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PostPosted: Tue Jun 26, 2007 2:34 pm 
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Great story. I'm sorry I haven't left feedback before, thought I had.

What a nasty world you've created - all of these commercial behemoths governed by evil, just like Wolfram and Hart, and the Watchers and the Coven standing back letting it get into that state. I guess/hope this will force them to change their ways?

Poor little Willow, that's a pretty harsh introduction to the world of the supernatural. She's lost her mum and her dad's abducted, and she's being pursued by who knows how many evil entities.

I'm curious about the future: the dream seems to indicate that Willow becomes some sort of demon, perhaps a vampire? I hope that's just some twist the PTB put in the dream to hint at her potential for evil, or something? Can't wait to find out what you do with it.

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Hello to those of you still with me. Sorry, this isn’t an update, just a confirmation that the final installment of the prologue, a bit under 8,000 words, will be posted in one big hunk on Saturday. I have another project that has to be taken care of first and I want to thoroughly go over the last bit of this one more time before it goes up. But while I’m here, I’d like to respond to my faithful feedbackers.

Hey, db. Thank you. And you called dibs on this story? I hope you’re okay after the mad stampede to leave feedback. LOL.

Leigh feels bad about her part in Sheila’s death. She’s empathic, and despite being something of a cynic, is naturally compassionate. Even if she had no idea her actions would ultimately result in Willow’s situation or how the actions of others (such as the Watchers unwittingly feeding Ethan information about her and Willow) would compound with hers to create a really bad outcome, she’ll feel guilty about the part she did play, and second guess herself for it. Also, she considers herself just a soldier but not someone who will blindly follow a bad or unethical order, so the lack of information upsets her. The question now is, how much did her superiors know before they sent her on her mission? And is she any less responsible for the tragic outcome of the events that she helped put into play? Anyway, I really like how she turned out. She was a helluva lot of fun to write, with all the sarcasm and one-liners. And to put your mind at ease on at least one thing, Tom is still in New Mexico and will remain there for quite a while.

WolfDragonGod - The magic and demon bits were really tricky since this is really a futuristic tale, so thank you kindly for the encouragement.

Anne - Thanks for stopping by, and for the honest feedback.

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the Watchers and the Coven standing back letting it get into that state. I guess/hope this will force them to change their ways?


Good guess! To tease a bit, Buffy will be the main ingredient in the Watchers’ attempt to become more proactive about the still pending Artaggio/demon problem.

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What a nasty world you've created


This part set me off on a long bout of soul-searching. I’m not sure what to say to this, except, yes, it is a nasty world I made up here, but I guess that’s just my background? I count Bladerunner, Starship Troopers, and Brazil and 12 Monkeys as personal favorites, if that says anything about my tastes. Honestly, I can see something like this world coming about—not so much the demons and magic, of course, but the commercialism, corporatism, the shrinking of the private sphere, and so forth. Socialism may not have turned out to be a huge whopping success where it's been tried, but many of the critiques against the uglier aspects of capitalism I believe are valid—this coming from someone who often lists my job description tongue-in-cheek as “corporate lackey.” Does this subject matter make for good fiction? I love sci-fi political and corporate thrillers and satires myself, but I suppose to many people it doesn’t.

Plus, I know I haven’t made it easy on my characters or readers with these last few updates. I kind of knew that this was never going to be the story that would be in the top 10 threads on DCP every day, though the lack of response was more underwhelming than even I, a natural pessimist, expected. I think the main reason at first is that it’s not a W/T-centric story (I jokingly refer to this prologue as The Adventures of Willow and Tara’s Mom), but I see now also because I made it very, very dark, maybe too dark, and there wouldn’t be much incentive for someone looking for a light-hearted read, which I know is a lot of kittens, to look twice at it no matter how much care I put into constructing it.

But I hope it’s still worth reading, if only to a select audience. Because fanfic is for fun rather than profit, when I start a fiction, it’s mainly for my satisfaction first. To be honest I never thought much about whether this world I was writing was one that anyone else would want to know more about, but maybe I should have. I’ll admit, part of me wants very much to be a popular writer but I’m resigned to the very real possibility that that’ll never be. I can’t do much about that, about people’s preferences. I might be writing just for myself and a half dozen readers (if that), but that’s cool. The ones who left feedback left some really smart stuff that gave me lots to think about. And there’s always the possibility my next longish attempt will be a romantic comedy full of flirting and crushing and comedic misdirects and puppies and small children who can’t pronounce words properly yet. But that’ll have to wait until I finish this story, and possibly another one I have stewing with a similar mood.

Anyway, it really is too late to change anything now, because the prologue is done! This thread is now 2 pages, yay! A one-page thread for a 35,000 word piece would’ve been pretty pathetic, especially considering half the posts in it are mine.

The finale to the prologue, which will tie up little, leave much open, and introduce more things to come including the much deferred meeting between Willow and Leda/Tara, will go up on Saturday. I hope to see the six of you there! :op

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PostPosted: Thu Jun 28, 2007 10:23 am 
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binky wrote:
I kind of knew that this was never going to be the story that would be in the top 10 threads on DCP every day, though the lack of response was more underwhelming than even I, a natural pessimist, expected.


Actually, I'm surprised that this fic isn't more popular. This is one of the few really well-thought-out and well-written stories that exist on the board. To be quite honest, it's this story that keeps me checking the board for updates.

You've created a very complex world and inhabited it with characters that are complex, but not so much so that the reader can't relate. That's not an easy task to accomplish.

As much as I enjoy the stories that are light and romantic, I don't ever wonder about anything. I mean to say, I never want to know more or catch myself thinking about the story hours after I've read an update. I know the formula for those stories - it's the same as the romantic comedy formulas, for the most part. I don't know the formula for this story. It's new and it makes me wonder and even try to imagine what the next part will hold.

binky wrote:
I think the main reason at first is that it’s not a W/T-centric story (I jokingly refer to this prologue as The Adventures of Willow and Tara’s Mom), but I see now also because I made it very, very dark, maybe too dark, and there wouldn’t be much incentive for someone looking for a light-hearted read, which I know is a lot of kittens, to look twice at it no matter how much care I put into constructing it.


I may not be in the majority, but I prefer to get lost in a good story - dark, light, it doesn't matter. This is a story that the reader gets sucked into and, yes, it's dark, but it's a necessary darkness. This wouldn't be the same story if it was a light-hearted romp in W/T-Land.

And, I am intrigued by Tara's mother. She's a magnificent character and I look forward to the next part of the prologue. I have no problem waiting for W/T to meet - not when the lead-up is this good.

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But I hope it’s still worth reading, if only to a select audience.


It is worth reading. In fact, if there was such as think as a "required reading list for fanfic" - I would put this at the very top.

re-lurking now.


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CSpotGo - thank you for delurking to offer that. It's encouraging to know there are others enjoying this story. I knew there were a few lurkers in this thread, but hearing from you even in a brief surfacing is very nice. And what you said is very flattering. I'm all swollen-headed! Thanks much.

I am updating the header post now but will be back in a few to post the remainder of the prologue.

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THE COVEN, PROLOGUE: Witch Maclay (conclusion)
Please see the first post of this thread for summary/description and disclaimer.
Installment rating: R
Installment warnings: violence, profanity
Special note: The angst level on this final installment is extremely high.
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“…Mack! Ms. Mack, please, I think he’s waking up, oh gods, please get up! Don’t be dead…”

“Not… yet… Not dead yet…” I gasped. There was something heavy lying across my chest--the demon’s arm. It wasn’t moving, but the sense of urgency in Willow’s pleas told me this hell wasn’t over. I managed to pull myself out from under it and looked over to the sorcerer. He was moaning. Not dead, either. But there was a dinner plate sized bloodstain centered by a bullet hole on the left shoulder of his now charred three piece suit. Parts of his face were starting to blacken and swell from the more severe burns from the fire. He must also have been knocked unconscious with the gunshot. I looked around me for the gun to finish him but couldn’t find it. It was likely underneath the Golem’s massive body. I struggled to my feet and stumbled to the kitchen to fetch a knife. The biggest one I had. The #10 titanium chef’s special I used to chop my vegetables would do.

“M-Ms. Mack?”

“Stand back, honey. This won’t take but a second,” I said. I didn’t want Willow watching. As I limped over to finish my task, he opened his eyes groggily. They widened as he saw me approach with my knife. Then Willow screamed. I turned.

Her power shoved me to the floor again as a blur of black and metal whipped past me. A pain so intense it beggared the previous slash on my arm shot through me from the back of my left upper arm to my left hip. I twisted as I fell by instinct onto my right side, dropping the knife. The human was awake, if just, the Golem was, too. It had slashed at me, nearly cleaving me in two. It would have, if not for Willow’s split-second emotion-driven shove.

