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Into The Woods (Hellebore short story)

Postby Artemis » Fri Oct 31, 2003 12:22 am

Into The Woods (a Hellebore short story)



Author: Chris Cook

Rating: R

Summary: Happy Halloween.

Spoilers: None.

Copyright: Based on characters from 'Buffy the Vampire Slayer', created by Joss Whedon and his talented minionators, and 'Diablo II' by Blizzard Entertainment. All original material is copyright 2003 Chris Cook.

Feedback: Please. Here, or to alia@netspace.net.au

Note: I like coming up with more background than I use, on the basis that real people often don't find out all the answers to things happening around them, so it seems more realistic when the same thing happens in stories. On this occasion, though, I managed to come up with a concept I liked very much, but that Willow and Tara would only encounter tangentially and never discover even a little of the story behind it. So here it is. This happens about two months before Willow and Tara spend a night in the cabin out in the wilderness.

Note 2: Ye gods, I'm writing fanfic based on my fanfic now...



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High above the plains and slopes of the Kingsway Highlands, a hawk circled lazily, oblivious to the rolling hills and swaying trees, but keenly picking out every scurrying shape, every motion driven by more than wind and rain. For a moment its gaze fixed on a lonely figure walking north in a valley far below. But only for a moment, before it turned its eyes to more likely prey.



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Egan cursed the driving rain as he tramped along the sodden path from his cabin to the northern wood, his cloak doing little to keep out the damp chill in the air as the wind tossed it around him and tried to drag his hood from over his head. An onlooker, had there been one, and had he noted the man's strong crossbow and the sturdy knife sheathed on his belt, might have wondered why a hunter would walk miles to the north, when the cabin he had set out from was barely a stone's throw from a thick wood southwards. But Egan knew, like his father, and his father before him, that it was the northern wood that offered the better game, whose meat and pelts had kept him and his ancestors well fed and handsomely paid for as many generations as he could remember.



Nevertheless, Egan was not hopeful for a catch today. It had been a week since he had gathered the few possessions he needed and set out from his home in Kotram. A week of sleeping in a bare cabin, listening to the howling wind and the rain lashing at the roof and walls, and so far every day when he made his rounds he found his traps empty. His hunter's instinct, drilled into him by his father and honed every day since childhood, told him his chances were no better today. But still he made his rounds, swearing as his hood whipped back and rain spattered his face, dragging it back, and cursing the damned animals for avoiding their usual haunts.



Finally rounding the edge of the valley's side, he reached the wood and followed the path beneath its branches. The thick foliage, spread by trees growing close to one another, caught most of the rain, leaving it to drip through in irregular streams as the wind shifted their leaves, but by and large offering shelter. Egan unwrapped his bow from its oilcloth, just in case, and used a corner of his cloak to rub the water from his eyes.



The first trap, on the edge of a clearing twenty metres into the wood, was of course empty, but Egan's spirits were not unduly lowered by that - it was only habit that led him to keep setting it there, for it rarely snagged anything larger than vermin or, if he was lucky, a rabbit. Checking the trap he found that - once again - it had sprung on its own, the steel jaws closed around a stray branch dropped from above, nearly slicing it in two. He set his crossbow aside and, with some effort, pulled the jaws apart, using his knee to nudge the lever back into place, holding the trap open.



His head jerked up as he heard a rustling of leaves and a mournful keening wail that set his teeth on edge. Hurrying, he grinned as he saw a sodden, furry form crouched over the next trap ten metres further into the wood. He drew his knife and whistled quietly as he recognised a wolf, with good meat on it and a fine, smooth coat that he knew would fetch a rare price. The animal jerked around as it heard him approach, trying to face him, but it could only move so far.



"Damn," Egan muttered as he came closer, seeing the wolf's head caught between the trap's jaws, which had bitten deep into its skin. He mentally assessed the damage as the beast stared up at him with scared, angry eyes. There was no way he could salvage the head, the neck was too badly torn, but the pelt from its back alone would still be valuable for common use, if not as the decorative piece that furs with heads made. On the bright side, the animal was held securely enough that he wouldn't have to go back for his bow - it was always difficult to make the killing shot somewhere where it wouldn't spoil the pelt.



"Damn you, why couldn't you have snagged your leg," he muttered anyway, kneeling down to draw the blade of his knife over the wolf's throat, silencing it. The wet, bloody body heaved once, then lay still. Egan braced himself and heaved the steel jaws open, kicking the dead wolf out of the way and setting the lever again. He noticed that it was not exactly where he left it, and indeed the chain tethering it to the nearest tree was taut.



"Pulled it a way, did you?" he said to the corpse, shifting the trap back to its original position, carefully hidden among the bushes. He stood up, surveying the camouflage and finding it adequate, then froze as he heard a low, menacing growl from behind him.



Turning as slowly as he could contrive, he saw the wolf staring at him. It lay just as he had left it, sprawled limply on the ground, blood oozing from its throat and the cuts gouged out around its neck, but its eyes were fixed on him, and full of hate. Slowly, painfully, it shifted, its claws scratching the earth for a moment, then it gathered its strength and slid its forelegs underneath itself, lifting its body. Its head hung at an odd angle, but its eyes never left Egan.



'Gods in heaven damn you,' he berated himself, 'you know better than to set a beast free without making damned sure it's dead!' Even in his fright, Egan wondered at the wolf - it *had* been dead, surely? He had seen the life drain out of it with his own eyes, felt the slackness as he kicked it off the trap's lever.



The wolf took one step forward, and Egan's fear got the better of him. He bolted, crashing through the bushes and bracken towards the path. Behind him he heard the growl following him, and his ears chilled him by picking out the soft sounds of leaves crinkling underneath silent paws.



He looked ahead and felt a surge of hope - there was a rider ahead of him, a strong white horse with a man astride it.



"*Help!*" he bellowed, "for pity's sake, help! Wolf! *Help me!*"



He burst into the clearing just as the rider calmly turned, and Egan halted and staggered back a step, danger momentarily forgotten, as he saw the empty sockets staring at him from beneath a faded black hood. His eyes darted - the hands on the horse's reins were bone, the leather boots in the stirrups were torn and stained, the steel breastplate beneath the cloak rusted and streaked with grime. He had only a moment before the sounds of the wolf's loping gait behind him took over his mind again, and he darted away from the terrible vision.



*Snap!* For a second Egan thought the wolf had him, as he crashed to the ground with his ankle exploding with pain, but when he looked down it was steel, not teeth, that had pierced his leg. Damning his carelessness he turned over, crying at the pain, and dragged himself forward, hopelessly trying to escape. Behind him the growl grew ever closer.



He screamed as the trap halted him, its chain taut and its jaws slicing into his flesh ad he tried to escape it. He had only a moment before he felt himself dragged by a searing pain in his back, then he screamed again and again as the wolf savaged him. With his back torn to ribbons it flipped him over, snapping at his hands as he vainly tried to defend himself, is muzzle gouging into his stomach when he was too weak even for that.



He had no more screams left in him, only bitter tears, yet some part of him recognised it when his hand fell against a wooden stock. Laughing against the pain he closed his fingers around the crossbow and slid it around, dragging it across the ground and over his chest to aim with a shaky hand at the creature killing him. The wolf looked up, somehow sensing the threat, and for a moment it was still, its jaws and fur dripping Egan's blood as well as its own. Quick as lightning it snarled and leapt forward, and Egan pulled the trigger.



The bolt passed between the beast's jaws and slammed into its brain, jerking it back. Instantly all its strength left it and it fell sideways, coming to rest beside Egan, the tip of the bow still hooked on its jaw, the bolt protruding from the top of it head. Egan lost his grip on the stock and dropped the weapon, his fingers twitching as he tried to move them again. The pain was gone, but all that was left in its place was cold.



Hooves thudded into the ground near Egan's head, and he opened his eyes to see the white horse beside him. Its master dismounted and looked down, with its empty, pitiless eyes, on the dying man and the dead animal, their blood staining the ground and mingling in the pools of rainwater.



"Come on then," Egan snarled, "take me you bastard."



The eyes looked at him for a moment, seeming somehow contemplative, then the figure stalked around him. It knelt down, and with all the care of a mother tending to her child, lifted the wolf into its arms, smoothing its ragged fur with bony fingers.



"*Me*, damn you!" Egan whispered harshly.



The figure paid him no attention as it returned to its horse and mounted, settling the lifeless wolf gently onto the steed's back in front of it. Egan lost the battle to keep his eyes open, and only heard the hooves fading away into the distance.



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In the night sky, a foul creature circled, looking for prey. Its leathery wings beat slowly as it scanned the landscape far below, ignoring the rocks and trees, seeing only the tiny forms of living things, and regarding them with mindless hatred. For a moment its gaze fixed on a lonely figure tramping slowly along a valley far below, its arms hanging limply by its sides, its eyes staring deadly forward, the wreck of its foot dragging behind it, making it lurch with every step as it put weight on the bleeding stump. But only for a moment, before it saw there was no life in the thing, and turned its eyes to more likely prey.



Artemis
 


Re: Into The Woods (Hellebore short story)

Postby sabina » Fri Oct 31, 2003 9:29 am

Hi Artemis :wave



Well, this was a great chapter :applause



And now I'm hanging on the edge of my seat waiting to see what is going to happen next!

Is the town completely deserted as it seems? Or are the villagers only hiding out of sight?



Questions, questions... Guess I'll have to wait to know the answers :bounce



Now your short story...



That was creepy :paranoid

But so well written :applause



More soon? :pray




"I know I was born and I know that I'll die.

The in between is mine.

I am mine!" - Pearl Jam

sabina
 


Re: Into The Woods (Hellebore short story)

Postby Puff » Fri Oct 31, 2003 9:58 am

Ok first of all the update. Damn the village is deserted, that can't be a good thing. I wonder if Willow and Tara will ever find the caravan again? Hopefully. Now they need to think of another plan and probably rest although I am not sure how well they will be able to acheive the later. No bumping in the night for a bit longer. Poor Tara felt guilty for killing a demon, I am glad Willow was able to reassure her that she did the right thing.



Now onto the scary story. How come I think that we haven't senn the last of Mr. Dead on the white horse or his pet wolf? The idea of Egan returning to his cabin that housed Willow and Tara is just creepy. I have a visual of that, that I am sure will stay with me.



Thank you for the update and the story. I am reallying enjoying the adventure.



So, the day started and I knew my name and had my pants on. So far, so good. Yay.
Amber Benson

Puff
 


Re:

Postby chilled monkey » Fri Oct 31, 2003 11:22 am

Okay, we have demons with necromantic powers running around, Tara thinks she sensed an undead, and now the village is deserted.Have the villagers all been turned into zombies? (Hey I like Resident Evil).



Willow comforting Tara was once again very nice. Who else but Tara would feel guilty about killing a demon?

chilled monkey
 


Re: Into The Woods (Hellebore short story)

Postby Arwen276 » Fri Oct 31, 2003 2:03 pm

umm okay let's cut to the chase: creep factor much?

what's up with the ghost town?

it's dead scary!

and especially after such a sweet banter after getting a hot bath then a hot night then a hot morning then re-bath! umm...

unless there's another logical explanation to creep-factor...like you know some kind of a party (cf Shrek when he reaches the city and it's empty but they're all at the coliseum of lord farquad? )

The add-on helped understand what happened at the cabin of course, and then the flying demon, but what's up with the horse rider? A necromancer? the wolf-protecting-squad?

I don't think I need to repeat how cute and sweet the banter between our witchy-warrier couple is...

Hope they find shelter soon!



