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New fic - Lovestoned [Complete]

Postby Mrs. Pineapple » Thu Oct 21, 2010 2:14 am

So, I finally decided to post some fanfic. It’s my first, so I don’t know if it’s any good. It’s a shortfic. Updates on Thursday and Sunday. Thanks for reading!

• Title – Lovestoned (AU)
• Author – Mrs. Pineapple aka Helena
• Rating – PG for now
• Disclaimer - I don’t owe anything, all rights to Joss Whedon and ME (damn...)
• Feedback - Yes please!!
• Spoilers - None
• Summary – Simple lust turns into love, the complicated, messy kind
• Notes – A big thanks to my beta, Ariel. Couldn’t have done it without you!

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CHAPTER 1

Tara sighed as she entered her apartment, wet blonde tresses clinging to her face. She’d sworn it wasn’t going to rain as she exited the office, but clearly she’d been proven wrong. She sighed once more as she put her laptop bag on the table in front of her. Putting her hands on her hips, she took a moment to collect her thoughts.

“Now, what could possibly make this crappy day any better?” She spoke to the empty room. Chewing her lip in search of an answer, she finally smiled. Opening her shoulder bag, she produced her phone and quickly dialled the number. Impatiently strumming her fingers, she waited for someone to pick up.

“Hey, it’s me!” She said at last

“Yeah, are you free tonight?” She paused to listen. “Okay, how about 8 o’clock, my place? Great, thanks!”

She ended the call, a satisfied smile playing on her lips. Willow would make her day better.

*****
Half an hour later, Tara was quietly reading a magazine while chewing her food. She had resolved to whip up a quick dinner before Willow arrived. She smiled at the thought. It had been a good idea to call the redhead.

Working for a small but upcoming law firm, Tara Maclay had more than a fulltime job. When she came home around 6.30, she was often very tired and had to push herself just to cook a meal; which is exactly why she had resolved never to get into a serious relationship. She simply didn’t have time for that kind of commitment.

Lucky for her though, Willow had the exact same ‘problem’, and so they had quickly become, what the redhead accurately described as ‘sex-partners’. They called each other at irregular intervals, and though Tara had to admit they had amazing chemistry, that’s where it ended. They didn’t go out for dates and they practically knew nothing about each other, their mutual wish to stay single aside.

It was just for the best, Tara resumed. At times like this, when she had had a crappy day, or when she was really horny, she’d simply call Willow, and they’d always end up more or less satisfied.

She was torn from her musings by a knock on the door. Is it time already? After a quick glance at the clock, she saw it was indeed 8 o’clock, and after pushing aside her empty plate, she moved to open the door.

What she saw there, as always, took her breath away.

“Hey gorgeous, care to let me in?”

Smirking at the double entendre, Tara led the redhead to her bedroom, where they quickly got lost in each other.

*****
Both women groaned, relaxing as they came down from their mutual high. Tara sighed and closed her eyes briefly, indulging herself for a moment in the redhead’s warm embrace. As always, it had been amazing. Without a lot of preamble, the two women had fucked each other into delirium. Smiling lazily, she opened her eyes, feeling only slightly disgruntled as she felt Willow’s warmth moving away from her.

“Leaving already?” She mumbled tiredly

She received a smirk and a raised eyebrow from the redhead, who was searching for her clothes scattered on the floor, before she answered.

“I have an early meeting tomorrow, and you really wore me out this time. It would be a really bad idea to stay right now.”

The blonde nodded, only getting half of the redhead’s response as she was already halfway to dreamland.

This was rewarded by a sweet smile from Willow, who, now fully clothed, kissed Tara’s forehead briefly before leaving the room.

*****

Tara groaned as her alarm woke her at 7.30 the next morning. Fumbling for a moment, she shut down the alarm and snuggled under the covers once more. After 5 minutes of snoozing however, she decided she should really get up.

Going through her morning routine, her mind wandered to the previous evening. She had known Willow for nearly a year, but still they shared the passion they had shared on the night they had met. Tara smiled softly at the thought. That night Tara had had a rare attack of feeling lonely, and, determined not to have it spoil her evening, she had decided to go out.

