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 Post subject: My feet are at least Longfellers....
PostPosted: Mon Feb 09, 2004 9:35 pm 
Hmm....i like to post stuff? is that a good reason for this? oh! i know! i'm a bonehead teenager who's never experienced "love" and so desperately wants to (along with the rest of the world) hmm...too depressing as well, umm...ahah, i tried to tell some one this in the chat room, but alas they were unreachable...*shakes fist at distracting American Idol that takes chatters away from screen* hmm poem then:









Dancing Queen



Dancing Queen,

Dance with me,

Let me see,

Your waltzing eyes.



Please be mine.



I feel your breath,

Upon my neck,

And it makes me stretch

Again, to those precious eyes.



I feel the calm,

Before the storm,

And yet, I want

To feel the waves and rain.



Rhythm Flood me away.













*twindles off*

p.s. umm. moderators, i'm sorry, i just wanted to post this, and i'm not even sure if i can continue it. so, let me know, or come at me with a hatchet screaming "GO AWAY!" yeah, let me know on that....



oh and feedback would be swell from actual, poetic people, unlike yours truly. I am *not* a poet, just wrote this out of nowhere, and wanted some feedback and alike....



-elizabeth (the talkative-too-much-for-her-own-good-one):sleep

Last night in sweet slumber I dreamed I did see my own precious jewel sat smiling by me.

And when I awakened I found it not so; my eyes like some fountain with tears overflowed.



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 Post subject: Re: My feet are at least Longfellers....
PostPosted: Mon Feb 09, 2004 11:55 pm 
Thought your poem was good :read



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 Post subject: Re: My feet are at least Longfellers....
PostPosted: Tue Feb 10, 2004 3:38 am 
thats a good poem thebardgirl. :wink

~Jamie

ps. isn't your sig Edgar Allen Poe?

I Love Callie <3



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 Post subject: Re: My feet are at least Longfellers....
PostPosted: Sat Feb 14, 2004 8:28 pm 
SJ- thanks, umm...cool....you liked it...yay.

CEsgirl13- you're nice people, i likah you.....and no, not edgar allen poe, that's actually just a Joan Baez folk song i like alot called "Once i had a sweetheart" good song....nice on the guitar too...



if i post on this again, i'm glad to know i had at least two very kind responses. thanks.



-elizabeth





Last night in sweet slumber I dreamed I did see my own precious jewel sat smiling by me.

And when I awakened I found it not so; my eyes like some fountain with tears overflowed.



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 Post subject: Re: My feet are at least Longfellers....
PostPosted: Sat Feb 21, 2004 4:21 pm 
Um....here....if you wanna read, be my lovely guest!



Wishing Well:



Smiling oceans, drifting waves,

The emotions in your head.

Your poor mind.

You're the deep, secrets within

The keeper of everyone's sin.

Your full mind.



Oh aye, oh aye,

Wishing well.



A ripple follows, one of sadness,

Full of sorrow and madness.

Your poor mind.

You cry and you cry, but no one

hears the tears in your eyes.

In your eyes.



Oh aye, oh aye,

Wishing well.

Stay alive, you're my

Wishing well.









generally speaking all my "poems" are actually songs of mine.

-elizabeth

Last night in sweet slumber I dreamed I did see my own precious jewel sat smiling by me.

And when I awakened I found it not so; my eyes like some fountain with tears overflowed.



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 Post subject: Re: My feet are at least Longfellers....
PostPosted: Sun Feb 22, 2004 12:28 am 
I like both of your poems:clap

Thanks for sharing.

keep writing.



Dee:D

The only abnormality is the incapacity to love - Anais Nin



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 Post subject: Re: My feet are at least Longfellers....
PostPosted: Sun Feb 22, 2004 9:58 am 
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A ripple follows, one of sadness,

Full of sorrow and madness


I liked that! Great poems.



Yvonne:peace



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 Post subject: Re: My feet are at least Longfellers....
PostPosted: Sun Feb 22, 2004 11:35 pm 
Great poetry :read



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 Post subject: Re: My feet are at least Longfellers....
PostPosted: Thu May 27, 2004 8:47 pm 
I know this was like forever ago, but I just wanted to say those poems where great. Hope to see more, thanks for sharing. =)

Aaron

'Tarababy77'


"Don't buy into all the media crap. Love yourself for who you are, not what others THINK you should look like. It's DEFINITELY more important in this life to love each other despite our imperfections." - Amber Benson



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