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Re: No One Expects the Spanish Inquisition

Postby Spikeizmine87 » Fri Dec 17, 2004 4:17 pm

:shock :shock :bounce :bounce

Hey look at that you updated!!! :bow

That was just lovely. Taras interaction with Jennifer and keeping her cool...and Anya with her orgasms...very funny indeed!!! Can we expect more updates or are you gonna leave us hanging for another bunch of alot of months?? :p

:pride

-rose

I didnt know what being happy was till i found you, i didnt know what love meant till i loved you.

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Re: No One Expects the Spanish Inquisition

Postby Miss Evanescent » Fri Dec 17, 2004 5:12 pm

SIIIIIIIIIIIIIS u finally freaking updated i am so proud of you i just have no words...hehe im so rooting for anya to just shake up the place with her not so sneaky comments :D .......hehe like my word choice...rooting...and umm so when exactly does that part come along? :) lovely update sis i love the details you added since the last time i saw it! very well done :D :bow :bow :bow :bow :bow :thud :thud :thud :thud :thud :thud :thud :thud :eatme ::eatme :eatme :eatme :eatme :eatme :eatme :eatme :eatme :eatme :eatme :eatme :eatme :eatme :eatme

*hugs* more soon!!!!!!!! :D please :aww MMMM trace update! best way to start off the day hehe!

:seesaw <--- i like this one! *throws flowers at update* :flower :flower :flower

Not quite broken but i'd still like to be fixed

~Me

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Re: No One Expects the Spanish Inquisition

Postby tarawhipped » Fri Dec 17, 2004 5:58 pm

I just adore your Tara: first with the drinkin' and the Brit-slang, and she's still able to take the massively uncomfortable party situation and make everyone (except maybe Willow) a little more at ease. What a woman!



Still, though, Jennifer could leave any time now...just sayin'



:p -Cameron



What should I be but just what I am? - Edna St.Vincent Millay

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off chasing the white rabbit

Postby RaVeN » Fri Dec 17, 2004 8:52 pm

Tracey, Tracey, Tracey... (How does it feel to have someone calling your name lol) yes, these past two times I abstained from the begging of the wonderful you to update. **hangs head** yes I know im to blame for the lack of update goodness. All the kittens can line up and bop me upside my head for you poor dedication to writing but it still won’t mean I would regret it. I do believe though you are getting all the encouragement and promises of rewards that you need. Well maybe a little more are in order... *wink*



And you are very right, the stalking is kind of like that affection that you don’t realize that you want then one day feel as though you can't breath without. Funny how things like that work out sometimes don’t ya think? Also there are 26 letters in the alphabet, wanna see how lucky I am to pick the right one? I may need a lunch, and a map, and detailed directions of how to pick out the right letter.



Great update... well worth the wait for it. I can't wait till the next and will do my best to help you with the limiting of that bad distraction you have going on. Also can't wait till you get to the really really good stuff ;)



Edited by: RaVeN at: 12/17/04 7:55 pm
RaVeN
 


Re: No One Expects the Spanish Inquisition

Postby watersong84 » Fri Dec 17, 2004 8:57 pm

:dumbo Oh my God! An update! Amazing!

Hehe, I really am liking this story... Don't stay away for too long this time. :no

watersong84
 


Re: off chasing the white rabbit

Postby WillowWise » Sat Dec 18, 2004 3:33 am

I really liked the update, it was amazing I like how Tara has kept herself cool and collected infront of some. I hope you update soon and remember slow and steady wins the race!!! -giggles and clicks post-

WillowWise
 


Re: off chasing the white rabbit

Postby Viximon » Sat Dec 18, 2004 5:46 am

wow!

Fantastic update. The wait had been worth it :eatme

That was so exiting...the tension was palpable. It's cool.

Though I understand the awkwardness between Tara and Willow, I don't like how Tara behaved. I mean she had been more attenttive of Jennifer than Willow.

I repeat I understand it all but I was disapointed the same.

I want them (T/W) together again :sob



Keep it up, you're doing great. :wink

I want mooore



PS: Do Jen know about the scobby stuff (demons, magic...)?

Viximon
 


Re: off chasing the white rabbit

Postby angel of salvation » Sat Dec 18, 2004 12:00 pm

Woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo UPDATE! Yayness! :D



Gotta love this fic, and gotta love Anya. :lol Her and her orgasams...hehehe



Go Tara! She sucked it in and talked to Jennifer. Woo. and Willow, her over active mind...:lol Woo again. Update again soon please!



