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Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (UPDTED: 4/03/18)

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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (10/30/11)

Postby MmmTaraSoSmexy13 » Sun Oct 30, 2011 8:44 pm

Yay Update!!!
What I meant last week about the whole Thanksgiving thing was that its a shame that I don't do the whole football tradition thing, but I do celebrate Thanksgiving. It's cool that you were from Miami because that is where I currently live and have been living forever. I love it here even though we have mild, hot and very hot for our seasons.lol. Anyways , on to your story...
Oh Hell No. What in the world is Robby thinking and doing. I know there has got to be some fists flying up in here. It would probably be Willow's brother or herself but I am secretly hoping that Tara is going to knock him the fuck out. lol I can't wait for what you are going to write next week. I will be counting the days till Sunday. ^.^ Epicness!
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (10/30/11)

Postby bouncer73 » Sun Oct 30, 2011 9:02 pm

I have been a little on the slow side in catching the updates but I have been keeping up and MAN>..this is awesome..

Now..I wanna punch robby in the throat and beat him down..

keep up the good job..WOOOO and a HOOOO..
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (10/30/11)

Postby leos_pride » Mon Oct 31, 2011 12:55 am

Oh by the gods, are you kidding me??! That is purely evil to leave it at that!

Robby needs a swift and thorough thrashing! I would be more than happy to deliver said thrashing personally :angry

Besides Robby being a total asshat great update! What a fun game and friendly family competition (for the most part)

It's great to see Molly and Tara bonding and sharing the assorted craziness that is meeting the Rosenberg clan :)

And even after thinking over all the enjoyable bits of the update I still keep coming back to thinking "Are you freaking kidding me?!" in regards to the whole Robby asshat incident. I'm seriously hoping Tara comes over, hauls him up by the scruff and decks him one in the face. Argh!

Update soon please? :pray I have to know what happens next!

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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (10/30/11)

Postby wimpy0729 » Mon Oct 31, 2011 1:17 am

Oh no, you did not just do that. You are sooo evil. lol

Okay, now I have multiple scenarios running through my mind of what could happen here. Of course, I'd love to see Tara put some smack down on Robby, the king of assholes. I also hope Willow gives him a nice hard kick to the groin. I'm also picturing all the males in the family, including Ira, finally letting Robby have what is long overdue. I can even picture Rachael waddling out there and getting a good kick in or 10. Oh, I so can't wait to see what you have in store for him!!

The game was so realistic and very well done, and it was like we were sitting there on the sidelines watching. I loved how Tara was holding her own out there, football-wise and even calling Robby a dick. Priceless. :clap But just picturing him on top of Willow like that and doing those things really made my blood boil. That was so disgusting and disturbing in so many ways. I really, really, really can't wait to see what happens next! Soon please?


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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (10/30/11)

Postby Ariel » Mon Oct 31, 2011 8:46 am

Shelby,

First off, the title - "Friends, Lovers and Brothers" - :laugh

Grayson rolled his eyes for about the tenth time and whined, “Come on Will. Aren’t you ready yet?”
LOVE the whining, the sibling rivalries, the memories of childhood traumas - the whole insanity of the brother and sister relationship! Molly's comment about Hunter's transformation fits right in - nailed it girlfriend! Then the Wide World of Sports joke from Tara - :grin but what I loved was Hunter and Willow's joking about Molly and Tara hitting it off. Showed the acceptance between them, the humor, and was a sweet step to Tara being more a part of the family. Big happy here! :love

Willow shot Grayson a look and then glanced over towards her girlfriend; Tara simply smiled and winked. Willow’s face relaxed, seeing that everything was ok with Tara and returned a wink of her own.

Hunter saw his opportunity and picked Elijah next causing Grayson to pick Jeff, with Hunter then choosing Molly; who was none too happy that she was chosen last by her own boyfriend.
Okay, lots of goodies here! First, Willow's concern and then their exchange of winks. Love how Tara holds her own; it's believable and exciting. Then, Molly's trauma at being picked last - been there. But the real gold is in 'logical Willow' explaining the dynamics of picking teams to Molly - PRICELESS! :lmao Anybody got a cluestick handy?

I'll go along with Wimpy and several others: the game was realistic and well-written. It was exciting and I was glad both our girls had a moment or two to shine - YAY Teams! :bounce

Then it got ugly . . . Robby's physical and verbal attacks on Tara were scary and horrible. If you can't trust your own team then athletics turns into something ugly. This was TOUCH football and it seems obvious that Robby stepped way over the line. Glad Grayson called him on it and Will hammered him when he did it again. Tara really hung tough, gotta hand it to her. It was compelling. loved this:
“Are you fucking kidding me?!” Robby exclaimed, getting a nasty glare from Grayson.

Tara ignored his comments, “Alright, what do you want me to do?”
She already called him a dick, so she dismissed him. That normally works with a person - but he had descended to asshole level, unfortunately.

What happened with Willow was unbelievable. I support many of the recommendations. Faolan228's clan ass-kicking/Tara's initiation works for me. So does SMGOVAN's concept of shoe-lace cough-age. AND the suggestion to allow Rachel a turn as well. Please, give us the thrilling conclusion to THIS drama. :pray

Great as always - thanks! :applause

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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (10/30/11)

Postby vampyregurl73 » Mon Oct 31, 2011 11:10 am

Shel -

You know, I'm not really surprised by Robby's behavior. Rachel called him out during dinner and yet Sheila has encouraged him by having him there. He was taking his aggression out on the person he obviously sees as a rival - Tara - to the point Grayson calls him on it too. So now TWO people have belittled him for his passive aggressive actions, he couldn't out and out hurt Tara but football gives him an excuse to do so.

You've already set it up that he has an unrequited crush, & I do feel Sheila is a little to blame here because Willow made it plain she wasn't interested but who keeps encouraging him?

Please let Tara be the one to yank him off Willow by the hair & lay him out cold. Or maybe Willow could bite him & kick him... I think you see where I'm going with that. It's the "you just need the right man" mentality that drives me up a wall, sorry. I'm not sure if it's worse to hear it said to yourself or someone else. Apparently he lost it enough that he didn't care that Willow's entire family got to watch his little acting out...

Now I can wait to see what happens from here... good stuff even if I wanna kick him in the nuts.
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (10/30/11)

Postby AstronSoul » Tue Nov 01, 2011 6:07 pm

Woohoo I finally caught up!!!

