bouncer73:
Hey you got DIBS!
AWESOME update..I was just captivated and saw the whole thing play out in my head..and it was in HD too..lol..
Lol, I’m glad my details are working:) Sometimes I think I go overboard and ramble a little too much.
Tara’s house is awesome! Beautiful, yet cozy at the same time…I guess I’n channeling my inner dream house in this fic, lol
Thanks for the feedback!
Promthea128:
I'm wondering when the fecal matter is going to collide with the rotating cooling device, the Paparazzi demons and Morgan's monster.
Ahhh and what a big mess that will make! Let’s hope it’s not a combination of the two.
Thanks for reading and the feedback!
SMGOVAN:
I loooooooved the T-shirt in this update...as any True Star Wars geek should
That’s one of my favorite funny T’s!
Hey, is there a "team Alice" T-shirt out there?
I don’t know and I’m not a huge Twillight fan…but I do love Alice!!
Answers to The Willster’s torrid past coming up! Thanks, I’m glad you liked the chapter!!
LonelyTara:
I'm glad that Willow's team mates realize that Morgan is not a nice girl.
Well, they know, but they feel they need to keep the peace otherwise they can’t function as a team. I think that over the years, they’ve become very good at reeling her in.
I can't wait until the two of them get to try out that tub
That seems to be a common theme in this stream of feedback!
Thanks for the feedback!
Ariel:
The little moments, the details, that's what I call the 'thunk' of reality; the sense of a real world. Love it!
I’m glad you liked it! Not to toot my own horn here, but that was actually one of my favorite moments in this chapter, because I could really picture her standing there picking at that glove completely lost in thought and bored out of her mind. Willow loves playing and she excels, but I think she might be starting to lose interest…senioritis or Taraitis maybe?
Willow, the glamor girl who puts the bad in bad wardrobe!
That’s our girl! Some things even stretch to the AU, lol Even though her wardrobe was truly hideous, especially in HS, I always loved that Willow wore it proudly, right down to her fuzzy smiley face back pack. In this case, she is nervous and feeling a little out of her league, yet she doesn’t bother to change and make herself ‘presentable.’ All the more reason to love her!
Thanks Ariel! I always look forward to your feedback!
Vampyregurl:
Well, if that wasn't a big "SHE'S A FREAKIN' STAR" moment
I felt like, up to this point, Willow wasn’t seeing the big picture. Tara had been to her apt, her game, her party and met her friends. Willow kinda lost track of reality until getting this little glimpse of ‘Tara Macaly.’ A few chapters ago, Willow thought Tara was ‘unpretentious,’ not that she’s pretentious, but I believe in Willow’s head she expected a basic house and got slapped in the face with, holy shit she IS a freakin’ star.
I feel for Willow here, it's not that she's isn't as celebrated, she is, just differently (and probably not as handsomely financially), but it's the awe of the situation.
Unfortunately for Willow, she’s on scholarship. Which means she can’t work, endorse products or accept money/gifts. Otherwise, she risks her eligibility. That’s the conundrum of collegiate sports, especially for women since they don’t really have the option of stepping into the professional sports world and making millions. Kinda sucks.
But I think I might actually be willing, or coerced into doing horrible things for a bathroom like hers... horrible, horrible things
Ditto! I definitely have bathroom envy!
Thanks for the feedback!
singgirl:
You’re welcome!
Laragh:
I'm not even gonna touch on Morgan 'cause she's such a bitch, my blood boils.
She even gives Cordelia a run for her money!
As a massive geek, I salute you for this.
I’m right there with you, lol. I think it’s safe to say that Willow has always done a wonderful job of channeling our inner geekyness!
Thanks! More coming up!!
Zampsa19752001:
I’m already writing it…in my head, lolCan't wait for Willow & Tara to "test drive" the tub
Thanks for the feedback!
deviantArt:
I was wondering if Willow is such a good player and having lots of success doesn't she has money too ?
The winner's competition doesn't get money ???
Unfortunately for Willow, she’s on scholarship. Which means she can’t work, endorse products or accept money/gifts. Otherwise, she risks her eligibility. Bummer:(
Thanks for the comments!
JustSkipIt:
So... first my condolences on posting a chapter shortly before EasierSaid.
Hahahahahahahahaha….I know, right? It took 40 minutes for someone to call dibs on RR…then I noticed the Neverland notification in my inbox. It was an ‘ah ha’ moment, lol
