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Re: In the Wake of the Wild Rose - Uber (Updated 18 Apr)

Postby ellisande » Wed Apr 18, 2007 2:33 am

I think this was the first story I looked at when I found this board a couple of weeks ago. I'm glad to see it updated and what a fun update too. I like the descriptions (especially grown up Willow, Rowr), the broken down tavern and the action. I hope we'll see some buckling and some swashing to go along with it later as well. I also liked that descriptions of the cards, I want a deck like that.

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Re: In the Wake of the Wild Rose - Uber (Updated 18 Apr)

Postby Devi Crystalseeker » Wed Apr 18, 2007 8:00 am

Alcy wrote:Firstly, your description of a grown up Willow was awesome…be still my racing heart! I could imagine her sitting there so clearly and it was a damn good picture in my mind!


Seconded wholeheartedly!

Seeing Tara as a broken slave with lifeless eyes was sad to say the least (of course), but I'm sure it'll be all the better to see Willow's love heal her (right? right?).
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Re: In the Wake of the Wild Rose - Uber (Updated 18 Apr)

Postby Artemis » Wed Apr 18, 2007 10:46 am

Oops, I procrastinated too long- my bad. Well, late though it is, my chapter two feedback:

Firstly, the tone of the writing, I loved the tone. It was like a children's story to begin with, slowly becoming more and more grounded as the chapter went on, just through word choice and the rhythm of phrases and sentences. As much as the growing realisation of what was going on, that slow change from one tone to another really gave me a dread of what was coming - having the language change like that was like seeing a colour picture slowly fading to monochrome.

And Tara's father... that's complicated. I want to detest him, but somehow I just can't, not completely anyway. I really can't figure out what to think of him - anger or pity or outrage or what. In a way he's a villain, and in a way he's a victim - it's almost tempting to feel sorry for him, or think 'and his punishment is that he has to live with what he's done'. And then I think of Tara, and it all changes, and her father 'having to live with what he's done' just seems like a too-simple fairy tale kind of answer to what he did - and in any case, it's difficult to really try to think through her father's point of view and the options he had, when it's set against the outrage against what's going on, what he did to Tara. When he said he loved her, I was caught between feeling the tragedy he was going through, and wanting to just lay into him for even daring to say such a thing to this innocent girl, his own daughter, who he's selling into slavery. You did a really good job, in such a short space of time, of making that one moment in time so complex.

Probably 95% outrage, though. But the other 5% makes it more than just a cliched sold-into-slavery scene.

Skipping forward to the present, and... well, taking a moment out from the deep and tragic sentiments: pirate Willow! Okay, possibly not outright pirate, but you know, scoundrel, that sort of thing. She may have had a tragic childhood, and probably not much of a happy life since even though she has brought her life under her own control, but she's sure got style nowadays. Rowr :blush

I'm really eager to see how it goes between her and Tara - her promise to herself never to love is going to be a huge problem, not to mention how Tara's evidently (doubtless) learned to just shut herself off as a survival mechanism. But perhaps the fact that they've both suffered such a pain, and a life without love - regardless of Willow having always strived for control, whereas Tara's taught herself not to want to control herself, because fighting against her captivity, even mentally, made it hurt worse - perhaps that they share that will be what lets them help each other.
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Re: In the Wake of the Wild Rose - Uber (Updated 18 Apr)

Postby Willowtree252 » Wed Apr 18, 2007 11:19 am

:pinky ahoy matie I love this Willow as a Capt but I am sick deep in my gut for Tara I cant wait till Willow help,s her put the light and soul back into her eyes and heart :kitty
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Re: In the Wake of the Wild Rose - Uber (Updated 18 Apr)

Postby spells42 » Wed Apr 18, 2007 1:57 pm

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I couldn't bring myself to feedback the second chapter - the appalling abandonment of little Tara to slavers was just sickening. I hated the way I could tell that her happiness on being on a little trip with her father was going to end in something terrible. Some parents! Really well written, mate.

Loved this last update. I was so pleased to see they'd both survived (as if they're going to do anything else when the story is about them!), Willow even prospering to the point of captaining her own ship - and dressing very sexily too, mmmmm. But Tara, how dreadful her life must've been ... and a hard life for Willow too. I look forward to seeing how you're going to make it up to them. Starting right now?

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Re: In the Wake of the Wild Rose - Uber (Updated 18 Apr)

Postby diamondforever » Wed Apr 18, 2007 2:00 pm

Hell yeah! This is going to be a wild ride, if I'm gauging this correctly. Willow as the buccaneer - her whole get-up reminds me of the beloved Captain Jack Sparrow, if anything. She has this whole air of adorable arrogance and wit, and I love it love it love it.

Who's Mockery based off of? Giles?

This seems like a very shallow point, but I wish Tara's hair were a bit shorter, maybe. Waist-length hair is a bitch to have unless you have the right maintenance.

Anyways, awesome update.
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Re: In the Wake of the Wild Rose - Uber (Updated 18 Apr)

Postby KloeFrost » Thu Apr 19, 2007 12:27 am

wow, this is even better than what I had expected..
I can't wait for Tara's part
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Re: In the Wake of the Wild Rose - Uber (Updated 18 Apr)

Postby tazraven » Thu Apr 19, 2007 8:23 am

Ooh, Paul. Look at Willow. All large with the butch ;) I love her as a smuggler. She’s awesome! Sorry to gush so much, you’ve just made an amazing character. Unfortunately, I think Tara needs some TLC and quick. Poor girl. She’s been a slave all this time? Ugh, and that guy.

“My pretty little Tara here is my slave. My pleasure slave.” He drew out the word pleasure in a disturbingly perverse manner.


A pleasure slave. Ewww. Makes me sick to even think about it. All I can say, is that I hope Willow helps Tara out. Her life has been shit, and I think she deserves some happiness. Until next time.

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Re: In the Wake of the Wild Rose - Uber (Updated 18 Apr)

Postby excentric » Thu Apr 19, 2007 11:39 am

Oh man! This story is awesome! :pride Very rarely do I read a fanfic and after, scream a four letter word because there isn't just one more paragraph. Well done. VERY well done.

Oh, and, uh, can you PLEASE update as soon as possible? :pray I'm already going into withdrawls here. :blush

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Re: In the Wake of the Wild Rose - Uber (Updated 18 Apr)

Postby db » Thu Apr 19, 2007 10:01 pm

Ooooh. It's morphed into willow the wiley pirate and tara the (down) trodden tart.:-D... yay! they've met! I lurve reading your stories Paul and this is drawing me in more and more every time I read an update.

