Skip to content


Camp Flutie, Part Two

Author Index - N-Z.
This is a forum for Willow and Tara Fan Fiction that is Complete. Please read the content advisories on individual stories, read at your own discretion. You CAN leave feedback!

Re: update, part 2

Postby Warduke » Sat Oct 12, 2002 9:09 pm

Oh Rane, two updates tonight :heart



As always, these parts were wonderful, I just love the way you write W/T scenes when they're together, alone, so romantic and sweet :love



Loved this line..."She’d read those lesbian romance novels, all seven of them" :lol



And you actually used the yellow crayon in a way that didn't make me gag ;)



And Tara being a vagitarian...rofl



I was going to dance for you, but these two great updates deserve a different dance...



Just for being you sweetie...

_________________________


Mozilla : There's a new browser on the block.

Warduke
 


Re: update, part 2

Postby VampNo12 » Sat Oct 12, 2002 11:13 pm

Rane such a "posting fiend" tonight, I like :) , oh and the "girls" :wave to you! This part was definitely awwww worthy, such sweet interaction between W&T, :heart . Loved the "growing old" together conversation, and I especially enjoyed Tara answering Willow with, ("Forever and a day. And a day after that.").



Enjoyed W&T bringing out their "inner vixen" with Tara's ("At least twice a day.", as well as Willow's "vagitarian" comment to Tara, :lol ). But what truly resonated with me was Willow fearing the consequences of Tara going against her strict father to be with her, but Tara replying, ("Meeting you Willow... I'm not his anymore. I'm my own person now and I get to choose what I want. I want you."), just sigh so beautiful (especially loved how you incorporated the "I am, you know?" "What?" "Yours." dialogue into this part). Really such a tender moment between the two, and I can't wait to see what happens next!

Edited by: VampNo12  at: 10/12/02 10:24:50 pm
VampNo12
 


Re: ...

Postby areslei » Sat Oct 12, 2002 11:39 pm

Rane, such a sweet update. Love Tara's statement at the end ... :: sigh :: :heart And of course "I am, you know" "what" "yours"....my fav lines...written into this fic so perfectly. Love Will's line about Tara being a ...vagitarian :lol . Love this fic. love it love it love it!

you two are the two who are the two
Baby, I said it's all in our hands, got to learn to respect what we don't understand.. Indigo Girls
Now I'm trying to get back to what I know that I should be hoping to God I was just a temporary absentee

Edited by: areslei at: 10/12/02 11:36:01 pm
areslei
 


Re: ...

Postby MissQuirky » Sat Oct 12, 2002 11:49 pm

Awwww Rane... so sweet! Willow and Tara alone time is great. Donny sure is fun, pothead who woulda guessed! :rolleyes I think Tara getting out from underneath that roof is a real good idea - So when is that happenning? :) I really love how ya switched round the parts at the end... Willow saying she's Tara's and the rest. Can't wait 4 more! :)



~Ashley~

Willow: We can come by between classes. Usually I use that time to copy over my class notes with a system of different colored pens. But it's been pointed out to me that that's, you know... insane.
Tara: I said quirky.

MissQuirky
 


Re: update, part 2

Postby spazz07 » Sun Oct 13, 2002 1:16 am

Wow Rane, i really love your blatent plagerism, cracks me up every time :lol I love how Tara's doing things for herself, being her own person. Looking forward to Tara telling Willow about her plans to leave and i really enjoyed the comments about being old and grey together, sets of a nice feeling :)



Cheers

Nath

Isn't it funny how you feel your most tired five minutes before you have to get up.

spazz07
 


Re: update, part 2

Postby Lonewolf22 » Sun Oct 13, 2002 1:40 am

Rane: Great update, I really LOVED the togetherness and tenderness of our girls, they just fit. I was bummed when Tara stopped the smoochies, and I hope that she tells Willow about Ojai real soon. I can't wait to read more.