~Arwen

Hear That Baby? You're My Always... Willow

Arwen276
 


Re: FIC: Hellebore (chapter 33)

Postby justin » Fri Oct 31, 2003 2:21 pm

That was a wonderful update.



So why was the village desserted? I can think of a few reasons and none of them are good.



Though hopefully the people from the caravan will still be able to find them, as long as the people from the caravan are still alive :paranoid



Looking forward to reading more.



Anya in a wimple...I'd pay full admission for that. Gods Served And Abandoned - by Antigone Unbound


You know the worst thing about people in a relationship? The fact that they're in a relationship. - Hilda Spellman





justin
 


Re: FIC: Hellebore (chapter 33)

Postby willowfan13 » Fri Oct 31, 2003 7:42 pm

Hey Chris,



I've really enjoyed the last 3 chapters, great suspense! Perfect Halloween story - ghost town of a village...

the girls *have* to find the caravan soon



in your reply to an earlier comment..."your love scenes are backed up"....:pray please un-back them soon, I'm really starting to miss their *not* making love :grin



cheers-

jackie

Edited by: willowfan13 at: 10/31/03 6:43 pm
willowfan13
 


Re: FIC: Hellebore (chapter 33)

Postby Grimlock72 » Sat Nov 01, 2003 5:30 am

Sooo.... there is a man out there limping with one foot, how coincidental :) That was a creepy story indeed, which raised more questions than answers really. I wonder if we'll see that wolf again... if mr knight likes his wolf so much he sure took his sweet time getting to it in it's hour of need, hah.



Aaanyway, yeah I noticed you write more background stuff than you EVER use :) It's nice since places the story in an entire setting, make it more realistic to read.



I think Willow and Tara need to move out to the next town. For some odd reason that town reminds me a lot of the fort in Starship Troopers, also deserted and verrry dangerous. Don't stay there, move along... how far is the next town anyway ?? And won't the caravan come to this town eventually ? They don't know it's this empty either. Assuming they will follow amazon-protocol they should head for the nearest town, which is where Willow and Tara are right now... shouldn't the caravan have arrived there BEFORE them ? Horses move faster after all.



Poor Tara being afraid she'll turn into a ruthless killer. That IS what combat training is for, to let you act on instinct without much thinking. So that worked just fine I'll say :) . The problem is not so much killing the bad things, it's deciding if something IS bad or good... much harder. Good thing they have demons over there, easy to decide :-) I do wonder if that bird was send as a tracker or just happened to fly across...



Willow is a walking fountain of knowledge ain't she ? How does she ever remember all that stuff ? She's definitly more comfortable once she can analyse the situation based on knowledge, thats her forte.



Grimmy

--
"You hurt Tara," Willow said too calmly. "The last one who tried that was a god. I made her regret it." -- Unexpected Consequences by Lisa of Nine

Grimlock72
 


Re: FIC: Hellebore (chapter 33)

Postby Artemis » Mon Nov 03, 2003 9:13 am

Thanks everyone :) Whew, I'm glad I got both of those done in time for Halloween. Abou ten minutes after I posted those I was out the door on my way to a night of really bad horror films.



I should also take a moment to forestall any future confusion by explaining that 'Into The Woods' is connected to 'Hellebore' only in that Willow and Tara did indeed hear the Egan-undead that night. The horseman was Death, so we won't be seeing him again.



I've got about two-thirds of the next chapter done, and it's picking up the pace a little.



sabina: Thanks :) The whereabouts of the villagers will be resolved, so I won't give it away.



Puff: You're right, a new plan is needed, as well as a place to rest. They'll get by, just like they always do :) Tara wasn't guilty so much for killing the demon as she was surprised at herself for acting so quickly and efficiently - I think it gave her a shock, and made her worry for a moment that maybe she was a little too quick. She's got good instincts though, so I think she'll be okay when she learns to rely on them.



Actually we have seen the last of Death, though in retrospect I should have realised it would look like I was setting up for future chapters (again). He was there to collect the wolf (which he knew would finally die soon), and Egan could see him because he was close to death (or undeath, as the case was) himself.



chilled monkey: I like Resident Evil too - Milla running around kicking undead butt, what's not to like? Don't be surprised if a few more undead show up now and then :) And yeah, Tara has a momentary crisis of confidence - but the fact that she is worried about those sorts of things is a good indication that she doesn't have to worry about becoming too ruthless.



Arwen: I'm glad the banter worked, I was a bit nervous about this chapter's reliance on dialogue without that much major content, in plot terms. The rider, as I mentioned above, was just Death going about his business. I can at least promise that our girls will find shelter (along with bed, bath and even that fireplace they were hoping for), but exactly when I won't say yet :)



justin: Well, in Sanctuary when you find a village deserted, it's generally not for any good reason, what with the abundance of nasties running around. As for the caravan, like Tara theorised a while back, they're well-armed and should have been able to fight off the remaining Carvers that were attacking them. Short of a second, stronger attack, they should be okay. Anyway, if Willow's right, the demons are after her, not the caravan :)



jackie: I will be unloading the love scenes as soon as they're appropriate - the middle of a deserted village isn't exactly the time or place :) But you never know, I had this whole trip mostly planned and I didn't foresee the lake love scene a couple of chapters ago, so there may be more spontaneous loving in store.



Grimlock: Well, I can at least promise we won't be seeing that wolf again - it's down for the count (as shown by Death taking it away). Head-shots work on Diablo undead, just like the Earth versions, and that crossbow bolt through the brain killed it permanently, beyond the ability of undeath to raise.



Starship Troopers, eh? Well, there is a giant bug in Diablo (Duriel, the 'Prince of Pain') but he won't be showing up, he's still grouching around in hell after having his squishy butt kicked during the Reckoning. But yeah, hanging around does not seem like a good idea. It's true that a rider from the caravan would have arrived before Willow and Tara, but he wouldn't have hung around either under the circumstances.



I think Tara's pretty much safe from turning ruthless - whether she realises it or not, she very accurately sensed the nature of the flying critter, so her instinct to take it down was based wholly on it being evil. If it had been a natural animal - even a dangerous one - I think she'd have paused and thought about it. Having never really been in this kind of situation, though, she's going through a process of adjusting to her abilities and reactions, which I think she'll eventually come to trust (and rightly so).



Willow is indeed knowledge-girl (as always) - the Zann Esu are big on knowing your enemy, and they've had centuries to learn all about all sorts of demons they might one day have to face. There are some elements of Zann Esu training that deal with intellectual abilities, memorisation and learning and so on, and Willow's pretty much a natural at all that. It does make her comfortable - analysing what she knows and drawing conclusions is familiar ground for her, so it's a comfort for her to apply those techniques when she's in otherwise unfamiliar territory.

Artemis
 


Re: FIC: Hellebore (chapter 33)

Postby sam7777 » Mon Nov 03, 2003 8:05 pm

The Egan interlude was a fascinating aside to what was happening with Willow and Tara that stormy night. The empty village is indeed ominous and it brings up the question of what might have happened to the Caravan. Wilow and Tara may be on their own for now at least. Still I hope we havn't seen that last of Tryptin and the rest.



I like the way you introduced Willow's Shadai encounter early on, built on the demon thing with the demon summoning in the Baron's castle and now the attack of the goat demons. Willow and Tara will need all their knowleadge and skills to defeat Shadai.

_____________________

I see dead lesbian cliches

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Re: FIC: Hellebore (chapter 33)

Postby Artemis » Tue Nov 04, 2003 8:14 am

sam: Well, I suppose I can reassure everyone that we'll be seeing Tryptin again. I didn't plan him being in this story at all (he was just a random name, back when I was writing Tara's voyage from Philios to Kingsport), but he's part of the story now, and he's got a small part in things that happen later. Also, in a non-self-absorbed (hopefully) way, he's my Mary Sue, the character who is basically me writing myself. He just tries to be helpful and not cause any trouble for anyone.



As you've picked up, it is all about Shadai in some way, and will continue to be - it wouldn't be an adventure if there wasn't a villain to overcome. But I can promise it's more than just a simple desire for revenge on her part, and hopefully there'll be enough revelations and twists in store to keep you all amused.

Artemis
 


FIC: Hellebore (chapter 34)

Postby Artemis » Tue Nov 04, 2003 8:17 am

Hellebore



Author: Chris Cook

Rating: R

Summary: A headstrong sorceress and a young Amazon join forces to locate and destroy an ancient source of demonic power.

Spoilers: None.

Copyright: Based on characters from 'Buffy the Vampire Slayer', created by Joss Whedon and his talented minionators, and 'Diablo II' by Blizzard Entertainment. All original material is copyright 2003 Chris Cook.

Feedback: Please. Here, or to alia@netspace.net.au



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Chapter Thirty-Four

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Willow and Tara walked slowly forward, each peering into every alley and doorway inside the gates, searching for any sign of life. A thought occurred to Tara, and she turned around to inspect the gates themselves.



"No damage," she said quietly.



"What?" Willow asked.



"The gates," Tara explained, "there's no damage. No broken timbers, the beam is intact."



"You mean they weren't attacked?"



"Or it was so sudden they didn't have time to bar the gates," Tara frowned. "Can you see any signs of fighting?"



Willow joined Tara in surveying as much of the village as they could see. She pointed out a door here and there that hung open, and venturing closer to the nearest building, a small general store, they saw the latch had been broken, as if the door was kicked in. Inside the shelves were bare, and on the floor lay scattered piles of produce and dry goods. A chair was turned over, several glasses had fallen to the floor and shattered, but among the debris there were no signs of actual fighting - no nicks in the counter to indicate a sword had struck, no furniture or tabletops shattered as if an axe had struck them, no blood stains on the wooden floor.



"What happened?" Willow wondered aloud. Tara shrugged, her worried gaze taking in every detail she could see.



"It looks like the place was abandoned and then looted," she murmured.



"Maybe the townspeople thought it was getting too dangerous out here?" Willow said, picking up a wooden plate and turning it over thoughtfully. "They packed up and went somewhere else? Maybe they're in the keep on the hill?"



"They didn't pack up," Tara said, "they'd have taken the food, not left it here to rot." She poked a mouldy loaf of bread with the toe of her boot. "This doesn't make sense, if they were attacked they'd have barred the gates and tried to hold out until help could come."



"Maybe they saw their attackers coming out on the plains," Willow suggested, "they had enough time to get everyone out?" Tara shook her head thoughtfully.



"It takes longer than you'd think to evacuate a village this size," she said, "back home, if we're threatened, all the adults know what to do, who looks after the children and gets them to safety, who packs up all the supplied that can be moved, who helps the elderly... it all has to be planned. For a village like this," she shrugged, "maybe I'm wrong, but it doesn't look like the kind of place where they'd be that prepared to move. It would have taken too long, and unless the enemy was very slow they'd have arrived... there'd at least have been signs of fighting outside, where the rearguard protected the last of the villagers as they escaped."



She checked a handful of the fallen items beneath the shelves, finding the food too spoiled to take, and stood up with a forlorn expression. Willow took her hand and followed her back outside, where they made for a smith's forge a few doors away.



"Maybe they did just decide to leave," Tara went on, though she didn't sound convinced, "maybe they knew about the demons out there, and figured they'd be safer in the keep, and they should leave the village before they were directly under threat."



"What about everything they left behind?" Willow asked. Tara shrugged.



"It's possible they were careless," she said, "I don't know."



"Do you think that's likely?" Willow asked. Tara shook her head morosely. "Me neither," Willow went on, "besides, the Kingsway Highlands had their share of trouble during the Reckoning. They weren't involved in the worst of it, with the Prime Evils, but there were more demons than they could comfortably deal with, according to the records the Order kept. They wouldn't have forgotten how to take care of themselves this quickly."