Is any of this inspired by Inara/Mal or am I just stretchy imagination girl?
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Re: In the Wake of the Wild Rose - Uber (Updated 18 Apr)

Postby KloeFrost » Fri Apr 20, 2007 12:23 am

Well, I check this Darth and I guess it's alright.
Here's a sketch of Willow, based on the story

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I was gonna post this on Mi2, but this is linked to ITWOTWR so I figured posting it here would be better.

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Re: In the Wake of the Wild Rose - Uber (Updated 18 Apr)

Postby Emms » Sat Apr 21, 2007 1:07 pm

OooOooooo Captain Willow is SEXY! With her blades and her badass attitude… nice…

Tara makes a pitiful figure and I’m sad for her. But Willow has her now which makes me less sad and more interested to see where this is going… I’m almost certain we’re going to have some kind of drama on the high seas … :D And Tara will undoubtedly soften Willow’s hardened heart over the coming days, weeks, months they spend together.

Woot for Paul! Woot for updates!

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Re: In the Wake of the Wild Rose - Uber (Updated 18 Apr)

Postby Darth Pacula » Mon Apr 30, 2007 5:59 am

Alcy - G'day Alcy! Yeah, something told me that Kittens would appreciate this version of grown-up Willow. :grin The Han Solo comparison is a good one; who doesn't love a golden hearted rogue? Not me, that's for sure!

You can rest assured on the swordfight front, there'll be clashing steel aplenty! Sooner or later. :grin

Cheers!

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viximon - G'day Vix! I doubt you're alone in feeling sorry for Tara, her situation isn't in any way a good one. Though that's just started to change.

Cheers right back atcha!

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ellisande - Ooh, a newbie! G'day Anne, and welcome! :wave

Yes buckling is to be expected, and maybe even more swashing too! :grin Cheers!

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Devi Crystalseeker - G'day Devi!

Seeing Tara as a broken slave with lifeless eyes was sad to say the least (of course), but I'm sure it'll be all the better to see Willow's love heal her (right? right?).


Yep, pretty much. :grin

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Artemis G'day Chris! Ahh procrastination, I know you well. :p

Firstly, the tone of the writing, I loved the tone. It was like a children's story to begin with, slowly becoming more and more grounded as the chapter went on, just through word choice and the rhythm of phrases and sentences. As much as the growing realisation of what was going on, that slow change from one tone to another really gave me a dread of what was coming - having the language change like that was like seeing a colour picture slowly fading to monochrome.


Wow ... now I just wish I could say that was a conscious decision, instead of blind instinct. Oh well. :lol

You seem to have been one of the few people (perhaps the only one) to see the dictomy in Tara's dad. Either way, it was going to be a bad situation, but I'm glad that you could see that he was a victim himself, in his own way. Righteous anger is all well and good, but not everything is black and white, unfortunately.

Definately Pirate Willow! Or Smuggler Willow ... I think they both blend together into Swashbuckler Willow, and I've always loved that genre.

Good catch on the relationship dynamics. That's where I'm hoping to mine the internal conflict of this story. In their own ways, both Willow and Tara are broken, and it's going to take some time before either of them is ready to let the other heal them.

Cheers Chris!

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Dianneswillowtree - Ahoy Dianne! :p Rest assured, Willow will put the light back in Tara's eyes ... but since it's me, it just can't be simple now can it. I've got a reputaion to think about. :devil And Willow's got her own problems too ...

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spells42 - G'day Anne! I can't blame you for not feedbacking the second chapter, especially given the subject matter.

Yes, there have been hard lives all round; I plan to fill out Willow's past at least as the story continues, and you'll see that it hasn't been all good for her either. But things will improve ... right before the shit hits the fan. :devil Ain't I a stinker? :p

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diamondforever - G'day Diamondforever! Oh yeah, Captain Jack Sparrow is definitely an influence.

As for Mockery, he's not based on any canon characters, but is my own creation. Giles does have a part to play, but we won't see him for quite a bit yet.

Hmmm, we have a request for shorter hair for Tara, huh? Well, I think I can work that in ...

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KloeFrost - G'day Leigh! Glad you enjoyed! And like I said before, tres cool picture.

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tazraven - G'day Sara!

Hmmm, Willow as the saucy bucaneer seems to have made an impression. Who'da thunk it? :p Yes, TLC for Tara sounds just the ticket. Just don't expect the road to true love to run smoothly, okay?

Tara does deserve some happiness, and it is coming her way. As for Rren? Well, the big pointy stick of karmic justice is headed in his direction as well. :devil And it ain't gonna be pretty ...

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excentric - Cool, another newbie! G'day Excentric, and welcome to our Kitteny home away from home. :wave

And would you look at that? I'm blushing, and grinning like the Cheshire Cat! :grin

Thanks mate!

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db - G'day db! Willow the wiley pirate ... try saying that ten times fast! :p

Hmmm ... Mal/Inara? Well, not consciously ... but I suppose there is a certain Mal-ishness to this incarnation of Willow. But Tara, well, Inara had it a lot better than Tara I'm afraid.

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Emms - G'day Emms!

Well, the vote seems to be in; Captain Willow = sexy! There's a shocker! :p

Tara makes a pitiful figure and I’m sad for her. But Willow has her now which makes me less sad and more interested to see where this is going… I’m almost certain we’re going to have some kind of drama on the high seas … And Tara will undoubtedly soften Willow’s hardened heart over the coming days, weeks, months they spend together.


Well shucks ... just give away the plot there Emms! :p

Woot for Emms! :grin

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Re: In the Wake of the Wild Rose - Uber (Updated 18 Apr)

Postby Darth Pacula » Mon Apr 30, 2007 6:00 am

All disclaimers apply.

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Chapter the Fourth – Flight.

Tara was a vacant, if disturbingly pliable, dead weight on the end of Willow's hand as she gingerly led the blonde towards the exit, moving slowly, as if Tara were a frightened animal. Xander followed close in her wake, cutlass out and ready to guard Willow's retreat.

He made an indelicate sound in the back of his throat. “Err ... Will? I thought this plan of yours called for running? Because I don't fancy our chances of outrunning anyone at this pace.”

Scowling, Willow shot a dirty look at her first mate that told him, in no uncertain terms, to hold his tongue. That done, she led Tara out into the tavern's common room, and instantly felt the weight of more than a score of eyes fall upon them. The loud background chatter of a typical, crowded tavern trickled away into an awkward silence.