Willow was the only one with a clear head in the apartment as she ran to me and tugged me up by my right arm--my only working arm. I think I might lose the left one. Stupidly, I thought, at least it had ruined the same side. Part of my mind was still working if sluggishly but it sure seemed Willow was going to have to be both the brains and the brawn of our little outfit. But then it hit me that that needn’t be the case. It wasn’t just my arm--my left side in general wasn’t working properly and I would only slow her down. I stopped her from fussing by grasping her forearm. “Willow, you have to run… Go to the car, call the police now, or… or wake up one of my neighbors and hide there, just leave me here. I’ll give you my phone. Use the number 1 speed dial--”

“NO! I won’t leave you!” she said adamantly. I was amazed that, rather than terror, it was a stubborn protectiveness that was motivating her. Protectiveness of me. The look on her face was one of pure resolve.

I groaned. Like I said, a mind of her own.

She kept tugging at my arm until I was able to roll over onto my knees and get shakily up. We stumbled out the apartment door with me limping and trailing blood. The blood part was bad--not because of blood loss, though that would be a concern and very soon, but because the sorcerer and his monster could use it to track us once he became ambulatory himself. Willow dropped my arm to run ahead to press the button to call for the elevator, but as soon as she came back to help me limp on, I pulled her to the emergency stairwell. The last thing we needed was to be stuck in the damned thing.

As the stairwell door closed behind us, the man and his monster stumbled out my apartment door. The demon had to squeeze past the doorframe as he was wider at the shoulder than the door. The man, clearly favoring his left side, looked about furiously, thankfully not down at my blood trail, saw the elevator light from where Willow had pushed the button ordering the car down, and headed straight for it. We watched, both of us with baited breath, as he limped over and insanely jabbed the button himself several times until the car finally arrived--thank the gods we hadn’t tried to take it--and they piled in. The Golem had to scrunch itself up to fit inside next to its master, who looked like he’d been holding a firecracker when it went off. It was such a ridiculous image I actually laughed. But that made my side hurt like hell and I sagged against the wall. The doors closed and Willow opened the stairwell door before I could utter a word of protest and ran to the elevator control panel. I shuffled behind her and watched, my mouth open, as she popped the cover off the panel, considered the buttons intently a moment, and began rapidly jabbing a sequence of keys. I followed Willow’s gaze up at the illuminated floor numbers. When the light was between ‘5’ and ‘6’, she hit the Enter button, and something whined behind the panel. The indicator light stopped moving. She looked up at me with a triumphant grin. Huh. “Good job, swee--”

Then she turned and ran back into my apartment. “Goddammit, Will--”

She emerged again mid-swear, with some towels and the medkit from my bathroom and the gun, which she promptly handed back to me upon seeing the look on my face. I shoved it back in my pocket and pulled out the sat-phone instead. She pulled me gently down by my elbow to sit against the wall and I admit I couldn’t have stopped her, I was so weak.

Willow was half in my lap, trying to replace the blood-soaked and encrusted scarf that had been wrapped around my mangled arm as a tourniquet with one of the towels she’d fetched from my bathroom. I gently pushed her back and struggled to my feet. “No time, sweetie. Gotta find a better place to hide first.” I headed back instinctively into the stairwell, breathing heavily with the effort, Willow by my side, carrying the supplies she’d taken from my apartment. The stairwell faced the east and through the frosted glass of the window I could see that the sun was just rising. The building would come to life in an hour or so, another workday for all, blue and white, to get through, the last before the weekend and temporary freedom. The nighttime lights were still on, though, and we started down the stairs as I hit the number 1 speed dial.

After two rings and a floor down, my call was answered. “I need some muscle!” I gasped into the phone.

“Sorry, hon, wrong number. That’s one-nine-hundred, you want,” Jenny answered deadpan, then laughed. “Jeez, Leigh, do you ever think of anything else?”

I groaned. First thing once we get back, kill Jenny.

She caught on quick, though. “Good gods, you’re serious!” Jenny gasped.

My teeth ground, the vibration in my skull settling me a little. “We have GOT to work on your comic timing!”

“Is it you or Willow?”

“Willow’s fine--well, physically, at least… She’s here with me now... Me? Not doing so great.”

“Is it bad?” Jenny Touched me, briefly. It’s not her primary gift. She’s not nearly as good at it as me, but she didn’t need to be. I was broadcasting enough pain for a NYC hospital ER. “We’ll get someone over there now… I’ll come get you myself!”

I stumbled on the tenth floor landing and I hissed with the sharpness of the pain. The blood was dripping down my side. “Hurry, Jenny.”

“Hang on, Tara…” I could hear the sound of furious key-tapping on the keyboard. “I have your coordinates… Or I did. Are you moving?”

“Kinda… have to… We’re… uh, being chased by a couple of monsters.”

“Monsters?”

“’splain later…”

More keyboard tapping. “Shit! I have to close my end, but keep your phone on, I’ll work something out…. Hang on, hon.”

The line went dead as she closed the connection to do whatever it is she had to do. I shoved the phone, still on, back in my pocket then immediately gripped my upper left arm. Blood spurted from between my fingers.

We made it down another couple of flights to the eighth floor before the pain made breathing an issue. I sunk slowly to the floor of the landing, next to the window. Willow hovered helplessly by me, looking up and down the stairs. “Ms. Mack… we have to keep going. It’s not safe here.”

But I couldn’t. Now that I’d managed to contact Jenny and she was making the proper arrangements, somehow I’d turned a corner in my heart and mind. It had turned out to be a long-fought and hard-won accomplishment and it drained me. “Come here, Willow.” She knelt, not touching me, still hovering. I took a long look at her. “It’s hard to picture now, but I guess she could do worse.” I teased wryly. I wanted to touch her hair, but couldn’t release my grip on my arm to do so. With the sunlight streaming in through the tiny stairwell window and bathing her in its light, her hair almost looked like it was on fire, just like in my vision. Time seemed to blur a little, and I was once more in the room with white-washed walls and high gauze draped windows with my girl and her beloved in their marriage bed. Only now, they are aware of me. There are tears in my daughter’s eyes, and Willow’s arms are around her, comforting her, even as her own face is one of sorrow. I remembered the demon, but felt somehow that that part was a lie. Still, my baby had been through so much already. I was her mother, and I would protect her any way I could. The only way this would be worth it, the only way she’d ever forgive me for not being there for her myself, was if Willow was worth it instead. “You’d better take care of her. Or I swear, I’ll come back and haunt you ‘til you’re stark raving mad. You hear me?”

“Ms. Mack, please, the tourniquet isn’t working, you’ve lost a lot of blood, and you’re not making much sense!”

I laughed, which made me loosen my grip on my mangled arm again. Love that honesty… Now it was my turn to come clean, there might not be much time later. “Aw, honey, you can stop calling me Ms. Mack… It’s a funny name, but it’s not… not me. Not the real me.”

“What?”

“Maclay. My name’s Maclay… Wait.” My eyes kept closing against my will. I forced them open, but the effort left me so weak. “No. It’s Tara. But I’m shedding that one, too. I’m great at that. Pick up names, then give them away when I can no longer use them. But I think now it can go to someone who’ll make better use of it. When you get back, tell Jenny that she can take it with all my blessings, and my apologies.”

“Who take what?”

Panic. It’s rolling off Willow in waves. Now that we’ve made a connection, it’s like I can’t shut if off. Can she feel me, too? “Tara…” Willow was right. I wasn’t making much sense and I was scaring her. I couldn’t do that. Witch Maclay of the Coven still had a job to do, until my relief arrived. But performing my duty didn’t preclude being a friend. And to be true friends, I had to be honest about who I was, first. I sat up, let the new jolt of pain wake me up more fully again. “My-My given name is Kera, I’m pleased to meet you, finally, Willow. On my official records, my full name is Kera Maclay, but Maclay is a name I took for convenience’ sake, it’s not really mine. I have a daughter, a few years older than you, whose given name is Leda. The women of my family are witches, Willow. Long before I joined the Coven we were. When we come to our own as women, if we have Talent, we take on the name of a relative, a grandmother, many, many times removed, the first witch in our line, very powerful, who was called Tara.”

“O-Okay.” Willow now looked skeptical besides frightened out of her mind, but honestly, can I make this stuff up? It’s a wonder any of the women of my family end up sane. Okay, moot point, that.

It didn’t take Talent to know Willow was still confused, and not a little scared that her guardian was starting to lose it. But I had to go on. I realized, with a sinking feeling in the pit of my belly, in the base of my being, that I might not make it back. “Leda will be fifteen this October. She’s preparing for that day when she’ll take on that responsibility and right…” Only problem is, so many of us have taken that one name, Tara, it almost has become like a millstone. The onus of the Tara witches. What a troublesome thought. It’s one that’s bothered me for awhile. Perhaps my daughter should take a new one, start a new tradition. I hope she gives away Leda, though. That was her paternal grandmother’s name and Tom chose it for her, ignoring where it came from, the mythology behind it. I always hated the name, though I loved my baby girl. It was one of the first of many things he had his way with, but I came to accept it. I guess in my mind, she was Leda, okay, but on the inside, she was really just Tara-in-waiting. “It’s a day I really wanted to see with my own eyes…” My voice was tinged with regret and I fought against the self-pity that I knew could easily overwhelm me. But what Willow had told me that time during meditation, at what seemed years ago, about Leda’s happiness and my own came back to me, and I realized what I want for my daughter won’t matter. She’ll have to make her own decisions about these things.

