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 Post subject: Re: Willowlovers sad attempt at poetry
PostPosted: Sat Oct 07, 2006 4:10 am 
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so now i read them all.
really great and powerful written poems! :pride


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[center]Love or Lust

Love is forever.
Lust is for awhile.
Love is heaven.
Lust is hell.
What is it I feel?
Is this love?
Is this Lust?
Love and Lust.
Two words.
Two meanings.
One is pain,
One is pleasure.
One is living,
One is pretending.
Is this love?
Is this lust?
Love or Lust.[/center]

Written October 7th, 2006

Authors Note: I edited this poem by putting less space between each line. the words for the poem are exactly as they were before.

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and again a very amazing poem! my english is to bad to explain what i think. but i really like it!


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please explain in a language your good at. even if i dont understand it, it will mean alot to me. =)

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ok ;)

deine gedichte sind sehr kraftvoll und dennoch sensibel und leicht. obwohl diese stärke in ihnen ist... es zeigt traurigkeit mit glücklichkeit vereint.
es sind viele gefühle in deine gedichten und du verarbeitest sie sehr gut!

so i hope you understood a little bit. sorry but my english would have been to worse


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lol :-D Thank you.

By The Way, What language is that?

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its german! i know its hard to understand. i try to learn better english!
I hope it will work ;-)


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Great poetry.


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its okay that i dont understand it. I just like knowing that you like my poems.


SJ id like to thank you for commenting frequently. thank you for the support.

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[center]Escape

An escape,
Escape from prison.
An escape,
Escape from hell.
I’ve escaped,
Escaped to freedom.
I am free,
Free as a bird.
I am free,
Free like the sky.
I have escaped.
Now I am free.[/center]

Written November 7, 2006

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[center]Wedding Bells

I hear the bells.
I hear the bells.
The bells are sweet,
The bells are freedom.
I hear the bells.
The bells that end,
My misery.
I hear love.[/center]

Written November 7, 2006

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[center]Flame

Love is light.
Love is warmth.
Hate is dark.
Hate is cold.
A flame is love.
The dark is hate.
Love will always win.
Dark will always lose.
A flame lights the dark.
A flame heats the cold.
Love is a flame,
A flame that never dies.[/center]

Written November 7, 2006

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I liked "Flame" alot! :peace


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Liked all those poems,great writing.


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[center]Does Age Matter?

Does age matter?
Does age make a difference?
Am I to young?
Am I to old?
Am I stuck in the middle?
Why does age matter?
Why is love,
Bound by age?
Why isn’t love,
Free to all?
Is love controlled by age?
Does age matter?
Why does age matter?
Age shouldn’t matter,
With love.[/center]

Written November 28th, 2206

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[center]Beautiful Agony

A beauty and a Lie.
A love and a Regret.
A miracle and a disaster.
She wants a change.
I want a change.
She wants to change me.
I want to change me.
She wants me to be a more of a man.
I want to be perfect for her.
Where’s the line I Draw.
Where’s the line she Drew.
I want love.
And she wants a man.
A Man I'm Not.[/center]

Written December 29th, 2006

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love it them WillowLover :dance

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i just read all the poems i have to say my fav is actually the second verson of the first poem posted ... I totally get it ....
anyhow great job


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Thank you all for your compliments. *bows* it means alot to me.

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"Beautiful Agony" Well done, and does make one think about what you're saying.
Again, you continue to progress in your expression of your feelings.

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*bows* thank you BV

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[center]The Loving Masquerade

As I climb towards light
Leaving the dark of sins
I live in a masquerade
I say “I‘m fine”
But what I feel is hell
I smile for the world
While I scream inside
I laugh at a joke
As I cry out in pain
I want it to end
I want it to be real
This masquerade
Can’t last long
For I have her
She is my light
I try for her
To make her happy
To make her smile
To make her laugh
I try for her
So we can both end the masquerade[/center]

Written December 2nd, 2007


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This Poem is dedicated to my Very amazing, beautiful, and talented Girl Friend. Happy Anniversary Baby, I love you

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[center]Angel

Love the way she walks
Love the way she moves
I Love it all
Love her smile
Love her glow
I love it all
Love the way she speaks
Even more I love
When she says I love you
My angel
My love
My life
Love the way she looks at me
While we lay alone
Love the way she says my name
When no one else is around[/center]


Written December 3rd, 2007

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I would like to apologize for the poor quality of these last two poems. I write better with angst and these were more love based. This poem is also dedicated to my previously mentioned Girl Friend

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