So I love the game, very competitive. Of course Robby needs to get a swift kick in the ass, by EVERYONE, one for hurting Tara and that last line. OMG I wanted to jump into the computer tear him off Willow and take him apart piece by piece. Gees the man is such an ass and just doesn't get the word no. Hopefully Tara can teach him the meaning of the word.

Great job!!!

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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (10/30/11)

Postby beautiful_love » Tue Nov 01, 2011 6:47 pm

Ok so my sincerest apologies for missing the last update but this one was amazing! Super mega kudos to you on a very well written chapter. So I feel better about Grayson. A lot better actually. But Robbie is just... :crash God I'd have beat the shit out of him if I was either girl. I cannot believe that anyone could be so brazen and disgusting. So despite the fact that I hate him, you did such a great job writing this that I can't wait for more. Update soon please.
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (10/30/11)

Postby Mgraham93 » Fri Nov 04, 2011 10:31 am

God Robby is simply vile, before these last two chapters I just thought he was a pawn in Sheila's schemes but now his true colours are revealed he needs to beaten to death with a shovel

I liked Willow and Hunters little race and Molly and Tara bonding the game itself was great but Robbies actions weren't.
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (10/30/11)

Postby DaddyCatALSO » Sat Nov 05, 2011 1:50 pm

That goes beyond a cliffhanger. Wondering who settles with whom here. (soemtimes I hate my name when reading a story.)
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (10/30/11)

Postby Finey_McFine » Sun Nov 06, 2011 11:39 am

JustSkipIt:
Dibs…finally! Lol

Unfortunately, guys like Robby exist everywhere and yes, he is from Texas. :-(

I don’t know any men like that either, but I’ve heard stories! Remember, a lot of the bs Robby is pulling, he’s doing it on the DL when the brother’s aren’t within earshot. Plus, I don’t think Hunter and Eli are all that tough. Especially when their older brother is around to take on the role of ‘alpha male.’

No, Tara knows that Willow is not kissing him back…that’s a little too soap opera-ish! Lol

Robby is a big guy and Willow is having difficulty fighting back, but don’t worry…read on for the beating!

Thanks for the feedback!


True_Love:
I’m glad Tara and Molly hit it off as well…like Willow said Tara needs friends she can trust; people on the outside that aren’t in it for fame pr money.

They would have been just as cute on the same team, but I thought it would be fun to see how they reacted opposing each other.

Robby, what can I say except that he sucks and will get what’s coming to him.


Thanks for the feedback!


Babbles4Twillow:
What happens next????? He gets his ass throughly kicked!! :grin :whip

Thanks for the feedback!


willowtarabuffyfaith:
Ohhh i hope someone beats the ever loving crap out of Robby
See below!!

Thanks for the feedback!


SMGOVAN:
There is something to be said for having older bothers and one in particular that really shines in the next chapter. I hope you approve…. :grin


Thanks for the feedback!


zampsa19752001:
Yes, Tara really needs friends that she can trust and the flirty goodness was cute until darkness over took the game, grrrr. See ass kicking below!

Thanks for the feedback!


love_2003:
I think as time goes on, Tara and Molly will find that they have a lot in common not to mention struggling to find their places in such a large brood.

Ahhh, Sheila’s reaction…you are the first to mention this and it is key. See below!

Thanks for the feedback!!!


faolan228:
Phone feedback was pretty good…I’m disappointed though. I was hoping for some ridiculous auto correct mistakes. :p

I’ll take the shrieking as a compliment!

Ira knows his kids and their competitive streak and I’m sure many of their games have gotten out of hand over the years, lol. I’m the oldest of 5 and I know ours did!

Grayson is key and you’ll see why in the next chapter. Just remember this: He’s the golden child; his mother’s favorite. I’ll say no more.

Yeah, I’ve never had to deal with the “you need a real man” thing either, but I did have a guy once say, “I don’t understand. You’re pretty and it’s not like you couldn’t get a guy.” Uh, thanks? What?

As always…thanks for the feedback!!


MmmTaraSoSmexy13:
Ahhhh, I thought maybe Thanksgiving had gone out of style in South Florida, haha :p I LOVE it down there and miss it profusely! Especially the beach…

Ok on to the story, I’m not sure Robby’s thinking rationally because he is drastically out numbered. I think that he’s running on pure unadulterated jealousy and Willow really pissed him off with that whole dropping of the bandana.

See below for ass beating!

Thanks for the feedback!!


bouncer73:
Hey you’re back!

I’m glad you are keeping up! Wanna jump in and pound him? Because I can probably write you on. :p

Thanks for the feedback!

leos_pride:
Sorry! I must have a really dark side. :p

I’m glad you liked the game. I wanted to make it fun without boring everyone to death with football plays, etc. I’ll do that later with softball, lol.

I think Tara’s found a genuine friend in Molly and I’m happy for her!

Unfortunately, I don’t think our little Tara is that butch, lol. Although, I do remember he wielding a mighty mean axe! Too bad she didn’t have one handy. :p

Thanks for the feedback.


wimpy0729:
Valid scenarios, all. I liked Rachael and the waddling! :grin I think you’ll be pleasantly surprised by the outcome, at least I hope so!

Yay! You don’t know how happy that makes me that the game came across so well. I re-wrote it about 10x.

I personally love smart ass Tara. Robby was acting like a dick and she called him on it. I love that she’s not afraid to speak her mind. More of stand up Tara below!

Thanks for the feedback!


Ariel:
Hahaha…the title was kinda perfect, no?

Well, I wasn’t sure how many people would actually get the Wide World of Sports referecce and actually…it was from the ‘80’s, but I couldn’t resist! My wife and I quote it all the time, lol. I can still see that skier wiping out…lol. Anyway, it was definitely a bonding moment for Tara and Molly. I actually thought about Willow being jealous, but it just didn’t fit with my version of a more confident Willow.

Poor Willow, trying to help the situation of Molly’s getting picked last and she sticks her foot in it…as usual, lol. BTW, it took me awhile to figure out the sequence of picking players to get them all on the teams I wanted them on. I had to draw it out using a series of different colored pens…. :p

Well, I’ve been involved in several “touch” football games that have spun completely out of control. Not to this point, but when super competitive guys are involved…wanything is possible.

Tara is done with Robby and ignores him in the huddle knowing that Grayson will shut him down.

Ass kicking…see below!

Thanks for the feedback!!

vampyregurl73:
Yes, you are right…not surprising. The tension was building all day and he was being “humiliated” off and on through out the day…by his own actions. Then he just snapped.

