the top of her head, “What about tonight?”

“Oh well, I’m gonna take a shower, get cleaned up and then I guess Tara and I will take Aunt Gerty home. Is she ok? I hope all the craziness didn’t upset her too much.”

Ira laughed, “She’s fine; fell asleep on the couch about an hour ago. I don’t think she heard a thing.” Ira sighed as he stood, “Do me a favor?” Willow nodded, “Please stop by Grayson’s on the way home? I uh, just want to make sure he’s ok. I doubt Bambi is the comforting type.”

“Sure Dad,” Willow replied with a knowing chuckle.

Ira turned and began to walk towards the door when he stopped suddenly, turning back to face his daughter, “Will, if you happen to run into Robby the next few days, try to steer clear, ok? I don’t want you and Tara anywhere near him. He’s a loose canon and there’s no telling what he might do.”

Willow nodded in agreement and Ira exited her bedroom.

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By the time Willow and Tara got cleaned up, it was dark outside and the weather had taken a turn to cold and rainy. Tara glanced out the bedroom window when she saw the bright flash of lightening.

“I think we’re gonna need jackets,” She mumbled as the house shook with a huge clap of thunder, “Woah!” She exclaimed, jumping backwards.

“Hey, you ok?” Willow asked from across the room.

“Yeah, it just startled me is all. I’m not used to big thunderstorms living in California. You know how it is…” Willow nodded her head in agreement. “So what happened to the nice weather?”

Willow shrugged her shoulders, “What can I say, it’s Texas. Hot one minute, cold the next. Must be a front coming through or something. Ready to go?”

“W-We’re gonna drive in this?” Tara asked with a worried expression on her face.

Willow approached Tara, taking both of her hands and smiling sweetly, “It’s ok love, if you want, we can wait until it passes.”

Tara reached up and cupped Willow’s cheek, looking lovingly into her eyes, “Are you ok baby?”

“Yeah and I know we need to talk but…” Willow’s voice trailed off and she looked down.

“Sweetie, I’m here whenever you’re ready. No pressure, ok?”

“I just…we need to take Gert home before it gets much later and I don’t want to be interrupted and…you understand?”

“I do, come on let’s get going,” Tara said; pulling Willow into a chaste kiss and a warm embrace.

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When they emerged downstairs, the mood was somber. Ira’s parents had left before the storm hit with a request that Willow stop by before she returned to California and everyone else was scattered about the house.

As they entered the family room, a bit awkwardly, Nanna Adele was the first one up, “How are you Hun?” She asked rubbing Willow’s arm.

“I’m fine Nanna, thanks.” No more had the words left Willow’s mouth than she felt herself being swept up in her Nanna’s arms into a big hug.

The hug lasted for a long moment before Nanna Addy finally pulled back, “I just wanted you to know that we don’t all feel like your mother. The school thing, well that’s another issue and I’m sure you’ll do what’s right, but I want you to know that I love you Willow and I accept who you are. Not to mention the fact that you have great taste in women.” She said; winking at Tara in attempt to lighten the mood.

Willow giggled and glanced at Tara, “Yeah, I do don’t I?” Tara returned the grin; turning bright red in the process, “So, where’s Mom?” Willow asked.

“She’s in the kitchen with Gerty and Rachael.”

Willow inhaled deeply; puffing out her cheeks and exhaling slowly, “Ok, I guess we need to get Gerty home before it gets much later.”

“Well, it’s not like she’s tired. She slept all afternoon and she’s eating again. I sure wish I had her metabolism,” Adele complained, “She’s always been fit as a fiddle! Well, physically that is, earlier she fussed at me for spilling gravy on her best dress that Momma just got hemmed. She said she needed it for the school dance next Friday night. Then she-”

“ADELE!” Grandpa Leo shouted, “You’re rambling again and I can’t hear the TV.”

Adele waved a dismissive hand in the air and led Willow and Tara to the kitchen; grumbling under her breath.

Sheila and Rachael were at the kitchen island separating leftovers and Gerty was at the table; enthusiastically digging into a plate full of food. Willow made eye contact with Sheila, but her mother just looked away and continued her task. Willow’s shoulders slumped and she sat down next to her Aunt Gert; who looked up and smiled sweetly.

Willow winced and crinkled her nose, “Aunt Gert, what the frilly heck are you eating?” Willow leaned forward to also examine a glass filled with a dark murky liquid, “Oh God, and what are you drinking?!”

“A delicious casserole that no one touched and I get it all to myself! Rachael said so.” She proclaimed proudly lifting he glass and taking a large swallow to wash it all down, “And I’m drinking nature’s relaxant. Would you like to try some?”

“N-No, thank you. Nature’s relaxant?” Willow questioned, hearing a slight giggle from her girlfriend who was standing behind her with her hands resting on Willow’s shoulders.

“Prune juice dear. I’ve been drinking two glasses a day since I was a child…it keeps the old pipes clean!” She grinned widely.

Willow looked up at Tara, horrified that her aunt was not only enjoying Bambi’s rancid concoction, but chasing it with shots of nature’s relaxant; Tara responded with a half smile, completely amused with Willow’s reaction.

Willow glanced at Nanna Addy, “Don’t look at me like that Willow. I don’t subscribe to the same regimen. Gertrude’s friend, Doris Finch, got her hooked one-year at summer camp and she’s been addicted ever since! Nope not me, although, when you get to be my age regular BM’s are very important and it is good for you…”

Willow closed her eyes tightly and shook her head vigorously trying with all her might to erase the last five minutes of conversation from her brain. TMI! TMI!!! She shouted in her head.

“Willow?” Aunt Gerty asked.

Willow opened her eyes, “Hmmm?”

“Be a dear and wrap this for me so I can take it home. I don’t want to waste one single bite, it’s just too good!” Aunt Gerty exclaimed as she drained the very last drop of the putrid juice.

“Uh ok, if you say so.” Willow took the plate that was slid in her direction. She scraped the remainder back into the original tray and wrapped it tightly with a piece of foil. “Aunt Gert, are you ready for us to drive you home now?”

“Oh yes dear, I need to get back to Othello. He must be awful lonely by now.”

Willow looked at her questioningly, and then turned her confused gaze to Nanna Addy. “Now Gertrude, you know that cat has been gone for quite some time. We haven’t had him since we were kids, remember?”

Aunt Gerty looked genuinely confused, “Oh…w-well…I,” She stammered.

Tara’s heart broke for the old woman, who was clearly having a difficult time staying in the here and now. She knelt by her side and rested a soothing hand on her arm, “Gerty,” She whispered, “Can I help gather your things? I think you left your bags in the other room, near the big chair.”

“Oh yes, thank you dear and Willow, please don’t forget the casserole and my other dishes.”

“I won’t,” Willow said softly as Tara led her to the family room to gather the rest of her things. Willow’s heart swelled; Tara was a saint, she was sure of it.

“Willow, do you still have my keys?” Sheila asked.

“Yes.”

“Then will you please drop these containers off at Grayson’s on your way back? I know he’ll be upset if he doesn’t get to make his favorite leftover turkey sandwich tomorrow.”

“Sure, no problem,” Willow replied as she reached for the containers. She smirked unconsciously, knowing that a leftover turkey sandwich would be the very last thing on Grayson’s mind. “Where’s his new place again?”

“Just off FM242 and Watson Rd…over in Mason. Here, just use the GPS,” Sheila said as she scribbled Grayson’s address on a small scrap of paper and handed it to Willow. Accepting the paper and glancing it over, Willow shoved it in the pocket of her jeans.

“Hey Boo, do you have any plans for tomorrow?” Rachael asked placing a hand on Willow’s arm to get her attention.