“You’ll meet a woman when you get back to the Coven. Her name is Jenny. Tell Jenny I said it’s okay for Leda to take that name, alright? She never said anything, but I know she was a little worried about that, about there being two of us. But she can take it and still be her own woman--if she wants it, that is. But she shouldn’t be afraid of it, nor should she resent it, despite the baggage it comes with. For me, I think it’d suit her well. Always did. And… And tell her that I’m sorry. I’m sorry I didn't keep all my promises.”

“You’ll tell her yourself when you get back!”

Oh gods. “Yes, yes. But just in case, okay?”

“O-Okay, just in case.”

“Good.” I could almost not feel the pain anymore. That’s a bad sign, I think. One more thing, though. “I’m so sorry about your family, Willow. I should have explained some of this to you sooner, so you could make your own decisions, make your own plans. Seems to me that we’re all children, struggling to be adults. It’s not always possible, and there are forces stronger than us whose wills supercede our own, but we need to at least have the knowledge to make informed decisions, even if the outcome is beyond our control. ‘Cause not knowing… that’s really a bitch, isn’t it? What chance do you have then? So I should have told you, what was being said about you, about who might be watching. I don’t know if it would’ve saved your parents, but I’m not a seer. Maybe it would have made a difference. Maybe it was a mistake, but I was following the orders of people who I thought knew best. I know that sounds lame, like it’s an excuse, but to be honest I still don’t know that I was wrong. There’s so much that I’m still in the dark about myself.”

Willow didn’t say anything.

Maybe I wasn’t making sense again. “It’s so scary… having to grow up. Especially like this. But there’ll be good stuff, too… Wonderful things…” Baby girl. “Take care of Tara, Willow. Treat her well.”

“I-I will! I promise…”

In the end, that’s the best a mother can hope for.

A loud crash from below us, a couple of flights down, followed by a shudder through the building frame startled us. “…by all the gods of hell and their demon spawn children, too! Watch my arm, you blundering idiot!”

Willow and I froze. Had they found us so soon?

“Why couldn’t the Master just make you more compact and efficient? But no, everything must be super-sized with him! No wonder he picked America to kick off his big Hello Humanity, How Nice to Eat You tour!… Just stay behind me--no, wait. You go first!”

We were still holding our breath as we listened. After a few seconds, the echoing sounds of their footfalls, one loud and lumbering, the other much lighter but uneven, began to recede. Down. They were heading down. We released our breath simultaneously and just looked at each other for a long moment.

Willow had that look on her face again. The scary one, with the slightly furrowed brow and the set jaw. Her resolve face. I braced myself.

“They think we’ve left… We need someplace more secure… Someplace to stay so Jenny can find us…” Her expression remained purposeful, even as her eyes darted to consider the options. When she spoke again, it was not a suggestion. “We should go back to your apartment!”

Good gods. Tara’s going to have her hands full.

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Somehow, they made it back upstairs. It was slow going. Willow had to wedge her small body underneath Kera’s good arm and got the woman back on her feet. Clearing her mind, she reached into the quiet time to find the way to give Kera some strength. It was getting easier and easier to go there, to ask for and receive the power, straight from the Cosmic, even for a friend. Kera gasped as she felt it, raw, fill her, threatening to stop her heart, but Willow tightened her grip on the older witch and it grounded her until it settled inside her. Then they started the long journey back upstairs with the borrowed power.

The tears didn’t come until after Kera had lost consciousness on the ruins of her bed. Willow fought through them, wiping them from her face as they fell. She wasn’t aware that by the time she’d done her best to perform the healing spell, tighten the tourniquet around the woman’s arm, exhaust the contents of the med kit long before she got through even half the major cuts on the witch’s body, her own face was a bloody war mask streaked with flesh-colored swaths where her tears had cut paths through the blood she’d unwittingly smeared onto her face as she wiped the sweat away. She just finished checking for Kera’s pulse--faint, oh so faint, but real, nonetheless, when the muffled ring of the witch’s phone startled her. She fished it out of the pocket of the woman’s skirt with trembling hands and accepted the call.

“Tara?

Willow did not answer the woman’s voice.

“Willow?”

“Y-Yes.”

“Willow, where’s Tara? Is she…” Jenny stopped, unable to continue.

“She’s here! She’s still alive! She went to sleep.” Willow bent over Kera’s body and felt the relief flood her tiny being as she noted the continued slow rise and fall of her protector’s chest. “She’s still breathing, I can see her. Her arm and leg are hurt real bad. She bled a lot. She’s been unconscious about five minutes. I-I did a… did a healing spell, and I think the blood stopped a little, but maybe it’s only because she already lost a lot. Should I try to wake her up?”

Jenny was momentarily stunned as the fact that Willow tried to do a healing spell. How far had Tara gone with “first contact?” Unless she had to… She shook her head to snap herself out of it, and finally let out her breath. “Good. That’s good, Willow. Yes, shake her a little, see if she’ll wake up.”

Tentatively, Willow prodded Kera at her shoulder. The woman moaned a little, but her eyes did not open. “She’s not waking! But she’s still breathing.”

“It’s okay, Willow. She’s probably too weak to respond. Just stay with her. My name is Jenny. I was the one who was talking to Tara a little while ago. I wanted you to know that we sent someone to you, who’ll help you both. Her name is Catherine Madison, okay?”

“O-Okay.”

“Catherine will be there really soon, then she’ll see to Tara, and take you both the rest of the way back here. She’s about Tara’s age, taller, with shoulder-length brown wavy hair, okay? When she arrives, ask her for her name, and if she doesn’t give it to you, I want you to run, get away to someplace where there’s people, any way you can, okay?”

“W-What about Ms. Ma--uh, Tara?”

Jenny paused a second. “If you have to run and she’s not awake, you’ll have to leave her there, okay? She’ll be fine.” The anguish in Jenny’s voice made that lie transparent. “She… she said you had monsters following you? Can you explain?”

“There’s a man, he was at my house earlier, after a demon killed my mom. He-He had his own demon, though, a golem, Ms. Mack called it, and they killed the one that killed my mom and he’s been chasing us since. I don’t know how they followed us here, but they did, and-and they-he-it tried to kill Ms. Mack, but we got away.” Willow finally took a breath. “They think we left, so… they left, too,” she finished with a shuddering sob.

Huh, huh, and huh? Jenny took a deep breath herself. “O-Okay… So they’re not chasing you now. Do you… do you know where you are? Exactly?”

“We came back upstairs. We’re in Ms. Mack’s apartment.”

“You are? But I don’t… ” They weren’t registering on her terminal screen. Confused, Jenny ran the information Tara had been feeding the Coven about Willow’s abilities, mystic and mundane, through her racing mind. She recalled that in the first few weeks of contact, something about Willow masked her mystical signature from Tara’s usually expert Talent. “You’re good with computers--electronic devices, right?”

“Y-Yes.”

“Good. Hold onto the phone. If you need to leave Tara, if that happens, take the phone with you, leave it on, so I can track you that way, okay?”

“O-Okay.”

“I’m going now, but remember to keep the phone on, and nearby.”

Jenny clicked off. Willow looked at the phone in her small hand, and considered her options. Next to her, she watched Kera’s chest rise and fall with her shallow, labored breaths. Hesitating only a second more, she dialed 9-1-1 and hit ‘send.’

***

Ethan ran into his Golem’s backside as they spilled out of the building entrance. The mindless thing had hesitated then stopped altogether as soon as it got outside and felt the warmth of the early day sun’s rays. Ethan hissed in pain at the jolt. “Don’t be such a baby!” he said and slapped it in the area of the small of its back in reproach. He hissed again as his hand caught the edge of one of its metal plates and stung fiercely. He took the lead again past his servant into the parking lot where the witch’s car was, expecting to find the space empty.

Which it was not. The scratched and dented wreck was sitting in its space in the lot.

“Bloody hell!” He looked around, but saw nothing. They could be hiding in the area, or they could have left by other means altogether. He trembled with frustration. Twice in the past twelve hours, he’d almost had his Master’s prize. The rewards to him would have been--

No. The rewards to him would be beyond reason. Still. And after some patch-up work with his favorite apothecary-slash-plastic-surgeon, he’d enjoy them to their wicked fullest.

Besides, he didn’t want to think of what Chaos would do to him if he failed--didn’t want to, but really couldn’t help it. He imagined that in his master’s current worldly manifestation, even separated from his home dimension and true source of power, the demon could easily debone Ethan, possibly alive, use his bones to make himself some furniture for his lair, and hang up his meatbag on the wall for decoration and set piece to address an occasional dramatic monologue.

