Now why didn’t anyone tell me there was a misspelling in my sig! I hate it when I do that. I did it last time too. Grr Argh
Anyways I’ve been working on the next chapter and I’m having a few issues. I know where I want this chapter to be at the end of it, but I’m unsure of how to get there. Actually I’m having trouble creating a situation that is needed without it being too….unbelievable, which is funny ‘cause hello fairies. Not that I don't believe in fairies it's just some people don't. But I just thought I’d feedback for now ‘cause I want to.
taralicious - I’m glad you like my story. The irony is certainly entertaining but works so well for my story. (That and it worked for me when ‘I’ was the fairy). As for the outfit…well it makes me happy that you said I described it vividly. I have trouble writing descriptions (especially involving clothes) and I’m glad it came across the way I think it did. As for your suggested title I just have to say “huh?” to the first one but I like the second one.
BFR from Paris – Actually that is a good suggestion…being Disneyland and all…except it does seem to be the most hated and loved ride in the park. Maybe I should do a scene there?
Artemis – Yes the Fairy realm. The whole annual meeting is a combination of a professional annual meeting I used to go too (which just reminded me its happening again soon but I have to miss it) and the fairy-ness of Midsummer’s Nights Dream (particularly like in the movie the Puck at the Pub scene). Both involve a meeting of minds and lots of drinking.
As for what kind of fairy is Willow? That will be in the next chapter. You also get to meet one more Scooby turned Fairy. I have a plan for all of them….I hope you’ll enjoy them.
Donnie as a fairy is inspired by my older brother who used to pick on me a lot and one day when he stood up for me I was shocked. He claimed only he was allowed to pick on me. It seemed appropriate.
And I like your titles. I had seriously thought about the tale-tail idea but I think it would seem more appropriate if every chapter was smut filled. Maybe I’ll keep that in mind if I do a sequel or something. I am certainly considering your second suggestion. But I think I’ll wait until after some feedback of the second chapter before I decide.
sam darls – Thanks! I'm glad you think its awesome 'cause I think its awesome too!
Willster – I liked the idea too. Though I almost didn’t go with it however I was having trouble at the start. But now its flowing so I can’t stop. As for myself picturing the girls as fairies, I’m starting to wonder why I did….not that it was a bad thing because it lead to this fic but hmm……now I’m curious
Disastered – absotively is a great word. I’m a big fan of smushed words my favourite is gynormous which is a combination of gigantic and enormous. As for the way Willow and Tara met (because of Donnie)…I hadn’t actually planned that, I was going to do something completely different. But then I had to put Donnie in for a bit of tom-foolery and it just happened that way. I too had thoughts about Xander’s line “And how long have you known your girlfriend is Tinkerbell?” But I really couldn’t see Tara as Tinkerbell. (But I do have evil plans for Tinkerbell) muwahaha….
willowfan13 – Woohoo! I have a fan! As for Tara, that was how I pictured her, the way she gives and has that natural effect of making everyone happy when she’s around. As for your title, I don’t really get it (Self-esteem Fairy says: Not that it isn’t good, the author is just confused). A little abstract but I don’t Yoga so I don’t know.
Tempest Duer – Oh dear Lord… Do you have glasses and were you cleaning them when you typed that? Not that you could clean glasses and type at the same time but you get my point. And is that a
sort of dear lord or is that a sort of dear lord?
Right well thanks for all the feedback so far. Still waiting on a Title…not that the ones already suggested are bad. I’m the kind of shopper who wanders around the store in hopes of by seeing the things I’m supposed to get I’ll remember to get them. And that folks was a confusing way to say “I’ll know it when I see it.” I’m just surprised that my brain hasn’t found one yet because I usually have the title shortly after I get the idea. But the second chapter will be here within the day maybe......
-wiccanbotanist
"If truth is stranger than fiction then where are the flying monkeys?" - Daria
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