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 Post subject: Re: Synaptic Misfires Of My Mind
PostPosted: Sun Jan 30, 2005 12:31 am 
Kim,

Strong emotions and feelings...how the fight of living can be so overwhelming...take the air out of your soul...

very nicely done :clap :clap :clap



Rhiannon :seesaw

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And then she is the darkness



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 Post subject: Re: Synaptic Misfires Of My Mind
PostPosted: Sun Jan 30, 2005 2:37 am 
Lovely poems :read



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 Post subject: Re: Synaptic Misfires Of My Mind
PostPosted: Sun Jan 30, 2005 1:53 pm 
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kim! "tackles kim" Ive been slagging with the fb latley! :punish

bad me! Sorry! I liked them all, especially this last one. And I like how they are short and to the point, Ive written quite a few long ones and I know how fustrating it is for people to read em hehe I hope you write more soon! Take care! :D

:pride

-Rose

"I would cry...I would die if I lost you..." Alex Parks



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 Post subject: Re: Synaptic Misfires Of My Mind
PostPosted: Sat Feb 05, 2005 1:32 am 
Updates and i missed them? :shock *mental slap* hooooboy, kim i am sorry! These last two..i wanna give a detailed response, but they seemed to be too personal and full of emotion, i just feel rude to intrude in on them. Your poems are like no-one elses, wow....



Hope you give us more soon, i really enjoy these!



:sheep



Stace xXx

Light up, light up...As if you have a choice, even if you cannot hear my voice...I'll be right beside you dear.... <3
-Snow Patrol



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 Post subject: Re: Synaptic Misfires Of My Mind
PostPosted: Sat Feb 05, 2005 11:41 pm 
wow. i really like your poems. theyre so......raw....the one before last. i think i favor that the best.



*I was drawn to your quiet strength

With you it was safe to be me*



that line really struck something too. Write more soon please.



:) heather:)



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 Post subject: Synaptic Misfires Of My Mind
PostPosted: Fri Jul 08, 2005 8:41 am 
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Thank you for the feedback


Inside me

A battle rages inside me.
I fight for every step, every breath.
My enemy is cunning, and ruthless.
They cause damage to me with every word, and action.
The strength that I possessed wasn't real.
Sleep won't come, and food is rancid.
I think I know my enemys name, I call it.
There is no answer.
In my waking nightmares, I catch sight of this monster.
It has my face, but it's eyes are cruel compared to mine.
No wonder I can't escape the constant barrage of pain.
I know all my weaknessess, and secrets.
I call out for it to stop...Please!
I can only hope that I can find a peaceful place inside me.


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 Post subject: Re: Synaptic Misfires Of My Mind
PostPosted: Fri Jul 08, 2005 9:07 am 
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wow kim, that was intense. I liked it. "fighting the demons within" now, that's something we can all relate to I think. Thank you for sharing. :glasses

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PostPosted: Sun Jul 10, 2005 12:19 am 
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Great poem.


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 Post subject: Re: Synaptic Misfires Of My Mind
PostPosted: Tue Jul 12, 2005 12:13 am 
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Kim,

Wow,... That was great. Such inner termoil...

It was great to hear your words once again.

As always, I love your work.

As always, I am here for you.

Rhi


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 Post subject: Re: Synaptic Misfires Of My Mind
PostPosted: Tue Jul 19, 2005 12:39 pm 
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KIM! "tackles" I Miss YOU!!!!! Thats all :)

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 Post subject: Re: Synaptic Misfires Of My Mind
PostPosted: Sat Nov 12, 2011 7:33 pm 
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This thread lists me as anonymous.... Behindhereyes. Synaptic misfires of my mind... literally are.

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 Post subject: Re: Synaptic Misfires Of My Mind
PostPosted: Sat Jan 07, 2012 5:27 pm 
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Wow,

Powerful poem!

Like it! You capture that fierce inner struggle really well.

Feel it.

Ariel
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