"It's as if they just," Tara mimed a bubble bursting, "poof! Vanished into thin air." She looked inside the smithy, and her frown deepened. Willow followed her gaze, and her shoulders slumped.



"There's no way anyone would have left this behind," Tara said, leaning over to pick up a sword, half out of its scabbard, from where it had fallen on the ground. She leant the sword against the forge itself, and lay her hand against its stones.



"Cold," she said, "I didn't think anyone had been here for at least a few days, but that confirms it." Willow looked around, counting on her fingers.



"I see at least a dozen scabbards," she said, worried, "but only three swords."



"Looted," Tara said grimly. "Bandits would at least take the scabbards, but..."



"...demons wouldn't bother," Willow finished, "you're right. Carvers have been here, or something like them."



"Goat-men?" Tara suggested, glancing around alertly. Willow shook her head.



"I doubt it," she said, pointing, "look over there, polearms." Tara followed Willow's gaze and saw a stack of simple halberds stacked in a corner. "Goat-men would have taken those, they're supposed to prefer two-handed weapons. Less speed, more power. Probably one of those Carver bands we saw the tracks of up on the ridge." She and Tara returned to the open, and Willow followed Tara across the square to the small village church.



"We shouldn't stay here," Tara said quickly, "but I want to try to find out what happened, why the village is like this."



"Agreed," Willow said, "even if it was Carvers that came through here, that doesn't explain how the village was overrun, or why the gates weren't closed. Besides, there'd have to be a hundred of them before they'd dare attack a place this size. What are we looking for?" Tara pushed open the door of the church and looked around inside, noting the building was largely untouched, though the pews were in places scratched and broken, and one of the tapestries adorning the walls had been torn.



"Back home each of the smaller villages keeps its own records," Tara said, "sort of like a journal of the village's life. They record when visitors pass through, when the harvests are taken in, any notable events, that sort of thing. I want to see if these people kept anything like that."



"Some of the towns we passed through in Entsteig did the same sort of thing," Willow said, joining Tara in searching the long church hall's shelves on either side of the pews, which mostly contained old maps and scrolls. "A few of them had us all sign our names when we stayed the night."



"Here," Tara said after a moment, "this looks likely." She took the last one of a series of identical tomes from a far shelf and opened it on the table at the end of the hall, beneath a wooden Zakarum cross. Willow looked over her shoulder, scanning through the neatly-recorded dates and notes, all written in the same heavy hand.



"This is the last one," Tara said, "that's... two weeks ago?"



"Two weeks," Willow agreed, "'Arrival of Tomas, brother of our smith Piter, from Harthim. Excess grain from harvest sent to monastery for safe-keeping.' That must be the monastery up on the hill. That's it?" She turned the next couple of pages, finding them blank. "The blacksmith's brother shows up and they send some food up to the monastery? What about 'Evacuating village now, sorry we missed you'?"



"No pages have been torn out," Tara mused, "and you're right, I'm sure they wouldn't have left without someone at least leaving a record of where they were going." Willow frowned, and absently toyed with a corner of the frayed carpet with her boot.



"Tara?" she asked.



"Yes?"



"What do we do now?" Tara paused, leaned against the table, and thought for a moment.



"We'll check the monastery," she said, "if a rider from the caravan came here and found the place like this, that's where he'd have gone. If not..." she trailed off.



"What?" Willow asked nervously.



"I don't know," Tara admitted, "something's not right. If this happened two weeks ago, but they didn't know about it in Harthim - and I'm sure they'd have mentioned it if they did - that means no-one from here reached there. If they went to the monastery to hide, surely they'd have sent a rider to the nearest safe town."



"The monastery?" Willow asked. "It's stone, and those places are built like fortresses, the demons can't have got in there... could they?" Tara shook her head again.



"I don't know," she repeated. "If the monastery isn't safe, I think we should head for the river, and try to get on a boat going to Duncraig."



"Not Harthim?" Willow asked.



"It's four days to Harthim from here," Tara said, "that's if we take the road, which leaves us visible. If we go across country, maybe five days. The river is only two days away, and you saw how many boats are travelling along it. I think that's what we should do."



"Okay," Willow agreed, "then that's what we'll do." Tara nodded, took Willow's hand, and together they left the church.



"Wait a moment," Tara said as they reached the street, "we should check the stores, just in case there's dried food we can take. We might run low on rations if we have to make for the river." Willow nodded, and they moved towards a pair of storehouses on either side of the road, just beyond the square. Willow poked her head through the door, which hung ajar, and found the shelves had been swept clean, their former contents scattered on the ground, barrels broken open, sacks of grain slashed. A cursory examination yielded nothing worth taking, so she sighed and came back to the door.



She saw Tara leaning on the wall of the building she had gone into, breathing deeply and staring off into the sky. Tara's eyes fixed on Willow, and she quickly came to meet her halfway across the street, taking her shoulders.



"We h-have to l-leave," she said, as Willow glanced at the door of the storehouse behind her.



"Tara?" she asked. "What's wrong? What's in there?"



"Th-the people," Tara said in a haunted voice.



"What?" Willow exclaimed, keeping her voice down. She ducked around Tara, making for the door, but Tara's hand closed around her arm and held her in a grip that, gentle as it was, was unbreakable.



"They're dead," Tara said quietly. Willow studied her expression, and a chill crept over her.



"What..." she began. Tara shook her head.



"Let's just go," she said. Willow nodded, and they jogged towards the village gates. Tara stopped in her tracks as they were almost at the gate, holding out an arm to stop Willow, who almost ran into her.



"Something's out there," she said at Willow's confused look, "I'm not sure what... I think it might be Carvers."



"How many?" Willow whispered. Tara closed her eyes, and Willow held herself still, not wanting to interfere with Tara's concentration.



"Lots," Tara said darkly, "to the south, coming this way." She cautiously edged to the gate and peered around it.



"Damn," she said quietly, pulling back. Willow looked, keeping herself as much out of sight as she could. On the horizon, spread out on either side of the road leading away from the village, dark shapes were moving closer. She saw a pair of crude banners raised on standards, flapping in the breeze, and on either side, a hundred metres or so distant from the main group, small handfuls of the creatures kept pace with them.



"Will they see us?" Willow wondered. "They move faster than goat-men, I don't think we'll outrun them."



"If we go out, we'll have to fight," Tara said as Willow ducked back. "They're too far spread out to miss us, and it's open ground anyway, they're sure to see us."



"Can we take that many?" Willow asked. "I think there's two old ones, probably magic users. It might take a minute or two for me to get rid of them."



"I'm not sure I can hold off the others for that long," Tara said quickly. "Do these villages have a back gate? They can't just have the one gate, can they?"



"I don't know," Willow said, "come on, let's find out while we've got time. If we have to fight, we'd be better off in here, where they won't be able to come at us all at once." She and Tara took off at a run, dodging between the church and the village tavern, through an alley, into the street running behind them, and between a pair of houses. Beyond those were crude sheds, intended only to keep stores dry and out of the wind, and they backed onto the village's wall.



"Hell," Tara swore uncharacteristically.



"Where's the back gate?" Willow complained, looking frantically from side to side. "You've got to have a back gate, otherwise you get trapped in when someone shows up and lays siege to the place and damn it!"



"I don't see anything we could use to climb over," Tara said quickly. Willow turned around, her back to the earth wall, and thought furiously.



"Okay," she said, her brow furrowed, "Carvers have already been here, right? And there's a bunch of them coming. What're the odds it's two separate groups?"



"No way to tell," Tara said, "there might be more than one band of them, or it might just be the same one coming back. Why would they come back?"



"They sometimes take over abandoned towns," Willow explained briefly, "for protection during the day, and to store food. If it's the same band as looted the place originally, that means they won't stay, they'll leave again once it's dark, and we'll be able to get out safely once they're gone!"



"You mean hide?" Tara asked, sceptical. "Would it be safe? What if they find us?" Willow took her hand and led her back between the storehouses, towards the village square.



"I think I saw a trapdoor in the church," she said, "it hadn't been disturbed. They think the place is deserted, they won't search it again. We haven't left any trace of us being here, have we?"



"Not much," Tara said, her mind working fast, "maybe a footprint, a couple of things moved... we took that book off its shelf."



"They won't notice," Willow said, "I'm sure they won't, Carvers aren't smart enough to notice things like that, I'm sure." They reached the square and darted inside the church, running along between the pews to the end of the hall. Willow reached for the carpet, hesitated, grabbed the book and shoved it back on its shelf, then bent down and drew the carpet back. Beneath there was a trapdoor, made from heavy wood bracketed with iron, unscarred and dusty around the heavy iron ring that would open it. Together they managed to heave the door open, and Tara held it while Willow stepped onto the sturdy ladder within and looked down.



"Nothing's damaged down here," she said, turning back to Tara and helping hold the door. "What do you think?" Tara thought for a moment.



"It's our best option," she said, "I don't think we can get out without being seen, and the odds aren't in our favour in a running battle. Can you hold the door for a moment?" Willow braced herself and kept the door open, while Tara dragged the carpet up over it. Handing Willow her spear, she climbed with her onto the ladder, and slowly they lowered the trapdoor down as they descended.



"I can hear them," Tara said softly, "at the gate. I think they're coming in." She reached over and tugged on the edges of the rug, hanging over the sides of the door, straightening it so it would lie flat, as it had been before, once the door was shut.



"Their eyesight's decent, but they can't smell or hear too well," Willow whispered, "so long as they don't see us we'll be alright."



"Memorise the cellar," Tara said, "there won't be much light, not enough for you to see by."



"You?" Willow asked, glancing down, noting the positions of barrels, crates and the walls relative to the bottom of the ladder.



"Maybe," Tara said, "a little. Not much."



"Mind your fingers," Willow warned, as Tara reached through the narrowing gap between the floor and the lowering trapdoor, ensuring there would be no evidence the carpet had been moved. Tara gave a thumbs-up, and together they gently lowered the door closed, plunging the cellar into darkness.



Moving carefully, testing each step they descended the ladder and finally reached the floor. Tara heard the slight sound as Willow lowered the blankets and satchel she was carrying, and a moment later felt her spear against her hand. She took it and switched it to her other hand, wanting to keep hold of Willow until her eyes adjusted. She blinked in the gloom, finding the light even more elusive than she had thought. On the one hand that was good - the less light was being let in, the fewer cracks there were for a stray sound to escape - but Tara had always found it disconcerting to have to navigate by tracker senses, imagining the shape of her surroundings more by the way the air circulated when she moved. Here and there a tiny shaft of light ventured through the floorboards, but they were few and far between.



She felt Willow turn her hand over, and then a fingertip was tracing against her palm: 's-e-e', then a question mark. Tara blinked again, doing her best to focus her senses, and found she could tell at least where the walls were, as well as get a rough idea what was open space and what was blocked by crates. She traced a 'y' on Willow's palm, and felt a reassuring squeeze of her hand in return.



Tara led Willow across the floor and gently pulled her down, helping her spread out the blankets to provide some comfort as they sat. She carefully laid her spear on the ground, and her bow, memorising exactly where they were so that she could snatch them up again at a moment's notice.