And then there had been Willow.

Tara had been watching the smaller woman for a while, before the redhead joined her at the bar. After too much booze and some outrageous flirting, the two had ended up at Willow’s apartment. Despite the amount of alcohol the redhead had made her drink that night, Tara hadn’t been able to forget the way Willow had made her feel. Alive, energized.

After another run-in with the redhead and the subsequent nakedness, they had traded phone-numbers, and after a month or so, she had received a call from the redhead.

It was great, because they always made sure that they took enough time between each rendezvous, so it never became a routine; which, according to the two of them, would take the fire out of it.

Tara shook her head as she steered her thoughts away from the gorgeous redhead, to the enormous amount of work she’d have to get done today.

Well at least it’s not raining.
*****
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Re: New fic - Lovestoned

Postby BuffyFan4ever » Thu Oct 21, 2010 4:32 am

Dibs.

Congratulations on your first fanfic.

Interesting Idea. I definitely want to read more.
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Re: New fic - Lovestoned

Postby DaddyCatALSO » Thu Oct 21, 2010 5:26 am

IT does tend to happen; you think you're just sharing "a little chairty whocka-whocka"* and emotions start dropping all over and tripping you up.

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Re: New fic - Lovestoned

Postby vampyregurl73 » Thu Oct 21, 2010 5:55 am

Interesting, curious to see where you go with this.

Sometimes f*@kbuddies happen for a reason - to be more of a reason....;) ... or in some cases to show you exactly why should run in the opposite direction as quickly as possible as soon as possible! Kinda like a litmus test....lolol
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Re: New fic - Lovestoned

Postby KioNewgo » Thu Oct 21, 2010 6:36 am

I like the idea, I can't wait to see where you go with it :).
I was suprised that this is your first, it's extremely well written, and as I said, the concept it interesting :).
Looking forward to the next update :D.
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Re: New fic - Lovestoned

Postby LonelyTara » Thu Oct 21, 2010 6:52 am

Looking forward to more!
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Re: New fic - Lovestoned

Postby wimpy0729 » Thu Oct 21, 2010 7:03 am

Oh boy, a new story! Like the others, I think this is interesting and can't wait to see where you go with it. In my mind, it's kind of hard picturing these 2 as just FB's, so I'm very curious to see the twists and turns you give us to get them beyond that. Good job. More please.


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Re: New fic - Lovestoned

Postby Laragh » Thu Oct 21, 2010 9:03 am

Ooh, interesting.

Like wimpy, I always struggle a little in seeing them just as sex partners, but I like the possibilities for this.

Those darn messy feelings ruining everything.

I like how you alluded to feelings already being there, even by something simple like the forehead kiss.

Looking forward to seeing how this goes!

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Re: New fic - Lovestoned

Postby *WILLOW* » Thu Oct 21, 2010 12:40 pm

Oh this was very interesting. And although they are just currently F'buddies this chapter was also very cute. The kiss on the forehead was soo touching. I cant wait to read more.
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Re: New fic - Lovestoned

Postby Ariel » Thu Oct 21, 2010 1:05 pm

Helena,

You are an amazing writer - can't believe you ever hesitated to post!

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Re: New fic - Lovestoned

Postby sacinema » Fri Oct 22, 2010 5:17 am

Hey Mrs Pineapple, really great idea and wonderfully written. I hope we'll see a lot more of this fic soon. I love the idea of them being f*buddies and nothing more, even if there are feelings deep down. It is refreshing that you skipped the fluffy we-are-learning-to-know-each-other-and-fall-in-love-before-we-share-some-really-hot-intemacy stuff. Don't get me wrong, it is nice, too. But I do love some down to earth plot like your's once in a while. So thanks for giving this to us.

Wonder what Willow's business is. Can't wait to see the next update.
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Re: New fic - Lovestoned

Postby ceridwen » Fri Oct 22, 2010 3:16 pm

Very interesting concept. I'd love to see how lust turns into love.