Ethan shook his head. Those years in the drama club at Oxford really weren’t handy at times like these. For a second, he regretted not taking the Sight further than yesterday evening two weeks ago. Perhaps he could have foreseen the outcome of this little venture, a way to have ensured quicker success… But only for a second. He’d already just about passed out from the pain the little the Master had subjected him to had brought…

No, no need to get all misty-eyed with regret over past oversights and misfortunes. Ethan pulled his somewhat only slightly charred cell phone from the lining of his jacket to call Jonathan for a new lead as to where the witches could have gone, as he had yesterday. Perhaps he had other information from the tapped line. It certainly paid to have technically minded friends. Or flunkies. He flipped open his phone.

The earpiece flew lazily in a rainbow arc through the air and landed three meters away with a crash on the parking lot asphalt. Pieces of metal and plastic debris ejected from the point of impact to form the perimeter of a miniature disaster circle.

“Bloody hell,” he sighed.

But then, he heard a loud voice behind him, and turned. There was a woman, not too unusual, that, but behind her, something else. Something… shimmery. His curious expression soon turned to a wicked smile. Perhaps his luck was changing.

***

Catherine grunted as she was spat out of the makeshift emergency portal Calendar had hastily set up with a wet noise. It sounded disturbingly like a fart. She landed on her backside with a final “oomph!” in the middle of what appeared to be an apartment complex parking lot. Gods, she hated Calendar’s portals, and using this one had been particularly dodgy. More than once after suspiciously entering its threshold, she’s thought about turning around and going back to the Coven to finish her breakfast, give Calendar some time to test it and make sure it was safe and didn’t end up in the middle of Old New Jersey or some other screwed up place. It was still just a little after dawn and the sunlight was weak, but it was already warm. She’d forgotten about California summers and undid the buttons of her jacket. Maclay was nowhere in sight. She picked herself up and dusted herself off, and glanced once more at the shimmering, roughly rectangular mercurial portal with suspicious eyes. “Great job, Calendar,” she muttered. “I love working with amateurs.” At least it seemed somewhat stable.

She fished out the telephone from her handbag and dialed in.

Before she said a word, Calendar was shouting in her ear. “Upstairs! In the apartment building! 12D!”

Catherine held the phone away from her ear defensively. Even so, she could hear Calendar’s directions quite clearly.

“Remember, be careful, there’s someone or something--”

She shouted back, still holding the phone well away from her face. “Get a grip, Calendar! I heard you, 12D!” She shoved the phone back into her pocket, the earpiece still buzzing as Calendar continued her rant, as she headed for the apartment complex entrance. “Jeez! You couldn’t put me in any closer?” she muttered.

“12D? Why, I believe that’s where we were heading,” a British voice interrupted her as she crossed the threshold of the outer door.

The quip to put him back in his place died on Catherine’s lips as she turned to look at the dirty man with no eyebrows and the filthy clothes. Hobos she could deal with. But the thing behind him…? She screamed and ran to the elevator. She jabbed at the call button several times but there were no lights to indicate it was working. She raced to the stairwell, flung the door open, and launched herself upstairs.

“The stairs then? Why, I suppose if we must.” Ethan stepped aside to let his Golem ahead of him back into the building.

***

Catherine Madison had never run so far and so fast in all her life, even when she had worked as an aerobics instructor after her glory days as high school head cheerleader at Modesto Public High had ended with her inevitable graduation. Behind her, she heard the demon and the human slowly, noisily grinding their way up behind her. She sprinted up to the twelfth floor in under a minute, giving her enough time to catch her breath and gather her wits about her. Goddamn Calendar and goddamn Cylla, sending her to face that thing down there with just the vaguest of warnings! In fact, they’d probably done it on purpose, just to get rid of her… She had been growing too powerful, had been asserting herself too much in the gathering of Coven masters and elders lately… This was surely an attempt to rid themselves of their greatest rival and threat to their authority. Well, she would show them!

Power came easy to Catherine. It always had, from the time she was ten and learned that she could do things that no one else could--odd things that couldn’t be logically explained. First push objects with the force of her mind. Then, eventually, push people with the force of her will. Then when she found there was a name for her power, and books that could teach you even more… well, look out, world! This bitch is a witch… She had joined the Coven to increase her opportunities to learn more--and also for a place conducive to training her little girl, Amy, to take her rightful place by Catherine’s side when the time came.

She had favorite spells, ones she perfected and could call, even in the most difficult and pressure-filled situations. This time surely qualified.

She waited until the demon was just a couple of floors below her before she started casting a doozy of a spell, one of her best, that would’ve ripped the thing’s head off, if it had had one. As it came up just underneath her, she unleashed the power that had been building through her frame. The air around her whooshed and she reveled with the glorious feel of it, as the power ran through her, outwards, and hit the ugly monstrosity square in the chest.

Catherine watched, a satisfied smile on her lips, as the thing tumbled backward, head--uh, shoulders over heels, over and over. She quickly lost sight of it as it tumbled a good 4 or 5 flights at least before the repeated cacophony of thumping and crashing stopped. A lighter set of irregular footsteps followed, getting louder, then stopped themselves. “What the bloody hell are you doing here on your back? Get up! Get up!”

She hesitated, before she heard the heavy footfalls start up again. With a shriek, she turned and left the stairwell onto the twelfth floor, to the door marked ‘12 D.’ She threw herself at it and screamed, “Let me in! Let me in!”

***

Willow heard the banging and the shouting and hurried to the door before pausing at it, hesitantly. It shook as whoever was on the other side was pounding on it pretty ferociously. Not monster ferociously, though. “Who-Who is it?”

“It’s Catherine Madison, godsdammit! Who were you expecting? Fifteen minute pizza?”

Willow unbolted the door and Catherine pushed in past her, knocking her to the floor before spinning round and slamming the door shut and throwing the deadbolt. Catherine spun around, a wild look in her eye, before glancing down at the little girl sprawled on the floor. “Oh. Sorry!” Catherine wasn’t a monster, for all her impatient and haughty nature, and for all of being a bit frazzled at almost caught and done gods-knows-what to by a hideous, headless demon. She helped Willow up. But rather than letting her hand go like any normal child would do, Willow grasped it more firmly and began tugging her down the hallway. “Come on! Ms. Ma--uh, Tara’s this way! What took you so long?”

Catherine kept her mouth shut, mostly out of shock, as Willow pulled her into a room in the back, a huge hole in the wall to the left caught her eye first, then the mattress on the floor. Maclay was on the mattress, and it was not a pretty sight. “Gods, Maclay…” she breathed, instantly sobering.

Willow ran to Kera’s side and knelt next to her. She gently, tenderly, took the woman’s hand into both of her own. “Ms. Mack! Wake up! Your friend’s here! She’s going to help us!”

Catherine knelt on Kera’s other side. Maclay’s eyes opened and she peered up at the other woman. “Catherine?”

“Maclay! There’s not much time. I’ve been tracked by a demon. And there was a man…”

“We met,” Kera said with a pained smile. It quickly faded. “They’re tracking you?”

“They’ll be here any second. They, uh, must’ve seen my portal open up, then they chased me up here, up the stairs. They were right behind me, maybe a minute or two at the most.”

Kera paused a moment, considering. “Where’s the portal?”

Catherine grimaced. “In the parking lot. Calendar couldn’t get it any closer…”

She closed her eyes. Up until now, she still had hoped… When her eyes opened a second later, they were perfectly clear, her voice resigned. “You’ve got to get Willow there.”

“You’re coming too!” Willow interjected.

Kera squeezed her hand, though Catherine ignored her. “Is there another way out?”

Kera pointed with her eyes toward the hole in the wall. “Wait ‘til they’re inside, then leave through the other apartment. Willow can help. She’s smart--brilliant, in fact, and she’s got a lot of power,” she smiled with affection at her small friend.

Catherine looked at the scrawny girl skeptically a moment before her expression hardened. “Gods, Tara. Why didn’t you just stow her someplace and get yourself taken care of first? You know you weren’t the one they were after.”

Willow gasped.

“Catherine Madison,” Kera said, her blue eyes turning dark and stormy before Catherine’s. “Keep your mouth shut and listen well. You will protect Willow with your life. Before she’s harmed in the slightest, you will sacrifice your own well-being, to your very own miserable existence, to get her back to the Coven, safe and secure. Once there, Jenny will tend to her, and only then will your responsibilities in her regard end, with my thanks.”

Catherine sat back, stunned, as the words bore through her, her mouth open at the force of the directive. Maclay had used her Talent on her… Maclay, head of the weak and useless empathic branch of the Coven witches... “Where…” Catherine gasped, “where… did you get that power?”

Kera fell back to the mattress, weary again. She squeezed Willow’s hand again, but with much less force. “Borrowed. But it’s time to give it back.” She turned her head to Willow. “You’ve been keeping me here with you, sweetie, I know. And I’ve enjoyed the time I spent with you, my friend, but we’ve got different places to go now, and you have someone special to meet. Remember your promise. Thank you for showing me the Cosmic.”

“Kera…” The name ended with a wail.

“We’ll do one last spell together, baby. To remember me by. It’s a good luck spell.” She squeezed Willow’s hand once more.