The hairs rose on the back of Willow's neck. Such establishments as the one in which they stood tended to attract a certain kind of clientèle; the kind that preyed ruthlessly on weakness. And in Tara, in her vacant stare, in her subservient posture, they were scenting the type of weakness they loved best. The bare steel in Willow's hand would give them pause, for most of these predators were cowards at heart, but an advantage in numbers could potentially give them a dose of courage.

Xander's arrival was announced by an oath as he too fell under the crowd's gaze, and the tip of his cutlass came back up in response. Inching closer, Willow hissed at Xander to not do anything stupid. If antagonized, the crowd could become a mob, and overwhelm them by sheer numbers alone.

Mind racing, Willow knew that she had to disarm the situation before a catalyst took place, a single spark that would ignite a firestorm of violence. She had an idea, though the thought alone soured her stomach. But she needed a free hand to implement it, and her head wouldn't let her abandon her weapon, while her heart wouldn't let her release Tara's hand.

“Xander,” she urgently hissed out of the corner of her mouth, “Throw the loot.”

“What?” he gaped, blinking.

“The coin!” Willow insisted. “Throw it into the crowd!”

Xander chanced a glance down at Willow's hat, clasped to his chest, and the small fortune in gold and silver it contained. He winced. “But ...”

“Do it!”

With a sad little moan, Xander did as he was ordered, swinging the hat in such a fashion that coins filled the air like glittering rain. The reaction was instantaneous, as the crowd's baser lusts were subsumed by greed, and they fell upon the offered bounty with a great shout. Fights were already breaking out as Willow called out, “With my compliments, lads!”

“Bleedin' hells, Cap'n,” muttered Mockery as he backed out of the room, knife still snug against Rren's throat. “Are ye tryin' ta start a riot?”

“Better they riot over a handful of coins than our corpses, Mocker,” Willow pointed out, peering past her second mate and his hostage. Rren's thugs were no longer against the wall, but were clustered in the middle of the room, eying them with unfocused malice. She knew what they had to be thinking; their continued employment was unlikely if they let their employer be kidnapped.

Mocker's grey eyes darted back to Willow, seeking orders, asking a silent question. He was asking permission to cut Rren's throat. Willow was tempted to give Mocker his head, but she made it a rule to not kill if she didn't have to, even if, as in this case, they richly deserved such a fate. Mocker had never shared her scruples, but seemed content to be constrained by them.

Willow shook her head curtly, and nodded towards the room where Rren's bravos were mustering their courage. Rolling his eyes, Mocker nodded in wry acknowledgement. In a quick jerk of movement, Mocker hooked one heel around the front of Rren's leg and shoved. As his hostage staggered forwards, Mocker rapped the pommel of his dagger sharply against Rren's skull, rendering him senseless. With an unfriendly kick to the seat of the pants, Mocker aided Rren's forward momentum until he pitched straight into his own startled men. They all went down in a pile.

Darting forward, Mocker slammed the door shut, dropping the latch and jamming it shut by ramming his dagger into the door jamb above it. As he backed away, the door shook beneath an impact, and someone swore loudly from the other side.

Noticing Mocker sadly eyeing his abandoned dagger, Willow shook her head with a snort. “I'll buy you another one,” she insisted. “Lets get out of here.”

They ran.

**********

The city-state of Devastapol lay at the bottom of a great, deep bay, like a notch cut into the coastline by a giant blade. The deep waters and protection offered by the blunk, knob-like peninsula made it a most favorable anchorage, and for the city that had grown up there, the sea was its lifeblood.

Devastapol was predominantly a trading city, linking sea-routes to the meandering trade roads riddling the mainland. All manner of trade goods found their way into and out of Devastapol, for to the decadent Princes of the city-state no vice was anathema. Slaves and narcotics alike could be found in the great markets, alongside more everyday items. Forbidden scrolls, written in human blood upon the flayed skin of virgin women, were as easy to obtain as a sack of turnips, if far more expensive.

Its citizens were a diverse lot, as the city was an ethnic melting pot, with people from every point of the compass calling Devastapol. Pale-skinned Northmen haggled with ebony merchants from the far south. Hard-eyed oriental swordsmen from the near mythical empire of Lo Pan sat alongside tanned warf rats from the islands of the Endless Sea, both lusting after doe eyed, dusky skinned dancing girls from the desert cities of the Caliphs. A thousand longstanding feuds, and a thousand more religions could be found upon her narrow, twisting streets.

The haranguing sermons of more virtuous nations named the city as an irredeemable den of vice, where depravity known to man could be found openly on every street, but as with so many things, this was an exageration. While it was true that any vice, no matter how twisted or obscure, could likely be sated within Devastapol's walls, there was still a great seething mass of ordinary people who dwelled there, living their lives and raising their families in exactly the same fashion as they would in any other city.

Geographically, the city was built in great rings, sweeping up a gentle slope from the vast harbor. The first ring was dedicated to serving the harbor itself, made up of warehouses, taverns and flophouses for the countless sailors that made landfall each day.

The next rings were those of the poorest citizens, the quality of both houses and inhabitants increasing the further one marched up the hill, until you reached the marble palaces of the rich and powerful atop the summit.

Beyond that were a staggered series of walls protecting the city from any marauding armies that approached by land. Inbetween each of these walls, shanty towns had sprung up to accommodate the swell of the poor and desperate. Once, Devastapol's Princes had instigated regular purges, burning out these shanty towns for fear they would breed disease, or weaken their defences. But as the generations passed, this tactic had fallen from favor until the slums were left to rot in their own filth.

Fortunately for Willow and her companions, the tavern they were fleeing wasn't located here, or their flight to the harbor might have taken hours. As it was, by the time they drew near the waterfront, Tara was limping badly.

Willow hadn't noticed when they had fled the tavern, but Tara had been wearing only a pair of flimsy slippers, decidedly unsuited to traversing the poorly lit, noisome back alleys through which their route had taken them. But while Willow might not have noticed what Tara was wearing on her feet, she definitely noticed when the blonde began to leave bloody footprints in her wake.

However, Tara made no complaint, and they couldn't afford to slow down; Mockery's makeshift lock wouldn't hold for long, and one problem with being the captain of a ship was that you tended to be easy to find. The only concession Willow could make was to slightly slow their pace.

They smelled the docks long before they came into sight, a fetid stench that assaulted your nostrils like a slap in the face. The clean, salty tang of the sea was faintly detectable beneath rotting fish and the normal stench of an overcrowed city. It was an intimately familiar scent to Willow; the smell of the harbor at Northport punctuated every memory she had of her childhood.

In the end, the docks came up with surprising speed out of the murky gloom, wooden piers jutting out into the harbor like the ribs of some vast seaborne leviathan, beached upon the shore. Oil lanterns and open torches, guttering in the sea breeze, were scattered about, shedding pools of golden light that did little to dispell the darkness. But it was far from deserted.

