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My Poetry

Postby Taras Shadow » Fri Mar 12, 2004 11:56 pm

Well, there are some awesome poetry writers, and all the poems are so powerful! :) I love it.



So here is my poetry thread. I hope you all enjoy! :)



Oh and another note, these poems were written based on my mood at the time. Some of them are cryptic and just, blank. But it helps me, and I know that's what poetry writers have in common, they write from the very heart and soul.



Here's my first one. :) I wrote this earlier today:



***



It’s Been So Long

-Taras Shadow



It’s been so long since I’ve felt you

Seeking vengeance beneath the surface

You know just where to go, to give me that push

You’ll never know how much I did not miss you



Your voice sounds like it’s yearning to be heard

Your presence haunts every inch of my soul

I can’t deny you anything, even though I wish too

You won’t listen to me, so how can I be free?



You’re screaming so loud, it deafens my senses

You’re blinding me with every caress

I shiver when I feel you linger within

There’s not much left, for you’ve left me empty



Emotionless



And the only whisper you tell me:

“You’re not alone.”



***



~Holly~ :heart



"I was born 'normal'...life made me strange." - Marina

"I am a tongue whore...you gave me tongue, what am I supposed to do...sit back and keep my mouth shut?" -Me-

"I know who you really are...you're the one who cries when you're alone." - Where Will You Go? - Evanescence

Taras Shadow
 


My Poetry

Postby kiwi6969 » Sat Mar 13, 2004 1:15 am

thanks Holly for shareing ..........enjoyed very much













kiwi :flower

Never frown even when your sad,because you never know who's falling inlove with your smile

kiwi6969
 


Re: My Poetry

Postby sam darls » Sat Mar 13, 2004 2:20 am

Wow..Holly. That was so lovely :heart . I loved it. love sammi xx

"Sometimes things happen between people that you don't really expect. And sometimes the things that are important are the ones that seem the weirdest or the most wrong. And those are the ones that change your life." - Jessie Sammler (Evan Rachel Wood)

sam darls
 


Re: My Poetry

Postby SJ » Sat Mar 13, 2004 7:36 am

Like your poetry,thanks for sharing :read

SJ
 


Re: My Poetry

Postby shadowygirl » Sat Mar 13, 2004 5:49 pm

Hey Holly :bigwave



Loved the poem , it was beautiful !!!! heh post more soon please please this groupy loves your poetry heh



Love April

:pride :kdevil

shadowygirl
 


Re: My Poetry

Postby onyxsundrops » Sat Mar 13, 2004 7:21 pm

Nice, I liked it. Thanks for sharing your work with us:)



Yvonne:peace

onyxsundrops
 


Re: My Poetry

Postby barnabasvamp » Mon Mar 15, 2004 5:37 pm

You're exactly right, it comes from the heart and soul.



You expressed yourself so well, I could almost feel it!*sigh*



BV

It's the passion in a kiss that gives to it its sweetness; it is the affection in a kiss that sanctifies it.

barnabasvamp
 


Re: My Poetry

Postby Taras Shadow » Wed Mar 17, 2004 8:21 pm

Hello :D First of all, thank you kiwi, sammi, SJ, April, Yvonne, BV and all of you who have read. I used to write poetry all the time, so I'm sure if I can find my book full of it, I'll be able to post more - if you're interested that is.



This one is one I wrote about a year or so go. It's hung up in my Aunt's living room with my last school picture and my Junior Kindergarden picture next to it. :blush



Hope you enjoy or...something. lol.



***



Little Girl



Go on little girl, dry your eyes

Sleep little girl, kiss goodnight

Don’t be ashamed of who you are

Go for a walk, but don’t stray far



Come back little girl, give us a smile

Walk here little girl, stay awhile

Tell us you’ve made mistakes

We’re not condemning you for Heaven’s sake



Lift your head high like you belong

Life isn’t abandoning you for your wrongs

The only punishment little girl is you

Learn from yourself, teach us what to do



Let us be there, open your heart

Don’t let the real-life nightmares start

Teach us to keep you forever strong

Let us wish your fears gone



Go on little girl, go on and cry

We know what’s eating you inside

Lay your head upon my soul

Just say the word, we’ll let you go



But for now little girl

You’re vulnerable to the world

So close your eyes, and dream free

‘Cause I’m all you feel, I’m all you see

After all, you are me.



