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Paradise Lost

Postby Nikkii » Sun Apr 27, 2003 1:51 pm

Disclaimers: I do not own or claim rights to any of the characters of BtVS, Joss Whedon and ME reserve that right dammit! LoL

Spoilers: Nothing intentional, but could be any I suppose

Rating: I'm gonna go for NC-17/R just in case...

Distribution: Of course, but please ask first

Feedback: Please! If this is crap I need to know! LoL

Summary: Buffy, Willow, Xander and Cordelia enjoy a summer vacation in Miami before they start their first year of college.



And biiiiiig thanks to mah sweetie Gemma!!! *big kisses* :kiss :wink



**********



"Buffy, it's not opening...are you sure this is the right key?" asked the frustrated redhead as she practically rammed the little plastic card in the door for the fifth time.

"Well it's the only one I was given...gimme it here, you just gotta push a bit harder and..." Buffy's explanation was cut short as the door to their hotel room flew open and Buffy stumbled forwards, leaving Willow to pick up their cases and snigger as she followed the petite blonde into the room. She moved over to the desk and ran her finger along the edge of the pine surface.

"So...this is home...well, a vacationy-type, fun-having, demon-less kinda home," she pointed out to Buffy, who's lips curled up into a bright smile as she realised that for once, she could be a normal eighteen year-old and enjoy the summer with her friends. "Hey Xan" said Willow as she saw him let himself in.



"Hey, so are you two gonna join me and Cordy for some wet fun at the..." Xander cut his sentence short as he cought sight of Willow's glare and Buffy's raised eyebrows. "What? I was gonna say beach!" He raised his hands above his head in mock surrender and shot the girls his cutest little boy grin, which seemed to win them over.

"I'll meet you down there, just lemme unpack a few things first...Buff, ya coming?" the wiccan inspected the bathroom as she spoke, checking everything was spotlessly clean and perfect. She furrowed her brow as she rummaged through the various bath and body products the hotel had provided...'who in the name of the godesses would ever use all this stuff?' she wondered. She put down the rather large bottle of foot exfoliator and walked back into the room, lifting her case onto the bed she had now claimed as her own for the next two weeks.



"Maybe...I think I need sleep first...Slayer stamina seems to have gone bye bye...is that even possible?" Buffy screwed up her face for a few seconds while mulling over the question in her mind. "Anyways...me sleepy" Willow giggled as she began to unpack her suitcase, and told Xander she'd be at the beach in a 1/2 hour.



With all their clothes nicely put away in the irritatingly small (in Buffy's opinion) closets, Willow was slipping her t-shirt and shorts on over the top of her new baby blue bikini. "So," Buffy lifted her head up from her magazine to look at her friend. "Willow gonna be gettin' it on with any hot guys this summer then?"

"Hey! You think I haven't been trying back in Sunnydale? Thing is, everyone just seems so...blah...ya know?" she asked as she threw a bemused look towards Buffy, who just sat there and nonchalantly shrugged her shoulders.

"I guess...but hey, Miami...lots of cute guys for you to ogle over" the blonde answered with a wink. Willow simply giggled softly and gathered up her beach bag onto her shoulder.

"Right..I'm off to bring out my freckles and stay pasty white" Willow announced glumly yet light-heartedly and pouted at Buffy as she headed for the door, "to-die-for tans are so over-rated anyway."



**********



"Oh boy...you couldn't leave it until you're alone in your hotel room?" Willow rolled her eyes in response to the smoochies being enjoyed by Xander and Cordelia.

"Who asked you?" sneered Cordelia as she sat up and probed her hair with her fingers. "Uck! Sand is a nightmare when it gets in your hair! Totally messes up the look."

Willow rolled her eyes at the brunette's comment and placed her bag on the sand, "yeah, sand can be gritty like that" she said with a sarcastic smile. "Xan, I'm gonna go down to the water, you coming? Cordy?"

"Nope, we're fine right here" Cordelia patted the space between her and Xander for emphasis. As Willow looked at Xander, waiting for his response, he opened his mouth to speak before Cordelia cut him short. "Oh Xander, you really don't wanna go in the sea...it'll totally mess up your skin!" Xander just shrugged his apology as Willow narrowed her eyes and set off towards the edge of the water.



