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 Post subject: Poetry
PostPosted: Wed Jan 14, 2004 10:15 pm 
Poetry







I have no idea why I am posting this since I stink at poetry but here's one that I wrote a few days ago...









Isolation







Looking out of my window

Seeing the white clouds under the dark sky

Counting all the stars in the heavens

Watching my days go by



My hand on the window’s clear glass

Eyes glued to the outside world

My life flashing before my eyes

On a large chair where I am now curled



I close my eyelids and hear myself think

My eyes are filled with tears

I feel my heart beat heavily beneath my aching chest

Engulfed with all these fears



When will my life ever start?

When will I ever be able to feel?

Days going by like minutes to me

Is any of this really real?



Please help me find my way

Please help me find my special place

Please hold my hand as I walk out that door

Finally showing my face



Cradle my heart with yours

Entwine your fingers with mine

Let’s walk out through this journey of life

Let’s let me finally shine







~~~~~~~~~





-Renee-:flower





"The moment you have in your heart this extraordinary thing called love and feel the depth, the delight, the ecstasy of it, you will discover that for you the world is transformed." -J. Krishnamurti

Edited by: Renee85  at: 2/24/04 5:36 pm


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 Post subject: Re: Poetry
PostPosted: Thu Jan 15, 2004 12:22 am 
Your poem is great,thanks for sharing :read





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 Post subject: Re: Poetry
PostPosted: Thu Jan 15, 2004 3:11 am 
Aww that was beautiful..and why do you think you stink at poetry? because you definitely don't :flower Love sammi xx

"Sometimes things happen between people that you don't really expect. And sometimes the things that are important are the ones that seem the weirdest or the most wrong. And those are the ones that change your life." - Jessie Sammler (Evan Rachel Wood)



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 Post subject: Re: Poetry
PostPosted: Thu Jan 15, 2004 5:59 am 
Very beautiful poem. Please write more.:)



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 Post subject: Re: Poetry
PostPosted: Sat Jan 17, 2004 8:22 pm 
:bigwave hey! great poem! I agree with soluna...you should definatly write more!

:pride

:)

-Rose

The only thing I hate in the world, is people who are dishonest with themselves. And people who smell.



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 Post subject: Re: Poetry
PostPosted: Sun Jan 18, 2004 9:17 am 
There is no way you can say that you stink at the whole poetry thingie. That was beautiful. No, really, it was!!! So, if you don't mind, can we get some more??? Great work, thanks for shaing too. =)

Aaron

'TaraBaby77'


"It's about two people,
regardless of sex, who love each other and treat each other with compassion and
respect."



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 Post subject: Re: Poetry
PostPosted: Mon Jan 19, 2004 9:21 pm 
WOW, you guys that little poem? Thanks!





Here's another that isn't quite that great. I wrote this when I was in high school, it was an assigned poem that I had to write. It won top three for some reason so that's good news. :)







Nursemaid







There was a nursemaid with them as well

Her visage appeared ashen and blanched at tell

Whitewashed and bleached like a phantom at sever

This for she had invariably eluded sunlight, every and ever



Auburn and stalky hair over blench streaks, visible in the night sky

Showed age and wisdom beyond her years and by

Nose pointy and compact

Lips tight and crimson in shade and tone, this was not an act



Displayed a quiet tongue underneath and below

Her eyes azure orbs, yes they were so

Hefty and aghast, witting and perpetually aware

Gentle and inviting, an intense gaze fixated on populace and pair



A faint soul affable and amiable in nature and sun

Loved and cherished by every and everyone

Her attire was immaculate, faultless as well

Her persona more so and tell



And gave her cent to church, helped sickly youth like prize

Ethical, noble, virtuous, and wise

Adoring husband and fair children at her hand

Her habitation stood tall and firm on land



Planted and gardened on back

Stood many a potatoes that all heaped and piled on a sack

A saint is what she has been called

Overheard this and she bawled



Could scarcely conceive what was said

Heard it again and again and she turned red

Humble and haughty was she

Everything imagined and public, this was thee



Her smile still wide

And eyes bright and lit

Everyone adored this woman, mind body and soul

Every little bit.