Lonewolf

Lonewolf22
 


Woohoo

Postby amberbensontotallyrules4e » Sun Oct 13, 2002 6:41 am

I love this fic and I love the way you incorporated the "I am you know...yours" into this. It's gotta be one of the best scenes ever. Now I'm running off to watch my video of Entropy that my baby brought me.

amberbensontotallyrules4e
 


Re: update, part 2

Postby littlecrazy80 » Sun Oct 13, 2002 8:59 am

I read the last 2 updates, and I loved them.

This fic is amazing!!!

I can´t wait to read about the banquet. :heart



*lil´c*



Unter den Blinden ist der Einäugige König.

littlecrazy80
 


Re: update, part 2

Postby Spice Faerie » Sun Oct 13, 2002 11:05 am

Rane, you ROCK. Those last two updates were super. Definately worth the wait (though, don't keep us waiting too long for more, now...). Cordelia never stops cracking me up. She's definately a piece of work. I'm so happy that Willow asked Tara to the dance. They're gonna be so adorable. :sigh



"No candles? Well, I brought one. It's extra flamey..."

Edited by: Warduke at: 10/13/02 10:18:33 am
Spice Faerie
 


Re: update, part 2

Postby Grimaldi » Sun Oct 13, 2002 11:11 am

great updates :grin Donny getting busted for growing pot and Tara reading romance novels was too funny. i like how you had Willow use the "i am you know" lines

Dude, we're surrounded by perverts!

2nd place??? That's just a fancy term for loser!

Screw you triangle thief!

Grimaldi
 


Re: update, part 2

Postby amberbensontotallyrules4e » Sun Oct 13, 2002 11:22 am

oops, forgot to put that I love the way reading het romance novels makes Tara act all weird. (although who wouldn't act weird after THAT trauma!!!)



amberbensontotallyrules4e
 


Re: update, part 2

Postby Miss1234Kitty » Sun Oct 13, 2002 12:24 pm

Aaaah, gorgeous update and well done for using the yellow crayon in a way that doesn't make me scream at the computer/tv. I especially loved Willow's comment about Tara being a vagitarian. :love



Gem

Tara: There's just so much to work through... and can you just be kissing me now?

Miss1234Kitty
 


Re: update, part 2

Postby Puff » Sun Oct 13, 2002 12:36 pm

Oh Rane I loved the update. I am so glad that Tara can look that far into the future when her life is not run by her father and she doesn't live ther and of course whenshe is 90+ she will still be WIllows'.

-----------------------
You know, it's a real deal relationship and that's why people can relate to it
Amber Benson

Puff
 


Re: update, part 2

Postby witchbitchwillow » Sun Oct 13, 2002 1:39 pm

wahoooooooo, great update rane!!! im so glad that ive come back to the kitten board id forgotten how much i enjoyed reading this fic.







hehe, lots of bouncey smilies to make up for the ones which i didnt put in my last post.



xelliex





**"Damn gayly forward!"** Anya- into the woods by blameburner.

witchbitchwillow
 


Re: update, part 2

Postby sistakind » Sun Oct 13, 2002 2:00 pm

LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT



i got so happy today when i saw the updates..woo hoo

sistakind
 


Re: update, part 2

Postby mollyig » Sun Oct 13, 2002 3:04 pm

This was just so lovely. Talk of a future together, vixenish Tara with her At least twice a day and the "I am, you know" exchange. Thanks so much Rane

Adding up the total of a love that's true, multiply life by the power of two
Indigo Girls

mollyig
 


Re: update, part 2

Postby barnabasvamp » Sun Oct 13, 2002 4:59 pm

Oh Rane;

Are ya trying for another bumper sticker? "vagitarian":rollin



Very sweet update, glad to see them working on things

BV

"In front of total strangers won't you kiss me, Flowers for no reason but you miss me - OOH, I wanna be in love"

Melissa Etheridge-Skin

barnabasvamp
 


...

Postby Rane018 » Sun Oct 13, 2002 7:56 pm

Massive headache be dammed! I am writing my replies! Lol…



Morgan- their song… I have a song in mind but I’m trying to figure out whether it’s possible. After all my anality (is that a word?) had to look up in the internet what were the blockbuster movies for the summer in question here. Hehe… I’m sorry you never got one. I never really did either. I agree, yippee for coming out stories. That’s one of the reasons I wanted to write this in the first place. It wasn’t supposed to be a W/T fic at all, just a teen novel about two girls meeting in camp and falling in love. With out all the smut ofcourse but that came along when you write for kittens and deal with w/t and the crap that was season six.



