FF: Milestones (Sequel to Unexpected Consequences)

[Zippy]

Hi Lisa,



Just a quick note to let you know how much I'm loving this fic.



Gotta get back to work now



Z



note to self never read fic at lunchtimes you'll always be back to the lab late.

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~ Paint the whole world with a rainbow ~

[mollyig]

Poor Tara, not bad enough that she was worried about Willow, but she had to put up with Sheila too. Lovely though how she kept talking about Willow to help calm herself down.



Brianna's resolve face was adorable, as was her statement that Willow wouldn't "break" Tara. She's already reading auras; she must have inherited that from Tara.



Bri, the poor little mite, must have been terrified when Sheila was trying to take her away. I agree with what Candice said. The way Sheila treats Tara is indicative of how horrible she is.

Adding up the total of a love that's true, multiply life by the power of two
Indigo Girls

[oneinten]

Lisa just wanted to say that I've finally managed to catch up on this fic and as always it's excellent! I loved your foul-mouthed Willow and am not liking her Mom. So scary when families good screwy like that!



Can't wait for more! As always you are the greatest!



kath

[Scout]

So glad to see Willow is okay (not that I thought she wouldn't be, but you know, the suspense and all). Now I really need to see Tara get a chance to be with Willow. Hope that's coming up next.



And Sheila - what a little $@#&*! Thank goodness Brianna has such great protection, although it's a shame she needed it against her grandmother. I think Ira is coming around and learning a lot, so hopefully he'll be an ally in future battles.



And Megan's got a temper, too. Sounds like both the girls inherited Willow's feistiness. Should be fun! Thanks!

[peggy of sunnydale]

that was amazing i love this story its my faverite,i cant stand sheila she is a b#$%*& bet when willow and tara find out she tried to kidnap brianna the fur is going to fly i hope they disown her completly,willow is going to be so hurt on the actions of her mother





thank you

[birda]

WOW!!! I hardlly ever post on the board, but I couldn't believe it that last nite I posted here and shazam!!!!! We immediately had another chapter from Lisa. Do you think it'll work again now????



I'm know....I'm just being greedy, but I do love this story.



Birda

[kpmuse]

Lisa! What an update! Sheila is so scared isn't she? What an awful time to pull this crap? Willow is in harm's way, the birth of the baby should be a wonderful time for the family. Ugh Sheila!



Way to go Brianna, Ceri and Brigh! What a scene that was!

I wonder what Sheila's reaction will be when she finds out that Tara really is biological mother to the girls? Ira will probably fill her in on what he overheard. He has to be wondering now.



I checked the "jaws" site and T's Death is closer than ever to the top category - with only 153 separating the two. Good efforts are adding up. Looking forward to the next chapter Lisa!

Kristine

Tara & Willow Love Forever

[WebWarlock]

I read a long time ago the most dangerous place in the world is between a mother and her child (and for the record between this father and his child). This is something Shelia should know, that is if she was half the mother that Tara is.



I am sure that Shelia loves Willow, Brianna and Megan, but that is not enough. It looks like Ira might be slowly getting a clue.



It is going to be interesting to see what happens when Shelia discovers that Ceri, Brigh and the rest of the Imbolc gaurd had pledged to give thier lives for Brianna years before she was even born.



Less cliffhangery, but still we have the *last* to still worry about. How is Willow! She has not even seen her baby yet.



Great stuff Lisa.

Everyone remember to send those emails, letters, faxes and votes in! We can have an affect, but only if we all help.



Warlock

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Web Warlock

The Other Side, home of Liber Mysterium: The Netbook of Witches and Warlocks

"And if I claim to be a wise man, it surely means that I don't know"- Kansas, "Carry On Wayward Son"

Edited by: WebWarlock at: 9/9/02 8:39:27 pm

[Puff]

Lisa that was brilliant there were so many things to enjoy about this chapter. Tara talking about Willow and letting out some of her anger, Brianna saying about people's aura's and then the whole showdown that is far from over. I have a feeling Ira won't be happy either that Sheila acted without talking to him either oh and of course the Ceri and Brigh parts they are cool. This is edge of the seat reading and wonderful, I'm looking forward to the next part.

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You know, it's a real deal relationship and that's why people can relate to it
Amber Benson

[Bicola]

I've never posted to say what an inspirational writer you are. I love your work and is inspires to write my own fanfic which is a big thing since I'm such a shy dork.



I love the personal little things in the latest update, where Tara is confronting Shelia about her not so great parenting skills, she talks about how she wasn't there when Willow started her period and she went to her neighbour for help. It really showed how well Tara knows Willow and what a tight relationship they have with each other. *sigh*



I dont usually say stuff that sophisticatedly(and i know thats not a word) I usually write crap but I'm in a grown up'y writing mood after write an official complaint to all those people you suggested



Anyway, just saying how much i adore your writing and also I'm planning to attack Shelia with spoons!!Mmmmwwwahahahaha! (See now thats the kinda stuff i usually write )

[LostSoul]

Hey Lisa,



Thank you so much for that. I was starting to get withdrawal. LOL.



Well, it looks like Ira is at least on the verge of figuring some things out. Although, the only thing it will probably do is make him more accepting when Willow and Tara tell them about how Bri and Megan were really conceived.



Sheila - ARRGGHHH! You write her very well. I dislike her immensely.



It's going to be tough for Tara to deal with everything while Willow is recovering. You have to feel for her with all she is and will be dealing with.



I'm guessing that the kid gloves are coming off in defense of her family.



GO TARA! Protect what is yours.



Thanks again,

LostSoul


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She practically had genuine molded plastic stamped on her ass.

[nika]

I can't help but feel a bit >just a bit sorry< for sheila. First for her state of deep denial, second for her ignorance,third for not knowing what 'family' is and fourth cause 'Mama bear' Tara is going to kick her ass!

[Grimaldi]

loved the update Tara telling Ira bits and pieces of Willow's life was sweet, maybe it'll show Ira how much Tara loves Willow and spur him on to stand up to Shelia for a change. Boy did Shelia make a huge mistake in trying to take Brianna, loved Brigh's response to Sheila saying that she is not a babysitter.

Dude, we're surrounded by perverts!

Fucking Windows 98, get Bill Gates in here!

2nd place??? That's just a fancy term for loser!

[saule77]

nika, I wish I could feel sorry for Sheila but she's got it coming: she tried to burn her own daughter at the stake!

Plus, she was never there for Willow. Now she's older and maybe retired, she wants to make up for it with Brianna! She'll have to go through mother bear first and it won't be pretty!



Lisa, great great stuff as usual... I've always loved your writing and the way you treat our girls. I discovered your site last year and I was so happy to stumble upon Unexpected Consequences part 1 (while it was still ongoing) here, so I didn't have to wait for you to post it on your site!!



A few of my friends and I are actually thinking about forming a fanclub. Your fics most definitely occupy our time and conversations over lunch! They're all mightily worthy!



You're the best



Need update to keep the ing!!!

You can tell it's not gonna have a happy ending when the main guy's all bumpy (Tara in "Crush")

[sparrow]

Sheila needs every square inch of her ass kicked, calling darth willow

And, yet, I just can't seem to care


I'm not coming back

[Miss1234Kitty]

Yikes! I DO NOT like Sheila. Poor Wills, having to grow up with a mother like that. Poor Tara, as well, having to deal with her. I think that in a way, Sheila should know everything. If she can't deal, fine, but she should know that Tara and Willow are biological mothers to both of their children.



Am very worried about Willow, but I trust you. Tara's gonna see a completely healthy Will in the next update, right?



Gem

Tara: There's just so much to work through... and can you just be kissing me now?

[tara tinkerbell]

Lisa, your story is so great, just like all your other stories I have read - and I have read most of them!