~~~~~~~





-Renee-:flower





"The moment you have in your heart this extraordinary thing called love and feel the depth, the delight, the ecstasy of it, you will discover that for you the world is transformed." -J. Krishnamurti

Edited by: Renee85  at: 1/19/04 10:42 pm


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 Post subject: Re: Poetry
PostPosted: Tue Jan 20, 2004 12:19 am 
Liked that poem,can see why it won top three,great writing :clap



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 Post subject: Re: Poetry
PostPosted: Tue Jan 20, 2004 1:47 pm 
I really liked that too. So lovely. Love sammi xx

"Sometimes things happen between people that you don't really expect. And sometimes the things that are important are the ones that seem the weirdest or the most wrong. And those are the ones that change your life." - Jessie Sammler (Evan Rachel Wood)



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 Post subject: Re: Poetry
PostPosted: Sat Jan 24, 2004 7:49 am 
Here's another....











Missing You









I never envisioned myself standing here

In front of this grey headstone as I shed my last tear

Gazing into the sky I could almost see your face

Those beautiful deep orbs so filled with grace



There’s so much I need to tell you

And so much I need you to know

That I cherished every minute we had together

And I love you so



It’s hard to sleep without you

I don’t know what to do

All I can think is all the times we spent together

And all that we’ve been through



You’re in my heart, I know you are

I can feel you as it beats

I can also hear your voice in the wind

As I walked those lonely streets



Are you looking over me now?

In that big white fluffy cloud?

I’m trying so hard for you

I want to make you proud



I want you to know how happy you’ve made me

That my love for you will never die

Your absence hits so hard sometimes

That I just cant help but cry



But all that doesn’t matter baby

You’ll always be where you always will

I’ll wait for you forever

I’ll wait for you just until







~~~~~~





-Renee-:flower





"The moment you have in your heart this extraordinary thing called love and feel the depth, the delight, the ecstasy of it, you will discover that for you the world is transformed." -J. Krishnamurti

Edited by: Renee85  at: 1/25/04 8:29 pm


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 Post subject: Re: Poetry
PostPosted: Sat Jan 24, 2004 2:15 pm 
Renee -



I must say that you have very beautiful work. The one titled "Missing You", WOW!!! Reading that brought back memories that I had not thought about for many many years. Thank you so much for sharing and keep flexing that talent of your. Hope to see more soon. =)

Aaron

'TaraBaby77'


"It's about two people,
regardless of sex, who love each other and treat each other with compassion and
respect."



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 Post subject: Re: Poetry
PostPosted: Sat Jan 24, 2004 3:52 pm 
Wow, that was sad, but beautiful! Really great poem! Please post more.



Yvonne:peace



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 Post subject: Re: Poetry
PostPosted: Sun Jan 25, 2004 8:24 pm 


Thanks so much for the feedback, I'm really glad you guys like my poems. Here's another, hope it's okay!















LOVE









I love feeling your arms around me

Your warm breath across my face

I love holding your hand under the shining stars

I love how you make my heart race



I love kissing you again and again

The feel of your lips against mine

I love how my body trembles in desire and want

I love how you make my day shine



I love pressing my ear against your chest

The steady rhythm of your heart beat I hear

I love how you hold my heart in yours

I love how you can dry away every tear



I love walking with you as I watch the sun set

Our hands linked together in a tender embrace

I love burying my hands in your hair

The feel of your long tresses like soft and silky lace



I love looking into your eyes as I wake in your arms

My dark orbs gazing deep into your soul

I love how you fill my life with happiness and bliss

I love how your mere presence can make me feel whole



I love you so much; I love you more and more

I love how you make my heart soar and soar

You’re everything, I hope you know

That you are my life and you are my soul







~~~~~~~~~~~









-Renee-:flower





"The moment you have in your heart this extraordinary thing called love and feel the depth, the delight, the ecstasy of it, you will discover that for you the world is transformed." -J. Krishnamurti