“Yeah, well...we did, but now…I don’t…why? What’s going on?”

“Oh nothing, I just thought if you guys weren’t busy you might want to stop by, see the nursery and have lunch or something…just us girls?”

“I…maybe,” Willow glanced towards her mother, who pretended not to be listening, “Umm, can I call you in the morning? I just need to get Gert home, drop these leftovers, it’s been a long day...you know?” She said rolling her eyes towards her mother.

Rachael finally caught on, Willow didn’t want to discuss anything in front of Sheila, “Ok, sounds good.”

Willow nodded, leaning in and exchanging a quick kiss on the cheek with her sister as she grabbed all the containers and went to find Tara and Gertrude.
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (11/06/11)

Postby vazy » Sun Nov 13, 2011 12:28 pm

BREAK TIMEZ!

Oh look dibs again! I seriously love you updating on a Sunday, it always gives me this wonderful break from the last minute homework rush. Sorry about the long time its been, I get outta the habit of feedbacking and then feel awful. Hope you've been okay as of late!

Is it bad I've got Macho Man in my head for Gray now, I get a little cartoon idea of him in my head doing a very un-macho dance to it in my mind's eye.

Now after the third read through I shall review. At least Ira's being firm but not mean about the issue when talking with Sheila, its a shame she couldn't extend the same courtesy and at least save one of her kids some heartbreak. But at least Willow has a super support system! And hopefully Eli and Stella have the same support from the rest of the family. Tara and Willow's sweet little moment is much appreciated after the heart ache as is the wonderful father-daughter moment. When the thunderstorm started I couldn't help but think screw getting Gert home get on a horse and make that title happen! But I suppose poor Artemis'd be pretty tired racing rain with the pair of them, and when the rain's already there kind of hard to run from...

Thanks for the awesome-ness and keep up the good work :bow

I totally forgot to ask would it be cool if I tried to draw your version of Willow and her siblings? Didn't want to step on any toes by doing it without permission.
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (11/06/11)

Postby AstronSoul » Sun Nov 13, 2011 12:28 pm

Wow this updated had my emotions from angry to pitty!!

Ira was incensed with Sheila, he cupped his jaw; taking a deep breath in an attempt to calm his nerves, “You are totally missing the point here. Our daughter was attacked! Attacked Sheila, by a man that you invited into our home with the expressed intent that he was to pursue her romantically. He forced himself on our child, our baby!


I can't believe how idiotically naive Sheila is being, it's her daughter for christ sake and she doesn't really give a rats ass! I mean being flirted with is one thing, being out right attacked it just plain outrageous.

“That may be true in the past, but after the debacle on Sunday...like it or not Sheila, this is your fault and you need to take responsibility for this disaster. Willow is an adult and she is entitled to make her own decisions. Trying to force her to do something against her will is just pushing her further away. She is happy and in love for the first time in her life, and you’re just going to have to deal with it.”


I'm so proud of Ira, standing up for Willow, just wish it wasn't against his wife.

Ira’s eyes widened in horror; as he realized that Eli and Stella were within earshot of the heated conversation. As if on cue, he glanced past Sheila, and saw his son. Eli said nothing; instead he picked up Milo, took Stella by the hand and the three of them left


This made me want to cry!!!! How insensitive is this woman, and gees she just attacked every one of her kids! She needs her head examined!!!!

...they are intelligent and well thought out, which is more than I can say for yours.”


Go IRA!!! Put your wife in her place, hell does she ever think straight? (pun intended)

Tara could sense what was happening and decided to intervene, “Sssshhhhh, we don’t have to talk about it right now. I just want you to try and calm down, ok?” She smoothed some errant red hair back behind Willow’s ears and kissed her several times.


Tara is always so understanding and thoughtful, she knows that Willow will talk to her in time, just have to wait and be patient.

“Thank you. The only thing I know for sure is that,” Willow took a deep breath, exhaling slowly, “I don’t want to leave Tara.”

Ira smiled, “You really care about her don’t you?”

Willow nodded in agreement, “I love her Dad…I’m in love with her, she’s everything to me.”

“And how does she feel?”

“The same.


I can just see her dad's eyes now, all big smiling and full of love at what these two women have found in each other.

“Yeah and I know we need to talk but…” Willow’s voice trailed off and she looked down.

“Sweetie, I’m here whenever you’re ready. No pressure, ok?”


Always the one worrying, Will come on Tara ain't going anywhere and ya'll will work it out (I hope).

Adele and Gerty, two unique women that make me laugh! I love em both but especially Adele.

Tara’s heart broke for the old woman, who was clearly having a difficult time staying in the here and now. She knelt by her side and rested a soothing hand on her arm, “Gerty,” She whispered, “Can I help gather your things? I think you left your bags in the other room, near the big chair.”


Here I think it shows Tara's compassion, also showing Sheila she isn't just some pretty face.

Rachael finally caught on, Willow didn’t want to discuss anything in front of Sheila, “Ok, sounds good.”


Don't blame her one bit, I just hope things get resolved.

Great Job Shelby!!!! Can't wait till next week!!!!

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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (11/13/11)

Postby faolan228 » Sun Nov 13, 2011 12:51 pm

It always surprises me how real and raw you write these characters and their emotions. I remember my dad giving almost the exact same speech Ira gave during my big gay reveal, and I dunno, I guess it just strikes a chord, the way that they've been so relatable.

“Prune juice dear. I’ve been drinking two glasses a day since I was a child…it keeps the old pipes clean!” She grinned widely.

Willow looked up at Tara, horrified that her aunt was not only enjoying Bambi’s rancid concoction, but chasing it with shots of nature’s relaxant; Tara responded with a half smile, completely amused with Willow’s reaction.

Willow glanced at Nanna Addy, “Don’t look at me like that Willow. I don’t subscribe to the same regimen. Gertrude’s friend, Doris Finch, got her hooked one-year at summer camp and she’s been addicted ever since! Nope not me, although, when you get to be my age regular BM’s are very important and it is good for you…”


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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (11/13/11)

Postby Grimm » Sun Nov 13, 2011 1:15 pm

It's a fricking Finchy prune juice conspiracy :lmao ! I love the story cross overs!

Shelia is a monster...a very clueless monster :crazy . She just does not get it. She has hurt and offended two of her children. But, for some reason Grayson's lack of turkey sandwich goodness is her top priority.

:applause for Ira standing up to the wicked witch! He obviously cares about and loves all of his children equally. I'm glad they have one parent who can put his kids wants and needs above his own.

Adele and Gerty were wonderful as always...
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (11/13/11)

Postby wimpy0729 » Sun Nov 13, 2011 1:50 pm

Wow, I gotta say that I'm very proud of Ira here. He really let Sheila have it with both barrels, and that alone made my day. I was fist pumping (in the celebratory way, not the "other" way... :blush ), anyway, "Go Ira! Go Ira! Then his talk with Willow was awesome. She really needed that right then, and it was just sweet and perfect. Thank you for that. I really needed a feel good moment after all that turmoil from the last update.

And Tara, well, she's just like the best girlfriend EVER. Willow really needed comfort and understanding and someone to be her rock right then, and she was so perfect it almost made me cry. Then Willow got so upset when she saw Tara was hurt, I was like "aww" and again almost cried.

I don't know how Willow did it, even going into the same room as Sheila after all that. She's more woman than me, that's for sure, so good for her.

