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Poems all kinds mixed up

Postby shadowygirl » Tue Sep 23, 2003 3:36 am

Ummm Ok I finally did it ...

This is to my heart and soul to my Arron .

I love you .











Arron

So many miles apart

To many to walk

But never enough to stop my heart



In a moment a life time can be held

Or so I was always told



But one moment with you is

never enough

And one life time with you

just doesn't seem long enough



We're so many miles apart

We've never kissed

We've never touched



But you managed to reach

inside of me

Reached inside my heart

And now somehow I know

without a doubt

Your the one

I can never

live without





Edited by: shadowygirl at: 3/8/04 4:46 am
shadowygirl
 


Re: Arron

Postby Karmah » Tue Sep 23, 2003 1:23 pm

Ummm WOW baby I uhh no idea what to say here I love you so much and ummm wow, thank you and your amazing

:flower :love

Love your Arron

You don't love a woman because she's beautiful,

She is beautiful because you love her.

~ by Anonymous ~

Karmah
 


Re: Arron

Postby SJ » Thu Sep 25, 2003 1:24 am

Sweet poem :)

SJ
 


Re: Arron

Postby TemperedCynic » Tue Sep 30, 2003 7:20 pm

You posted! Yay!



You are growing by leaps and bounds every day. Your words show a new confidence. A determination to live your life and not accept anything less than total happiness.



When your muse inspires you, please post again. I'll wait.


More than any other time in history, mankind faces a crossroads. One path leads to despair and utter hopelessness. The other, to total extinction. Let us pray we have the wisdom to choose correctly. Woody Allen (1935 - )

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Re: Arron

Postby shadowygirl » Sat Oct 18, 2003 3:24 am

Arron...My love thank you for reading your poem heh I love you :heart :bigkiss



SJ .. thanks for reading Hun



Mike.. Thank you for reading my poem and the kind words you're a great friend Mike :) ..



Lots of love to ya'll and lots of extra love to Arron..love you baby :kiss

shadowygirl
 


Re: Arron

Postby Jinx 69 » Wed Oct 22, 2003 2:52 am

April...... WOW once again sweetie you have awed and astounded me with your writing abilities. Reading your poems tonite has honestly brought tears to my eyes, knowing both you and Arron just makes this oh so more real. Keep up the amazing writing and I am anxiously awaiting future writings from you, you are truly amazing and so very talented. Thank you for sharing your most inner thoughts, I know I for one am honored that you would share this with us.



Hugs

DeAnna

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Let me Love you

Postby Repost Moderator » Thu Oct 23, 2003 1:27 am

Originally posted by shadowygirl


Another one for ya'll .....







Let me love you..



Will you let me love you?

Can my touch make you tremble and wither wanting more?



Will you let my fingers trace you?.

imprint you into my soul.memorize every inch of you into my heart.



Will you let me love you?

Let my wet mouth trail hot kisses down your slender body?



Will you let me slip inside of you?

Make you shiver and shake and quiver from my touch?



Will you lose control?

scream in ecstasy and give yourself to me completely?



Will you let me love you?



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Thanks

Postby Repost Moderator » Thu Oct 23, 2003 1:32 am

Originally posted by shadowygirl


Sj,Intricate Mirage, and Wolfwynd

Thanks for checking out my poem :)

And heres another one for ya'll







Can I hold you ?





You Don't know me and I don't know you .

But can I hold you till the world stops turning

and the sun forgets to rise?



You know my name now,

So will you hold me

till the stars stop shining in your eyes

and the tide won't wash away

tears from lovers that have cried



You Don't know me.

But please can I kiss you

till my memories start to fade

And we stop getting older with every passing day?



So please can I hold you till the world stops turning











be more soon maybe?? :pride



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Re: Let me Love you

Postby Repost Moderator » Thu Oct 23, 2003 1:34 am

Originally posted by shadowygirl


Another Poem

all my poems are for you my love I love you :flower









My Everything





No one sees me like you do

No one ever bothered to

There was nothing there to see

so I thought or was always told



You reached inside my soul

Found something I didn’t know was there

You looked into my heart

Straight through the walls I’ve built



You amaze me every day

With the little things you say

A whisper here or I love you there

Puts a smile on my face



You took away the pain

All the bitter cold I’ve felt

You light my life in was unknown

You’ve made everything ok



You’re the one that gets me through

All the harshness of my days

You showed me what true love is like

And make me feel so safe

I love more with every passing moment

And I’ll love you till the end

You are my always and forever

You are my everything ….



