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Re: Voting: één, twee en drie

Postby WillowSpiritus » Mon Feb 07, 2005 3:40 pm

Yes my first real vote! I am so excited i can hardly choose :)



1. Nine West (more naked Wy would be nice)

2. Pacific tides

3. Futopia



Thanks again for broadcasting the goodness

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I get to vote! I feel so American

Postby Missocki » Mon Feb 07, 2005 4:44 pm

I wanna see.. *flips through the channels* All of them! :pray

Just kidding. :p I guess my top three would be:



Channel Two: The Living Woman Network



Channel Five: Pacific Tides Television



Channel Three: The SO-REAL Network



*missocki grabs a seat on the couch, some chips, cookies, and rootbeer. Then cuddles under a blanket with Miss Kitty. :kitty * We can't wait!









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Vicarious smootchies

Postby Reallybigpineapple » Mon Feb 07, 2005 6:08 pm

:bigkiss Aww Baby, you spoil us ROTTEN. That was so darn sweet...A gal hardly has the time to down a shot of cactus whiskey between updates! Just the way we like it...Go team you!

Right, voting...

1: Nine West

2: Pacific Tides

3: Futopia Channel

Repeato-gal much? Moi? Well, at least I'm consistant...



:flower :flower :flower :flower :flower :flower :flower :flower :flower :flower :flower :flower :flower :flower :flower :flower :flower :flower :flower :flower :flower

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Happy Vote Time!

Postby hermitfish » Mon Feb 07, 2005 6:13 pm

Yay Tides...yay warm embraces...yayayayayay...so ends my non-useful review.



Tuning the TV to:



1. Late Shift

2. Nine West

3. So Real



~Cyd

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Re: Happy Vote Time!

Postby thebardgirl » Mon Feb 07, 2005 6:56 pm

I love Happy Vote Time.



1. Nine West

2. Futopia Channel

3. Pac Tides





as always...the major favorites here...



-elizabeth :spin









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Re: Happy Vote Time!

Postby Disastered » Mon Feb 07, 2005 8:43 pm

Aw, I loved that update. Short and sweet.



1. Pac Tides

2. So-Real

3. Nine West

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oof

Postby onlyhalfevil » Tue Feb 08, 2005 5:40 pm

suddenly all the updates came in. had great fun reading nine west hehe!



votes: 1. futopia 2. the late shift 3. nine west :party

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VOTING POLLS ARE NOW OPEN!!!

Postby Irene73 » Tue Feb 08, 2005 7:05 pm

LA PIPPA...HOW THE HECK ARE YOU?!!!!:bigwave



I know, I know, it has been a while...bet guess who's got herself her own computer again?:happycry



Now I know I won't have to file for bankruptcy...after those evil troll children...a.k.a niece and nephew...have extorded all that money from me:angry :gnome



So let me start by saying that I have fully recovered from my recent battle of...what was that diagnosis?...Aw yes brain aneurysmitis...after reading the Late Shift. How dare you construct a masterpiece of epic porportions and still leave your readers feeling as if they need to go hide under the safety of their covers and never see the light of day...all I have to say is...ME STILL NO UNDERSTAND!!!!



And as for NINE WEST..."Yippe ky ya yo, get along wiccachica, it's your story with bathtubs and all...Yippe ky ya yo, get along wiccachica, you know we'll be waiting and anticipating for youuuuuuuu" HEEHAWWW...great update pilgram...your daisy just daisy. I'll be your huckleberry.



And as for Pacific Tides...Sung to the tune of the Beach Boys song "Surfing Safari"..."Let's get writing now, La Pippa is writing now, come and write an update pleasssssse...early in the morning she'll be starting now...some kittens will be coming along...we're loading are computers inside...so if your ready get ready to drool...come on Pippa wait and see...we'll wait for updatey goodness for eternity...come on Pippa wait and see...we'll wait for updatey goodness for eternity...let's get writing now, La Pippa is writing now, come and write and update pleasssssse!!!":banana :blush :stop :applause



So now for my votes...

1.PACIFIC TIDES

2.NINE WEST

3.FUTOPIA



Hmmm...my first time voting...yay on me!!!



Always...saluting you while holding up a can of Hawaiian Punch,

Irene:pride



QUE VIVA LA PIPPA...AWHOOWHA:pinky

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Re: VOTING POLLS ARE NOW OPEN!!!