Willow led them on a weaving path between palleted piles of crated goods, dodging around boisterous mobs of drunken sailors on shore leave. Troubadours, bards and acrobats plied their trade on street corners, or in one of the countless taverns spilling torchlight and noise in equal amounts into the street. Streetworkers walked the streets, slipping off into shadowy alleys with hungry looking sailors, while half-clad whores called out to passers-by from the windows and balconies of bordellos and bawdy houses. Pickpockets and cutpurses alike were also doing a roaring trade.

Cutting as direct a path through the crowd as she could, Willow ignored a dozen propositions from drunken sailors, and turned down twice that many invitations from flirtacious floozies to sample their wares. Several shifty characters tried to offer her any number of narcotic substances, including a club-footed oaf who didn't take no for an answer until Mockery broke his nose with a swift elbow.

But they eventually reached their destionation; Willow's ship, the Wild Rose. A three masted barque, the Wild Rose was as sleek and slender as her mistress, with a dark-hued hull that cut through the water like a knife, and a painted figurehead of a bare-chested woman with an inviting smile and a saucy wink.

Xander strode aboard, barking orders as Willow traded urgent words with Mockery. “Did you get all the lads aboard?” she asked.

“Aye, Cap'n. A few are the worse for wear, and I had ta box Tagun's ears for him before he'd leave the whore's bed I found him in. Ya should'a seen this lass, Cap'n; she had ta be three times my size. Gods alone know how they could couple without her crushing 'im flat.”

Willow snorted in amusement. “Tagun always did like the large ladies, the little weasel. Any other problems?”

“Nothin' out of the ordinary, Cap'n. Had ta break up a brawl or two, and fetch Goonji out of gaol.”

Sighing, Willow passed one hand over her face. “Drunk again?” she asked.

“Drunk, and bare-arse naked in a city fountain. Or so I'm told.” Mockery lived up to his name and laughed heartily. “Apparently, when the City Guard turned up ta arrest him, he tried ta fight them off with ... with a cucumber.”

“Remind me to never let that fool drink again, will you?” Willow turned a professional eye to the hive of activity currently swirling about the deck of her ship, judging that the Wild Rose was close to being ready to weigh anchor. She darted a glance at Tara, standing beside her, head down, still holding Willow's hand in her own.

“Mockery?” she ordered. “See Tara here to my cabin. I've got to get my girl out to sea.”

Without even being asked, or raising her lowered head, Tara released Willow's hand, and the redhead strode purposefully up the gangplank. Halfway up, she hesitated, glancing back at the subdued figure still standing on the dock. The light cast by the open flames of torches further down the dock threw Tara into dramatic relief. Her golden hair was a fiery halo, leaving her bowed head wreathed in shadow.

For a moment, a single moment of poetic insight, Willow gleamed that the other woman stood upon a precipice, between a dark past, and a potentially bright future. Then the rattle of the rigging and the flapping of sailcloth tore away her attention, and Willow hurried into the maelstrom of her crew, calling orders.

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Being careful to keep her head pointed straight down, Tara carefully and surreptitiously studied the man into whose care she had been released by her new mistress. For all of her adult life, and a fair proportion of her childhood, Tara had possessed little control over her own life. Every aspect of her existence had laid in the hands of the people around her, so Tara had learned long ago how to read even the most insignificant instances of body language.

This sailor, who Tara believed was named Mockery, affected an expression of constant mild amusement, but she detected an undercurrent of tension, and the capacity for sudden and extreme violence lurking just beneath that jovial surface.

Tara had encountered a few such men in her life, and without fail, they had each, every one, been an utter bastard. She just hoped that her new mistress had a tight rein on her attack dog, for Tara had no desire to be savaged. When she had been offered the chance to serve to belong to this new mistress, Tara had taken it with no more hope than that this Willow would prove to be a kinder master than Rren.

But if that gamble turned out to be a mistake, it was too late for Tara to do anything about it now. Not that she ever could do anything about it, for she was a slave, and had been since her father had sold her that one morning so long ago.

With a grunt, Mockery fixed her with a speculative gaze. Unlike most men who knew what she was, he didn't undress Tara with his eyes, which left her cautiously optimistic. Jerking a thumb over his shoulder, Mockery indicated for Tara to follow him up the gangplank, and she obediently did so.

He led her through a crowd of roughly dressed crewmen, some of whom viewed her with mild curiousity, and some who looked at her with poorly disguised lust. One man in particular, narrow-faced with dusky skin and a dark widow's peak, extended his tongue and waggled it obscenely at her. Without breaking step, Mockery pivoted a hundred and eighty degrees and slapped the other man hard on the back of the skull.

They exchanged a brief but furious flurry of words that Tara took care not to listen to. Instead, she let her head fall even further, and withdrew in on herself. Besides obedience, one of the first things a slave learned was to be unobtrusive, to be invisible. In the end, the threat of another blow forced the swarthy man to retreat, face sullen, and Mockery led Tara into the main stateroom in the stern superstructure.

The room was plainly, but comfortably appointed. A solid mahogany table and chair were bolted to the floor near the wide bank of windows that looked out the rear of the ship, and a bed lay against one wall, likewise secured to the wall. Hanging from hooks on opposite walls were a pair of shuttered lanterns, lighting the room with a soft yellow glow.

But the most remarkable thing about the room was the books. There were books scattered all over the room, lying in untidy piles upon the desk and bed, even lying upon the floor. Books were a rare possession for anyone outside the nobility, yet this humble ship captain had more than thirty leatherbound tomes, and twice as many scrolls and maps.

“Make yourself comfortable, lass,” Mockery brusquely instructed, “But don't break anything, or the Cap'n will have ye heaved over the side.” With that directive delivered, he turned on his heel and strolled out, yanking the door shut behind him.

**********

Not long after, the Wild Rose set sail. No sign of pursuit had shown up yet, but Willow hadn't been in the mood to take a risk, so they sailed as soon as the rigging was set. Sails thrumming in the wind, the Wild Rose sailed north towards the mouth of Devastapol's great harbor and the open sea, the pathway lit by the twin lighthouses upon the headlands on either side of the harbor mouth.

Even though there had been no signs of pursuit, Willow ordered the ship's lamps extinguished so that the Wild Rose was running dark beneath a cloudy sky and the faintest gleam of a crescent moon. It was dark and gloomy night, a smuggler's night, and Willow meant to make the most of it. By dawn, she meant for them to be far out to sea, where any pursuer would be hard pressed to find them.

