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Re: In the Wake of the Wild Rose - Uber (Updated 30 Apr)

Postby diamondforever » Fri May 18, 2007 7:03 pm

That's a good call concerning the hair. I will wait patiently!

Ack, the beginning made me feel so sick for what Tara must have gone through. Beautifully written...it's tough to mix the sympathy and the disgust right.

To echo the words of tazraven, the plot thickens. What secrets has Tara been privy to? Dun dun dun...

Looking forward to the next one.
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Re: In the Wake of the Wild Rose - Uber (Updated 30 Apr)

Postby db » Sat May 19, 2007 2:49 pm

Pauly-pants!

Excellent update -- although the idea of Tara being referred to as a 'ride' of *any kind is more than a bit nauseating to me...

I must admit that even though the situation is tragic for Tara... I found Willow's palpable discomfort in Tara's nekkid presence a bit amusing. Vad db! Finding amusment at others' misfortune!

I am really loving this tale Pauly!

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Re: In the Wake of the Wild Rose - Uber (Updated 18 May)

Postby Artemis » Fri May 25, 2007 9:45 am

The plot thickens - and with Mr Trick! He's perfect in this role, even before you described him in more detail, the moment he appeared and I realised it was him, I had a mental image of him in this time and place, and everything from then turned out to be exactly as I'd imagined. He was sorely under-used in canon - it's great to see him show up now. And with Faith as a lethal offsider, what a combination.

Willow's reactions to Tara are so easily understandable - what it must be like to be in a situation like that, and have someone like Tara react in fear at such a simple thing... It makes you almost afraid to try to comfort her, for fear of making her even more afraid. Interesting how perceptive Tara is, yet how she's hopelessly mind-locked into processing all the tiny clues she picks up through the lens of a slave reacting to the kind of master she's become accustomed to, leading her to entirely the wrong conclusions. I wonder how long it'll take, and what will prompt it, for her to reassess her situation, and start thinking in ways she hasn't dared to for her whole adult life.
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Re: In the Wake of the Wild Rose - Uber (Updated 18 May)

Postby Selena Taiki » Sat Jun 02, 2007 11:11 am

An excellent update. I love Willow's reactions to Tara. She needs to sit down and really explain this whole freedom thing to Tara, but I get the feeling she's just going to kinda put her in Mockery's room without really explaining anything. Poor Tara, she's going to feel rather lost, I imagine.

You did make me laught aloud at one point.
She'd have to stab Xander in the buttocks to get him to wake up now.
does Willow know this from experince I wonder?
Thanks for that mental image :rofl
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Re: In the Wake of the Wild Rose - Uber (Updated 18 May)

Postby Darth Pacula » Fri Jun 22, 2007 3:12 pm

Dianneswillowtree – G'day Dianne! Me? Playing with the Devil? Just wait until I tell him that! (We have a teleconference scheduled for Monday :p)

I am so glad Willow set Tara free that is a start now thay can start building something together as equal,s


Well, before they can really build anything together, they both have emotional fortifications they need to break down first. But it is progress, so yay!

Cheers!

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tazraven – G'day Sara! No sweat, everyone gets pained by real life on occasion. But yes, plot thickening! (And I just went off on a cooking tangent in my head :p)

I can imagine how difficult it was for Willow to tear her eyes away from a naked Tara. I can't say I'd be too successful either.


I think most (if not all) Kittens would agree; who would not want to look at a naked Tara? :grin

But yes, Tara is in need of some serious deprogramming. But she going to get it, and by story's end she'll be free and happy. Well, not free in the romantic sense ... :p

Very intriguing. I wonder what Tara knows...


Ahh, but does she actually know anything? The bad guys are operating on the assumption that she might know something, and it's better to be safe than sorry. That's political espionage for you ...

Cheers!

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diamondforever – G'day Diamondforever! Sympathy and disgust aren't two things that mix too easily are they? But I'm glad you think I pulled it off.

What secrets has Tara been privy to? Ahh, now that particular mystery isn't going to be solved any time soon. I can't show my hand too soon, now can I. :devil

Cheers!

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db – db- errr trousers? :p

Excellent update -- although the idea of Tara being referred to as a 'ride' of *any kind is more than a bit nauseating to me...


What, even if it was Willow doing the riding? :devil

Vad db? Is that the Transylvanian version of being bad? :grin

Thanks Deeb!

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Artemis – G'day Chris! Yep, I liked Trick too. It was rare to find a vamp with his sense of ... style, so he seemed well suited to this story. And Faith will have a larger part to play in chapters to come as well.

You're right; it can't be easy to find yourself in the situation Willow's in. Your instincts tell you to comfort someone, but they're so ... damaged that you don't know how to do that without potentially making things worse.

Tara is 'locked' into the mindset of a slave; it can't be the sort of thing you can just shake off easily after so long. Hell, most of us learn to think a certain way while we're growing up, and once you reach adulthood, it's not so easy to change. What Tara needs is a catalyst, an epiphany that'll let her blossom into the young woman she should have been.

Cheers Chris!

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Selina Taiki – G'day Selina!

I love Willow's reactions to Tara. She needs to sit down and really explain this whole freedom thing to Tara, but I get the feeling she's just going to kinda put her in Mockery's room without really explaining anything. Poor Tara, she's going to feel rather lost, I imagine.


Have you been reading my mind? :p

I do have one question for you though: in your mental image of Willow stabbing Xander in the butt, what was she using? Because in my mental image just now, it was one of those carving/barbecue forks ... :grin

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Re: In the Wake of the Wild Rose - Uber (Updated 18 May)

Postby Darth Pacula » Fri Jun 22, 2007 3:13 pm

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Chapter the Sixth – Breached Defenses

“She's afraid of ye,” Mockery slowly repeated, before shrugging carelessly. “No offense, Cap'n ... but so what?”

“Huh? What'da ya mean, so what?!” protested Willow, her voice rising in pitch. “I don't want her to be afraid of me!”

Grinning personably, Mockery agreed. “No, ye don't. Ye wanna bed the lass, right?”

Willow exploded into fervent denial “What! No! I don't! She's ... she's like a child. She's been abused for ... the Gods know how long now!”