"Heads up!" Willow turned around to see where the warning was coming from, just in time to see a volleyball flying at a very high speed towards her face. She put her hands up to avoid the pain and almost definate mark it would leave if it happened to hit her, which right now was a guarantee. As the force hit her hands, the redhead was knocked off her feet, and onto the person walking past her, sending them both crashing to the sand. "Sorry" said a tall blonde guy as he picked up the ball n ran back to the net.

"Hey!" Willow shouted after him, "aim much?!" It took a few seconds for the redhead to register that she was actually sat on a person, not in fact the sand.



"Oh God, I'm so sorry" she exclaimed as she pulled herself up and held out her hand to the girl half in a daze on the ground. The blonde girl took Willow's hand in response, as she helped pull herself up.

"I-it's ok" replied the blonde. She hung her head and looked up at Willow with her deep blue eyes.

"Wow" whispered Willow under her breath.

"W-what?" questioned the blonde in a panicked tone. 'What have I done?' she thought, before mentally slapping herself for the annoying timing of her stutter. 'This beautiful girl stood in front of you is sure to think you're a total geek now! Then again, she'd be right'.

"Oh...oh nothing, sorry! It's just...your eyes...they're amazing and I just looked at them...and this is something I so shouldn't be saying...I never know when to stop, see, still going! Shut up, Willow!" The blonde girl giggled shyly and blushed a bright shade of scarlet at the redhead's insescent babbling.



"Willow? Y-your name is Willow?" she asked.

"Oh, yeah, sorry, Willow Rosenberg." She held her hand out towards the girl in front of her.

"T-Tara. Tara MaClay" Tara shook Willow's hand, and neither girl let go of the shake, both happy just to stand there grinning shyly at each other, maintaining the contact.

"Tara...that's really pretty." Tara blushed at the sudden intensity of the redheads gaze.

"Thanks...s-so is W-willow."



____________________________________________________

Willow: Happy slaying!

Buffy: Wish me demons!

Edited by: Nikkii at: 4/27/03 3:30:25 pm
Nikkii
 


Re: Paradise Lost

Postby Auburn » Sun Apr 27, 2003 1:57 pm

Baby this is gunna be so good.... you know Im gunna bug you for an update REALLY soon right?



Oh and look.... Im a Flaming O :bounce



:bigkiss



Auburn xxxx

Edited by: Auburn at: 4/27/03 12:59:09 pm
Auburn
 


Re: Paradise Lost

Postby Domaris » Sun Apr 27, 2003 3:14 pm

More.. Now! :D please please pleaseeeee :pray :grin









:banana

"Rock my world!" - Gia

"Before you criticize someone, walk a mile in their shoes. That way, you'll be a mile from them, and you'll have their shoes" - Somebody

Domaris
 


Re: Paradise Lost

Postby The Next Tara Maclay » Sun Apr 27, 2003 6:27 pm

Good story continue continue quickly!:clap

The Next Tara Maclay
 


Re: Paradise Lost

Postby tara24alh » Sun Apr 27, 2003 6:44 pm

Awe,sooo sweet. I like the way you've started this. Keep it coming please!:bow ~Tara~

tara24alh
 


Re: Paradise Lost

Postby MorgainePriestessOfAvalon » Sun Apr 27, 2003 6:54 pm

Great start! Update soon please.

"They lay side by side, barely touching, letting the power of the sun and the earth and the air move through them in harmony...it seemed that some time, a very long time ago, they had lain like this, content, timeless, in an endless joyful peace, as if they were part of the standing stones which had stood here forever."

MorgainePriestessOfAvalon
 


Re: Paradise Lost

Postby Monika » Sun Apr 27, 2003 8:10 pm

NiiiiiKola!!!



Remembered my password. Yay!



Neways, keep the good stuff coming girl! :P

____________________________

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Monika
 


Re: Paradise Lost

Postby Willster » Sun Apr 27, 2003 8:41 pm

Really great beginning!!



Can't wait for an update.. !!



Will + Tara + Beach = WoW!!