Running without lights could be a risky prospect, for in the gloom another ship could easily sail right into them. To counteract this possibility, Willow ordered a double shift on watch for the night, an order her crew obeyed with a certain measure of good natured grumbling.

Willow herself remained at the helm until they rounded the cape and were well on their way out to sea. Her plan was to head due west until dawn, then turn sharply to the south, heading towards the island of Kes, where they had a cargo of rare spices and several bolts of Celestial silk to deliver. That was their official cargo anyway. The Wild Rose also carried several chests of stolen jewels in a hidden hold which was their proper cargo, a delivery for a crime syndicate based in Devastapol.

It was still several hours before dawn was due before Willow finally let herself be convinced to surrender the helm, and return to her cabin for a few hours of sleep. Even with the envigorating sea air, her eyes were sore and tired, and a deep-seated ache was burrowing into the small of Willow's back. So she wasn't in the best of moods when she entered her cabin.

She found Tara kneeling on the floor, sitting back on her heels, head bowed. The blonde looked as if she'd been holding that exact pose for hours, and just the thought of it made Willow's back ache even more.

Willow hesitated, feeling that she should say something, but uncertain about exactly what to say. In the end, she settled for clearing her throat awkwardly and strode over to her desk, where she busied herself with studying a navigational chart.

What in the Nine Hells do I do with her now? she thought to herself frantically.

“Mistress ...?” asked a soft, subdued voice, and Willow turned. Her jaw dropped.

Tara had risen from her waiting posture, and was standing before her, wrists crossed behind her back, and her generous chest thrust out. She was also stark naked.

“Shall this one pleasure you now, Mistress?” Tara asked.

To be continued ...
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Re: In the Wake of the Wild Rose - Uber (Updated 30 Apr)

Postby spells42 » Mon Apr 30, 2007 6:46 am

Paul
I'm loving this. I've just recently watched Pirates of the Caribbean 1 & 2 again in preparation for 3 and this is similar in many ways: plain good fun, 'rollicking adventure on the high seas' (although admittedly we haven't had a lot of seas, high or otherwise, yet), where the bad guy's really the good guy, who wins in the end. Except for the constant presence of the grim reality of the life of slavery that Tara has led.

Mmmmm. More please.
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Re: In the Wake of the Wild Rose - Uber (Updated 30 Apr)

Postby db » Mon Apr 30, 2007 9:02 am

Oh my.

Wiley Willow has galantly saved the sex-slave wench girl (what does she think she is, a sea captain or something?).

I admire Willow and her bravery and the saving of Tara and the successful escape -- and clearly she has grreat control over her shipmates (she got them to throw the loot for the love of god)!

I just hope that Tara can stay safe and that sexy sea captain Willow can be a gentleman...

Wouldn't want to start off a star-crossed love of epic sea captain-y lore on the wrong note, now would we?

I really like this story Paul -- it's got a very different tone than the other stories I've read of yours and I really think it suits your writing style well... in fact, I am so bestotted with it that I'd have to say it's my *favorite* one I've read of yours thus far... which is saying a lot.

Can't wait to read more!

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Re: In the Wake of the Wild Rose - Uber (Updated 30 Apr)

Postby Willowtree252 » Mon Apr 30, 2007 9:13 am

:pinky Paul I love it because A. our girls ofcourse B. action and C. I can hold out for them to build a life together. That said this broke my heart that Tara feels like a piece of meat and not a person there is alot of healing to be done.Please Paul more soon :pray
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Re: In the Wake of the Wild Rose - Uber (Updated 30 Apr)

Postby diamondforever » Mon Apr 30, 2007 4:21 pm

:shock Whooooaaaa, what? Oh man, what a predicament. I really hope Willow's the more...honourable type, although I'm pretty sure she will be. It makes me sick the way Tara is acting, but it's probably quite realistic to what one would feel after years of slavery.

Well done. Beautiful description as always. I'll wait eagerly for the haircut scene? :D
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Re: In the Wake of the Wild Rose - Uber (Updated 30 Apr)

Postby EndlessDestiny » Mon Apr 30, 2007 8:55 pm

Fantastic. I'm loving this so far.

What a situation Willow's in. I have faith that she won't take advantage of Tara though. I kinda guessed that Tara would do something like that. I can't wait to see how Willow handles it.
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Re: In the Wake of the Wild Rose - Uber (Updated 30 Apr)

Postby KloeFrost » Tue May 01, 2007 1:01 am

Paul, you are one evil evil evil man. ;-)
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Re: In the Wake of the Wild Rose - Uber (Updated 30 Apr)

Postby viximon » Tue May 01, 2007 1:23 am

Good chap , Paul. I like how you made humor even in the worst of situation. Yaaa, I still hate your cliffhangers. Dieing here to know Willow reaction to Tara proposal :party

Keep going, good work, pal :peace
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Re: In the Wake of the Wild Rose - Uber (Updated 30 Apr)

Postby Selena Taiki » Tue May 01, 2007 3:46 pm

Just wanted to let you know that I am loving this story. Willow is so fun as a smuggler, and I have a feeling she and Tara will make a good team sometime down the road.
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Re: In the Wake of the Wild Rose - Uber (Updated 30 Apr)

Postby Alcy » Wed May 02, 2007 1:40 pm

Heya Paul-meister,
You have got to be the first person to describe Tara as ‘a vacant, if disturbingly pliable, dead weight.’ In this fic of course, it is very appropriate given what she has come from. So in the subsequent chase, which is full of all the excitement that I crave in a good adventure yarn, Tara has a distinct presence brought about by her helplessness…not to mention the fact that Willow is leading her out of there by the hand, you just want to go ‘yay Willow!’

I too felt Xander’s pain at the release of all that hard-earned loot but hey, if it gets our heroines out of there safely to live another day and have more adventures, then throw it all away!

I thoroughly enjoyed the description of the cities inhabitants, it gave the chapter (and the story) a real, salty tang. And the Wild Roses’ saucy figurehead would make me want to get on that ship!

As much as I cringed for poor Tara having to pass through the crew with their thinly disguised lust, I am glad that they are so realistic. Some good fellows, but also some scum-of-the-earth as you would find on a sailing vessel of the sort. A crew such as this of course requires a Captain who commands respect (and an enforcer like Mockery to break some noses!) and Willow certainly does that. I can clearly imagine her at the helm, braving wind and weather!

And then we have the final awkward scene between Willow and Tara, with our blonde making an invitation that would make any salty sea captain raise an eyebrow…poor Willow, I’m gonna enjoy reading how she gets out of this one! I suspect this relationship is going to take a long time to build given the extreme nature of Tara’s conditioning, but I’m sure our courageous sea captain is up to the task.