But I have a question, and sorry if this has been asked before: Since Tara was the one who gave birth to Brianna, and Sheila knows that (she says so in one of the first chapters, I think), how can she consider Tara to be a "legal stranger"? In that case, Willow would be the legal stranger when it comes to Brianna, and Tara when it comes to Megan.



Just wondering....



Anyway, have a great day, and I can´t wait for the next update!

[MissQuirky]

My God!!! I HIGHLY DISLIKE Sheila!!! I hate her calling Tara a stranger all the time!! I Loved the Big speech Tara gave Sheila! I really don't think Sheila gives a damn, tho cos she kept on w/ the plan and tried to take Brianna! Which I absolutely HATED!!



I'm so glad W/T taught Brianna well, Loved it when she said "Ceridwen defend"!! Then Ceri took matters into her own hands! Very smart girl!



I am soo waiting patiently for the actual Willow and Tara contact! I'm really glad she didn't have to get a hysterectomy!



Ira is actually OK in my opinion! He's actually learning more bout his daughter from Tara!! But dammit he has got to control that wife of his! Tie her up, throw her in the basment, and throw away the key... well he's gotta do somethin w/ her! I think she deserves more than that tho!



Well I soo can't wait 4 more!! Soon I hope!

~Ashley~

Willow: We can come by between classes. Usually I use that time to copy over my class notes with a system of different colored pens. But it's been pointed out to me that that's, you know... insane.
Tara: I said quirky.

Edited by: MissQuirky  at: 9/9/02 1:38:29 pm

[Lonewolf22]

Lisa of Nine: Great update, THANK YOU for Willow being OK, I was a little worried there for a minute, but not too much. I absolutely HATE that Sheila tried to take Brianna away, and I HATE Sheila too what the hell is her problem, I'm dying for Willow and Tara to finally tell Sheila and Ira the truth, so they can just be left alone, I could just imagine the look on her face when they tell her, LOL. Very cool that Brianna knew to call for defence, and the way that Ceri and Brigh came to help her. Also very cool the way Tara was telling Ira about Willow's hands, you can just sence the love that they have for each other, just great. I can't wait to read more.



Lonewolf

[katydid]

Lisa: You consistently continue to amaze me with your writing. I have not only become a major fanfic addict...but you are the top writer on that list. I do a happy dance whenever I see you updated. Simply put...you rock!!

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She practically had genuine molded plastic stamped on her ass.

[FlyingPoppy]

Once again you've given us a cracking update!

I think I spent about three solid days reading unexpected consequences a month or so ago, I was so happy to see you were writing a sequel. This story is proving to be just as amazing.

Do you write professionally? Just wondered as it reads really well and your characterisation is excellent. We all know there are some BAD fics about but I think you're fantastic! Oops, I'll stop gushing now and wait patiently for your next chapter,



poppy

everything's precarious and love is never near enough to save you...

[dekalog]

Thank you so much Lisa for another wonderful chapter.



I didn't think it was possible for me to have my warm fuzzies for Tara grow anymore than they are, but (sigh) how she cares for her children. I loved the part where Brianna was into the garbage,so Tara went to work out her frustration so that she was centred when dealing with the situation. If only all parents were like that.



Not a complaint, but will Willow be in the next chapter (picture puppy dog eyes). You know with Tara (wicked grin).



Thanks again.

[unionjill30]

Lisa, I love Unexpected Consequences and Milestones. You're a fabulous writer. I was wondering if there were any other stories you have written and, if so, where can I find them? Keep the updates coming. They're great.



Sarah

[karenk]

Lisa, I don't know what else to say other than, this is just fantastic. Sheila is gonna get her just rewards, right? Right?



BTW, does someone here know who portrayed Sheila Rosenberg on the show? I wasn't a fan of the show before Tara was introduced, so I have no idea but I kinda like to visualise what I'm reading, so a face would help. Anyone?



karen

[Imperfectly Me]

Ugh. Shiela...is a serious worthless bitch. She needs to have her ass dealt a serious reality check. The child of her child should be respected and loved, not emotionally tugged about like a piece of jerkey. And she also needs to learn some respect for the woman her daughter loves. Ugh!