Cindi- damn that crayon, eh? There’s more to come with the little crayon. Well, related to that crayola incident. And faith and cordy in a room together with a riding crop sure sounds like good smut. Ruth would be PERFECT to write that. as for current songs, this camp I’d figure would. After all Devon and Oz brought all their stuff and they’re pretty current. So I’m figuring their song wont be as old as twenty years. Hehe…



Nicky- the yellow crayon is the key to some things here. Makes sense now that when willow broke the crayon she got bitched at by cordelia and that’s why she cried during xander’s barfolic speech…. I like Willow’s snarkyness and tara’s silliness. I’ve never read a romance novel but I have read the lesbian ones and just had to make fun of them… however the ending to this *novel* will be borrowed form one of those. Maybe…



Rose- hehe, glad you are still loving this fic. Heck, glad you’re still reading it too!



Ten Ten- AWESOME new dancy smilie but I got to say not as hot as the other one. Don’t know why… lol… so happy you liked the update and you enjoy the w/t discussions. I always hate writing conversations because sometimes I want to write my own experiences in the fic but I don’t. I’ve never had anything like this happen (and yes, again, I have NEVER done it in a TRUCK!) so I’m always scare it wont sound realistic…. I do sprinkle in some though and that lesbian novel line is certainly me. And the vagitarian. I think it’s hilarious. And also another saying from Cababret I’m trying to incorporate. Glad I didn’t make you gag with the yellow crayon.



Vamp- kisses to you and your girls. Hehe… I love inner vixens. Need inner vixens cause I’m just getting tired of my inner vixen being in hybernation for over a year. My guy is so not doing it for me it’s sad I think I’ll head back to girls town and build a house. There went that experiment. Lol… loving you found that w/t that moment tender. I’m looking for those moments too. Hehe…



Areslei- I love it that you love it. hehe… I’m picking my fave lines and incorporating them. Glad youlike them too!



Ashley- that whole donny thing just wrote itself. I thought it made sense though. Needed a reason to have him stick around in the camp and he just looks like a total pothead. So it all worked out. Hehe… when is tara leaving that household? Who knows? Oh, wait, I do. ;) Lol… however…. SPOILER:…… she wont be going home with Willow after the summer.



Nath- yup, like I’ve always said they can sue me for copyright infringement and I will just counter sue em for mental cruelty. Hehe… I’m always upfront abut taking lines and I think it certainly adds to capturing the feeling of what the show use to mean to us. I love it. now I’m not as bad as some people who’ll go word for word and scene for scene. But I love using dialogue that makes us go awwww… tara plans to leave but she’s still got a long way to go. And them growing old together, how cute its that?!!! sigh…



Lonewolf- yes they do just fit don’t they. I love that about them. I miss that about them. Re: smoochie stoppage, willow needed tog et back to camp anyhow for the break was soon over and Tara did tell willow about Ojai before Willow told her about Jamie. I just didn’t’ write it in cause I’m narrating that in later on when they talk about it again. don’t worry. No secrets honey!



ABTR4E- entropy? Is that the episode with Rally’s avatar that has tara just soooo sexy twirling towards willow and willow just smiling all glee like and we’ve got out own kitten tiuana walking around in the background over and over again. sigh… and the kiss at the end? Damn it! I’m going to have to watch that ep again! or maybe I’ll just stare at rally’s avatar all day. And jen’s and xita’s… *drool* glad you liked the update and the romance novel comment.



Little crazy- hehe, thanks for reading honey! and I cant wait to write the banquet!



Spice- unfortunately it looks like my pattern has become two update on the weekends. Things are crazy at work, my guy is a dork, I just started some classes and I just quit my job. Thigns are a bit crazy but that’s usually when my creative juices flow. Sigh… love the sighing smilie! I want one of those!!!!!!!



Grim- hehe, glad you found it funny. I’m always afraid no one finds anythign I write funny. I don’t do funny well.