Jess xxx

'You're my angel of salvation, and hope, and strength...your my multi-angel'-Jay (My baby)

.:~*My anime site*~:.

angel of salvation
 


ittybittyone oepss you did it again

Postby DreamLover » Sat Dec 18, 2004 12:54 pm

Tray your back! your finally back! about time Missy!! you got some explaining to do!!



Quote:
Hope to bump into to you soon.




Like the idea but bad idea, real bad I don't want to run forever if :devil Laura or :devil Mika found out about that do we. :grin Remember the other ones, that they catch up with.



Quote:
CNN NEWS 1 April 2004

In the moonlight, they saw the outline of at least three bodies, badly beaten and burned to be almost unrecognizable. Limbs were missing, flesh torn and bodies charred.

Yesterday's Tomorrow Chapter Twenty-Four – Anonymous Tip




I really don't want to be in the news like that. :lol :lol



You definitely can write the von trap family into your fic. I can all ready see it Willow and Tara going up the stairs and waving and waving singing Goodbye Goodbye too Jennifer. Au that was evil of me :boot I like the girl she just have to take her hands of Willow thats all. BTW I'm always available if you need any help no problemo. You know me research girl :wink



I know I'm a little late with this feedback hate that sorry forgive me great amazing writer :pray because I was nagging you the whole time about it and now I'm a day late. What can I do to make it up to you?



I have to say I'm getting addicted to this story every time I read a new update my whole mind is going :banana :banana :banana crazy. So when I saw your update I was like wooohooo update update. I really liked it. I just can't belief Tara is so cool about everything and still thinkings about Willow's feelings instead of her own. I know Tara does that but still.....that's so difficult being so close too the one you want and can't have not yet anyway.



So the next update will be........ some where?? Just teasing you it doesn't matter how long it takes the results are wonderful and thats what counts.



I hope to see you soon in the chat room.

Henny













Edited by: DreamLover at: 12/18/04 12:16 pm
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Re: off chasing the white rabbit

Postby Wired vixen » Sat Dec 18, 2004 1:33 pm





Is anyone hurting as much inside as i am for Tara? Damn, she's being the good lil socialite here, i dunno, i still think Jennifer should be evil, but i'll keep sayin that! :P I understand Willow's hurting, but she should try and mend it by BEING NICE! Oh- and Anya's convos? LMAO i love your Anya!!



So more soon?!



And whats this about rumours? huh? huh? They better be good ones!



Stace xXx

"Um...dont mean to ruin the sexcapades...but we need the chips out there. Xanders being a chip whore." -She's my always by spikeizmine87

Wired vixen
 


Re: ittybittyone oepss you did it again

Postby simonsays » Sun Dec 19, 2004 11:48 am

Hi I have been lurking here for a while waiting on a mutual friend of ours to update her story but she refuses. Just thought I would tell you that you are a fantastic writer and I am enjoying this story very much.



But I do have to wonder if you draw inspiration for the way the characters react in the story from those you know in life. Was just a thought when I was reading this update.



Keep up the fantastic work,



simonsays



simonsays
 


Re: No One Expects the Spanish Inquisition

Postby pipsberg » Fri Jan 07, 2005 12:22 am

What happened to this fic?? More!

-pipsberg



"We live our lives, do whatever we do, and then we sleep - it's as simple and ordinary as that."

Michael Cunningham, The Hours

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more

Postby LizPuRR » Fri Jan 07, 2005 11:49 pm

yes yes we need more of this fic!

and soon!!!

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and i'm not cocky, i'm confident...

LizPuRR
 


Re: No One Expects the Spanish Inquisition - Chapter Nine

Postby ittybittyone » Sat Jan 08, 2005 6:18 am

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Chapter Eight Replies



Reds: More Anya goodness to this chapter & the coming ones, hope you enjoy. Thanks for reading & the feedback



Kim: My No. 1 Fan, hope I keep u interested in the story, I will do as u please & make a note in the update board. Not as much begging from u this time..I’m beginning to think I am losing my touch *giggles*



SpikeyCritter: Well its been less then a month, plus there was the X-mas break so I basically made u wait a week…lol & by the way ur yahoo status’s are still very disturbing at times..Cheer up matey..hope this helps



Sis: Freaking Sis, ur rooting for Anya now?..Shit, u make up any excuse for a root. Was it this that tipped the 7th one over the edge? Little Minx! Meanwhile not sure when the fiction rooting occurs, am having much means of inspiration of late..could be anytime or could be never..who really knows these things..Did I mention I take bribes, now ur all with the credit..i need beer money for the UK..lol



tarawhipped: Tara ..Brit slang? *sigh* im not a pommy. Will have to sort that out, explainations are on the way in the next few chapters or so. Glad u like her though..Thanks!



watersong84: hey thanks for leaving fb, hope I didn’t take as long this time, will endeavour to do better next time.