The warmth and emotion swept through Willow in a mad rush through their joined hands, through its tail end to a whisper so bittersweet, leaving her stunned and Kera fading fast.

The walls shuddered as something rammed into the door. “They’re here…” Kera said, weakly. She turned to Catherine, under her power. “Now GO!”

Catherine had recovered just enough to pick up Willow by the waist, who fought through the haze of the sharing then the pain of the severed connection to wail and howl that Catherine needed to set her down and pick up Kera instead, that she would find a way to do it, all she needed was Kera’s help, to put up a barrier, set the building on fire, set the sorcerer on fire, anything, but don’t leave her there alone--

The walls continued to shudder with each loud boom! Catherine’s directive was clear. She pulled Willow, legs and fists swinging in the air, through the hole in the wall, past the sliced up remains of Mr. de la Cruz, through the hallway identical to the one in Kera’s apartment. She paused at the door, setting Willow, sobbing hysterically, down but grasping her by the arm to hold her fast, until the wall gave a last mighty shudder. She waited a few seconds more, and opened the door. Then they were flying down the stairs, out of the stairwell enclosure, out the exterior doors, out into the parking lot, to the portal, through it, to the Coven.

***

Ethan stood back impatiently as his Golem threw its shoulder into the door once more. This had been far easier the first time, when the fool in the adjacent apartment had just opened the door after he had politely knocked. Finally, the door opened explosively inward. He gestured his Golem to precede him into the apartment--cautiously, as he certainly didn’t want another repeat of the last fiasco that had taken place here. He trailed a good three meters behind his proxy as they made their way once more down the hall to the bedroom. His Golem moved to the side upon entering the room, making way for him and signaling the room was clear.

“Willow, my sweet, are you hiding in--? Ethan looked down at the bloody mattress, at the blonde witch, absolutely bathed in blood and from the looks of it, quite dead. He crouched over her, and He then recalled the path his Golem had taken to gain entrance the last time. He looked up at the hole in the wall. “Oh, bloody hell! The witch--”

“Is no longer a witch, but still very much a bitch,” Kera said. She was sitting up on the mattress, though looking like she’d slump over with a stiff breeze. She held the cocked pistol, shakily, to his head. “With a gun,” she added. “I’m not liking your odds.”

Ethan thought fast. “Now now, love, that wouldn’t be very smart, considering you kill me, my associate goes free.” He motioned with his hand, out of Kera’s field of vision as she focused her attention on holding the barrel of the pistol pressed against the skin of Ethan’s temple. The Golem slowly approached. “I’m his conscience, you know. He’s a wild thing inside, and all he knows right now is he has to find our little Willow, any way he can… Could very well take out the entire building, and then some, without me to restrain him.”

Kera smiled crookedly. “Lesser of two evils, darling. Too bad it usually comes down to that, huh?” She pulled the trigger and the room lit up with an eerie blue light before all went black.

Ethan had lied. Without a mind of its own, his Master’s enchantment was broken and the half-life the Golem had been infused with fled with Ethan’s in a brilliant blaze of eldritch glory. It stumbled onto its short knees, then keeled over next to its dead master. The released energy was deadly poison to all in its range, though Kera had already departed, her heart physically stopped, from massive blood loss just moments before.

***

Willow watched through the portal as the ambulance finally arrived, lights flashing, but no siren. Whether that was because she was now at Kera’s Coven and looking back at her old world through a mystical portal, or whether that was because the emergency vehicle really hadn’t used its siren at that time of the morning for a wellness call, she couldn’t say. The tears were still cascading down her face and there was a constant roar in her ears that made seeing or hearing anything difficult, much less making sense of any of it.

Next to her, Catherine lay on her back, groaning and gasping for air after the carry and sprint she’d just completed, the vacant look in her eyes slowly starting to fade for her signature pissed-off look instead.

Approaching from 100 meters away or so, three figures were making their way toward them. Two were running, the other hurrying, but with a pronounced limp. As they came near, Willow saw that one was a woman, early in her 30s or so, with dark hair and dark eyes. Her horrified expression was incongruous to her pretty face when she saw only two figures had emerged from the portal.

“Jenny.”

Jenny then tried to hold the other running figure back, a girl, in her teens. Even from a distance, Willow saw she had long, dirty blonde hair, a slightly crooked nose, pretty, full lips, and Kera’s beautiful dark blue eyes, but they were wide in panic.

“Baby girl.”

Leda broke free from Jenny’s grasp and ran straight up to Willow, falling to her knees next to the smaller girl. “W-W-W-Where is she? W-Where’s m-m-my m-mother?” she demanded.

Willow could say nothing. The words were all caught inside her throat. She turned back to the portal to watch the emergency crew jump out of the vehicle and rush inside the apartment building doors, just as Jenny reached the two of them kneeling on the grassy field before the shimmering window of the portal.

“Willow… honey, you have to let the portal close. It’s a two-way door. I didn’t have enough time to mask it properly. You have to close it, before one of them sees it…”

She was transfixed, waiting for a glimpse of the crew returning, returning to their vehicle with a stretcher or a gurney. And maybe the sheet wouldn’t be over the occupant’s head…

“Sweetheart, let go. You need to let go…”

“NOOOOO!” Leda was hysterical, tears streaming down her face.

Willow turned to her, helplessly, and the portal slammed closed.

The grief twisted to fury. Leda sprung up, Willow falling backwards onto her back as the older girl stood over her a moment, glaring angrily down. But then she turned and started to run, without a goal, but just to run.

Jenny hesitated. Both girls needed her, she couldn’t choose just one.

Cylla finally reached them, leaning heavily on her cane. “Go to Leda, Jenny,”

Jenny nodded tersely to her superior, acquiescing to the soft order. Then she was off, after the older girl.

Cylla acknowledged Catherine with a slight nod and grim smile, then maneuvered her bad leg, which was stiff and inflexible, to lower herself onto the grass next to the small, shaking, weeping redheaded child, her face and hands streaked with dried blood. “Hello, Willow,” she said softly. “My name is Cylla. You are welcome to stay here, at the Coven, for as long as you need or like.”

***

“Shit! I thought we were here for a nine-year old girl. Nobody said anything about a level 1 HST. The fucker’s huge,” the young, brown-haired EMT eyed the massive, armor plated demon body skeptically. He kicked at its arm with the toe of his steel-tipped boot. The thing didn’t move even a little. “I don’t think it’d even fit in our rig.”

Crouching down over the blood stained mattress, his partner, an older, heavier set man with salt and pepper hair and deep-set eyes looked up from the bloody mess of the two human bodies before him. He had a slight Irish brogue, “well, I guess we won’t know that until we actually try to fit it inside, now, won’t we?”

The younger man stopped from lighting his cigarette at his partner’s pointed remark. “What? Are you kidding me? That’s not in the contract! We’re not getting paid to clean up after two humans and a L1 HST!”

Irish looked into the other room through the hole in the wall. “It’s three humans, not two. And you’re right. It’s not in the contract. But we’ll do it anyway, because that’s the type of on-demand service we provide to our employer, who you’ll remember pays us well--very well, in fact, all things considered. Hell, the Boss is going to hit the roof as it is that we missed the girl a second time. Now how do you think she’ll react when we leave this place like this, and the local and territorial news start their 24-hour feeds of the Sunnydale massacre, and the oh so provable existence of real fucking demons and hellgods on earth?”

His young partner grunted in displeasure as he put his cigarette pack and lighter away to begin the job. “Fine! But you’re taking the HST. I’ll take the regular bodies.”

His partner smirked at having his way, but it faded from his face just a moment later. The Boss really would lose her already tenuous grasp on her prodigious temper when she heard that they had lost Rosenberg again. But he was only a soldier. It was his boss, Morgan, who would have to do all the explaining, groveling, and quite possibly bleeding to get her mood back right. Or at least out of sitcon kill-any-lackey-in-the-immediate-area-to-make-yourself-feel-better. Well, too bad about the girl, but what could Glory do except try to be patient? These things sometimes took time. After all, Rosenberg couldn’t hide from her fate forever.

He grunted as he straightened to his feet, then turned to the massive body he would have to deal with. Shit, Lindsey was right. This thing wouldn’t fit in the vehicle they’d brought. He might need to chop it up to make the job easier… He’d need the chainsaw he kept in the large toolbox down in their vehicle. He walked out of the apartment closing the door on his still muttering partner and headed for the elevator, which was the first thing they got working again, to go back to their rig to retrieve the tool.

No, indeed, he concluded as the elevator slowly descended. You can’t run from the beast that’s your Destiny. The best you could do was grab hold on to it with both hands and hang on for the ride.

***
END – THE COVEN, PROLOGUE: WITCH MACLAY
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:kitty wow good update...no great update really great you should write books this is so good i can't wait for more.

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Hello, Binky! I thought I'd write to let you know that I'm reading your story. I haven't been keeping count, but I think we've already passed the half dozen :P

I'm more of a lurker than a poster, but after reading one of your responses I felt I had to let you know I'm really enjoying it. Seems like a really small payback for all the work and planning your story must've taken, so thank you very much for sharing it here.