Of course Sheila has to share some of the blame or maybe most of it. She gets what’s been coming to her and by an unlikely person!

All I can say is that an unexpected hero emerges and he gets a severe beat down.

Yeah, that “man thing” so stupid. So not about them!

Thanks for the feedback!


AstronSoul:
No Dibs???? You’re a slacker McFly! Lol

Yeah, I pictured myself in there kicking his ass as well. What a jerk! I had a run in once with my wife’s brother many years ago and it always stuck with me. He never liked me after that and you know what? I could give a shit! Don’t manhandle my woman, damn it!

Anyway, he gets what’s coming….

Thanks for the feedback!

beautiful_love:
Hey Jess!

No problem on the fb to the last chapter…it’s all good! Thanks for the compliments on the writing! Glad you liked! I hope you like the next chapter as well, because I re-wrote it like 5x!

Robby is the spawn of Satan, lol. Hopefully he doesn’t show up at any Kitten gatherings or we’ll all go to jail!! Haha


Thanks for the feedback!

mgraham93:
Yep, vile and disgusting! He was a pawn and now a willing participant.

he needs to beaten to death with a shovel
:rofl

Thanks for the feedback!


DaddyCatAlso:
That was an over the cliffhanger! :p

A surprise hero emerges…hope you like!

Thanks for the feedback!




JustSkipIt:
Dibs…finally! Lol

Unfortunately, guys like Robby exist everywhere and yes, he is from Texas. :-(

I don’t know any men like that either, but I’ve heard stories! Remember, a lot of the bs Robby is pulling, he’s doing it on the DL when the brother’s aren’t within earshot. Plus, I don’t think Hunter and Eli are all that tough. Especially when their older brother is around to take on the role of ‘alpha male.’

No, Tara knows that Willow is not kissing him back…that’s a little too soap opera-ish! Lol

Robby is a big guy and Willow is having difficulty fighting back, but don’t worry…read on for the beating!

Thanks for the feedback!


True_Love:
I’m glad Tara and Molly hit it off as well…like Willow said Tara needs friends she can trust; people on the outside that aren’t in it for fame pr money.

They would have been just as cute on the same team, but I thought it would be fun to see how they reacted opposing each other.

Robby, what can I say except that he sucks and will get what’s coming to him.


Thanks for the feedback!


Babbles4Twillow:
What happens next????? He gets his ass throughly kicked!! :grin :whip

Thanks for the feedback!


willowtarabuffyfaith:
Ohhh i hope someone beats the ever loving crap out of Robby
See below!!

Thanks for the feedback!


SMGOVAN:
There is something to be said for having older bothers and one in particular that really shines in the next chapter. I hope you approve…. :grin


Thanks for the feedback!


zampsa19752001:
Yes, Tara really needs friends that she can trust and the flirty goodness was cute until darkness over took the game, grrrr. See ass kicking below!

Thanks for the feedback!


love_2003:
I think as time goes on, Tara and Molly will find that they have a lot in common not to mention struggling to find their places in such a large brood.

Ahhh, Sheila’s reaction…you are the first to mention this and it is key. See below!

Thanks for the feedback!!!


faolan228:
Phone feedback was pretty good…I’m disappointed though. I was hoping for some ridiculous auto correct mistakes. :p

I’ll take the shrieking as a compliment!

Ira knows his kids and their competitive streak and I’m sure many of their games have gotten out of hand over the years, lol. I’m the oldest of 5 and I know ours did!

Grayson is key and you’ll see why in the next chapter. Just remember this: He’s the golden child; his mother’s favorite. I’ll say no more.

Yeah, I’ve never had to deal with the “you need a real man” thing either, but I did have a guy once say, “I don’t understand. You’re pretty and it’s not like you couldn’t get a guy.” Uh, thanks? What?

As always…thanks for the feedback!!


MmmTaraSoSmexy13:
Ahhhh, I thought maybe Thanksgiving had gone out of style in South Florida, haha :p I LOVE it down there and miss it profusely! Especially the beach…

Ok on to the story, I’m not sure Robby’s thinking rationally because he is drastically out numbered. I think that he’s running on pure unadulterated jealousy and Willow really pissed him off with that whole dropping of the bandana.

See below for ass beating!

Thanks for the feedback!!


bouncer73:
Hey you’re back!

I’m glad you are keeping up! Wanna jump in and pound him? Because I can probably write you on. :p

Thanks for the feedback!

leos_pride:
Sorry! I must have a really dark side. :p

I’m glad you liked the game. I wanted to make it fun without boring everyone to death with football plays, etc. I’ll do that later with softball, lol.

I think Tara’s found a genuine friend in Molly and I’m happy for her!

Unfortunately, I don’t think our little Tara is that butch, lol. Although, I do remember he wielding a mighty mean axe! Too bad she didn’t have one handy. :p

Thanks for the feedback.


wimpy0729:
Valid scenarios, all. I liked Rachael and the waddling! :grin I think you’ll be pleasantly surprised by the outcome, at least I hope so!

Yay! You don’t know how happy that makes me that the game came across so well. I re-wrote it about 10x.

I personally love smart ass Tara. Robby was acting like a dick and she called him on it. I love that she’s not afraid to speak her mind. More of stand up Tara below!

Thanks for the feedback!


Ariel:
Hahaha…the title was kinda perfect, no?

Well, I wasn’t sure how many people would actually get the Wide World of Sports referecce and actually…it was from the ‘80’s, but I couldn’t resist! My wife and I quote it all the time, lol. I can still see that skier wiping out…lol. Anyway, it was definitely a bonding moment for Tara and Molly. I actually thought about Willow being jealous, but it just didn’t fit with my version of a more confident Willow.

Poor Willow, trying to help the situation of Molly’s getting picked last and she sticks her foot in it…as usual, lol. BTW, it took me awhile to figure out the sequence of picking players to get them all on the teams I wanted them on. I had to draw it out using a series of different colored pens…. :p

Well, I’ve been involved in several “touch” football games that have spun completely out of control. Not to this point, but when super competitive guys are involved…wanything is possible.

Tara is done with Robby and ignores him in the huddle knowing that Grayson will shut him down.

Ass kicking…see below!

Thanks for the feedback!!

vampyregurl73:
Yes, you are right…not surprising. The tension was building all day and he was being “humiliated” off and on through out the day…by his own actions. Then he just snapped.

Of course Sheila has to share some of the blame or maybe most of it. She gets what’s been coming to her and by an unlikely person!

