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[wimpy0729]

Wow, that was exciting and very interesting. I'm very anxious to see what exactly went on here. Does Willow have something going on that even she doesn't know about? Hmm.

Can't wait for more!


Wimpy

[love_2003]

Loved the update. I'm confused as to what exactly happened in the cabin with Willow and Dimitry. Does she have something in her blood that hurts vampires? Looking forward to Tara's reaction when she learns what happened.

[hellogoodbye]

Hey, just started reading this and love it! Can't wait for the next update.

[WiccanHandprintz]

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[vampyregurl73]

Nice update, and am I getting dibs? Such a funny concept.

I really am curious about Willow and am looking forward to what Tara's family can possibly reveal about her.

[LonelyTara]

Happy coming out day to you too! (From one big queer to another, LOL) This was a really powerful moment between them. I really enjoyed the synchronicity of their thoughts:

Instead, she just took the redhead’s hand and laced their fingers together and held on tight, held on, held on...

“Where are we?” Willow asked, and when Tara shot her a sideways glance as they walked, her face was very white. Just hold on, she thought, squeezing the cold fingers. Just hold on a little bit longer.

I'm worried about the place Tara's thoughts are leading her. The vamps will know she couldn't have done that to Dimitri. She has to realize if she doesn't take Willow with her, they'll go after her and she won't stand a chance.

[Cyteach]

Wow! This story is AMAZING! I just read the whole thing in one sitting and I don't know where to start...

Someone mentioned Tara is a combination of her and Faith... I think it's am apt description, especially with Tara trying to close off herself from Willow after the latest run-in with Dimitry.

Something I've been speculating about... Is Giles' role in bringing Willow and Tara together some sort of prophecy-fulfilling attempt on his part? We all know he was prone to that on the show.... Hmmm. There has to be some reason he brought them together, two women he sees as daughter figures.

Again, this is an amazing fic and I can't wait to read some more. Your characterizations are different (which is awesome) and both backstories are intriguing

Can't wait to read more!

[FIRESIGN]

Absolutely wonderful fic! Can't wait to read more!

Keep up the great work -


FIRESIGN
aka Cin

[WolfDragonGod]

great update

[love_2003]

Loved the update. Hoping someone is able to help Willow and Tara find some answers.

[Grimm]

AWWWWWWWWWESOME!! Great story.. Very, very well written. I can't wait 2 find out what kind of bad ass mojo the Willster has going.

[truck_driving_magic_mama]

Hey there!

I love this one. It's interesting, full of drama and action, but with emotional substance, and is very hot. I can't wait for more, and to find out what's up with willow - my bet, she's a witch (*gasp!*). Either way, I also can't wait for some sexy moments between these two. I love how Tara's sheild keeps cracking next to Willow.

cheers,

Melissa

[Grimm]

New month... same shameful begging.....Please, please, please update soon!!

[LittleBit]

Loved both updates ... but still curious as to how Willow did whatever it was that she did!!!

[sapphoselene]

i absolutely adore the intricate twists and turns that you are building into this story. you have a great imagination.

i am waiting to see where the story goes next.

{i shamelessly request many more }

[Zampsa1975]

Yay for great update-y goodness... I wonder if Giles is responsible for the anti-vampire "surprise" that Willow has... I truly hope that Willow very quickly breaks down Tara's protective walls so that Tara freely enjoys loving Willow...

[WiccanHandprintz]

Hey, guys, sorry for the long wait! It's finals time, and I'm also doing NaNoWriMo (28,200 words as of yesterday!), so it's been kind of difficult to get time to work on this story. But I have a chapter half-written, and I swear by Amber Benson's hotness that I'll have it posted tonight. You're all awesome and probably really attractive as well, so just remember to pause your awesome/attractive lives for a bit later this evening to read and comment.

[Cyteach]

I'll be waiting patiently

[WiccanHandprintz]

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[angieb86]

DIBS!!!!

Beautiful!

I sure have missed this story, glad to have you back!!

