Poems anybody?

[Shinnen]

nice poems... yup... i can confirm one screwed up spelling but... nice poems

CheerZ

Shinnen



She's the most amazing girl in the whole world. She's the only girl who makes my heart beat faster and slower at the same time. When I'm not with her, I'm not living. I'm not existing until I can hold her in my arms again.- hence i'm not here now

[amber 4 prez]

okies, this is a song that I didn't write, but want to spread to all of you...first some background information about the song...there was this guy from Keyser, West Virginia that was called Magic Dave Mussen. He was the lead singer and guitarist to the band Distorted Penguins. He was 18 years old and was killed in his sleep the morning of April 26, 2000 as part of a murder suicide by his father. He was an amazing singer and song writer in my mind. After his death a band called Buzz Poets wrote a song about him, and that is what this song is...



"Angel Eyes" - Buzz Poets





He walked the Earth above the ground.

His smile as wide as Painted skies,blue skies,

His blue skies.

And all the creatures heard the sound,

the night this child like angel learned to fly.

In blue skies.



All I ask is why, little angels have to fly.

Stars they hide his angel eyes.

Throw my hands up to the sky,

and I miss his angel eyes, he sings to me don't cry.



Since heaven called his name,

nothing will be the same as us together,

Together.

They say that legends never die,

Then so my friends this angel lives forever,

Forever.



All I ask is why, little angels have to fly.

Stars they hide his angel eyes.

Throw my hands up to the sky,

and I miss his angel eyes, But he sings to me don't cry.



I sing. I scream. I need to hear a new sound.

Star is fallen, I think I hear him calling.

Since the day I heard the news,

my soul is melting cause my heart is burning,

Burning.

He was just a child, With the sun inside his smile.

Innocence skys angels fly.

See an angel in the sky, and I miss his angel eyes.

Sings to me dont cry.

He was just a child, with the sun inside his smile,

Innocence skies angels fly.



An angel in the sky, I miss his angel eyes, He sings to me don't cry.













we miss ya dave

[SJ]

Great song lyrics

[amazonaa]

Hey Liz,



I feel like a shit head to for never leaving you feedback.



Well all your poems and everthing are really great. I loved them all.



More soon, please.





brittney





~Good friends help you move. Real friends help you move the body.~

Edited by: amazonaa at: 3/7/05 11:59 am

[amber 4 prez]

Alright...this is a song I wrote in forensics class...I was wicked bored!



"Emo Song"



These broken walls

They lead to broken halls

That go on and on

And end with you



In the end

We'll all be dead

But that’s alright

Cause you're with me too



These days go on

As you drift away

Leave me here

Broken home

Ragged pieces



Does the end

Justify the means

Or were you too blind to care

What was here is now gone



Don't make excuses

You know it’s useless

As I tried to find

The better woman inside

I would've gave my life

Thought I knew you well

But it’s all gone away

To hell



These days go on

As you drift away

Leave me here

Broken home

Ragged pieces



Does the end

Justify the means

Or were you too blind to care

What was here is now gone



In the end

Will you be a friend?

Or just the enemy

I could not see

[SJ]

Great writing

[TaraBaby77]

Hey Liz -



It's solider boy, heehee. Anyhoo, just got done getting caught up on your writings. Great work, like always... I like the fact that you can see the mood that you are writing in. Anyhoo, good work and keep more comin'. Take care. =)

Aaron

'Tarababy77'

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"Don't buy into all the media crap. Love yourself for who you are, not what others THINK you should look like. It's DEFINITELY more important in this life to love each other despite our imperfections." - Amber Benson

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[amber 4 prez]

I'm in a little bit of a writing rut, haven't really been doing much writting, its been more paying attention in pre-calc instead of sleeping, or comign up with a new poem or two...brains been working hard so going to post whatever pops in my head...



Don't you understand

What is happening



Don't you see

Why you're hurting



He is not the answer

He cannot help you

You need to help yourself



You always change your mind.

Just stick with one thing

maybe thats not your thing



To just float around in this world

Constant mood change

From love to hate

Hate to love



Why can't you see

The whole picture

Your life is eatting you alive



You're just too blind to see it

[SJ]

Great writing

[TaraBaby77]

Nice job, Liz... Even with mind boggling calc, you can still great art. Take care. =)

Aaron

'Tarababy77'

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"Don't buy into all the media crap. Love yourself for who you are, not what others THINK you should look like. It's DEFINITELY more important in this life to love each other despite our imperfections." - Amber Benson

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[amber 4 prez]

"Ska"



I'm tired from all this skanking

Tired of the dancing



With the 1, 2, 3 of the count

Hear the crowd scream and shout



Running in place to the off beat

Looking dumb moving our feet



With a twang and a click

I stare at the guitarist chick



The noise takes control

It makes me whole



With the line:

"won't let you throw away this chance of a lifetime,

you and me are so blind."

