indigokane wrote:
DIBS!!!!
Congrats on the DIBS!!
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loved the update! but i really want to know what that kid said!
Ask and ye shall receive...the PG version.
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Garrison defending Tara's honor was wonderful, he is definately Faiths little boy. Reminds me alot of my nephew, cussing and fighting included!
I only have one nephew who's really aggressive...Needless to say, he takes after me.
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You're doing great, but I did get a little lost at the begining of the update, I had no idea why they were returning to the office, thought i might have missed an update.
Sorry about that...I have a problem with continuity sometimes. I noticed that a lot of my problems with finishing stories was the fact that I tried to fill in every time space available, and I would toil over passages where I would have to skip anything longer than a couple hours. So this was kind of my test to see if I could write this story without making myself crazy with second to second details. And I really hope that makes at least a little bit of sense, LOL
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It's going great, can't wait for more
Thanks! Hope you enjoy this little update!
beautiful_love wrote:
Just a little bit of a cliff hanger. Lol. I'm definitely enjoying the story though. Love the family dynamics. Can't wait for another chapter.
Yeah, sorry about that! But I hope that my updating twice this week will make up for it. And I'm glad that you're enjoying the story, and I hope you enjoy the updates this week!
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P.S. Thanks for the plug on the update thread.
No problem. I LOVE your story!
Bellalocke wrote:
Okay, Two things:
1.) Business Willow + Suprised Tara = Total flirty hotness.
2.) Gar is awesome and I do wish that I knew what Dev (the asshole!) said to make Gar punch him.
Haahahaaa!! ANY Willow and Tara is total hotness! And you will totally find out number 2 when you read the first part of chapter 3!
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SQUEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Can't wait for the next update!
I hope you enjoy it part 1 of Chapter 3!!
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ps ok so that was three things... what can I say, the hotness of your Willow and Tara make my brain mush
I do appreciate that! Makes me feel like I'm doin' an okay job at attempting to make these characters come off the way I'm intending them to.
arsyadriani wrote:
and you really got me to say...I can't wait for Monday to come..
WOOOOT for me!!! I have achieved the impossible: making people excited about Mondays! LOL
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“I seem to have a little problem; I thought maybe I could use your help. Maybe over dinner sometime this week?”
hope it wasn't just Dean Maclay's Imagination.
It was definitely not her imagination....
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God, Dean Maclay I even have dreamy sigh saying the name
Indeed....Dean Maclay strikes sighs in the hearts of lesbians everywhere. Enjoy the next update!
KnightlyLove wrote:
Okay, I definitely don't think that's a cliffhanger.
That's good to know...I felt really bad about stopping it right there, but then it would have messed up the regular updates.
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Principle McHottie, come on now. And dinner? Sounds like a poor excuse for an excellent date. hahahha.
You, my friend, are just about correct!
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pps. GAWDDAMN please tell me what that asshole said! I was just so embarrassed for everybody but Garrison right then. What could he have said? Maybe that Tara's a super slut for showing so much cleavage? hahha.
Not quite, HAHAHAA! But you keep reading you'll find the PG version of what Devin said.
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hm. Also, LOVED his comments right after they left. "she wants your bod." hahhahaha. so fun.
I find myself saying that a lot, LOL. It's one of those pick up lines that's corny enough to get a smile and a dance.
Hope you enjoy the next update! And thanks for reading.
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"a problem.... WITH MY PANTIES!!!"
HAHAHAAAA!!! And THAT will definitely be in the story later.
mmmh-Hot-Sauce wrote:
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“She wants your bod.”
“I’m warning you. . .”
“You want her bod, too.”
Haha, this made me laugh... then it made me think of all those animated Axe Bod Commercials
LOL, those commercials were so damn corny that I couldn't help but laugh at them! And I totally used to wear some of those Bod sprays.
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Anyhoo, I adore Garrison, and his "sticking up for a Lady." With all the foul language and fighting he really must be Faiths son.
I adore that kid, too. I think he and Faith are awesome. I always thought it would be cool for Faith to have a little mini-me of her own, LOL.