And Aunt Gert - what a trip. I just love her, but my heart really goes out to her. I have that in my family, mom with dementia and my dad had a stroke, and the things they come up with can be hilarious, but it's still heartbreaking sometimes. I'm worried about Gert living by herself cause I know how dangerous it can be when they're like that. It just goes to show how good this story is that I'm so worried about fictional characters. :bow

Man, this has been one long, emotional holiday week for them. I can't wait for them to get back to California. I just hope they get a little breather before more craziness starts again. But then again, they have to have the big talk, but I'm glad Ira shared some words of wisdom, and I really can't wait to see what happens with all that.

Great job again, my friend. Can't wait to see what happens next!


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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (11/13/11)

Postby True_Love » Sun Nov 13, 2011 2:08 pm

OMG Shelby! I forgot to leave good girl feedback after reading your last update!

So sorry! Anyway, I love how things have turned out so far. Actually, after reading your update last week, I told my wife, that's what you should have done 13 years ago. Ahh only in my dreams I guess. Ira was right to take Shiela outside and set her strait on what actually transpired on the field of play, even though she is too blind to see it. I feel a little bad for Willow but mostly proud for her standing up for Tara and herself. Things will never get better until all the cards are out on the table and nobody is hiding behind false pretenses or emotions. Now that it is all out there they can begin building an honest relationship. At least I hope so.

I join the group in cheering on the story cross-overs. All you guys make me laugh and it shows how much fun and community there is on the KB. I may just have to join in...hmmmm.

I'm really surprised that Tara is being as calm as she is. I know she want to be there for Willow but still that's a lot of crap to put up with without getting seriously pissed off or extremely defensive. I doubt Willow would react the same way if the situation was reversed. We'll see when they get back to LA.

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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (11/13/11)

Postby Babbles4Twillow » Sun Nov 13, 2011 2:24 pm

PRUNE JUICE!!!! :smash :rofl :rofl

I loved it all and I can't pick anything to quote and comment on!! So here is just a general ZOMG I LOVE IT!!

Update soon, cant wait for more!!
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (11/13/11)

Postby leos_pride » Sun Nov 13, 2011 8:51 pm

Hurry! Update-y goodness!

And go Ira! The men in the Rosenberg clan are really stepping up! I'm glad he was able to tell the Sheila Monster what for without saying anything he would regret and be completely honest.

I'm so glad the girls were able to talk enough to establish that they need to talk about the future but that they are in it together (sorry there is probably a more concise way of putting that but I just got back from a 9 hour road trip from Idaho :P) At least they were able to establish that they are in this together and Tara doesn't blame Willow for anything.

Can't wait to see what happens next!

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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (11/13/11)

Postby zampsa19752001 » Mon Nov 14, 2011 6:48 am

:)) Yay for excellent update-y goodness... Big yay for Ira telling the Evil Bitch Monster how out of touch she is with her children and that she really needs to take a hard look on what she had done and take responsibility for that... Really big lol for Finchmeister's evil Prune Juice making an appearance :)) ... I'm really glad that Ira & Willow talked about Willow's feelings for Tara and what Tara feels for Willow and how they have to make decisions about their future... Can't wait for the girls getting back to LA. I hope they have some quiet time to really talk about what have happened and what they will do in the future...
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (11/13/11)

Postby beautiful_love » Wed Nov 16, 2011 7:15 pm

Ok, it's a little late but I told you I'd get some feedback on here.

I'm glad you decided to show what happened between Sheila and Ira. Go Ira by the way. I'm glad he said what he did because she had no right to do what she did. I'm still really curious to see how that whole bit is going to play out since they still have a few days in the Lonestar state.

It was great to see Tara being so supportive though. Like she would be anything else. And then th very touching moment between Ira and Willow. It melted my cold little heart. And I'm really glad that even though Sheila severely pissed me off, Ira hasn't given up on her and Willow. I'm glad you did that. I am worried about his comment on Robby still being a loose cannon. Not cool.

I'm on board with everyone else loving the whole crossover fic with Ms. Finch. Hilarious. You guys are awesome! And of course, following it up with Tara's kindness towards Aunt Gerty was so sweet. It actually struck a pretty personal chord for me. Really looking forward to the next update!
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (11/13/11)

Postby bouncer73 » Thu Nov 17, 2011 11:29 pm

woo hoo great update..and I loved it that ROBBY got bounced out of there..
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (11/13/11)

Postby Ariel » Fri Nov 18, 2011 2:33 pm

Hey Shelby!

So many things going on and on a variety of levels! Whew! *grabs an extra breath for literary babble-fast*

Ira laying it out on the table for Sheila or should I say laying INTO Sheila for being a class A BIYATCH! First, I agree with Starr that the content of what he had to say was realistic and worked AND it was also incredibly satisfying to read as pretty much everyone agrees! I wonder if Sheila's mom was pretty free-spirited and Sheila grew up feeling insecure and embarrassed about and took the path of wanting to 'fit in' to an unusual degree - kind of explains her close mindedness compared to her mom. Just a thought . . .

Nice variation on the "Family" dialogue, oops! :blush Wrong post! But it is, so there!

Sad how Sheila's insensitive remarks drive everyone off. But I liked Rachel's trying to get together with Willow. #1 it's a show of support and #2 she shares Willow's nickname of "Boo" - one of the little touches that makes us believe that this is a real family with history together.

Ira's discussion with Willow was very tender and kind. I'm happy to say my Mom was equally cool when I came out and has been supportive of me all the way. I also liked how he demonstrated his respect for their privacy and their need for alone time.

But for me one of the loveliest moments was right here:
Willow finally turned to face her girlfriend, expecting total rejection, but was met instead with love and understanding. Seeing the unspoken words in Tara’s beautiful teary blue eyes, Willow flung her arms around the blonde and completely let loose. She sobbed hysterically as they sank to the floor; Tara cradling Willow in her strong arms and rocking her back and forth.

After several long minutes, Willow finally sat up; wiping her face on her shirtsleeve, “I’m s-so sorry,” She sobbed.

Tara shook her head, cupping Willow’s cheeks and kissing her gently on the lips. “You stood up for yourself, for us, and I’m so proud of you.”
You write their emotional support of each other beautifully. It's real, tender, and strong.

Another touching moment was Gertrude forgetting that her cat had died and being reminded; it is tragic that people suffering from dementia have those flashes where they know that they are losing it. Tara's kindness in response to Gertie's confusion really touched my heart.

And on to "Nature's Relaxant", the prune juice, (of course you knew I'd comment on THAT) and I have to agree with Starr, "You win ALL the things!" Seriously, the three of us did our crazy braid cross-over and you won the gold for the sheer hilarious embarrassment of your post! I was nearly writhing in embarrassment for poor Willow - truly felt her pain and it was :rofl :lol :laugh :lmao all the way!!!

And I'll end with the image of them holding each other, wiping eyes and their relationship deepening even more. :love

Thanks!

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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (11/13/11)

Postby Mgraham93 » Sat Nov 19, 2011 5:59 pm

Really enjoyed this chapter very glad ira was supportive

Adele's babble was funny I guess babbling is a family trait of Rosenbergs

The prune juice crossover is great I still think somewhere there's a raiders style warehouse stacked with crates of prune juice
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (11/13/11)

Postby JustSkipIt » Sun Nov 20, 2011 6:58 am

I'm again sliding in at the wire to say well done. I like these little interludes where everything can be calm for a little while. I'm assuming there is a veterinary school at UCLA or somewhere like that right? I mean, yes A&M vet school is awesome but it's not near Hollywood and Tara so that's out.
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (11/13/11)

Postby Wills redemption » Sun Nov 20, 2011 12:19 pm

Hi guys, after finally delurking today I want to give my compliments to this wonderful story which is one of my favourites. It's very powerful writing which makes the reader really feel for our lovely couple and the other unique characters as well (and hate the villains, although I hope Sheila will come around in the end).
If there isn't a vet school at UCLA maybe Tara can found one...she is rich enough, isn't she? Nah, I'm just kidding, Willow would never accept that Tara spend a fortune just for her education, but I have complete trust in you that you will find a solution for them.

