Short poetry - 8/07 Depths

jay/wt4evr · **Posted:** Mon Jul 14, 2008 9:06 am

Thanks girls

I'm glad you liked it
Sis, no need for thanks as usual *hug*

ETA: This poetry is copyrighted as I used this in a competition in my own story, so if you guys of the panel stumble across this don't expel me cos you think it's piracy cos it isn't.
Clear, huh?

This..I don't know it just came up without a title though
That's obviously Willow, but it coud be easily Tara only put green instead of blue {but since I wrote it for some blue-eyed goddess I guess that's Willow's}

If I were a poet
I could express with magical words how you make me feel
If I were a painter
I could use amazing colours to show you my joy of loving you
If I were a composer
I could write you the music that my heart sings for you

But in front of me
there's only a blank page
No sounds surround me

Because when I see you
You steal the words from my mind
My world gets gray except for the deep blue of your eyes
And no sound makes through to my ears
but the thumping of my own heart
Matching yours
Aching yours
Telling you what can only be said without words
Showing you what can only be seen without eyes
Making you listen to what can only be heard in the silence

Claiming to be yours and yours only

Zampsa1975 · **Posted:** Mon Jul 14, 2008 9:33 am

Good one Little Jay!

Willowtree252 · **Posted:** Mon Jul 14, 2008 10:01 am

Whoa sis that is so beautiful !!!

Guest · **Posted:** Wed Jul 16, 2008 12:19 am

All I find myself saying this time is that it is truly poetic

I'm charmed.

SJ · **Posted:** Thu Jul 17, 2008 1:17 am

Great poem.

Zampsa1975 · **Posted:** Thu Sep 25, 2008 9:23 am

Good poem, Little Jay...

jay/wt4evr · **Posted:** Thu Sep 25, 2008 9:30 am

Ok sorry for the troubles I went my own way as usual and didn't use the brain, anyway, Sami thanks for the feed back to this poem

Thanks to all of you who left feedback for the previous one

I'm a feeddict!...uhm anyway, here's the new one, and it's for my little Pookie

Well, I guess it's by either of our girls during their time apart, but it's not angsty so it may even be just a time apart, not necessarily 'that' time. Anyway, here it goes

Enjoy!!!

Oceans between us
But I still can see the way you smile
Endless lands to cross
But still can hear your laughter
And air
I can reach out
And feel your hair tousled by the wind
It’ll bring me your scent
And you’ll feel my hand clasp with yours
When the night gets cold
I can look at the stars
And it’ll be like looking into your eyes
Because we’re looking at the same sky
We’re walking the same paths
And sharing the same love

DaddyCatALSO · **Posted:** Thu Sep 25, 2008 9:55 am

Those are great visualizations of aloneness.

DaddyCatALSO · **Posted:** Thu Sep 25, 2008 2:11 pm

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SJ · **Posted:** Fri Sep 26, 2008 1:21 am

Great poetry.

Guest · **Posted:** Wed Oct 01, 2008 7:35 am

I think you are showing our girls a great lesson through those lines. A thorough understanding of each other could best happen when each of them becomes able to transpose her thoughts into the thought realm of the other. The pookying touch to your poem leaves a lovely trail behind it.

Thanks Poobear.

DaddyCatALSO · **Posted:** Wed Oct 01, 2008 9:50 am

"pookying"?

Guest · **Posted:** Wed Oct 01, 2008 10:05 am

DaddyCatALSO wrote:

"pookying"?

Yeps ^^ A secret code since it is addressed to her Pookie.

jay/wt4evr · **Posted:** Wed Nov 12, 2008 1:25 pm

Thanks to all who left feedback

I'm really glad you liked

This time around, I found a couple of poems I wrote as a newbie teenager, when I was angry at the world and such.
I twisted them to make 'em fit one of our girls, and finally found a way.
This one is Tara just after the betrayal, thus mad at the world, at herself and at Willow. Be warned, it's really angsty.

Alone in the dark
Your eyes return to my mind
I'm walking away
To find feelings inside me
I've forgotten the fear of leaving you
I want to be free
I don't want to be ruled
By this mean world
For it's covered in dust
And smoke
A quilt thick a thousand years
The weight of my soul
Lingers in a hole
Where hurt clasps to it
Where tears start to fall
Then
Thin as air
Fire brightens my heart
Then
Thick as rocks
Ice shields my mind
While I walk away
To build a life without you

Zampsa1975 · **Posted:** Thu Nov 13, 2008 2:20 am

Good one!

SJ · **Posted:** Thu Nov 13, 2008 2:32 am

Great poem.

jay/wt4evr · **Posted:** Tue Nov 25, 2008 10:41 am

Thanks Kittens

Here's another one, but it's not the angsty one.
It's Tara reflecting upon her relationship between Willow and the odds of fate.