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And now all I have left to say is I can't wait for Monday! (wow, I don't think I've ever said that before) But seriously, can't wait to find out why Principle McHottie is in Tara's office.
Well, it's Manic Monday, so here you go!! Hope you enjoy it, and look for part 2 on Wednesday! Thanks for reading!
zampsa19752001 wrote:
Yay for great update-y goodness... I'm glad that Gar didn't get into too much trouble after punching the asshole... Can't wait for their dinner date...
Glad you liked it!! And look for the dinner date on Wednesday!! Thanks for reading and hope you enjoy the next chapter!
love_2003 wrote:
Interesting start so far. Looking forward to hearing Tara's answer.
Thank you kindly. Now, you don't have to wait anymore! Enjoy the next chapter, and thank you for reading!!
Finey_McFine wrote:
Hmmmm, I wonder what Tara's answer will be??????
I guess the better question is what would YOUR answer be?? LOL
You gotta read it to find out....not that it's a really big secret or anything, tho.
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BTW...now I HAVE to plan a trip to D&B!!
I know, right??! I haven't been in so looong; I LOVE THAT PLACE!!!
Hope you enjoy the next update.
taranwillow4ever wrote:
Great update. I am pretty much in the same time zone as you. Mondays are going to be a fav now. I want to know what the jerk kid said, and I want to know if Willow's invitation is a come on, or a real dilemna.
Aww, glad that I could make Manic Mondays better for ya! You'll get the watered down version of what Devin said about Tara in this chapter. And Willow's invitation....You'll just have to read to find out. But don't worry; It's not that far into the chapter.
Thanks for reading, and keep a lookout for the second part of this chapter that will be posted on Wednesday. Hope you enjoy it!!!
SMGOVAN wrote:
Grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr! I have a problem or 2 that I'd like Tara to help me out with to!! Willow, you sly dog!...Can't wait to read about the "Business Dinner" .. What did that asshole kid say?
Duuuude...Don't we ALL?? You'll have to wait a little bit longer on the "business" dinner, but not too long; Look for it on Wednesday! And you'll find out what the asshole kid said in the next chapter.
Thank you so much for reading, and I hope you enjoy the next chapter!
JustSkipIt wrote:
Ok. I blame you fully. So I read part one and then the song
Hey There Delilah stuck in my head and then I downloaded it on ITunes. And now I've listened to it another like 25 times and it's still stuck in there.
Sorry about that...Is it bad that as I was writing, I was listening to it, too? And we also do an acoustic R&B version of it in my band, LOL. It's a pretty catchy song...So I don't mind that you blame me fully.
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Anyway, W/T seem quite sexy and I like the relationship with all Tara's friends.
To me, friendships are important in story-telling, and it's been fun writing the friend dynamic between Faith, Del and Tara.
Thanks for reading, and I hope you enjoy the next chapter!
DaddyCatALSO wrote:
Others have said before me and better than I how smoothly this story has de3vloped its backstory and its main plot.
Thanks! A LOT of research went into the writing of this story; I research something new about RI everyday.
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I like Delilah (Garrison too); I always enjoy original characters when they're well-integrtaed into the ficverse with the canon characters. (I have a slew of originals in my own subverse so I like when others pull it off, and Delilah works perfectly.)
I enjoy reading and writing original characters, too. You always start from scratch with them, and you can mold and shape them into mere plot devices, or in-depth characters that the story couldn't survive without. I'm
hoping that's what I'm doing with Garrison and Delilah. As the story goes on, I'm going to reveal more of both of their pasts, some good things, others not so much. Thanks for the compliment.
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Nit-picks (sorry, can't avoid my favorite sport) Willow's a bit too young and Tara way young for those jobs. But who really cares :-)?
LOL, I did make them way too young for their occupations. Willow can work...I had a principal who was in her mid 30's when she started her career, but I know that Tara's Dean position was a huuuge stretch. Because let's face it: How many hot FEMALE college deans are there out there?? As of now: Just one: Dean Maclay...Damn, she's hot.
Thanks for your input and compliments. Every little nit-pick helps.
Enjoy the next chapter!