All I can say is that an unexpected hero emerges and he gets a severe beat down.

Yeah, that “man thing” so stupid. So not about them!

Thanks for the feedback!


AstronSoul:
No Dibs???? You’re a slacker McFly! Lol

Yeah, I pictured myself in there kicking his ass as well. What a jerk! I had a run in once with my wife’s brother many years ago and it always stuck with me. He never liked me after that and you know what? I could give a shit! Don’t manhandle my woman, damn it!

Anyway, he gets what’s coming….

Thanks for the feedback!

beautiful_love:
Hey Jess!

No problem on the fb to the last chapter…it’s all good! Thanks for the compliments on the writing! Glad you liked! I hope you like the next chapter as well, because I re-wrote it like 5x!

Robby is the spawn of Satan, lol. Hopefully he doesn’t show up at any Kitten gatherings or we’ll all go to jail!! Haha


Thanks for the feedback!

mgraham93:
Yep, vile and disgusting! He was a pawn and now a willing participant.

he needs to beaten to death with a shovel
:rofl

Thanks for the feedback!


DaddyCatAlso:
That was an over the cliffhanger! :p

A surprise hero emerges…hope you like!

Thanks for the feedback!

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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (11/06/11)

Postby Finey_McFine » Sun Nov 06, 2011 11:43 am

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TITLE: Racing The Rain

AUTHOR: Finey_McFine

RATING: R (Language)

DISCLAIMER: Willow, Tara and any other BtVS characters, as well as some random dialog, belong to Mutant Enemy. ALL other original characters belong to me! This includes: Willow’s siblings and teammates, plus Tara’s friends and co-workers. Mention of any ‘real’ people in this fic is brief and pure fantasy.

SUMMARY: Totally AU! Set in LA with lots of W/T fluff and some angst, but no Hellmouthyness; just good old regular day-to-day drama. Willow is attending college on an athletic scholarship and Tara is Hollywood royalty. They meet and fall in love, of course, but will they be able to survive the pitfalls of a public romance? Well, you’ll just have to read and find out! ;-)



FEEDBACK: Yes! Any glaring issues…please send me a PM!

AUTHOR’S NOTE: Hi Everyone and Happy Sunday! So, here’s the deal…this chapter is unproofed, even though I’ve gone through it at least a dozen times, there’s probably typo’s, etc. Just PM me if you catch something. I sincerely hope ya’ll like this chapter because I REALLY love it! Happy reading:)

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Chapter 50: The Unexpected Hero


“Get off me Robby,” Willow demanded as Robby just lay there; inappropriately grinding his groin into her. “What are you doing? I said get off!” Willow tried to thrust her arms out and push, but he was much bigger and her pushing was to no avail.

To the rest of the onlookers, everything seemed to be happening in slow motion, but to Willow it all happened very quickly.

“You know what your problem is Will, you just need a real man.” Robby hissed pushing his face forward and kissing Willow soundly on the lips.


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Willow was stunned and doing her best to push him off her. As strong as she was, it didn’t seem to matter; the 6’2, 220lb man had her pinned. She bucked and squirmed; desperately trying to knee him in the groin…anything to push him off. Nothing worked, as he pressed harder against her; trying to thrust his tongue into her mouth.

Everyone froze momentarily in complete disbelief. Tara was some distance away and stood stunned by the events unfolding in front of her; her mouth moving, but no words were coming out. She quickly snapped out of it when she saw her girlfriend in distress and struggling against Robby’s unwanted advances, “HEY!” She shouted in unison with Grayson and quickly started to move towards Willow.

As Tara began to pick up speed, Grayson, charged past her and towards his sister; he was on Robby in two seconds flat. “You son of a bitch! Get the fuck off my sister!” He shouted as he grabbed Robby and threw him to the ground.

Willow pushed herself backwards on all fours, in an attempt to get out of the way as she turned her head, wiping her mouth on her sleeve and spitting on the ground. A few seconds later she felt Tara’s arms under hers, helping her to stand.

Meanwhile, Robby had bounced to his feet and was up in Grayson’s face, “What’s your fucking problem, man!?” Robby exclaimed, thrusting his arms forward and shoving Grayson in the chest.

“What’s my problem?!” Grayson responded indignantly, shoving him back, “You forced yourself on my sister, that’s my fucking problem. You piece of shit!” He shouted, the two men standing within a foot of each other.

“Fuck you and your fucking dyke sister!” Robby spat.

That was the last straw for Grayson, he threw a punch and connected hard with Robby’s jaw; knocking him back several feet and busting his lip wide open. Robby retaliated, lunging forward and punching Grayson in the eye and chaos erupted as the scuffle turned into a knock down drag out fight. A chorus of ‘Oh shits’ could be heard echoing across the field as Ira, Eli, Hunter and Jeff charged forward, in an attempt to try and break up the two men.

Willow’s face was etched with concern as she yelled at them to stop. Her cries when unheard and she failed to move as the men stumbled closer. Tara acted quickly, wrapping her arm around Willow’s waist and yanking her out of harms way. They were like wild animals in a frenzy and it was hard to tell who had the advantage as Grayson and Robby were throwing punch after punch; eventually landing on the ground. They were rolling about while shouting a string of obscenities as Grayson finally ended up on top; straddling Robby.

“How’s if feel to be held down against your will, you fucking bastard!” Grayson shouted as he repeatedly punched Robby in the face; landing several strong blows.

Ira, Eli, Hunter and Jeff eventually managed to pull Grayson off, but not before the two men were both bruised and bleeding; Robby, clearly taking the brunt of fight, staggered as he tried to stand. He then, unceremoniously, lunged forward in a sorry last-ditch effort. Unfortunately for him he was met by Eil’s fist to his face and as he staggered, Hunter grabbed him; throwing hard him to the ground.

Jeff was holding on to Grayson from behind as Ira had both hands on his son’s chest, “Break it up! Both of you, that’s enough!” He shouted, as he pushed his eldest son backwards “Enough!” This wasn’t the first time Ira had intervened in a fight that Grayson was involved in, but it was definitely the most violent. Ira had learned over the years that raising three boys had it’s challenges and Grayson was most definitely the hot head of the bunch. Although, this time his flaring temper was justified.

Grayson was panting hard and his face was beet red, while Robby angrily pulled himself up; spitting out a mouth full of blood in the process.

“Robert, you need to leave,” Ira said sternly.

“No problemo,” He said as he turned his head towards Willow. This time spitting at her feet and mumbling, “Faggot.”