Mockery acknowledged Willow's point with a lazy nod. “Aye, which is why ye won't bed her, not yet at least. But that don't change the fact that ye want to lie with the wee lass.”

To deny that would be a lie, and it was one Willow couldn't bring herself to speak. Not to mention that Mockery knew her well enough to see through any such attempt. So Willow had to content herself with scowling, and kicking impotently at the deck.

“Oh, don't scowl so, Cap'n. Ain't naught wrong with it.”

“Yes, there is,” Willow stubbornly insisted. “This girl ... Tara ... is under my protection. It wouldn't be right to take advantage of her.”

“Aye, and some people would say it ain't right ta deal in stolen merchandise and the like,” countered Mockery. “Some people might say that smuggling itself ain't right, but it's what we do.”

“So what, you reckon I should just march back in there and ravish her? Is that it? Is that the full weight of your wisdom?” Willow angrily snapped.

“Well ... only if ya really want to,” replied Mockery, straight faced. “My point was this, Cap'n; ye only care that the lass is afraid of ye because ye wanna bed her, and ye won't bed her because of what's been done to her. So the whole point is moot, innit. Her fear don't matter.”

“It does matter,” Willow insisted stubbornly, and a curious expression stole across Mockery's face.

“If I didn't know better, Cap'n, I'd think ye were falling for her.”

Brow furrowing, Willow's face darkened like a storm-wracked sky. “Don't be daft, Mockery. Just ... just get her out of my cabin.” That final declaration delivered, the redhead stormed out, slamming the door shut behind her.

**********

Tara shrugged her dress back into place, the rough cotton itchy against her nakedness. Reaching down, she plucked her tattered slippers from the floor and regarded them miserably. The flimsy soles were torn to shreds, and stained with Tara's own blood. Still, Tara slipped them back on. They weren't hers after all; Tara had not a single possession in the world. Even the clothes she wore belonged to her master or mistress, in much the same fashion as she herself did.

Perhaps the mistress will allow me some new slippers? she thought hopefully. Though I doubt it, I seem to displease her at every step. Judging by her tattoo, she is a worshiper of Sappho, so my being a woman can't be an issue. She just ... must not want me.

Tara felt both confused and conflicted. For a great many years now, her only worth as a person had been defined by her talents in the bedchamber. Deep-down, in the part of her soul where the last sparks of her unbroken spirit remained, it sickened Tara to judge herself as little more than a toy for the amusement of her owners, but more than a decade of brutal conditioning left her little choice in the matter.

And now, her new mistress refused her advances, and told her she was free. It left Tara feeling .... adrift. If she wasn't desired, then what was she? And free ... She wasn't free, she'd never be free. She was a slave; she was a slave in her heart, she was a slave in her mind, she was a slave deep in her soul. Even set free, Tara was a captive of the cage slavery had built in her mind.

The door opened behind her, and Tara turned, dropping to her knees, head bowed, hands in her lap. A pair of bare feet, sun-browned and tough as leather moved into her field of vision. Not the mistress then.

“C'mon then, lass,” spoke a gruff voice. “Let's get ye out of the Cap'n's way.”

A hand beckoned Tara onwards, and she obediently rose and followed Mockery out the door into the small antechamber that led out onto the open deck. To one side was a hatch and a ladder leading down into the bowels of the Wild Rose.

Deigning to use the ladder's steps, Mockery slid straight down the railing, and waved for Tara to do likewise. Moving at a much more sedate and cautious pace, Tara began to clamber down after him. The ship rolled again, and Tara's feet, slick with blood from the reopened wounds on her feet, slipped from the rungs. Her grip on the railings was tenuous in this unfamiliar setting, and Tara found herself toppling backwards with a startled yelp.

A pair of strong arms caught her, and unceremoniously dropped Tara back on her feet. Mockery looked down at the bloody footprints Tara was leaving upon the otherwise pristine deck.

“You're foulin' the Cap'n's deck, lass,” he gruffly declared, spinning on his heel. “Best be doin' something about that.”

Tara followed the sailor down a narrow corridor, limping slightly and staggering with ship's motion, while Mockery moved easily with a bow-legged gait. Yanking open a door, he ushered Tara inside and ordered her to sit on the room's sole stool.

Filling a brass bowl with water from a chipped pitcher, Mockery dumped it on the deck at Tara's feet and began rummaging through his sea chest. Emerging with a handful of linen bandages, he squatted beside the bowl and began to clean and dress her wounded feet.

Moving with surprising gentleness, Mockery looked up every now and then to study his patient with open curiosity. Each time, he found Tara's head bowed, face hidden behind the curtain of her golden hair, but the faint gleam of her eyes betrayed her alertness. Her limbs were limp and pliable, but he sensed a constant undercurrent of tension running through her at his touch.

His task finished, Mockery settled back on his haunches and jerked his head in the direction of his hammock. “Go sleep now, lass. We'll see ye fed in the mornin'.”

Tara bobbed her head obediently, and Mockery rose, turning to leave. He turned back, and glared at her. “And don't be thieving any o' my blades, lass. Or I'll strip your hide ta ribbons.”

Tara nodded her understanding once more, but when she looked up, Mockery was gone.

**********

Several hours later, Mockery eased open the door to his cabin and peaked his head in. Finding the hammock unoccupied, he nearly let loose a blistering oath. But then he noticed the figure beneath the hammock, huddled up tightly in a ball in the corner.

“Sweet mercy, lass,” muttered Mockery. Bare feet silent on the deck, he crept inside and gently laid a blanket atop Tara's sleeping form. “What are we gonna do with ye?”

**********

Odda the tavern keeper came awake with a snort, blinking myopically in the obscuring darkness. The candle atop the battered table beside his bed had been snuffed out when he retired, and the small window inset in one wall was tightly shuttered, so the room was pitch black.

Even still, Odda could see enough to vaguely make out a dark form looming over him, straddling his torso. “Danae?” he mumbled, the name of the serving wench who currently shared his bed. Something cold and terribly sharp pressed up against against his throat.

A small flame flared into existence, burning upon the end of a small metal cylinder. The small circle of light cast revealed a second figure, lolling comfortably in the chair Odda kept near the door to his bedchamber. Leaning over, this figure touched the lit end of the cylinder to the wick of another candle, this one sitting on a rickety desk beside the chair.