***

Written '02-'03

Posted ‘04



~Holly~ :heart

"I was born 'normal'...life made me strange." - Marina

"I am a tongue whore...you gave me tongue, what am I supposed to do...sit back and keep my mouth shut?" -Me-

"I know who you really are...you're the one who cries when you're alone." - Where Will You Go? - Evanescence

Taras Shadow
 


Re: My Poetry

Postby YMKA » Thu Mar 18, 2004 12:10 am

Dude.....you ROCK!!! :bow :bow :bow :bow



This is exactly why I love reading your stuff Holly, you just.. maybe one day I'll explain it to you....but for now, you totally rock, I adore your stuff and always will, you are great! Please keep posting:flirt :flirt



Love you, hugs

:peace :heart

M.

---------------------

"..I feel you, I taste you, I cannot forget, everytime it rains I get wet..." (c) Ace of Base

"I want to go back to...Believing in everything and knowing nothing at all.."(c) Evanescence

"I'm sorry..."- Me " You are NOT sorry" -Holly

YMKA
 


Re: My Poetry

Postby SJ » Thu Mar 18, 2004 12:58 am

Great poem :read

SJ
 


Re: My Poetry

Postby sam darls » Thu Mar 18, 2004 2:58 am

That was so amazing :heart and so beautiful. Love sammi xx

"Sometimes things happen between people that you don't really expect. And sometimes the things that are important are the ones that seem the weirdest or the most wrong. And those are the ones that change your life." - Jessie Sammler (Evan Rachel Wood)

sam darls
 


Re: My Poetry

Postby SnoopyDancer » Thu Mar 18, 2004 4:02 am

Wow! I really liked that one!

SnoopyDancer
 


Re: My Poetry

Postby SilverWingedNemesis » Thu Mar 18, 2004 12:18 pm

beautiful as always











Nickole

"All fear is the fear of loss. And only through that fear, can we truly love."

SilverWingedNemesis
 


wow

Postby shadowygirl » Thu Mar 18, 2004 4:36 pm

HOLLY !!!!! :bigwave



OMG wow Holly .... That last poem was amazing , I loved it just wow, donno there was just something so honest and truthful about it I love everything you write Holly but I love the way you write poetry the most its really smooth and heart felt ....

Keep up the amazing work I'll keep reading :peace



Luv April :pride



CCR !!!!!! heh O and I'm still a groupie ;) :kdevil

shadowygirl
 


Re: wow

Postby intricate mirage » Sun Mar 28, 2004 12:47 pm

Holly Holly... :bow



Your poetry is as amazing as the stories you write, much wow-factor involved, mind blowing as always and yes, definitely from the heart and soul. Very much in awe of your works, great talent, keep on writing girl ;)



Cass xx






My whole life I've loved only one person, that person was you


intricate mirage
 


So Why Would You?

Postby Taras Shadow » Wed May 05, 2004 1:56 pm

Thanks for the feedback Kittens. :)



This one is new and a lil gloomy, hope you like...or at least I hope it's a tad interesting. :)



So Why Would You?



My Thoughts Haunt Me

My Dreams Taunt Me

I Don't Want Me...

So Why Would You?



I Need

I Pray

But No One Is Answering



The Nights Call To Me

Bleeding Fear Within

The Days Run From Me

Taking The Last Of My Strength



I Cry

I Scream

But No One Is Listening



I Won't Look Back

Once Hope Is Gone

I Won't Reach For Your Hand

If It's Too Late



My Thoughts Haunt Me

My Dreams Taunt Me

I Don't Want Me...

So Why Would You?



Holly - 2004



:heart



Baby, baby, baby when all your love is gone, who will save me from all I'm up against out in this world

- Bright Lights - Matchbox Twenty


"Show me where to touch you." - Tara, It Ain't Fickle (Luciddream)

Edited by: Taras Shadow  at: 5/5/04 1:49 pm
Taras Shadow
 


Re: So Why Would You?

Postby onyxsundrops » Wed May 05, 2004 4:04 pm

Very nice poem. I think I loved the repeated stanzas at the beginning and the end the most, but the overall poem was great. Thanks.:)



Yvonne:peace

onyxsundrops
 


Re: So Why Would You?

Postby YMKA » Wed May 05, 2004 9:59 pm

I'll answer you in a couple of days;)



Love,



:peace :heart

YMKA
 


Re: So Why Would You?

Postby sam darls » Thu May 06, 2004 12:41 pm

Holly,,that was so frickin' amazing, I lovevd it :heart Love sam xx

"Sometimes things happen between people that you don't really expect. And sometimes the things that are important are the ones that seem the weirdest or the most wrong. And those are the ones that change your life." - Jessie Sammler (Evan Rachel Wood)

sam darls
 


Re: So Why Would You?