“Son of a bitch!” Grayson shouted, surging forward again, trying to tackle Robby as his father and brothers caught him mid stride; somehow managing to hold him back.

“NOW ROBERT, because if you say another word, I’m going to unleash ALL of these boys on you and I don’t think you want that kind of pain. Do you understand me?” In truth, Ira was having a hard time keeping his own anger in check and desperately needed the young man to leave before completely loosing his temper as well. He was also worried that Robby would be seriously injured, as all three of his boys were seething and ready to pummel him into a bloody pulp.

Robby glared at the man, nodding in understanding and backing down; knowing that he didn’t stand a chance against the three Rosenberg brothers. When he finally turned and began walking away, Ira and Hunter followed for good measure. There was dead silence as they all watched him leave until Willow finally spoke up.

“Gray, are you ok? I’m so sorr-”

Grayson turned to Willow, his eyes still angry, “Willow, you have nothing to apologize for. Do you hear me? Nothing.” His face softening for a brief moment as he reached out and put a hand on Willow’s shoulder. It was short lived, however, and soon his features were dark once again, “But there is someone who does.” With that, he turned and began to march towards the back of the house.

“What’s he talking about?” Eli asked, meeting his sister’s eyes in a questioning stare. They stood for a long moment watching Grayson leave in silence.

Willow turned to Eli, “I don’t…” She started as her eyes widened when she realized exactly where he was going, “…oh shit.” Willow mumbled as she pulled away from Tara and began to run towards the house. Unfortunately, Grayson had just stepped inside.

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Tara fell in behind Willow as did everyone else, to find out exactly what Grayson was up to. Eli lagged behind with Milo, who was now crying on his father’s shoulder.

When Grayson burst in the backdoor, he was met by his mother and Nanna Addy; sitting at the kitchen table chatting. Sheila stood immediately upon seeing her son’s battered and bloody face.

“Oh my God! Grayson, what happened?” She exclaimed.

“I got in a fight with Robby because of YOU, that’s what happened!” Grayson was panting hard with his fists clinched at his sides; having never in his life raised his voice to his mother with such anger.

“What are you talking about? I was inside…you boys, I swear.” Sheila attempted to play off his accusation with the standard, ‘boys will be boys’ routine and waved a dismissive hand through the air. Turning her back, Sheila began to move towards the sink.

Grayson was furious that his mother would just blow him off and he was rapidly reaching the point of hysteria as his eyes began to dart rapidly around the room. They fixated on a bag of flour that was sitting on the kitchen counter. Grayson snatched up the bag and threw it as hard as he could against the nearest wall; exploding flour all over the kitchen and some of its occupants. Everyone stood stock still, completely stunned by his actions, including Willow and Tara who had just arrived on the scene.

“Grayson Emmanuel Rosenberg! What the hell has gotten into you?!!” Sheila admonished.

“I’ll tell you what’s gotten into me…seeing my baby sister attacked and seeing you for what you really are!” Grayson was panting hard and rapidly bridging the gap between himself and Sheila, “You are a manipulative, scheming, cold hearted bitch who would rather see her daughter sexually assaulted than gay!”

“GRAYSON!” Sheila and Nanna Addy shouted. “How dare you speak to me like this!” Sheila was stunned by her eldest sons outburst.

“Well, I’ll tell you what Mother, it’s about time someone said something! You have been acting like an ignorant ass when it comes to Willow; treating her like a second class citizen, trying everything in your power to change her to YOUR liking and look you’ve caused!” He practically screamed as he pointed to his bloody face.

“Oh I see, this little school yard scuffle you got into with Robby was all my fault. It had nothing to do with her being here and causing all the unnecessary tension.” Sheila spat sarcastically; glaring at Tara.

Grayson followed Sheila’s line of sight to Tara and whipped his head back to his Mother, “This has nothing to do with Tara being here, she has as much a right to be here as any of our girlfriends do. This has everything to do with the fact that Robby attacked Willow in front of all of us, including Dad…in broad daylight! He forced himself on her and stuck his tongue down her throat! Thank God your little plan didn’t work, because I can only imagine what he would have done to her if he’d gotten her alone.” Grayson moved even closer and was now within a foot of his mother, “How’d you like to have that on your conscious Mom? Huh? Willow getting raped by some asshole that YOU set her up with all because YOU wanted to turn her straight! Well, get the fuck over it!” He shouted and received a hard slap across his already bruised face.

A resounding gasp reverberated across the room, causing everyone to flinch. In the time that they had been arguing, nearly the entire family had convened, with the exception of Eli, Stella and Milo. They chose to stay outside; keeping Milo out of the fray, the little boy was upset enough as it was.

Grayson looked at his mother with shock and angry tears welling in his eyes. He turned swiftly to Bambi, “We’re leaving, get your stuff and meet me at the car.” Snatching his keys from the counter, he turned and stormed out.

“Grayson wait, I don’t want you driving like this!” Ira said with concern as he chased his son out the backdoor.

Bambi said nothing, she simply left to gather her things in the living room and exited through the front of the house; leaving the rest of the family standing in silence.

Willow couldn’t believe what was happening, it was like she was trapped in some sort of alternate reality. Her head was throbbing and she was completely stunned by her brother’s reaction. Grayson had stood up for her, he’d taken a beating and confronted their mother; all in a matter of ten minutes. He was her hero. This new revelation made her feel proud and sad all at the same time. She glanced around the room, not knowing what to do or say next.

“Sheila, is this true? Did you invite this boy for Willow?” Adele asked her daughter, but Sheila didn’t answer; instead she stood wringing her hands and looking away.

“It’s true Nanna,” Willow said, finally finding her voice, “She did it to try and break up Tara and I. To try and broaden my horizons, so to speak. Go ahead, tell her Mom. Tell her how you told Robby he had a chance with me, how you tried to set us up even though you knew I was bringing Tara. Tell her! ”

“Sheila!” Nanna Addy was appalled, “How could you? I raised you with an open mind and you pull something like this? This is about as low as it gets! You could have gotten Willow killed! This boy is clearly unstable.”

“You have no idea what it’s like Mother! It’s bad enough having a homosexual child in a small town, then having to see it plastered on every magazine cover and TV show…I can’t even go to the grocery store anymore with out having people constantly whispering behind my back. You are in no position to judge me!” Sheila barked.

“And what exactly is it like Mom?” Willow calmly asked.

“Willow, please do not start with me. I have seriously had just about as much as I can take.”