Yes, it is a nasty world you've created, but that's not a bad thing. How boring would literature be if it was restricted to only portraying good people in utopic societies? Although maybe that's just my opinion. Something we might have in common, besides favourites such as Brazil and 12 monkeys ;)

But how unreal it would be, too, this literature of perfection. Because as things stand today, I agree with you completely: in a few decades, this world may very well be a reality, at least in the less magical aspects.

I can't tell you how glad I am that you are willing to write for the (lucky) few that are willing to read. And that it's just the prologue too! So there's much more ahead...

I'm sorry if my post is maybe a little silly, so full of compliments and in agreement with everything you've said so far, but really, that's all I have. As for constructive critiscism... I'll leave that to the other writers, who will have worthy advice and such. I'm just a happy reader here!

I'll be looking foward for your updates.

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Holy Shit Binky.

That was a f*cking *brilliant* set up!

Holy cr*p in a handbasket, batman.

You have a great imagination. Dude. I am in love with this story... and in love with they dynamic you just set up - between Willow, Tara, Jenny and the various enemies out there... this is going to be one hell of a ride.

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Wow, very interesting and exciting story, and of course, sad. Can't wait to read the continuation.


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First off I'd like to say that it was in no way intended as a criticism when I said you'd created a nasty world. I too, am a fan of fiction like Blade Runner, showing us the future of a world gone mad on commerce. I think you've created an amazing, scary, intriguing world and enacted some great drama in the struggle of the various powers to snare Willlow.

I think it's very clever the way you've taken the Wolfram & Hart model and set Glory and the other major evils up in corporate sheepskins. I was gripped by the way the veneer of normality of Willow's life cracked and finally crumbled as supernatural evil rose up around her.

I like Mrs Mack - very human in her weaknesses and doubts, and her compassion and strength, becoming super-human in her protection of Willow. Young Willow is showing exceptional qualities, both human and as a witch. Will this traumatic experience temper or spoil her mettle?

This is quite a rollercoaster of a story, and I'm here for the ride.
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OMG! This is so good. It's like, old school good. Classic. Best W/T I've read in years, and it's only the prologue. Thank you so much.


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Great prologue, you've set all the pieces on the board in a very interesting fashion. Willow's had a very shocking and tragic introduction to what seems to be her destiny - and Tara (the real Tara) has had a supremely traumatic introduction to Willow, which should provide some serious bumpy angst in their future relationship. And the mix of classic Buffy foes, Glory et al, with a much more solid and realistic corporate villainy, makes for a compelling world - it's demons by way of Alias, with a heavy dose of The X Files' "trust no-one".

I'm sad to see Mrs Mack meet her end - but she kicked arse, and went down swinging, despite having to deal with the mental image of her daughter and her current charge indulging in heavy making-out :blush Touches of humour like that really humanised her, and the whole prologue in fact.

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When I first started to to read this story which was only a an hour or two ago I already knew that I was going to like it, if for no other reason than the fact that it had a long plot line. I love long plot lines :blush and in my opinion the longer the plot line the better

But I can honestly tell you with out a doubt in my mind that this story is better than I could have ever imaged it being and I can only see it better as the story progress. It is so good that I am not upset with that much for killing off two of my favorite chapters from the prologue. Those would be Mrs Mack, of course I mean how could you not love her and Ethan Rayne, who despite being an evil twit in the story I can not help but love him :blush .

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Hello!

I just read the whole prologue on Trough the Looking-glass last night, and I have to say that I am totally hooked by your story, since I finished reading at 2:30 a.m... :-D :-D :-D Thank you for that, I love it when I just CAN'T stop reading!

It's only the prologue, and there are so many things to say...First of all, I loved the character of Tara's mom, her personnality, her language. A character like that sure deserved such a prologue! The universe you've created concentrates much darkness, that's true, combined with funny moments ( the phone discussion between Tara and Jenny). I really like the atmosphere that it gives to the story. I also love to see other characters from the Buffyverse, so here with Jenny, Xander, the Council, well, I'm glad! :tooth

I can't wait to read what will come next, and how you will develop the story. It's good to know that you have a long plot and that you know where you are going with this, because I want to know!! ;-)

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Hello, Binky. I'm just writing to let you know I hope you haven't decided against cotinuing your story, it would really be our loss :P
Sorry to bump!
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Hey all,

Many, many thanks to Bug, WolfDragonGod, Ana, db, Wimpy, Anne, noho, Chris, Diana, and Halo--db and WDG especially, for being there cheering on after each installment. You two rock! And make me feel guilty I haven’t done the same for my favorite stories here. I suck!

Ana, I will definitely be continuing this story, thank you for asking. I was surprised to find this in the middle of page 1 again. I only pop in occasionally and was getting a perverse pleasure from it almost dropping to page 2. But page 1 is nicer, so thanks for the bump. I’ve been here at the KB, but on and off and more involved (i.e., distracted) with other hobbies. Plus the HP book came in, so of course I just had to re-read the previous 6 before starting the last, and… well, you know how it is.

But this story will continue, come hell or high water! I have designed it so that each act that follows will be a mini-story all its own, but will pave the way to the next. That way, I will be able to tackle the overall story in stages and mitigate any damage if my will/enthusiasm ebbs after just one or two acts. Of course, my overall goal is to get Willow and Tara together, reasonably safe and deliriously happy in love and lust, which will probably take three acts at least. But for now, I believe I got enough of a running start with this prologue (and all your encouraging reactions to it, thank you all again) to go forward with Act I, which I’ve already plotted and began writing. I am going to post a teaser in a couple of weeks just to drum up more business before Act I begins, likely at the end of this month/the beginning of September. See ya then!

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Oh Yay!

I am so pleased that you are going to continue!

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I am very happy to hear that you are going to continue with the story and I can not wait for the next part :party


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Hello, kittens.

It's been a while but I'm back with the first bit of the first act of this story. It's called Mentor and will pick up right after the events of the Prologue: Witch Maclay and will cover the next couple of years of the story. Please see the first post of this thread for notes/warnings/etc.

Since it's been a while since I posted the prologue, you may want to read through it again. I have gone through it and made all corrections so it is current. It is, however, on the long side, so if you'd prefer here's a summary:

It's 2079 and the world is a slightly different place than the one you and I know. The technological/capitalist hegemony begun with the modern Industrial Revolution in the 19th century has been attained. The whole world is one large global market, though still bearing traces of regional variance from when nations/countries were the main type of social stratification. Since then, Megacorporations have become the de facto ruling classes, while individual and family management/mechanics-programmers form the middle and working classes. The purpose of governmental bodies is pretty much to enable commerce/establish standard corporate governance rules. Education is primarily job training for management and laborers (i.e., individuals, prior to joining the Corporate in whatever capacity they best serve in). In this world, there are demon dimensions known to a select few and several of the more powerful demons look to the human world for its various resources--and vice versa.

Willow is 9.5 years old and lives in Sunnydale, old Cali Her best friend is 11 year old Xander. She's a prodigy, super smart to the genius level.

Tara is 35 years old, was married to Tom Maclay, and has a 14.5 year old daughter named Leda. They left Tom when Leda was 6 years old to join the Coven. Tara's best friend is Jenny Calendar. The Coven is led by a senior witch named Cylla. The Coven and a similar organization, the Watchers Council, are aware of the presence of demons in the world. The Coven has taken an isolationist stance against the non-magical world while the Watchers Council have taken a more active role in monitoring the increasing demon infestation. A prophecy from a 17th century mystic named Artaggio claims that the end of the world will come when the demon Ka'as eventually uses a human to completely breach his dimension and enslave the human population to become master of his own Hell. The Coven's seers have determined that Willow will be this human and have dispatched Tara to keep an eye on her. The Watchers, headed by Rupert Giles, have also determined the high probability Willow would become the human agent in the prophecy and suspicious of the Coven's motives, sent their own agent, Robin Wood, to watch both Tara and Willow.

Tara establishes a rapport with Willow and almost by accident helps her unlock her previously latent powers as a witch. This causes several factions, both human and demon and cooperatives of both, to become aware of and target Willow.

Everything comes to a head on one day when several of these parties converge in Sunnydale to 'acquire' Willow for their own by any means necessary, making instant enemies of their rivals and putting the Rosenbergs squarely in the middle of their contest. Willow's mother is killed, her father is kidnapped. Wood’s whereabouts are also unknown. Several of the parties cancel each other out, leaving Ka'as' human agent, Ethan Rayne, as the main threat against Willow. Tara and Willow attempt to flee to the Coven. In the process, Tara and Ethan kill each other, but Willow is delivered to the Coven and temporary sanctuary.

Act I, Mentor, picks up here.

Willow and Leda join Jenny Calendar's household at the Coven. But will the Megacorps and Ka'as leave Willow alone? How will Leda ever accept Willow after losing her mother? Will the police catch Sheila's killer? What happened to Ira and Wood? And what’s with that sexy nightmare Tara had that started this whole mess?

