General poetry and short stories

[pikescoob]

Yay I have internet for a second! Once again an awesome poem buddy Very sensual



**Michelle

[SJ]

Hey Michelle

Thanks for the feedback,glad you liked the poem Buddy

[Mainer]

Sam that poem was so good. I'm so sorry it took so long to get a reply to you. I keep taking forever, but I really love your poetry. You have so much talent. Keep it up.





~Spencer~

"You can't type what a lesbian is. We're anything and everything. The one thing in common is that we make love to other women. So give up trying to limit us." - Amanda Bearse -

[SJ]

Thanks

I'm glad you read it and liked it,always good to get your feedback

[pacou]

Hey Sam



Yeah, I finally replied onto your awesome poem!!! Really liked it, very sweet and it just gives a good feeling



Thanks for sharing



-Viv-

Yes, I have Keyboard Dyslexia!

[SJ]

Hey Viv

Glad you enjoyed reading the poem,thanks for your feedback

[SJ]

New Poem



Plundering the murky depths

Searching for treasure

I hold my breath

Sunlight reflects high above me

On seas of blue tranquillity

The ocean bed looks so inviting

Holding my gaze

It's grip tightening

Around my waist

Pulling me down

For fathoms and fathoms

Beginning to drown

I struggle

Trying to reach the surface

Gasping for air

I taste your kiss

Slowly I swim for shore

Lie on the beach

And rest once more

[onyxsundrops]

That was great! I really liked this stanza:

Quote:

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Gasping for air

I taste your kiss

Slowly I swim for shore

Lie on the beach

And rest once more

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Thanks for sharing! Oh and please post more, soon.



Yvonne

[pacou]

Hey Sam



Wonderful poem that you have there, really powerful



Actually I liked the same stanza like Yvonne did like the most too, that is some great kind of work



Thanks for sharing Sam



-Viv-

"Love is an irresistable desire to be irresistably desired."
Robert Frost

[Mainer]

Wow Sam, that poem was really great. You keep coming up with this amazing stuff. Keep em' coming.



~Spencer~

"You can't type what a lesbian is. We're anything and everything. The one thing in common is that we make love to other women. So give up trying to limit us." - Amanda Bearse -

[SJ]

Thanks everybody for the great feedback

I'm glad you enjoyed reading the poem

[tara24alh]

Hey Sam, I didn't realize you wrote poems until my gf decided to clue me in. I think you do an awesome job and look foward to reading more...hail to the poetry queen





~Tara~

[SJ]

Thanks for the feedback

Glad you enjoyed reading the poems.

[daydreamer777]

sam,

you are a very talented poet

i'm so lucky to have you in my life

love you loads thanks for sharing your poems



ps.

do i get my "s.favor" now?

[SJ]

you posted feedback

Glad you liked the poems

Yeah favour granted

Luv ya too

[tara24alh]

The Real Me







I have family, yet I'm alone

Where has all the time gone?

All these years but I'm still the same

Still wallowing in my pain

Why do I cry?

Why do I hurt?

I ask myself everyday

I get some self esteem

It gets knocked out

That's why it's better if I stay in here

In here, where no one can touch me

No one can hurt me, no one see me

You don't know what I feel, what I think

The rage, the hate

The fear, the ache

My tears shed in here so no one can see

Then no one will laugh at me

On the outside my shell is hard

I'm seldom weak

I can run with the brave

Feel my courage fly

It's ok cause they don't know

The real me



~Tara~

[Mainer]

You just keep discovering new talents everyday, baby. This poem is so amazing. You really show the emotion well. I know you have more poems inside you that are just bursting to come out and I can't wait to read them. I love you, Tara.





~Spencer~

[tara24alh]

My Life





I open my eyes

All I can see is the dark

I run my hands along the floor

Trying to find something, anything

I need light, I need to see

My heart is racing, my breathing fast

Wait! I feel something, but what is it?

Oh god...it's a chain

I'm chained, trapped, what can I do?

I pull but it's useless, it won't budge

It's dark, I'm cold, I'm dirty

I'm naked, starving and scared

I pray and hope, but what does it help?

It helps nothing, it's hopeless

My mind feels heavy, like I'm falling

but where am I going?

No, I'm not falling

I'm drifting, floating, flying

yes, soaring to some place better

it's getting lighter, clearer

I'm high, above everything, I'm free

Wait, what's happening

I think I'm falling

oh no, I'm falling back

It's getting dark again

I'm falling fast, too fast

what is it?

It's pulling, sucking, taking me back

I land, again in darkness, why?

A voice tells me

"Because this is your life."

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~Tara~

[Wytchi Grrl]

I really loved the last poem sam, great emotion, I think it's one of my favourites



[Could you email me? I've had to restore my system again! (doesn't seem like I'm always doing that? ) and I lost your email addy ]



Wytchi

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Witchcraft Grrls

Sassy Eggs

[SJ]

Glad you like the poem

Wytchi I'll email ya

Great poems Tara

[Mainer]

I knew that your second poem would be just as good as your first. You're so talented, baby. I can't wait to see what poems you come up with next. I'm so proud of you. I love you, Tara.



~Spencer~

[SJ]

Here's a new poem.



Snow covered peaks on mountains high

My lover's voice does softly cry

A treacherous path I do traverse

To get to her

I catch my breath

This love I carry

I shall keep true

A hazardous trek to get to you

A love that's worth

A thousand words

A treacherous path I do traverse



Feedback appreciated

Edited by: SJ at: 8/27/03 12:53 am

[BethanyB3]

Interesting and hopefully a woman well worth it.

[SJ]

Thanks

[Mainer]

Great poem, Sam. You are a really talented poet. I hope you post many more.





~Spencer~

[SJ]

Thanks for reading

[tara24alh]

Night







Have you ever seen the sunset?

The sky when it's pink and red?

The colors of beauty?

The sun falls

It's such a pretty sight

You think it couldn't get better

Nothing feels so right

Then the sun dissapears

The night is here

The sky is black

The beauty gone

Out comes the black

Shadowing the land

People go in

Turn on the lights

All except for one

One who stays behind

What's the point of going in?

It's just as good out here

It is where I belong

The only thing I know

I can get lost in the night

No one will see

That's the way it's suppose to be

It's the way it's always been

The way it will always be

So I accept it

It is my home

In this world I will always be

Alone







~Tara~

[SJ]

Good poem

[pacou]

Wow, I'm back and what do I read?



Two kick-ass poems by Sam (hi ) and Tara



I really liked the poems, thanks for psoting you two



Are there gonna be more poems soon? *hint*



-Viv-

"Love is an irresistable desire to be irresistably desired."
Robert Frost

[tara24alh]

Games



Games are fun

Games are nice

But there's more to this life

They want to get inside your head

Dig around, see what they can find

To them it's all a game

You win or you lose

But it's about what I choose

I choose not to play

Not to give in

I know you

Know what you want

Know what you see

You can't win

I won't let you

My brain won't let you inside to play

It refuses, it pushes you out

Go away!

All you want is to break me down

Tear me up, turn me upside down

I'll stop you, make you pay

It's the only way

What you'll see is what I let you

So what you should do Is

Walk away



~Tara~