How much hotter could it get?!! ;)



Willster
 


Re: Paradise Lost

Postby tiger17 » Sun Apr 27, 2003 8:56 pm

Wonderful start, hope there's an update soon....I can't wait :)

tiger17
 


Re: Paradise Lost

Postby barnabasvamp » Mon Apr 28, 2003 5:41 am

Great start, loving all the possibilities here!



Vacation, beach, warm nights! :grin



Look forward to more.

BV

"When choosing between two evils, I always like to take the one I've never tried before"-Mae West

barnabasvamp
 


Re: Paradise Lost

Postby Auburn » Tue Apr 29, 2003 12:27 pm

UPDATE NOW :bounce :smash

Auburn
 


Re: Paradise Lost

Postby Stroke of Luck » Tue Apr 29, 2003 1:35 pm

Whoo what a great start:bounce I think Willow gets a beautiful summer this time:grin



Hope there comes more really soon!!!:pray



Cu:wave

SoL/Natti



There are two kinds of tears, tears for those who leave you, and tears for those you never let go - Gabrielle/The Quest

Stroke of Luck
 


Re: Paradise Lost

Postby Nikkii » Tue Apr 29, 2003 3:14 pm

LoL Baby I'll try n update tonight for u :bigkiss

Willow: Happy slaying!

Buffy: Wish me demons!

Nikkii
 


Re: Paradise Lost

Postby Guinevere » Tue Apr 29, 2003 9:16 pm

Yay! Beach Fun! Great start!

Guinevere
 


Re: Paradise Lost

Postby The Rose24 » Tue Apr 29, 2003 9:28 pm

This seems to shaping up to be another good W/T first meeting story. Please continue.



:willow :love :tara



The title sort of frightens me though. :confused

Tara: My heart doesn't stutter.


Tara: Willow, I got so lost.

Willow: I found you. I will always find you.


Edited by: The Rose24  at: 4/29/03 8:30:48 pm
The Rose24
 


Re: Paradise Lost

Postby the vamp nurd » Wed Apr 30, 2003 2:48 am

hmm, binikis, sand and W/T.



:hmm



:pray



hope I'm not jumping to conclusions....

Willow (with pointy ears): "NO kissing and gay love?!!!! That's illogical!" The Sci-Fi Bard W/T trekkie ramblings.



Bardlet no #27



"Why Mother because I won't be baking cookies for the mental patients at the county Hospital?" Alex It's In The Water

the vamp nurd
 


Re: Paradise Lost

Postby Auburn » Wed Apr 30, 2003 12:51 pm

PWEEEASE :flower

Auburn
 


Re: Paradise Lost

Postby Nikkii » Wed Apr 30, 2003 1:06 pm

soooooooooon sweetie *mwah*

Willow: Happy slaying!

Buffy: Wish me demons!

Nikkii
 


Re: Paradise Lost

Postby serenity » Wed Apr 30, 2003 1:27 pm

great start! wanna see and read more! :applause

serenity
 


Re: Paradise Lost

Postby Auburn » Fri May 02, 2003 12:36 pm

Baaaabbbbbbbbbbby:baby



update this 4 when i get back from the cinema or I shall refuse you sex for like .....a whole week! lmao!!!! :smash



:rofl *mwah*



Gemma xxxx





Auburn
 


Re: Paradise Lost

Postby Nikkii » Fri May 02, 2003 2:51 pm

Ok ok baby i'm writing! LoL



And hey...just got my prom dress today...n there is NO WAY ul refuse me sex wen u see me in that :kiss U'l hafta help me fasten it up tho :wink



*gets typing*

Willow: Happy slaying!

Buffy: Wish me demons!

Nikkii
 


Re: Paradise Lost

Postby Nikkii » Fri May 02, 2003 3:35 pm

Ok, here it is! You can all thank Gemma's threat for this update ;) LoL



___________________________________________________



Chapter 2



**************



"Hey, I saw that jerk hit you with the ball," Xander squinted as he shaded his eyes with his hands from the hot Miami sun. Willow and Tara stood gazing in awe at the blue and green orbs staring back at them, unconscious to the fact that their hands still latched on to each other, as though each was afraid that the tiniest of movements, and the consequent unjoining of their fingers, would mean this moment would be lost. "Hello? Earth to Willow? And...um...new blonde girl."