I'm really looking forward to the next update!
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (11/13/11)

Postby Azirahael » Sun Nov 20, 2011 7:21 pm

I've only caught the last couple of chapters out of curiosity... But!
I have to say the last couple of chapters have been the best written and most knock-down drag-out fights between Willow and her mom in any story i've read. Plus Ira Rosenburg deserves a frikkin' medal for laying out the truth to Sheila. and planting one on Robby. :applause

Some days a fist to the face is totally the right response.
This was one of those days. :clap

At some point in the future i might have to read to whole 50 chapters.
Might have to schedule a day off...
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (11/13/11)

Postby Finey_McFine » Sun Nov 20, 2011 8:45 pm

Vazy:
Glad I could help you out with your homework breaks:) All is well and don’t feel bad about not leaving feedback...it’s all good!

Maybe Gray can do the Macho Man dance in his dishwashing apron? :lmao

I’m pretty sure Ira is just done with his wife’s antics and now realizes that it’s a good possibility that Willow will distance herself if it continues. He doesn’t want to completely lose his baby.

Willow most definitely has a solid support system, but I’m not so sure about Eli and Stella...especially Stella. We’ll just have to see.

Glad you liked W/T’s little moment after Hurricane Sheila...they needed it!

Too dark and rainy for rain racing...maybe soon. *wink*

Thanks for the feedback!


AstronSoul:
I think the deal with Sheila and the “Robby Incident,” is that she didn’t see it. I kinda get the feeling that she thinks everyone is exaggerating what happened.

I bet Ira has had to take the kids side before...especially Eli’s! When your kid randomly knocks up his girlfriend, it’s gotta be a trying situation, especially if you don’t “approve” of the girl. She just really has no idea of the damage she is causing. Ira is willing to allow the kids to live their lives and acctpt them for who they are, Sheila...not so much.

Tara is the definition of love and understanding, but she’s spunky too! She knows that Willow will talk to her, but she’s not gonna push. Willow was there for her and she’ll be there for Willow. I don’t think that Willow is worried that Tara won’t understand or she’ll leave her; Willow genuinely does not know what to do. Stay, go, attend med school, don’t attend med school, etc. She is stressed! Just like we all get, lol.

Tara has a huge heart...as we all know and has a soft spot for Gerty. I think she remonds her of an older Willow. :p

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faolan228:
YAY!! Glad you could relate to the good parts!

PRUNE JUICE ROCKS!! Definitely something that could appear in just about ANY fic and easily too! I’m sure it will make another glorious appearance...but down the road. :p

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SMGOVAN:
Mistress Finch, the summer camp queen!!! Glad you liked the crossover!!! :grin It was so much fun trying to figure out exactly where to squeeze it in.

*sighs* Sheila is clueless and she is doing her ‘smile for the sake of appearance’ routine. But, she truly thinks that she can mend fences with Grayson by sending over the food. In her mind, it’s over and time to move on.

Ira sees things from a totally different perspective. He see’s the emotional side, where as Sheila see consequences and to her the glass is always half empty, lol.

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wimpy0729:
Ok, first...
I was fist pumping (in the celebratory way, not the "other" way...
I almost didn’t make it through the rest of your feedback. :lmao

Yes, Ira is somewhat ideal and Sheila definitely deserved what she got and more. I didn’t mind writing all the recent angst because I knew the Willow/Ira talk was coming. I spent a lot of time on it, so I’m really glad that everyone liked it so much.

*sighs* Tara...she is the best gf ever and so is Willow. That’s why they are perfect together:)

How did Willow go into the same room as Sheila? Well, she knows her mother and she knew that in Sheila’s mind, it was over. You know her good old Jekyll/Hyde routine?

Gerty is a trip and has drifted through life fairly clueless to what’s happening around her. To me she’s kinda like a Forrest Gump, so no worries...I’m sure she’ll be fine.

Who would have thought that going back to the madness that I’m sure awaits them in CA, would be a relief!


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True_Love:
No worries on the fb...I’m behind on at least a dozen fics myself, damn real life!

I’m glad that you like how things are progressing. Coming to terms with family angst is never easy and so much of the stuff that needs to be discussed gets swept under the rug. Then when it does come out...it ends up bursting. Which is exactly what happened here, kinda like a dormant volcano that erupted and now is going back to sleep, lol. Sadly, it’s now completely up to Sheila and I’m not so sure she’ll come through.

PRUNE JUICE!!! I think you should absolutely slip it in!! Like, Donny’s drink gets spiked and he comes to get even but his bowls have other ideas, lol.

I think Tara is acting appropriately given the situation. She doesn’t want to rock the boat, but on the same token...she’s not sitting back and taking it either. She made her voice heard by standing up to Sheila, that was huge and I’m sure it’s not the last of it.


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Babbles4Twillow:
Glad you liked it!!!!

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leos_pride:
I do like the Rosenberg boys as well:) They are awesome partly because they have a great role model.

Tara of all people should totally understand what it’s like to make big life altering decisions. She’s had to make many and with out much guidance. So, she gets what’s going on with Willow, but I’m sure she is just as anxious to hear Willow’s side of things as well.


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zampsa19752001:
Sheila definitely did not expect her husband to “turn against her.” So it was an interesting turn of events for her. Which she didn’t take very well at all, lol.

Ah yea, Mistress Finch’s beloved juice...it’ll be back, waa ha ha!

I think Ira really and truly understands being in love, after all he and Sheila were young once and have been together a loooooong time. Maybe we’ll see more of a back story later on.
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Beautiful_Love:
No problem with the lateness, because as you can see...I’m waaaaaay behind on fb.

I don’t think things will get heated in the last few days, but W/S aren’t done yet!!

Tara is awesome and Willow is a very lucky girl to also have such a great Dad as well:) Ira loves Sheila, as much as the mere though bewilders most of us, lol. They’ve been together a long time and I’m sure they were once as much in love as W/T.

BTW...no wories about Robby, just fatherly concern.

I’m anxiously awaiting a prune-y crossover in your fic as well. ;-) Oooooh, maybe Willow’s parents will have to get govt prune juice, you know like govt cheese? lol

Thanks for the feedback!

bouncer73:
Glad you’re still out there and still reading!!!!

Thanks for the feedback.


Ariel:
Yeah the Ira/Willow talk too awhile to write because I really wanted it to work and it also needed to be said. Up until this point, he was kind of a big question mark. I mean, we knew he was ok with Willow’s sexuality, but more of a question on where he stood with Sheila.

Glad you liked the ‘Family’ dialog! I was waiting to slip it in...one of my fav episodes:)

Rachael has been kind of floating around on the outside of everything that’s going on, but she does support Willow. I just think she’s taking the high road where her mother is concerned.

Willow needed Tara to love and understand, not judge and that’s exactly what she got. Tara pushed down her own anger with Sheila so she could support Willow. Through all the bs this week, it’s pulled them closer...doing the complete opposite of what Sheila wanted. Had Tara started to rant or allow her feeling to burst out after they got back to the bedroom, it would have made it incredibly difficult for Willow. It was tough enough as it was.

Ahhhh yes, the prune-y goodness has no boundaries! And it’s not the last of it either. Waaa, ha ha!


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Mgraham93:

Hahaha...so far you’re the only one who commented on the “family babble” from Adele! Most definitely a family trait!