Postby robotguru » Tue Feb 08, 2005 7:26 pm

hmm, votes...



BAM So Real

BAM Pacific Tides

BAM Futopia

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Re: VOTING POLLS ARE NOW CLOSED!!!

Postby wiccachica » Thu Feb 10, 2005 10:34 am

Okay...polls are officially closed. Yippee!!!



Here’s our line-up:



With 9 votes (no joke) Channel Nine: Nine West (A nekkid Wy in a standoff of epic proportions...how is this one going to turn out???)



With (8) votes Channel Five: Pac Tides. ( A journey into unknown territory? Sounds like Romancing the Stone to me....)



And with (6) votes....Channel Seven: The Futopia channel. (Whet could Taryn be dreaming about now????)



Stay tuned and thank you for voting!!!!!





-Wiccachica



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"Drink up. The world's about to end." - Ford Prefect

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yeah!

Postby nika » Tue Feb 22, 2005 9:08 pm

Yes baby!!!! Now that's what I call a line up! I got all shows I wanted. Thanks Chica!:pinky

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Re: yeah!

Postby Reallybigpineapple » Sun Feb 27, 2005 7:19 pm

Ok, give it to us, baby...

You know you want to... You know you have my number...

Give us a fix, alright, love?

My favourite shows... so, let's get it on, baby...

Sends mental image of Amber in lace bra during the Stuff-shoot for smut-support. Swoons slightly.

Waiting patiently. No, scratch that. Impatiently...

You rule. Feed me.

:bigkiss

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Re: VOTING POLLS ARE NOW CLOSED!!!

Postby LeatherQueen » Thu Mar 10, 2005 4:07 pm

well well well... look who's back with more insane tv lineups that we all love so much! :)



Many scritches to you! And only the most exotic petals of the rare "Black-Eyed Susans" to mark your path. And large Amazonian barely-clad females to fan you so your brain doesn't overheat and expode.



Because brains do that, you know. When you think too hard. :eyebrow



LQ



ps: No! Really!! Brains really DO get overheated and explode. You have to be really really careful not too think too much. That's why we have reality TV.



pps: And dancing pink elephants. Observe: :pinky





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Eh just what I needed...

Postby Kieli » Thu Mar 10, 2005 4:29 pm

...to bring me out of this five month funk I've been in. Ok, I'll bite, I'm a waitin' fer more updates.



cringes slightly as she realises she just broke a nail reaching for her champagne glass



*bleh* Bloody hell. Umm, Chica, dear, you forget to send back your signed contract....remember? It's almost April 2...gotta have that renewal back to the station or god knows what they'll do to our channels *grr*


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Re: Eh just what I needed...

Postby Still Waters T » Thu Mar 10, 2005 7:39 pm

Hey Wiccachica :wave



This is a really interesting, cool, I wanna say quirky lol, fic - I totally love it! :bounce I don't think I've read a fic like this before, so it gets the prize for originality as well. :cool When I first started reading it, which was...hmmm I think it was last week, and once I started it I couldn't stop. :p Anyhoo, when I first started reading I was pretty much cocking my head, thinking "what the hell?" :wtf lol but the confusion quickly faded, and now I can't wait to read more of this!!! :dumbo I'm hooked! :bounce



The channels/shows I like the very best :bounce are:



Channel Two: The Living Woman Network - with Willa Rothberg as a doctor - niiiice. :D :wink And although to her co-workers she might seem a little stiff, she's all caring about her patients. :) And Teresa Macrae; from the start I was soo curious about whether she knew who both she and Willa really were - Tara and Willow. That she knew something about Sunnydale and Buffy and everything slayerish. Or...um well I'm uhh I think I'm still a bit confused about whether they have to get back to the Buffy the Vampire Slayer show, or if they stay in those shows (and that these are all AUs) after the badness in them are solved...and I'm still kinda confuzzled I guess. :p It's either the lack of sleep, or well I'm just not smart enough lol.



