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Re: Poems written by me!

Postby munchkin flavoured jellyb » Wed Feb 23, 2005 7:51 pm

hey guys thanks for the feedback!



"laugh"



When i told you i loved you

you sat there and laughed



that makes me wonder

what else did you laugh at?



When i was pouring my heart out to you

did you sit there and laugh?



When i told you that i was hurting

did you sit there and laugh?



When i told you my deepest darkest secrets and feelings

did you sit there and laugh?



When i told you that i was raped

did you sit there and laugh?



When i told you my mother abused me

did you sit there and laugh?



When i told you my fears and worries

did you sit there and laugh?



Well, when you told me that you hurt

that you were afraid, and felt unloved



When you told me that you liked me

that the world was an imperfect place



When you told me that i was your friend

and that wed be there for each other for all eternity



I didnt laugh...i could never have hurt someone i loved







"crazy nights in lala land"



this was my world

controled by only me



This was my release

my escape from reality



then you came into my life

you changed it for the better



My world welcomed you

It loved you like i did.



When a leaf fell off my tree of hope

you made sure that it was carefully put away



When my well of love over filled

It seemed as though you drenched in it



But i was wrong,

I couldnt have been more wrong



I thought that you liked me for who i was

and i and my world accepted you for all you were



Flaws and all, but what you gave me in return

what i was left with in the end



was a broken heart and a shattered home





"Oxymoron girls"



I loved you

You hated me for it



I felt my world was complete with you

You felt like you world was complete without me



I wanted to be loved, an undying viod in my life

Your void was already vacent



You told me what i wanted to hear.

You didnt mean for me to hear them



I told you that you were my universe

you wanted a universe between us



Now im hurt, let me guess

youre all to happy for it.







Yea im done for now.....



-heather







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Re: Poems written by me!

Postby SJ » Thu Feb 24, 2005 1:51 am

Powerful words,great poems :clap

SJ
 


Re: Poems written by me!

Postby munchkin flavoured jellyb » Fri Mar 25, 2005 3:59 pm

gah! its been forever....hehe more poems now





"my love"



Ive been searching for you

Youre nowhere to be found



Where have you run off to my love?



Ive been listening for you

Youre nowhere to be heard



Why so silent my love?



Ive been feeling around in the dark for you

My hands touch only the cold cold air



Why do you hide my love?



Im still searching for you my love

You are still my love, my love.



"distant daydreams"



I feel like youre thousands of miles away.

Youre sitting across the room.

I try not to stare, but i know i cant help it.

Youre eyes they capture such light.

and the way you smile, it makes me melt

I feel myself turn red as you notice me eyeing you.

Youre such a beauty.



You come over to me and sit down.

What are you doing?

Talking to me?

why?

Your kind and mine dont talk.

Out casts and "the beautifuls"

You lean over to me.

I turn my ear to listen.

You take my chin and kiss me sofly on the lips.



What are you doing?!

I can feel myself burning up inside

I open my eyes and im sitting on my own.

Youre still across the room.

Daydreams of you haunt me forever.





MUAHAHAHA! yea i dont know lol



-heather:pride

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Re: Poems written by me!

Postby SJ » Sun Mar 27, 2005 1:34 am

Great poems :read

SJ
 


Re: Poems written by me!

Postby Renee85 » Mon Mar 28, 2005 1:59 am

Very powerful poems, I don't know which one I like better because they're both that good. What I do know is that I need to browse through the thread again and read all the poems I've missed. Thanks for sharing these. :)



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Re: Poems written by me!

Postby munchkin flavoured jellyb » Wed Apr 06, 2005 10:41 am

whaank! hehe...yea thanks yall for the fb! im glad you like my poemesses! well huuuuurs summore hehe



"Its all about You"



Green eyes look at me.

I look them down.

Soft full lips talk to me.

I cant hear what they say,

All i can do is stare.

When you smile,

God, it makes me tremble.

You do that thing with your lips again,

When you bite the right corner of your bottom lip.

It makes me so weak.

You step closer to me,

Not on purpose though,

just to get out of the way of passerbys.

I can feel your body heat on my arm.

I stand completly still and hold my breath until you step away.

Like a child, i stutter when you try to talk,

Like a child, i turn ruby red when you catch me looking at you.

Its so frustrating,

Wanting you and not at the same time,

To feel something for someone,

Who you know will never feel anything back,

A friendship perhaps, but nothing more.

Ill be lucky if I even get that from you,

And although i dont want it to be,

Right now,

Its all about you.



okay...this is getting me p.o.ed...i used to be able to write ten poems in one sitting! now i cant even manage two! lol...yea i think im done...i hit a writers block...AAAANNNNDDDD CUT!



-Heather :pride

munchkin flavoured jellyb
 


Re: Poems written by me!

Postby SJ » Sun Apr 10, 2005 3:47 am

Great poem :clap

SJ
 


Re: Poems written by me!

Postby dreamin of my rainbow » Fri Aug 12, 2005 1:48 pm

OKAY! its me! but...under a different name...well yea..so its been like forever since ive written in here...so um...*is writing*


*forever*

I swear i will love you forever

I swear i will be true to you forever

I swear I will not fight with you ever.

I swear i will feel safe with you forever.

I swear i will never lie to you, never.

I swear i will love you forever,

but will it be forever until I get to know you?

Will it be forever unil I walk up to you and say,

I love you, but you dont know me.

Can we spend the rest of our lifes together?
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Re: Poems written by me!

Postby SJ » Sun Aug 14, 2005 11:33 pm

Great poem.
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