I love you Arron always and forever .



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My Promise

Postby Repost Moderator » Thu Oct 23, 2003 1:37 am

Originally posted by shadowygirl


This is a promise to Arron my love my life my everything ...

I love you Sweetheart







I wanna make you this promise .



This is how it goes.

I love you I promise you I always will .

I never wanna hurt you and I promise that if I can help it I never will .

I never wanna see you cry not sad tears anyhow, but I know that’s not gonna happen because life is hard but I promise you that I will never make you cry sad tears and the ones you do cry I’ll be there to kiss away .

If you fall I’ll pick you up that’s a promise .

I will never walk ahead of you or behind you , I promise I’ll always be beside you .

I will hold your hand and never let it go .

I promise I will never let what people might say make me think of you in a different way.

I promise I will defend you to the death if I have to.

No one will ever walk all over you .

I’ll be your light in the darkest hours of the night.

I promise to take away your bad dreams and to kiss away all your pains .

I promise to take care of you when you want me to and not to push when you tell me no .

I promise you I’ll love you forever and always cause that’s the easiest thing to do .





love Your April May

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Re: My Promise

Postby Still Waters T » Thu Oct 23, 2003 10:15 am

Hey lil sis :) :wave

I've read some of your poems before, but I'm still in awe :bow every time I read them. :shock :thud They're amazing. Reading your poems gives the reader a small inlook into what it is you feel for Arron, and it's truly...wow. I'm lost for words really. You made me sappy again, and I'm speechless as to how to describe them apropriatly. It's not helping that there was this great sunset staring me in the face while I was reading them.



I'm hoping that you write more poems and post them soon, but no rush :pray you just take your time. :shy



Now I have to go, I'm making my friend crazy by not finishing the work she's been helping me with today :p lol. So I better finish and then go home.



Liv Berit :flower

Still Waters T
 


Wow

Postby shadowygirl » Sat Oct 25, 2003 5:20 am

Hey ya'll thank you for the beautiful feed back I really mean it ya'll made me get all teary :sob .. ok all better now :wink ...

well I was going through some older poems and found this one and thought I would post it ..

if ya'll don't like it blame it on me being like 14 when I wrote it :lol ...

ok no more babbling here it is ....



Wow





Wow is the sunrise the sunset

Wow is a childes make you have to laugh giggle

Its a butterflies beautiful wings or the sting of a bee

Wow is a snow fall or a summers morning

Its the roses in the spring and the colours in the fall

Wow is your babies first cry

Wow is being in love making love growing old with your true love

Wow is the feeling when around family and friends

Its the look on a childes face on Christmas day

Its knowing that your life can change with every breath you take

Wow is knowing that today could be your last

Its waking and knowing that what happened yesterday is now the past

Wow is not taking anything for granted

Wow is everything its what we are its what we live for Wow is life





shadowygirl
 


Re: Wow

Postby SJ » Sat Oct 25, 2003 8:17 am

Liked that,thought Wow was great :D

SJ
 


Re: Wow

Postby intricate mirage » Sat Oct 25, 2003 10:04 am

My response to your poem 'Wow' - Wow. :wink

~ Cassie

---

My fountain of strength that never runs dry

You are the shooting star across the midnight sky




intricate mirage
 


Re: Wow

Postby Karmah » Sun Oct 26, 2003 10:37 am

Hey baby,



awwww how cute were you as a kid. Baby your writing is great and I am glad your finally sharing it with others. I love you April May



yours Arron

You don't love a woman because she's beautiful,

She is beautiful because you love her.

~ by Anonymous ~

Karmah
 


Re: Wow

Postby shadowygirl » Fri Oct 31, 2003 4:25 am

De .. Thank you so much for the lovely feed back your a great friend love ya hun ..btw you made me all teary :sob :pride heh you should come to the board some more heh



Mike .. I know your post isn't here but I still wanted to say thank you so much I did get to read it and you made me cry .. You Arron Liv and De all making me sappy I don't know what ya'll have done to me .but heh I love it ...

