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 Post subject: Re: My first fic--School Daze (Started on 2-19-09)
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 Post subject: Re: My first fic--School Daze (Started on 2-19-09)
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[center]Chapter 11: Battle Of The Bands[/center]

Oz Osbourne is a pain in my side! He keeps trying to flirt even though

he knows that I'm a lesbian. I'm engaged to Tara!!!! Now, he's bothering

me about a band battle. I finally accepted for the entire band today. I'm

gonna try to get Angel and Spike to help us that night. I hope they

agree.


Willow finishes writing in her diary and puts it away. That night, she

dreams of Tara joining her in a shower and they talk about having kids

together. Meanwhile, Tara is dreaming of Willow in a red leather catsuit

with a bright blue whip. When everyone wakes up and gets outside for

the bus, Willow and Tara sit beside each other on Tara's lawn. Neither

one mentions their dream to the other. They are cautious on how they

speak to each other to where the other band members jump to any

conclusions. Tara asks, "Will, when are we gonna tell them?" Willow

replies, "Today at practice because I have some other big news for the

band." "Really? What is it?" Willow whispers the news of the battle to

Tara. "Wow," Tara whispers back to Willow. They get to school and the

day seems to rush by. Before the band realizes it, school's over and

everybody gathers up in front of Faith and LeAnn's garage for practice.

Angel and Spike show up 10 minutes later. Willow has everyone to sit

down for some big news. "First of the good news is Tara and I are

engaged." Faith cuts in with, "Gratz T and Red!" Tara blushes and

Willow finishes, "Thanks. Second of all, we have a band battle against

the DIngoes set for Friday, at the Bronze around 7 pm." Buffy

asks, "Why so soon?" Willow answers with, "Actually, Oz has been

bugging me about a battle for a month." Spike asks, "What does that

have anything to do with me and Angel?" "I want you both to help us

that night with the battle." Angel says, "We're in." After they practice,

everyone congratulates Tara and Willow on the engagement. Everyone

loads up into Faith's van the morning to go to the mall. When they park,

everybody heads into Hot Topics. When everyone is inside, every band

member pays for 2 outfits. As they begin to leave, Willow asks the clerk

for a package that was ordered a week ago. "Here you go ma'am,

already paid for and wrapped." "Thanks." Tara starts to ask and Willow

stops her with, "You'll find out later..." Willow and Faith laugh at the

same time. The band heads to school 5 minutes early after leaving the

mall. Willow and Faith go to Faith's van during lunch break. Faith hides

her special outfit in her bag that is always in her van. "Those 2 are

gonna be surprised tonight." "Yeah, they are." Faith barely gets the

bag tied back before Buffy comes up. "Hi lover." Faith smiles and

says, “hi baby.” “What’s the secret?” “Huh?” “The one y’all laughed

about.” “Nothing honey, just an inside joke.” “Can I know it?” “Not yet,

later tonight.” “Oh ok.” Buffy starts to pout and Faith kisses it

away. “It’s good, believe me.” “I do, baby, I do.” Faith winks at Willow

without Buffy noticing. “Hey cuz, hey baby.” Tara says as she walks

up. “Hey T.” “Hey Faith, everyone in the band got early dismissals for

practice and the battle.” Xander walks up and says, “Yes!” “That’s

awesome,” Willow says and then gives Tara a tender kiss filled with

passion and desire. Everyone loads up and heads to Faith’s for

practice. “Ok, everybody get dressed in the outfits for tonight.” After

everyone is dressed, they decide what songs to perform during the

battle. “I say 3 songs.” “Yeah, first song is S Club 7’s Don’t Stop

Movin’,” Tara suggests. “Ok, second is Avril Lavigne’s I’m With You,”

Willow adds and Faith finishes with, “And the final song will be

Disturbed’s Prayer.” Buffy says, “If there is a tie, the tiebreaker will be

Kittie’s Raven. Tara, you wanna lead on it?” “Sure, cuz.” At 5 pm, the

band loads up the van and drives over to the Bronze. By 5:30 pm,

everything was set up at the club. “Ah, the Dingoes are here Faith,”

Anya says as she spots Oz. “So what,” Faith says in a laugh. By 7

pm, the Dingoes are up first. They play Disturbed’s Believe, Seether’s

Fine Again, and Kittie’s Brackish. Then, the Slayerettes take the stage

and play their 3 songs. They win with no doubt in anyone’s mind. Faith

tells Oz to try the battle again the next year. “And besides that Oz,”

Xander starts, “don’t bug Willow anymore because she’s engaged to

Tara.” “Oh really,” Oz states. “Yeah, I am,” Willow says. Tara shows

the ring on her hand to Oz. “See?”