Once lit, the candle revealed more details of the two intruders. The one sitting in the chair was a man with pitch-black skin and a golden smile, clad in garb of silk and velvet. Obviously not the usual sort to associate at Odda's level of social strata.

The second intruder, the one straddling Odda's torso and holding a razor-sharp dagger to his throat, was a woman with long, curly raven locks spilling from beneath a leather hood. Odda couldn't make out her face, hidden in shadow as it was, but the press of her lithe body against his own was most pleasant. The kiss of steel against the tender flesh of his throat was less so.

Odda was smart enough not to speak, instead waiting for his 'guests' to make their intentions known.

“I have to admire a man who knows when to keep his mouth shut,” Trick began conversationally.

If not for the knife blade at his throat, Odda would have shrugged. “Given my current situation, it seems the smart thing to do,” he admitted.

Trick chuckled dryly. “I just hope you also know when it's in your best interests to speak.”

Licking his lips, Odda chanced an abbreviated nod, and Trick's sly grin grew wider. “Excellent. I understand there was something of a disturbance in your tavern earlier tonight?”

“Yeah ...” replied Odda slowly. Normally, he would be reluctant to discuss his business, for his clientèle tended to be the kind of people who valued their privacy. But a knife to the throat proved remarkably effective at loosing his tongue.

“There was a certain captain involved ... a woman as I understand it. You are going to tell me about her, tell me everything you know.”

“I can't ...” began Odda, but the press of Faith's dagger against his throat silenced his refusal.

“You were saying?” said Trick, one eyebrow curving slyly.

Odda tried again, gulping. “I can't tell you much, because I don't know much. She's a smuggler, this captain of yours, by the name of Willow. Slender, red hair, sharp tongue.”

“Yes, yes. Her ship is the Wild Rose. She's well regarded within the smuggler brethren. And she's a beauty, if somewhat rough spun, and a Sapphite to boot. All of this we already knew. Tell us something we don't know, or your usefulness will have come to an end.” This final statement was flavored by a tone of subtle, but unmistakable threat, and Odda's eyes widened.

The innkeeper stammered uncontrollably as he desperately racked his memory. “She's based in the Starfall Isles!” he finally blurted.

The affectation of casual boredom Trick maintained was swept away by a wave of ... something else, something intently focused and more than a touch angry. “Are you sure of this? Her home port is in the Starfall Isles?”

“Aye,” confirmed Odda eagerly, encouraged by Trick's reaction. “Northport, ta be exact.”

“And this is where's she's heading?” Trick demanded, leaning forward in his seat.

“I ... I dunno. Might be. All I know is that she had a spot of business with the Arkady lads.”

Trick glanced at Faith. “They're a local criminal syndicate,” she supplied, without looking away from her prisoner. “Dealing mostly with thievery and fencing. A smuggler would likely be moving cargo for them.”

Trick's smiled then; it wasn't a pleasant expression. “Excellent. Are there any more nuggets of information lurking away inside your head, my good fellow?”

“Umm ... no?”

“Well then!” Trick clapped his hands together, the resulting slap echoing uncomfortably in the otherwise quiet night. “We'll be on our way, and trouble you no more.” Rising from his chair, Trick walked towards the door.

Odda let go of the breath he hadn't even realized he'd been holding, and it escaped his lips in a shuddering exhalation. Pausing with one hand on the door latch, Trick tossed one final command idly over his shoulder.

“Faith, my dear ... no witnesses.”

“What? No ...” Odda babbled.

Faith's dagger sliced down, hard and fast.

**********

Willow sat backwards, straddling the Wild Rose's bowsprit, and stared angrily up at a star strewn sky. The firmament was especially beautiful tonight, a vast, cloudless expanse of inky darkness decorated with the pinpricks of uncountable stars, worshiping before the silver majesty of the twin moons, one waxing, the other waning. But Willow was untouched by the sight of nature's bounty.

She didn't see it, not really. Her eyes physically beheld the vista before her eyes, and her brain was automatically mapping out the constellations that guided the Wild Rose's course. But none of it penetrated any further than the furthest fringes of Willow's thoughts. Because those thoughts were trapped in a maze, a maze wrought in the shape of a certain blonde. And it was pissing Willow off.

Ever since her mother's death, Willow had been building a wall around her heart. As the years passed, that wall had grown ever higher, ever thicker, ever more fortified. And now, a woman that Willow had known for not even half a day had somehow found a weakness in Willow's defenses.

Somehow, Tara had gotten inside, and Willow didn't even know her. And she didn't want to. Willow didn't want to care, she didn't want to feel sorry for this sad, tragic girl. Physical attraction she could deal with, but to Willow emotions were uncharted territory. To Willow, a lover was someone you used, someone who used you, someone who made you gasp, made you shudder, made you moan. And then you left them in your wake, their purpose served.

At first, Willow had tried to be made of ice, but that hadn't worked. Her nature was too fiery, her passions ran too fast and too deep. So when a woman caught her fancy, Willow had learned to let her passion have it's way ... but to never let her partners touch her heart.

And then this ... this ... slave-girl, who was little more than a painted doll, dancing upon a string for her masters amusement, had found a chink in Willow's hard-won armor. Willow didn't know what it was that she felt for this girl she didn't even know. It wasn't simple physical infatuation, Willow only wished it were that simple. It wasn't love either, Willow was sure of that. In her opinion, love was a lie, a trick that people played on themselves.

But whatever it was that Willow felt for this girl, this Tara ... she didn't like it. Not one bit.

The chiming ring of the ship's bell intruded upon her musings, signaling the end of the dogs watch. Dawn would soon be breaking. On the forecastle deck above her, Xander strolled into view, yawning massively and knuckling at the small of his back with one hand.

Studying the horizon, just now beginning to glimmer with the promise of dawn, he glanced down at Willow and grinned. “Morning' Will. Looks like it's gonna be a beautiful day, doesn't it?”

Willow glared sullenly at her first mate before angrily stalking away, tossing her irritated reply over her shoulder like food scraps thrown overboard for the shrieking gulls. “Oh, shut up, Xander.”

To be continued ...
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Re: In the Wake of the Wild Rose - Uber (Updated 23 June)

Postby Willowtree252 » Fri Jun 22, 2007 3:35 pm

:pinky Paul this is really coming alive and dancing in our mind's I even feel a little sea sick now and then. Tara feeling not wanted because Willow has not taken her and Willow wanting her but not letting her know is really killing me but that is the point right now. you have us in your grip so I will hold on my friend. :kgeek
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Re: In the Wake of the Wild Rose - Uber (Updated 23 June)

Postby spells42 » Fri Jun 22, 2007 4:09 pm

Paul
such a well written story, and the setting has such potential for adventure. I'd like to say I'm enjoying the story, but the course of Tara's life is too horrible. I am however, addicted: I can't keep away, reading each update in the hope of seeing W&T rise truimphant.

I am enjoying the re-use of the canon characters - the menace of Mr Trick and Faith as a working partnership sends shivers down my spine, Willow as the free and fierce pirate captain, and those of her loyal crew (that we've met so far) Mockery and Xander.

I can't wait to see how you resolve Willow's conflict with her emotions, and Tara's inability to be free. Actions, which, with their history, will require huge courage.

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Re: In the Wake of the Wild Rose - Uber (Updated 23 June)

Postby WolfNightwind » Fri Jun 22, 2007 7:40 pm

i know i said i wasn't gonna read beyond the second chapter, but curiousity got the best of me and i just had to peek at chapter 3, then 4, then 5, and now 6. i'm still not comfortable with all the exspects of this tale, but i'm honest enough to admit, i'm hooked, line, and sinker.
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Re: In the Wake of the Wild Rose - Uber (Updated 23 June)

Postby diamondforever » Fri Jun 22, 2007 8:23 pm

So we're digging deeper! I'm really tired right now, so I'll have to admit that I kinda skimmed it, but what I did read was awesome. Mockery shows his soft side, we get to see Tara's perspective, and Faith is evil-evil.

That girl that saved Willow's life way back when...was that Buffy? Random question, I know, but it just struck me. Will we get the chance to see Buffy/Faith? Can Faith be redeemed?

Can't wait to see what you have in store.
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Re: In the Wake of the Wild Rose - Uber (Updated 23 June)

Postby frognkat15 » Sat Jun 23, 2007 12:12 am

i love it! i cant wait to know more... update asap! :party
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Re: In the Wake of the Wild Rose - Uber (Updated 23 June)

Postby viximon » Sat Jun 23, 2007 12:32 am

...Ack I missed one update. A shame cause the first real Willow/Tara interaction was priceless. I mean, it's totally sad and heartbreaking the way Tara thinks of herself. Willow reaction was so cute.

In this new chapter wow, action ahead!! Cool! And now we know Willows likes Tara though Tara is just a unsure and frightened child still.
Great fic, keep it up! Cheers
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Re: In the Wake of the Wild Rose - Uber (Updated 23 June)

Postby idontlikejam » Sat Jun 23, 2007 5:52 am

man, i'm loving this sotry, i love the willow you've made cus theres so much potential in her, the same with tara, the characters are really well written, they could exist outside the realms of the story you're writing. does that make sense? i dunno.
write more please :D
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Re: In the Wake of the Wild Rose - Uber (Updated 23 June)

Postby db » Sat Jun 23, 2007 6:54 am

:-D

heh heh heh.

Willow's all called out n stuff. I like that Mockery fella.

heh heh heh

Pissed off Willow is entertaining.

Sad pathetic slave girl Tara is, well, tragic. I can see why she'd tug at a girl's heart strings -- especially someone like Willow who must see her as somewhat of a "there but for the grace of god go I". I mean - yeah she's a kick ass pirate, but growing up parentless on the street could have turned out a mite different for her... I dunno.

I find Faith and Trick to be evil and unpleasant and I hope they get scabies and an oozing rash that burns... and also meningitis.

The End.

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Re: In the Wake of the Wild Rose - Uber (Updated 23 June)

Postby Emms » Sat Jun 23, 2007 12:27 pm

So good, pauly! so good....

Tara has gotten underneath Willow's skin and it's sooo obvious that Willow will not be able to deny her feelings for very much longer. What worries me is Tara's mind-set; she thinks herself worthless---a slave and nothing more... I can't wait to see her come into herself more (what? that was soooo not something dirty *giggle*) and find her purpose in life and on the boat... she needs that kind of confidence--that she can contribute something to the world other than sex....

and then of course there will be the hot lovin'..... there will be hot loving..., won't there, Paul?? :pray
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Re: In the Wake of the Wild Rose - Uber (Updated 23 June)

Postby sinkinghearts » Sat Jun 30, 2007 10:51 am

oh wow!! i love this story, i really really really do :pinky

darn, im not good with comments... that's all i could think of saying, hahaha! :blush
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Re: In the Wake of the Wild Rose - Uber (Updated 23 June)

Postby Artemis » Sat Jul 07, 2007 8:25 am

I like Mockery - he seems to understand Tara a lot better than Willow does, though I imagine it's Willow's passion and hope for Tara that'll eventually prompt her to break her self-made chains. But for the moment she's not in a position where she can do that, and Mockery's better able to handle her without upsetting her further by behaving in ways that she can't reconcile with her experience - she's not used to being without a master who behaves like a master, so it was easier for him to tend to her injuries and get her settled in her room (if not in bed like she was meant to) by giving orders, rather than offering.

I'm curious about Trick too - aside from general ruthlessness, I'm wondering if it was his mission, or that the Rren saw him get antsy at the mention of the Starfall Isles, that made him set Faith on their victim. He was covering their tracks, but for his employer's ends, or his own?
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Re: In the Wake of the Wild Rose - Uber (Updated 23 June)

Postby whatmakesyouhappy » Sun Jul 29, 2007 9:08 pm

:blush Great story! keep up the good work.