For a little while all was silent in the hall above them, and only Tara's superior hearing allowed her to detect the faintest hint of movement from the street outside. She felt Willow lean against her, and gratefully put an arm around her shoulders, the close contact between them reassuring her. Then both women tensed as there came the dull sound of claws tapping on wooden floorboards. Tara's hand went to her spear, and she felt a vague sensation of gathering power from Willow beside her. More and more footsteps came, some of them from directly above, but the trapdoor remained undisturbed, and the little cracks of daylight in the floorboards remained cut off abruptly around the door, indicating the carpet hadn't been moved. In spite of the continued presence above them, Tara relaxed a little, and felt Willow do likewise.



Up above there seemed to be some commotion. Snarling and chittering echoed down, a sort of guttural language composed of sharp, harsh sounds, accompanied by what seemed to be a background chorus of hissing from other voices. Occasionally there was a growling shout, and the other voices would join in. Now and then a sharp sound echoed through the cellar, as if something heavy were being rapped on the floor. For a nervous moment Tara wondered if the creatures were testing the floor, looking for cellars such as the one they were in, but when nothing came of it she decided it had to be something else - a gesture of authority? She imagined the old Carvers slamming the hafts of their standards on the ground as they snarled and barked at their tribes.



Being so close to Willow, Tara sensed at once when she moved her arm, and so was not startled when she felt her fingertip on her palm again, tracing letters. She concentrated, having missed the first letter but catching the others: 'l-d,' she traced, then a tap, then 'o-n-e-s,' tap, 'a-r-g-u-i-n-g.' Figuring out Willow's system - the taps were spaces - she re-imagined the scene above, now with two old Carvers growling at each other, as the tribe divided up behind them, snarling support or derision. She realised suddenly that, unless Willow were guessing - and she wouldn't have gone to the trouble of laboriously conveying it to Tara, if it were just a random guess - she must have been able to understand the creatures' language. Tara's respect for the Zann Esu's teaching, already high on the evidence of Willow's broad and often encyclopaedic knowledge, increased again.



Up above, the argument seemed to suddenly escalate, with a crash as something - probably one of the pews, Tara guessed - tipped over, to a general accompaniment of growls and shouts. A rhythmic chanting began, raw and primal, accented by the stamping of many clawed feet. A couple of the tiny cracks of light wavered as something passed above them, then a moment later there was a great cheer, and a screech of pain.



Tara pushed her senses as far as they would go, preparing for the possibility that, somehow, the fight above might somehow give away her and Willow's hiding place - a scrabbling claw catching the edge of the carpet, perhaps, or even a falling body breaking a floorboard, though she allowed that was unlikely, given the size of the Carvers, and the sturdy construction of the church hall. She frowned, trying to place something that didn't quite seem right - 'Then again,' she mused to herself, 'what is it *supposed* to feel like when you're hiding under the floor with demons fighting up above?' Willow seemed to be taking the situation with more calm, remaining alert but not unduly tense at Tara's side.



The combatants seemed to have come to grips properly, to judge by the raucous cheering and shrieking. There was the thud of a body falling, far off to one side of the trapdoor thankfully, a hasty scrambling noise, a brief pause, then a clang of blades. The swords clashed twice more, then there was another pained shriek, and a cheer.



'The same one as got hurt before?' Tara wondered. 'Or are they even now?' She mentally shook herself, reminding herself that it hardly mattered how the duel was going, so long as she and Willow remained undiscovered.



For a few seconds there were only footsteps, and Tara imagined the combatants circling each other, then the noise of the other creatures died down, there was a breathless pause, and a body hit the floor. Tara let out a breath as the silence ended with another cheer, slowly turning into more chanting. She felt Willow lean back against the wall beside her, and acknowledged that the end of the fight above did seem to ease the tension down below. If anything, perhaps now the creatures would be too enthused with cheering the victor to devote any of their marginal brainpower to searching the building any further than they had already done. She relaxed too, and reached around Willow with both arms, holding her close.



"Love you," she whispered in a tiny voice, quite sure the raucous yelling in the hall above would prevent her being overheard. Willow's arm snaked around her waist, her other hand on Tara's arm as it crossed her chest, and she hugged Tara tightly in response.



For the next few minutes they remained still and silent, listening as the sounds above dwindled into chittering exchanges, and the footsteps became fewer. There was a muffled dragging sound and a thud at one point, from roughly where the loser of the combat had fallen, and Tara wondered idly, with black humour, if Carvers buried their dead or ate them. From what she had seen in the storehouse - and she did her best not to dwell on that - they had no compunctions about eating anything else.



Something still nagged her senses, and to keep herself from thinking too much about the Carvers and the fate of the people who had lived in the village above, Tara let her thoughts dwell on the space around her and Willow, wondering what it was she felt. The air was almost still now that neither of them were moving, and she had only the vaguest sense of where the walls and crates were, mostly from the tiny amount light shining through the floorboards above. With a jolt she realised what it was - the air *was* moving, a tiny, almost imperceptible motion where there should have been none.



Willow's grip tightened as she felt Tara's surprise, and Tara took a moment to reassure her silently, stroking her side and back. She felt Willow's head, tucked in against her shoulder, nod once, and returned her attention to the tremor in the air. For a moment she wondered if, unlikely though it was, there was something else in the cellar with them, but she immediately discarded that thought - the motion was too regular. It was almost like - Tara frowned in thought - like a breeze, the kind of thing that, had she been outside, she would have ignored without even thinking about it, filtering it out so that she could more readily sense other things. 'But in here,' she thought, 'there shouldn't be any breeze at all. You don't get breezes in sealed cellars, only in... tunnels,' she finished with a widening of her eyes. She gently took Willow's hand.



'W-a-i-t,' she traced on it, feeling Willow nod again that she understood. Making no sound at all Tara extracted herself from Willow's arms and got to her feet, picking up her spear just in case. She took a step forward, then another, and suddenly she could actually feel the air moving against her face. She turned towards the movement, and gingerly walked towards the wall of the cellar, slowly feeling her way with each step just in case there was some obstruction on the ground she hadn't already detected.



She came to the wall and, holding the spear in the crook of one arm, laid both her palms on it and felt around experimentally. She worked her way along the stone surface, following the tiny breeze, until she reached a stack of crates. She slipped her hand between them and the wall, and with a start felt her fingers touch wood, not stone, behind them. She felt around for a moment, tracing the edge of the wood, where it met the stone - it was sturdy, thick... she felt cold metal under her fingers, and examining it in the dark, realised it was a hinge. A door.



Quickly she returned to Willow, gently taking her hand as she saw, by a thin ray of light, Willow sensing her approach and reaching out for her. She sat down and curled Willow's fingers over, except for one which she pointed at the crates, then she opened her hand and traced 'd-o-o-r.'



Willow kept herself calm, but Tara could nevertheless feel her sudden excitement. Willow guided her hand first to her own chest, then Tara's, then pointed both their hands where Tara had indicated. Tara drew their joined hands to her cheek and, when they were touching, nodded so Willow could feel it. Together they stood and moved over to the stack of crates concealing the doorway.



Tara guided Willow's hands to the concealed doorway, and waited as she examined it. Willow turned back to her, taking her hand, and touched it to the crates. Tara nodded, forgetting that Willow likely couldn't see her at all, and moved to the other side of the stack. Careful not to make any noise, she lifted the first of the three crates off the other two, feeling Willow lifting the other side of it. Slowly, tentatively guided by each other's movements, they moved a few paces away from the wall and gingerly lowered their burden to the ground.



It was the work of a few moments to move the other two crates, and then Tara and Willow both traced the outline of the revealed door with their fingers. There was no latch, but when Tara experimentally put her weight against the door and pushed, it shifted slightly. Willow felt the heavy door move, and joined Tara in pushing against it. Together they managed to open it inwards about a third of its travel, before Tara froze as the hinges let out a warning creak. Willow's hands flew off the door as if it were hot, and Tara knew they couldn't risk moving it any further. With one hand on the edge of the door and one on the stone wall of the tunnel, she guessed there was just enough space to slip through the gap.



She took Willow's hand and together they went back to where they had left their blankets and bags, gathering them up quickly and quietly. Tara went through the door first, spear held protectively in front of her, and let out a breath she hadn't realised she'd been holding as she managed to wriggle through without causing more than a tiny scratching sound between the back of her armour and the wall. She reached through the door and took the bags that Willow handed to her, setting them down around her feet as she learned what she could of the tunnel she had stepped into.



The breeze flowing through the tunnel was steady and, now that she was through the door, quite strong. Tara had a sensation of a long space ahead of her, and the air had a chilly bite to it that made her think of subterranean caverns. She bent down and felt the floor, finding it smooth and, more surprisingly, paved. Feeling around, Tara felt a strange indentation in one of the pavers, far too regularly-formed to have been caused by wear or damage, but otherwise there were no irregularities in the surface. She stood again as she felt Willow slip through the doorway behind her.



"What is it?" Willow asked in a whisper, after taking Tara's arm and guiding her behind the door, to contain the sound as much as possible.



"I don't know," Tara whispered in reply, "catacombs?"



"I wouldn't have thought so in a village this size," Willow said. "Do you see any tombs? In the walls maybe?"



"I can't see much," Tara murmured, "just feel the air moving." For a moment she was silent, then Willow grabbed her arm excitedly.



"Back gate," she whispered, "if there's air moving, this has to come out somewhere, right?"



"Uh-huh," Tara confirmed.



"This must be the back gate," Willow went on, "it's a tunnel to outside the village, so they can't be trapped in!"



"Help me close the door," Tara said, "we'll move the crates back then close the door behind them. Even if those things find the cellar, they might not search it too carefully, and that'll buy us time."



"Okay," Willow said, in lieu of a nod. Together they carefully moved the crates back as close as they could, risking a scraping sound now and then as they pulled all three close to the wall once they had both scrambled back through the doorway. The hinges let out a tiny creak as they started to move, but then the door swung back into place silently. Pushing against the back of it, Tara felt an odd feature, a wooden beam attached vertically to the door.



"Wait a moment," she said as Willow turned away. She heard Willow stop, but she didn't seem alarmed - probably because Tara had sounded more curious than concerned. Tara ran her hands over the door, feeling the shape of the strange attachment. She found hinges at the bottom and a latch at the top, and with a dawning understanding of its purpose she undid the latch and lowered the beam, feeling its base nudge up against the surface of the door just as the end slid into the indentation carved in the floor.



"It braces the door shut," she explained, guiding Willow's hands to the beam, "do you think it'll hold a Carver?"



"Definitely," Willow whispered, "there's no way they could break through, not without a battering ram. Maybe the old one could blast it in with fire, but I wouldn't be surprised if it brought the whole cellar and the entrance to the tunnel down as well. Fire's tricky to control, and they don't make good mages."



"We should move on," Tara said, "put some distance between us and them. With luck, even if they do find the cellar and get through the door, we'll have enough of a head start." They picked up their belongings and, Tara leading the way, walked into the darkness.



Artemis
 


Re: FIC: Hellebore (chapter 34)

Postby 2DIAMONDS » Tue Nov 04, 2003 11:20 am

:thud :thud :thud :thud :thud :thud



WOW, that was some update, Chris! :clap

I was so scared :paranoid for Willow and Tara!!!



Where is the caravan?!



This is sooo scary...the only good thing we have going is the love, strength and comfort :willow and :tara draw from each other!



Can't wait for more!



Helen

xoxo

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Re: FIC: Hellebore (chapter 34)

Postby sabina » Tue Nov 04, 2003 12:22 pm

This was a great update :applause



So the villagers were eaten by carvers... I'm glad our girls found a place to hide and were safe :paranoid



Hum... So now they completely lost the caravan right? The nearest town being destroyed...



Update soon? :pray




"I know I was born and I know that I'll die.

The in between is mine.