Question: Is this story already finished or are you still writing it?

Can't wait till Sunday :grin
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Re: New fic - Lovestoned

Postby Mrs. Pineapple » Sun Oct 24, 2010 1:40 am

Hi Kittens! Thanks for all the wonderful reactions. I’ve been on the KB for some time now, but still, first fanfic is a pretty big step.

BuffyFan4ever: Thanks! The idea in itself is pretty basic, I’m actually surprised no-one did it before me. But it’s something different than, ‘they meet, become friends and fall in love’. I’m kinda doing it the other way around. Enjoy the next update!

DaddyCatALSO: That does tend to happen, doesn’t it? Love and the world of messy feelings... *sigh* Yes, I’m a romantic. So sue me.

vampyregurl73: I’m a firm believer that everything happens for a reason, even coincidence. *Scratches her chin*. Okay, so maybe that didn’t make any sense. But you’re right, sometimes it’s best to just run far, far away. But then again, we’re talking W/T here, which falls under an entire different category ;).

KioNewgo: Thanks for the compliment! I’ve written some fics before this, but this is the first time I felt brave enough to post something. I thought I’d start out with a short fic, see how it goes... Enjoy the next bit!

LonelyTara: Thanks. Me too, actually, for your fics. I’m always a bit lazy in terms of leaving feedback (really, it’s in my New Year’s resolutions: “leave more feedback on KB”). But I really enjoy reading your fics.

wimpy0729: There are suddenly a lot of new fics, aren’t there? But I thought, what the heck. Completely with you on the FB’s. When I was making the outline of the story I wondered lots of times if that would be realistic. Still, I hope you’ll like it.

Laragh: Like I said to wimpy, I sometimes wondered if it was really a good idea when I was writing this story. Like I said, this is my first fic, so I don’t know if I’m doing this right. But I wanted to take another perspective for once. The kiss on the forehead wasn’t really anything I planned; sometimes I had to really watch myself not to write those loving gestures. But, it always works out in the end ;). That’s why we love KB.

*WILLOW*: Glad you liked it. More cuteness yet to come, after they get over some obstacles. I hope you like the next chapter.

Ariel: Well what would I be without my beta, huh? I noticed just having one is incredibly motivating. That’s probably why I never posted. Well, I posted the first chapter of another fic on Beta Pens once, but I removed it after one day because no-one had reacted yet :p. I know, silly me. Suppose I just had to get over that fear...

sacinema: My thoughts exactly! About the fluffy getting to know each other stage. I thought I’d write their love story from a completely different starting point. F’buddies is a fairly new concept, but I thought: “why not make it a W/T fic?” I hope you like the end result.

ceridwen: Thanks! I’ve already finished this fic. I’ve been known to start writing something and never finish. Since I hate it when I have to wait so long for great fics, I decided I wanted to have this finished before I started posting. I turned out to be easier that I thought it would be. Enjoy!
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Re: New fic - Lovestoned

Postby Mrs. Pineapple » Sun Oct 24, 2010 1:47 am

• Title – Lovestoned (AU)
• Author - Mrs. Pineapple aka Helena
• Rating - PG (for thoughts?)
• Disclaimer - I don’t owe anything, all rights to Joss Whedon and ME (damn...)
• Feedback - Yes please!!
• Spoilers - None
• Summary - Simple lust turns to love, the complicated, messy kind
• Notes - Thanks very much for reading

CHAPTER 2

Willow sighed in frustration as she typed in another code, trying to finally get it right this time. As the youngest member of a giant computer firm, she often had little annoying problems that just didn’t seem to go away. She had worked hard to get this far and she would not let those 1’s an 0’s get in her way. Not as long as she was Willow Rosenberg.

Willow’s mind, however, seemed occupied with other things. She huffed as another image of naked body parts assaulted her mind. Great. Just great. You have to fix this lousy programming and all you think about is naked Tara.

