LonelyTara –
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This is my longest feedback ever.
Well I'm honoured to be the recipient of your longest feedback ever :d
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Okay, so confession first here. I actually opened up a word doc to keep track of my feedback for this fic!
Lol, I’ve opened one up for my response
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How in the hell did I miss this one before now?
Dunno, but I’m glad you found it Your feedback made my morning!
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My god, the early romance between these two is so, so very sweet!
Glad you liked I love the idea of them falling for each other so young. ‘Cause had they known each other, they so totally would’ve
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And then, good googa-mooga, once they start on the loving. What was it, three NC-17 chapters in a row? I feel like my insides got filled with warm pudding. And that is a very, very good thing, lemme tell you.
Lol well it’s been a while since I wrote it, but I think that’s right lol. And I’m very glad I could induce a warm-pudding feeling
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And I busted out laughing like an idiot! Holy shit, that was funny!! All I could think of was…I’m Willow…boobies…ummm..boobies. And you made me want a cupcake too.
Glad you could get a laugh. Willow’s all about the boobies Lol and that cupcake line actually only got in there ‘cause I really, really wanted a cupcake at the time and my fingers typed it before my mind even processed it had happened
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When I got to the end of page nine I was practically bouncing up and down in my seat thinking “Catholic school girl outfit, oh my god, Catholic school girl outfit!!!”
I’ve had a lot of fun writing W/T fanfiction in general, but writing the school girl outfit was like, my favourite smut scene to write lol. The images that went through my head as I was doing it if nothing else lol.
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And that’s when I stopped to start this doc. My god, dear merciful goddess, all forces of forceful stuff, please please let there be Catholic school girl outfit. Will return when I find out if I’m right. (:blush tense pause)
Hope I didn’t tense you up too much.
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Once again I say…holy shit. I love this fic!
Yay!
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Oh my god. I am such a perv.
LOL
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Me too…and LOL mother-fucking LOL. I am a potty mouth tonight.
Glad I could get such a bog laugh (and inducing potty-mouthedness? Awesome!)
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Aww..hooray for LGBT teachers—I wish there were more of us! And…heh..total missed opportunity in the bathroom with just the socks…
I agree, there should be more of you. And yea, damn time constraints!
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I love Tara’s mom! “Way to stick it to the man” LOL
I love Tara’s mom too. I wish I had her as s mother lol.
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Aww...and the ending is so sweet, perfect epilogue. I don't care if it's wrong of me to ask, because this piece is so, so perfect, but I'm gonna ask anyway...one-shot follow-up? Please please??
Hmm, well I’d certainly love to give a snapshot into their future. I’ll have to have a think and see what I can come up with!
Thank you very much for your wonderfully long and detailed feedback It really did make my day (I know I said morning earlier but now I’ve read the extent of it, I’m changing it to day )