HA! I wouldn’t doubt that about the prune juice...it’s return later. :grin

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JustSkipIt:
Hmmmm, nope. No vet school at UCLA. One of the reasons Willow is in such a quandary. We’ll just have to see how things shake out.

Thanks for the feedback!


Wills Redemption:
Hi there! :bigwave

Congrats on the delurking and thanks for following my little fic!

I think that Sheila will eventually come around, but it will be a painfully slow process.

That’s actually a great idea about Tara founding a UCLA vet school, although you are right that Willow wouldn’t let he go that far. Even though she is certainly rich enough. At some point Willow is going to have accept Tara’s wealth and embrace it, cuz it’s not going anywhere anytime soon.
Thanks for the compliments and the feedback as well!

Aziraheal:
Hi There and welcome the my little world!

Only the last couple chapters??? You missed a bunch! But I’m glad you liked what you read, especially the fight scenes because I spent a lot of time on them. I also wanted it to be realistic, so I hope it came across as such.

A fist to the face was definitely much deserved in this case and I was happy to see Grayson deliver it!

Definitely go back and catch up, even if you only read a chapter or two at a time...the girls have come a long way and it’s been so much fun writing this fic!!

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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (11/20/11)

Postby Finey_McFine » Sun Nov 20, 2011 8:49 pm

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TITLE: Racing The Rain

AUTHOR: Finey_McFine

RATING: R (Language)

DISCLAIMER: Willow, Tara and any other BtVS characters, as well as some random dialog, belong to Mutant Enemy. This post includes minor references to the movie, Home for The Holidays. ALL other original characters belong to me! This includes: Willow’s siblings and teammates, plus Tara’s friends and co-workers. Mention of any ‘real’ people in this fic is brief and pure fantasy.

SUMMARY: Totally AU! Set in LA with lots of W/T fluff and some angst, but no Hellmouthyness; just good old regular day-to-day drama. Willow is attending college on an athletic scholarship and Tara is Hollywood royalty. They meet and fall in love, of course, but will they be able to survive the pitfalls of a public romance? Well, you’ll just have to read and find out! ;-)



FEEDBACK: Yes! Any glaring issues…please send me a PM!

AUTHOR’S NOTE: Hi Everyone and happy almost Monday! Wow, was this tough to get posted. So freakin’ busy in RL right now! Anyway, here you go:) Unproofed, so PM me if you catch a little misstep. I also may have borrowed a small part of my favorite Thanksgiving movie, Home for The Holidays...couldn't resist! Happy reading:) Oh and HAPPY THANKSGIVING!!!


Chapter 52: Midnight Snack


Willow waited patiently in the car for Tara, listening to holiday music and the soft sound of the rain hitting the windshield. After getting Aunt Gerty settled, Tara had gone back inside to use the restroom and had yet to return.

Willow jumped, hearing a clanking sound as the back passenger door opened and she saw Tara inserting a large floor lamp into the backseat. The look of surprise on her face was evident as her girlfriend struggled with the bulky item.

The backdoor shut and Tara soon plopped down in the front; a tad winded as she glanced at Willow, “It’s mine. You can’t have it. She gave it to me.” Tara deadpanned.

Willow grinned widely, as she punched Grayson’s address into the GPS, “You obviously charmed the socks off of Aunt Gert; she only gives her things away to people she’s extremely fond of. I have an entire box of random items out in the barn.”

“Well, what can I say? I’m very popular amongst the geriatric set,” Tara joked, “Um Will? I know it’s cold out and still raining, but could we put the windows down for a bit? I think nature’s relaxant was working overtime in the back seat.” She chuckled waving a hand in front of her face and scrunching her nose.

Willow snorted with laughter, happy that the mood had lightened drastically from earlier in the day, “Oh, so you noticed?” She joked poking her tongue out between her teeth.

“Uh, you could say that. She was so loud I thought someone was behind us ‘tooting’ their horn…pun definitely intended.” Tara said making eye contact with Willow as they both burst out in a fit of giggles.

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About twenty minutes later, they pulled up to the gated community of Lakeshore Village and Willow punched in Grayson’s name on the keypad; patiently awaiting a response.

“Yeah?” A scratchy voice responded.

“Hey, it’s Will.”

“Hey…1201-D,” He replied as the gates began to open.

Willow pulled thru and came to a stop at a large map of the community. She scanned the map intently, “Wow, this place is huge.”

“You’ve never been here before?” Tara asked.

“No, I haven’t been home since he bought the place back in September. Ah ha!” The redhead finally proclaimed, “Here it is…straight past the clubhouse, then left, right, second building on the left…” Willow mumbled; verbally plotting her course.

Willow pulled away from the sign, following the winding road, making a left and passing the well-manicured clubhouse. The complex was new and a bit barren, although there was a fair amount of greenery, and a tree in front of every home. The town homes themselves were two-story with sharp angels that gave them a distinctly modern feel and all situated around two large man-made lakes. The buildings looked like small homes with only two units per building and each unit having it’s own private garage. It all looked a bit ‘too perfect’ and sterile to Willow.

Tara finally broke Willow from her thoughts as they made the final turn, “These places seem expensive, Grayson must be doing very well for himself.”

“Huh? Oh yeah, he makes good money I guess, but I’m sure my Mom helped him get a good deal. I was just thinking that they look kind of…I don’t know…”

“Stepford-ish?” Tara said, finishing Willow’s sentence.

“Exactly,” Willow agreed smiling as she pulled into Grayson’s driveway. Coming to a stop, she shut the car off and pulled the keys out of the ignition; exhaling deeply and rubbing her tired eyes.

“I was in that movie, ya know?” Tara mentioned.

“Really? Hey! Bette Midler was in that movie!!”

“Umm hmm, I played her daughter. It was a small part, but that’s how we met and became friends. I was the only one that could give her a run for her money playing cards. Sweetie, do you want me to wait out here?” Tara asked.

“What?” Willow asked turning to face Tara, “No, why would you think that?”

“Oh...well, I just thought maybe you’d want some private time to talk, you know, after everything…”

Willow smiled sweetly; completely taken by how considerate Tara was, “No baby, of course I want you there.” Willow said, leaning over and brushing her lips across Tara’s, “No way I’m leaving my girl out here alone. It’s cold and dark, plus I don’t want you getting kidnapped and turned into a creepy Stepford Wife.”

Tara giggled, “Ok then, let’s get this show on the road...shall we?”

Willow nodded in agreement and they hopped out of the car; Tara was carrying the tupperware container full of left overs in one hand and holding Willow’s hand with the other. Just as Willow raised her free hand to knock, the door opened. Grayson greeted them with a slight smile, holding a beer in one hand and a small bag of frozen peas in the other.

Willow grimaced when she caught sight of his face; his eye was now visibly swollen and the area surrounding it was a deep shade of purple. He had a small cut on his forehead and other various bruises and red marks across his face.

Grayson, noticing the look of horror on his sister’s face, decided to downplay his injuries as much as possible, “Don’t worry, it looks worse than it feels. What cha got there?” He asked, motioning towards the plastic container.

“Oh, Mom sent leftovers for you. She said you’d be upset if you couldn’t make a turkey sandwich tomorrow.”

Grayson rolled his eyes and shook his head, “Jesus...” He muttered, “Here, let me take that Tara.”

Tara smiled in response, “You have your hands full, if you show me to the kitchen...I’ll just put it in the fridge for you.”

As he backed away to show them to the kitchen, Tara noticed the Texas A&M logo on his flannel pajama bottoms and inwardly cringed. The mere sight of the logo bringing back the events of the afternoon and murky thoughts surrounding their future together and impending conversation.