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Re: In the Wake of the Wild Rose - Uber (Updated 23 June)

Postby Fin » Tue Aug 21, 2007 4:06 am

Hi Paul
I have been meaning to leave feedback to your story so am sorry for the delays. When I started your story I was thinking how sad and awful Tara's life is, and the part that really stuck for me was when Tara offered herself to Willow in such a submissive way, it really drilled in that Tara is a pleasure / sex slave and that has been her existence. I need to keep reading and know there is a happy ending insight for Tara, so please update when you can so Tara can be happy :)
Thanks for sharing and I look forward to more,
Cheers
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Re: In the Wake of the Wild Rose - Uber (Updated 23 June)

Postby Alcy » Mon Sep 10, 2007 8:54 pm

Hiya Paul, I’m very late with my feedback (and you’re very late with an update to one of my favourite stories…I’m pining mate, I’m pining!)

I’m not sure if I entirely agree with Mockery’s wisdom at the start but it was quite funny to read Willow’s increasingly desperate replies…I don’t think she can deny that she finds Tara attractive but I love that she’s a noble pirate (nice oxymoron there!)

It was heartbreaking to read Tara’s POV, she has been used and abused to the point where she believes she can never be free. I beg to differ, I think a certain redhead can show her the meaning of freedom and I know I’ll enjoy that discovery. I read this in tandem with Willow’s own self-examination and it seems that these are two people who very much need to find each other. Hot-blooded, promiscuous Willow is always hot and it’s going to be interesting to see how she likes being a one woman gal.

And bad arse Faith…just hot!!! It’s gonna be great when she catches up with Willow.
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Re: In the Wake of the Wild Rose - Uber (Updated 23 June)

Postby Darth Pacula » Sun Sep 30, 2007 2:36 am

Note to self, write faster ... :p

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Dianneswillowtree - G'day Dianne! If you're feeling a little sea sick, you're not the

only one. (That'll make sense after you read the next chapter :p)

Thanks mate!

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spells42 - G'day Anne! Thanks. Horrible, but addicted, huh? I can work with that. :p

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WolfNightwind - G'day Bug! Let's hear it for curiousity! :grin But seriously, thanks

for reading, despite your qualms. To be honest, I'd be worried if you were comfortable with

every element of this story.

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diamondforever - G'day DF! Hope you managed to get time to more than skim, but if

skimming is all I'm gonna get, I can live with that. :p Just don't expect to see too much of

Mockery's 'soft side'. And don't be so quick on the draw regarding Faith ... we don't really

know anything about her yet.

That girl that saved Willow's life way back when...was that Buffy? Random question, I

know, but it just struck me. Will we get the chance to see Buffy/Faith? Can Faith be

redeemed?


Nope, that wasn't Buffy. Buffy does appear, later on, but there probably won't be any B/F

action. Not in that respect, anyway. Sorry.

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frognkat15 - G'day, and welcome! :wave Great screen name by the way. As for the ASAP

... I don't quite think I made it ...

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viximon - G'day Vix! Thanks!

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idontlikejam - Ok, seriously ... who doesn't like jam? :p And trust me, making sense

is highly overrated. :grin

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db - G'day db! If you think pissed off Willow is entertaining, get ready for sulky

Willow! Yes, Tara is tragic, but unlike most tragedies, this one's going to have a happy

ending.

I find Faith and Trick to be evil and unpleasant and I hope they get scabies and an

oozing rash that burns... and also meningitis.


Wow ... don't hold anything in, mate! :p

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Emms - G'day Emms! Thanks mate.

Yes, Tara needs to be broken out of her mindset before anything meaningful can happen

between her and Willow ... just like Willow needs to be broken out of hers before any long

term relationship can eventuate.

As for hot loving ... that depends. Yes, it will happen, but as to whether or not I'll write

any sex scenes ... who knows. I've never done that, but I suppose everyone's gotta lose

their cherry sometime ... :p

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shane - G'day Shane!

oh wow!! i love this story, i really really really do

darn, im not good with comments... that's all i could think of saying, hahaha!


No problemo, mate. Brevity is the soul of ... something or other. I forget how that saying

goes ... :p

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Artemis - G'day Chris!

There is a reason that Mockery seems to understand Tara at this point in her life, but that

won't come to light for a little while yet. But you might be reading a bit more into his

behaviour than Mockery himself might do. As a officer on a sailing ship, even a smugglers

one, he'd be used to giving orders and having them obeyed. But yes, Willow's going to much

more responsible for Tara breaking out of her shell ... once Willow pulls her head out of

her own arse. :grin

As for why Trick reacted as he did, beyond simply covering his own tracks, that will become

clearer as the plot progresses.

Cheers!

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whatmakesyouhappy[b] - G'day, and welcome! :wave Thanks!

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- G'day Fin! No problem about any delays; after all, given the amount of time

between postings, I'm not one to talk.

Tara will have a happy ending, after all, this is the Kitten Board, but it's not going to

come easy. Like you said, this has been her existance, and you don't get over something what

what's she's been through just like that.

But it is coming, rest assured of that.

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Alcy - G'day Alcy! Yes, I'm late, oh so late. Sorry about that.

You don't agree with Mockery's wisdom? That's okay, I don't tend to think of it as wisdom.

He's much more of a pirate than Willow is, with all of the 'moral flexability' that implies.

You're right, while Tara does have more than her own share of problems, Willow needs Tara

just as much as Tara needs her. While Willow's emotional problems might not be as blatantly

obvious to the casual viewer, that doesn't make them any less crippling.

And bad arse Faith…just hot!!! It’s gonna be great when she catches up with

Willow.


Oh, there will be fireworks ... trust me on that. :devil

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And now, onto the update!

Cheers,
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Re: In the Wake of the Wild Rose - Uber (Updated 23 June)

Postby Darth Pacula » Sun Sep 30, 2007 2:38 am

Chapter the Seventh – Distractions.

Tara came awake with a start, clawing her way past the last lingering fragments of the phantoms that haunted her dreams. Long years of experience let her instinctively smother her scream into a whimper; more than once had she been beaten for letting her nightmares wake her masters.

The darkened room was utterly unfamiliar to Tara in her sleep befuddled state, and panic flared inside her like a cornered rat. Scrambling backwards, she pressed herself even further back into the corner she'd been sleeping in, hunching up with her knees pressed against her breasts.

Her breath came fast and shallow, nearing hyperventilation as her eyes flickered over every point of the room. Only after convincing herself for the third time that there was no-one else in the room did Tara's pulse and breathing begin to slow towards normal. Her grip on her own knees relaxed, but she stayed curled up in her protective huddle.