Thanks again Mike :banana



Liv.. HEY SIS :bounce look a bouncing guy ain't it freaking cute heh...Ok for real now, thank you so much for reading and leaving feedback I love ya sis your a great friend and sister I wouldn't want it to be anyone else ..

I'm glad that you can see in my poems just how much Arron means to me cause shes my world thou you already knew that :wink thanks again and we'll chat later :pride



SJ and Intricate Mirage ... thank ya'll for reading and I'm hoping to post more soon :pride



Arron .. Hey My love thank you for reading .

I love you baby so so much and I know poems are a bit sappy and all that kinda mush but its the only way I can find words to tell you what you mean to me . I could just say I love you and your my everything but that doesn't feel like enough...

so for now I'll just keep writing and posting and telling you just what you mean to me I love you baby ...

ok p.s. look what they have here heh:kitty its me ur good lil kitten heh :wink





ok thats all for now I'll be posting another poem maybe later today take care all and for all who read and didn't post thank you for reading :pride

shadowygirl
 


Five Minuets

Postby shadowygirl » Sat Nov 01, 2003 6:28 pm

Ok here is another poem from years ago ...

















Five little minuets

And I can make you love me

No

Maybe not

You can’t make anyone do anything they don’t want to do

But in five minuets

I can love you like you’ve never been loved

If your willing to let me

You say you are

You say you’ll try

You have walls

I can tell

I have seen them first hand

I don’t know what to do to break thru them

How did you make it thru mine with no struggle

Please tell me

Tell me what to do

Tell me how to be

I can’t be anything without you







Love April :pride













shadowygirl
 


Re: Five Minuets

Postby SJ » Mon Nov 03, 2003 12:18 am

Great poem :)

SJ
 


Re: Five Minuets

Postby Karmah » Fri Nov 07, 2003 9:27 am

Hey baby



I know I am late what can I say I am a lil slow on the uptake lol. Great poem sweetie I love you so much and I can't wait to read more.



Love your Arron:bigkiss

tee hee hee :kitty

You don't love a woman because she's beautiful,

She is beautiful because you love her.

~ by Anonymous ~

Karmah
 


Re: Five Minuets

Postby bluewillowwitch » Fri Nov 07, 2003 8:41 pm

:bigwave April :flower ,

I love your works! :clap :bow You have a wonderful gift for writing. Can't wait to :read more.





Grace :glasses :flower :fallen :peace

-----------------------------------------

"Fate keeps on happening."--Anita Loos

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Re: Five Minuets

Postby intricate mirage » Sun Nov 09, 2003 2:38 am

Hey shadowygirl, love the most recent update. :heart



Quote:
Tell me what to do

Tell me how to be

I can’t be anything without you




Loved this bit :) Keep up the great work!

Cassie





Ask me if I loved you yesterday. I'll say 'Yes'

Ask me if I love you today. I'll say 'Yes'

Ask me if I'll love you tomorrow. I'll say 'Always'





intricate mirage
 


How

Postby shadowygirl » Fri Nov 14, 2003 5:00 am

hey ya'll a few replys before anything ....



SJ.. thanks for reading hun :peace



Arron My Love thank you for reading and I love you to sweetheart always and forever .... :bigkiss heh :kitty



Grace ... Thank you for reading and the kind words Grace .. I also love your work so you post more and I'll keep posting heh :eatme



Intricate Mirage ... thanks for reading heh thats my fav part of that poem as well lol



Ok now that I'm done with the thank yous time for another poem, if ya'll hate it blame it on no sleep cause well I couldn't sleep so I wrote this oh oh and you can blame Arron to heh cause well everything I write now seems to come when I'm thinking about her which is pretty much 100% of the time I love you baby :wink :peace