“Enough of what…enough of me? Enough of your child?”

“Willow, did you ever even consider how this…this thing with Tara was going to effect your family? Do you even care? I don’t even know why you bothered getting involved with anyone, it’s not like any of this is going to matter in six months.” She said as she turned, opening a drawer, pulling out an envelope and tossing it on the table.

Willow met her eyes questionably, “What is this?” She asked as she picked up the envelope with the Texas A&M logo and examined it thoroughly.

“It’s your acceptance letter for vet school,” Sheila replied flatly, “You’ll be starting at A&M in August.”

Willow’s eyes widened, then squinted as she pulled out the letter and began to read, “But I never…”

Tara’s heart sank and she nearly collapsed. Willow was leaving California, coming back to Texas to attend four years of Veterinary med school. She never mentioned leaving, not once and now here was the letter, the proof right in front of her. Tara didn’t understand…how? Why? What was going on?

“Willow…?” Tara’s voice was pleading and confused, as she met he lover’s panicked and teary eyes. Tara’s mind was racing. How could she have been so stupid not to realize that Willow’s tenure in California was temporary? Of course it was, she was a college student and didn’t they always return home after school? Tara was beside herself.

“Tara I…”

Sheila straightened up, “You see Tara, Willow is going to med school at A&M just like we planned and she doesn’t have time for...all of this.” Sheila said, waving a hand in the air as if to shoo Tara away like an annoying insect. “Have your fun now, because in six months, Willow is coming back here and starting her real life.

Willow looked to Tara with teary eyes and saw nothing but hurt and anguish reflected back at her, “Tara, I’m sorry, I’m s-s-sooo sorry. I wasn’t trying to-”

“Willow, it’s time you told Tara the truth!” Sheila shouted at her daughter, causing Willow to break down completely; whimpering and sobbing. She felt like the entire world was crashing down on her.

“Stop it, please!” Tara countered.

“Tara, this is not your concern,” Sheila said sternly.

Tara whipped her head towards Sheila, “Yes it is, you’re h-hurting Willow and that m-makes it my concern. Will, is t-this all true? I trusted you more than anyone in my life, do you…do you w-wanna leave?”

“This is not your decision, Tara.”

“I KNOW THAT!” Tara said sharply to Sheila, “Baby? Do…do you wanna leave?” She asked Willow softly, almost in a whisper.

Willow shook her head, meeting Tara’s eyes and collapsed into her, sobbing even harder. The blonde responded quickly; wrapping her arms protectively around her girlfriend and stroking her hair, “Shhhh sweetie, it’s ok. It’s ok, I’ve got you.”

“Willow, this is ridiculous! Stop that crying immediately! You need to quit acting like a baby and do what’s right for your future.”

Tara eyes narrowed eyes at Sheila and she gritted her teeth as she held Willow tight, “Just let it go Sheila. She’s far too upset to make any kind of decision right now.”

Sheila was furious that this woman was speaking to her in such a manner in her own home and clinched her fists as she spoke, “Tara, I have been very patient, but I am starting to lose it. This plan was in place long before you came into the picture and if you care about Willow at all, you’ll let her go. I will NOT allow you to ruin her life!”

Tara could no longer hold it in, “If I care about Willow?” She said Indignantly, “I love Willow and I respect whatever decision she makes, but I won’t stand idly by and watch you bully her into making a decision that she is clearly not ready to make. You’re hurting her and I won’t allow that!”

“YOU? YOU won’t allow…? Just who the HELL do you think you are anyway?!?”

“I-” Tara began to speak again, when Willow cut her off suddenly; lifting her head, “She’s my everything. That’s who she is and I will not allow you to raise your voice to her.” Willow said, turning from her lover and facing her mother.

“You’re right Mom, we did talk about my options, but I never committed to coming back and attending A&M. That’s what YOU wanted, it’s what you’ve always wanted, but I never did. Why do you think I choose UCLA in the first place? It was because I wanted something for me, not for you or dad or anyone else. Just for me. I’m sick of my life not being my own. I am a grown woman and I’ll make my own decisions. This is my choice, my life…not yours.”

Sheila scoffed, “You’re not thinking with your head right now. Do you actually think this thing with Tara is going to last?”

“You keep implying that it’s Tara that’s pulling me away when you refuse to see the truth. Refuse to see that…that it’s you, mother. You’ve been pushing me away since high school and this thing, as you put it, is called a relationship and just because I’m in it with a woman doesn’t make it any less significant. I am so sick and tired of you acting like it’s something less than what it is and I’m sick of the way you have been treating us this week. This little plan of yours, with Robby, was a pathetic and desperate attempt at trying to force your will upon me. Well, guess what? It didn’t work. It only showed what as ass Robby truly is and now you’ve not only pushed me even further away, but you caused Grayson to get hurt!”

“Willow, I am doing my best to be tolerant of your lifestyle, but when you start putting your future in jeopardy because of some college tryst with an actress-”

“Tolerant?! You tolerate me?” Willow asked indignantly, ignoring the last part of the sentence.

“What do you want from me Willow? I’m doing the best that I can!”

“Well, if this is your best, then you are in serious trouble. I don’t want to be tolerated. I want to be loved and accepted. I just…I just want to be Willow, this is who I am, but you can’t seem to get it through that through your thick skull. Well let me spell it out for you Mom…I’m gay. G-A-Y! As in lesbian-I-don’t-live-in boys-town-never-will, no matter how many you try and set me up. Like it or not THIS is who I am! You rolled the dice with a fifth kid and this is what you got. So sorry to disappoint you-”

“THAT’S ENOUGH! ALL OF YOU!” Ira shouted, appearing out of nowhere to put an end to the bickering.

Sheila sighed in relief, “Ira, thank God you-”

“Shut up Sheila! Girls, upstairs. Sheila, you come with me. Everyone else, get this mess cleaned up!” Ira yelled, grabbing Sheila’s wrist and pulling her out the back door.

Once again Willow was stunned silent. Her father rarely raised his voice, but when he did, he meant business. Willow felt horrible for making him yell, horrible for causing such a ruckus and horrible for ruining Thanksgiving; if horrible were a train, she’d be the locomotive.

Tara was incredibly relieved that Ira arrived when he did. She stepped in front of Willow, she could see the confusion and how utterly wiped the girl was. She hated seeing Willow in pain and had to force herself not to cry…for Willow’s sake and her own. Tara cupped Willow’s cheeks, wiping the tears with her thumbs and lightly kissing her forehead.

