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 Post subject: My short poems - short and meaningful...
PostPosted: Mon Mar 31, 2003 1:31 pm 
Hey Kitties :wave



So finally I wanna share some of my other poems, too :grin Non witch-y stuff lol but still good ;) Sometimes... :whistle



Enjoy, this is simply something about poeple, therefore called... taddaaaa People :lol



Now the poem :bounce

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People



People are running

Screaming

Hiding

Terribly afraid

Of each other



And they do the right thing

If they want to destroy themselves

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Take care kitten, hope you liked :grin



:peace -Viv-

Medicine, law, banking – these are necessary to sustain life. But poetry, romance. love, beauty? These are what we stay alive for!



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 Post subject: Re: My short poems - short and meaningful...
PostPosted: Tue Apr 01, 2003 1:32 am 
Viv liked that poem a lot :read



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PostPosted: Wed Apr 02, 2003 2:13 pm 
I'm not sure if this is because I'm evil or not (which I am), but I found that to be somewhat amusing :p



Very good though...

It is my solace, my home, the place where my walls crumble and fall away, because no one can know who I truly am. Thank goodness for the Internet, preserver of sanity! -Unknown



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 Post subject: Re: ...
PostPosted: Fri Apr 04, 2003 12:36 pm 
Hey Kitties :wave



New poem, new chance :p



I think you'll notice what it's about :p



Thanks Sam for replying :) I'm glad you liked it a lot, I like it a lot, too cos that's kinda how poeple really are... ;) Your poems kicked ass, too :grin



And Mellindra... :lol Well, maybe you're right and there is a kind of humour in it... I'm not good at commenting my own poems... But if that's what you read in it, it's totally cool cos it's great when you saw there irony or sarcasm in it... Well, I think there is some in it... as i said, I'm not good at judging my own stuff... But thanks for reading and replying :grin



And thanks to everybody who's reading :grin



Here's the poem, enjoy

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Life



A gift

Given to everyone who is born



It is accepted by most

It is rejected by some



But hardly anyone is aware of

HOW important it really is



People say

Love is the most important thing



Would love be possible

Without it?



People shouldn’t only cherish the love

They should cherish life itself too



Life is the beginning of everything

Life is the most valuable thing



Everything else follows

Even love

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Take care everbody :dance



:peace -Viv-

Medicine, law, banking – these are necessary to sustain life. But poetry, romance. love, beauty? These are what we stay alive for!



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 Post subject: Re: ...
PostPosted: Sat Apr 05, 2003 3:10 am 
Viv,kick ass poem :clap

I like the sentiment :)



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PostPosted: Fri Apr 11, 2003 5:11 pm 
Viv!! I finally found my way to this forum, hehe :grin I really liked your latest poem....sooo true...love makes life that much more incredible but appreciating life should come first. Thanks for sharing sweetie!



**Michelle



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PostPosted: Sat Apr 12, 2003 1:13 am 
I really enjoyed your last poem. It expressed some of the very sentiments that I feel too.

~La



What is the difference between a drunk and a stoner?

The drunk will drive through a stop sign while the stoner will wait for it to turn green.



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 Post subject: Re: ...
PostPosted: Sat Apr 12, 2003 3:05 pm 
Hey Kitties :wave



And here's a new poem :)



Thanks to Sam I'm glad you liked it :) I'm really happy I can bring you pleasure with my stuff :)



Thanks Michelle I hope you're feeling better *hugs* I'm glad you made it to this thread lol :p And I'm happy youl liekd my poem :) Thanks :)



And thanks La :grin It's cool that you enjoyed it and that I expressed what you thought :) Thanks for reading :)



The new one is a one that is from the beginning of my poetry time ;) I wrote it after I had seen some pics of my grandparents who I never met cos they died before I was born... It is a very important poem for me :sigh



But enough of me, now the new poem :bounce

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Memories



Dipping into such a unknown

And yet familiar world

No memories

And yet everything before my eyes

People who seemed unknown

Are becoming as familiar now

As if they never would have gone



Delight and pain

Are crushing me

They seem to overwhelm me

Where should I go

With all those feelings

Breaking down on me?



I want to go back to that time

I want to know what I felt, thought

And yet I wish I had no memories

I wish I remembered

Nothing

Apart from

Everything

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:peace -Viv

Medicine, law, banking – these are necessary to sustain life. But poetry, romance. love, beauty? These are what we stay alive for!