I hope you enjoy it. Comments are welcome whether you do or just want to offer some (hopefully friendly) advice.

Updates will probably be spaced a week to ten days apart, and will likely be relatively short. But that’ll just give those of you who didn’t read the prologue some time to do so, right?

Now on with the show…

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The Coven
ACT I: Mentor
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ACT I: Mentor
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Three months later…

“M-My name is Leda, of the Coven. I w-w-was born fifteen years ago today, the daughter of Kera and Thomas M-Maclay.”

Mama is dead. She died saving someone else’s daughter… Why? Why would she do such a thing? Why would she leave me alone? For a stranger? For her? Gods, Mama…

I don’t know Thomas Maclay. I don’t remember him. Not enough to know him from any other stranger in a crowd.

“I claim my birthright today. Kera w-was known as Tara, and so w-will I be known, as Kera’s daughter.”

Her only child. Not the other one, the one she died for.

“M-My name is Tara, o-once known as Leda. Tara, of the Coven.”

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In other news, the WTRC cleared stage one of the definitive merger agreement filed by Glory Enterprises (GLE) in its acquisition of data management firm Mirage Technologies (MCM:MIRTC). Mirage was most recently in the news for the disappearance of CEO and major stake owner Ethan Rayne, who has yet to be located since late July, well preceding the Form 10 filing for Glory’s takeover bid last month. Rayne’s disappearance is not considered suspicious, as the flamboyant executive has made a reputation for himself as prone to highly unorthodox maneuvers. Previous unexplained extended absences have been noted on his career record at Mirage and previously City Corp, though his current absence could not have come at a more inopportune time for the data services and security corporation. In his absence, CFO Roger D’Hoffryn has been the frontline corporate officer with talks with Glory. The deal is still subject to a Mirage shareowner vote to take place in December.


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Two months earlier…

Riley Finn, promoted to the detective squad of the Sunnydale Police Department a scant two-and-a-half weeks ago looked forward to his day. He always began it the right way, with fifty push-ups and fifty sit-ups to keep up his American Gladiator: TNG™ physique and a bowl of whole grain cereal and 2% milk. With his metabolism and his steadfast commitment to his morning routine he could actually get away with whole milk, but why indulge when the 2% tasted just fine? No need to, just for the sake of it. By the time he got to the precinct house every morning, he almost always had a boyish grin on his face and a friendly nod for the desk sergeant. Today had started out like most mornings—great. Excellent, even. Riley had no complaints. The only downside was the run-in with Angel, one of the senior detectives who for some reason beyond Riley’s comprehension seemed resentful of Riley’s natural good humor. At least his partner Wes was civil, even if he did, like the other detectives, ignore the rookie more often than not. But Riley would show them he belonged. All it would take was hard, honest work, and maintaining a good attitude about everything. This morning, Riley had just tightened his grin at Angel’s scowl and rude comment and went on his way.

Once at his desk, he pulled the file folder from his “open cases” box, the very first he’d been assigned when he made detective, and looked once more at his carefully ordered notes.

The case involved a vehicle, previously registered to a Mr. Robin Wood, 32, school librarian at the Sunnydale Elementary and high school, who had not been seen for the past five weeks. The car had only been reported three days ago by a disgruntled tenant at the south side apartment complex; it had been parked too close to his own space in the resident’s lot, hadn’t been moved in weeks, and what’s more, was an eyesore, even for the somewhat rundown working class neighborhood. If not for the complaint about the vehicle, Wood’s disappearance could very well have remained unreported. He had joined the school staff just about six months earlier as a mid-year addition, and the school had just returned from a two-week summer break and had not thought to alert the authorities that Mr. Wood had not returned to his position at the onset of the new semester—educational careers didn’t pay a lot, especially considering the collapse of the pension system in the late twentieth century, and the churn for non-tenured employees was high.

Riley had gone down to the abandoned vehicle himself to break it down the day he caught the case. It was a late model red NDC sedan, and so it was highly unusual it had been in the condition he found it in. At his first visual inspection, he thought it had been vandalized by local homeless or youth gangs, of which Sunnydale unfortunately had its fair share. But upon closer inspection, he realized that most of the damage had been inflicted while the car had been in motion.

The doors had not been locked, but the driver side took a little forcing as a sidewall dent had caused the internal mechanics to shift slightly. It was a little awkward pulling the door open with the rubber gloves on, but being well-muscled helped. Once he had the door open, he immediately recoiled after sticking his head just inside, reacting to the strong odor. Covering his nose with a handkerchief (he always kept a clean one handy), he again checked the interior, and immediately noticed the blood…

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Six months later…


Fifteen-year old Buffy Summers parted company from the gaggle of her new friends who continued away from Sunnydale High School, where Buffy was re-starting her high school career anew after a transfer in from her previous public high school, Hemery High in LA Old Cali due to an unfortunate incident with a fire at the school gymnasium that had been totally not her fault.

She had gone two blocks when she felt the presence behind her of someone trailing her too closely. She was still three blocks from Revello Drive and the house she, her mother Joyce, and bratty baby sister Dawn had moved in to just three weeks earlier. Rounding the corner, she ducked into a narrow alley between two houses.

The schmuck who had been following her—rather ineptly, she thought—was 1.6 meters tall, fairly young, probably in his mid-twenties, with a shifty look to his face and blond hair that stuck up at the front as if he’d just woken up from siesta. He was dressed in blue jeans, a windbreaker, and dirty trainers.

Mr. Clueless walked right on past and continued for a good 10 meters or so, before realizing that his target had somehow disappeared and he had lost her. In a panic, Andrew spun around, to find said target standing, arms akimbo, on the sidewalk he’d just traversed, her cell phone in hand. “See this? I just keyed in 9-1-1-red, and I’m about to hit ‘SEND’ unless you give me a good reason not to.” She blew a bubble, then sucked it back into her mouth.

Sure enough, the emergency-alert light was flashing, indicating the phone’s readiness to send a homing signal along with the 9-1-1 call to the area law enforcement agencies, unleashing within two minutes the jackbooted local and state thugs to rain fire down on his poor head. He cringed. His super-stealthy sleuthing mission was already thoroughly foiled! On day 1 no less! Mr. Giles wouldn’t be pleased. “Oh, don’t call the cops! Please! It’s alright, Buffy! I’m not here to harm you—on the contrary! I’ve been sent to help you!”

“How’d you know my name?” Buffy’s eyes narrowed. “My Dad didn’t send you, did he? Cause if he did, can you remind him he’s a little behind on the child support?” She blew another bubble with her gum and let it pop on her strawberry-lipgloss-flavored lips. “Mom might be too proud to ask, but I’m overdue for a trip to the mall, as you can see…” She looked the young man up and down again. “Or maybe not. Any hoo, I can use Dawn’s money, too. She’ll end up trying to ‘borrow’ whatever I buy, anyway.”

Andrew shook his head. “I haven’t been sent by your Dad, Buffy. Oh no. Far from it. I represent an organization called the Watcher’s Council.” Andrew tried to smile encouragingly, but held the smile a second too long, until it became awkward. “We, uh, watch things. And we’ve been watching you!” he finished brightly, if lamely.

“Oooookay.” Buffy shifted to her other foot. “You do know that that sounds way creepy, don’t you? Don’t take this the wrong way, ‘cause I mean it as encouragement, really, but aren’t you a little too young to do ‘dirty old man?’ You should give it another five years before you throw in the towel like this.” Pop!

Twenty-five year old Andrew’s mouth dropped open. He was sure he’d just been insulted, contrary to however the teenager had prefaced what she had just said. He shook it off, and decided to plow ahead now that he had made contact. Or at least stumbled into it. “The name is Wells. Andrew Wells.” He barely contained himself from doing a poor imitation of Mr. Giles’ accent, after the fashion of certain classic spy movies for which he had a fondness. Recovering, he made a motion to offer his hand but Buffy stepped back simultaneously, the warning clear in her eyes. Andrew cleared his throat and decided he had better get to his point. “Tell me, Buffy, have you noticed anything… unusual about yourself lately?”

Pop! Buffy made a great show of moving her thumb over the green “Send” button as she cleared the gum from her lips.

“Unusual strength! Heightened night vision! Enhanced hearing! Special Spidey sense!” Andrew hurried.

Miraculously, Buffy lowered her hand, though her eyes narrowed. “Special Spidey what now?”

“The extra sense that alerted you to my presence, for example,” Andrew said, noting with some dismay that the girl was apparently not versed in classic culture. Andrew forged ahead. “These are not the normal vestiges of a young maiden feeling the blossoming of her womanhood, Buffy Summers! Surely not!”

Buffy frowned. This had struck a nerve. She had been feeling different, a little on edge, and not in the usual once-a-month cranky feminine way, despite what the dweeb said. The feeling had become constant. And lately, her mother had been handing her all the new jars in the house to open…

Andrew cast about for a few painful moments, looking for the ultimate pitch, one that would strike a chord in the petite teenaged blonde in front of him and finally cause her to take her thumb completely off her phone’s Panic Button—especially since he was the one who was about to panic. Finally, he reverted back to his comfort zone and just went with another classic: “Remember, Buffy, with great power comes great responsibility!”