“Come on,” She whispered, gently guiding Willow from the room and up the stairs.
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (10/30/11)

Postby vazy » Sun Nov 06, 2011 11:43 am

An excuse for a homework break! I thank you greatly.

And I guess I get dibs, sorry Babazoid. Anyway, a seriously welcome break from the monotony of art homework. Even if it was angst filled. Seriously love this story and I'm sorry I never feedback it, I'm really dreadful at that... Anyway, I love the way this story is progressing. Willow and Tara seem to have been thrown into some rough times but I'm glad that all, well most, is supportive of Willow. Especially Gray, I knew he couldn't be all bad! I just knew it! Hopefully Ira will set Sheila straight some like the cool Popsicle he is, if not I guess our loveable couple could go stay with Rachael? On the topic of Rachael I could totally imagine her kicking Robby's sorry ass along with her brothers if she wasn't pregnant. That would a sight to behold, all the Rosenberg siblings standing up for Will.
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (10/30/11)

Postby Babbles4Twillow » Sun Nov 06, 2011 11:44 am

dibs? I guess not... :D A girl can dream!

Go Grayson!!! I was sitting here like I was watching a football game, yelling at the screen, hehe. :banana :banana

The rest of this chapter was REALLY hard for me to read... poor Willow. Sheila is such a low-down dirty bitch...oops... I hope Ira makes her see the error of her ways, so that she can learn to love Willow for who she is, not who Sheila wants her to be.

Great update!!
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (11/06/11)

Postby willowtarabuffyfaith » Sun Nov 06, 2011 11:58 am

Yeyyyyy! Thank GOD! Robby got his ass kicked! Can't wait for more :D
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (10/30/11)

Postby Grimm » Sun Nov 06, 2011 12:09 pm

Thank you Grayson for both kicking the dog shit out of Robby and for finally putting Shelia in her place. Shelia disgusts me... I hope Ira has the balls to do/say what he should have years ago...let Willow be Willow!

I'm not sure who I find the most vile..Shelia or Robby?

Nice role reversal of the Family episode. I'm a bit pissy right now. So, i'm gonna end my feedback here.
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (11/06/11)

Postby AstronSoul » Sun Nov 06, 2011 12:25 pm

Screw dibs, the board isn't even giving me notifications anymore.

This chapter WOW!!!! I am so glad Grayson bit the shit out of Robby. That fucking...grrrr ok calming down.

Everything comes to head with Sheila, and it looks like Ira is going to set her straight, if that doesn't work then I don't think Willow will be coming home very often. I am glad Tara defended her girl, it's not like Willow meant to keep that from her, she just wanted to live her life her way, and when it came up talk to Tara about it privately.

I want to kill Sheila! With that said, great job!!!

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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (11/06/11)

Postby faolan228 » Sun Nov 06, 2011 12:58 pm

I had to reread this a couple times because for the most part I was going "DAYUM, GRAYSON!" Robby got his ass-stomped! And though I'm sad to see that Tara didn't a few hits in, it was awesome to see her stand up to Sheila like that.

I honestly think Sheila is the more vile of the two. Yeah Robby's a scab, and yes sometimes I wish the girls had their powers in this story just so they could shove Robby's head up his own ass and let him drown in there, but Sheila was the one egging him on. Sheila, who's Willow is supposed to be able to love and trust as her mother, is the reason for this.
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (11/06/11)

Postby zampsa19752001 » Sun Nov 06, 2011 1:01 pm

Yay for excellent update-y goodness... Big yay for Gray beating the shit out of the Shit Weasel (otherwise known as Robby)... Even bigger yay for Gray finally standing up to the Evil Bitch Monster (otherwise known as Sheila) and calling out her manipulating homophopic ways... Really big yay for Tara defending her girl against Evil Bitch Monsters attacks... I truly hope Ira will tell the Evil Bitch Monster in no uncertain terms that she better clean up her ways or get the heck out... I kinda hope that they tell the police that Shit Weasel sexually assaulted Willow so he will have a permanent police record and have to register as a sex offender where ever he will go...
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (11/06/11)

Postby leos_pride » Sun Nov 06, 2011 2:02 pm

WOOHOOO!!! Go Grayson!!

Holy crap what an action packed update! I'm very happy to see Grayson stand up for his sister and beat the crap out of Robby. He seriously deserved that ass whoopin'! But then that was only half the fun.

Man am I glad someone finally stood up to Sheila, and even better that it was in front of her mother! Again I say go Grayson! Never would have picked him to be the one to stand up for his sister with his sleazy antics earlier, but he really came through. And look out, the Sheila Monster has returned in full force! How can she be so frickin' blind :crazy I think she may be certifiably insane if she truly believes she has Willow's best interest at heart. But then again, she already admitted it was because she was feeling judged by her town so it is obviously selfish motives. GRRR!!!

Can't wait to see what happens with Ira and Sheila's showdown. I have a feeling Ira will be laying some sense into his wife and hopefully opening her eys to just how hurtful she has been to their youngest child.

Great update and can't wait for the next!

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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (11/06/11)

Postby wimpy0729 » Sun Nov 06, 2011 3:01 pm

OMG OMG All that excitement and action, emotional extravaganza. You totally made my blood pressure go through the roof! This whole scenario with Robby was crazy, and I'm soo glad Grayson stood up for Willow and then told Sheila off. And I'm super glad Nanna told her off too. But the whole Sheila/Willow/Tara part made me very upset and sad. I'm glad Tara stood up for Willow here too and that Willow told Sheila a thing or two, but you wrote it so well that it gave me tummy rumblings, and that's definitely a mark of an amazing writer. I'm happy Ira finally decided to grow a pair, and maybe, just maybe, Sheila won't be such an ass.

But seriously, leaving our girls all upset, all the turmoil, man, my head is spinning and my heart is really aching. If I was Willow and Tara, I'd be heading out on the first plane I could get, no ifs, ands or buts.

Oh, can I just add that I wish Nanna would've slapped Sheila, since she slapped Grayson, but he couldn't hit his mother, but her mother could've, so you know, yeah, that would've been sweet. lol

Great job again!