Cheers very much mate, I’m starting to pine for updates to your yarn….which is mostly a good thing, except the pining part!
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Re: In the Wake of the Wild Rose - Uber (Updated 30 Apr)

Postby Artemis » Thu May 10, 2007 9:24 am

Wow, that's a... is there a come-on version of a backhanded compliment? Backhanded proposition of sex? Something that's meant to be alluring, but is done in such a way that it completely isn't. I mean, Willow wouldn't be human if the sight of a naked Tara saying "Let's get it on!" didn't raise some interesting ideas, but knowing (or in Willow's case, without the benefit of having read the early chapters of the story, being able to hazard a pretty accurate guess to) what's motivating Tara here... you just want to hug her (not like that) and try to find a way to let her know it's okay to be a person again, that she doesn't have to be someone's toy any more, and that making a decision for herself isn't just going to lead to punishment.

That said, if (or rather, of course, when) Willow does manage to get that through to her, it seems that Tara's picked up a set of observation and deduction skills that could serve her really well. She offers nothing (of herself, I mean, not her body) but takes in everything that goes on around her, nothing escapes her attention. Given the incentive and will to use that ability, other than passively, it could easily save her and Willow's butts in a crisis.

Of course Willow's got her own demons to deal with - the continuation of the scene in her cabin will be really interesting to read.
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Re: In the Wake of the Wild Rose - Uber (Updated 30 Apr)

Postby Bewitchedyke » Mon May 14, 2007 12:34 am

please update. I'm loving this story so far. You have an amazing writing style that just captures my attention with every story you write. please update???
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Re: In the Wake of the Wild Rose - Uber (Updated 30 Apr)

Postby Emms » Mon May 14, 2007 9:41 am

Have I mentioned before that I think you should write novels? PUBLISHABLE novels??? Not to mention you know more words than God and Webster combined!

What an excellent escape...brilliant for Willow to suggest they throw the loot into the crowd :D

and then this part had me all... :aww

“Mockery?” she ordered. “See Tara here to my cabin. I've got to get my girl out to sea.”


How very captain-y of her! She's Oh so HAWT when she talks that way! *SWOON*


I can't wait for the next chapter!

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Re: In the Wake of the Wild Rose - Uber (Updated 30 Apr)

Postby Darth Pacula » Fri May 18, 2007 4:45 am

spells42 - G'day Anne! Ironically enough, I think I started thinking about this story around the time that Dead Man's Chest came out. Might that have some influence on this? :p Since I love those movies (the pirate genre in general, to be honest) I'll take the comparison as a big complement.

More coming up next!

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db - G'day db! What's that? Willow's a sea captain? Nah! What would've given you that impression? :p

Hmmm ... can Willow be a gentleman? Or would that have to be gentlewoman? :grin

I don't think I've noticed any particular difference in style between this and my other stories, but then I'm probably the least likely to notice aren't I. :p Favorite status is good, but lets face, I haven't written that many ... yet. Give me time. :grin

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Dianneswillowtree - G'day Dianne! Well, reason A's a given; we are Kittens after all! :grin As for Tara's low self esteem, as I understand it, that's a common symptom for victims of long term abuse, and Tara definately qualifies.

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diamondforever - G'day Diamond! So, you doubt that Willow's gonna throw honor to the wind, and just jump Tara's bones? You could be right ... and you could be wrong. You'll just have to read on to find out.

The haircut scene will probably be a bit off; I feel the need for Tara to crack her shell a bit before she gains the confidence to change her appearance. In her past, her appearance has always been other peoples domain, so she wouldn't have the courage to challenge that just yet.

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EndlessDestiny - G'day EndlessDestiny! Yeah, what a situation; confronted by a naked woman. :p But you're right, it would be taking advantage of a damaged person.

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KloeFrost - G'day Leigh!

Paul, you are one evil evil evil man.


Yes. Yes I am. :devil

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viximon - G'day Vix! Oh, so you hate my cliffhangers, huh? Does that mean you want me to stop? :p

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Selena Taiki - G'day Selena! Thanks, and I hope you enjoy the rest of the story.

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Alcy - G'day Alcy! What, do you mean Tara isn't frequently described as 'a vacant, if disturbingly pliable, dead weight'? I'm flabergasted! :grin

I'm glad you approved of the 'non PC' crew; this isn't a Disney story, so the hardened criminals are gonna act like criminals, not loveable rogues with hearts of gold. Well ... not all of them anyway. :grin

You're right that the relationship between Willow and Tara is going to take quite a while to develop. Neither one of them is exactly open to a mutal relationship at the moment, and let's face, they're not up to it either.

Thanks Alcy. Here's hoping I don't keep you pining too much. :grin

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Artemis - G'day Chris! A backhanded complement? That's a good way of summing it up. Sure, it's one thing for Tara to strip down to her birthday suit and offer up some hot gay lovin', but the fact that she sees it as an onerous duty tends to sour the deal.

That's a good point on how some of Tara's skill set are going to become handy down the track. Anticipation can just as easily be used to detect betrayal as it is to detect the desires of others.

Oh yeah, Willow's got her own demons; she's not going to make it easy for herself to fall in love, since as far as she's concerned it only leads to pain.

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Bewitchedyke - G'day Bewitchedyke! Welcome :wave, and thanks. That's a cool quote by the way.

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Emms - G'day Emms! Aw shucks, thanks. Now, all I need to do is convince people to pay me to do that. :grin But more words than God and Webster combined? That's a whole words! :p

How very captain-y of her! She's Oh so HAWT when she talks that way! *SWOON*


Well, you know captains and their ships ... :grin

Cheers mate!
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Re: In the Wake of the Wild Rose - Uber (Updated 30 Apr)

Postby Darth Pacula » Fri May 18, 2007 4:46 am

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Chapter the Fifth – Living Arrangements.

Willow's mouth worked silently as she struggled for words, any words. It didn't matter what she said, so long as she broke the silence. But where words normally came so easily to her, spilling into her agile mind in a linguistic waterfall, the sight of Tara's naked body and what she had said drove them clean out of Willow's mind.

“Mistress?” Tara inquired again, softly, always softly.

The sound of the blonde's voice finally jolted Willow into action, even if it wasn't up to her normal standards. “Wuh?” she mumbled incoherently.

“Mistress?” repeated Tara. “Shall I ...”