Stay tuned for Chapter 12: A New Pal For Most (let me know how i'm doing with feedback.)

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 Post subject: Re: My first fic--School Daze (Started on 2-19-09)
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Cool to see an update :party

It's so sweet they're engaged, looking forward to the next chapter!

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 Post subject: Re: My first fic--School Daze (Started on 2-19-09)
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[center]Chapter 12: A New Pal For Most[/center]

A week after the battle, Willow and Tara invite the band to Willow's

house for a surprise. When everyone arrives, they are instructed to

meet Willow and Tara in the back yard. Everyone sit in the chairs that

are set up. Willow speaks first, "Now everyone is sitting down and

ready." Tara sets candles around everyone in a circle. "Please do not

knock the candles over when you stand up," Tara announces. "What's

going on?" Buffy asks. "We are performing a hand fasting to enhance

our legal marriage this morning," Willow answers. "Wow," LeAnn

says. "Congratulations, you two," Faith says. They recite their vows

and give a red rose to each other. LeAnn offers to help with the rope to

bind their hands and futures together. After the ceremony is complete,

everybody congratulates the new couple on their marriage. Then, after

they return from their honeymoon, Tara gets woke up by her phone

ringing. "Hello?" "Hey Tare, it's Kodee." "Hey Kdog, what's up?" "I

need a place to stay for a bit." "Another fight with pa?" "Yeah, but this

one was worse. He kicked me and my girlfriend out." "How far away

from Sunnydale are ya?" "About 2 hours." "Ok and hands off my wife or

I’ll kick your ass." "No problems there." "Ok, bye." "Bye." They hang

up and Tara wakes Willow up gently. "Hey baby, wake up. You need to

get up and take a shower. We have a couple of guests coming to stay

till they get on their feet here." "Ok, will you fix some breakfast

honey?" "Sure." Willow kisses Tara and gets in the shower while Tara

makes some pancakes. When Willow gets out off the shower, she

dresses in a black dress shirt and black slacks. Tara smells Willow's

perfume and turns to see her loving wife's outfit. "Damn honey," Tara

states. Willow grins and asks, "You like?" "Hell yeah," Tara replies.

There is a knock on the door and Willow sits down for breakfast. Tara

answers the door and welcomes the visitors with hugs. "Kdog, welcome

to Sunnydale and my home. And who is this?" Kodee answers, "This

is my future wife, Tallow Stardust." "Hi Tara," Tallow states. "Hi

Tallow," Tara replies. The 3 women walk into the kitchen as Willow

finishes her breakfast. "Will, this is my twin, Kodee Maclay and her

fiancée, Tallow Stardust." "Hi Kodee and Tallow," Willow says. "Do you

need help with your bags sis?" Tara asks. "Yeah, if you don't

mind?" "Of course not sis." Tara and Kodee go outside to Kodee's

Durango. "Where did you get this and when?" "Tallow got it for me as a

birthday gift." "Wow, I got married on our birthday and I'm in a

band." "That's kool, Tbear." "We'll talk about this later." "Ok sis."

They bring the boxes and bags in and take them upstairs to the guest

room. "So, what do you think about your woman's twin?" Tallow asks

Willow. "Damn, identical," Willow announces. "Yeah," Tallow says.

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 Post subject: Re: My first fic--School Daze (Started on 2-19-09)
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Wow, that was really a jam packed update.

The handfasting was adorable, and cool, Tara has a twin.

I really like this story, but sometimes it's hard to read all together like that. Even just skipping a line between dialogue can make a huge difference.

I'm loving how everything is progressing so far, can't wait for the next update!

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 Post subject: Re: My first fic--School Daze (Started on 2-19-09)
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I like the story a lot too, especially the twin stuff. I agree with Laragh that it is hard to read all jammed up together.

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 Post subject: Re: My first fic--School Daze (Started on 2-19-09)
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Sorry about the jammed together chaps, i was in a rush to update. Next chap will be spread out I promise!! Coming Soon Chap 13. Thanks for the feedback and keep it coming.

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[center]Chapter 13: Wicca Alert![/center]

Kodee sets candles around the bed and lights all of them. I call upon the

Goddess, Aine. I wish to bless this house in goodness and light. Bless

my relationship with Tallow and I will praise you in the marriage coming

up. "Blessed be Goddess Aine." Tara feels the extreme amount of

magics being used and steps to Kodee's bedroom door. "Kdog, you

ok?" "Yeah Tare, just done a blessing." "Ok, lunch will be done

soon." "K, I'll wash up and be down shortly sis." Tara smiles and heads

back down the stairs. "So, Tallow when are you and Kodee going to get

married?" Willow asks. "We want to get married in a couple of weeks

and we would like a hand fasting to enhance our marriage also." "So,

you're wiccan too?" "Yeah, all of my life." "That's good, Tal." Tara says.

