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Everyone's messed up

Postby sexylinoleum » Wed Sep 15, 2004 5:58 pm

Hi. Newbie/lurker. Hope you enjoy my story.







Willow laid her head on the table in the magic box as Giles went on and on explaining about how the slayer had specific duties and crap.



'Geez get over it already.' She thought.She heard Xander start to talk and lifted her head.



"Does r=5+2? Or is it 5+3=s?" Willow heard Xander ask. She looked around. She was in a class room at the high school. Which you know is completely impossible because it's kind of blowed-up.



She saw everyone there. Buffy, Xander, Tara, Harmony, Cordelia, Jonathan, Anya, Oz, Riley, Angel, Spike. Some other people she knew and some people she didn't know.



Giles and Jenny were teaching the class and practically groping each other as they switched sides of the board.



Willow was sitting in the last seat of the third row.



She saw Spike sitting at the front with brown hair combed to the side and huge black glasses on. When he wasn't answering a question, he was watching Buffy flip her hair and giggle with Harmony and Cordelia.



Angel was flicking Oz in the back of the head and Oz kept turning around to tell him to stop.



Angel had on a black leather jacket and glasses on his head. His hair was slicked back with grease and he had a comb up his sleeve.



Oz had black hair and all black clothes, with black eye liner. "Knock it off." Oz growled. "Why don't you make me. Quire." Angel said. Flicking him again.



Xander was sitting across from Willow talking to three other boys. Andrew, Warren, and Jonathan. 'Why would Xander be talking to them.' Willow thought.



They were talking about comic books and video games.



Then she saw Tara sitting in the back of the classroom reading a book, not paying attention.



Willow was caught off guard. Tara had her eyebrow and lip pierced and she was wearing torn black and red jeans with a black tank top on. Faith was sitting in front of her drawing a design on her arm.



Willow made a note of what it looked like.



'What the hell is going on! She thought. "Has everyone gone mad?!"

****



More soon.

Edited by: sexylinoleum at: 9/15/04 5:02 pm
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Re: Everyone's messed up

Postby amazonaa » Wed Sep 15, 2004 6:24 pm

This is kind of weird and freaky. I mean Spike with big dark glasses.:geek *shudders*





Great job. More soon, please.







brittney







~Good friends help you move. Real friends help you move the body.~

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...

Postby DarkChild » Wed Sep 15, 2004 6:25 pm

Interesting. Wonder what's going on. I want to :read more

















"Death cannot stop true love. It can only delay it."

The Princess Bride

Edited by: DarkChild at: 9/15/04 5:25 pm
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Re: ...

Postby ladydameon » Wed Sep 15, 2004 6:52 pm

Freaky....I know if I woke up to that - I would run far far away. What does Willow look like?

ladydameon

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Goddess of Violence

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Re: ...

Postby WickedReds » Wed Sep 15, 2004 10:33 pm

OKay.... i agree with ladydameon on the whole freaky factor... and what dose willow look like??



-reds:willow



my banana dances for smut :banana

Tara in a wet shirt, Tara in a wet shirt. Tara in. A. Wet. Shirt. “Of course.”-Willow From Remember to Breath By Yellow Crayon



Now that just sucks- me

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Re: ...

Postby angel of salvation » Thu Sep 16, 2004 10:05 am

very interesing and freaky start...keep going pleeeeease.

the thought of spike with glasses is funny :rofl

yet the thought of Tara as a goth kinda person and friends with Faith is quite a cool idea but thats me being freaky...:p



Jess xxx

'You're my angel of salvation, and hope, and strength...your my multi-angel'-Jay (My baby)

.:~*My anime site*~:.

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Chapter two

Postby sexylinoleum » Thu Sep 16, 2004 4:36 pm

Thanks to all who read or read/replied to my story.







Jenny dismissed the class and grabbed Giles' hand. They were giggling as they ran out the door.



Willow stood up and saw that she had a black and green bookbag on her shoulder with pins all over it. She looked down and saw her clothes had changed too.



She was wearing big black boots, army style pants, and a black long sleeve shirt with a white shirt over it.



Buffy was walking out the door with Harmony and Cordelia in tow. "Willow come on. We're gonna be late." Buffy said. Then headed out.



Willow turned to Tara and Faith.



Tara looked at her with a blank stare. When Faith looked at her she said, "What are you looking at princess? Why don't you go find some jock to screw." Willow saw Tara turned her head and smiled. Willow thought she was going to cry, but she didn't.



Willow walked out of the classroom and fell.

****



I know short, but I have to go. More soon

sexylinoleum
 


Re: Chapter two

Postby tarawhipped » Thu Sep 16, 2004 5:11 pm

Everyone's messed up indeed. Very cool beginning couple of chapters. I first thought that Willow fell asleep in the Magic Box and is dreaming, but then that would be too simple in Sunnydale, wouldn't it? And reading the description of Willow's clothes, I thought she might actually be in the Tara/Faith clique, but obviously not. Can't wait to see where you take this.