“What? No!” blurted Willow, finally managing to force her slack mouth closed with a shake of her head. Her eyes started to drift downwards of their own accord, and Willow had to force them back upwards. She had no problem with the female form, indeed she counted herself a connoisseur of the beauty of a womans curves. But to ogle the blonde in such a fashion made Willow feel ... soiled, as if she were no better than Tara's former owner.

“Do I displease you, mistress?” Tara asked, an undercurrent of anxiety tinging her otherwise bland and inoffensive tone.

Willow was conflicted over her reaction to that. On one hand, she was glad just to detect any emotion beyond blind acceptance. But on the other, it disturbed her to have that much effect on what was effectively a total stranger with no more than a couple of words.

“No, of course you don't!” Willow awkwardly insisted. “You're a ...” Willow winced, realizing that she'd almost been about to praise the blonde as if she were a pet rather than another person. “You don't need to worry about pleasing me, Tara. You don't need to worry about pleasing anyone anymore. You're not a slave, you're free!”

“Mistress?”

Willow stomped one foot on the deck in a fit of pique, and immediately regretted doing so. She always felt that it made her look like a spoiled brat. “Don't call me that! I'm not your mistress!”

Pausing, Willow waited for Tara to reply.

And waited.

And waited some more.

When it finally became clear that Tara wasn't going to reply, Willow rolled her eyes in exasperation. It seemed that if Tara couldn't call her 'mistress', she wasn't going to call her anything at all. Rolling her eyes proved to be a bad idea, as they came to rest on a significantly lower portion of the blonde's anatomy. Willow's cheeks burned, and she forcibly yanked her eyes back up.

“Can you ... ah, put some clothes back on?” she asked, blushing like a virgin bride, and hating it every minute. “Please?”

“As you instruct, mis....” replied Tara, bobbing her head obediently. Turning slightly, she bent to retrieve her dress from the deck. At that moment, the Wild Rose rolled as she crested a large swell, and the sudden shift in balance sent Tara staggering. Without pausing to think, Willow darted to the blonde's side, catching the other woman before she could hit the floor. The deck of the Wild Rose pitched back in the other direction as it shuddered its way down through the back end of the wave, throwing Tara's body hard against her rescuer.

For several moments, all Willow could think about was the yielding softness of Tara's body pressed against her. The sound of her own heartbeat was like thunder in Willow's ears, and she could feel Tara's heart likewise thundering, like that of a rabbit a hairsbreadth from the ravenous jaws of a wolf.

Willow looked downwards, and found herself drowning helplessly in the limpid azure pools of Tara's eyes. She couldn't move, she couldn't think, she couldn't even breathe. Her mind was awash in a haze of static, and the rush of blood through her veins was all she could hear.

It was only when she realized that Tara was trembling that Willow regained any semblance of control. She let go of the blonde as if she'd been burnt, and leapt backwards. Because Tara hadn't been trembling from cold, or desire ... she was trembling from fear.

Sick to the stomach at the idea that she might be a figure of fear to Tara, even inadvertently, Willow spun around and fled to the door, nearly running. She paused, the door half open.

“You get dressed, okay?,” she babbled over her shoulder, afraid to turn around or look Tara in the eye. “I ... I'll find somewhere for you to sleep.”

Willow vanished through the door, leaving Tara all alone, her bundled up dress clutched against her chest.

**********

Willow's first port of call was Xander's cabin, which, as usual, was a complete mess. There were more of his possessions scattered around the small room than there were in his open sea chest. Xander himself was sprawled face down in his narrow bunk, half naked and snoring mightily.

Kicking the nearest leg of his bunk, Willow swore when her efforts didn't even break her first mate's rhythm, and gave it up as a lost cause. She'd have to stab Xander in the buttocks to get him to wake up now.

She strode down the passageway, the rapid tap-tap-tap of her boot heels against the deck betraying her anxiety. Without stopping to knock, Willow barged through a second door into an even smaller cabin, as sparsely appointed as Xander's had been messy.

Mockery looked up from the poignard he was obsessively sharpening while slumped in the hammock he had in place of a bunk. He arched his brow inquisitively. “Cap'n?”

Willow half turned, and started to pace, even though she could barely take three strides before meeting the opposite wall. “Mock, I need you to find a bunk for the girl ... for Tara.”

Surprised, Mockery frowned. “I imagined that she'd be bunking with ye, Cap'n. Is there something amiss?”

“Just find her a berth, Mockery!” snapped Willow, still pacing, her every motion stark with tension.

“Fair 'nough,” he genially replied, not taking offense at the brusqueness of the redhead's tone. “Where do ye propose I put her then, Cap'n? In the cargo hold? In with the crew?!”

That pulled Willow up short, and her mouth worked soundlessly as she floundered helplessly for an answer. The Wild Rose's hold wasn't suitable accommodation for anyone, and she would never put a traumatized woman like Tara in with her crew. She trusted her men to do their job, but they were smugglers; rogues and scoundrels without fail. Not suitable company for Tara.

Mockery took pity on his captain and rolled out of his hammock, scarlet-stained teeth flashing in a broad grin. “I'll put her up in here, Cap'n, and bunk with the crew myself. Good enough for ye?”

Whatever reaction Mockery might have expected from Willow, it wasn't what he got. Instead, Willow started pacing again, head bowed and gnawing anxiously at one finger knuckle. Frowning, Mockery sheathed his poignard and tossed the weapon onto his hammock.

“Cap'n, what's bothering ye?” he tactlessly grunted.

Head jerking up so fast that it set her hair braids rattling, Willow blinked guiltily at her second mate. “Nothin',” she blindly blurted. “S'all smooth seas.”

Mockery wasn't fooled in the least, and didn't bother to hide his skepticism; in fact it was openly displayed on his tattooed face. “Aye, is that so? Then why do ye be as calm as a cat stuffed inna sack with a snake, eh?”

Willow's words came spilling out like water escaping from a broken dam, in an all consuming wave. “Because she's afraid of me!”

**********

Rren slammed the door as hard as he could, the slap of oak on oak echoing through the halls of his manor. In a fit of rage, he yanked the door back open and slammed it shut again, then stomped over to his desk, which he kicked in a fit of pique. All that he gained for his efforts was a sore toe and the accompanying string of oaths it produced.

The door eased open, and another man's head poked cautiously through. Finding Rren momentarily occupied with rubbing his injured toe, the nervous-looking man scurried in, and bobbed his blond head in a hurried obeisance.

Finally noticing his lackey's presence, Rren rounded on the smaller man in a fury. “What is it, Drew!? I gave orders that I wasn't to be disturbed!”

Drew flinched in the face of his employer's wrath, and when he replied, his voice squeaked nervously. “I ... you ... there ... er ... outside ... um ...” he stammered.