As they made their way towards the kitchen through the living room, Willow took in the surroundings. The decor was tasteful and typical of a bachelor. The walls were stark white and the living room furniture consisted of a black leather sofa, a matching recliner and a huge flatscreen TV that was currently blaring the annual UT/A&M Thanksgiving match up. The coffee and end tables were made of glass and chrome, as were the matching floor lamps. The room was devoid of any real personality, typical Willow thought, as she noticed the only framed pictures Grayson had on view were of himself.

Tara let go of Willow’s hand as she walked ahead into the kitchen; placing the leftovers in the stainless steel refrigerator.

“Hey Tara, feel free to grab you guys a drink while your in there,” He said smiling.

“So, what’s the score?” Willow asked as she dropped down onto the couch.

Grayson made a face, “UT’s up by 14 in the 3rd. It’s not looking good.”

Willow stared at her brother smiling, “Just not your day, is it?” She quipped.

“Hey, at least we have a winning record,” Grayson said, alluding the the UCLA Bruins current football team; their season record was particularly heinous.

Willow smirked, “Point taken.”

“So,” Grayson asked as he muted the TV, “Anything exciting happen after I left?”

Willow looked to Tara, who plopped down on the couch next to the redhead with a bottle of water; twisting the cap off to take a sip and then handing the bottle to Willow.

Willow smiled at the sweet gesture; taking a long sip and handing the bottle back to her girlfriend, “Well,” She started, “Let’s see...Mom blamed Tara for everything, I disgust her, Tara and I both told her off, oh and she applied to A&M on my behalf and apparently I’m starting vet school there in the fall. But other than that...no, not too much happened after you left.” Willow said sarcastically.

Grayson smirked, holding the bag of peas to his bruised eye, “Not exactly your day either,” He said flatly, taking a swig of beer. “Congrats on vet school, by the way,” He chuckled.

“Uh, thanks?” Willow responded with an amused tone of voice.

Grayson leaned forward towards Willow, “Will, are you ok? I mean after Robby...”

Willow stiffened, the incident with her mother had taken her mind off the assault and she hadn’t really thought about it since, but realizing that her emotions were still raw, she absentmindedly took Tara’s hand to calm herself, “Yeah, I think so.”

Grayson nodded and eased back in the chair, “I have to say, he shocked the shit outta me. In all the time we’ve known him...I mean, I never expected something like that. Did you?”

Willow shook her head, “Not in a million years, I was just as surprised as you.”

“Well I’ll tell you what, he better not show his face around the house ever again. No telling what might happen to him.” Grayson said in a threatening tone.

Willow smiled at her brothers big show of bravado, “Gray, please don’t mess with him, even if you run into him somewhere, he’s just not worth it. Besides, if something were to happen in public, you could go to jail, lose your job...”

Grayson nodded in understanding, “I know. I guess we were just lucky it happened where it did.”

To this point, Willow hadn’t thought about the real possibility of her brother getting arrested, but now that she had, her mind was churning, “You don’t think he’ll press charges do you?” She said in a worried tone.

Tara chose to remain quiet, letting the siblings talk and began rubbing soothing circles across Willow’s back. She could tell her girlfriend was starting to get upset again.

“Nah, I doubt it. There’s too many witnesses. Plus it was justifiable, considering he’s the one that attacked you first.”

Attacked. The word reverberated through Willow’s mind; she hadn’t actually thought of it like that, but that’s exactly what he did. Robby attacked her; the thought making her shutter. She suddenly grew tired, wanting to go home, crawl under the covers of her warm safe bed and hide from the rest of the world.

Willow began to fidget nervously as a scowl appeared on her face. “Do you...do you think that maybe we should have called the police? Is he dangerous? Do you think he may hurt someone else or...or come after you or Eli, or Hunter or oh God...what if Milo gets hurt!?” Willow was beginning to slip into full blown panic mode at the thought that she unleashed a ticking time bomb on her family and the community at large. She suddenly jumped to her feet; no longer able to keep the nervous energy at bay and began rapidly pacing and mumbling under her breath.

Tara was up and at Willow’s side instantly, “Shhh, darling...” Tara said, laying her hands on the redhead’s shoulders. She kissed Willow on the forehead and several times on the mouth until she visibly calmed. Tara pressed their foreheads together and began to gently massage Willow’s neck and shoulders.

Grayson decided to give them a little privacy and quietly slipped into the kitchen.

“Sweetie...it’s gonna be ok.” Tara soothed, as she continued to massage Willow’s shoulders. “I need you to be strong baby.”

Willow had tears in her eyes that were beginning to drip down her cheeks, “Strong like an Amazon?” She said in a child-like voice that completely melted Tara’ s heart.

“Strong like an Amazon, right.” Tara replied and they both smiled slightly.

“Ok,” Willow said sniffling and nodding, “I just...I just wish none of this had ever happened.”

“I know baby, I know,” Tara cupped Willow’s cheeks and wiped several tears away, “Will, you’re so tired. Come on, let’s get you home, ok?”

Willow took in a deep breath and steadied herself; wiping the remaining tears on her shirt sleeve. She reached out for Tara’s hands; catching her lovers deep blue eyes, she mouthed ‘I Love You,’ just as Grayson was returning from the kitchen. Tara smiled softly and squeezed Willow’s hands in return.

“Gray, I think we’re gonna get going.”

Grayson nodded, “Are you gonna be ok?”

Willow returned the nod, “Thank you, for everything you did today. I love you, ya know?”

Grayson’s eyes softened and Willow thought she just may have seen a tear appear right before her swept her up in a giant bear hug, “Love you too sis. Now get outta here so I can get drunk and finish watching the football game. You’re interrupting my man time.”

Willow laughed and swatted him playfully on the forearm, “Dork.”

“Hey, I’m gonna see ya’ll again before you go, right?” He asked.

“I think we’re all going to the zoo on Saturday...you should come too.”

Grayson scrunched his face, “I dunno, maybe. Call me tomorrow.”

“Ok, see ya later.”

“Bye Grayson,” Tara said as she gave him a hug.

“Bye Tara,” Grayson said as the girls left the apartment.

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The night had turned cold and the rain was still falling as Willow navigated the dark, wet country roads.

“Tare?”

“”Umm?”

“Would you be terribly upset if we changed our plans for tomorrow?” Willow asked.

“No sweetie, not at all; not really weather for amusement park rides anyway.”

Willow sighed in defeat, “Sorry baby, this really isn’t how I planned for things to go this week.”

Tara arched an eyebrow, “It’s not...really? And here I thought all this was just for me.” She sighed dramatically.

Willow giggled, “You goof.”

“Yes, but I’m your goof,” Tara said playfully as Willow pulled her hand up and kissed the back several times. “So, what did you have in mind then?”

“Rachael asked if we wanted to stop by and see the nursery, maybe get some lunch, you know...girls day out or something.”

“Ummm, that sounds like fun. I’m in, but we should invite Molly and Stella too.”

Willow quirked her mouth into something resembling a scowl, Tara really is a saint if she wants to include Stella, Willow thought.

Tara gave Willow one of her patented ‘looks’, “I know what you’re thinking Will and you need to stop.”

“What?! No you don’t!” Willow squealed.

Tara chuckled, “Yes I do and you all really need to start including her more. It’s tough being on the outside, trying to figure out where you fit in or if you even fit at all.”

Willow realized that Tara was right, even if Stella declined the offer, it was important that they ask. She also knew that Tara was referring more to herself than Stella.

“Tara, you’re not an outsider. They all love you.”

