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 Post subject: Poem
PostPosted: Sat Apr 12, 2003 10:35 pm 
Ok...'scuse my nervousness...I've never really posted non-fic before. But, I figured, what the heck. Enjoy.



"Taking a Look..."



The reflection in the glass, all that I despise

Those eyes stare back, revealing my lies.

The rationalizations, the living in fear

The bastardized prayer to not live another year.



The reflection in the glass, all that I hate

My throat constricted by the crushing weight.

The weight of complacency, dense and vast

My brain and my actions, mired in the past.



The reflection in the glass, all stoic and staid

Revealing nothing, cold and afraid.

The confusion and emptiness, all too much

Unworthiness rearing, I recoil from touch.



The reflection in the glass, looks at me with derision

Stuck in this prison, 'till I make a decision.

But it resigns itself to its ugly fate

Knowing quite well I will sit and wait.



For moving forward is not a trait of the meek

Change will not come for the self-pitying weak.

~LadyB~
"Yeah, now Santa's gonna pass you right by, you naughty boozehound."
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"I'm bored...I might as well do something mindless and unproductive."



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 Post subject: Re: Poem
PostPosted: Sun Apr 13, 2003 3:15 am 
Great poem,powerful stuff :read



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 Post subject: Re: Poem
PostPosted: Wed Apr 16, 2003 8:24 pm 
:clap That is great stuff. Deep. Will there be more? :pray



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 Post subject: Re: Poem
PostPosted: Thu Apr 17, 2003 1:50 pm 
:shock Wow, that was great... truly deep stuff, but great :grin



And all the rhymes :sigh Wonderful, powerful :D



Thanks for sharing :lol



:peace -Viv-

Medicine, law, banking – these are necessary to sustain life. But poetry, romance. love, beauty? These are what we stay alive for!



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 Post subject: Re: Poem
PostPosted: Thu Apr 17, 2003 1:59 pm 
Yeah, that was so cool. Want to read more!

:pray

muFF'

All they gave me was this ticket to heaven, a damn ticket to heaven...

Now I'm restless and I'm running from everything, I'm running from everything - 3 Doors Down





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 Post subject: Re: Poem
PostPosted: Sat Jun 07, 2003 5:36 pm 
Wow Marie,



Very powerful and moving words! And very brave as well...



*hugs*



:flower



-Mickie

One word frees us of all the weight and pain of life: That word is love.
-Sophocles



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 Post subject: Re: Poem
PostPosted: Sun Jun 08, 2003 2:59 pm 
Thank you all for the kind words. My poems are usually few and far between, and only seem to emerge when I'm in a bad place. I've got a couple others written, but I haven't decided to post them.



Aww, thanks for the rose, Mickie. LOL.

~LadyB~

No space is sacred, time it cannot heal. This frail unforgiving, relentless, defenseless invasion of fear.

I hide in the sand, but the voices get louder. I do what I can, as the sea overpowers.



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 Post subject: Re: Poem
PostPosted: Mon Jun 09, 2003 3:28 pm 
Any time sweetie! *HUGS*



Here's a few more! :grin



:flower :flower :flower



-Mickie

One word frees us of all the weight and pain of life: That word is love.
-Sophocles



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 Post subject: Re: Poem
PostPosted: Thu Feb 19, 2004 4:45 am 
MARIE ! heh hey Marie

just wanted to say I just read your poem and its beautiful and deep and all kinds of wicked :D



Loved it you should post more heh



Love April



:pride :kdevil



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