Edited by: Renee85  at: 1/26/04 5:18 am


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 Post subject: Re: Poetry
PostPosted: Sun Jan 25, 2004 11:59 pm 
Nice contrast with your two poems,amazing writing,thanks for sharing :read



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 Post subject: Re: Poetry
PostPosted: Mon Jan 26, 2004 4:13 am 
These were both so amazing, and so beautiful. Love sammi xx

"Sometimes things happen between people that you don't really expect. And sometimes the things that are important are the ones that seem the weirdest or the most wrong. And those are the ones that change your life." - Jessie Sammler (Evan Rachel Wood)



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 Post subject: Re: Poetry
PostPosted: Tue Jan 27, 2004 3:07 am 


Warning: The following poem deals with thoughts of suicide





Help me help you





~~~~~





A two part poem by two points of view





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The rage inside you burns

The hollowness of your heart engulfs you

The hateful feelings inside you that yearns

There’s nothing in this world that feels true



You pound on your wall, again and again

Your hands turning red from the force

You pull your hair in frustration

But nothing really helps, of course



The whole world is against you

Why are you even here?

You try to end your life

But even that you seem to fear



You cry and you cry

And you cry and cry again

But no one seems to hear you

Not even your one and only friend



A blade to the wrist

One helpful slash

One bloody drop

One white and shimmery flash



Everything will end

You’ll see, you’ll see

Your pain and fear you’ll send

To the ground where you’ll be free



You’ll be happy again

You’ll smile like you never did

You’ll be in peace my friend

Grief and heartache and helplessness you’ll finally rid



You’ll see your grandma and grandpa up there

Little Ms. Poopers is there, I swear

They’re all waiting for you

To do what you know in your heart is true



Now pick up that knife

And make that first slice

The initial slash will hurt

But the rest will feel just like ice



It’s the only way

It’s the only thing you’ll bear

The other side is better

I swear, I swear



Just do it

Don’t be afraid

It’ll be quick and swift

And then you’ll finally have it made







~~~~~







Please put down that knife

There’s so much out there to live for

I know things are hard

But there’s more, there’s more



There are rainbows and stars

White clouds and bright sunshine

Green grass and bright pastures

I promise you that everything will be fine



I’ll help you

I’ll help you find your way

Just take my hand

And tell me about your day



I’m sorry, sweetie

I’m sorry I wasn’t there

I’m sorry you thought that I left

But know that I really do care



People love you

They really, really do

They don’t want to see you gone

You can’t really think that’s true



What about your mom and dad?

They love so much

And your brother and sister

I think that they would really miss your touch



And me?

What about me?

I’d miss you more and more

Being around you made my heart soar and soar



Please baby

Please put down that knife

Please let me hold you in my arms

Please don’t end your life







~~~~~~~~~~





* She looks up at her friend and their eyes lock, with a nod of her head, she takes her hand *





~~~~~~~~~~















-Renee-:flower










"The moment you have in your heart this extraordinary thing called love and feel the depth, the delight, the ecstasy of it, you will discover that for you the world is transformed." -J. Krishnamurti

Edited by: Renee85  at: 1/29/04 10:04 pm


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 Post subject: Re: Poetry
PostPosted: Tue Jan 27, 2004 11:53 pm 
Powerful poetry :read



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 Post subject: Re: Poetry
PostPosted: Tue Feb 24, 2004 4:23 am 
Thanks SJ for the feedback. :)











