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 Post subject: A Life; Edited.
PostPosted: Sat Sep 09, 2006 7:28 am 
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hi everybody! So i'm starting a new thread coz im under a new name and my other one [Random Scribblings] is waaaaay old anyway.

This first one is kind of long, but iono, its an intro :D i'll post two recent ones in a few days no doubt

Thankyou for reading :love any feedback would be greatly loved and swooned over :blush


A Life; Edited.

I am not ready
To understand who I have become
So perhaps I’ll take you through
Who I once was

A tiny girl
With blistered hands
Who loved to climb things
Loved to reach the very top
But hid away in the dirt
When she was caught
And disciplined.

A small girl
With folded hands
Taught to smile and be polite
And yet rebelled every rule

She still loved to climb
To the very top
Of the highest things she knew
So she could see the world
Unclouded
Unshrouded
And live amongst the Gods.

A growing girl
Not yet able to grasp the scope of her feelings
Hiding in the boyish arms
Of the only thing she knew..
Hiding away in the dirt
Again.

A girl in transit
Buried by ideals of wealth and etiquette
Of service to God
And (ironically) empowerment to women

This girl in transit
This girl.. Still in hiding
Broke
And hid in the arms of another like her
This girl in transit
Finally landed
And learned to love
She learned the curves and the soft soft secrets of women

This girl in love
Found herself betrayed
By the softly curved beautiful girl.. closest to her.
Again
And
Again.

This wounded girl
Fell from her space in the clouds
Into the dirt
Wet and bloody with her cuts
Hungry beasts with boyish grins
Got to know this wounded girl
Got to know her very well

A woman of the world
(Or so she thought..)
Closed her eyes and let them take her
Again
And
Again.

Walking through the shadows
Her eyes still looked for some escape
A ladder
A window
Anything to help her climb out of the mess she’d made
Steeled
She tore herself away from sin
And learned many lessons
In many ways

This healing girl
Finally forgave her past
And looked towards the future

There she was
A growing woman
With steady hands and an open heart
Focused on all that surrounded her
Cold determination to compete
Succeed
Wealth
Power
Her….
(wait.. that wasn’t part of the plan
and she wasn’t..)

Her...
Stacey;
Exotic
Erotic
Ecstatic
This growing woman I tell you of..
She fell before she even looked

They both did.

And months past
And now years
And here she stands

This smiling woman
With love by her side
And trust on her sleeve
A belief in good
And an understanding of bad

She treads the dirt
She smiles at the sky
She hides from nothing
She has been hurt
And She has healed
She has come to understand
How she came to be

Oh.. And she still loves to climb
To reach the top
To Breathe the air of Gods
And live amongst the world of birds.

This has been
A life; Edited.



-Isabell XxX

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 Post subject: Re: A Life; Edited.
PostPosted: Sat Sep 09, 2006 11:01 am 
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wow wow wow. that was just....Im not so good at critqing (or spelling!) poem's and such, but this was just...fantastic! Great job!


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 Post subject: Re: A Life; Edited.
PostPosted: Sun Sep 10, 2006 1:10 am 
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Great poetry,thanks for sharing.


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 Post subject: Re: A Life; Edited.
PostPosted: Sun Sep 10, 2006 2:08 pm 
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Hooooly god. *reads it for the seventh time* wow... funnily enough i can see u doin all these things and being really tiny :blush cos of the pictures...and the stories.... :blush....

Quote:
A tiny girl
With blistered hands
Who loved to climb things
Loved to reach the very top
But hid away in the dirt
When she was caught
And disciplined.

A small girl
With folded hands
Taught to smile and be polite
And yet rebelled every rule

She still loved to climb
To the very top
Of the highest things she knew
So she could see the world
Unclouded
Unshrouded
And live amongst the Gods.


You..climbing up a lattice type fency thing... :laugh cec panicking her ass off :laugh :laugh :laugh u stuck there all 'AAHHH!!' =))=))=)) heh.... i know that doesnt really bare any relevance but it sprung to mind :laugh



Quote:
A growing girl
Not yet able to grasp the scope of her feelings
Hiding in the boyish arms
Of the only thing she knew..
Hiding away in the dirt
Again.

A girl in transit
Buried by ideals of wealth and etiquette
Of service to God
And (ironically) empowerment to women


Of all the fantasies.... haha i'm kidding....or so i saaaay..... *coughs catholiclesbianschoolgirl* :whistle
This part personally, will always stick in my mind. Remember when i first met you and i thought you were straight? Always... it was a very strange time, my feelings toward you were very surreal :laugh of course im looking at the words 'boyish arms' 'wealth' 'ettiquette' and 'God' just incase u were wondering what i was rambling on about... :blush....lets move on...


Quote:
This girl in transit
This girl.. Still in hiding
Broke
And hid in the arms of another like her
This girl in transit
Finally landed
And learned to love
She learned the curves and the soft soft secrets of women

This girl in love
Found herself betrayed
By the softly curved beautiful girl.. closest to her.
Again
And
Again.