But a definite woo and hoo for the scenes with Tara and Megan. Diana and Brent fighting over who gets to hold the baby is so cute. And OMG *huge sigh of relief* I am so glad Willow is ok. Excellent update Lisa.



Please much with the more soon?



Aim

[areslei]

Lis, excellent update! Someone sooooo needs to set Shiela straight on how it really is, 'cus she's really getting me cranky. And then they need to do a DNA test, so when Shiela doesn't believe everything about the magic, she gets knocked on her ass again. It's such a shame that she's so damn pigheaded and such a bitch, cus she just wants what SHE thinks is best for her grandchildren. Tara, Willow, Brianna, and Megan don't need a psychopathic, kidnapping scary woman in their lives. And OMG, if she talks about Willow "marrying Tara's cousin" or "what about the babies' father" one more time....grrr...But it'll get better, right? Love the guardians oohing over Megan. That was adorable. Good to hear Wills is ok....that is until she finds out what's going on.

you two are the two who are the two...
Baby, I said it's all in our hands, got to learn to respect what we don't understand...'Fugitive' Indigo Girls

[birda]

OK, I'm ready to slap the crap out of Sheila Rosenberg. I really detest this woman.



I guess that's a sign of a great writer...when you feel so emotionally about the characters.



On the good side, GO TARA! Maybe she can be the one to slap Mrs. Rosenberg???????

[Italiangirl]

BWAH HA HA HA HA! AHAHAHAHAHAHA! MUAH HA HAH HA HA HA HA!!!!!



I am laughing my ASS OFF that Sheila got an ass kicking (albeit a mini-one) from Ceri, Brigh and the guardians. AH HA HA HA HA HA HA!



Lisa, seriously, this chapter kicked fanfic ass. It was exciting, it was tender, the whole smackdown scene read like a movie scene...I could visualize the whole thing play by play. It was awesome. I CAN'T WAIT to see the continuation of the smackdown when Tara and Will find out!!!!



I also loved the interaction between Tara and Shelia when Tara called Sheila out on her bad parentage of Willow. Bitch. Ahem. Anyway, you are really doing a nice job showing the differences between Ira and Sheila, like how Ira reacted to Tara's stories about Willow vs. how Shiela did. It is really bringing in to focus who each one of them is, without having you be blantant and obvious. It's all about showing and not telling, as my creative writing teacher used to say, and you're doing splendidly.



Now, more ass kicking please?!?!!?



heh heh. Just think of me as the big wimp who stands behind the guardians going "NOW WHAT" once they have already subdued Shelia. I might even spit my gum in her hair. Heh heh. Smug? Yes. Satisfied? Yes. Hungry for more? YES!!!!!

"You're in my blood like holy wine/ You taste so bitter, and so sweet

Darling, I could drink a case of you/ And still be on my feet;

I would still be on my feet." -Joni Mitchell

[Willowfan]

Holy hot dogs and hamburgers!



Some people just don't know when to quit! And I have a feeling Shiela had better stop all this nonsense and just learn to do what should just come naturally! Love Bri, Megan, Willow and Tara...



I think it's high tim e SOMEONE (Willow and Tara) sat the Rosenbergs down and had a LONG talk with them about what is going on. The truth...and I'd like to see her try to burn them at the stake this time!



Anyway...just...wow...just keep doing what you are doing Lisa....you are amazing, as always

Willowfan

“Love’s bitch?” Spike asked softly...
“Woman enough to admit it,” Willow agreed with a nod and a sad half-smile.

“Cheers, luv,” Spike whispered... -Answering Darkness by Sassette

[tiyodragon]

Great chapter Lisa.



'Dana Buchman' ***giggle***, had to laugh at that.



Loved how Brianna used her training and didn't panic...



Hello to all Lisa fans!!! If there has been a delay in her posting...blame it on me. I had Lisa's undivided attention for several hours when she would have been writing an update....bad for you, good for me.



I'll get to the candy bribing and chains and leather in my next post.