Back in her former master's home, Tara would have been awake before dawn, preparing his breakfast, and putting out his clothes for the day. She would have had a myriad of tasks to perform, drudgery for the most part, but work nonetheless. But here, in this strange new environment, she had nothing. Nothing to occupy her mind, nothing to busy her hands with, nothing to help drive the memory of her nightmares back.

All she could do was sit in the dark, with only her memories for company.

**********

Xander's prediction of a beautiful day had held true for roughly two hours. But by that time, storm clouds were thickening on the western horizon, leaden and forbidding. The wind had picked up sharply, setting the Wild Rose's rigging to thrumming with kinetic energy, and the scent of rain was heavy in the air.

Willow glared at her first mate from beneath a furrowed brow as she sulked at the rear of the bridge, slumped against the rail that looked out beyond the Wild Rose's stern. “Beautiful day, my dainty white arse ...” she muttered beneath her breath, arms crossed petulantly beneath her breasts.

To be fair, Willow had to admit that her current mood was less to do with the inaccuracies of Xander's weather prediction than her conflicted feelings over Tara. She could admit that ... to herself at least. Poor Xander had to make do with the sharp side of his captain's tongue.

Xander sighed heavily where he stood at Willow's side, watching as the crew hurried about their work. Glancing at the darkening horizon, he sighed again. “Okay, not my best prediction, I gotta give you that, Will. But that storm's coming up real fast like. We planning to ride it out?”

Willow looked offended. “Do we look like a pack of coast hugging land lubbers? The kind who run for cover at the slightest hint of a blow? Of course we bloody well ride it out!”

But despite her angry words, the prospect of the approaching storm seemed to break Willow out of her doldrums, and she strode forward bellowing orders with renewed energy. The Wild Rose's crew intensified their scurrying about the deck and rigging.

Remaining where he stood, Xander watched the commotion briefly before gazing mournfully at the horizon once more. “Well,” he quietly remarked to himself, “at least one of us is going to have fun.” He sighed a third time. “We are gonna get sooo wet.”

**********

The storm came on exactly as it had promised, straight and hard up the center. The sky darkened ominously, thick scudding slabs of cloud racing from one horizon to the other, gray and pregnant with the portent of the torrential downfall to come. Rain and wind came next, together, the wind whipping the ocean into a wild tempest.

Fat raindrops that chilled to the bone when they struck came sleeting down at an ever shallower angle, until the rain was almost horizontal. It never came from the same direction for more than a handful of minutes either, and combined with spray from the heaving waves battering against the Wild Rose's hull, her sailors were soaked from every direction.

Sound was not slighted either in this tempestuous display of nature's fury, for forks of lightning split the sky, followed as always by the rumbling howl of thunder, rolling across the heavens like the war-chariots of the gods.

The galleys and triremes that made up most of the coastal nations' naval power would have turned back and fled for shelter long since. They were coast hugging vessels for the most part, too vulnerable to storms such as this upon the open seas to do more than dart between the mainland and the closer island nations of the Endless Sea.

By and large, the sailors that manned the deep water ships ridiculed their coast dwelling fellows for such timidity. But even amongst their number, there were few that would have dared such recklessness as Willow was now displaying.

Eager to distract herself from her own emotional turmoil, Willow had flung the Wild Rose headlong into the teeth of the storm. Disdaining Xander's worried advice to trim canvas and ride out the storm's fury at a slower pace, Willow had chosen to maintain her speed ... in fact, to increase it.

The Wild Rose flew across the ocean's heaving surface, shuddering deep in her hull as each rolling swell hammered angrily at this insolent interloper. As the Wild Rose's deck heaved, tossing to and fro, her crew slipped and skidded around, fighting to keep their vessel afloat in the face of such fury.

Willow stood at the helm, legs spread and braced as she hauled the wheel about with a strength belied by her slender frame. The wind whipped her hair about like a thing possessed, and rain and salt spray alike had drenched Willow to the bone, but her teeth were bared in a feral grin of defiance.

Between them, Xander and Mockery worked the crew, both men seemingly everywhere at once. Though they differed vastly in their style of leadership, they were both master seamen, and Xander's jokes and quips blended with Mockery's threats and insults to drive the crew into a heroic effort.

Even still, there was deep concern on Xander's face as he caught Mockery's arm in passing. “We can't take much more of this!” he shouted, leaning in towards the other man's ear to be heard over the fury of the storm. “We've got to cut canvas before she's torn apart!”

“Cap'n ain't in no mood to play it safe!” Mockery bellowed back, glancing back at the frenzied figure of their captain as a bolt of lightning illuminated Willow in stark relief. “And if ye try broaching the idea, she's as likely to heave ye overboard right now!”

Even as worried as he was, Xander doubted that. But not enough to try his luck. “We have to do something!”

Mockery shook his head, water flying from his ragged hair and dripping from his tattooed nose. “Leave her be!” he suggested loudly. “Her choler'll burn out fore long, and this old girl has lived through worse!”

“I just hope we're as lucky,” Xander muttered in reply, but the wind ripped the words from his mouth before Mockery could hear them, and the two men got back to the business of keeping their ship afloat.

**********

Ever since the Wild Rose had set out to see, Tara had felt ... off. Her balance was compromised, which had left her usual graceful movements slightly clumsy, and her stomach had been queasy at even the slightest motion.

At first, the terrifying notion that she might be pregnant had come to her, but Tara dismissed the idea almost as soon as it occurred to her. The herbal remedy taught to her long ago by a fellow slave meant that there was no chance she carried a child, a fact she was halfheartedly glad of. Tara wanted no such reminder of her former owner ...

Once that possibility had been eliminated, Tara recalled the tales of a 'sea-sickness' she had heard from some of her fellow slaves who had traveled upon the open seas. Tara had never experienced such a thing herself; until Rren had brought her to Devastapol, she had never even so much as seen the ocean, let alone sailed upon it. Even though she had lived for a time in a coastal city, Tara had rarely been allowed outside the walls of Rren's estate, and never for such a frivolous pastime as a pleasure cruise.

No, her duties had rarely required Tara to leave the bed chamber ... or her back.