..... :happy . S'all i have to say.

Just gimme 10 minutes behind the bus stop with her...we'll see who is hurting then....:-D.....

Nah this was...huge for you. First love is always the hardest to leave behind even though sometimes you wish you never loved them at all. *smiles* Uh of course i could be jumping the gun and this isnt about her but someone else completely in which case i never said anything. :-|:-|.


Quote:
This wounded girl
Fell from her space in the clouds
Into the dirt
Wet and bloody with her cuts
Hungry beasts with boyish grins
Got to know this wounded girl
Got to know her very well

A woman of the world
(Or so she thought..)
Closed her eyes and let them take her
Again
And
Again.



This part, to be completely honest, i will never understand. But hey its a part of you. The hugest part i will never understand *nods*. I'd never want to understand it... and i never could.


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There she was
A growing woman
With steady hands and an open heart
Focused on all that surrounded her
Cold determination to compete
Succeed
Wealth
Power
Her….
(wait.. that wasn’t part of the plan
and she wasn’t..)

Her...
Stacey;
Exotic
Erotic
Ecstatic
This growing woman I tell you of..
She fell before she even looked

They both did.



:-D :-D :-D S'got my name in it :-D I think its bout me this bit *sus eyes* hehehehehe! I'm the 3 E's.....i have to remember that! *giggles*
But yeah... i see it as both of us not forseeing this huge hole in the ground and looking everywhere but in front of us. S'what i envision when i read this part iono why :blush But Thea and Marie did! S'all that mat- :shock :shock! THE TV! 'GARLIC BREAD? GARLIC...? BREAD?! AM I HEARING YA RIGHT?!' =))=))=))=))=))!!
Sorry... i dont really know how to analyse this...


The rest... i hope its where you are now cos baby you are a goddess you just dont realise it :blush heh, you're my goddess :blush.... :x yeah...

I really do love how you ended it though, this is a really simple yet detailed poem... you have a way of doing that! Simple.....HONEST....your own grain of writing....

Original....
Precise...

A Bell poem.

*smiles lovingly and leaves you kisses juuuuust here :kiss2 :kiss2 :kiss2*

I love you..and for God's sake and my own, PLEASE WRITE MORE VERY SOON!

Screw cec's glary eyes! And your office duties! POEMS ARE THE KEY TO SUCCESS!! DO YOU HEAR?!?!

And now i'm tired and i'm going to watch Peter Kay then fall into bed...

Actually... *sends u an email*

<3

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 Post subject: Re: A Life; Edited.
PostPosted: Sun Sep 10, 2006 2:59 pm 
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Wow that is an amazing poem, written form your heart. Thank you for sharing


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 Post subject: Re: A Life; Edited.
PostPosted: Mon Nov 06, 2006 6:11 am 
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It seems personal thanks for sharing. Good poem!!
(I used to climb when I was little..)

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 Post subject: Re: A Life; Edited.
PostPosted: Fri Mar 23, 2007 7:02 am 
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As always, Belli, amazing...

something about the rhythm of this peice really took me in and it flowed just beautifully

Cant wait to hear more!

*hugz*
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(who has reappeared :D )

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 Post subject: Re: A Life; Edited.
PostPosted: Tue Aug 19, 2008 7:15 am 
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Hi everyone, I can't sleep and am listening to beautiful but slightly sad music so I thought I'd try and get my writing juices flowing for a few minutes. I'll try and do more soon so I'll do individual responses theeeeen.

Thank you

I’m humble in approach
You’re strong through your fragility
Beautiful… and strong

I set my watch by the rhythms of your chest
Time always goes faster when we’re out of breath
Beneath the sheets
Hearts racing
Seconds passing
It seems there’s a lifetime between first kiss and last

We’ll lie in heaps
Amongst the dusty layers of the house;
Tangled in knots of you
I say I’ll love you forever
And I’ll mean it

I treasure every moment we have
And long for every moment we don’t.

Love. Thank you.




take care of yourselves guys :peace

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 Post subject: Re: A Life; Edited.
PostPosted: Tue Aug 19, 2008 10:15 am 
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Great writing.


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 Post subject: Re: A Life; Edited.
PostPosted: Wed Aug 10, 2011 10:34 am 
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SJ: thanks SJ :grin nice to know you're still reading after like a million years :P


Okay, so! Here is a totally random late night scribble that I thought I would share


Evergreen


The sun on my back warms me through
I close my eyes and listen
The life I lead is good and steady.

At times I am the oak
Stable. Grounded.
Others, I feel more a tumbleweed
Searching, searching
Always searching
For a place I can lay still
Away from the insistent winds of my life

I feel old
A trunk twisted with experience
New growth built on fading scars
Each leaf above, a much loved memory
They branch together to fill my life
With colour and sound and love
So even in my saddest moments

I am evergreen.



much love to all!

-Belli :peace

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 Post subject: Re: A Life; Edited.
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Great poetry.


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