Buried Deep








A mouse in a trap

Unlikely to escape this spot

Imprisonment and torment

Torture and rot

Closing walls and isolations surround

Forever alone in this square box where you’re bound

Ringing in the ears

Piercing sound in your brain

Continuous screams and shudders driving you insane

Gasping for breath, eyes bulging deep

Liquid water slowly seep

Pleading and bangs

Clawing your way out

Yelling at the top of your lungs and sobbing about

Stuck in this place forever

Never to be free

The outside world you'll never see

Your neck is constricting

Wheezing and out of breath

The end is coming soon

Closer and closer to your final death

Cold tears from your eyes

Your skin turning blue

You feel like passing out and dying too

You scream once more

Hoping that someone would hear

Run from their spot and dry away your tear

Save you from your torment

Save you from your final end

Save you from ending up in a place where this will likely send

One last scream

One last gasp of breath

One last everything

One last final death







~~~~~







-Renee-:flower













"The moment you have in your heart this extraordinary thing called love and feel the depth, the delight, the ecstasy of it, you will discover that for you the world is transformed." -J. Krishnamurti



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 Post subject: Re: Poetry
PostPosted: Tue Feb 24, 2004 4:39 pm 
Wow, that was great.:) I especially liked the end.



Yvonne:peace



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 Post subject: Re: Poetry
PostPosted: Tue Feb 24, 2004 11:40 pm 
Great poem,nice rythym to your writing :clap



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 Post subject: Re: Poetry
PostPosted: Thu Feb 26, 2004 4:54 am 
Thanks SJ and Yvonne for the feedback. :peace







A Friend







"When I find myself fading, I close my eyes and realize my friends are my energy." -Anon.









A friend is always there to hold you when you’re down

A friend is always there to wipe away your frown

A friend is always there to dry away your tear

A friend is always there to wipe away your fear



A friend is always there to help you when you need

A friend is always there to do every good deed

A friend is always there supporting you to no end

A friend is always there to love you and only love will they send



A friend is always there to help you when you fall

A friend is always there to stand up for you firm and tall

A friend is always there to offer their shoulder to cry

A friend is always there to help you by and by



A friend will always be counted on

To care for you everyday

A friend is always your family

A friend will always make sure that you’re okay



A friend is by your side

Their hands to your tide

Their touch, the tips of their fingertips always soft and warm

Always there to protect you from any kind of harm



Their hands on your shoulder and all

A friend will always be there

To cherish you

And be that comforting wall



Lean on them

Let them hold you close

Let them be that person who you can count on the most



Let them come to your doorstep early in the morn

Let them cradle you in their arms when all you feel is torn

Let them, let them be that place

The place you feel most loved...and cherished...in so many different ways







-Renee-:flower











____________________________________________________________

"The only way to have a friend is to be one." -Ralph Waldo Emerson






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 Post subject: Re: Poetry
PostPosted: Sat Feb 28, 2004 6:07 am 
Great poem :clap



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 Post subject: Re: Poetry
PostPosted: Sat Feb 28, 2004 12:37 pm 
Nice poem, I always seem to like how you end them!:)



Yvonne:peace



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 Post subject: Re: Poetry
PostPosted: Sun Feb 29, 2004 10:42 pm 
Thanks SJ and Yvonne for the feedback and kind words, it really means alot to me. :heart









I should have….



















I should have told you that I loved you when I had the chance

Held you close in my arms when we had that last dance

I should have taken more pictures of us together, framed them one by one

Kissed every speck of freckle on your face is what I should have done



I should have talked to you more day after day

I should have taken more time to figure out what to say

I should have let my kiss linger just a bit more

I should have taken every word you uttered right to the core



I need you in my life right now; I need your warm touch

I need to feel you warm and comforting embrace and firm and loving clutch

I want to look deep into your eyes like I always did before

Like I loved to do every single day before I became so sore



I should have taken your image in, memorized each feature in my mind

I should have mapped out your face with my hands and stroked each crease that I find

I should have kissed each cheek, my hands cupping your face

Caress your soft hair like soft and silky lace



I should have made you a hot breakfast every morning time

Bring you bacon and eggs with just a touch of your favorite white and sparkling wine

I should have licked the tips of your fingers off when you touched that plate of food

I should have comforted you more when you weren’t in the greatest mood



I should have carried you off to the sunset that day long ago

I should have buried my hands in your hair and kissed you like so

I should have dried away your tear when you were feeling sad, kissed away each drop

Traced your cheek with my thumb from bottom to top



I should have touched you everywhere, felt your body close

I shouldn’t have held back when I wanted you the most

I never should have bit my tongue when I longed to tell you my love

That you were the greatest person I ever knew and you were my shining dove





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-Renee-:flower











____________________________________________________________

"The only way to have a friend is to be one." -Ralph Waldo Emerson






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 Post subject: Re: Poetry
PostPosted: Sun Feb 29, 2004 11:30 pm 
Lovely poetry :clap



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 Post subject: Re: Poetry
PostPosted: Mon Mar 01, 2004 10:48 am 
Quote:
I should have let my kiss linger just a bit more

I should have taken every word you uttered right to the core




Nicely done!:) The lines above were my fav.



Yvonne:peace



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 Post subject: Re: Poetry
PostPosted: Fri Mar 05, 2004 11:32 pm 


SJ- Thanks for the feedback and kind words. :)

Yvonne- I'm glad you like those lines and thanks for the kind words as well. I hope you like the next ones. :)









A New Life



