watty wrote:When I read thiswe’d floated out of our seats and bonked our heads on the overhead compartment
I misread [here's where Car jumps in and says "Skimmer!"] bonked for boinked. So a little change in spelling gives uswe’d floated out of our seats and boinked
*snerk*
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Well now you've spoiled the next part, watty, where they actually climb into the overhead compartment and boink. Guess I'll have to rewrite it.
To everyone: sorry no update, but I'm working on it...in my head, at least. I'll try to get cranking on it asap, since (courtesy of my awesome wife!) I now have a brand spanking new laptop! Woot!


Love this story. I just can't get over how adorable the whole plane scene is :")