I am mine!" - Pearl Jam

sabina
 


Re: FIC: Hellebore (chapter 34)

Postby justin » Tue Nov 04, 2003 12:40 pm

That really was a great update :clap :bow



I liked this line,



Quote:
"The blacksmith's brother shows up and they send some food up to the monastery? What about 'Evacuating village now, sorry we missed you'?"




:rofl very willow-like



Then you once again bring on the tension with them having to hide in the cellar from a horde of rampaging carvers :eek That was worrying since if the carvers had found the cellar they would have been trapped. So I'm very glad they found a tunnel out.



Of course if the caravan has sent riders to look for them then those riders might well run into a village full of carvers. Which won't be fun.



Looking forward to reading more.



Anya in a wimple...I'd pay full admission for that. Gods Served And Abandoned - by Antigone Unbound


You know the worst thing about people in a relationship? The fact that they're in a relationship. - Hilda Spellman





justin
 


Re: FIC: Hellebore (chapter 34)

Postby Arwen276 » Tue Nov 04, 2003 1:37 pm

Okay!

I could actually feel the emptiness of the town through your text.

the suspence and worry...even the horror Tara felt,although we didn't see a thing... just the guess work caused the creeps!

Beautiful!

I'm glad they're safe and *blows a whistle* at Tara's abilities to react in the dark, and her ressourcefulness!

I'm amazed at how attuned she can be to Willow, and Willow to her, although on a lighter scale.



So I guess they're back to the wilderness? or straight to the monastery?



~Arwen

Hear That Baby? You're My Always... Willow

Arwen276
 


Re: FIC: Hellebore (chapter 34)

Postby Grimlock72 » Tue Nov 04, 2003 4:44 pm

Those carvers are much to organized, who's doing that ? Either the carvers were looking for something in that town the first time around or they were just having fun while clearing it for their own uses. However, Willow says carvers take over abandoned towns... not actually attack towns themselves. That sounds like a carver alright, let someone else empty the town then move in :)



It's nice of Tara that she doesn't want Willow to see those people in the storehouse but not very usefull. Willow already has seen her share of bad-taste imagery. The emptyness felt very strange, where did they all go ??



Had flashbacks of Starship Troopers again, when they saw that horde of carvers approaching. Strange that such large hordes appearantly can roam around the land without being noticed. I do have faith in both Willow and Tara's capabilities but taking on such a large number of carver would be pushing it, best not take the risk. Guerilla warfar in the desert town would be less risky, but of course combat is best avoided until you have a HUGE army behind you... the caravan's guards will do nicely :)



I'm not sure how far away that monstary is, otherwise I would wager that the tunnel from the church ends there. It would make sense but also be dangerous, after all if Tara can find that tunnel... the door wasn't locked yet which means the tunnel wasn't used by the villagers I think. So where DID they go ? It's not like carvers are clean eaters by any means... if they ate them all there would be a lot of mess around.



I was almost expecting them to find a hole in the ground from where the carvers had attacked the city and maybe there WAS such a hole. Again the question if those old carvers are so smart or if they are instructed by someone else.



If those carvers WERE indeed looking for something it might be very unwise to go to the monastary, since that would be next on the search-list, hmm...



Still very distrustfull of who's behind those carvers, not a believer in coincidence here... nope :)



Grimmy

--
"You hurt Tara," Willow said too calmly. "The last one who tried that was a god. I made her regret it." -- Unexpected Consequences by Lisa of Nine

Edited by: Grimlock72 at: 11/4/03 3:45 pm
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re:chapter 34

Postby willowfan13 » Tue Nov 04, 2003 9:03 pm

scary as hell, chris - great job!

just as tara was reaching/feeling for the door, my dogs starting barking like crazy at something outside & i about jumped a mile...:grin ...good scary part!



willow's knowledge never ceases to amaze, either by knowing or quickly learning carver language.



i agree with grim, that although it was very protective of tara to not let willow see the bodies, it might've been helpful so she could determine exactly what had happened to the townfolk.



where *is* the caravan? tryptin and the gang are o.k. right?



you're awesome chris -thanks for the update.



jackie

willowfan13
 


Re: re:chapter 34

Postby KatsMeow » Wed Nov 05, 2003 1:23 am

Chris-



I have been delightfully (:devilish ) caught up in RL lately and haven't had the opportunity to catch up on your story until today.



Even though my blissful stroll through reality was very nice, I'm glad to be able to once again be caught up in your wondeful story.



Great work.



Kats





KatsMeow
 


Re: FIC: Hellebore (chapter 34)

Postby JustSkipIt » Wed Nov 05, 2003 9:59 am

Hi Chris,

I must say that I'm very excited about the turn the story has taken. I love that both W&T are such powerful women so it's good that they have something to run from/to and battle. Their minds work wonderfully and they are a very complement to each other. Believe it or not, I was getting tired of the NC-17? :confused but now it's really moving through adventure and wonderful. Great job. Debra

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"I was working on a proof of one of my poems all morning and took out a comma. In the afternoon, I put it back in again." - Oscar Wilde

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Re: FIC: Hellebore (chapter 34)

Postby Puff » Wed Nov 05, 2003 11:27 am

So the cellar part in the church gave me the creeps, especially when the carvers were fighting above them. I wonder if Willow knows what they were saying and if it was important. Um I have no idea what carvers actually look like but I tend to picture them like the leggy bugs in starship troopers...only maybe smaller :) I wonder why they are organized though into a raiding party (or a search party) I bet they are working for someone.



I'm enjoying this story and I am glad Willow and Tara found the back door to the villiage. I wonder what they are going to do now? I'm looking forward to finding out.



So, the day started and I knew my name and had my pants on. So far, so good. Yay.
Amber Benson

Puff
 


Re: FIC: Hellebore (chapter 34)

Postby Artemis » Thu Nov 06, 2003 11:31 am

Thanks everyone :) The next chapter... well, to be honest I haven't started it yet, though I've got a fairly good idea of the shape of it, so it's just a matter of filling in the details. If TemperedCynic is still reading, she'll be amused to note that an theory she put forward waaay back at the beginning has turned out to be true after all, much to my surprise as I didn't plan it that way. But anyway... tomorrow shall be spent writing, and seeing as there aren't any distractions looming on the horizon, if I'm lucky, I may even turn out the whole chapter in one go. Stranger things have happened. Weekend at the latest, though.



Helen: Caravan update :) If you consult the map ( members.iinet.net.au/~ott...ellmap.htm ) you'll see a road leading directly north from Harthim, about two-thirds of the way up the map (that H looks like an N, but trust me, it's Harthim). The caravan was on that road when it was attacked. Willow and Tara fled east, cross-country, and are now at Kotram, which is the town in the hills north-east of Harthim, on the other road which eventually veers off to join the river road. The caravan wasn't ever going to pass through Kotram, so they're out of danger so far as this current situation is concerned.



sabina: Pretty much. The smart thing for the caravan to do, once they recovered from being attacked, would be to continue towards Duncraig, where they could expect safer conditions, and send riders to look for Willow and Tara where they might reasonably expect them to be. With conditions uncertain and no sure knowledge of which towns are safe and which are in danger, the best thing for Willow and Tara is to do as Tara thought, and just head for Duncraig however they can. As Tara noted, it's four days to Harthim, which may or may not have been in trouble since the caravan left it, but if they're lucky and manage to get aboard a river boat, in that same four days they could be in Duncraig itself. Short of an apocalypse, Duncraig is not going to be overrun by demons.



justin: Thanks. I'm happy when I can find a place for a line that sounds very much like Willow or Tara, it reassures me I'm not just using their names for fantasy characters :) As for being trapped in the cellar, it was a calculated risk (hastily calculated, but still). Personally, I think Willow and Tara had a decent shot at blasting their way out if they were discovered - an Amazon and a sorceress fighting for their lives (and more importantly, for each other's lives) could be pretty fearsome. But yeah, best not to start a fight if you can avoid it, you never know what will happen.



A rider could outrun Carvers - they're generally faster over open ground than people, but a horse on a road will leave them in the dust.



Arwen: Tara, in tracker mode, is very attuned to everything around herself, and though she doesn't do it consciously, her instincts are very much to focus on Willow. Well, obviously she consciously focuses on Willow, but she might not realise she's using her training to 'read' her, except when she does it deliberately. Amazons are all about noticing everything and overlooking nothing, though a dark room with little air movement is a bit of a stretch. I actually didn't realise when I started writing that part how difficult it would be to sense their surroundings with no light :)



Grimlock: Carvers are tribal by nature, it's their way to rally around their old ones (Shamen) and act as a group. On their own, they're just too damn weak to survive long :) It's true that they don't often attack towns, even a village the size of this one, as it's too easy for an organised defence to pick off their Shamen, and without their fire, there's really no way for Carvers to get through a defensive wall. But if a village is undefended, they'll move in and make use of it as long as it seems safe.



The monastery is about a mile away, at the top of the hill. And true, the door wasn't sealed, which means the villagers didn't get out that way. Why they didn't is a mystery... As for what happened to them - they were in the storehouse, all of them. About Tara wanting Willow not to look in there, while it's possible Willow might have noticed some detail Tara missed, it's not likely. For the record, if there had been any indication of ritual or anything like that - particular placement of bodies, evil runes on the ground or whatever - Tara would've thought twice, but she didn't see anything to indicate anything beyond what she already knew, which was that the entire population of a village had been piled up in a storehouse and half-eaten. That told her pretty much all she needed to know, which was get out of the village :) Now, why they hadn't just been killed and eaten in their homes and stores... more mystery.



They move quickly, which is how they can show up like that. Carvers generally move at a jogging pace, which they can keep up pretty much indefinitely until they need to sleep. The plain the village is on isn't completely level, which is how Tara didn't see them earlier.



It's a good idea not to trust Carvers :)



jackie: Heh, I'm glad your dogs are helping out in building the mood :) Willow will explain how she was able to understand the Carvers (and more about what was going on up there), but basically, demons have several common languages, and Carvers speak a bastardised, guttural version of one of them. The Zann Esu learn them all, just in case.



Kats: Glad you're back :) and that real life is treating you well by the sound of it. I myself avoid reality as a rule - it gets in the way of the story :)



Debra: I believe it - not that I particularly regret the wall-to-wall smut in a wagon chapters (hey, Tolkien just had Hobbits talking about food to pass the time before the plot got into gear :) ), but yeah, I am glad to have finally got far enough north for the plot to get going again. Note to self: write story first, *then* draw map. Of course there will be more love scenes - a lot more - but hopefully there'll be enough story going on around them that it'll all achieve a balance of sorts. Or if you want, just skim over them until the dialogue kicks in again, I've done that now and then. I can, at least, promise much more of the adventuring, teamwork and fighting-evil-type action to come.



Puff: Carvers are goblins, basically. Picture here: darkness.diabloii.net/bea...llen02.jpg As you can see (or, for the benefit of anyone who doesn't really want to go chasing links all the time), they're wiry little humanoids with clawed hands and feet, and long thin horns. They're human-like enough to wear clothes (thankfully), use tools like swords and torches, and have a basic grasp of language, though they're hardly eloquent. Height, about a metre and a half.



I'm glad you're enjoying the story (that goes for everyone, of course), and with luck, you'll find out where it goes next sometime in about 24-48 hours.

Artemis
 


Re: FIC: Hellebore (chapter 34)

Postby shuyaku » Thu Nov 06, 2003 12:26 pm

I've found that it is kind of nice to be delayed with leaving the feedback - everyone asks the questions I was going to ask and you answer them! Working quite well with my busier than normal RL :D



I love the twists and turns the last couple of chapters have taken. The carvers are just icky, but I don't think it was them (at least not by themselves) that killed all the villagers. There definitely would have been signs of a struggle if that was the case.