:peace -Cameron



What should I be but just what I am? - Edna St.Vincent Millay

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Re: Chapter two

Postby angel of salvation » Fri Sep 17, 2004 9:49 am

oooo update, sounds great, keep going :p

I luv the different persona's that everyone has, can't wait to see how this ends up...



Jess xxx

'You're my angel of salvation, and hope, and strength...your my multi-angel'-Jay (My baby)

.:~*My anime site*~:.

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Re: Chapter two

Postby WickedReds » Fri Sep 17, 2004 11:34 am

Okay... Cameron hit the nail on the head on my thoughts... update soon



-reds:willow



my banana dances for smut :banana

Tara in a wet shirt, Tara in a wet shirt. Tara in. A. Wet. Shirt. “Of course.”-Willow From Remember to Breath By Yellow Crayon



Now that just sucks- me

WickedReds
 


Chapter two

Postby wimpy0729 » Fri Sep 17, 2004 12:18 pm

Ooh, this is cool and interesting.



I have a theory -- possibly a spell gone awry? It's been known to happen.



Poor Willow though, with Tara acting like that.



Can't wait to see what's next!



Wimpy

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Re: Chapter two

Postby alysagoddess85 » Fri Sep 17, 2004 2:31 pm

hmm...so this is a little messed up...lol..im guessing hence the title...interesting though...more soon please!



~mel:kdevil

'The Cat in the Hat' is fine, just not during sex.--Alyson Hannigan

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Chapter three

Postby sexylinoleum » Sat Sep 18, 2004 12:12 pm

More.







Willow opened her eyes. She was standing in front of her house. She was going to walk up to the door until she heard screaming.



"What is your problem!?" "YOU!!" Then a tv went flying out of the window. "Nice job. Dad's going to be pissed now."



Everything blurred together.Now Willow was standing in the Espresso Pump.



"Hello. Earth to Willos." Cordelia said. "What?" Willow said. "Did you just call me Willos?"



Everything blurred together again.



Willow was standing in the graveyard. There was someone walking to ward her. It was Faith.



"Hey red. You know i've wanted to do this ever since you took B away from me." Faith pulled out the knife the Mayor had given her and stabbed Willow in the stomach with it.



Over and Over.

****



Later.

sexylinoleum
 


Re: Chapter three

Postby WickedReds » Sat Sep 18, 2004 4:55 pm

HUH?!?!:wtf



-reds:willow



my banana dances for smut :banana













Tara in a wet shirt, Tara in a wet shirt. Tara in. A. Wet. Shirt. “Of course.”-Willow From Remember to Breath By Yellow Crayon



Now that just sucks- me

WickedReds
 


Re: Chapter three

Postby tarawhipped » Sun Sep 19, 2004 2:14 pm

Okay, this time Reds expressed MY thoughts! If you're trying to make us understand how confused Willow is, great job! I'm not even gonna try to figure out what's going on, but I like it.



More please!

-Cameron

tarawhipped
 


Re: Chapter three

Postby alysagoddess85 » Sun Sep 19, 2004 3:30 pm

ok so is this some extra busy-brained willow dream or something?? cuz im totally lost...lol...im guessing everyone else is too...but its still really interesting so continue on whatever twisted path ur leading us.



~mel:kdevil

'The Cat in the Hat' is fine, just not during sex.--Alyson Hannigan

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Re: Chapter three

Postby angel of salvation » Mon Sep 20, 2004 10:09 am

i am now officially lost....:crazy :wtf

I hope you update soon, i want to know whats going!



Jess xxx

'You're my angel of salvation, and hope, and strength...your my multi-angel'-Jay (My baby)

.:~*My anime site*~:.

angel of salvation
 


Re: Chapter three

Postby sexylinoleum » Tue Sep 21, 2004 4:04 pm

Hey here is the next part.







Willow opened her eyes. She wasn't on the ground with Faith standing above her with the bloody knife.



Now she was in the graveyard at a funeral. Tara's funeral.



She ran to the casket. It was closed but there was a picture of Tara on it.



Willow started crying and whispering little nothings to the body that was hidden behind the dark mahogany wood.



She felt someone tap her on the shoulder. She turned around and saw Oz standing there with tears in his eyes.



"I'm sorry Willow. I'm so sorry. I didn't.....She smelled like you. I didn't want to hurt her." He said



It dawned on Willow and she turned to the casket blocking out Oz's little sorries and useless grievances.



She turned back around to tell Oz to 'Get the fuck out'. She saw his face or actually he didn't have a face. There was just a big black hole.