Can't wait for the family "reunion" so to speak, LOL.

Best,
Angela

[Cyteach]

Wow... Such a short, poignant update rife with unanswered questions and a character study of both Willow and Tara

I absolutely loved this:

“I shouldn’t have done that,” Tara whispered. Willow licked her lower lip, trying to recapture the cool, bittersweet taste of Tara, like dark chocolate. Those blue eyes flickered down, watching her tongue’s quick movements, and Willow had to swallow.

“You keep playing me hot and cold,” Willow breathed in response, the fear and confusion and uncertainty all gone in favor of just this, just this moment. “What are we, Tara? What is this?” There was another pause, pregnant, everything waiting.

“I can’t promise you anything,” Tara said at last, and there was something broken in her eyes. “You need to understand, really understand, that – I am not anyone you should rely on. For anything, but especially for...”

“I’m not asking for a future,” Willow said, filling her silence. “I’m asking for a present, for as long as we can have it.” Tara looked at her, searching, and then closed her eyes. She shook her head, tilting it back, the conflict visible on her strong, lovely face.

“Fuck it,” she said to the black star-dotted sky. And then she bent her head to Willow’s and kissed her and nothing else mattered.

Simply amazing... you've recaptured everything that has happened in this story in these few lines..

Beautiful, beautiful writing....

(P.S. I like this update if you couldn't tell )

Hope to see more soon!

[LonelyTara]

Lovely, just lovely, wonderful to see this fic back with an update. Congrats to you on the Nanowrimo...I signed up but I didn't have the discipline to put my fics on pause...It's only the 15th...maybe I can still catch up...any way, beautiful update, I can't wait to see what happens next!

[Grimm]

Thank you for this wonderful update. I can't wait to find out the source of Willow's powers. Poor Tara... I hope she stops torturing herself and comes 2 terms with her feelings for Willow. She's done...just give in 2 it....

[love_2003]

Loved the update. Happy to see that Willow finally expressed her feelings to Tara and that Tara seems to reciprocate them. Looking forward to Willow meeting Tara's clan.
Patiently waiting for the next update.

[Zampsa1975]

Yay for great update-y goodness... I hope Willow tells Tara about how she really killed Dimitry... Big yay for Tara surrendering to her feelings for Willow. I hope she really allows herself to love Willow and allow Willow to love her...

[mishki]

Awesome! (again)
I love that Willow knows more about what happened with Dimitri than we (or Tara) first heard. Sounds like it's not something she's ever experienced before -- although we'll see, I guess. Very interesting.
Mmm, angsty sexual tension. Hope there's some action before the clan (or enemies) appear!

[Promthea128]

An update! Yay!! What, oh what could be Will's power? Glad that they are finally abandoning caution and admitting their feelings.

[vampyregurl73]

Another wonderful update!

“I’m not asking for a future,” Willow said, filling her silence. “I’m asking for a present, for as long as we can have it.” Tara looked at her, searching, and then closed her eyes. She shook her head, tilting it back, the conflict visible on her strong, lovely face.

“Fuck it,” she said to the black star-dotted sky. And then she bent her head to Willow’s and kissed her and nothing else mattered.

So it's finally out there! It is what it is, and let's just enjoy it while we can.

I still want to know what Willow is, if Giles sent her for that specific reason, and how much he knows about what he sent them into. More please!

[LittleBit]

[blockquote]"Fuck it"[/blockquote]

Sometimes that's the only words for what you need to say! Keep up the great writing!

[shiraz]

This is a superb story! I read the whole thing over a day and I'm really enjoying your strong, vivid writing style. The tension of their attraction in the first few chapters was delicious and when that dam finally burst...well damn!! Tara's just HOT and she's my fave so I really love it when authors pick up on the strength that was always there and build on it in unique and sexy ways. Willow is great too. Full of lethal potential and her own cockiness is starting to come forward as she taps into the power of mutual attractions and begins to assert herself.

Exceedingly well done and Please Keep Writing! This is wonderful

Shiraz