For Chris...

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you said you never leave me alone,

you said that you'd always be here,

you'd always watch over me,

always be here to comfort me,

now your gone and i don't know what to do,

comforts gone and i don't know what to do,

i feel so lost with no direction,

everything seems to gloss over and become one,

the lines in which i used to take comfort have melted together,

the rule which have kept order are distroyed,

everything is coming apart,

the fabrics which always seemed so strong are now found weak,

every stitch are comign apart

your eyes which always said always comforted me are gone,

i have nothing now,

just a statue that once comforted me,

and a long time friend gone.

Edited by: ShyTemptress at: 8/7/04 12:20 pm

Nice poem. Thanks for sharing.



Yvonne

wow. thats really good.

When you choose to hold the rose you are also agreeing to bleed.

Nice poem

We do we constantly sit here?

You know how badly I want you,

You try to act like its not there,

There so much I could show you.

Your so called 'simple life' isn't working out anymore is it?

You pushed me away saying you wouldn't have it,

Called me names and said you hated me.

I can't help but still be in love with you.

These dreams I have tell me so much,

But your eyes tell me so much more.

Tell me about a little girl, so scared,

Completely lost,

Looking for love and acceptance.

I can't say it will be easy,

Cause I know it won't.

Everything I have to offer is yours.

Just whisper those few words I need to hear.

~Kristen~

Hi Kristen. I really enjoyed reading both of these poems. I just wanted you to know that they really speak to me for some reason. Actually, honestly, I’m still sitting here in amazement. Hmm. Now, if I just had someone to share my feelings with…

"Some men see things as they are and say,'why?' I dream things that never were and say, 'why not?'"

- Robert F. JFK

I liked both your poems,great writing,thanks for sharing

Great poem. this ones even better then the last one.

awesome poems ^^



I feel like I can relate to them, too. That's the thing about love--you can't just turn it off.



Keep the good stuff coming! :D

beautiful poetry



Sky

I met the angel of death last night,

We talked for a long time,

You may want to ask why I am still hear,

Listen up...



She came to me and awoke me from my slumber. She was beautiful. Nothing at all like I had ever imagined. She asked me why I was so afraid of her, death. I couldn't give her a straight answer. 'I guess its my lack of faith,' I said. 'And the lack of knowledge of what lays after.' We talked for a long time after and she finally made me realize something...



What do you think of when you think of life?

Death.

What do you think of when you think of death?

The grand finale, a glorious end.

Do you fear death?

No.

Why not?

For death isn't something you can stop.

Its an end to all pain.

It'll happen.

I can't help that.

What if it happens tomorrow?

Thats what scares me most of all.

The uncertainty?

No, the proof that I have done nothing.

In all this time I've spend breathing, seeing, and feeling,

I have yet to do anything in this time before my end.

So I vow to take this time and run with it.

I vow to take chances and not be so scared....



Do you fear death?

No.

Do you fear life.

Yes.

~kristen~

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Okay I hope I got across what I was trying to say. I know its kinda in a question/answer format, but thats what I have intended.

Wow,great writing,like that a lot

good clincher :D



nothing like a good powerful ending ^^

I actually liked the format and the poem was really great too.



Yvonne

Very intense and dark poem. I like it!!

These are great, the last one is my fav. Thanks for sharing.

The only abnormality is the incapacity to love - Anais Nin

How can you sit there?

With that smile on your face.

You can even begin to imagion how much hurt you constantly put me through.

If its not by your hand its by your words.

I know you didn't want my and I'm just another little mistake.

If I could have my way I would've taken the easy way out.

I would've have left long ago if I wasn't afraid.

These scares on my wrist only tell half the story.

While the bruises you leave tell the other.

Ask me why I won't let a man touch me.

And why I crawl away from you.

Look deep into my brown eyes and you'll see the truth.

You'll see the lack of everything there.

I never show the true depth of emotion I mean to.



My blood ruins red just as your does.

I have your eyes.

You skin.

Hell even your nose.

I look at myself in disgust that I have you in me.

I want to tear myself apart to get you out.

You call yourself my family.

You don't care for me or notice me.

If you did you'd notice the blood stains on my sheets.

The way I treat myself.

The way I never say 'I love you'.

The way I'm glad when your gone.

And the way I constantly search for ways to dull the pain from your hate.

~Kristen~

Edited by: ShyTemptress at: 6/27/04 11:04 am

Very intense poem full of emotion and pain!! I hope you feel better now that youve released some of the pressure. I know it helps me.

Powerful words,great poem

Originally posted by ShyTemptress

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I tried mama.

I really did.

I'm different.

Not quite like the others.

I've been mocked.

And it hurt

I'm trying to find myself.

And it ain't easy.

I wanna belong.

And not feel so alone.

I want someone to talk to someone but nobody would understand.

Mama, this confusion is sweepin me away.

And theres no one to pull me back.

Why can't I be like everyone else?

Why do I have these thoughts?

And why won't they go away?

But why don't I want them to go away?



"Now they show you how detergents take out bloodstains, a pretty violent image there. I think if you've got a T-shirt with a bloodstain all over it, maybe laundry isn't your biggest problem.Maybe you should get rid of the body before you do the wash."

Jerry Seinfeld.

Great poetry

me likes. use of 'mama' really struck me, if you were goin' for that...

___ hi, remember me? hehe well firstly wow krist, you've written some intense stuff. I always love really emotional pieces and all of yours honestly blow me away. I feel close to both 'angel of death' and especially 'mamma i'm sorry.' My heart sank soo low in those two.



In all your others its so obvious you've been hurt badly, i'm really sorry if this is too late but i really hope you're doing better.



stay happy you lil tempting shy bogan *snickers*





-love Bell

I'm never alone I'm alone all the time. Are you at one or do you lie? We live in a wheel where everyone steals but when we rise it's like strawberry fields. I treated you bad you bruised my face. I couldn't love you more you've got a beautiful taste.

Wonderful poem.



Yvonne

I'm half way between giving up and staying lost forever.

Fuck it, ya know.

I'm determined to find myself before I find someone.

I'm so far gone.

I want this to stop but hell it blows me away.

I can't control the want that consumes.

These thoughts get more uncontroled everyday.

This virginity that I am blessed,

Now becomes my savior.

I not know what I am missing.

Know not the ache...

hey hon..

like the poem. certain sense of urgency to it...

Great poetry

No one is ever lost forever, especialy when they can express their feelings so well with their words.



BV

It's the passion in a kiss that gives to it its sweetness; it is the affection in a kiss that sanctifies it.

hey there,

i love all these poems, the ones that are stories are the best ! (not that the others aren't i love them all if you want youre poem to be a song mail the lyrics to the-songmaker@hotmail.com we'll pick some good ones out, ofcourse you'll hear if youre poem has been chosen

greetzz

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