Babe: *sigh* U know u kill me….Im choosing to obstain from discussing in this forum how I feel about specific people screaming out my name…I will say however…such actions would go a long way to inspire my creative juices so to speak. Begging & screaming out my name loudly many many times, its pretty simple to get quicker updates, I here by hand over the responsibility of the regularity of my updates to you….and in summary I have two words for u love.. GIDDY UP!!



WillowWise: Glad I have one fan of the slowly & steady…at least I know u will be super happy when I don’t post for weeks. *giggles*



Viximon: I hope the wait was worth it again this time, keep reading miracles happen eventually but not before a long ass road ahead. & FYI - Jennifer doesn’t know about scooby stuff as far as I can tell thus far..lol



angel of salvation: Haha u liked the last one, so im hoping u will like this update just as much..more of the same..



Stace: More of the same, hopes u like Anya, she is so much fun. Rumors? I have no idea what ur talking about..lol



Henny: hey u crazy cracker! Don’t worry about those wacky wives, they don’t stop by here, they are too busy being cranky..lol So u want to make late fb up to me huh? Well wow, I need more open ended pledges such as this from she which will remain nameless. *wonders if she reads all these things*..hint, hint, nudge, nudge*wink* As for u Henny, I take cash & all major credit cards..lol oh & beer I take beer, but not shitty foreign beer either..lol No Doubt I See you round like a risole on chat.



simonsays: oooo a lurker, I thought I could feel someone watching me. As far as my inspiration…Certain things & people may impact my writing, honestly mostly I talk out my ass, so who can really tell…lol



pipsberg/LizPuRR: Ta Dar! Here it is..lol







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Title: No One Expects the Spanish Inquisition

Author: ittybittyone

Rating: I dunno, not from around these parts..I think PG at first but eventually NC17 ( I think that is the naughty one)

Disclaimer: Has anyone really been sued for not putting this in?

Feedback: Go nuts, I need all the help I can get

Summary: Tara left Sunnydale after the fight. Willow didn’t spazz out & go feral. This is Three years later.





Chapter Nine





“Oooooh God Tara that was sooo good I don’t think I could possibly eat more without exploding” Xander said undoing the top button on his Jeans



Hey Dawnie and I have become accustomed to such meals, Tara can never leave, we can’t go back to the junk we used to get fed” Buffy said patting her stomach



“That was a lovely meal thank you Tara” Jennifer said between the rest of the group praising the meal. Tara slightly blushed at the attention but smiled at each of them and graciously accepted their words of praise



“Grrrr I think I ate too fast” Willow said in a hushed tone under her breath.



“You always did enjoy Tara’s breasts Willow” Said Anya in a clear & precise tone



Willow immediately started coughing and choking on the wine she had in her mouth….



”Actually now that I come to think of it, Tara started explaining to us the other week when we were loaded at the bar.....Something about in her experience, Willow is very much a breast girl, the way she used to just attack yours isn’t that right Tara?”



Tara’s mouth gaped open at the statement as it was left hanging there for several seconds which felt like an eternity, she commenced opening and closing her mouth but no words came out. Willow’s coughing continued and she stared at Tara like she was a dear caught in headlights.



Xander started laughing “oh yeah honey OhMyGod, I totally forgot about that” His comment was rewarded with a slap from the slayer and a salt shaker thrown at him by Dawn.



“So it appears Willow devoured your breast again this evening, tell me Tara… did she attack you with the same tenacity as she did your chicken breasts tonight” Anya asked in a very casual tone and looked at Tara expectantly. “One might think she had the ability to handle such quantity with your nicely proportioned set”



Willow proceeded to uncover her eyes with her hands her attention quickly then turned to Anya, who appeared to not have noticed. Willow was speechless and was unable to make a clear thought between the idea of devouring Tara’s breast and being mortified by the statement.



Tara took a deep breath and calmly answered Anya. “Firstly Anya..thats really none of your business. And secondly, you sooo wish, I am not divulging that information, I don’t want to ruin you for Xander” Tara cocked her eyebrow and gave Anya a smug look.



It took Willow several seconds for her brain to register what it was that Tara replied. The rest of the group sat in silence, shocked by Tara’s cavalier reply.

Willow managed a squeak in response, and then put her glass to her mouth and took a big gulp of her wine. Jennifer sat uncomfortably sipping her wine, trying her hardest not to exist.



“Is she really that fantastic, I need further clarification on this….Jennifer your Willows Girl Fr”

Anya was cut off with Willow breaking her silence with urgency

“Ok wooo!”



“What?” Anya asked appearing confused “It’s a valid question, we need to get a second opinion it’s the only way this is going to be cleared up for everyone”



“I’m pretty sure I don’t want to know the answer to this question” Buffy replied trying to divert attention. She gave Xander an evil “you better not go against me on this one or your dead meat” look.



Xander shrunk in his chair and commenced playing with his napkin, afraid to look up in case Anya wanted him to back her up.



Willow looked at Jennifer and mouthed an I’m sorry. Jennifer gave her a forced smile and nodded her acceptance



Tara looked at the couple and felt sorry for her outburst, she didn’t mean anything by it, she just thought it would be the best way to stop Anya’s train of though, she never expected her to continue the conversation. Tara crinkled her brow and looked at Anya “hmmmm, didn’t she say something about them not being intimate before….what is she playing at” Tara thought to herself.



Satisfied she had made a nice little scene Anya relaxed in her chair “Fine” she said and dropped the subject. “So do we want desert now or do we want to wait for a little while?”



Willow shot Anya a confused look. “ok what the frilly heck, she just dropped it like that, surely that’s not it, once she gets on a train of thought there is no stopping her” Willow sat in confusion waiting for the next inappropriate comment. When she didn’t get one and everyone around her was clearing off the table and returning to the living room, Willow stood with Jennifer and followed the others.



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After a few moments Willow pulled Anya aside and pushed her back into the kitchen, not caring if it appeared she was making a scene. “Ok… I don’t know what your up to Demon girl, but this stops now” Willow said giving Anya her “don’t try me” face.



“I have no idea what your talking about Willow..and that’s Ex-Demon woman to you”



“Oh crap Anya, all that stuff about my devouring Tara’s brea……” Willow sentence trailed off as she got lost in her brain.



Anya stood with her hands on her hips and her eyebrow raised waiting for Willow to finish her train of thought. “This is too easy” Anya thought to herself



Willows mind wandered to said breast in question. “beautiful, luscious, smooth, soft, perfect, mmmmm yummy, and her face when I suck on her nipple and when she thrusts my face into her when I am teasing them, god that top she has on I just want to dive right into”



Anya realised Willow was not going to snap out of her train of thought anytime soon..”Willow…Willow…” When she got no response Anya yelled “hey Breast girl”



Willow shook her head & snapped it back up to look at Anya. “I knew that would get your attention. Hey you know that thought..the one I just interrupted”



Willow looked at her confused..”huh?”



“That place you just were in your head when I just interrupted you..You might want to think about why your there, and while your at it, consider that If you keep this crap up, someone else is going to be there Willow….” Anya brushed past Willow and returned back to the living room with a smug look on her face.





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“Ummmm Jennifer” Tara said whilst trying to quell her nerves.



“Oh… yeah Tara”



“About in there, umm I umm, I’m really sorry, I didn’t mean to be out of line like that, its just I know Anya, and well I thought if i just..u know..she would drop it and move on, she tends to go on about things that are un-addressed”



Jennifer gave a forced chuckle “yeah your right she does, I’ll tell you im not sure im ever going to understand that woman”



“It takes some getting used to I will tell you, I was so shy when I first started hanging out with the gang..Anyway, I just wanted to apologize. Anya she was out of line, and although believe it or not she does mean well, she just doesn’t understand stuff. Willow…she, she’s an amazing woman, and with everything she has been through, she deserves to find happiness. And as long as your treating her right and making her happy, that should really be all anyone is concerned about”.



Jennifer stood looking at Tara for a moment, before she responded. “You still love her don’t you?”



“I…I’ll always love her, Willow isn’t the sort of person you can stop loving no matter what happens” Tara responded putting her head down & picking at her finger nails.



“No.. I mean, your still in-love with her” Jennifer said watching Tara’s body language.



Tara immediately stopped the movements of her hands and took a deep breath. “I..I would never jeopardise your relationship with her. She..she obviously cares about you a lot, or she wouldn’t be with you. She’s one of a kind…she…”Tara took another deep breath and lifted her head to look at Jennifer. “Whatever it is Jennifer… stand by her, she’s worth it. And above all else, love her, it will change you forever and having that reciprocated will be the best thing that has ever happened to you” Tara felt herself losing her handle on things. “Excuse me, I have to go check the desert”



Tara left Jennifer standing there watching her retreating form as Anya walked back into the living room, followed closely by Willow.





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Thanks to everyone for staying with me & still enjoying this fic, I know I have been slack, I will do my best to pull my socks up.



Tray





"My normal hesitation is gone, And I really gravitate to your will

Are you here to fetch me out? Cause I've never had this taste in my past"

New - No Doubt


ittybittyone
 


Re: No One Expects the Spanish Inquisition - Chapter Nine

Postby angel of salvation » Sat Jan 08, 2005 7:13 am

I get to the be the first to leave FB, YAY! :bounce



UPDATE!!!! WOO and HOO! :D Ahh love it... Love the Anya moment aobut breasts at dinner :lol greatness.



Quote:
“You always did enjoy Tara’s breasts Willow” Said Anya in a clear & precise tone


hahahahahahaha



i see a plan being made in Anya's brain....i think i no what she's doing...noble but still funny :P



Grrr Jennifer, she's still here...and asking awkward questions, maybe she'll get the hint now that Tara should be with Willow, mwahahaha



Update again soon!



Jess xxx

'You're my angel of salvation, and hope, and strength...your my multi-angel'-Jay (My baby)

.:~*My anime site*~:.

angel of salvation
 


Re: No One Expects the Spanish Inquisition - Chapter Nine

Postby behindhereyes » Sat Jan 08, 2005 11:52 am

:wave Tray Woo Freakin Hoo



This whole update had me smiling big :D . Your Tara is OMG amazing. The whole scene around the dinner table... had me stuck between :rofl and cringing... no way that wasn't uncomfortable. Confident speaking Tara is so damn Hott !

Taras breasts, best dinner conversation ever :eyebrow . Anya, she may be in inappropriate... but absolutely right in what she sees going on here. You losing your touch... not a chance. Btw didn't I just email you... while wearing the boots of ass kicking motivation :glasses .



Trays # 1 Fan



behindhereyes

Kim



"To the world, you may be one person; but to one person, you may be the world"

behindhereyes
 


Re: No One Expects the Spanish Inquisition - Chapter Nine

Postby Spikeizmine87 » Sat Jan 08, 2005 1:31 pm

:bounce :lmao

woo and loads of HOO, an update!! I needed an update of the good variety! So :bow for that! And LMAO fucking Anya! :lmao

You potray her so well! But it seems as if she has a plan of sorts.... :hmm Does she? Or is that just me? Well anyway, lovely update and I hope your lazy ass will write more soon! :D And oh yeah, my statuses are STILL disturbing? I dunno whos youve been reading, but mine are anything but disturbing! They are actually quite happy thank you very much! :) Take care oh lovely Trace! :p

:pride

-Rose

"You were everything, everything that I wanted, we were meant to be supposed to be, but we lost it. All the memories so close to me just fade away.."-Avril

Spikeizmine87
 


Re: No One Expects the Spanish Inquisition - Chapter Nine

Postby Truck driving magic mama » Sat Jan 08, 2005 3:10 pm

Woohoo!! :banana :applause :eatme

Update, I was totally looking forward to this, and tot ell you I caught up with this fic a couple of weeks ago and it's great, I'm very happy about the updatey goodness...



About that, ANYA! :lmao :lmao :laugh

That was pricelss! that lady is nuts. LoL..

I loved the fic and I agree- Is Jennifer still there??! what the hell is she doing there?

Anyway, can't wait for the next one.. :)





How could I ever think it's funny how everything you swore would

Never change is different now
[NIN]

Melissa [Menta]

Truck driving magic mama
 


Re: No One Expects the Spanish Inquisition - Chapter Nine

Postby Wired vixen » Sat Jan 08, 2005 3:26 pm





I wanted jennifer to be evil....now i just feel bad for her, actually i want her to do something so we can see a jealous tara...jealous tara is waaay hot....how bout it 'older-than-other-sis-sis? I'll be your best friend....:flirt And dude, your Anya just gets better!! I love her! You write ficness so damn well...*glares at you* hehe, ok, write moooore!!!



:D



Staceness xXx

I've been waiting, for things that never come.... -VD

Wired vixen
 


Re: No One Expects the Spanish Inquisition - Chapter Nine

Postby Miss Evanescent » Sat Jan 08, 2005 5:11 pm

yay!!!! go anya go!!!!!! woooo! i lurv it! MORE UPDATE NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

yes i think that about covers it. im half crazy livng with every other month posts... but good job sis i love where this is going...and you know i lurv the naughty anya parts...she is just so well us hehehe! more soon please please please :aww :aww :aww really could you resist this face? hmm? and no beer for you...you know youll have enough of that :P but i will miss ya sisness!!!

Not quite broken but i'd still like to be fixed

~Me

Miss Evanescent
 


Re: No One Expects the Spanish Inquisition - Chapter Nine

Postby DreamLover » Sat Jan 08, 2005 5:48 pm

Hey tray,



Since I have no cash or credit cards because I was robed by a kangaroo with sunglasses on. I have to make it up to you with beer so what do you say shall we take one, Maty



:beer :beer :beer :beer :beer :beer :beer :beer :beer :beer :beer :beer :beer :beer :beer :beer :beer :beer :beer :beer I think I have to use :cool in the morning. Look tray I want that yummy lady that just went by :dumbo she is all mine *LOL*



I loved the update I wish I was there talking about Tara's breast there isn't a better subject in the world. Can I be in the next update. Can I can I!!!!! please begging on my knees.

I know I can't have Tara because she is for Willow but I still can be there for Jennifer as rebound love thing :D I feel so sorry for her so can I be there for her. And maybe then accidentally.........never mind that :blush zipping my mouth close and throwing away the key. I didn't belief nor did I ever thought that er could be a cool Anya men she is great. I loved how she and you describe this part



Quote:
“That place you just were in your head when I just interrupted you..You might want to think about why your there, and while your at it, consider that If you keep this crap up, someone else is going to be there Willow….”




Your so right about that part to much thinking isn't always the best thing.



See you around.



Henny

DreamLover
 


Re: No One Expects the Spanish Inquisition - Chapter Nine

Postby The Rose24 » Sat Jan 08, 2005 8:42 pm

Well done. :lol



I wonder if this is Anya's way of trying to get W/T back together. :hmm We'll see.

Tara: My heart doesn't stutter.


Tara: Willow, I got so lost.

Willow: I found you. I will always find you.


The Rose24
 


Re: No One Expects the Spanish Inquisition - Chapter

Postby watersong84 » Sat Jan 08, 2005 8:46 pm

Well Damn!:pinky



That update was great! Anya's direction of the table conversation first had me rolling on the ground laughing :laugh , and then marvelling at her ingenuity.



And Tara... What is there to say, you write her very well. That little conversation she had with Jennifer was beautiful... let's just hope it doesn't come true!



Update soon! :eatme

watersong84
 


Re:breast girl

Postby Viximon » Sun Jan 09, 2005 5:55 am

:rofl

Wonderful!



Wooow. That was so intense. Anya really know what she's doing :D he he he he.



It's so painfully obvious that they (Tara and Willow) still love each other so much (being in love).

It's a little sad for Jen. She's nice but poor thing seeing how thinks are going, that must hurt feeling how Will behave in front of Tara and all that.

Besides, not knowing her girlfriend's "family" secret it another wall on the relationship.



yep , the wait has being worth. Hope to read more about soon.



:bow



take care

Viximon
 


Chapter Nine

Postby hidden watson » Sun Jan 09, 2005 6:21 am

I thought Anya was a little out of line with the whole breast girl line of conversation, provoking the ex-girlfriend in front of the current gf. But to her credit, it was well intentioned and definitely made me laugh. Plus it had the desired effect of making Willow think about Tara's "beautiful, luscious, smooth, soft, perfect, mmmmm yummy" breasts and I'm all in favor of that.