Thanks for keeping me happily distracted from reality at least a couple times a week!

-shuyaku



ps - your fanfic about your fanfic was great! Creepy and icky, but great. Unfortunately I was eating breakfast while reading it - that wasn't the brightest move :lol

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"Oh God, Willow—you’re giving me the gift of Karen Carpenter. Just when I think I grasp the full extent of your love." - Tara

"Why do birds suddenly appear? It’s because, you are queer…" - Willow (Gods Served and Abandoned by AntigoneUnbound)

shuyaku
 


Re: Chapter 34

Postby chilled monkey » Fri Nov 07, 2003 3:55 pm

Very good update. It reminded me a little of Lord of the Rings. You know, the part where the Orcs and the Uruk-hai are arguing over what to do about two of the Hobbits.



There is definately some organised body at work here; the asassination attempt on Tara, the goat-men going after Willow etc. Can't wait to find out more.

chilled monkey
 


Re: Chapter 34

Postby Artemis » Sat Nov 08, 2003 6:28 am

shuyaku: Thanks :) Yep, that works. I like answering questions people have about the story - so long as they're aside details or background type questions, obviously if I have to answer questions about crucial story points, I'm not doing my job properly in the first place :)



Sorry about breakfast :) I'm largely immune to that sort of thing, for some reason. At least, I can happily eat custard and strawberry sauce during the dinner scene in Peter Jackson's 'Brain Dead' (called 'Dead Alive' in the US, I believe), and that's about as gross as you can get. I do get tremendously jumpy during good, tense horror movies though.



chilled monkey: Thank you :) I may have had the Uruk-hai/Orc argument in the back of my mind somewhere. What I was consciously thinking of was the scene in Sleepy Hollow when the young boy is hiding beneath the floorboards, and hears the Horseman up above. Honestly though, I just like cutting off senses and leaving it up to the imagination.



There is certainly more going on than just random evilness. Further details will be forthcoming in the next few chapters.

Artemis
 


FIC: Hellebore (chapter 35)

Postby Artemis » Sat Nov 08, 2003 6:32 am

Hellebore



Author: Chris Cook

Rating: R

Summary: A headstrong sorceress and a young Amazon join forces to locate and destroy an ancient source of demonic power.

Spoilers: None.

Copyright: Based on characters from 'Buffy the Vampire Slayer', created by Joss Whedon and his talented minionators, and 'Diablo II' by Blizzard Entertainment. All original material is copyright 2003 Chris Cook.

Feedback: Please. Here, or to alia@netspace.net.au



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Chapter Thirty-Five

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"How far have we gone?" Willow asked quietly. She felt they were far enough from the church cellar to relax a little, but without landmarks to guide her she had thoroughly lost track of the distance they had covered in the dry, cool tunnel.



"A quarter of a mile, I think," Tara replied.



"We're heading east, right?"



"Roughly," Tara guessed, "the tunnel's turned a little here and there, but I don't think it's turning far away from where it was heading at the start."



"Do you think we're heading for the monastery?" Willow asked. Tara shrugged, despite the fact that Willow had no way of seeing her.



"We're going in the right direction," she said hesitantly, "this tunnels looks fairly new, though. Not that I'm an expert in tunnels. Or stonework," she added as an afterthought. Willow heard the slight tremble in her voice.



"You okay?"



"Just a bit out of my element," Tara admitted, "I haven't spent much time underground... actually, none. It's very different to what I'm used to. No open spaces... I guess I feel a little, I don't know, enclosed? Normally I'd have a vague sense of the world around me, t-the trees, the animals, everything moving and... living. All I can sense here is the earth, and it's... it's all packed in close around us. Like it's closing in, slowly... it isn't," she hastened to reassure Willow, "the tunnels the same size it was back in the church... it's just me. Comes from living in the trees, I guess. I'll be fine, it's nothing worth bothering about."



"Hey," Willow said gently, "if it upsets you, it's worth bothering about. It is for me, anyway. Come here." Tara hesitated a moment, then gratefully turned into Willow's arms, resting her head on Willow's shoulder.



"It's alright," Willow soothed her, "trust me, I know. The first seven years of my life I lived in a village that had exactly one cellar, and there wasn't even a trapdoor covering it. Then I went to the Order, and the Church city has catacombs like you wouldn't believe. I wasn't exactly a picture of calm composure the first time I was taken down to the vault libraries, even with half a dozen other girls chattering away beside me."



"You're not bothered by this," Tara said quietly, not sensing in Willow the tension she felt in herself.



"Not now," Willow admitted, "but it took time to get used to it." She gently stroked Tara's back through her armour. "I love you," she whispered, "I promise, you're gonna be okay. I won't let anything happen to you."



"Thank you," Tara murmured, "I-I'm sorry, it shouldn't bother me..."



"No, don't be sorry," Willow said, "I don't need you to, to pretend you're some invincible, fearless superwoman. I just need you."



"You've got me," Tara said with complete sincerity.



"I know," Willow murmured, smiling as she rested her cheek on Tara's head, feeling the softness of her hair. "I know." Tara gave her a tender squeeze around the waist, then reluctantly stood back, taking Willow's hand again.



"I think there's something up ahead," she said, her voice firmer than before, "it's not blocking the tunnel, but the air's disturbed. We should keep moving."



"Right," Willow agreed.



"S-so, you got used to the underground?" Tara asked lightly. Willow could tell she was distracting herself from whatever remnant of unease she still felt, and was more than happy to help.



"Oh, yeah, after a while. I mean, I didn't have much choice, all the good stuff is kept in the vault libraries. It's the ground, you see, the city is built on a magical node - Kehjistan's full of them, that's why all the mage orders are based there. The one the Zann Esu found is a convergence of elemental energy, and the Church is in the middle of the city, right on top of the middle of the node's central spiral. Mostly it makes it much easier to draw and control elemental power, though there are a few places in the node that actually disrupt it. We use those for training, if you can cast and hold a spell in the middle of a disruption point, you'll never have any trouble doing it anywhere else. Anyway, the vault libraries are where the Order keeps the most valuable books and artefacts, which are usually the magically active ones, so there's all sorts of protective spells built into the vaults to keep everything safe. Otherwise, you know, all sorts of things might happen. Heh, I once heard a rumour that one of the books on demonology in the vault sanctum - that's where we keep the *really* dangerous stuff - can read its own spells in the right conditions. Eclipses, planetary alignments, that sort of thing. Mind you, that was just a rumour that went around the trainees, it's not like it was one of the tutors telling us that, so maybe someone just made it up. There's powerful stuff down there, though."



"And the node keeps it safe?" Tara asked.



"The vaults are built at the centre of the node," Willow explained, "not just on top of it, but actually in the centre, horizontally and vertically. Except the very centre, there's one chamber that no-one but the Council Seers are allowed into, right in the middle of the vaults. But around that, in the vault libraries, the node's power sustains the protective spells. See, for a protective spell to work, it has to expend energy - if you've got, say, a little magical gizmo like a, a rune wheel, that is set up to cast a spell when it's turned, then a protective spell to stop that working has to have as much power as the wheel does. They cancel each other out. A really good protective spell can cancel exactly the magic that's within it, so it doesn't need any more power - a crude one just dampens down everything indiscriminately, that needs a lot more power - but even so, you always need at least as much power as you're trying to stop. So normally, you cast a protective spell and put as much power as you can into it, and it keeps going until it runs out. Assuming whatever's within it doesn't run out of power first. Some of the stuff in the vault sanctum dates back to the Sin Wars, and it's still active, so it's not looking like we can relax the spells around them anytime soon." She heard Tara chuckle.



"Anyway, the node feeds elemental power directly into the spells cast within it. It's really tricky to do, though, whoever first cast some of those spells was a genius, but basically they'll keep going until the node itself is exhausted."



"How long is that?" Tara asked.



"Best guess, the end of time," Willow replied. "Nodes aren't just deposits of magic, like iron that you mine out of a mountain. They're places where magic collects. Whenever a spell is cast, the energy behind it doesn't just get used up, it transmutes into a different form. Like, if you cast a fireball, you take elemental fire energy - primal energy - and turn it into actual heat. So, over the whole of the world, the total amount of actual heat increases. But the world doesn't let itself get unbalanced, so an infinitesimal amount of heat, over the whole world, transmutes back into elemental heat to balance the scales."



"And that energy collects in nodes?" Tara added.



"Yep," Willow said, "in the case of elemental energy it collects in the node beneath the Order's city, and flows slowly back out into the rest of the world from there. There's nodes for all kinds of energy - elemental, prime, druidic, alchemical transmutation energy, astrological, even necromantic, which must be a fun place," she added with a wry grin.



"Even demonic?" Tara asked.



"Ah, that's the problem," Willow smiled. "Not much gets past you, does it?"



"I do my best to keep up," Tara said shyly.



"You do a lot better than just keep up," Willow said sincerely. "No, there aren't nodes for demonic energy. There are places where it's strengthened, but they're artificial, created by demonologists, or by the demons themselves during the Sin Wars. See, demonic energy isn't a part of Sanctuary. It comes from the burning hells, and when demons use energy, particularly when they cast powerful spells, but even just by existing, they unbalance the world."



"But there's quite a few demons living here," Tara pointed out, "we seem to have a knack for running into them..."



"Yeah," Willow agreed ruefully.



"So, the world is being damaged all the time?"



"Yes and no," Willow said, "yes, they unbalance the world just by existing, but no, we're not on an inevitable slide to the whole place falling apart. Holy magic balances the scales. Everything has its opposite, so when a demon casts a spell, the damage that does to the world is undone by a mage using holy magic. Like you, for example," she added, squeezing Tara's hand.



"Me?" Tara asked, surprised.



"The power you cast comes from your gods," Willow said, "that's holy magic."



"I... well, yes," Tara corrected herself, "I just never really thought of myself as a mage, that's all."



"There's a lot more magic around that most people realise," Willow said. "I mean, most warriors who train really hard could be considered mages. When they concentrate, and become faster or stronger than you'd think possible, they're using a tiny amount of prime magic. I'm sure you do, even though you don't realise it. Craftsmen who can do work so delicate it's almost impossible to see, athletes who push themselves beyond what a body should be capable of. Blacksmiths often have a little fire magic to them. Mostly it's prime magic that gets used without people realising it, seeing as it's really just the energy of being alive, and it's kind of instinctive to tap into it, if you really try. But no-one's really cut off from any of the energies in the world. There's people who are more attuned to it, like me with cold, and I think you're probably a lot more attuned to prime energy than most people. Maybe even druidic energy, with all that ability to sense the natural world you have."



"I'm a druid now?" Tara asked, with a slight note of incredulity creeping into her voice. Willow could imagine her lop-sided smile.



"You're many things," she said, "and incidentally, I'm in love with all of them." She felt Tara lift her hand, and her lips press against her palm.



"All of the things that I am are in love with you, too," Tara said warmly. Willow felt a tremendous urge to hug her and kiss her endlessly, but acknowledged - reluctantly - that this was neither the time nor the place.



"Druid, huh?" Tara asked, humour lightening her voice.



"You never know," Willow said.



"So, does that mean I should dance naked under the stars during a full moon?" Willow blushed, glad of the darkness to hide it.



"I'm not sure if you *have* to," she said, "but, you know, if you want to, I'm up for some moonlight dancing."



"I'll keep that in mind," Tara promised. Willow shivered involuntarily, trying to put the image Tara's low purr conjured out of her mind. A few steps later Tara halted.