[SJ]

Great poetry

[amber 4 prez]

this is a little diddy I wrote about Mountain Dew after drinking about 3 bottles of it!

"Ode to Mountain Dew"

mountain dew, mountain dew
do the dew cause its good for you
drink it up, take a slurp
drink too fast and you will burp

its bright and yellow and looks like piss
drink it up and you won't miss
it has yellow 5
from what I know that kills the spermies in guys

Thats okay,
come this may
I won't neeeeeeeeed my vagaina!

ahem...

mountain dew, mountain dew
taste so good for me and you
I take my bottle, and hold it tight,
and I might...

kick my brothers ass because hes a prick and trying to steal all my mountain dew because of its yummy goodness

mountain dew, mountain dew
gives me energy to go whoop dee doooooooooo
mountain dew its my best friend
until the end

If mountain dew had a dildo
I wouldn't leave my room, and'd be a happy lil homo

CAUSE I LOVES MOUNTAIN DEWWWWWWWW!!!!!

mountain dew,
makes smelly people go eww,
and I don't know why...
I guess they can die...

cause mountain dew is yummy
and mountain dew is sweet,
hey look at that I've got two feet....
(and a toe with a corn)

mountain dew, mountain dew
gives you super powers so you can turn blue
the taste is so unique
and I just can't speak
because of the hands around my throat
oh no, I choke...
on mountain dew

I'll just suuuuueeee
them cause I am cheap
and yooooooou can toooooo

mountain dew, mountain dew
I'l have a party and not invite you
but tim will be there, and so will allie...
allie is orange...
and nothing rhymes with orange

mountain dew
helps ya out when you can't pooooooooo

and that means that you're famous according to amber...

mountain dew you'll run into walls,
mountain dew you'll take the big falls,
mountain dew will make just take a drink
mountain dew will make ya think

mountain dew has lots of sugar
mountain dew, is that a booger?
mountain dew is it october?
mountain dew this song is over...





YAAAAAAAAAAAY!!!!

[spikeizmine87]

this was the funniest shit ive ever read!!! "dies laughing" goood one lizness!

[behindhereyes]

Me thinks you Dew-ed too much... girl you are a nut !

behindhereyes
Kim

[amber 4 prez]

alright...this is a little quick drawing I made when I was bored based on the video all that I've got by the used



you like?

[SJ]

Great drawing.

[Renee85]

Me like! The drawing is very nice and at the poem about Mountain Dew, so funny.

[amber 4 prez]

alright...one day in chat mika was in the room, and a bunch of us and I started rambling off stuff that sounded like poetry...soooo here it is


"Mika's Bad Side"

Where grass doesn't grow
And the moon don't shine
That's when you're on Mika's bad side

Nothings alive
Nothing can survive
When you're on Mika's bad side

You'll be toast
If she hates you the most
Might even cry
If you're on Mika's bad side

[SJ]

Great poem.

[amber 4 prez]

alright...I fell onto this site with dirty little secrets...so kinda not writing a poem exactly...well a 2 line poem if that counts as anything...so this is my dirty little secret

"I love her...
She doesn't know it yet"
Who has to know...




so yea, that is my random 3 am poetry writing

[amber 4 prez]

this is my attempt at slam poetry...screw spelling and grammar!

cause it was waaaaaaaaay too late!

I've been trampled on
Too many times.
I've always been a giver,
Never a reciever...

I've been beaten, broken,
Bruised, abused
And used
By the ones whose
Said they wanted my whole
Or was it my hole?
Just an empty oraphis
Used to suck
And fuck
Whatever was in its range of fire,
That burnt out my desire
Of being alive,

To see the homos
With their cosmos
Being weirdos
At the rock shows
Where nobody knows
What the band was thinking
Or were they just sinking
Into the sand
As the fans demand

An encore,
Where they scream for more
But the band realizes
They were just wearing disguises
Where they just hid
From all of what they did...

Abusing, using, bruising
Beating and breaking
What was left of the girl
I once knew....

[SJ]

Great poetry.