Gem- yeah, that crayon thing not only made me gag it made m laugh my tushy off! How stupid was that speech? And the vagitarian comment… well, she , you know… is. Lol…



Puff- yup yup, puff n stuff. she’ll always be willows. ALWAYS! YA HEAR ME????!!!!! Lol…



Ellie- my darling cutie pie ellie! Thanks for the smilies! Missed them like I missed you! Hope all is well in school!



Sistakind- glad you love it! me too! Hehe



Molly- you know what? After much deliberation I think I will give you an exam to make sure you’ve been paying attention, and oral exam. Hehe. Meouch bayby!! Just kidding! Hope you found your glasses. And honestly thank you. Knowing people are reading and liking the fic really is what makes me want to continue writing. Even though they don’t pay attention to what I write… ;) hehe. JUST KIDDING! Don’t get all willow spazz on me now! Hehehe. *smooch!*



Barnabas- yeah, *the world would be a better place if we were all vagitatians* lol. I cant believe I just cracked myself up over that. I need food. Starting to feel faint.



JOYCE- (speaking of Dracula) He came by the gallery, and he was amazingly well informed about art history-


TARA- Probably because he was around for most of it.


*Buffy vs Dracula*

Rane018
 


Oh my...

Postby Kieli » Sun Oct 13, 2002 10:14 pm

here I am, sick for days now and needing a pick-me-up, see...so I decide to catch up on Camp Flutie and what do I see but a flurry of lovely updates (and have you dumped that dude YET?! Cuz, I'm tellin' ya, toots, you are all about the female type babes. The boys...not so much ;) ) Anyhoo, I've noticed that there seem to be two Tonis floating about so I guess I'll have to start using my handle again :cry bummer.



You know what I think, Rane dear. The updates are masterful....romantic, sad, moody, giggleworthy...all of the things that made Part I so near and dear to me. I'll rue the day when Part II ends but...every cloud will have its silver lining. Bravo, toots.



Much love,

The other Toni :grin


Love is tricky. It is never mundane or daily. You can never get used to it. You have to walk with it, then let it walk with you. You can never balk. It moves you like the tide. It takes you out to sea then lays you on the beach again. Today's struggling pain is the foundation for a certain stride through the heavens. You can run from it but you can never say no. It includes everyone."--Amy Tan "The Hundred Secret Senses"

Kieli
 


Re: update, part 2

Postby saule77 » Mon Oct 14, 2002 2:13 am

* Runs in late and out of breath, having been away all weekend...*



Oh, Rane!

Thanks for those two updates! Willow and Tara going to the banquet together... :love

I'm sure Cordelia will have something bitchy to say when she sees them together... :rage

I hope SHE gets turned down although "hormonal Xander" probably wouldn't do that. :sigh



Tara coming to her own more and more. Always a pleasure to see...



Snuggles

"You are Willow Rosenberg, vixen-y lighter of the flame and keeper of my heart.”

(Camp Flutie by Rane)

saule77
 


Re: ...

Postby barnabasvamp » Mon Oct 14, 2002 5:51 am

Quote:
*the world would be a better place if we were all vagitatians* lol. I cant believe I just cracked myself up over that. I need food. Starting to feel faint.


Your feelin faint from all the laughing, and the headache probably doesn't help either! (migraines?- I can reccomend some meds if it is)



BTW- I'm supposed to be making a trip to Ocean City and there is a cool place there that makes customized bumper stickers(no questions asked ;) )! I'm giving serious thought to the 2 we have talked about :grin

BV



"In front of total strangers won't you kiss me, Flowers for no reason but you miss me - OOH, I wanna be in love"

Melissa Etheridge-Skin

barnabasvamp
 


Re: Oh my...

Postby Spice Faerie » Mon Oct 14, 2002 12:37 pm

Oh my heck! I've discovered that I'm painfully impatient and I just don't know how to wait at all. Please don't hold out on us too long, okay? I can't wait for the dance! Willow and Tara are just too cute! I love them. :sigh



:bounce Spice :bounce

"No candles? Well, I brought one. It's extra flamey..."