"What's up?" Willow asked.



"I've found what's disturbing the air flow," Tara said with a grim voice, "there's an iron gate. Here." She guided Willow's hands forward, and Willow felt the shape of a barred gate blocking the tunnel. She set to work examining it, running her hands across all its surfaces, and as far as she could reach on the other side.



"Can you feel a latch?" Tara asked. "A bolt? Lock? Anything?"



"Nothing," Willow grumbled, "that doesn't make sense, if this tunnel was for people to escape through, surely it wouldn't be made so they'd have to wait to be let in. What if they were followed?"



"Maybe it's normally left open," Tara mused unhappily.



"But the doorway in the cellar wasn't sealed," Willow frowned, "if people came through here, they'd seal both gates..."



"I could try to blast it open," Tara said, audibly unhappy with the option, "I could hit it from pretty far down the tunnel. If it did weaken it and cause a cave-in, it probably wouldn't reach us, this looks fairly solid..."



"Maybe," Willow mused, leaning against the gate and trying to come up with something better, "or I could try to ice it up and shatter it... iron's pretty good at holding magic, though, it could be a bit risky to judge the amount of power... properly..."



"What?" Tara asked as Willow trailed off.



"I wonder," Willow said to herself, "what if there is an opening mechanism, but we just can't see it?"



"A lever or something?" Tara wondered. "We might have missed it in the dark, could you get a match from my pack?"



"No, an enemy could have torches, they'd see a lever," Willow went on, "but if it were magic... iron holds magic, you could do a simple locking spell with a trigger, and it'd last years before you'd need to re-cast it."



"Do you think a village that size would have a mage?" Tara asked. "Wait, the monastery might..."



"Or they could have paid a travelling mage to do it for them," Willow said quickly, flown with enthusiasm, "it's the kind of thing some mages make a living from, just doing simple things for small towns and so on... hold this?" Tara felt Willow's staff against her hand, and held it while Willow opened a pouch on her belt.



"What are you doing?" Tara asked curiously.



"I've got a scroll with an imbued spell," Willow explained, "it'll let me see any active magic around here. Normally I'd be able to sense it anyway - I wasn't worried about traps, I'd feel anything destructive from a mile off - but a locking spell, a good one, could be subtle enough that it'd need almost no power while it was idle... here it is." Tara heard the faith sound of Willow unrolling one of her tiny scrolls.



"Do you need a match?" she asked. "To read it, I mean?"



"No need," Willow said, "these are all set to cast, I just have to say the coda word while I'm touching the scroll. I memorised them all ages ago... ahem... 'allamaraine'."



For a moment Tara saw Willow's face lit by a glow coming from the scroll. The letters on it blazed briefly with their own tiny lights, then seemed to consume themselves, leaving the scroll blank in their wake. After a moment the last trace of writing was gone, and the tunnel was plunged into darkness once more.



"Did it work?" Tara asked.



"Yeah," Willow said, "I can feel it... now, let's see if... here!" Tara felt her reach out, and there was a tiny scraping sound, as she traced her fingertip over the stone of the tunnel's wall. Tara jumped slightly as the gate behind her swung open with a groan.



"Wow," she said, "nice work."



"Yup, we make quite the team, huh?" Willow replied as they stepped through the open gate. "Not that it was anything much, just a simple spell... hey!"



"What?" Tara asked, suddenly alert, though Willow's voice had sounded more surprised than alarmed.



"Your pack's glowing," Willow said.



"It is?" Tara looked over her shoulder, but couldn't see anything.



"No, I mean... any magical power, I see it as light. I can see you, I can see your spear and your bow, my staff-"



"My bow's magic?" Tara asked, surprised.



"Looks like," Willow said, "not as much as the spear... gods, that's one fine piece of work... your pack as well." Tara felt Willow lean closer behind her. "What've you got in the left one of these two little pockets, underneath the main strap?" she asked.



"Left pocket..." Tara hesitated, "I don't know, unless I've picked something up... oh, no, I remember, it's the amulet, isn't it? Marela's amulet?" She felt Willow undo the pocket and reach into it.



"That's it all right," Willow said, "it's not just decorative."



"What does it do?" Tara asked.



"I don't know," Willow admitted, "I can't see anything harmful in it... I don't think she'd have given you anything dangerous anyway."



"No, I don't think so," Tara agreed.



"Well, I could set up a test series, try to narrow it down, but that'd be tricky in the dark. All things being equal, it's probably best to just put it on and see what it does." Tara felt a light surge of protectiveness in her, but she calmed herself at once, remembering the kindness she had sensed in Marela during the afternoon she had spent with the cat woman.



"Do you want me to try it?" she asked nonetheless.



"I'll do it," Willow said easily, "I'm sure it's harmless, but just in case, I've had lots of training at nullifying magic. Okay, let's see what you do... wow."



"What?" Tara asked. She held Willow's hand tightly, and was reassured to feel a calm squeeze in return.



"I can see," Willow said, "it's a bit strange, but I can see... there's no light down here, is there?"



"Nothing," Tara said, "I'm just sensing the air currents, I can't see a thing."



"I can see red," Willow said, "and grey... not other colours though. You look kind of bright pink... heh, so do I," she laughed, and the sound of her amusement did a lot to help Tara relax.



"How far can you see?" she asked.



"Pretty far," Willow said, "I guess, as far as I could if it was daylight down here... the tunnel turns a bit up ahead. You're not missing much, it's pretty plain. Hang on." Tara felt Willow reach out towards the wall again, and heard the gate close behind them.



"I'd like to see a Carver get through that," Willow said triumphantly.



"It's locked again?"



"Yup. Unless they know where to touch the wall, and what rune to trace, they're not getting that gate to open again. Wow, this is pretty neat. Oh, do you want it? The amulet, I mean."



"You keep it," Tara said, "I can sense the space well enough to walk around. It's better if you can see and I can sense, rather than me seeing and you having to rely on me."



"I don't mind relying on you one bit," Willow said fondly as they walked on, "but I see your point. Once we get back above ground I'm going to have a serious look at this amulet, this is a really good piece of enchanting. Marela must've really liked you. Of course," she added, "I can see her point." Willow glanced at Tara, and noticed a pronounced flush in her cheeks - her temporary night-vision, limited though it was in terms of colour, seemed to pick up every detail.



"Well," Tara said hesitantly, "I suppose if she's still in Kingsport next time we visit, I owe her that rub behind the ears she wanted."



"So long as it's *just* a rub behind the ears," Willow smiled. She winked, then remembered Tara couldn't see her, and squeezed her hand instead to let her know she was joking.



"Don't worry," Tara smiled back, once she had felt Willow's gesture, "I'm saving all the good stuff for you."



"Darn right," Willow nodded, leaning over to give Tara a kiss on the cheek. "Heh, you're cute when you blush in cat-vision. Course, you're cute anyway, I guess it's not that much of a revelation... huh? Oh."



"What?"



"The spell just wore off," Willow said.



"The amulet wore out?" Tara asked with a frown.



"No, no, the magic sense spell," Willow explained, "the one I read from the scroll. They only last a little while, you can't get that much power into a scroll that size. Oh well, I've got another couple if we need them. At least it's less distracting now," she finished, more or less to herself.



"How so?" Tara asked.



"Oh," Willow said, grinning at herself, "well... I could see the magic in everything, not just the gate spell. It was a little overwhelming. My staff was this sort of jet black... hole in space, sort of thing. Probably something to do with how it undoes hostile spells, I've never really looked at it using that sight spell before. Your bow was this tingly red all along its length, like there were rubies glittering inside it. As for your spear, hoo boy," Willow laughed, "like looking into the sun, almost, except blue-white rather than yellow. I think whoever made that would be on a level with the Zann Esu for lightning mastery."



"Really?" Tara asked sceptically.



"Really," Willow confirmed, "that spear is a work of art."



"I-I didn't realise how precious it was," Tara said softly, "Solari just... you know, gave it to me, told me to look after it. I mean, I knew it was ancient and important, but she never mentioned anything like this..."



"I can think of someone a lot more precious," Willow said gently, "I bet she thought so too." She watched Tara blush again, and smile widely.



"Y-you said you could see me?" Tara asked after a moment. "With the spell, I mean... is there really power in me?"



"Everyone has power of some sort," Willow said, "even if it's just prime magic that's making them a living thing. You're... there were all these flows of energy, prime magic, a-and what I think was holy magic, and others as well. All flowing through you, a-and harmonising like..." She hesitated, then leant close to Tara, lowering her voice despite the fact they were completely alone in the tunnel.



"It was the second most beautiful thing I've ever seen," she whispered in Tara's ear.



"Wh-what's the first?" Tara asked, smiling.



"You, silly," Willow grinned. "Just... you. No spell-vision or anything, just you."



"Oh..." Willow saw Tara's mouth open to speak, but that tiny sigh was all that emerged. She remained still as Tara turned to face her and slowly closed the distance between her lips and Willow's. The kiss was gentle, tender and silent, yet it stirred such a rush of desire in Willow that she had serious doubts about her ability to stand upright were it not for Tara's arms around her. Both their mouths opened just a fraction, enough to taste each other, but there was no frenzied motion, no tongues surging between their lips, simply the kiss itself. Willow felt her pulse racing, her skin warming, and her centre moistening as love and need bloomed out of her heart.



"Ah," she sighed when Tara finally finished the kiss with a final, tiny suckle on her lip, and leaned back. "Ah... oh... oh, wow..."



"I love you," Tara whispered.



"I know," Willow said emphatically, "oh gods, Tara, I know... I feel it right down to the bottom of my soul, I love you so much... Oh... ooh!" She shivered and shook her head. "Gods, you are a fantastic kisser, you know that?"



"I'm only as good as the woman I kiss," Tara replied with a grin.



"I'm that good?" Willow asked disbelievingly.



"Uh-huh," Tara replied softly.



"Um... well then..." Willow faltered, "I guess... yep. Okay, uh, we should keep going? Um, keep moving, I mean, walking along the tunnel, not keep going in other things which wouldn't really be the most useful of things we could be doing at the moment, even though I'd really love to kiss you for the next, oh, three days or so non-stop... not really the best place to be doing it... so?"



"You're babbling," Tara said fondly.



"I know," Willow replied, "I could stop myself, but you look so adorable watching me... I guess I've kind of taken to doing it on purpose." Tara took her hand and gripped it warmly.



"Lead the way, cat's-eyes," she said. Willow blinked in surprise, then remembered that Tara couldn't see like she could at the moment. She had become somewhat accustomed to Tara having the superior senses, and it was an odd feeling to have the situation reversed. Though, she mused as they walked along side-by-side, for a woman walking in pitch blackness, Tara still appeared to have a considerable degree of perception. Willow noticed her stepping deftly over the gaps left by occasional missing flagstones, and wondered how she was doing it - or if she even realised she was.



"I was wondering," Tara said after a moment, startling Willow out of her own thoughts, "did you actually understand what those creatures were saying, or was it just types of sounds, things like that?"



"Oh, no, they have a language," Willow said, "most demons do, even the really animalistic ones can usually understand one or other of the demon languages, even if they can't speak themselves. Makes them easier to command, I guess. There's seven basic languages used in hell, one for each of the Evils, and hybrids usually inherit the language of their creator. It's all hierarchical. Carvers, so far as anyone knows, were created by servants of the Lord of Terror, so they speak his language. Well, a really crude version of it."



"And you can speak that?" Tara wondered.