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 Post subject: Re: ...
PostPosted: Sun Apr 13, 2003 4:13 am 
Viv,great poem,can relate to that :)



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PostPosted: Thu Apr 17, 2003 6:30 pm 
Viv! :grin I think I know what you're saying with this.....thanks for sharing! Oh and I'm feeling better sweetie *hugs* It was cool to catch you online the other evening...then morning :grin take care girl! ;)



**Michelle



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 Post subject: Re: ...
PostPosted: Sat Apr 19, 2003 4:40 pm 
Viv, these are some kick ass poems. I love them! It makes me think about my stuff and what I could do better :hmm .



Leni

"F#&k you, but have a nice day!"



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 Post subject: New poem...
PostPosted: Wed Apr 23, 2003 1:47 pm 
Hey Kitties :wave



Here's finally a new poem :grin



Thanks for posting Sam :lol It's cool that you can relate to it :) Hehe, your poem kicked ass :p



Thanks Michelle :grin Thank you very much that you like my poems and always take a look at them, it means so much to me :)



And thanks Leni :grin ...:shock Wow, you even think about stuff what you're doing after reading my poems? That's so cool :D I think, then my poetry must be good, a little at least...;) Thanks for reading :)



The new poem is about insecurities that I have every now and then... I think people can relate to it ;)



And now the new poem :bounce

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Who am I?

What’s my name?

Is it real?

What am I doing here?



All these questions

No answers

My thirst of knowledge

I can’t quench it



I want to share everything

I want to have everything only for myself

I want to help people

I want people to leave me alone



I want to hug everybody

I want to withdraw from everybody

I want to cry

I want to laugh



I want to have

Answers at last

My thirst of knowledge

I want to quench it



But

If I did

Would I still

Be me?

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Take care everybody :)



:peace -Viv-





Medicine, law, banking – these are necessary to sustain life. But poetry, romance. love, beauty? These are what we stay alive for!



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 Post subject: Re: New poem...
PostPosted: Wed Apr 23, 2003 4:32 pm 
Viv!! Sam said that you mentioned maybe posting another poem today so I checked and yay you did :grin Thank you for sharing sweetie...and I can relate sorta to what you're saying here :D Take care girl! *hugs*



**Michelle



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 Post subject: Re: New poem...
PostPosted: Wed Apr 23, 2003 11:27 pm 
I want to let you know that I really enjoyed your new poem. I also would like to thank you for sharing. I think letting people read a poem about certain insecurities you have is very brave. Thank you for sharing such a heghly personal piece of work.



scott



Willow:In my world there are people in chains, and we can ride them like ponies.

Tara:You should ride with me some time. I guarantee safety and fun.
My wallpaper website:Insect Reflections



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 Post subject: Re: New poem...
PostPosted: Thu Apr 24, 2003 12:17 am 
Viv,kick ass poem again :dance





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 Post subject: Re: New poem...
PostPosted: Fri Apr 25, 2003 8:33 pm 
Viv, I love this poem. I think that this one of those poems that everyone can truly relate to. Keep writing.



Leni

"F#&k you, but have a nice day!"



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 Post subject: NEW POEM :p
PostPosted: Sat Apr 26, 2003 4:22 pm 
Hello Kitten :wave



I have got an update once again, cool huh? :p



Thanks to everybody who is reading and replying :moo You don’t know how much it means to me :)



Thanks Michelle :lol Yeah, I posted :p I’m glad you liked it very much, thanks so much for replying *hugs* (I’lll talk to you anyway now, that’s why I shut up now :p )



Thanks Scott :) Thanks for replying :grin I’m glad you liked my poem and I’m glad you think it was brave to post it… lol maybe you’re right ;) Thanks :D



Thanks Sam, my lil’ poem gal :p Good to know it kicked ass, hopefully the new one too huh? ;)



Thanks Leni :) I’m really happy to hear you loved it :) It’s really an honour for me to hear it and I guess that a proof that my poems must be good ;) Well, some :p Thanks for replying :grin



I have written the new one yesterday in my German class lol :lol I’m glad I didn’t have to share it with other people there cos actually it’s only for you guys, my favourite Kitties :kitty Hehe lol don’t worry, I’ll never quit writing either :p



And now the poem :bounce

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Love



Everyone wants it

Everyone is striving after it

Does it want us?

Is it striving after us?



