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My Poems

Postby amazonaa » Mon Sep 27, 2004 2:04 pm

Hey all. Well I have decided to try my luck at poetry. I've been working on it and I wanted to post it to see if anyone who's as weird as I am and who can actually understand it likes it.



Well the first poem was inspired by when Tara was brain-sucked. What was going through her head.



And the second one was inspired by Willow. When she was deciding that Tara was worth it and magic wasn't.



So here you go. (There's two of them)





Lost



Am lost


Sunrise for you


Eyes on you


Where footsteps dream


Will wake pieces


Alone. Lost you


Tonight. Lost you


I am lost


Afraid tonight


Lost you


Being lost


Leaving you


Lost you




****



Worth It



Tugging


Keep cool


Staring red


Searching my head




Nervous


Perfect


Worth it




Blow away


Never say


No good


Waste time


My mind


Going anywhere


I care




Nervous


Perfect


Worth it




Say what I say


Slipping away


Stumble


Nothing to say




Worth it


Wishing away




Your worth it


****



If some people like it then I will post more.

amazonaa
 


Re: My Poems

Postby onyxsundrops » Mon Sep 27, 2004 7:43 pm

Please post more, they were really good.



Yvonne:peace

onyxsundrops
 


Re: My Poems

Postby Spikeizmine87 » Mon Sep 27, 2004 9:06 pm

:bounce :bounce :bounce

yay the britney as poems! woot! :applause :bow

Loved these 2! Hope you write more soon!!!

:pride

-rose

I didnt know what being happy was till i found you, i didnt know what love meant till i loved you.

Spikeizmine87
 


Re: My Poems

Postby angel of salvation » Tue Sep 28, 2004 2:52 pm

Great poems, can't wait to read more:applause

Keep going



Jess xxx

'You're my angel of salvation, and hope, and strength...your my multi-angel'-Jay (My baby)

.:~*My anime site*~:.

angel of salvation
 


Re: My Poems

Postby amazonaa » Wed Sep 29, 2004 2:11 pm

Hey all. Thank you for boosting my self-esteem some. I've never done poetry before so it was kind of new. But here are a couple more for y'all. Enjoy.





Goodbye



Hold on


Can't stay


Wanted


Love you


Afraid


Hear me


Feel me


Last breath


Safe


Myself


Thoughts


Life


Ends tonight


Winter


Fragile


Look for


Hollow


Know


Taste


Your tears


Holding


Breath


Inside


Of you


Tonight


Your eyes


Disappear


dreams


Leave you


Wait


Truth


No one


Say goodnight


Be afraid


Call


You


Fade away


Black


****



I have to go but I will post the other one either later tonight or tomorrow.



amazonaa
 


Re: My Poems

Postby SJ » Thu Sep 30, 2004 1:01 am

Your poetry is great,thanks for sharing :read

SJ
 


Re: My Poems

Postby amazonaa » Tue Oct 05, 2004 1:58 pm

Hey all here's another.





You think you know, You don't know


You think you can help, You can't help what you don't understand


You've been there, Ya whatever


You don't get it, Just leave me alone


Stop pushing!




Drug addiction, There's no such thing


Counseling, Ya try and get me there


What's wrong?, There's nothing wrong


I try and talk, You don't listen


Lecture after lecture


Just stop and listen, No your grounded




Problems at school?, Teachers hate me


Was that a boy?, He's just a friend


Your brothers got a football game, Don't care


Go to your room, Already there


Turn down the music, Can't hear you


How was your day?, You don't care


Stop pretending!




18, Your out of the house


Can't wait


You think you know, You don't know


amazonaa
 


Re: My Poems

Postby angel of salvation » Wed Oct 06, 2004 6:39 am

great poems, keep going.

i like the way you use single words as lines in the poems :)



Jess xxx

'You're my angel of salvation, and hope, and strength...your my multi-angel'-Jay (My baby)

.:~*My anime site*~:.

angel of salvation
 


Re: My Poems

Postby SJ » Fri Oct 08, 2004 12:46 am

Great poem :read

SJ
 


Re: My Poems

Postby amazonaa » Sun Oct 10, 2004 3:01 pm

Hey all. Okay so I've haven't really had any dark poems, but I was in a bad mood and now I have some that are kind of dark. I hope you like 'em.



There are four. The last two are my favorites.





Forever

Rip. Rip. Rip.


Through the shadows of dawn.


As the sun begins to rise.


They all look for a place to hide.


Where chaos rules the mind.


Day after day.


Eternity is forever.


Or half a second.


They wait.


To turn us all to stone.


Alone is what they'll be.


Alone together.


Forever.


****





Love/Hate

Love, strong word.


Hate, even stronger word.




Love, good to feel.


Hate, feels good.




Love, comes and goes.


Hate, stays forever.




Love, a true word of pain.


Hate, a testimony of fear.




Love, too much time spent on it.


Hate, never misused.




Love, gets people hurt.


Hate, gets people hurt.




So why do we base our lives on these two words?




Ask yourself.




How many people do you love?


How many people do you hate?




Why?




Love and Hate.


Always battling each other.




Whose the winner in the end?


****



There you go all more soon.

Edited by: xita  at: 10/10/04 8:15 pm
amazonaa
 


Re: My Poems

Postby onyxsundrops » Sun Oct 10, 2004 9:17 pm

I liked those two, very nice.



Yvonne:peace

onyxsundrops
 


Re: My Poems

Postby amazonaa » Tue Oct 12, 2004 4:30 pm

Hey all here's another one.





Light

It was great.


It was wonderful.


You loved me and I loved you.




So what happened?




Did I do something?


Did you do something?


Did you just wake up and decide you didn't love me?


Or did you ever love me?




Was there someone....


New?


Better?




You left me there to pick up the pieces.


I thought you were the light at my very long tunnel.


But I guess you were just an oncoming train.


****



More soon.

amazonaa
 


Re: My Poems

Postby SJ » Thu Oct 14, 2004 12:59 am

Great poems :read

SJ
 


Re: My Poems

Postby willowandtaraforever » Thu Oct 21, 2004 3:01 pm

hey really good poems :applause









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willowandtaraforever
 


Re: My Poems

Postby angel of salvation » Thu Oct 21, 2004 3:09 pm

Great poems, missed a few updates but hey...keep going! :applause



Jess xxx

'You're my angel of salvation, and hope, and strength...your my multi-angel'-Jay (My baby)

.:~*My anime site*~:.

angel of salvation
 


Re: My Poems

Postby willowandtaraforever » Sat Nov 06, 2004 2:40 pm

awsome poems, i loved them. keep up the good work. :bow





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willowandtaraforever
 


Re: My Poems

Postby amazonaa » Sun Mar 06, 2005 12:15 pm

Hey all I've got another one.



Poem of a phycho



There is someone that talks to me at night.


She says she won't hurt me if I listen.


Listen to what she talks about.


So I do. I listen to what she says.


She talks, and talks, and talks


She talks about ghosts,


the supernatural,


and the dead.


I told her she was crazy and that I didn't want to listen to her anymore.


But at the end of the night,


The only person talking,


Was myself.


As I sat in my little room with padded walls.


Hearing the guard walk up and down the hall way


Back and forth.


Covering up his ears so he won't hear the screaming.




amazonaa
 


Re: My Poems

Postby SJ » Mon Mar 07, 2005 1:47 am

Great poem :clap

SJ
 


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