“Well, yeah, I kinda am and it’s ok Will. You guys all just have this really tight bond. It’s-It’s hard to break into something like that, and I’m not even sure I want to.” Tara dipped her head, turning her eyes to her lap.

They pulled up to a stop sign, Willow threw the car into park and turned towards Tara. “I’m sure,” Willow said as she put two fingers on Tara’s jaw and turned her head, “You’re completely one of the gang now, especially after today.”

Tara smiled a half smile, “Oh, so today was a sort of Rosenberg gang initiation? Do I get some kind of special ring that identifies me?” Tara joked.

Willow smiled shyly, looking up at Tara through her thick lashes, “One day you will.”

Tara’s heart literally skipped a beat and then she melted into a puddle at the look of complete adoration on Willow’s face, not to mention the implications of what she just said.

“Willow...” Tara breathed, reaching up to cup Willow’s cheek. She leaned in and pressed her lips to Willows; their mouths moving in a well choreographed dance. They stayed like that, kissing, for several moments before the sound of a loud horn caused them to jump apart.

“Shit! Sorry...sorry...” Willow giggled as she put the car in drive and continued the trek home.

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“That totally hit the spot. Here Tare, last bite,” Willow said as she fed Tara the last bite of their shared slice of pumpkin pie.

Tara opened her mouth as the small piece of pie teetered and almost fell off the fork. They giggled in unison as Willow somehow managed to keep it on the utensil and get it into Tara’s mouth.

“Mmmm, c’mere you,” Willow breathed as she looped a finger into the collar of Tara’s shirt and pulled her forward into a sticky sweet kiss, “Mmmm yummy pumpkin lips!” She proclaimed.

Tara giggled again, wondering how Willow could make something as mundane as eating Thanksgiving leftovers at midnight so much fun.

“Are you finally full?” Tara asked.

“Yep and sleepy too,” Willow replied as she folded her arms and laid down her head.

Tara couldn’t resist running her fingers through Willow’s silky red hair, “Then let’s get cleaned up and get you to bed.”

“Aren’t you coming too?” Willow quipped.

“Don’t I usually...several times,” Tara said teasingly.

Willow’s head shot up, “Then what are we waiting for!?” She jumped out of the chair and began rapidly putting things away as Tara sat shaking her head, thoroughly amused at her girlfriends silly antics.

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Fifteen minutes later, Willow was passed out cold. Tara had gone to brush her teeth and left Willow sitting on the edge of the bed, presumably taking off her shoes. She returned a few short minutes later to find the adorable redhead sprawled across the bed, sound asleep; her shoes still on.

Tara couldn’t help but smile, Willow looked so cute; lying on her back with both arms above her head and snoring lightly. She put her toiletry bag away and knelt down in front of the sleeping redhead. She took off her shoes, socks, pants and so on until Willow was completely undressed. She did the same with her own clothes and then somehow managed to wake Willow enough to get her scooted up and under the covers. Tara lay for several minutes simply watching Willow sleep until she herself began to succumb to the sandman. She brushed a soft lingering kiss against Willow’s forehead, “I love you baby,” Tara whispered, rousing the redhead slightly.

“Love you too,” Willow mumbled, snuggling into Tara’s chest as they both relaxed in each others arms and fell into a deep and satisfying sleep.

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Several hours later, Willow sat straight up in the bed and shouted, “TARA NO!”

The blonde had been sleeping soundly and was startled awake but still somewhat groggy, “What? Will, a-are you ok? W-What’s wrong?”

Willow’s eyes were darting around the room and she began feeling around her neck and then Tara’s with both hands; finally falling back into her pillow, relieved.

“Bad dream...nightmare,” She said breathily.

“Jesus,” Tara said, resting her hand over her own pounding heart, “You scared me half to death.”

“Sorry, just a bad dream, but um, could you do me a favor?”

“Hmm?”

“Can you please close the closet door?”

“Your serious.”

“Yes...please?”

Tara exhaled deeply, hopping out of the bed and making her way to the closet. She hesitated before closing it and turned on the light; looking all around inside...just in case. Satisfied there was nothing sinister going on, she turned off the light and closed the door. Returning the the bed a few seconds later.

“Thank you,” Willow breathed, “Oh and Tara? Promise me you’ll never cheat on me with a vampire. A tall, bleach blonde vampire with washboard abs.”

“Uh ok, I think I can keep that promise,” Tara replied.

“Good, cuz he really gave me the creeps.”

“You’re sure he wasn’t gay? You know, hanging out in your closet and such?”

Willow snorted, turning towards Tara, “No, definitely not gay.”

“Willow,” Tara said seriously as she stroked her fingers through Willow’s hair, “I...I’ll never cheat on you...with anyone, ever.”

“I know, i-it’s my fault anyway...uh the dream that is.”

“Sweetie, you can’t help what you dream.”

“Well, I sorta can. See something that you don’t know about me is that, eating big meals late at night or eating mexican food after 8pm causes me to have nightmares.”

“Um, did you say mexican food after eight causes nightmares? What if you finish at 7:59?”

“Smart ass. Come on Tare, I’m serious!” Willow whined.

“Sorry...that um, actually explains a lot.”

“What do you mean?”

“Oh, the other night after we went out with Hunter and Molly? You kept me awake half the night talking in your sleep.” Tara said.

“Ugh,” Willow grumbled, “Tare, I’m so sorry. Why didn’t you say anything?”

Tara shrugged her shoulders, “It was our anniversary and we exchanged gifts and...I guess I just forgot. I actually meant to ask you if you remembered anything.”

Willow shook her head, “Nothing, I never even knew I was having them.”

“Probably because you never fully awoke,” Tara ducked her head slightly, “I kinda rubbed your back until you fell back to sleep.”

“Awww baby, your the best girlfriend in the entire world.”

“And the sleepiest, can we...?” Tara questioned.

“C’mere,” Willow said as she held out her arms, “Your turn for some serious snuggles.”

“Ummm, you feel so good Will. Nite sweetie, I love you.”

“Nite, love you too Tare.”
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (11/13/11)

Postby AstronSoul » Sun Nov 20, 2011 8:49 pm

DIBS!!!!!
WOOHOO TOLD YA I WOULD BE BACK ON TOP!!!!!

~does happy dance~

First off...

The backdoor shut and Tara soon plopped down in the front; a tad winded as she glanced at Willow, “It’s mine. You can’t have it. She gave it to me.” Tara deadpanned.

Willow grinned widely, as she punched Grayson’s address into the GPS, “You obviously charmed the socks off of Aunt Gert; she only gives her things away to people she’s extremely fond of. I have an entire box of random items out in the barn.”


Aunt Gert is great! Giving Tara something a tad smelly hehehehehe

Willow smiled at the sweet gesture; taking a long sip and handing the bottle back to her girlfriend, “Well,” She started, “Let’s see...Mom blamed Tara for everything, I disgust her, Tara and I both told her off, oh and she applied to A&M on my behalf and apparently I’m starting vet school there in the fall. But other than that...no, not too much happened after you left.” Willow said sarcastically.


Man with Willow and her mother, I really hope Sheila realizes what she is doing, but Willow needs to also forgive and push teh animosity away to even start healing.

Willow began to fidget nervously as a scowl appeared on her face. “Do you...do you think that maybe we should have called the police? Is he dangerous? Do you think he may hurt someone else or...or come after you or Eli, or Hunter or oh God...what if Milo gets hurt!?” Willow was beginning to slip into full blown panic mode at the thought that she unleashed a ticking time bomb on her family and the community at large. She suddenly jumped to her feet; no longer able to keep the nervous energy at bay and began rapidly pacing and mumbling under her breath.