She put her head in her hands, defeated. Last night had been hot. So hot, Willow had trouble concentrating. She found herself eyeing the phone next to her screen, her fingers strumming on the desk. She could call the blonde. Ask her if she wanted to go again. They had done more than one night in a row in the past. The redhead still held the record at four. She smirked as she remembered that crazy week, their frenzied passion.

I should call her. Then maybe I’ll be able to put my mind of it.

Willow smiled as she picked up the phone. She didn’t care if it was a lousy excuse, she’d been horny all day and something needed to be done.

She sat back in her chair and twiddled with the wire, impatiently waiting.

“Hey you.” She said, her voice immediately turning husky.

“Willow!” The surprise in Tara’s voice only lasted a moment, before she continued, voice laced with mirth. “Feeling frisky?”

Willow blushed. “Yeah, I had um, trouble concentrating...” She trailed off nervously, hoping the blonde would get the message.

Tara chuckled. “Well,” she sighed. “I suppose I could come over.”

“Yes please!” The redhead answered, feeling better already. “Would 8 be good for you?”

The blonde bit her lip for a moment, contemplating her schedule, before answering. “That’s okay. I kind of have to work late today, though. I can’t get out of here till 7.30.”

“That’s okay!” Willow quickly replied. “I can get us some pizza, or – you know – do the cooking thing.” She relaxed slightly as she heard Tara giggle lightly at the other end. “You can eat here before we, you know...” She trailed of again, blushing furiously.

She shook her head. Get a grip, Rosenberg, she’s seen you naked more than once.

“Fine with me!” The blonde answered, shaking Willow from her thoughts.

“Okay,” Willow said. “See you around 8 then?”

“Around 8,” Tara confirmed, before breaking the connection.

Willow smiled as she returned to her work. While her thoughts kept drifting of, she had cracked the code in a matter of minutes.

Huh. She thought. Taking a break really does help.

******

At exactly a quarter to 8, the doorbell rang. Willow raced to open the door, and smiled at the sight of Tara, hardly recognizable in her oversized raincoat, one hand in her pocket and the other one shaking raindrops off of her umbrella. Strangely, the blonde had still managed to get wet.

Willow smirked at the naughty thought. We’ll see about that.

“Come in, you’re just in time for pizza.” The blonde shot Willow a grateful smile as she entered the warmth of the apartment. Heavenly smells emanated from the kitchen, and her mouth watered as she shrugged off her raincoat.

“Here, let me get that.” The redhead took Tara’s raincoat to dry.

Tara, meanwhile, took the time to take in the apartment. She had never really looked around, as she had spent most of the time in the bedroom. Oh yeah.

It was nice, actually, and surprisingly small for someone who could undoubtedly afford much better. But then again, the redhead probably preferred a small, cosy apartment that needed little maintenance because, just like Tara, she wouldn’t have the time to excessively take care of the place.

She was torn from her musings by Willow, who quickly ushered her to the kitchen, where a large pepperoni pizza was waiting for them.

“Mmm, pepperoni, my favourite,” Tara said, as she took a seat at the small kitchen table. The redhead smiled as she took a piece, watching Tara do the same.

“Yeah, I’d forgotten to ask what you liked, but I figured you can’t go wrong with pepperoni.”

“True,” Tara nodded as she chewed appreciatively. Her smile grew naughty as she continued, “and it helps to work up an appetite for this evening.” She eyed the redhead innocently, while sexily running her tongue over her lips, wiping away some tomato sauce.

Willow felt the room temperature begin to rise, and wondered if they’d be able to eat the whole pizza before eating each other. Her voice trembled slightly as she answered, “you know, I always thought pizza is a very powerful aphrodisiac.” She smiled as she saw Tara’s smirk go wide. Willow gulped as she watched the blonde lean over the table offering the redhead a slice, while Willow’s eyes were drawn to the blonde’s cleavage that was now in full exposure. Her eyes were still wide as she took a bite from the offered slice, licking her lips afterwards.

Tara’s smile was full-blown now. Delighted the redhead wanted to join her little game, she looked Willow straight in the eye as she brought the slice to her own mouth, moaning appreciatively at the taste.