Channel Three: The SO-REAL Network - I loved The Haunting (I have the video)! And with Willow Rossman and Tara Mac Grueger in it...woooohooo!! :banana I love the guys there, they're hysterical! :lmao One guy (Alec) thinking Willow still has a thing for him and the ghost and the peeping thing he did lmao, and another thinking he's god's gift to women! :rofl And for some odd reason I can't seem to feel sorry for Tara's boyfriend sitting at home watching everything going on with his girlfriend and Willow. :laugh I say, smooch away. :p (And if I'd been Tara, and found Tustin rooting through my underwear drawer, I'd most likely have hit him upside the head with the nearest object I could get my hands on upon seeing it. :laugh )



Channel Five: Pacific Tides Television - ahh and the more light and sweet show with Kali La’akalani and Rosey Rosewood. :) Although overshadowed a bit by the sadness of the attempted murder of Kali, and having Rosey dominated by her father who caused her mother to run away and end up dead, and getting beat up by his goon; it's still one of the lighter and sweeter of the shows, and awww Rosey and Kali are so cute. :heart I hope Rosey's father gets what he deserves soon. :fit2



Channel Seven: Futopia Channel - I love both Winna Gunn and Taryn Mackenzie are a bit harder characters here. And Winna - the big mystery woman, with the "slinky secret agent act," hiding in the dark, and the sunglasses, just oozing danger or mystery. :cool And of course Taryn being a cop. Can this get any better?! Nope nope, not in my opinion! :sheep It's all deliciously dark. :D



Channel Nine: Nine West - Wy and Treena Maclay, heehee this brings me back to some westerns books I read when I was younger. :p Treena as the rough bounty hunter with the hidden soft heart underneath it all, and Wy as the supposedly frail, but still incredibly stubborn beauty set on having her revenge, who makes the rough bounty hunter's life a misery, and yet they still fall in love lol. :laugh



I particularly like how you've given them mostly different, though similar, names from Buffy the Vampire Slayer.



Btw I've noticed how you for example sometimes use the name 'Tara' instead of say 'Taryn' - is that deliberate, or errors? :hmm (Unless I'm remembering this wrong, but I could swear I've seen it. So I was just wondering since I'm all curious.



Hm, I was really only planning on saying that I love this fic, and hoping for an update soon, but it ended up being a liiiiitle longer. :p I think maybe this is the longest feedback I've written up to date. :wtf



Liv :kitty

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Re: Eh just what I needed...

Postby mollyig » Fri Mar 11, 2005 6:13 am

Hi there,



It's been ages since I've had time to catch up on some fic, and I've sorely missed my forays into the Cafe. My Friday has become so much better while I've been catching up.



Thank you so much for this inviting, innovate inn! Keep up the great work!


You stay the course, you hold the line, you keep it all together.

You're the one true thing I know I can believe in
- Sarah McLachlan

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Re: Cataclysm Cafe - The Viewing Room

Postby Wiccachica » Thu Apr 28, 2005 10:20 am

Channel Nine West

The Wraith


“MAKE... a..... DEAL???” Sissy drawled, looking over Treena’s shoulder at the naked woman with an incredulous look. “I am holding a GUN to her head here...”

Not that she had to remind anyone...

Wy didn’t drop her expression, HER RESILIENCE, or her guns. She did, however, quirk an eyebrow slightly.

“And I have two to yours. Now... step-off-from-her...”

When Sissy failed to move, Wy sighed and kept her sights leveled on the woman.

“Listen... Sissy.... You might think this is the right path you’re taking to getting out of here alive, but it isn’t. I’d like you to see this situation as two locomotives barreling down the tracks towards one another. By now yours is probably being fueled by the need to survive right now, and that’s mighty formidable...unless you are mostly all fast talk and a pretty face, like I’ve gathered. My locomotive, however, has been stoked by a whole lot of Hate and Revenge since I was about eight years of age...the big kind... with the capital H and the capital R. The kind that makes a girl practice long, hard, years learning her way around a pistol...waiting for a moment just like this one. With this in mind I guarantee that if you insist on remaining in my direct path...like you’re doing now... we two...you and I... are going to run together. I assure you it will be painful-loud and terrible, and one of us is not going to walk away from this so pretty and fast talking.”

Wy waited... silent...and unclothed...the scar at her shoulder seeming paler still in contrast to the bath-warmed flesh surrounding it.

Sissy shifted her weight nervously from foot to foot considering her options, and Treena continued to stand, agog.

“If you let me walk out of here...what’s to keep you from shooting me in the back?” Sissy asked.