"Huh? What?" The familiar voice snapped Willow out of her reverie with Tara's deep pools of blue, and, reluctant to turn away from the blondes anxious gaze, she glanced at Xander.

"Woah, Will, you were miles away there...that ball hit you pretty hard huh? You ok?"

"Yeah, sorry...I was just...um this is Tara," Willow gestured her hand affectionately towards the shy blonde as she gave Xander an adorable lopsided smile, "Tara this is Xander."

"H-hey"

"Ohhh," Xander extended his arm towards the shy girl and she shook it gently, barely meeting his gaze, "Pleased to meet you!" He stood a moment taking in how beautiful this blonde girl was, before he felt a sensation that told him Cordelia was glaring from behind him. As he turned round and looked over to where his girlfriend was looking, he saw that he was inded right. "I...um...better get back...she glares anymore like that and 2 holes are gonna be burnt right through me!"



Willow rolled her eyes as her best friend nervously headed back towards the brunette. "That's Cordelia...she's a total bitch, I dunno what he sees in her." As Willow turned back to Tara she couldn't help but trace her eyes over the body of the blonde as she returned her journey to meet her gaze again.

"I was...um...g-gonna g-g-go..." As Tara mentally chided herself again for her stutter, 'why am I so damn nervous?', she looked down to the sand and wrapped her arms around her waist, as though shielding herself from something. "A-actually, it doesn't m-matter...I-I've got to go..." She turned to leave, only to find her that the redhead had other ideas, as she gently tugged on her arm to pull her back.

"Tara, why? You seem cool, and...could we just hang out a little?"

'Oh my Goddess, she thinks I'm cool...why? Why would she think that? Wait a minute...she just asked you to hang out with her and you're stnading here wondering why? Just say yes you big doofus!' Tara turned back to face Willow, and looked up through a few stray strands of her hair. Strands that Willow gently put back in place, behind the blonde's ear, and reluctant to break the contact, let her hand slide gently over Tara's cheek before pulling her hand away quickly, realising what she'd just done. "Tara, I'm...I'm so sorry, I just....your eyes, they're so beautiful and you shouldn't hide them...Oh...oh! I mean...beautiful as in...um I'm sorry, I bable a lot, and when I get like this is usually best to stop me, see, anytime now would be good." Willow blushed gently as she smiled at Tara, looking into her eyes for some kind of response. The blonde simply smiled back at her.

"Hanging out would be...cool," she said quietly, barely audible, but Willow heard it clear enough.

"Wanna go get an ice cream...or a coffee or something?" suggested Willow, unaware of the pitch of her voice as she suddenly became quite excited at the thought talking to this girl, of hangin out with her...maybe becoming her friend.

"Sure, I know a good place just off the beach"



********************



"So yeah, me and Oz had a pretty rough break-up...but I think I'm kinda finally gettin' over it ya know?"

Tara simply nodded in response. She'd never been in love, but from Willow's detailed description, she could almost imagine what it felt like for the redhead. She figured that when Willow fell in love, she fell hard, although she didn't just offer her heart up to whoever was there. "What about you? You got a boyfriend?"

"M-me? No...I um..." Tara played with the spoon in her sundae as she looked into it, as though she'd just found something immensely interesting in the bottom of the glass, and was trying to fish it out. 'Ok, now do you tell her you're not really one for driving stick, or...lie?' she thought to herself, mentally playing the to possible scenarios in her mind. "M-my last girlfriend and I h-had a p-pretty bad break-up too."

"Oh...oh! Tara, I'm sorry for assuming, I...that's cool...wel not that you had a bad break-up, that you're gay I mean, well not because it's good for me or anything...and goddess I'm doing it again...you really should stop me." Willow shot a shy glance over at the blonde to see her gently laughing and looking straight at Willow.

"I l-like it."

"Huh? The babbling? Annoying much?"

"It's c-c-cute," stated a blushing Tara, as Willow grinned a shy grin and she took a spoonful of her sundae into her mouth. Tara bit her lip trying to take the focus away from Willow's mouth. 'Geez tara, she's only eating a sundae...with those lips...Willowlips...stop it.' She closed her eyes and mentally slapped herself for drooling over this near-stranger. Sure they had talked a lot in the last hour or so...but that didn't give her the right to have those thoughts and feelings about her...did it?



"Shoot!" exclaimed Willow as she glanced at her watch, "I gotta go! The guys'll be wondering where I've been." She gave Tara her best pouty face before it turned into a big smile and she reached for her cell phone, taking it out of her shorts pocket, she messed wiht it for a few seconds. "But...before I go, maybe I could um...have your number? And we could maybe meet up again for chocolatey sundae goodness?" The redhead wiggled her eyebrows at Tara who burst out laughing. The girls exchanged numbers and continued to talk for another half an hou, despite Willow's need to go back to the hotel and check in with Buffy.

"Thought you had to go?" questioned Tara with a slight grin.

"Trying to get rid of me now are ya?" came the reply, in a tone of mock surprise.

"Never." The honesty of Tara's eyes and the tone in her voice sent a shiver down Willow's spine as she gulped hard and tried to control the feelings of...wait a minute...what were these feelings? 'Am I...attracted...to her? I mean, yeah she's hot but...oh goddess, her lips...she's bitng it...wow! Ok, so attracted? Yeah I think I'm gonna go with that thought. Stop babbling to yourself, you mook!'

"So..I uh, should be going," stated the redhead again as she stood up from the table. tara stood up with her and gently squeezed her hand. 'It's now or never, Tara' thought the blonde as she leaned forward and gently but surely kissed Willow on the cheek.

"Yes. I'll call you later." Willow slowly raised her hand to her face and gently caressed the cheek where Tara's lips were a second ago as she watched the retreating figure of the blonde.

"Yeah...later" she mumbled to herself as she herself started back towards the hotel.

Willow: Happy slaying!

Buffy: Wish me demons!

Edited by: Nikkii at: 5/2/03 2:37:07 pm
Nikkii
 


Re: Paradise Lost

Postby The Rose24 » Fri May 02, 2003 7:53 pm

Very sweet. Keep it up. :heart

Tara: My heart doesn't stutter.


Tara: Willow, I got so lost.

Willow: I found you. I will always find you.


The Rose24
 


Re: Paradise Lost

Postby Guinevere » Fri May 02, 2003 11:29 pm

Wow, great update!



I love Willow-babble! And what a sweet kiss!

Guinevere
 


Re: Paradise Lost

Postby Auburn » Sat May 03, 2003 8:19 am

hehe sweetie that was great!... don't make me have to threaten u next time!



:flower :bigkiss Gem x

Auburn
 


Re: Paradise Lost

Postby Willster » Sat May 03, 2003 8:29 am

Can't wait for more



this was a really great update!!! :)

Willster
 


Re: Paradise Lost

Postby Stroke of Luck » Sat May 03, 2003 11:45 am

Hey :wave



That update was great, and Willow likesTara, GREAT:applause

It cant be better. I hope they see each other really soon.



Cu:wave

SoL/Natti



There are two kinds of tears, tears for those who leave you, and tears for those you never let go - Gabrielle/The Quest

Stroke of Luck
 


Re: Paradise Lost

Postby Monika » Sat May 03, 2003 4:54 pm

*chants*



:applause we want more! we want more! we want more!

____________________________

.:: it's nice to be important, but it's more important to be nice ::.

Monika
 


Re: Paradise Lost

Postby Auburn » Sat May 03, 2003 7:59 pm

we want more, we want more, we want more!!!! :laugh

Auburn
 


hmm Baby Blue Bikini mm..

Postby Red Jassy » Sun May 04, 2003 4:59 am

heyNikkii


Wow... 0h uhmmm Willow in baby blue bikini..yummy.


Needs an update.. more please...


Your Humble Reader,


Red Jassy


Don't you understand? That everything I do, I do for you? Anything that might be special in me...is you.

---GREAT EXPECTATIONS


Red Jassy
 

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