Hey kittens I have been told that I write well and that I should post some of my poems. Sadly I have horrable grammar skills (heh) and dont have a beta, but I'm gonna try this anyway if it's that bad I can work harder. so please let me know what ya'll think. Feedback is very welcome, good and bad.
Ok this first one if one for my Girlfriend.( I love you baby)
Funny how my life seems so empty now
I look around and I can’t see you, can’t feel your touch
I feel this stinging pain in my heart and in my eyes
My body trembles, my voice shakes as I cry out loud
I’m still alone in my room, so I slip into that place in my mind.
The place I go to be with you, but it isn’t exactly the same anymore.
I need your smell, your touch your, presence like never before.
And it pains me that you aren’t here to hold me as I cry.
But like I always tell you “I’m a solider” and ill pull through this, I always do.
So I try to stand, still half shaking and compose myself and head into this world.
As I walk I still feel your lips lingering on mine and your hand holding mine.
My body likes to remind me of u constantly; it’s a sucker for pain and suffering.
       
I wonder if my body will ever let me rest and in a way I don’t want it to
I like to be reminded of you and the pain it lessens with time, or so I hear.
I would rather have gone through this then not have gone through this at all.
And I will do this until we can be together for all time and just so u know
Every moment worth it just to see you smile.
Hope ya'll enjoyed it ....
~Lex
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