“Make sense, you imbecile!” barked Rren, one hand raised in a threatening gesture.

Gulping, Drew gathered his scattered thoughts and tried again. His voice was only marginally less squeaky. “Your guest, sire ... he's here.”

“Guest?” Rren repeated blankly, his brow furrowing. “What guest?”

“I believe that would be me,” stated a third voice, and Rren spun to find two figures standing in the open doorway.

The speaker was a slender rake of a man, with ebony skin that dramatically set off the gleam of a mouthful of gold teeth. Ruby earrings studded his earlobes, and a chain of silver links laid a bejeweled amulet against his chest. His garb, a doublet of blood-red velvet with leggings of midnight blue, was fine enough to put Rren's own to shame.

His companion cut a very different sight. Clad in leather trews and a jerkin and cloak of somber colors, they instinctualy kept to the shadows, but even that concealment couldn't hide the generous swell of her bosom, or the feminine shape of her body. Her face was totally cast in darkness however.

Rren blanched, and immediately attempted to conceal that reaction by puffing up with bravado. If the dark-skinned man or his companion noticed, they didn't show it.

“Master Trick ...” Rren began, running one hand through his pomaded hair before offering it in a handshake as an afterthought. “You ... you're earlier than I expected. I'm afraid I'm not quite prepared for your arrival as such.”

“Yes, I gathered as much,” replied the man named Trick, sauntering foppishly into the room and pointedly ignoring Rren's offered hand. Instead, he waved his own limb languidly, the froth of lace spilling from tight sleeves swaying with the movement. Bright eyes rolled in his dark face. “If we might speak alone ...”

Rren glared at Drew, and jerked his head dismissively towards the exit. The sycophant quickly scurried out, and Trick's female companion shut the door behind him and waited a few moments, ear cocked, before nodding.

“Our joint masters require your services again, Master Rren,” continued Trick. “Our agent is expected to arrive in five days hence. I trust you will have everything prepared to his satisfaction once more?”

“Of ... of course, milord. Everything will be as his lordship desires.”

“Good to hear, my lad,” acknowledged Trick idly, turning to leave. He paused, and turned back. “Oh, and be sure to have that same strumpet ready for his pleasure. You know, that blonde girl of yours? He took quite a fancy to her after last time.”

Rren flinched. “Aaah ...”

Trick froze in mid stride at the sound of Rren's voice, and turned with exacting, glacial speed. “Aaah? Is there a problem, Master Rren?” His voice was calm and quiet, silk over murderous steel, and it sent a shiver down Rren's spine. As Trick stepped closer, there was little evidence of his earlier foppish behavior.

Fighting the urge to back away, Rren babbled an hurried explanation. “It's the girl; I don't have her anymore!”

Trick stopped his advance, eyebrow's arching. Then he laughed outright, a callous and cruel sound. “You finally killed this one too? It's a shame; I hear she was a damn fine ride ...”

“She's not ...” Rren began to correct, but then thought better of it. But the damage was already done.

“She's not ... what, Rren?” said Trick in a voice like oiled steel. “Please tell me you weren't stupid enough to sell her, boy!”

“No ... not sell exactly ...” Rren sullenly muttered, clenching his legs tightly to prevent them from trembling.

“No?” purred Trick. “Then what, exactly?”

“She was stolen!” Rren snapped through clenched teeth. “Some thieving bitch cheated me! She cheated and stole my gods-damned slave!”

The unblinking gaze that Trick turned upon Rren was cold and leaden, reptilian, and Rren flinched beneath its weight. “What?” he whined.

Crossing the room in three quick strides, Trick grabbed Rren by the jaw and drove him up against the wall. His words were delivered with biting snaps of his golden teeth. “Are you really that stupid, you misbegotten wretch?”

“What?” Rren sniveled, eyes wide with fear. “She's just a slave ...”

With his free hand, Trick slapped Rren, hard. “She was our agent's bedmate, you imbecile! When when men have spent their lusts, they are wont to talk. And we do not know of what he may have boasted.”

With every word Trick spoke, Rren's eyes grew wider, and his stomach fell further.

“Find the girl, Rren,” ordered Trick, driving his index finger into Rren's chest to punctuate each word. “Find her and either bring her back, or silence her ... permanently.” He slapped Rren again, against the other cheek this time, before stalking back over to the exit. As his companion opened the door for him, Trick turned back to deliver one final command.

“Be sure to put those with her in an early grave. And don't fail me, Rren .... or the next female company you enjoy will be that of my fair maid Faith.”

A pair of dark eyes gleamed from the shadows cast by a concealing hood, and Rren gulped.

**********

The pair exited Rren's palatial manor at a casual, strolling pace. At all times, Faith kept one pace behind, and another to the side, close enough that they could communicate in private, yet far enough away to display the proper amount of deference.

“I fear we cannot trust Master Rren to accomplish this task I have set him,” murmured Trick, sidestepping a steaming pile of fresh animal excrement. “I fear that acting as our liaison in this matter is the limit of his talents.”

“Master?” said Faith in reply, that single word carrying both question and the threat of single-minded violence.

“No, my beautiful, deadly girl, not yet. Sheathe your claws, for now. We will give this buffoon a moon to extract himself from this pickle into which he has placed himself. But I want you to set out yourself, as soon as possible. If he fails, as I fully expect him too, it will fall to you to silence this slave.”

A golden smile spread slowly in the darkness. “But one way or another, I fear Master Rren has outlived his usefulness ....”

To be continued ...
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Re: In the Wake of the Wild Rose - Uber (Updated 30 Apr)

Postby Willowtree252 » Fri May 18, 2007 6:43 am

Dibs oh you are playing with the devil here I see. I cant wait to see where you are going I have a feeling it will be on the high rough seas. I am so glad Willow set Tara free that is a start now thay can start building something together as equal,s. :kitty
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Re: In the Wake of the Wild Rose - Uber (Updated 30 Apr)

Postby tazraven » Fri May 18, 2007 8:29 am

Ooh, and the plot thickens. I'm sorry I haven't replied for a bit, but real life can be a pain.

Anyways, that was great. I can imagine how difficult it was for Willow to tear her eyes away from a naked Tara. I can't say I'd be too successful either. It is pretty depressing though, to see Tara like that. I'd say she needs some TLC, but now I'm thinking she needs a reverse brainwash, or maybe a time machine. She's pretty messed up, and I just hope something happens to convince her she's actually free, because with Willow telling her like that, it was obvious she didn't grasp it.

Very intriguing. I wonder what Tara knows... Once again, great chapter. Avast Matey's!

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