HOW



How is it possible

to feel so much

and not be overwhelmed

How is possible

to miss someone

even when your talking to them

Just how much can one little heart hold

How much can one mind think



How can I look you in the eyes

and see nothing but the truth

from behind your words



Why do you love me

Why could I never

would never stop loving you

How can I feel you

Feel what your feeling

See what you see in me



What is this emotion

This raw feeling

Its more then just love

Its this feeling that I know

I just know that I’ve found my forever



I look in your eyes

Hear your voice

And just know

This is more then just a feeling

This is my soul

Coming into life

For the very first time

My soul is living

So tell me how

How is it that I never knew you before now



I love you Arron always and forever

Thanks for reading ya'll oh oh and please all of ya be good lil kittens :wink :kitty <-----ME heh



shadowygirl
 


Re: How

Postby intricate mirage » Fri Nov 14, 2003 6:30 am

Wow. shadowygirl that was such a lovely poem. :clap Didn't hate it, loved it :D

Cassie





Ask me if I loved you yesterday. I'll say 'Yes'

Ask me if I love you today. I'll say 'Yes'

Ask me if I'll love you tomorrow. I'll say 'Always'





intricate mirage
 


Re: How

Postby SJ » Sat Nov 15, 2003 7:07 am

That's a lovely poem :clap

SJ
 


Re: How

Postby Karmah » Sat Nov 15, 2003 10:55 pm

April

hey baby I loved your new poem you truly have a wonderful gift for writing I am so glad to See that your posing and writing more but umm this is all you baby you have this amazing gift and thank you for sharing it with all of us and your heart with me I love you.



Love your Arron

forever



What lies behind us, and what lies before us are tiny matters compared to what lies within us.

~ by Ralph Waldo Emerson ~

Karmah
 


Alone

Postby shadowygirl » Sun Nov 16, 2003 1:28 am

ok SJ ...thanks for reading hun ...:)



Intricate Mirage.... hey hun thanks for reading again :)



Arron My love I love you so much and this may be me writing but its you thats my inspiration for my newer poems ..

I love you sweetheart always and forever ....



ok now time for a new poem well new to be posted here but really old like 2 years or so .....



Alone



Tonight I'm sitting alone

again alone

cold bed alone

Tonight I'm walking the streets alone

dead streets alone

empty head alone

Thoughts of you running wild

through my mind

again your there

up there, taking up time

and I'm again sitting here alone, again alone

cause your not here

when I need you to be

So tonight I'll sit here alone

think of you

where your at

what your doing

but tonight

will be the last night

That I sit here alone cold and alone





shadowygirl
 


Re: Alone

Postby intricate mirage » Sun Nov 16, 2003 1:40 am

Quite a sad poem, started out relatively depressing. :( But I'm glad it's slowly progressed and ended with these last three sentences

Quote:
but tonight

will be the last night

That I sit here alone cold and alone


You know, it's like a light ray amidst all the gloom :) Great poetry once again shadowygirl! :clap

Cassie





Ask me if I loved you yesterday. I'll say 'Yes'

Ask me if I love you today. I'll say 'Yes'

Ask me if I'll love you tomorrow. I'll say 'Always'





intricate mirage
 


Re: Alone

Postby Karmah » Sun Nov 16, 2003 10:28 am

Baby

awww ands wow I have to totally agree with Cassie that was so sad but then you made it all better and soon sweetie I miss you bunches and bunches and I love your writing need more soon Please lol

I love you April May

love always your Arron



What lies behind us, and what lies before us are tiny matters compared to what lies within us.

~ by Ralph Waldo Emerson ~

Karmah
 


Re: Alone

Postby SJ » Mon Nov 17, 2003 12:50 am

Good mixture of emotions you've captured in that poem,great writing :clap

SJ
 


Remember her

Postby shadowygirl » Fri Nov 21, 2003 5:17 pm

ok heres another poem I wrote for my baby .. I love you sweetheart ....



Remember her



You can Stare at her for hours ,

be with her for days ,

she makes your heart beat faster

she takes your breath away ,

to remember every beauty mark , dimple and ever scar

to remember every inch of her ,

to move from head to toe

to kiss ,to taste, to touch, to feel,

to love with all your soul

to live, to breathe, to smell, to see

to remember every part of her

completes every part of me



Edited by: shadowygirl at: 11/21/03 7:28 pm
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