"I can't speak it," Willow said, "humans don't have the vocal range... if I had to communicate with a Carver I could probably approximate it well enough to be understood. Not that there's any circumstances where I'd want to say much besides 'have an ice bolt', but you know. The Order teaches us to understand the demon languages though, in case we ever need to. Traditionally, most demons - the smart ones - tend to assume that their languages are impossible for humans to understand, so they aren't very guarded in using them."



"You know all seven languages?" Tara asked, impressed.



"Yeah. The one for the Lord of Lies is pretty tricky to get the hang of, seeing as the whole idea behind it is saying one thing and meaning another, but yeah, I got it eventually. Language training is one of the first things a girl learns with the Zann Esu, as soon as she's deemed fit to be taught about demons in general. We start out with Khejan, if you don't know it already, and pretty much everyone knows Westlin even if it's not their native language. After that we go on to a sort of generalised structural training, which is all about how to recognise parts of language, concepts and relations and stuff. Knowing that makes it much easier to pick up a specific language."



"I wondered how you learned High Amazonian so quickly," Tara said.



"Pretty much," Willow grinned. "Once you've got the hang of demon languages, nothing humans come up with seems that difficult." She squeezed Tara's hand tenderly. "It's one of the most beautiful I've learned, though." She was even more glad of her newly-acquired sight when she saw Tara's smile.



"So," Tara said after a pause, "what were they saying?"



"Oh, pretty much what you'd expect. There were two old ones arguing over who should lead them. It's not often you get them in the same tribe, but it happens sometimes - possibly they learned about humans taking apprentices, and sometimes do it themselves, though it's anyone's guess as to why. Maybe it's just mindless mimicry. The challenger thought the leader was foolish - that's bad for a Carver, they don't care about courage at all, but being smart is all that keeps them from being wiped out mostly, so a leader who gets his followers killed isn't likely to last very long. They don't really have a concept of the greater good, except that they know they can't fight people on their own. I think they might have attacked Harthim, or maybe a smaller town south of here, but wherever it was they got driven back and ran away."



"Good," Tara said.



"The challenger said it was the leader's fault, that they shouldn't have tried to attack a strong town. The leader said it was the challenger's fault, and that he wasn't smart enough. That pretty much started the fight, after that it was just a bunch of swearing. Demons have a lot of really elaborate curses, by the way. Some of the stuff they yelled at each other when they were fighting was about as eloquent as a Carver can get. I guess it tells you a lot about them that what they do best is swear." Tara chuckled in agreement, then had a thought.



"Did they say anything about what happened to the village? This one, I mean, not Harthim."



"Nothing useful," Willow said ruefully, "I really don't think it was Carvers that did it though. I can't see them moving the bodies, or attacking in the first place for that matter. Probably it was finding the place empty and all the people dead that got them ambitious enough to try to attack Harthim in the first place."



"I wonder what did happen," Tara mused.



"I don't know," Willow replied, "but I'm not letting my guard down anytime soon, I'll tell you that."



"Me neither," Tara agreed. "Are the walls more irregular ahead? The air's disturbed."



"Tombs," Willow said briefly, "we're coming up to proper catacombs. I'm guessing this will lead beneath the monastery. Some of those old places have pretty impressive earthworks buried beneath them."



"We're still about half a mile away," Tara guessed.



"These look new," Willow said, glancing at the shelves cut into the rock on either side of them as they walked on. Each contained a body, most wrapped in layers of thick cloth, some with iron or stone masks covering their heads. A rare one now and then would be contained in an elaborate stone coffin, some with scenes of battle and angels worked into them, others with life-sized depictions of sleeping warriors, swords in hand, presumably to represent the deceased.



"Hold on a moment," Willow asked, crouching down as Tara stopped beside her to read the inscription on the side of a particularly elaborate coffin.



"'Macharius, brother-lieutenant of the Order of Guardians'," she read, translating from the old Imperial language, not spoken in centuries but still traditionally used in religious documents and memorials, "'died the eighth day of Montaht, year of the Archangel fifteen-thirty-six.' That's the Zakarum calendar, that's... twenty years ago, the Reckoning."



"He was a warrior," Tara guessed. Willow studied the engraving, which showed a grim-looking man, his face marred by a scar running down his left cheek.



"Looks like," she said, "the sculpture has him in full plate armour. Possibly the armour he wore, or maybe just traditional for burial statues of warriors of his Order, it's pretty elaborate for a lieutenant. Sword and shield..." She peered closer. "There are little figures of dead demons carved around the edge of the coffin lid. Carvers, goat-men, skeletons, liches..."



"His enemies," Tara said, "he died fighting demons."



"You're probably right," Willow mused, "by the looks of things, he didn't make it easy for them either. Rest well," she added respectfully. Tara nodded, and they continued further into the catacombs.



"Probably the oldest graves are right beneath the monastery," Willow thought aloud, "and they expanded outwards over the centuries. Order of Guardians, huh? Makes sense, before the rise of the western kingdoms places like monasteries were havens for villagers from miles around. The religious orders were the only groups with enough influence and money to build such big stone buildings, so they made them like fortresses, and whenever there was trouble everyone would get inside the monastery, or the abbey or whatever they had."



"Hence the tunnels," Tara added.



"Yeah," Willow agreed, "the tunnel itself looks older than the graves, probably it was dug sometime long ago, before the Reckoning definitely. Orders like this often build huge catacombs to bury their dead. They say the Zakarum cathedral in Kurast city last expanded its catacombs five hundred years ago, and they still haven't filled them up. And they've been involved in just about every holy war there's been," she added, "they were kind of zealous until the reformations began a hundred years ago. Are you okay?"



"Fine," said Tara, "why?"



"Just wondering," Willow said, "you know, with not liking being underground... I thought maybe the place turning into a giant graveyard might not be helping things."



"Oh," Tara smiled, "no, I'm fine... it's actually comforting in a way. This is a, a warrior place. They believed in good over evil, and stood up to defend the people who relied on them. I guess it feels a little more familiar, now we know the people who built it had that in common with us."



"Okay," Willow said, happy to see Tara more at ease. Personally she could have done without the profusion of graves, but it wasn't anything she hadn't seen before - the tunnels leading to the Zann Esu vault libraries were home to their share of tombs of sorceresses from ages past.



A short while later she gently drew Tara to a halt, noticing a small archway carved in the rock on one side. Crouching and peering inside, she found it to be a room containing several graves, each in its own shelf in the walls, all of them more elaborate than those in the tunnel.



"Must be some more notable people," she said to Tara, "what time is it, do you think?"



"I think, maybe near sunset," Tara guessed.



"Do you think we should get some rest?" Willow asked. "It doesn't look like anyone's been along this tunnel recently, but if it did we'd be as safe in here as anywhere. We can't be far from the monastery now, and just between you and me, I'd rather it be daylight when we get there."



"Yeah," Tara agreed, "okay." Willow helped Tara inside the small room, and guided her as she felt the limits of the walls. As it turned out, it was just wide enough for Tara to lie down without her head or feet bumping the walls. Willow helped her unpack the blankets, and insisted she rest first.



"You barely got any sleep last night," she said, "and you've been on your feet since then. Don't worry, I'll wake you and get some sleep myself."



"Alright," Tara allowed.



"I'm going to put a sentry spell out in the tunnel," Willow said, selecting the necessary runes from her pouches, "I'll just be a moment, okay?"



"Okay," Tara smiled. Willow could see Tara was a little anxious at letting her out of her sight - or rather, her senses.



"Tell you what," she suggested, "if you think you can risk hearing my singing, I'll sing a song for you so you can hear me until I'm done."



"I'd like that," Tara said with a gentle smile.



"Okay, but just remember, you're the one with the singing voice. Don't say I didn't warn you."



Despite her warnings, Tara found Willow's voice soothingly gentle as lilted along the simple notes of her song. She lay down and listened as Willow sang softly, just loud enough for her voice to carry back to Tara.



"A lonely minstrel girl was she,

Of face and voice most heavenly,

And when she sang my heart did sway,

Until the day she went away.



"To save my heart from being torn,

I left the town where I was born,

Through places strange and far away,

I followed on my minstrel's way.



"Though my days were hard and long,

Each night I heard my minstrel's song,

'Cross mountains high and valleys low,

It showed to me the way to go."



Tara heard and sensed Willow approach her, and smiled as she felt her hair being stroked.



"That's pretty," she murmured.



"Just don't ask me to sing anything difficult," Willow chuckled. Tara smiled and settled down to sleep. "It's supposed to be 'A lonely minstrel boy was he'," Willow added, "but I like this version better."



"Mmm," Tara agreed sleepily. Willow sat by her, gently stroking her fingers through her hair, and the last thing Tara heard before she slipped into sleep was Willow singing:



"At last I found my minstrel girl,

Who held my heart and all my joy,

And seeing my heart's empty space,

She gave me hers to take its place."



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Re: FIC: Hellebore (chapter 35)

Postby Grimlock72 » Sat Nov 08, 2003 8:11 am

Aaaww.... Willow sang to Tara.. how sweet :bounce



The amulet Tara got seems to be very usefull, esp. in dark tunnels. I suppose the monks took lanterns or torches with them when they went down into the tunnels. The gate thing makes sense, without such magic protection it would leave the monastary wide open. Anyone good enough to get round that protection would pose a problem to the monks anyway so it's good enough as is. I do worry that Willow might run out of supplies soon, maybe the monastary has some refills ?



Speaking of which, are there any monks alive inside the monastary ? I didn't 'get' that ALL people of the village had been moved in the storage shop. I thought it were just a couple of unlucky shop-owners or something. So we know where the bodies are, I wonder if the carvers actually killed them themselves or just ate from the remains... eeeeeeww.



Willow speaks seven demonic languages, or at least understands them... yeah thats impressive. I can understand Tara being claustrophobic a little, she's not used to confined spaces of course. That her spear is so highly magical comes as no surprise to me, I figured it was special otherwise why would Solari have given it to her ? The bigger question is, what can Tara *do* with that spear ?? Having a powerfull item is all nice and good, but if you don't know how to use it...



The tales Willow tells about her studies and background of the Zan-use are impressive. You've really created (or used, never played Diablo you see so I wouldn't know the difference) a nice world for them to play/life in haven't you ?



Grimmy

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"You hurt Tara," Willow said too calmly. "The last one who tried that was a god. I made her regret it." -- Unexpected Consequences by Lisa of Nine

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Re: FIC: Hellebore (chapter 35)

Postby sabina » Sat Nov 08, 2003 10:24 am

Hi :wave



I loved this update :applause

The way Willow comforted Tara in the beginning was really sweet. I love the line from the After life episode, "Not everything has to be good and fine all the time." (I think the sentence Tara uses isn't exactly that one, but it is something akin to it) and it is great to see you using the same concept in your fic.



You're writing a wonderful story :bow



More soon? :pray








"I know I was born and I know that I'll die.

The in between is mine.

I am mine!" - Pearl Jam

sabina
 


chapter 35

Postby willowfan13 » Sun Nov 09, 2003 9:29 am

hey chris-

o.k. to sound cliche, you've created the best "dynamic duo" ever! they are so powerful and sweet and romantic together - wow.



how else can say - i love this story!



jackie



willowfan13
 


Re: FIC: Hellebore (chapter 35)

Postby JustSkipIt » Sun Nov 09, 2003 10:15 am

Hard to believe that action-packed update was all "walking in a tunnel." I really like everything about this update and magic, particularly Willow's discussion of the nodes and her training. Well done. Debra

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"I was working on a proof of one of my poems all morning and took out a comma. In the afternoon, I put it back in again." - Oscar Wilde

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