It is just a word

It can’t express

What it actually really expresses

The word is bare, hollow, empty



The feelings are alive, sincere, free



Everyone wants it

Everyone is striving after it

But in the end receive it only the people

Who open themselves for the feelings



The word itself

Is of little importance

Most people think

The word defines love



The feelings define love

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Hehe and here’s a VERY short extra bonus poem just for you guys :lol Or whatever it is :p I’m not sure it has a special meaning…Well, it has but you know, aargh, just read and enjoy ;)



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Weak



We all are in our hardest times

We all feel alone when we‘re not

We don‘t see the people around us

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Take care everybody :grin



:peace –Viv-



Medicine, law, banking – these are necessary to sustain life. But poetry, romance. love, beauty? These are what we stay alive for!



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 Post subject: Re: NEW POEM :p
PostPosted: Sat Apr 26, 2003 5:29 pm 
Viv!! Hehe, told ya I'd come lookin' for your new poem tonight ;) I really loved this one....everyone wants love, but opening up to it isn't so easy....and I agree, feelings do define what love is, the word love alone means nothing without those feelings.



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 Post subject: Re: NEW POEM :p
PostPosted: Sun Apr 27, 2003 12:15 am 
Viv :bow

I liked the contrasting styles of your two poems :dance

Great poetry :D



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 Post subject: Re: NEW POEM :p
PostPosted: Thu May 08, 2003 2:05 pm 
Hey Kitties :wave



A new poem again :bounce



Thanks for reading Michelle :bigkiss I'm glad you liked this one, too :) Oh and you could mail me sometime again, you haven't in awhile now :sob Hehe sweetie, I wanted you to feel guilty now, I hope it worked :p I still love ya, you know that :p



Thanks Sam to you as well :bounce (my mum wanted to have this bounce now :sigh ..so stupid :p ) Thanks a lot and I'm glad you liked the different style, I'm glad I could please you :bow



The new one is kinda...depressing, well, read yourself ;)



Enjoy :bounce

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Why the hell

Is love that important?

What, for God’s sake

Makes it that special?



I think the whole world has gone insane

Love, love, love, everybody loves

I’m sick of it

I’m tired of all the pretended I love you’s

I’m fed up with all its lies



I don’t want to love anymore

I want to rip my heart out

Or at least cut out the love

I don’t want love anymore



All the pain

All the misunderstandings

All the doubts and insecurities

I can’t stand them anymore

I’m sick of needing love

But I can’t stop needing love



I’m only a part of this insane world, too

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Thanks for reading, take care :moo



:peace -Viv-

Medicine, law, banking – these are necessary to sustain life. But poetry, romance. love, beauty? These are what we stay alive for!



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 Post subject: Re: NEW POEM :p
PostPosted: Fri May 09, 2003 12:09 am 
It kinda looks like your not a big fan of love. Remember what the beatles said, *sings slightly off key* "All you need is love, love, love is all you need." Other than that though, it's a good poem. You really put your feelings on the line, I like that.



Love, Leni :grin

"F#&k you, but have a nice day!"

Edited by: Ten10239  at: 5/10/03 12:51:31 pm


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 Post subject: Re: NEW POEM :p
PostPosted: Fri May 09, 2003 2:24 am 
Been in that frame of mind quite a bit in the past so can relate.

Great poem :dance



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 Post subject: Re: NEW POEM :p
PostPosted: Sat May 10, 2003 5:18 pm 
Hey Kitten :wave



Okay, here’s another depressing one, I guess I’m having my selfish „nobody likes me“-time now… *shrugs* Who cares, it’s still good poetry :p I’m sorry if I’m boring you now but it’s just something that I need to share...



Poems touch the most when the topic reaches a kind of summit, no matter if it’s a positive or a negative summit…



Thanks Leni :lol Well, of course everyone needs love lol even I still do… it’s only bad if you don’t know if you’re loved, if there are only lies, you know. But I have to admit, I need love too, yes :blush I love love, love is great but if you’re not sure you’re loved although you love and respect other people, it’s not so much fun…



And thanks Sam :) Well, should I be glad that you can relate to that feelings now? ;) I don’t think so ;) But it’s great that you understand what I mean :grin Thanks :



And now here’s the poem, hope you like :bounce



Oh and it’s not about all people, I meant some special people, so don’t be afraid that I’m hurt by everybody (or you maybe ;) ):p



Enjoy :bounce

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I don’t get it

What’s wrong with you?

What have I done that

You must hurt me so bad?



I try to be nice

I try to understand

Why you have to hurt me

Over and over again



I’m only human, too

You should be the ones

Who know and understand that

You’re humans, too



But why do I always have to pay

For the crap that’s going on

In your lives?

Why am I the one?



What have I done?