~~~~



A precious baby from its mother’s tender womb

Dazed and shining orbs gleaming bright

A first gasp of breath and sight of scene

A first sparkle of clear and glittering light



Little eyes flickering in the brightness of the new world

Amazed and thunderstruck gaze wide and lit

Surroundings around her strange and new

Inquisitive stare at her parents side where they now sit



A small hand wraps around a father’s finger

Grasping and clutching tight

A small sound of a mother’s joyful laughter

And a father’s teary eyes trying to hold back with all his might



A single tear from a grandmothers eyelids, slowly trickling down

A fascinated and blissful gaze from and older brother sound

A new being in this world is now here, breathing new life in those of old

A new life of innocence in humankind is now here

A new life with a heart of gold















Our Wedding Day



~~~~







I never thought I’d be here

That I’d be standing in front of you this day

I never thought this time would ever come

I can’t even think of any words to say



All I can tell you is that I love you

I love you so damn much

I can’t imagine myself without you

I can’t imagine myself without your tender touch



The happiness inside me overwhelming

My heart is so achingly full of cheery bliss

Full of love for you and love for us

And love for every single day we have together that we will never miss



I’m standing across from you, my girl

We’ve finally been given this chance

We’ve finally been able to show our love to the world

We’ve finally have a reason to laugh and dance



The chance to show the world our love

The chance to show the world that we are

The chance the show the world that love is love

No matter who you are



I see the tears in your eyes as I look at you

Your chocolate orbs so full of joy

I feel the tears in my eyes as you look at me

I’m about to break down right now, oh boy



Your dress is so beautiful

You look like a shining angel from above

I see the light around you as luminous as can be

I see now why I want to be with you forever, my love



This doesn’t feel like a sin

This doesn’t feel like it’s wrong

All I know is that I love you

And that I want to be with you until our final song






~~~~~





-Renee-:flower




____________________________________________________________

"The only way to have a friend is to be one." -Ralph Waldo Emerson






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 Post subject: Re: Poetry
PostPosted: Sat Mar 06, 2004 12:13 am 
Liked both those,lovely writing :read



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 Post subject: Re: Poetry
PostPosted: Sun Mar 07, 2004 7:45 am 
Very nice writing. I liked 'em both.:)



Yvonne:peace



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 Post subject: Re: Poetry
PostPosted: Sun Mar 14, 2004 8:59 pm 


Thanks SJ and Yvonne again. :heart





Spreading Wings







Spreading wings across the midnight ocean

Flying swiftly in the breeze

Deep sea gust across downy feathers

Soaring through the tranquil trees



Squally draft of chilly air

The full bright moon across the sky

Brilliant dashes of luminous stars

Soaring by and by



Through the dark corners of the heavens

Airborne in the darkened skies

Moist and damp from the drizzling rain

Dripping through the lows and highs



Gentle squawk from a low trimmed beak

Calling to one of its own

Harmonious screech echoing through the dusk

Lost and wholly alone



Strong-willed and stalwart through and through

Strapping wings swaying up and down

And down and up again just once more

But still there is nothing to be found



Towering over the city lights

Flapping its way across the hefty sea

Cascading overhead the Statue of Liberty



Valiant and striking

Wings outstretched from up above

Flying in persistence, higher and higher

Is a pallid and ashen colored dove



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-Renee-




____________________________________________________________

"The only way to have a friend is to be one." -Ralph Waldo Emerson






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