Postby willowsgirl » Fri May 07, 2004 4:57 am

Hey Holly,

Ive just read all your poems on this thread, and I have to say I love them. You really do have a great style nomatter what you write, your stories, and your poems. I really liked the latest one,the structure in particular. More please! :D

Stacey xx

willowsgirl
 


Border & Unknown

Postby Taras Shadow » Fri May 07, 2004 9:19 pm

Two more short lil poems... more like thoughts I've had previously. Thank you all for the feedback. :D



Border

-Taras Shadow



You've Already Arrived

And Became My World

A Thoughtless Dream

You Weave Yourself In My Sleep

Visions Of Loneliness

That's Where You Rest

Denying The Bright Days

Stripping Me From Freedom

You Only Hold Me When I'm Happy

Making Sure That Rainbow Fades

Worshipping The Dark

Over Lapping My Soul

Never Hearing The Word Goodbye

You've Already Arrived

And Became My World



Unknown



Never Going Back

To A World Unknown

To A Place Undivided

Wanting To Return Home

Where Everything Sparkles

And The Angels Sing

No Lost Patience

Come Back To Shed Your Light

On This Space Called Love



***



~Holly~ :heart

Baby, baby, baby when all your love is gone, who will save me from all I'm up against out in this world

- Bright Lights - Matchbox Twenty


"Show me where to touch you." - Tara, It Ain't Fickle (Luciddream)

Taras Shadow
 


Re: Border & Unknown

Postby onyxsundrops » Sat May 08, 2004 7:05 am

Short and meaningful. Great poems.



Yvonne:peace

onyxsundrops
 


Re: Border & Unknown

Postby SJ » Sat May 08, 2004 7:47 am

Wonderful poetry :read

SJ
 


She Flows

Postby Taras Shadow » Fri May 14, 2004 6:26 pm

She speaks. Her words will make you swoon. Her voice will give you that high. She’s the only one who can ever make you feel pleasure. She is your one and only bliss. She owns you. She washes over you. You ride her. She guides you. And finally, she releases you.



She is intimacy.



Ready to go again?




~Holly~ :heart

Baby, baby, baby when all your love is gone, who will save me from all I'm up against out in this world

- Bright Lights - Matchbox Twenty


"Show me where to touch you." - Tara, It Ain't Fickle (Luciddream)

Edited by: Warduke at: 5/14/04 7:48 pm
Taras Shadow
 


Re: She Flows

Postby oo de lally » Sun May 16, 2004 8:32 pm

Wow! That's too awesome :D I loved it!



Scarlette :flower

oo de lally
 


Re: She Flows

Postby SJ » Mon May 17, 2004 12:28 am

Great writing :read

SJ
 


Re: She Flows

Postby TaraBaby77 » Thu May 27, 2004 11:58 pm

WOW, Holly. I'm running out of cool feedbacks to leave. So, here I go.... two thumbs up, great holiday fun, LOL!!! You are something amazing. Thanks for sharing. =)



Aaron

'Tarababy77'


"Don't buy into all the media crap. Love yourself for who you are, not what others THINK you should look like. It's DEFINITELY more important in this life to love each other despite our imperfections." - Amber Benson

TaraBaby77
 


It May Take Forever

Postby Taras Shadow » Sun Jun 27, 2004 10:42 am

This one is dedicated to my loving father. I miss you dad.



It May Take Forever



It may take forever to find the right words

to let you know how much you’ll be missed.

Not a day will go by without your laugh being heard

and all of your fulfilled promises.



Even though you never spoke the words,

we know how much you loved us, how much you cared

There was always so much more you wanted to say,

we had the world to share.



Memories will always be cherished

and thoughts are sent your way,

Along with our love and prayers to guide you on this day.



You’ll always be in our minds and hearts

We’ll remember your love, generosity and warm hugs

that’ll stay with us forever.



We love you, daddy.



~



~Holly~ :heart

Baby, baby, baby when all your love is gone, who will save me from all I'm up against out in this world

- Bright Lights - Matchbox Twenty


"Show me where to touch you." - Tara, It Ain't Fickle (Luciddream)

Taras Shadow
 


Beautiful

Postby ShyTemptress » Sun Jun 27, 2004 11:02 am

Howdy:bigwave

Very beautiful. I love the emotion. Sorry to hear about your father.

-Shy Southern Temptress:kitty

ShyTemptress
 


Re: Beautiful

Postby SJ » Mon Jun 28, 2004 12:50 am

Great poem :read

SJ
 

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