That thought brought a swell of nausea cresting, and Tara gagged, threatening to vomit on her own bedding. Only the fear of what punishment such an act might bring let Tara force her gorge down. Several years ago, with the master who'd owned her before Rren, Tara been beaten for a similar act, and she was nothing if not a quick study.

The rolling of the ship was growing ever more violent as the minutes passed, and Tara was finding it even harder to keep her rebellious stomach under control. It was rapidly reaching the point where she would start rolling about the room herself if she didn't find something to hold on to.

A heavy-handed rap sounded on the cabin door, and Tara flinched at the sudden interruption to her thoughts. Before she had even had the time to consider replying, the door fell open and a broad figure blundered inside, indistinct in the darkness.

“Umm ... dark in 'ere,” noted a clumsy, yet oddly gentle voice. “You in 'ere, miss?”

Shuffling to one side, the intruder was revealed in a sliver of light from a lantern set into the hall outside. Atop a beefy body with a prodigious belly sat a wide, moon-like face with thick lips and a bald pate. As the light revealed where Tara lay huddled in her corner, the newcomer beamed with childish delight.

“There you are, miss!” He held up one hand, revealing a twine cradle hanging from his fist, the sealed terracotta pot it carried swaying with the movement of the ship. “I brought you a spot of lunch, miss!”

It was the last straw; Tara doubled over and vomited.

**********

Cooke, for that was his name, turned out to be a kindly soul, and Tara's fears of punishment were proved unfounded. With nary a harsh word, Cooke had stowed away Tara's unwanted meal and cheerfully helped her clean up the mess.

“S'alright, miss,” he kept insisting in his deep, but child-like voice. “Happens all the time inna gale like dis 'un.”

But Tara still shied away from him. It was only when he was about to leave that Tara mustered enough courage to speak to him.

“Cooke?” she asked, her quiet voice a whisper compared to the roar of the storm outside. “Are you a slave too?”

Cooke's warm brown eyes blinked in surprise. “Course not, miss!” he replied, as if it was the most obvious thing in the world. “Ain't no slaves on the Wild Rose!”

**********

True to Mockery's prediction, the Wild Rose and her crew came out the other side of the tempest considerably wetter, but in largely one piece. The Rose's sails were ragged, and her normally pristine rigging tangled, but no-one had suffered anything worse than bruises or a chill that was easily chased away by a generous tot of rum.

Willow had stayed at her post for the duration, her expression wild and exultant the whole time, and she had only retired to her cabin once her ship had well cleared the storm's edge. Her departure had proved to be brief, for Willow took only the time to wring the water from her hair and change out of her drenched clothes before returning to the deck.

Still driving her crew like a woman possessed, Willow took advantage of the strong winds cast off by the storm to send the Wild Rose skipping across the waves even faster than she normally managed. This was where her daring paid off, for where a more cautious captain would still be skirting the boundary of the storm, Willow was free and clear.

As the storm had continued on it's path, roughly at right angles to the Wild Rose's course, the winds had gradually died down, leaving the smuggler's barque to slow to its normal, not inconsiderable pace. But by the reckoning of Willow and her officers, the brief burst of speed had potentially taken a full day off their journey.

Keeping their course fixed directly towards the small island nation of Kes, the Wild Rose had surged onwards as day turned inexorably into night. Day followed after day with the regular monotony of life at sea. The weather stayed relatively fine for open water, which was to say that there were no more storms, and after ten days at sea, the Wild Rose was roughly halfway to its destination.

And for all that time, Willow and Tara had seen neither hide nor hair of each other. For her part, Willow had thrown herself into her duties with paranoid zeal, standing twice as many shifts as anyone else on board, and when she wasn't on deck, Willow was locked in her cabin with her books.

Tara, on the other hand, hadn't even left Mockery's cabin, not once. In fact, she had hardly moved for the entire ten days, preferring to stay huddled protectively in her corner, even when Cooke brought in her meals. Meals that more often than not went uneaten. The sickness that had assailed her during the storm had only grown worse, to the point where Tara could barely take a sip of water or a nibble of stale bread without being violently sick.

And that nausea wasn't her only symptom.

**********

Cooke rapped softly on the cabin door before opening it. It had taken some doing, but he'd finally figured out that Tara had been upset and scared every time he'd entered without knocking, so Cooke had scrupulously knocked ever since.

As always, there was no response. The knock was more of an announcement than a request for entry; Tara rarely spoke unless asked a direct question.

Nudging the door open, Cooke ambled inside, carrying his usual terracotta pot suspended in one hand. What he found froze him in his tracks. With a worried expression on his moon-like face, he placed Tara's dinner on the cabin floor and quickly retreated. Breaking into a shambling run, Cooke made his way towards the main crew quarters.

Given the less than neat attire of those who dwelled within it, the main crew quarters were surprisingly organized. A long series of galleries, lines of hammocks lined the walls, with occasional dividing partitions giving the semblance of privacy. An open space down the room's middle had been fashioned into an impromptu lounge, with barrels and crates standing in for chairs and tables.

Pausing to survey the crowded room, Cooke wove his way through his crew mates, unintentionally ignoring the odd greeting called at him. At the center of a knot of boisterous sailors, he found Mockery lounging indolently atop a barrel as he took part in a heated card game.

Heedless of the muttered imprecations left in his wake as he pushed through the crowd, Cooke leaned over and hissed into Mockery's ear.

“Mister Mockery, sir? I need ta speak ta ya!”

“Not now ...” Mockery mumbled in reply, glaring at his opponents. Then he caught sight of Cooke's worried expression, and sighed, laying his cards face down on the barrel they were using as a playing surface. “Fine ... come on then.”

As Mockery rose and turned to lead Cooke to where they could speak privately, one of the other players surreptitiously inched sideways, leaning over to peak at Mockery's cards. Without so much as blinking, Mockery spun and pinned his cards to the barrel with a dagger he plucked from his belt. The attempted cheat retreated with a sickly grin, and Mockery chuckled to himself.

Once they had cleared the crowd, Mockery impatiently turned to interrogate Cooke. “Well now, what's so dag-blasted important then?”

“It's the Miss, sir!”

Mockery frowned. “The what?”