Spice Faerie
 


Re: update, part 2

Postby MadeinNZ » Mon Oct 14, 2002 1:13 pm

Quote:
LOL... no, it's always the quiet, bookish ones that are the best in bed.
OK - you got me there. That one's actually true.

------------------------------


Anya: I have finesse! I have finesse coming out of my bottom!

MadeinNZ
 


Re: ...

Postby Ange » Mon Oct 14, 2002 2:54 pm

Rane, hon, sorry it took me so long.

I loved it as always.

That was a great update.



Ange.

-----------------------------------

"Things are not always what they seem to be...." Shakespeare

Videos and Caps for ep4, "Help"

Ange
 


...

Postby Rane018 » Tue Oct 15, 2002 11:46 am

Toni- What are you smokin’ child? you are the only toni I know of. Glad to see you are feeling better. Hugs! as for the dude… hehe… yeah, I know…. let’s not even get into it… I’m so happy you liked the updates. I miss sending them to you first to get your opinion before I post but maybe now that I’ve quit my job I’ll have more time to write and finally finish this fic soon! Yay! But I know it wont happen cause I write when my muse wants and it’s up to her. sigh…



Saule- hi!!!! Lol, Cordelia will have something bitchy to say before the banquet. Don’t worry about it, the bitch will be back soon. your sig makes me blush. Hehehe…



Barnabas- as you can see my typing skills suck and you know I mean to type vagitarians right? lol. I’m such a dork. as for custumized bumper stickers, yay! How cool would that be?! hehe…



Spice- trust me, I’m going crazy more than you. I know what’s happening already I just need to type it. that makes me crazy! Hehe



Nicky- so, um, when I come visit… can I stay with you? Hehe…



Ange- hi hon! Do not worry about it. read and reply when you can. Glad you loved it!



Rane018
 


Re: update, part 2

Postby Blaise413 » Tue Oct 15, 2002 12:55 pm

Yay...I love the sweetness of this fic. [Blaise claps gayly]. More please!

Blaise413
 


Re: ...

Postby MorganArcher » Tue Oct 15, 2002 1:20 pm

:hmm hmmm, what year IS camp flutie set?:confused

i don't remember reading it although it's probably

blatantly obvious and i just turned a blind reading to

anything not beginning with T or W:wink

:no i'm such a bad kitty that way

morgan

"Hey! Respect the narrative flow, much?"

MorganArcher
 


Well, ya know..

Postby Kieli » Tue Oct 15, 2002 1:49 pm

I just had to make sure you remembered me, R. *G* No worries about not getting to send the drafts. I can be a happy patient camper (no pun intended *heh heh*) if need be. If you need anything, you know how to find me, toots. Quietly awaiting an update like a good little lesbian :lol



Toni


Love is tricky. It is never mundane or daily. You can never get used to it. You have to walk with it, then let it walk with you. You can never balk. It moves you like the tide. It takes you out to sea then lays you on the beach again. Today's struggling pain is the foundation for a certain stride through the heavens. You can run from it but you can never say no. It includes everyone."--Amy Tan "The Hundred Secret Senses"

Kieli
 


Re: ...

Postby witchbitchwillow » Tue Oct 15, 2002 4:22 pm

i missed me not being here too! ive started writing chapter two of Tabula Rasa, you that fic that i wrote like a year ago lol, well anyway if u do remember it would u mind beta reading it for me when im done?



cheers x

**"Damn gayly forward!"** Anya- into the woods by blameburner.

witchbitchwillow
 


...

Postby Rane018 » Tue Oct 15, 2002 9:41 pm

Blaise- thanks! More soon.



Morgan- it is set the summer after their first year of college. They are returning campers as counselors this year. So they are in college and they are about to start their sophomore year so basically it’s pretty set to the buffyverse except Tara never arrived in Sunnydale. I should put that in my mondo notes… thanks!



Toni- lol. Smooch!



Ellie- of course I remember. :D send it way my darling!



Rane018
 

PreviousNext

Return to Board index

Return to Willow/Tara Finished Fics Archive (Authors N-Z)

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 4 guests


Powered by phpBB The phpBB Group © 2000, 2002, 2005, 2007
Style based on a Cosa Nostra Design