Tara's response to Anya was just so classic, so glad so see her wit and sense of humor had grown in heaps and bounds since she left. Out of all the people at that party, she stood out as the one who has been the most friendly and nicest to Jennifer, and surely Jennifer did not expect that.



Of course I want to hate Jennifer, but I feel sorry for her, I hate her role, but not her, she's just in something (The Greatest Love of All, to be dramatic) that's way over her head here. May be she can see how much W/T are meant to be together and graciously withdraw cos she's too nice for it to come down to a catfight between her and Tara.

------

quiet thoughts

hidden watson
 


No One Expects Breast Talk

Postby wimpy0729 » Sun Jan 09, 2005 8:45 am

OMG Tray, this was fabulous!!



I was rolling at the very engaging dinner conversation. Now, where else can you get breast talk while eating them? The whole scene was hilarious and I could actually picture their faces while it was going on, which made it even better.



But I gotta say you took me from that to having my heart strings tugged at Tara and Jennifer's conversation.



This part alone,



"Stand by her, she's worth it. And above all else, love her, it will change you forever and having that reciprocated will be the best thing that has ever happened to you." Tara felt herself losing her handle on things.



Well, that was so emotional, I felt myself losing it too. I could just feel Tara's pain. Even though she is now a stronger and more bold person, she still has the same wonderful heart and soul.



Excellent job. Can't wait for more.



Wimpy

wimpy0729
 


update

Postby RaVeN » Sun Jan 09, 2005 9:32 am

Love, I really don't think you need any more help getting those creative juices going. But if it benefits the KB I am sure that I could find some way to take on the job for all of our benefit. Especially if it means in the end we will all have these amazing updates to read. Oh yeah, I am up to the sheer torture of getting that creativeness going :smug and I definatly think you'll be screaming more then Giddy Up babe ;)



I really loved the chicken breast/Tara Breast update. While I never hated Jennifer I do feel a little bit of understanding toward how she feels. It is hard to watch and know that the person you care for had such a close connection and deep love with someone you actually like as a person. Hopefully she will find someone nice and realize she needs to move on and let things repair between the lovely two. While I did love Anya's that place you were Willow comment and understand it very well I too had this one stand out to me the most:



Quote:
stand by her, she’s worth it. And above all else, love her, it will change you forever and having that reciprocated will be the best thing that has ever happened to you




I understand that one much more, very well written love, cant wait for more. :love





RaVeN
 


Re: update

Postby Willow18 » Sun Jan 09, 2005 1:42 pm

OMG! LOL at this:



Quote:
“So it appears Willow devoured your breast again this evening, tell me Tara… did she attack you with the same tenacity as she did your chicken breasts tonight” Anya asked in a very casual tone and looked at Tara expectantly. “One might think she had the ability to handle such quantity with your nicely proportioned set”




:rofl



Wow. I just read this fic in one sitting. It's interesting to see Tara as much more confident post-breakup. I like how she dealt with Jennifer. Very Tara-like, and also self-sacrificing. You can tell just how much she still loves Willow by her response to Jen's questions about how she still feels for Willow.



I'm glad Anya hit Willow with how she is dealing with the situation. Willow is in serious denial about how she still feels about Tara.



I'm looking forward to your next update. :)

Edited by: Willow18 at: 1/10/05 2:54 pm
Willow18
 


No One Expects the Spanish Inquisition

Postby Ze Goose » Mon Jan 10, 2005 3:40 am

oh goddess...I LOVE this fic...i dont' like this jennifer girl much...but then again, I didn't like JFK at all and willow was actually HAPPY with her...Damn other girls getting in the way of Willow-Tara lovin'! That Willow thought about Tara breats....:drool Ok, get our two favorite witches together soon and update...PLEASE!



:pride Alyssa :pride

Ze Goose
 


Re: No One Expects the Spanish Inquisition - Chapter Nine

Postby WillowWise » Mon Jan 10, 2005 4:18 am

Yay, Update! I really liked this one, I laughed a lot and I was needing that... I swear Anya was one of the best comic reliefs on Buffy and there was never anyone so perfect to play her.. I really like how you are writing the characters I can actually see it playing out while I read it... Mucho thumbs up!



Yes I like the slow and steady, but waiting for an update is like going oooooo chocolate, and you can see it but you cant touch it... that is no fair, bad you -giggles- no waiting, updates are good like once a week or or god for bid once every two weeks.....



Really enjoyed your update.



Aly

WillowWise
 

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