This is something I truly love about Willow, she is always more concerned about others then herself.

Tara was up and at Willow’s side instantly, “Shhh, darling...” Tara said, laying her hands on the redhead’s shoulders. She kissed Willow on the forehead and several times on the mouth until she visibly calmed. Tara pressed their foreheads together and began to gently massage Willow’s neck and shoulders.

Grayson decided to give them a little privacy and quietly slipped into the kitchen.

“Sweetie...it’s gonna be ok.” Tara soothed, as she continued to massage Willow’s shoulders. “I need you to be strong baby.”


And Tara is always there to help calm our redhead's nerves! WOOHOO. I do like how Grayson gives them privacy so thoughtful.


Willow quirked her mouth into something resembling a scowl, Tara really is a saint if she wants to include Stella, Willow thought.

Tara gave Willow one of her patented ‘looks’, “I know what you’re thinking Will and you need to stop.”

“What?! No you don’t!” Willow squealed.

Tara chuckled, “Yes I do and you all really need to start including her more. It’s tough being on the outside, trying to figure out where you fit in or if you even fit at all.”


Mind reading already!!! Man I tell ya Tara is on keen woman!
But always asking is worth it, makes them feel included even if they can't come.

Tara smiled a half smile, “Oh, so today was a sort of Rosenberg gang initiation? Do I get some kind of special ring that identifies me?” Tara joked.

Willow smiled shyly, looking up at Tara through her thick lashes, “One day you will.”


OH! OH! OH!!! Favorite part of this chapter those two lines above!!!

“Aren’t you coming too?” Willow quipped.

“Don’t I usually...several times,” Tara said teasingly.


Ooo love that humor!!!

Several hours later, Willow sat straight up in the bed and shouted, “TARA NO!”

The blonde had been sleeping soundly and was startled awake but still somewhat groggy, “What? Will, a-are you ok? W-What’s wrong?”

Willow’s eyes were darting around the room and she began feeling around her neck and then Tara’s with both hands; finally falling back into her pillow, relieved.

“Bad dream...nightmare,” She said breathily.


Note to self: no more eating in the middle of the night.

“C’mere,” Willow said as she held out her arms, “Your turn for some serious snuggles.”

“Ummm, you feel so good Will. Nite sweetie, I love you.”

“Nite, love you too Tare.


Love the snuggles and going back to sleep ^^

Great Job as always Shelby!!!

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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (11/13/11)

Postby faolan228 » Sun Nov 20, 2011 9:07 pm

YAY UPDATE!

The silence after the storm, isn't it? I still absolutely love the love these siblings have for eachother.
Willow jumped, hearing a clanking sound as the back passenger door opened and she saw Tara inserting a large floor lamp into the backseat. The look of surprise on her face was evident as her girlfriend struggled with the bulky item.

The backdoor shut and Tara soon plopped down in the front; a tad winded as she glanced at Willow, “It’s mine. You can’t have it. She gave it to me.” Tara deadpanned.


I had to stop because I was laughing so hard, like I could actually see this being played out on screen.

“Oh, Mom sent leftovers for you. She said you’d be upset if you couldn’t make a turkey sandwich tomorrow.”


Actually Sheila, I think he was a bit more upset at seeing his little sister assaulted in front of him. I dunno, I'm just getting that vibe. But yeah, I personally look forward to my after-Thanksgiving sandwich than the actual holiday.

Do you...do you think that maybe we should have called the police?


Yes.

Your integration of canon quotes from the W/T pantheon never ceases to warm my cockles. The sharing of the pie was a nice touch. My ex-gf and I were far less romantic/sophisticated, eating the whole damn pie with plastic spoons in the school parking lot.

“Can you please close the closet door?”

“Your serious.”


:lmao why can I see AB and AH pulling off this exchange so easily?
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (11/20/11)

Postby BuffyFan4ever » Sun Nov 20, 2011 9:28 pm

Great update.

I think this was my favorite line:
“Well, I sorta can. See something that you don’t know about me is that, eating big meals late at night or eating mexican food after 8pm causes me to have nightmares.”

“Um, did you say mexican food after eight causes nightmares? What if you finish at 7:59?”

It reminds me of the 1980's movie "Gremlins." What makes it so that they turn evil if they eat after midnight, but not at 11:59. Does Daylight savings time make a difference? What if they travel around the world. So many questions.

Can't wait for the next one. Hope everyone has a great ritual sacrifice and eats lots of pie. :)
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (11/20/11)

Postby Grimm » Sun Nov 20, 2011 10:29 pm

Aunt Gerty popping caps in the backseat had me :lmao !

Girls day out should be interesting. That was very sweet of Tara to think to invite the other girl friends.

Thank you for a Shelia and Roby-the-rapist free update! Have a happy Thanksgiving...

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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (11/20/11)

Postby Ariel » Sun Nov 20, 2011 11:16 pm

Hey, Shelby

“It’s mine. You can’t have it. She gave it to me.” Tara deadpanned.
Love this beautiful example of Tara's subtle humor like, "A muscle cramp? In your pants?" That quirky humor of hers is often over-looked in fics and I treasure it whenever I see it! Also enjoyed Willow's box of "random items" and the fact that neither of them refuses the gifts - awwwwwwwwww.

The ring moment was just :love Right up there with Willow claiming Tara as family earlier in the fic, really touching, really shows their commitment as a couple.

Grayson's taste in furnishings seem perfect; the careful "guy deco" :laugh but I also appreciated his respect for them as a couple.

Tara's reassurance of Willow was lovely but I had to laugh at her giving Willow "the look"!

The closet door close was great - agree with Starr, can totally picture that exchange on the show (and even in real life, thank you very much! :blush)

I had rehearsals both days for hours on end and I have two more rehearsals in the next two days, so I gotta sign off and get some sleep but I want to jump in and f/b - love this story!!! :pinky :party :pinky even if AS bit me to the dibs! :rage

Thanks and keep writing! :kgeek :kgeek :kgeek

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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (11/20/11)

Postby zampsa19752001 » Mon Nov 21, 2011 6:17 am

Yay for great update-y goodness... I really love Tara's quirky humor... I'm glad that Gray gave Willow & Tara space when Willow freaked... I really really glad that Tara insisted on invited other "Rosenberg" girls to the girls-night...
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (11/20/11)

Postby beautiful_love » Mon Nov 21, 2011 10:46 am

Great update! Ok the whole lamp bit... I love Home For The Holidays. That movie is so my family and I crack up every time the aunt is on the screen. Doesn't she give away two or three lamps? Anyway it was a nice little snippet to incorporate here.

I was glad too that we got to see Willow's interaction with Grayson. He actually is a pretty good brother. And I'm glad he's cleared the air withTara. Glad to to see Tara trying to include Molly and Stella in their activities. Very sweet and good use of the cannon dialog.

I thought about the whole Gremlins thing too. Lol. Does she morph into something else if she gets wet? Lol. The dream or nightmare was great though. I'm sure that's a promise Tara will have no problem keeping.

Looking forward to what happens next... :applause

P.S. Living on a steady diet of government prune juice and living in a van down by the river. Great idea.
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (11/20/11)

Postby Babbles4Twillow » Mon Nov 21, 2011 10:52 am

:bigwave :bigwave

Well done! Tootin, with pun intended...great stuff. I also have someone who insists on giving me random things when I go see her. Including big bags stuffed with reader's digest books that I won't read.

I'm glad that Willow has such a great relationship with her siblings. I also had the Gremlins thought...it was floating in my head throughout the rest of the chapter, lol.

Great update!
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