“The same thing that’s keeping me from shooting you in the front....” She winked at Sissy. “My good will...”

Treena could feel the nervous energy coming off her captor. Mostly it was obvious in the dreadful way Sissy’s hand had begun to shake.

“Who ARE you?” Jas asked, wondrously intrigued by this redhead’s ruthlessness and candor. Wy ignored him. She flicked the muzzle of her gun up a fraction of an inch and shot the lamp out just a bug’s hair left of Sissy’s shoulder. The bottom of the lamp purged its contents onto the floor with a splash, the wick still sputtering along merrily...

“I’m just a girl...looking to make a deal...” She said with a tiny little smile... meant to chill.

Sissy mulled over her options...

Well...actually...she raked them over the fires...

Stewed on them for a few more seconds....

And then dropped her gun hand.

Treena disengaged from Sissy with a shove. She snatched Sissy’s gun away in one fluid motion and trained it on her an instant later.

Wy nodded her approval. “Alright...now we’re getting someplace. Miss Maclay...would you be so kind as to help tie up our friends here?”

“Absolutely my pleasure...” Treena said with a glint in her eye. As she moved to find something to tie them up with, Wy moved deftly around the tub to her clothing. She knelt down for her dress, noting the way Rue was slyly inching towards Jas’s gun on the floor. He slithered to a dead stop when he noticed that all of her attentions...and her gun sights, were trained on him.

“Pick up that piece, Rue Gillis.” She said...all business. Rue blinked up at her, still blearily drunk, but not quite idiot enough to forget who had the upper hand.

Rue slowly pulled his hand back in towards his body. Treena completed the transaction by cinching his hands behind his back with a sash from the red curtains.

[hr]


In the hallway, Treena turned to look back into the room at the floor where the three struggled against complicated knots, yelling curses at the two women for getting the drop on them, and at each other for being so ill-prepared. It was a humorous sight ...almost like a Vaudeville act.

But Treena had learned to take Jas’s threats very seriously and he was angry

Wy was standing in the hallway, fully dressed. Her hair was still wet from the bath. She handed Treena her Colt back.

“This belongs to you.” She said with a wink, and turned to walk down the stairs. Treena reached out and took her arm, pulling her gently to a stop.

“Wait...” Wy waited, a small smile on her lips. “When I first saw you in that saloon...and you had your little...” She nodded to Wy’s cleavage where she had seen the red head nestle her little Pepperbox pistol away again. “... Peashooter... why would you use that to kill him with, and not just do the job proper?” It was obvious after seeing her skills with a gun, that the woman could have killed Rue five times over.

Wy coiled her arm around Treena’s so that their arms braced, and then she pulled the blonde in closer. She moved in and kissed her... slow and firm, before breaking away to look her in the eyes. “I guess I like to take my time...now... let’s get out of here...” Wy turned and headed down the stairs, followed by a confusedly flabbergasted but curiously enamored bounty hunter.

TBC...

Next up: Pac Tides!
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Re: Cataclysm Cafe - The Viewing Room

Postby Safuega » Thu Apr 28, 2005 10:48 am

I apologize in advance for the hurried reply. I'm in the middle of finals so I'll make it short and sweet.

You: totally brilliant, you mad genius, you.
The network: madly ingenious.
Me: totally hooked, always wanting more!

:applause

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Re: Cataclysm Cafe - The Viewing Room

Postby thebardgirl » Thu Apr 28, 2005 3:11 pm

Oh! Oh! I think that's my soul laughing--it tickles! it tickles! OH the joys of Cataclysm! How I've missed thee! *happy go-lucky-whimper* YAY! (and yay) YAY! (and yay again) HURRAY!

*happy sigh* mmmm....today is a good day....

Gotta love women who take their time--fic writers, horse riders and story gliders (like myself) alike...gotta love women who take their time.


Mmmm today is a good day.

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Re: Cataclysm Cafe - The Viewing Room

Postby UhHuh » Thu Apr 28, 2005 7:15 pm

I was so happy to see that this story was back. Brilliant! There isn't much more I can say that would not sound completely cheesy. :blush
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Re: Cataclysm Cafe - The Viewing Room

Postby SpinCycle » Thu Apr 28, 2005 9:05 pm

Ooh absolutely wonderful update. I think I may have a crush on Wy a little, because that was awesomely hot. