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 Post subject: NC-17 Poems... Peering Into the Mind of PN (UPDATE 5-06-05)
PostPosted: Wed Dec 22, 2004 1:30 pm 
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Hello Kittens-
After more than a gentle nudge by a good friend, I am setting my shyness aside and posting some of my poetry.


If you are so inclined please let me know what you think. All opinions... even negative would be appreciated.

Happy Holidays!

Cheers,
PN
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My Wolf

It calls to you in the dead of night,
Growls of need permeate your soul.

It speaks a language only you can hear,
A language without words; communicated through raw emotion.

Its feral eyes shine with the moons reflection,
Casting a gaze which burns your skin from within.

Its need to ravage your body; consume your flesh,
Leaving you breathless; longing; yearning.

It smells your arousal with heightened senses; lips quivering with primal hunger,
Reducing you to a trembling mass of lust.

Its teeth sink into your pulse point; liquid fire filling its belly,
Your nether region is now aching, throbbing; saturated with passion.

Throwing its head back; Emitting a guttural howl from its core,
You are left panting; your resolve quickly disappearing.

It calls out to you once more,
You are unable to resist.

It knows who you are; It comes to stake claim,
You wait; knowing your path has already been predetermined.

You are now face to face; pulses racing with desire.

Do you know who I am?
Do you know who you are.

I am your forever Mate; and you are mine.

I am...
The Wolf.

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The Melding of Desires

Passionate desire
Fire way down deep
the sexual flame
Burns white-hot

It melts the resolve
Coherence is lost
and savage lust
Claims the senses

Delicious arousal
Creeps up the stomach
enveloping the body
In erotic embrace

Savory anticipation
The heat of flesh so near
Sensations of pin pricks
Satin under fingertips
Tingling electricity
as skin brushes skin
the glorious thrill
of two bodies joined
The pressure of willing lips
at first so tenderly
growing more insistent
The hunger mounting

Mouths pressed together
Tongues dance a duet
the forms dissolve
and souls intertwine

Nipples excited
Hard and erect
Invitation to suckle
Helpless to resist

Hands gently wander
Lazy exploration
discovering the niche
of silky delight

Tongue trailing downward
relishing the surface
Intent on capturing
The sweet centre

The muscles quiver
the core smolders
the scent entices
the taste enraptures
Plunging inside....
Tantalizing essence
Juices flowing...
The tension mounts
The waves of ecstasy
Body and mind
volcanic eruption
Perpetual bliss...
Lovingly sampling
the liquid of Love
Sweet nectar
Of the soul...
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My Wolf Part II ... The Adjoining

The night falls,
And with the moon rises my desire.
I pace the room like an animal caged,
An animal with no prey to hunt;
But a longing which must be satisfied.
My Innerwolf howls from deep within.
Dreaming of the moment my mate will come.
Fearless, night-silent, and powerful,
I hear her growl rising;
Answering my call.
It is my cry you hear in the night,
My eyes that gaze at you from the shadows.
It is my heart that beats in your Soul,
My strength;
My passion;
That makes you whole.
I am Wolf...
I am in You.
You are in Me...
We are One.
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Cheers,
PN
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The best and most beautiful things in life cannot be seen or touched - they
must be felt with the heart ~ Helen Keller


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 Post subject: Re: Various Poems... Peering Into the Mind of PN
PostPosted: Wed Dec 22, 2004 2:42 pm 
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Hello! Good to see you decided to post some great poetry! I especially liked "The Melding of Desires" it was just awesome! And the power of want and passion is definatly something we can all relate too! Thanks for sharing! Hope you post more soon!

:pride

-Rose

"You were everything, everything that I wanted, we were meant to be supposed to be, but we lost it. All the memories so close to me just fade away.."-Avril



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 Post subject: Re: Various Poems... Peering Into the Mind of PN
PostPosted: Wed Dec 22, 2004 3:26 pm 




Hey there!!! :wave You have great poemness!! :) Its a great read, post more!!





"Um...dont mean to ruin the sexcapades...but we need the chips out there. Xanders being a chip whore." -She's my always by spikeizmine87



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 Post subject: Peering into the mind of... PN
PostPosted: Thu Dec 23, 2004 12:33 pm 
:wave



Your use of imagery... was excellent. The raw emotions, whether it be, love, want, urgent need... you voiced them all really well. The Wolf... for me it was the best !



behindhereyes

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 Post subject: Re: Peering into the mind of... PN
PostPosted: Fri Dec 24, 2004 2:24 am 
Wow,great poetry,thanks for sharing :read



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 Post subject: Re: Peering into the mind of... PN
PostPosted: Sat Dec 25, 2004 5:17 am 
Very powerful poetry, it speaks of such wonderful raw passion and love. Can't wait to read more. BTW it must be one lucky lady who inspires such beauty



Wendy

Freddie is king



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 Post subject: Re:Various Poems Peering into the mind of... PN
PostPosted: Fri Feb 25, 2005 12:04 am 
Spikeizmine87: So happy to hear you enjoyed "The Melding of Desires". It was a poem which practically wrote itself. Guess you could say it was the result of much inspiraton.:)



Wired Vixen: Thank you.:shy



Behindhereyes: Glad you enjoyed "The Wolf". It was the first poem I had written in many years, and remains one of my favourites.



SJ: Thanks for reading.:read



Magrat70: I'm glad you liked the poems, and appreciate your kind words. Don't know if the love of my life considers herself lucky to have me or not.:blush I certainly do... she is my muse.

Cheers,

PN





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The best and most beautiful things in life cannot be seen or touched - they

must be felt with the heart ~ Helen Keller

Edited by: PeachyNectar at: 3/1/05 7:20 am


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 Post subject: Re: Re:Poems...Peering Into the Mind of PN (UPDATE 2-25-05)
PostPosted: Fri Feb 25, 2005 12:58 am 
Greetings Kittens,:wave :kitty



I want to thank those of your who took a moment to read my poetry, and appreciate you kind words. I've decided to brave it out, and post a few more. As before would appreciate your feedback and comments.



Enjoy!:)

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Our First Night



Your fingers lightly brush over my body

Feeling each contour and curve

My body responses; quivering under your touch

Your mouth meets mine in a kiss

Our tongues finding one another

Probing; exploring; battling for dominance

You whisper in my ear

Making my body tingle all over

I feel myself surrendering

You gaze deeply into my eyes

And I gaze back at you

You read my mind so well

And without a single spoken word

Our bodies become intertwined Becoming one and exploring new territory

Basking in emotions never experienced before this night

Breathing grows heavy; laboured

Skin glistens with a sheen of sweat Moving together so perfectly

Hearts beating as one

In an almost rhythmic dance Finally coming to a wonderful climax

Holding me tightly to your breast

Running your fingers through my hair

We fall asleep in each others arms

With the memories of our first night



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Hands



So gentle yet insistent are they;

as I explore your body

like undiscovered territory.

Soft caresses,

Insistent touches,

Nails raking along your silken skin -

Leaving you wet and breathless.



My fingers grace your lips;

and you take them into your mouth eagerly.

Sucking them with such hunger and passion;

trailing your eager tongue up each finger,

And down the other side.

Leaving your body trembling.

My hands awaken

the sexual creature within you;

traveling over the contours of your flesh.

So strong; yet at the same time...

so passionate.

Sexual energy radiates

through my fingertips;

transferred to you -

Leaving you aching for more...

always wanting more...                       

Of my hands.



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ONE



The perfume of your body lingers on my tongue,

recalling the aroma of passion flowing around us.

The scent of you lingers upon my fingertips,

as memories of the night's passion fills me.

Breathe seizing in anticipation, Legs trembling with satisfaction.

Body aching from exertion.

But feeling exquisite nonetheless.

The softness of your inner thighs.

Kissing my cheeks gently with the touch of your skin.

Feeling prickles of desire flood my body.

Sounds of pure rapture inundate my thoughts.

With intermittent images of your eyes, your smile, your skin.

Flashing quickly, changing slowly, knowing more and more.

Of what you want and what I want and what WE want.

As one, bodies writhing in time and with purpose.

Sensing each other's needs and supplying gladly.

Let me lick your neck and taste the strength of your heartbeat.

Wildly flicking tongue upon sensitive, moist flesh.

Parting my lips and taking you into my mouth.

Feeling the pulsating heat of expectations fill this opening.

Eyes catch; hearts beat, breathing ceases, only climax.

Sparkles of light, twinkling stars.

Explosions of rainbow magnitudes.

The treasure waiting for me glimmering in the moonlight.

Damp with pleasure, succulent to taste.

Feeling your lips touch my sanctity.

Worshipping at the mouth of my source.

Pleasure rippling through me time and again.

My body unable to contain the sensations.

Flooding your mouth with an abundance of WET.

Bodies shudder with intensity.

Love flowing from my mouth to yours.

Fingers tracing circles of pleasure on your nipples.

Tongue lavishing them with utmost care and attention.

Tempting me so sweetly.

Beautiful in EVERY way.

Your olive skin shimmers in the moonlight,

Pressed against brown sugar dripping with fulfillment.

Taste the sweet of my mouth.

Transfer your breath to me and allow me to breathe fully.

Trickling sweet nectar onto my tongue.

Tasting ALL of you.

Devouring every drop.

Such deliciousness, I cannot allow it to end.

I must, I need to suck the truth from your body.

I need it to tell me its secrets.

To tell me its wants, to tell me its needs, to tell me everything.

Fingernails raking your skin in orgasm.

Feeling the yielding of your body.

Legs release their hold and relinquish to my hand their treasures.

Basking in the glow of your womanliness.

Kiss me, Taste me, Feel me, Hold me, Want me, Need me, Consume me.

Urges rising within me, wanting to be inside of you,

to penetrate the core of your satisfaction.

Unable to withstand it much longer.

Giving in to the mutual worship of each other.

Taste me as I taste you.

Feel me as I feel you.

Bask in the seduction of our presences.

Your eyes glazed with gratification stare down at me.

My eyes glossy with the indulgence of ambrosia delight that resides in the "Y".

Tasting you, savoring you, consuming you, enjoying you, in the fullest. Confessing my needs upon the face of salvation.

Praying for the sun to fail me this day.

Hoping the moon will not fade and give way to the bright sun.

Entreating time to stand still and allow me this moment forever.

In your arms.

Surrounded by your love.

Surrounded by your gentility.

Feeling compelled to ravage you again.

Longingly searching within you for me.

Your eyes casting a reflection of my emotions.

Catching all honesty, all truth and all vulnerability.

For this time and for each time.

Completely in control.

Completely out of control.

And supreme perfection.

My Body & Your Body -ONE



Cheers,

PN





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The best and most beautiful things in life cannot be seen or touched - they

must be felt with the heart ~ Helen Keller

Edited by: PeachyNectar at: 2/28/05 10:49 am


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 Post subject: Re: Re:Poems...Peering Into the Mind of PN (UPDATE 2-25-05)
PostPosted: Fri Feb 25, 2005 1:28 pm 
Wow... those were amazing and so vivid. I loved your word usage and imagery, very well-done.



Yvonne:peace



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 Post subject: Re: Re:Poems...Peering Into the Mind of PN (UPDATE 2-25-05)
PostPosted: Sun Feb 27, 2005 4:50 am 
Great poems :clap



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 Post subject: Re: Re:Poems...Peering Into the Mind of PN (UPDATE 2-25-05)
PostPosted: Mon Feb 28, 2005 12:39 pm 
I just wanna echo everything yvonne and SJ said, plus they were so raw, i can tell they came straight from the heart, the best kind of poetry :) great writing!



Stace xXx

Light up, light up...As if you have a choice, even if you cannot hear my voice...I'll be right beside you dear.... <3
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 Post subject: Re: Re:Poems...Peering Into the Mind of PN (UPDATE 2-25-05)
PostPosted: Mon Feb 28, 2005 4:46 pm 
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wow i loved these last few poems! Such powerfull emotions...wow....awesome job! write more please!

:pride

-Rose

"I would cry...I would die if I lost you..." Alex Parks



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 Post subject: Re: Re:Poems...Peering Into the Mind of PN (UPDATE 2-25-05)
PostPosted: Wed Mar 02, 2005 11:09 pm 
:sheep :sheep :jaw :sheep :sheep

:bow :bow :thud :thud :bow :bow



These are the hottest poems I've ever read!!!Lots of sexiness and passion which I love. Great writing and word usage too. Hey if the woman in your life doesn't know she's lucky, she's crazy, I'd faint if someone wrote anything like your poems for me.;) :wink



Keep um comin', I can't wait to read more!:drool :drool



You rock and are a goddess Peachy! :bow :bow



:pride Nicole:pride

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 Post subject: Re: Re:Poems...Peering Into the Mind of PN (UPDATE 2-25-05)
PostPosted: Mon Mar 21, 2005 1:22 pm 
Beautiful and powerful poetry. “One” has a rawness of passion that can only come from true emotion. Thank you for sharing your wonderful words

Freddie is king



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 Post subject: Re:Poems...Peering Into the Mind of PN (UPDATE 2-25-05)
PostPosted: Fri Apr 15, 2005 3:28 pm 
onyxsundrops- Glad you have enjoyed the poems. As anyone who writes knows there are times the words seem to flow. This is how I feel about my poetry, I am simply the instrument that takes pen to paper.



SJ- Thank you ... hope you continue to enjoy.:)



Wired Vixen- Thank you. Raw is the only way I know how to write so I'm glad you think it makes the best poetry (I happen to agree :) ).



Spikeizmine87- Thank you... you make me :blush . I promise more are on the way very soon.



Wicked Wicca- Glad you enjoyed the poems and thank you for your kind words.



Magrat70- Glad you enjoyed "One" so much. It came from a deep and personal place... and I'm happy to hear that emotional element was conveyed.



Hope you continue to enjoy... and btw... I'm a big fan of your work too.:shy

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Thoughts of You



Heat emanating from my body

my skin grows moist

as I lick my lips

Running my fingers down

*Still further down...*



To the place I long for you to be

the centre of my want

the chamber of my desire

*Touching...*



Thinking of you

the last time

we made love

my body aches

*Moaning...*



I feel you

Moving with me

Bodies entwined in rhythmic passion

*Mmmm...*



Comes the release

of the tension

onto my fingers

I gasp

*Ahhh... Oh God.*



Cooling down

Heat subsiding

Passion ebbing

Thinking of you...

*Smiling now...*



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Passions Crescendo



I have dreamt of this moment

When I take you firmly and caress you

Driving you wild with ecstasy



Holding you in my embrace

Kissing you until you willingly submit to my every move

Then releasing you gently to reveal your passion



Your begging response, your sexual hunger

Penetrating, in a complex orchestration of eroticism

Giving, receiving, gently, firmly, lovingly

Holding you in an embrace of warmth, passion and love



Driving you into an abyss of sensuality

Pulling you back to tease you with affection

Then again and again, ecstasy

Searching the erogenous zones of your mind



Making your body ache with desire

craving more and more

In a voyage of ecstasy, sexual passions unleashed



I seduce you

our sexual scent fills the air

soft moans and sighs

escape your quivering lips



Sweet dew formed

between your thighs

a river of love flowing

caused by our desire



You are my equal in this journey to the pinnacles of sexuality

We do not want it to end, such is the moment and the longing

And here we are now, embracing making love, endless love

A lifetime of searching, discovery, a fantasy fulfilled

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Alive



My skin...

It feels alive

imagining your touch me.



The mere thought of...

Your fingers

your tongue

upon my neck.



Dear God,

I am lost

in all that is you.



I smell you

on my sheets.

My pillow

somehow holds the scent of your hair.



Your body...

arches against mine

Fingers filling me.

Taking me there.



To that place

that place ...

Only you can reach.



Our bodies glistened

with sweat

Etched in the moonlight

piercing through my window.



I gasp...

I shudder...

I hang tight to you.



Your name...

Only

your name

escapes my lips.



My skin...

It feels alive.

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My Angel



Purest treasure, palm to palm,

entwined fingers giving breath

life...

Your home is where my heart is

Your flowing sea permeates my shores...

Heart more bright and brilliant

than the strongest combination

of all the celestial bodies

The skies are full of majesty...

yet you are right here with me...

Your value is unimaginable

Your light...

How can I ever be worthy?

Your secrets I have searched endlessly for

Your answers I would give eternity for

You have been there just beyond the grasp of reality

toying with my memories...

splashing in the pools of our destiny....

I am lost within your eyes

Held captive within your arms

Wrap me in your angel wings and love me

dancing within my dreams and fantasies

The golden fire within your emerald eyes

You are not of this earth

My beautiful winged lover

heaven opened its gates and allowed your escape

I am lost within your eyes

I am held captive within your arms

Wrap me in your angel wings...

and love me

















Cheers,

PN





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The best and most beautiful things in life cannot be seen or touched - they

must be felt with the heart ~ Helen Keller

Edited by: PeachyNectar at: 4/18/05 9:04 am


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 Post subject: Re: Re:Poems...Peering Into the Mind of PN (UPDATE 2-25-05)
PostPosted: Sun Apr 17, 2005 4:15 am 
Liked all those poems,great writing :clap



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 Post subject: Re: Wow!!!
PostPosted: Mon Apr 18, 2005 5:10 pm 
:sheep Damn... :jaw :jaw :thud :thud :bow :bow



Finished reading thoughts of you and I was thinkin' man :drool sexiest poem ever. Then I read alive & passion cresendo, and I'm thinkin' does Peachy have a sister? :pray :drool :devil :wink How's a girl suppose to sleep after readin' those?:D :devilish :shower



My angel was beautiful :happycry just lovely. I say again your girlfriend is lucky to have someone write such amazing poetry about her.



Can't wait to read what you post next so please post again soon. :pray :pray :pray :pray :pray



PEACHYNECTAR ROCKS!!!






:pride Nicole :pride

:newbie

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 Post subject: Re: Poems... Peering Into the Mind of PN (UPDATE 4-17-05)
PostPosted: Tue Apr 26, 2005 11:19 pm 
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wonderful deeply erotic poetry. Alive is so simple but has such passion; amazing and Angel is just beautiful. All your poems express such deep love it brings a tear to the eye. Thank you for sharing.

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SJ: Thank you for reading my feeble attempts at poetry. Hope you continue to enjoy them.

Wicked Wicca: Thanks for reading.

Magrat: Your make me :blush. Thank you for the kind words regarding my poetry. "Angel" was the result of a very special day spent with the woman I love... she continues to be my endless source of inspiration. Hope you continue to enjoy.


Cheers,
PN

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leading you down into my core
where I’ve become so numb... EVANESCENCE


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Hi Kittens- :wave

Here are a few more of my feeble attempts at poetry. Enjoy!

Cheers,
PN
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Intoxicate Me

I feel the warmth of your hand as it covers mine
Your moist, warm breath on my neck
A finger tracing my breast
I begin to feel shivers erupt in my body
Uncontrollably I reach for you
Aching for your touch
Anticipating your every move
Willing you to ravage me with your mouth
With uninhibited passion as we become one
Our bodies mold together so perfectly
Your lips softly brushing mine
Making their way on a downward journey
I tremble as they reach their destination
Your name tumbling from my lips
My want and need for you overpowering me
Your scent intoxicates me
We lie, spent, in each others arms
Holding you close, hearts beating as one
Love so strong, so pure, so right

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Soon My Love

Soon my love,
I will no longer miss you...
for my arms will be filled with the warmth of you.
My thirsty lips will be quenched by your kisses...
moisture from the purest fountain...spilling from your lips,
and yours alone.
I'll not miss the softness in your eyes,
or the comfort I find within them.
Sleeping in a featherbed...wrapped in handmade quilts.
If my ocean ever dried and withered away,
I would find it again within the depths of your eyes.
Soon my love,
I'll feel the softness of your hair against my cheek.
Smell the lavender sprinkled in your hair so sweet,
emerging myself in its scent.
Languishing there...lazily.
Soon my love,
If your tears should start to fall,
I'll not feel helpless...I'll hold you close.
Listening to you....or talking if you need.
Best friends first....in laughter or in darkness,
just being there...being grateful that I can.
No judgments be placed on you...
only my infinite adoration.
Soon my love,
we'll be sitting side by side...
hearing the rise and fall of laughter as we giggle,
just like school girls...as we often do.
We'll hold hands as we walk...sometimes as we run.
Cuddle up and watch movies enjoying the closeness
and vulnerability in those moments... letting them be,
just that without fear or question.
Soon my love,
my craving for your touch will be satisfied.
Your body and mine...entwined, merged...you and I.
You my love...all you need do is whisper to me your desires,
as soon as they fall from your lips...they will be done.
My longings will be known by you...I'll speak them,
in between the kisses you place upon my willing lips.
Falling asleep after satisfaction...sleeping in peace,
waking the same...your skin pressed to mine,
your breath a secret language, only my heart understands.
Soon my love,
I'll be there,
in your arms...by your side, in our bed.
Yes very soon my love...everything else will be a memory of the past,
as we come together.
Soon my love...soon...

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My Lucky Heart

She came into my life;
as a kind gentle voice.
Enchanting me before I was aware,
my heart struck by loves piercing arrow.
I have chosen her; she has chosen me,
And I'll take her hand.
Sit beneath a willow tree with her and share my lemonade.
Walks...we'll take many of these,
in sun, rain, beneath the moon using stars to guide us.
Picnics in the park... I'll feed her beneath a shaded oak;
place wildflowers in her hair.
Her green eyes twinkle;
And I am entranced.
Her face is lovely; angelic as she laughs.
Smiling at the sound...I adore that sound.
I'll rest my head in her lap, shiver as she plays with my hair.
Read her poetry as she slips into slumber.
Kissing her eyes as she dreams; watching until,
I myself grow weary...then rest by her side.
Pressing my ear to her chest,
find comfort in the beat of her heart;
It's melodic rhythm like music to me.
In her words I find truth; a trust and belief.
There is a depth in her; she is no longer afraid to share;
gives me comfort and reassurance,
for she has also become my best friend.
We talk for hours at times; laughing... sometimes we cry.
Never growing weary of one another; time seems to stand still.
My lover...I become lost in the touch of her kiss.
Her body a cradle for my own...rocks me.
In her presence I melt....just the sight of her.
Her body; warms me from the chill of night.
Cuddled up together watching romantic comedies;
kissing the nap of her neck.
We'll feed each other popcorn; maybe have a popcorn fight;
playful wrestling soon turns to love making.
I'll smell the lavender in her hair...and sigh.
Gods... how did I get so lucky to have this woman come into my life?
She's a wonder of the world...a miracle to my heart.

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How can you see into my eyes like open doors
leading you down into my core
where I’ve become so numb... EVANESCENCE


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Those poems were very sensual,you're a great poet.


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Ooh, lots of poemy goodness! The first one is so sensual, I can really feel the passion there. The second one, knowing that there is one other person out there that can complete you, wow. The third one is my favorite because it’s the little things you do together, the friendship, and the closeness that really conveys what love should be about. Lovely stuff, thanks for posting.

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Sorry for not leaving feedback sooner, and after this last post I had to.

Awesome expression of your feelings. Thanks for sharing.

BV

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1. Blessed Wannabe

Joined: Fri May 06, 2005 3:40 pm
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Must admit I'm not big on the poetry, but since I'm new on the Kitten thought I would take a look see on this board. Really glad I did there are some very good writers here, and your poems caught my eye the most. I'm not a writer at all (can bring two sentences together :lol ) but I do know what talent is, and you have an abundance.

I am very fond of the poems my lucky heart (true love), my wolf (way intense), one (passionate union), and thoughts of you (hehe :lol :devil ). The common element to each of this is depth and clean writing. You are a gifted poet. :bow

Again thanks to you an everyone on this board for teaching me poetry doesn't have to rhyme to be good. :lol


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