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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (11/06/11)

Postby Grimm » Sun Nov 06, 2011 4:20 pm

I vote yes to the Shelia slappage...that would be very much of the good!
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (11/06/11)

Postby AstronSoul » Sun Nov 06, 2011 4:23 pm

I have to agree, she needs to get slapped!
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (11/06/11)

Postby Babbles4Twillow » Sun Nov 06, 2011 4:27 pm

I'm on this train too! Someone needs to bitch-slap her!! Oh geez...Sheila seems to be bringing out my inner sailor today.
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (11/06/11)

Postby Nenyath » Mon Nov 07, 2011 1:11 am

I'm not terrible good at the feedback these days, but let me just assure you hat I have been and am enjoying this story immensely! One should think that Tara being famous would be the biggest problem the two would have, not Sheila! Makes me so happy to have a mother who told that all she ever would want for her children was for them to be happy!

Keep it up, I'm always checking hoping for a new chapter, Monday seems to have gotten off from a good start! Go Grayson, by the way, I had not expected him to be the hero, nice turn!

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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (11/06/11)

Postby beautiful_love » Mon Nov 07, 2011 5:16 pm

Ok Shelby I think this, even though it was quite angst-y, was my favorite thing that you've written so far. It was very well done and I just want to take a moment here to give you a golf clap. :clap Ok that's not a golf clap but it's the closest one on here.

So I'm pretty sure I already mentioned it but God Robby's a dick! And I completely take back any bad thought I had about Grayson. There's just something about protecting your younger siblings. You'll do anything for them and if they get hurt, you're going to fucking kill whatever or whoever hurt them.

“NOW ROBERT, because if you say another word, I’m going to unleash ALL of these boys on you and I don’t think you want that kind of pain. Do you understand me?”


I think my dad actually said something similar once when my sister and I were chomping at the bit against someone who really deserved a swift ass kicking. But I love that Grayson stood up for her, not only against Robby but against Sheila too. God she's a bitch! I'm really curious what Ira's going to say to her, if you're planning on showing that.

And I love the whole 'Family' dialoge you used and how you spun it. It just made my heart melt for the girls all over again. Go Tara for standing up for her girl! I'm so looking foward to what's coming up next.
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (11/06/11)

Postby vampyregurl73 » Mon Nov 07, 2011 10:41 pm

Shel,

Grayson was actually my first thought, since he was already kinda watching Robby anyway, and the way both Robby and Sheila reacted is just appalling - but the fact that her own mother yelled at her was kinda cool.

I can't wait to see what Ira does, and I loved the turnabout of the "Family" episode bit.

You keep me coming back for more.
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (11/06/11)

Postby Mgraham93 » Fri Nov 11, 2011 3:25 am

Woo go Grayson glad robby got his arse handed to him. I really hope that's the last we see of him

“Sheila!” Nanna Addy was appalled, “How could you? I raised you with an open mind and you pull something like this? This is about as low as it gets! You could have gotten Willow killed! This boy is clearly unstable.”
Go Nana Adele

Tara could no longer hold it in, “If I care about Willow?” She said Indignantly, “I love Willow and I respect whatever decision she makes, but I won’t stand idly by and watch you bully her into making a decision that she is clearly not ready to make. You’re hurting her and I won’t allow that!”
Go Tara, Go Tara protecting her girl woo

“Well, if this is your best, then you are in serious trouble. I don’t want to be tolerated. I want to be loved and accepted. I just…I just want to be Willow, this is who I am, but you can’t seem to get it through that through your thick skull. Well let me spell it out for you Mom…I’m gay. G-A-Y! As in lesbian-I-don’t-live-in boys-town-never-will, no matter how many you try and set me up. Like it or not THIS is who I am! You rolled the dice with a fifth kid and this is what you got. So sorry to disappoint you-”
Go Willow, Go Willow Fighting back against the evil Sheila monster and making her position completely clear Woo

After that cheering let's see I liked the spin on 'Family' and I liked Ira getting Robby the hell away before Total Rosenberg fury was unleashed on him- as nice as it would have been to see the consequences wouldn't have been too good.
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (11/06/11)

Postby Ariel » Fri Nov 11, 2011 8:40 am

Shelby,

This was incredibly emotional and powerful with a real catharsis at the end.

You structured the fight perfectly. First, that it's Grayson, Mommy's favorite the kind of shallow guy with the bimbo girlfriend who has done a bit of flirting with Tara AND who leaps into battle when her sister is threatened. His new understanding is totally believable ( :applause ) and how he expresses it makes sense, too! Back to the fight structure. So Grayson's comments,
“How’s if feel to be held down against your will, you fucking bastard!” Grayson shouted as he repeatedly punched Robby in the face; landing several strong blows.
Perfect dialogue showing that Grayson gets it down deep. Okay, back to the fight structure. So Grayson basically takes Robby out then Robby stands and Eli steps in and delivers a blow and then Hunter pushes Robby to the ground. Then IRA steps in and yells and you see Ira ready to jump in himself. You also have Tara running to save Willow AND moving her out of the way in time. Perfect in that everyone is involved with avenging/protecting Willow.

Then the scene in the kitchen, another well-crafted triumph. Sheila's confrontation, her slapping the bruised, bloody face of her favorite son - WHAT A BITCH!!! You set it up perfectly! Then the reverse with Willow getting taken away; have to echo Matty/Mgraham93 on the effective use of the dialogue from Family (one of my favorites, natch!). Beautifully done. Then Tara's defense of Willow AND Willow's declaration of independence about who Tara is in her life; so moving and beautiful.

Don't get me wrong, Shelby. This MOVED me. I can talk about the way you wrote this, analyze it, be totally IMPRESSED by it BUT I was angry, touched, teary, and relieved.

Great work, heartfelt, effective, powerful writing. :bow :bow :bow

So, do I even have to say it? Okay, I'll do it anyway! Keep writing :kgeek

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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (11/06/11)

Postby sacinema » Fri Nov 11, 2011 4:36 pm

Thank you some much for this wonderful story. These last chapters went on even more intense than the other ones before. In the beginning I did think: Okay I'm gonna read this but it might just be another one of these 'Hello-we-pretend-to-know-with-the-troubles-celebreties-are-dealing-with'. This story in the end is so much more. It is intense and shows a lot more. I love how you pointed out the family conflict or more exactly the mother-conflict. Sheila acts like a bitch. Not even her own mother is getting through to her. She is not responsable for the way Robby was acting. But she is responsable for acting her daughter by not taking her and her relationship seriously. Tara is great and so is Grayson, the brothers, grandma and at least Ira. He might be the only one getting through to his wife. He waited until the very last moment to take action. Sometimes this is the best thing to do.

Can't wait to read the next chapters. Thanks again, you are a very skilled story teller.
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