She looked around at everyone.



They were all looking at her all with holes for faces. No one moved.

****



More soon.

sexylinoleum
 


Re: Chapter three

Postby tarawhipped » Tue Sep 21, 2004 5:59 pm

Hmmm...another interesting yet maddeningly vague chapter leaving us no idea what's going on. Though there does seem to be chronological progression to these nightmare scenarios. Not that I have any idea what that means in terms of the story--I just wanted to sound like I actually figured something out!



:crazy -Cameron

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Re: Chapter three

Postby WickedReds » Tue Sep 21, 2004 10:02 pm

Okay... Cameron has a point and i'm gonna agree on it and also :wtf



-reds:willow



my banana dances for smut :banana

Tara in a wet shirt, Tara in a wet shirt. Tara in. A. Wet. Shirt. “Of course.”-Willow From Remember to Breath By Yellow Crayon



Now that just sucks- me

WickedReds
 


Re: Chapter three

Postby alysagoddess85 » Wed Sep 22, 2004 9:38 am

hmmmmm....its like following season progression...but its not....hmmmmmm



~mel:kdevil

'The Cat in the Hat' is fine, just not during sex.--Alyson Hannigan

alysagoddess85
 


Re: Chapter three

Postby sexylinoleum » Thu Sep 30, 2004 2:58 pm

Sorry took so long.





Willow turned back to the casket and saw it was opened and Tara was looking at her but not looking at her.



Willow felt someone grab her and she turned around to see Buffy. She heard Buffy talk but she didn't see her mouth.



"Come on Willow. It's time to come home." Buffy said starting to drag her away.



Tara touched Willow's hand. It was surprisingly warm Willow thought. Willow grabbed Tara's hand and pushed Buffy off her as she stepped into the casket.



Willow crawled down into it as the lid closed.It felt like they were moving. Flying through space and time.



Then they stopped. Hard!



Tara opened the lid and Willow crawled out. They were in a room. A huge room covered in letters and words. Glowing different colors on the walls.



Then someone stepped into the light.



Willow couldn't really tell if it was a he or she but it was wearing like a dress and stuff so she assumed it was a woman.



The woman walked up to Willow and looked at her. "Well it's about time. You've been running ramped through this world for two weeks. Do you know what that does to me?"



Willow's eyes went wide. "Glory!" Willow screamed. "Oh chill child. Please.....Glory is no match against me. She's just a little girl with a bunch of dolls." The glory look alike said.



"Then who are you?" Willow asked looking for a way out.



"I am Demi. I rule the dream and nightmare lands. Glory rules the hells of fire." Demi explained clearly bored.



"So I'm in a dream/nightmare land?" "No. That's where it gets complicated. But before we get into that why doesn't Micha show you your room."



"That's not Micha. That's Tara." Willow said laughing. Then stopped seeing the looks on there faces. "Isn't it?"



"We will talk about it later. Right now I am late for a meeting with hades." Demi said then disappearing.



Willow was led away by the girl that looked and whose hands felt like Tara's if not a little rougher, but wasn't.

****



More soon.

Edited by: sexylinoleum at: 9/30/04 2:00 pm
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Re: Chapter three

Postby WickedReds » Thu Sep 30, 2004 4:33 pm

Okay i guess that explanes alot.... but still i'm all with the :wtf

more please... i wanna know what happens next...:p



-reds:willow



my banana dances for smut :banana

Tara in a wet shirt, Tara in a wet shirt. Tara in. A. Wet. Shirt. “Of course.”-Willow From Remember to Breath By Yellow Crayon

WickedReds
 


Re: Chapter three

Postby tarawhipped » Thu Sep 30, 2004 5:55 pm

Okay Reds, I'll see your:wtf and raise you a :hmm



The dream/nightmare land COULD explain a lot, but the Glorylike being said it wasn't exactly one, and since I'm already confused, I don't just don't know what to believe anymore. But in a good way! Very cool!



-Cameron

tarawhipped
 


Re: Chapter three

Postby alysagoddess85 » Fri Oct 01, 2004 9:42 am

ok with this fic ive just decided that reading it without thinking TOO much about it at this point is the best way to go....at least until we get some concrete answers.



~mel:kdevil

'The Cat in the Hat' is fine, just not during sex.--Alyson Hannigan

alysagoddess85
 


Re: Chapter three

Postby angel of salvation » Thu Oct 07, 2004 9:37 am

................O....k.....confusing much?! :wtf



the dream/nightmare land but it still is confusing. I think if i tried to read this and think too much about it, i'd v:crash my computer...lol



oh well, please keep going! i wanna know more!!



Jess xxx

'You're my angel of salvation, and hope, and strength...your my multi-angel'-Jay (My baby)

.:~*My anime site*~:.

angel of salvation
 


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