Hi everyone...
Thought I'd respond to the nice fb you've left... and post a new poem.
Heather : You were my " first " fb ever...I agree venting is wonderful, and you know I'm all about getting things off my chest
. Thank you.
Bell : I'm really glad you liked it. Musical quality huh... might have been the blues. Thanks
Yvonne :
I really appreciate your fb... coming from someone whose own poems, that have moved me so deeply... it really means so much. Thanks
Cameron :
I was pretty heavy with the darker emotions in this... I'm gonna try to find the lighter side. Thanks so much Cam
SJ :
Thanks so much for not only reading this, but for actually liking it.
Stace :
The few lines said everything I needed to express, what I wanted to convey.... I'm glad the effect came through. Thanks
Rose :
* tackles rose * Thanks I'm gonna try to write more.
Here's another one...
Question Of Hope
How can that be my reflection in your eyes
When facing the mirror, I'm translucent
A mere outline of the human form
You see me... how do you do that
Can my eyes be that different
My vision so altered
Which is false...
What I see everyday... everywhere
Is the truth in your eyes
Is that what hope looks like
I need to know how that feels
I want to recognize it
I want it to know my name
and welcome me
behindhereyes
Kim
"To the world, you may be one person; but to one person, you may be the world"
Edited by: behindhereyes at: 1/2/05 4:12 pm