The redhead clenched her thighs together at the sexy display. This wouldn’t take long at all. She was already incredibly turned on, and by the blonde’s dark, lidded expression, she could tell Tara felt the same.

Suddenly, she stood, and with a smooth movement, she pulled Tara from her chair into her arms, kissing her hard. The pizza lay forgotten beside them.

As they pulled apart, their faces were flushed from the intense kiss.

“My room.” Willow demanded. “Now.”

******
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Re: New fic - Lovestoned

Postby lonelylanding » Sun Oct 24, 2010 2:21 am

I was wondering how you were going to bring up an opportunity for them to get to know eachother on a more personal basis. I liked that you started them with something simple like eating pizza, granted it didn't slow them down for long, but they both were able to learn something about eachother though it was small. I felt that it was understated and very well done. :) I'll be waiting for the next update, nice job!
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Re: New fic - Lovestoned

Postby vampyregurl73 » Sun Oct 24, 2010 3:33 am

Willow’s mind, however, seemed occupied with other things. She huffed as another image of naked body parts assaulted her mind. Great. Just great. You have to fix this lousy programming and all you think about is naked Tara.


Ahhhh, haven't we all been there... not necessarily "Tara" parts, but random naked hottie body parts, after awesome sex...mmmm. *shaking head out of daydream/recollections*

I like that you're A) Using an older version of Willow and Tara, and B) because of that you are bypassing the norm of them falling into the sweet gentle love that becomes all encompassing.

A girls got needs, chemistry can do wonders for jump starting a romance. ;)

PG - thoughts - that in my opinion is strictly up to the writers comfort zone. What are your thoughts? I think it can go either way, or it can be ummmm "graphic" for some of the encounters or all here on out. I've been playing with both graphic and subtle references. You know what's going on, but its not all detailed down to the last stroke and moan. Imagination is good too. - Those are just my thoughts, don't know if it helped any. :)
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Re: New fic - Lovestoned

Postby Laragh » Sun Oct 24, 2010 3:56 am

I have to start off by saying: Pizza is totally an aprodisiac. I don't care what anyone says.

I like what you're doing with this. I envision there's obviously gonna be some obstacles when they start realising they're falling for each other, but it's still all wonderful and cute.

Can't wait for more.

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Re: New fic - Lovestoned

Postby LonelyTara » Sun Oct 24, 2010 6:00 am

First Laragh with the cocoa and now pizza...I love to see the hints of Willow's personality. She still seems to be that sweet, blushing woman that makes her a character to adore, but more comfortable wit her sexuality, which is frankly very hot. I can't wait to see these two get to the point where they realize that their wonderfully passionate lovemaking will be even more so with love truly a part of it. Short but sweet.

“That’s okay!” Willow quickly replied. “I can get us some pizza, or – you know – do the cooking thing.” She relaxed slightly as she heard Tara giggle lightly at the other end. “You can eat here before we, you know...” She trailed of again, blushing furiously.

She shook her head. Get a grip, Rosenberg, she’s seen you naked more than once.


Aw, sweet awkward, somewhat desperately horny Willow. Gotta love it! LOL
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Re: New fic - Lovestoned

Postby Zampsa1975 » Sun Oct 24, 2010 6:21 am

Really interesting story so far... Can't wait for them to realise that they are much more than fuck buddies...
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Re: New fic - Lovestoned

Postby Agilulfa » Sun Oct 24, 2010 6:24 am

This story seems really nice: I like your writing and the inversion of the first friends then lovers routine is a big point in originality. I'm waiting for more!
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Re: New fic - Lovestoned

Postby Ariel » Sun Oct 24, 2010 6:25 am

Helena,

I'll never look at a pepperoni pizza in quite the same way again!

Seriously, we're in the hot zone and the comedy zone at the same time.

Eager for more!!!