This is merely a chance
That the only person to ever notice me
Became the only person I’ll ever notice
As she fills my head with such joy
That I have to remind myself that this is real
And that I won’t wake up
Only to find myself staring up at the ceiling
And whisper her name in the cozy night over and over again
I barely had the time to look at her
That her eyes were already boring into my soul
She pinned me down with her gaze
And I couldn’t breathe so heavy felt my heart
Even though it was soaring
Lifting me beyond skies, taking me over oceans
Getting me lost in her
As I know she will find me

Zampsa1975 · **Posted:** Tue Nov 25, 2008 10:59 am

Another great one!

SJ · **Posted:** Wed Nov 26, 2008 7:16 am

Great poem.

jay/wt4evr · **Posted:** Sat Dec 13, 2008 7:24 am

Thanks Kittens

Ok, back to angsty. I still have to get that other teen-poem right so it can fit here,but in the meantime, while I was bored to death during chem, I wrote another angst angsty one.
That'd be Willow during withdrawal.

Have you ever wondered
What it's like to wander in the dark
Without your own shadow to guide you
To assure you that you're real
And that you aren't floating
In the endless space?
Have you ever felt
A feeling so real
That you tought your life
Had been wasted away 'til that moment?
Have you ever screamed
So loud your heart shattered
Into a milion pieces?
Have you ever been
Lost and scared
Staring ahead with wide eyes
Searching for a sign
In the even darkness?
Have you ever reached out
With a trembling hand
Only to touch the thickness of your loneliness?
Have you ever knew
That the right thing to do
Can be the one that will break your heart?

Have you ever wondered
What it's like?

Zampsa1975 · **Posted:** Sat Dec 13, 2008 8:56 am

Good one.

SJ · **Posted:** Sun Dec 14, 2008 2:38 am

Great poetry.

jay/wt4evr · **Posted:** Tue Jan 13, 2009 1:55 pm

Oookay kittens I'm back

Thanks for the feedback, it's very appreciated

This time around I got bored in the train, and there's a point where it travels really high, so this poem, either by Tara to Willow or viceversa, will be called

HIGH

We're flying
So high I can't see the ground beneath us
So high I can feel the stars brushing past me
The sun reflects upon your hair
And shines
But not as much as the smile that graces your face
We're beyond the horizon
Further than the sunset
And yet so real
The feather caresses
That your eyes pay to me
Attend me wherever I go

Zampsa1975 · **Posted:** Tue Jan 13, 2009 4:09 pm

Wow! Really beautiful...

SJ · **Posted:** Thu Jan 15, 2009 5:26 am

Lovely poem.

jay/wt4evr · **Posted:** Fri Aug 21, 2009 1:47 pm

Thanks SJ and Sami ^^ {another Rainman reply to fb

}
And yet again ages that I don't update. Shame on me :smash

lol

So, here's a new poem; well, kinda like a lullaby/poem/whatever you'd like to call it, as long as you like it ^^
It's Tara's mom to Tara.

Hope you all like it

I need to go, don't wait up, I'll be back before sunrise
Sleep my child, and dream of immense lands where you can run
I'll be watching you
And I'll reach out for you
I need to go, don't wait any longer, I'll be back before sunset
Go on my child, and head towards the happiness you ache in your dreams
I'll be standing beside you
And I'll look out for you
Stop and stare ahead
In front of you there's another path set
Walk across the shadow, my child
And live til your last breath

Willowtree252 · **Posted:** Fri Aug 21, 2009 5:38 pm

Sis I love it glad to see you writing again :party

Zampsa1975 · **Posted:** Sat Aug 22, 2009 4:52 am

Yay for great poetry...

SJ · **Posted:** Sat Aug 22, 2009 6:23 am

Great poem.

jay/wt4evr · **Posted:** Fri Oct 08, 2010 8:59 am

Hola Kittens, I'm back ^^
Sami, Dia, SJ THANKS! I like to think that I write better 'cos I know you will be reading

And for all the other Kittens who stumble across this

So, am bored out of my mind and, apparently, in a silly mood.

While writing this I had pictured in my mind a very different outcome to 'Though Love', where Willow goes to the multi-cultural fair after talking to Giles to seek out Tara.
Enjoy

Your smile flashes before me
And my legs wobble
My knees hit the cobbled stones
And I want to laugh
With the absurdity of it all
You sweep me up
And we spin
I whisper secretly in your ear
That the whole world is spinning
And we're the only ones
Standing still
Lost in our own world

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Short poetry - 8/07 Depths

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