Kodee comes in the kitchen and sits next to her girlfriend. The 4 women

eat spaghetti for lunch along with garlic bread. Willow's phone rings and

she answers it. "Hello?" "Hey Red, B wants to talk to you." "Ok, put

her on." "Hey Will, what's up?" "Nothing, just talking to guests and

Tara." "What guests?" "Tara's twin and her fiancée." "Oh when does

everybody get to meet them?" "At practice this afternoon." "Ok bye

Willster." "Bye Buff." They hang up and Tara comes over to

Willow. "What's up baby?" "The band wants to meet Kdog and

Tal." "When did you say?" "Today at practice." "Ok, that's good." They

tell Tallow and Kodee about the band wanting to meet them. "We're in for

the meet and practice," Kodee states. Willow says, "Cool." They walk

over to Faith's house for practice. Tara sees Buffy, "Hey cuz, come

here." "Cuz Kdog! When did you get into town?" "Just a few hours ago,

still itching for a practice." "Well, you come to the right garage then,"

Faith cuts in. "Let's get inside for the intros," Tara announces. The band

goes into the garage and sits down. Tara declares, "Everyone this is

Tallow Stardust and Kodee Maclay. Kodee and Tallow meet Buffy and

Dawn Summers, Faith and LeAnn Lehane, Anya and Xander Harris,

Cordelia Chase, Angel and Spike." Everyone sets up for practice and

Kodee pulls her acoustic bass guitar out of its case. Ready to play,

everybody counts the beat out for a song.

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How can you see into my eyes like open doors
Leading you down into my core
Where I've become so numb without a soul
My spirit sleeping somewhere cold
Until you find it there and lead it back home

Wake me up inside
Wake me up inside
Call my name and save me from the dark
Bid my blood to run before I come undone
Save me from the nothing I've become

Now that I know what I'm without
You can't just leave me
Breathe into me and make me real
Bring me to life

Wake me up inside
Wake me up inside
Call my name and save me from the dark
Bid my blood to run before I come undone
Save me from the nothing I've become
Bring me to life

Frozen inside without your touch without your love
Darling only you are the life among the dead

All this time I can't believe I couldn't see
Kept in the dark but you were there in front of me
I've been sleeping a thousand years it seems
Got to open my eyes to everything
Without a thought without a voice without a soul
Don't let me die here there must be something more
Bring me to life

(Evanescence's Bring Me To Life)
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Xander hands the microphone to Tara and she passes it to Kodee. "You

really want me to lead, Tbear?" "Yes, on Disturbed's Prayer." "Oh wow,

I love that song."

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Another dream that will never come true
Just to compliment your sorrow
Another life that I've taken from you
A gift to add on to your pain and suffering
Another truth you can never believe
Has crippled you completely
All the cries you're beginning to hear
Trapped in your mind, and the sound is deafening
Let me enlighten you
This the way I pray
Living just isn't hard enough
Burn me alive, inside
Living my life's not hard enough
Take everything away
Another nightmare about to come trueWill manifest tomorrow
Another love that I've taken from you
Lost in time on the edge of suffering
Another taste of the evil I breed
Will level you completely
Bring to life everything that you fear
Live in the dark and the world is threatening
Let me enlighten you
This is the way I pray
Living just isn't hard enough
Burn me alive, inside
Living my life's not hard enough
Take everything away
Return to me
Leave me no one
Turn to me
Return to me
Cast aside
You've made me turn away
Living just isn't hard enough
Burn me alive, inside
Living my life's not hard enough
Take everything away

(Disturbed's "Prayer")
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Let me know how I'm doing, the more fb's the more chapters get added.

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 Post subject: Re: My first fic--School Daze (Started on 2-19-09)
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Really enjoying this story, cant wait to read the next update. Am enjoying much Willow/Tara happiness. :wtkiss


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 Post subject: Re: My first fic--School Daze (Started on 2-19-09)
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Thanks, i will update soon. I had to get my pc worked on. Thanks for the help key03grl. Thanks everyone.

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I WILL BE VENTURING AWAY FROM THE KB FOR AWHILE.

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I think to encourage an update and get more people to see your cool fic ;-)

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Ok, thanks for you helping me out a bit. I know there are people that just read and don't leave any feedback....drifters for the lack of a better term. All the help that I can get, I appreciate a lot.

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For all kittens paying attention, I am looking for new ideas for the upcoming chapters and I am in the process of writing of a new fic focused more on Willow and Tara.

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