“The Miss! The Little Miss, sir!”

“The miss what?” growled Mockery, confused. “Make sense, ye daft bastard!”

Cooke shrugged, his broad shoulders bobbing like the Wild Rose herself. “I dunno.”

“What?!”

“I dunno, boss.”

One of Mockery's hands tightened convulsively into a fist, but he kept his temper with a deep growl and dragged his other hand down his tattooed face in exasperation. “All right ... we're chasing our own tails 'ere. Start from the beginning; what the bleedin' hell is this 'little miss'?”

Blinking, Cooke chewed at his own lip as he considered the question, Mockery tapping his foot in ill-concealed impatience. Cooke beamed as the answer finally occurred to him.

“The Captain's passenger, sir!”

Mockery rolled his eyes. “Then what's wit' this 'little miss' bollocks then? Why not call 'er by 'er bloody name?”

“I don't know it, boss.”

Grinding his crimson-stained teeth, Mockery squeezed his eyes shut and slowly counted to ten. “Did ye try asking her?” he finally asked, even though he was sure he knew the answer.

“Uh ... no?”

Mockery nodded; Cooke's answer was exactly what he'd expected. “Nevermind. What's the bleedin' problem then?” His eyes narrowed suspiciously. “She ain't broken any o' my gear, has she?”

Cooke shook his head vigorously, eyes wide. “No, boss!”

“Then what in Sithaer's hairy ball sack is the bloody problem!” exploded Mockery.

Cooke gulped, suddenly wary in the face of his superior's wrath. “It's the Little Miss, sir. I think she's dying ...”

To be continued ...
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Re: In the Wake of the Wild Rose - Uber (Updated 30 Sep)

Postby diamondforever » Sun Sep 30, 2007 5:45 am

DIBS!

...dying? What? Way to leave me in suspense (but a damn good job of it, while we're on the topic)!

I loved the image of Willow riding out the storm -- how crazily...crazy and captainy of her. Her character really straddles the cusp of fragile and immovable. I guess that's how Willow was portrayed on BtVS as well, but you've really drawn out this characteristic with some skill.

In response to my last bit of feedback, I think I'm just going to stop guessing and let you tell the story. :P I'm glad that Faith probably has another side to her, and disappointed that F/B ain't gonna happen, but I can fully live with that because this story is going to be sweet. :D

Looking forward to your next one, as always. Hope it doesn't encounter another storm before the update!
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Re: In the Wake of the Wild Rose - Uber (Updated 30 Sep)

Postby Zooeys_Bridge » Sun Sep 30, 2007 8:50 am

Wa-Na-Naaaaaaa!

very thrilling update. I felt soaked to the bone just reading it!


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Re: In the Wake of the Wild Rose - Uber (Updated 30 Sep)

Postby sacinema » Sun Sep 30, 2007 11:44 am

Wow. What an update. What a story. I so love it. And the cliffhanger? Brilliant. But Tara will not die. She can't, can she?

Willow is wonderful as the twisted captain. At least she has to visit Tara now. And Tara, poor woman. She has suffered so much and she deserves so much more. How can she ever get over what happened to her? How can she ever feel trust again? Maybe she can lern to trust Willow?

Thanks for a wonderful story. Thanks for the update. Waiting for more.
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Re: In the Wake of the Wild Rose - Uber (Updated 30 Sep)

Postby Alcy » Sun Sep 30, 2007 12:00 pm

Woo and hoo! Welcome back Paul, it made my Monday morning when I got to work and found and update to one of my favourites! (Yes, I am guilty of using my computer at work for nefarious purposes!)

I’m going to keep a note of all the awful things Tara suffered during her time as a slave and I hope every single person that mistreated her gets their comeuppances, hopefully at the point of a sword wielded by Willow. Yes, that would be very satisfying indeed.

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The imagery of the storm was great, actually reminded me of the weather we had here over the weekend! I don’t think I can say just how much I am loving daredevil pirate Willow except to say she’s my hero.

And as much as I love Willow I’m feeling for Tara, she needs some Willow-care and I hope she’s going to get it in the next chapter, if anyone can nurse her back to health then it will be Willow.

And that nausea wasn't her only symptom


Ominous indeed.

Thanks very much for the update, and not to be one of those people who are rude and demanding or anything…but you could update a little faster next time! :peace

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Re: In the Wake of the Wild Rose - Uber (Updated 30 Sep)

Postby wimpy0729 » Sun Sep 30, 2007 12:19 pm

Wow, I loved that swashbuckling excitement, and the image of Willow standing strong in the storm had my heart racing. Now, the image you gave me of Tara was just gut wrenching (or is that retching?) literally. Every update just makes me feel more sorry for her. Maybe now she realizes she's no longer a slave from what Cooke told her, at least I hope she does. Now I'm even more worried about her. I'm hoping it's just dehydration, and I'm a bit pissed at Willow for not even checking in on her for all those days, no matter what her reasons are. They wouldn't happen to have a ship's psychologist aboard would they, cause I'm thinking they're both in dire need of some therapy.

More soon please, cause we need to know what's wrong with poor Tara.

Great job!

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Re: In the Wake of the Wild Rose - Uber (Updated 30 Sep)

Postby Sorry » Sun Sep 30, 2007 2:05 pm

I have just found this amazing story. Really well written. I love the Willow pirate but don't let anything happen to Tara plz. She has suffered enough in this universe already.

But I trust in you're skill. Just one piece of advice write faster :-)
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Re: In the Wake of the Wild Rose - Uber (Updated 30 Sep)

Postby db » Mon Oct 01, 2007 5:30 pm

Hey Pauly-pants!

Excellent update, and *excellent* to see you back!

I wish I had time to leave better feedback... but alas I don't. I really really really don't. Speaking of time and not having much -- what's up with Tara. All alone with her thoughts is no good, she's probably having a massive mental break down. Combined with severe sea sickness and rejection from the desirable red-headed captain makes me think this is a matter of grave import.

Willow, go save Tara right this instant!

... and now I must run away.

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Re: In the Wake of the Wild Rose - Uber (Updated 30 Sep)

Postby viximon » Wed Oct 03, 2007 3:56 am

EHHHHHHH????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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