Do I pay for all the love that I offered you?

Do I pay for all the respect that I had for you?

Do I pay for all my attempts to be a good friend, a good love?



I just don’t get it

I give and give and give

And I feel like nothing is ever coming back

It really hurts to admit this



But I reached a point

Where I can’t give and understand anymore

I still try

But I can’t



Maybe I am wrong

Maybe all the crap that I feel is mistaken

Maybe it’s me who is selfish

Maybe.



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Thanks for reading :moo



:peace –Viv-



Medicine, law, banking – these are necessary to sustain life. But poetry, romance. love, beauty? These are what we stay alive for!



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 Post subject: Re: NEW POEM :p
PostPosted: Sun May 11, 2003 1:32 am 
Viv :bigwave

Sad poem but again I can relate to how you're feeling having felt like that awhile ago :read



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 Post subject: Re: NEW POEM :p
PostPosted: Sun May 11, 2003 6:28 pm 
Viv girl *big hugs* such a sad poem....I went through a period where I felt like this, so I can totally relate *big hugs* I just felt like sending you a bunch of hugs :D take care sweetie ;)



**Michelle



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 Post subject: Re: NEW POEM :p
PostPosted: Mon May 12, 2003 1:56 pm 
Hey Kitten :wave



Here’s a new poem, I know I have been quite creative the last days :lol



Oh and actually it’s not about anyone in particular, it came to my mind while I was playing Mahjongg on my PC :lol :p And it’s a good song to sing lol cos the poem came to my mine not only while playing games but also while humming some melodies :blush :rollin



Thanks Sam :) Another sad one that you can relate to? :sob That sucks but it’s still nice that you liked the poem ;) Thanks :grin



And thanks Michelle :bigwave I’m so happy that I’ve heard something from you!! *hugs* I was kinda worried where you were gone to ;) *bighugs* see, I just felt like hugging you, too ;) Take care :kiss



And now the poem, enjoy :bounce

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At night

In a dark corner

There’s a girl

She cries and she cries

But no one gives a

Damn

If she’s happy

Or if she’s mad

Or if it’s just her last time being sad

Before she kills herself

She’s all alone

In her dark corner



Daylight

In between a big crowd

There’s a boy

He’s laughing and he’s laughing

But no one gives a

Shit

If he means it

Or he’s sad

Or if it’s just his last time being happy

Before he kills himself

He’s all alone

In between his crowd

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Thanks for reading :moo



:peace –Viv-



Medicine, law, banking – these are necessary to sustain life. But poetry, romance. love, beauty? These are what we stay alive for!



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 Post subject: Re: NEW POEM :p
PostPosted: Tue May 13, 2003 4:37 am 
Viv :bigwave

That is a powerful poem :bow



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 Post subject: Re: NEW POEM :p
PostPosted: Sat May 17, 2003 12:00 pm 
Viv!! I didn't know you'd posted again cuz I never come here unless I know you did...another awesome post girl ;) Very moving...you can be alone alone, or surrounded by people alone, it doesn't matter unless someone reaches out to you, who really cares...thanks for sharing sweetie *big hugs* :grin I hope things are well with you.



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 Post subject: Re: NEW POEM :p
PostPosted: Sat May 17, 2003 1:28 pm 
Hey Kitten :wave



Well, I have a new poem again :)



Thanks Sam for reading my poems again, what would I do without you? .:p thanks :bigkiss



Hey Michelle, thanks to you too :p :shock You come here never usually? Bad, bad girl, cos you miss some great stuff in those threads :p But I know you're not into poems usually, so I owe you for reading always :bow Thanks *hugs*



Hmm, the new one is a dark one, too lol



It’s about people in generally, I guess that’s exactly how everybody often feels, but it’s sure that everyone feels like this cos, no matter what we do, we’ll never see the inside of the person that we think we know so well…



Enjoy :bounce

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You look at me

You can see I have been crying

You can hear I’m still screaming

But you just turn away

And leave



But that’s life

So I dry my tears

I stop screaming

And I prevent you from turning around

And leaving me



I still cry

But my tears are dry

My scream is a whisper

I wish you would see me now, I know you won’t

Because I won’t allow you to see the real me

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Thanks for reading :moo



:peace –Viv-



Medicine, law, banking – these are necessary to sustain life. But poetry, romance. love, beauty? These are what we stay alive for!



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 Post subject: Re: NEW POEM :p
PostPosted: Sun May 18, 2003 1:43 am 
Kick ass poem Viv :clap





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