My Poems

[amazonaa]

Hey all. Well I have decided to try my luck at poetry. I've been working on it and I wanted to post it to see if anyone who's as weird as I am and who can actually understand it likes it.



Well the first poem was inspired by when Tara was brain-sucked. What was going through her head.



And the second one was inspired by Willow. When she was deciding that Tara was worth it and magic wasn't.



So here you go. (There's two of them)





Lost

Am lost

Sunrise for you

Eyes on you

Where footsteps dream

Will wake pieces

Alone. Lost you

Tonight. Lost you

I am lost

Afraid tonight

Lost you

Being lost

Leaving you

Lost you

****



Worth It

Tugging

Keep cool

Staring red

Searching my head

Nervous

Perfect

Worth it

Blow away

Never say

No good

Waste time

My mind

Going anywhere

I care

Nervous

Perfect

Worth it

Say what I say

Slipping away

Stumble

Nothing to say

Worth it

Wishing away

Your worth it

****



If some people like it then I will post more.

[onyxsundrops]

Please post more, they were really good.



Yvonne

[Spikeizmine87]

yay the britney as poems! woot!

Loved these 2! Hope you write more soon!!!

-rose

I didnt know what being happy was till i found you, i didnt know what love meant till i loved you.

[angel of salvation]

Great poems, can't wait to read more

Keep going



Jess xxx

'You're my angel of salvation, and hope, and strength...your my multi-angel'-Jay (My baby)

.:~*My anime site*~:.

[amazonaa]

Hey all. Thank you for boosting my self-esteem some. I've never done poetry before so it was kind of new. But here are a couple more for y'all. Enjoy.





Goodbye

Hold on

Can't stay

Wanted

Love you

Afraid

Hear me

Feel me

Last breath

Safe

Myself

Thoughts

Life

Ends tonight

Winter

Fragile

Look for

Hollow

Know

Taste

Your tears

Holding

Breath

Inside

Of you

Tonight

Your eyes

Disappear

dreams

Leave you

Wait

Truth

No one

Say goodnight

Be afraid

Call

You

Fade away

Black

****



I have to go but I will post the other one either later tonight or tomorrow.

[SJ]

Your poetry is great,thanks for sharing

[amazonaa]

Hey all here's another.

You think you know, You don't know

You think you can help, You can't help what you don't understand

You've been there, Ya whatever

You don't get it, Just leave me alone

Stop pushing!

Drug addiction, There's no such thing

Counseling, Ya try and get me there

What's wrong?, There's nothing wrong

I try and talk, You don't listen

Lecture after lecture

Just stop and listen, No your grounded

Problems at school?, Teachers hate me

Was that a boy?, He's just a friend

Your brothers got a football game, Don't care

Go to your room, Already there

Turn down the music, Can't hear you

How was your day?, You don't care

Stop pretending!

18, Your out of the house

Can't wait

You think you know, You don't know

[angel of salvation]

great poems, keep going.

i like the way you use single words as lines in the poems



Jess xxx

'You're my angel of salvation, and hope, and strength...your my multi-angel'-Jay (My baby)

.:~*My anime site*~:.

[SJ]

Great poem

[amazonaa]

Hey all. Okay so I've haven't really had any dark poems, but I was in a bad mood and now I have some that are kind of dark. I hope you like 'em.



There are four. The last two are my favorites.





Forever

Rip. Rip. Rip.

Through the shadows of dawn.

As the sun begins to rise.

They all look for a place to hide.

Where chaos rules the mind.

Day after day.

Eternity is forever.

Or half a second.

They wait.

To turn us all to stone.

Alone is what they'll be.

Alone together.

Forever.

****





Love/Hate

Love, strong word.

Hate, even stronger word.

Love, good to feel.

Hate, feels good.

Love, comes and goes.

Hate, stays forever.

Love, a true word of pain.

Hate, a testimony of fear.

Love, too much time spent on it.

Hate, never misused.

Love, gets people hurt.

Hate, gets people hurt.

So why do we base our lives on these two words?

Ask yourself.

How many people do you love?

How many people do you hate?

Why?

Love and Hate.

Always battling each other.

Whose the winner in the end?

****



There you go all more soon.

Edited by: xita  at: 10/10/04 8:15 pm

[onyxsundrops]

I liked those two, very nice.



Yvonne

[amazonaa]

Hey all here's another one.





Light

It was great.

It was wonderful.

You loved me and I loved you.

So what happened?

Did I do something?

Did you do something?

Did you just wake up and decide you didn't love me?

Or did you ever love me?

Was there someone....

New?

Better?

You left me there to pick up the pieces.

I thought you were the light at my very long tunnel.

But I guess you were just an oncoming train.

****



More soon.

[SJ]

Great poems

[willowandtaraforever]

hey really good poems









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[angel of salvation]

Great poems, missed a few updates but hey...keep going!



Jess xxx

'You're my angel of salvation, and hope, and strength...your my multi-angel'-Jay (My baby)

.:~*My anime site*~:.

[willowandtaraforever]

awsome poems, i loved them. keep up the good work.





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[amazonaa]

Hey all I've got another one.



Poem of a phycho

There is someone that talks to me at night.

She says she won't hurt me if I listen.

Listen to what she talks about.

So I do. I listen to what she says.

She talks, and talks, and talks

She talks about ghosts,

the supernatural,

and the dead.

I told her she was crazy and that I didn't want to listen to her anymore.

But at the end of the night,

The only person talking,

Was myself.

As I sat in my little room with padded walls.

Hearing the guard walk up and down the hall way

Back and forth.

Covering up his ears so he won't hear the screaming.

[SJ]

Great poem