I'm guessing Morgan had a thing for Will and it didn't happen and Morgan's still jealous? Still, she doesn't have to be a bitch.
Our little Morgan has unresolved issues and if she can’t have Willow…then the claws come out! There’s more explanation in the next update.
Metal…damn it! I meant to clarify and I guess I forgot. My bad. I’ll go back and fix it. Which makes it about 100x worse that she was wearing them!!! LolWalking with cleats on the floor? Metal spikes or plastic cleats? Either way, get those the hell off.
Did Tara cook or does she have a cook or did she order in?
She cooked, we’ll see that in the next chapter. On a side note…my Tara will NOT EVER make friggin’ pancakes! Lol This poor girl made them twice in the show? And now she’s stuck in a virtual pancake hell dimension in the fan fic world…eternally doomed to a life of flipping pancakes, lol No offense to anyone that has written her cooking pancakes…I just think it’s funny.
And I’ll be eagerly awaiting your next round of feedback:)
wimpy0729:
Okay, first I gotta say the title of this chapter was a bit of a tease and had my mind going to naughty places..
LOL…that was the fun in naming this chapter! Teasy McTease!
Man, you did an amazing job describing Tara's home.
Thanks! I think I actually got a little jealous writing it.
I hate the thought of Willow feeling insecure
Me too, but I think it’s to be expected. Mild mannered college student vs. ultra mega star, but I think Tara realizes that it’s a big deal and is focused on making Willow feel secure and on the same plane emotionally. Tara also has similar feelings of insecurity, but in reverse. If that makes any sense at all.
Rest assured…the tub will eventually be used…*wink, wink*
[u]Wayland
I have a habit of skimming over descriptive passages, but I wasn't tempted to here. Partly because it was well written and partly because it was so important to the story. It was a perfect illustration of the differences they have to overcome. By the end of the update I had such a clear picture of Tara's home and the way it left Willow feeling a bit daunted and awkward. Personally, I'd prefer her little apartment any day.
Thank you, I really appreciate that! I kinda feel like you in regards to preferring Willow’s apartment. It’s small, cozy and private. Tara’s not pretentious, but she does like nice things and with that level of stardom…a nice crib is sort of expected. I think Willow will eventually adjust.
I'm interested to see how you tell Morgan and Willow's history. The way you've written Willow, I can't see her tolerating such behaviour without some good reasons.
The relationship issues will be explained in the next update, well, some of them. I don’t think Morgan always acts up and being teammates and having to coexist like a family of sorts, I think has made Willow more tolerant of her questionable behavior.
Thanks as always for the feedback!!
[u]Foomatic
I usually like my fics heavy on the angst side, but this is a welcome departure from all that doom and gloom! You've got a fun playful vibe that I'm enjoying a lot.
Thanks Foo! I like the angst stuff as well, but I’m not sure that I could write it, lol
Everything's all cute and cuddly now but I have a feeling that things are going to get pretty hairy the deeper W & T get into their relationship.
Yeah, as in real life, things can’t always be all sunshine and rainbows. As much as we all have that fantasy…reality always seems to slip in there somewhere.
I’m glad you liked it and thanks for reading!!
[u]KioNewgo
I really loved this. It seems (to me) to show Willow's insecurities and her deepening feelings for Tara.
My Willow is used to being confident, especially on the softball field, but in the world of dating…she’s finding it difficult and she’s not really sure how to deal with it. At this point she just needed reassurance and luckily for here, Tara was there to give it to her:) Sometimes we all just need a hug!
Thanks for continuing to read! Some things will be revealed in the next chapter!!!

Loved to see Tara cooking for Willow, and Willow being adorable with Ralphie.
... If I was a betting woman, I'd put my money on Morgan outing our girls to the world in an act of extreme jealousy....time will tell. 
) or, which I suspect is more likely, will the paparazzi get a tip off from a certain annoying Morgan and an intimate photo of the two be published..

..oh wow..that was simply AWESOME..I have to admit this story is definitely one of my top favorites. Its amazing and the story is still at the beginning so to speak..so much willow and tara goodness to follow..




for the 'girlfriend' slip. I love it when little moments like that pop up!