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Hello!

Glad to see your update, it was great even if it was too short... I'm really curious about where all of this is going to go.
And thank you for the summary, that was a good idea!

Looking forward to more, :kitty

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i just found this story and it's fantastic!!! Keep up the great writing! :D

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Hello!

Halo, WDG, thanks for sticking with this. LittleBit--glad to have you aboard.

The story's coming along as slowly as I expected, but at least it hasn't shut off completely. Here's the next dribble.

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The Coven
ACT I: Mentor
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ACT I: Mentor - part 1b
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She’s there. Again. I sighed to myself, trying not to let it show.

I could feel her behind me as my companion, Althenea, and I made our way down the narrow path that leads through the field up to the edge of the western wood. Althy stumbled on some loose bit of gravel coming off the small hill and she reached out to grasp my wrist to steady herself, since she was carrying our picnic basket with our lunch in her other hand. We kind of surfed/slid the rest of the way down the hill. I gasped, not with the slide, but at the contact of Althenea’s firm touch against my skin, and immediately bit my lip to stop myself. I have to stop thinking this way. Why can’t I stop feeling these things for girls? It’s not right. What is wrong with me?

I stopped short at the bottom, which jarred Althy’s hand loose from my wrist. “Tara! Are you okay?”

Althy’s a year older than me, the counselor Alise’s daughter, and has shown real Talent. She might be able to read me. Not that she would, she’s nice. But even talking out loud is bad. Talking means I’ll stutter, and she might suspect I’m nervous about something, which might prompt her to read me. So I just nodded.

A guilty pang shot through me as she misinterpreted my reticence. She grimaced, gesturing to the space between us and said, “Sorry.”

As I said, she’s nice. And I shouldn’t be thinking of her that way. The danger’s too great—I have to focus on something else. Willow is the easiest target. I turned and saw a flash of red duck behind a small oak, though not entirely. A green eye from a pale face peered from behind the trunk. “W-Willow.”

Althy frowned and turned, apparently catching some of the girl’s vanishing act, too. She turned back to me sympathetically. “Do you want me to talk to her, Tara?”

I thought about it briefly, but realized asking Althy to intercede might mean I would have to talk, too. I shook my head instead and we continue to our regular picnic spot, though now that I knew Willow was following, the resentment stirred in me anew. Why couldn’t she just leave me alone?

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Willow ducked behind the trunk of the old oak, just in time she thought, as the older, honey-haired girl she had been trailing always seemed to instinctively know of her presence. Whether it was a mystical instinct or not, right now it was a little inconvenient for Willow completing her mission and serving her duty as the young woman’s personal body guard since said subject of her efforts had made it perfectly clear to the recently-turned-ten-year old that her devotion to her self-appointed position was less than wanted. No matter. She could fill her obligation without the customary accompanying accolades. She spared a peek from behind the tree and saw the other one, the taller girl with the dark, faintly Asian eyes and long, black hair look back in her direction. A flash of resentment coursed through her. She sighed. Why did it have to be Althenea? Couldn’t it be Michael, or one of the other boys, who Willow somehow just knew didn’t stand a chance with the blonde?

What did Tara see in Althenea, anyway? Besides the tall, graceful figure, the gentle swell of her bosom and the curves of her hips, the pretty, unpretentious beauty?

Willow frowned at the complete lack of reason Tara would not rather be secreting off with Althy rather than staying put in a place Willow could keep an eye on her. But Willow bucked up, matching her face to the resolve in her soul. What she lacked in physical development and natural beauty, she made up for with her smarts. Surely Tara would come to know that, and allow her to stay to better execute her responsibility? Even if it was as a satellite stuck helplessly in orbit around the older girl. She stuck her head out once more, and saw the two girls had continued on their way, probably intent on gaining the stream that edged the Western Wood.

She ducked back down and waited a bit before trying another glance from her hiding place. Seeing the way was clear and Tara and Althy seemed oblivious to her (or pointedly ignoring her), she gathered herself to sprint forward to the next available hiding spot so as not to lose them in case they weren’t heading to the stream. A copse of bushes 30 meters to the left would do…

Propelling herself forward did not produce the intended result. She shrieked as an adult hand clamped itself over her shoulder and held her firmly in place.

Fortunately Jenny caught hold of her elbow before Willow could fall on her backside, forfeiting whatever dignity she had managed to keep in place when the high pitched squeal erupted from her lips. The smirk on the woman’s face, however, wasn’t exactly bracing. “And where do you think you’re going, Miss Rosenberg?”

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Althy frowned and stopped, interrupted from the latest bit of gossip about Michael she was sharing. She thinks Michael is interested in me. I think that’s crazy talk. At least I hope it is. “Did you hear that?”

I had. It sounded very much like the cry of a ten-year-old child. My heart seized, but then I paused, sensed Jenny had her, and gave silent thanks to the woman as both started to recede. “I don’t think it w-was anything. L-Let’s just go.”

“Are you sure? If it was Willow, and something happened—”

“Jenny has her,” I reassured.

Althy spared one last glance backward before shrugging. We continued on our way.

I felt her eyes on me and I flushed, feeling very self-conscious again.

“It’s a little weird how you do that. You didn’t Feel out for her, did you?”

I stiffened slightly. Even at our age, with most of us still not in full command of our Talents, just the suggestion of using them so casually is frowned upon.

Althy must have realized how that sounded and was quick to add, “I didn’t mean to say it would’ve been bad if you had, you know. It’s just a little odd that you do it so easily—with her, I mean.”

“W-What do you m-mean?” I had no special empathy for Jenny, despite the fact that she had taken custody of us after—and then it struck me what Althy did mean, just as she said it out loud.

“Willow. How you seem to know when she’s there, when no one else seems to be able to…”

I shrugged, trying to act casual. “M-Maybe because of the constant s-stalking thing.”

“So you don’t think it has anything to do with what happened with your mother?”

As soon as she said it, I stopped walking. She did, too, and looked properly horrified that she had said that out loud.

“Gods, Tara! I am so sorry! I didn’t think—”

I felt like crying. I swallowed it down and continued walking.

“Tara!” Althy called as she jogged up to me. “Tara, I really didn’t mean—”

I shook my head, holding the tears back. Why am I such a baby? Crying for my mother? I’m not five years old. I’m fifteen. Mama’s gone. It took me just a second more before I could turn to Althy. “It’s alright. I know you didn’t m-mean anything.” We resumed walking toward the small clearing near the riverbank.

The silence between us became awkward, but for the life of me, I couldn’t think of what to say to show that it was alright, that I wasn’t hurt by what Althy had said. We reached the picnic area and began removing and arranging the items from the basket for our lunch.

I guess I waited too long, because then she tried instead. She smiled, almost shyly. I could feel my heart quicken in my chest and without wanting it to, my breath caught and held. “So… Do you think Michael will ask you to Anna’s party next week?”

I sighed. I’d almost rather be talking about Willow.

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TBC

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I had completely forgotten about this story, but I'm glad that I stumbled upon it again. Your story has such intriguing elements canon and non-canon that I am truly curious to see where you are going with this.

Tara is heartbreaking in her youth and sadness and Willow is simply wonderful in her child's quest to be an older girl's protector. I gather little Willow feels the burden of guilt of having cost Tara her mother and as such has decided to make up for it by trying to 'fill' Tara's mother's shoes and shadowing Tara and protecting her. It's sweet and noble and completely the way a child might reason things out.

This adversary relationship that Tara and Willow have at the moment will be interesting to see play out as Tara realizes that there is a reason why she knows when Willow is around. Willow is already smitten in all her ten year-old glory, but Tara's pain over losing her mother stands in the way of Tara realizing that this kid is her future.

Lovely story indeed, one I hope you continue to write.

Thanks for sharing,
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great update on the story i can't wait for more of this story so keep up the good work...

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Safuega - thank you. I've been enjoying reading a lot of the other stories here so I've gotten lazy with writing this but I'm going to slog through it. A part of me wants to just get this act which is really a coming-of-age story for both Tara, queer teen, and Willow, child prodigy, over with so I can get to the more mature (i.e., romance/action) stuff that would be of more interest to kittens (with the corresponding feedback, hopefully) but this is an important part of the story so I can't. The friendship aspect of their relationship never seemed to be highlighted in canon which was right for BtVS. Not so for this tale. Then again, it occurs to me that DCP is really a WT shipper board, it might not be the best place to develop this act. I might end up finishing itt first off the DCP, then just posting in one hunk here afterward a few months down the line to gear up for Act 2, which is when the romantic part of the relationship develops full-steam. So to speak.

WDG - Thanks, friend! I appreciate your encouragement. I really do. It might be a while before the next update, but to compensate I think it will be a much longer one when it does post.

Till then,

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That was a very interesting update .... even more interesting that Tara can sense Willow when no one else can!!!! :D Please keep the updates coming! :D

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