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Re: New fic - Lovestoned

Postby wimpy0729 » Sun Oct 24, 2010 7:33 am

Oh yes, I see good signs already. It was funny to imagine Willow trying to work while visions of naked Tara danced in her head. It's ironic to think that although having sex should quell the horniness, for some of us, :blush it only amplifies the urges, and it's a lovely vicious cycle - horny - sex - hornier - sex - sex - super horny - sex - sex - sex!

Anyway, it's nice to see a little indication that they may be beginning to know more about the other than just in the physical sense. I can see lots of bumps in their road ahead and I can't wait for the ride. More soon please.

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Re: New fic - Lovestoned

Postby Mrs. Pineapple » Tue Oct 26, 2010 12:04 am

Thanks again for the wonderful feedback. I’m a bit early, I know, but I have the whole thing finished anyway, so why make you wait, huh?

lonelylanding: Yeah, at this point we’re still pretty much in the ‘less talk, more fucking’ stage. They don’t feel like they should know about each other, y’know? Originally, that’s what the pizza-scene was designed for. However, with the prospect of hot naked sex our girls’ minds are pretty much occupied with other things than getting to know each other. But they’ll get there, don’t worry ;)

vampyregurl73: Naked body parts are parasites for the brain, my friend. They just keep coming! (pardon the pun). Yes, if W/T would’ve been younger it would have been less convincing for them to just ‘have sex’. A first relationship is mostly considered to be a loving one, so a seventeen-year old Willow and Tara being f’buddies would be pretty weird. And thanks for your thoughts. I didn’t really know how to rate this chapter. It’s not very graphic yet, but the innuendo is pretty explicit. Thanks for sharing!

Laragh: Pizza is totally an aphrodisiac. I actually never thought about it before I wrote this chapter, but after I wrote it I realized that it was totally true. Thanks for the praise. There’s gonna be some minor angst in the future, but I’m not gonna take it too far. It’s only a shortfic after all. Hope you enjoy the next update.

LonelyTara: Ah Willow... Gotta love her. And yes, she’s very comfortable with her sexuality. I wanted to write something where the shyness isn’t really a factor for either of them. They’re both confident, strong women who know what they want... Or at least they think so :p.

Zampsa1975: Thanks! And yes, it’s going to take some bumps in the road, but trust me, they’ll get there.

Agilulfa: Glad you like it. And I think that them starting out as f’buddies is really the most original about my story. I said it before: I’m actually surprised that no-one has ever done it before me. Thanks for reading.

Ariel: Yeah, poor pepperoni. I don’t really have a problem, I’m a vegetarian :p. And comedy and hotness, really? If I’d have done that intentionally, it would’ve probably been really hard to write, but now it just went smoothly :p. Yay me!

wimpy0729: A vicious circle o’ horniness, you wouldn’t want to get stuck in it ;). And yes, it’s gonna be a bumpy ride (O god I hate that song). But that’ll prepare them to make the jump :p.
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Re: New fic - Lovestoned

Postby Mrs. Pineapple » Tue Oct 26, 2010 12:07 am

• Title – Lovestoned (AU)
• Author - Mrs. Pineapple aka Helena
• Rating – NC-17 (oh yeah)
• Disclaimer - I don’t owe anything, all rights to Joss Whedon and ME (damn...)
• Feedback - Yes please!!
• Spoilers - None
• Summary – Simple lust turns to love, the complicated, messy kind
• Notes – smut, anyone?


CHAPTER 3

They made it to the bedroom in no time. They were seeking each other out urgently, touching and groping and wanting. Moaning, Willow pushed Tara against her bedroom door, one hand tangled in blonde tresses, the other wandering downwards, squeezing the blondes ass.

Tara groaned and broke the kiss for one second, throwing her shirt over her head before resuming their kiss, her hands seeking out the redhead’s pert breasts. She moaned as she felt Willow’s nipples hardening through the flimsy material of her shirt. Deciding they had a clothing imbalance, her hands left Willow’s chest to divest the redhead of her shirt and bra.

At the same time, the redhead was furiously trying to get the blonde out of her pants, fumbling hands finally popping the button from the hole. Feeling what the redhead was doing, Tara quickly stepped out of her pants, her panties finding their way to the floor just as easily.

After Willow had finally managed to get out of her pants and panties and Tara had freed herself of her bra, they fell on the bed, kissing with mindless passion and moaning as their naked bodies rubbed together.

As Tara was rediscovering Willow’s mouth with her tongue, she pushed her thigh up against the redhead’s center, groaning at how wet it was. She trailed her hands down Willow’s body, kneading the small breasts, being careful to pay attention to the painfully stiff nipples.

Finally prying her lips from Tara’s, Willow quickly rolled Tara underneath her on the bed, making good use of her position on top to suck the blonde’s nipples. Tara sighed in satisfaction, one hand massaging the redhead’s head, the other one squeezing the back of her thigh, urging on their rocking movements.

Instinctively feeling what Willow was going to do, she gently pulled Willow’s mouth away from her breasts, flipping them over again. She met Willow’s lips again in a frenzied kiss, urging on the redhead’s hip movements with her hands. As she finally moved her hands downwards, she broke their kiss, panting heavily. Resting her forehead against the redhead’s, she opened her eyes to dark emeralds. The look Willow gave her sent a jolt of desire straight to her already soaked core. She pushed up her thigh again as she squeezed the redhead’s hips, a light moan escaping her lips as she felt Willow’s thigh hard against her own wetness.

They were moaning even louder now, rocking against each other, Willow’s hands scraping across Tara’s back, squeezing her butt cheeks. A high-pitched shriek escaped Tara’s lips before she buried her face in Willow’s neck, licking and sucking and biting with all her might.

Bringing her face up to Willow’s to capture her lips again, she opened her eyes.

Looking deep into Willow’s orbs, she saw her own desire mirrored there, an intensity that made her shiver. Then just as she was about to bring her hands even lower to Willow’s center, she noticed something.

A freckle.

Right on the tip of Willow’s nose. I’d never seen that. And with surprised amusement Tara realized she wanted to kiss that freckle. Cocking her head slightly, she wondered what she should do, before bringing her lips to the redhead’s face and laying a sweet kiss on Willow’s nose.

Pulling back, she took her time to look at the redhead. And for the first time, she noticed. The shape of her lips, the slight wrinkle on her forehead, the way her ruffled hair cast shadows on her face. It was as if she was really seeing Willow for the first time. As if she really noticed all those things that were typically Willow.

And for the first time the blonde realized. She’s beautiful.

Giving in to an irresistible urge, Tara started kissing those spots on the redhead’s face she had only just discovered: her forehead, the side of her face, her cheek, her eyelids. A feeling was blooming in her chest as she peppered the redhead’s face with kisses, a feeling she didn’t understand and couldn’t give voice to. A feeling...

Her reverie was broken by a small voice.

“Tara?” She looked at Willow, whose eyes were wide with question, and surprise.

“You’re beautiful.” The words were out before Tara could stop them. She had blurted them out, unguarded and unreal, and now the words lay between them, a silent barrier of unease separating them. Tara looked Willow in the eye, and for the first time, felt uncomfortable doing so. Somewhere in the back of her mind she acknowledged that she had crossed a line. A line she had sworn never to cross, yet she had done it so easily and without restraint.

Still Willow was looking at her, a strange expression on her face.

“Just,” Willow started. “Just, fuck me please.”

And with that it was broken. Gone was that new feeling, gone was the barrier as Tara kissed the redhead again with passion and her hands continued the journey they had started.

They fucked each other then, just as they always did: raw, frenzied, and without reservations.

But as the blonde dressed for the night, looking over her shoulder at the sleeping redhead, she couldn’t help but feel a little disappointed. Why, however, was a question she couldn’t and wouldn’t answer, because she couldn’t risk losing herself to everything she had always sworn not to be.

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Re: New fic - Lovestoned

Postby vampyregurl73 » Tue Oct 26, 2010 12:39 am

Dibs!!!! HA, the fanfic readers form of crack, I have come to realize, why you might ask? We all want it!

So to get started I have two things that aren't even parts of the story and they amused me so I'd thought I'd share.

Rating – NC-17 (oh yeah)


Notes – smut, anyone?


Now here's to stuff in the story:

And here is where it all begins to go down hill -
A freckle.

Right on the tip of Willow’s nose. I’d never seen that. And with surprised amusement Tara realized she wanted to kiss that freckle. Cocking her head slightly, she wondered what she should do, before bringing her lips to the redhead’s face and laying a sweet kiss on Willow’s nose.

Pulling back, she took her time to look at the redhead. And for the first time, she noticed. The shape of her lips, the slight wrinkle on her forehead, the way her ruffled hair cast shadows on her face. It was as if she was really seeing Willow for the first time. As if she really noticed all those things that were typically Willow.

And for the first time the blonde realized. She’s beautiful.


A freckle. - All because of a freckle...snicker*

Giving in to an irresistible urge, Tara started kissing those spots on the redhead’s face she had only just discovered: her forehead, the side of her face, her cheek, her eyelids. A feeling was blooming in her chest as she peppered the redhead’s face with kisses, a feeling she didn’t understand and couldn’t give voice to. A feeling...

Her reverie was broken by a small voice.

“Tara?” She looked at Willow, whose eyes were wide with question, and surprise.

“You’re beautiful.” The words were out before Tara could stop them. She had blurted them out, unguarded and unreal, and now the words lay between them, a silent barrier of unease separating them. Tara looked Willow in the eye, and for the first time, felt uncomfortable doing so. Somewhere in the back of her mind she acknowledged that she had crossed a line. A line she had sworn never to cross, yet she had done it so easily and without restraint.

Still Willow was looking at her, a strange expression on her face.

“Just,” Willow started. “Just, fuck me please.”


Reality check served to Ms. Maclay who gracefully received and kept activities rolling. *in best sports announcer's voice*

Many a poor girl has been drawn in by the power of us freckly ones, we are our own livin snowflake, they have different shapes, blah,blah,blah. Just like most things if you don' have them and it won't kill you, on the right person it can be fascination. I do have to admit they are good to lure girls in though... makes us look sweet and innocent or so I'm told.

New spin, since I don't Willow was quite so hormone addled to have missed what happened, but we'll see.



PS. The whole parasitic body parts thing had me laughing for a full 5 minutes and then it turned into a bad genetic mutant "B" horror film and lost its amusement..... *shrug* what can ya do?
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Re: New fic - Lovestoned

Postby Zampsa1975 » Tue Oct 26, 2010 12:55 am

Yay for good update-y goodness... :smash for Willow spoiling Tara's moment of realization of her love for Willow... I truly hope that both very soon realize that they really have deep feeling for each other...
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Re: New fic - Lovestoned

Postby LonelyTara » Tue Oct 26, 2010 4:38 am

What a delicious way to start the day! It's wonderful to see this hint of awareness starting in Tara...I wonder how freaked out Willow will be. Aw Tara, your beautiful girl--go get her!
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Re: New fic - Lovestoned

Postby KioNewgo » Tue Oct 26, 2010 4:29 pm

Wow! Awesome update :D.
I love where you're going with this story!
Can't believe Willow ruined Tara's moment like that. I wonder what she'll think of it all? Or will she even remember?
I can't wait for your next update :D.
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Re: New fic - Lovestoned

Postby Ariel » Tue Oct 26, 2010 4:30 pm

Helena,

You keep the tide surging, beautiful waves of desire - hot! hot! hot!

Love is definitely in the details, keep 'em coming! (no pun intended. Okay, there was a pun intended! :party)
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Re: New fic - Lovestoned

Postby sacinema » Wed Oct 27, 2010 6:58 am

Loved the updates. Especially the one with Willow as the main focus. Wonderful how you explained that they sometimes have more than one night in the row.

And Tara having her moment was nice, too. Even when I'm not sure if it wasn't to early in this story. Might bring her some heartbreaking moments because Willow definitely isn't ready to go in deeper territory and Tara isn't eather. You made it very clear with her last inner statement.

Thanks for sharing.
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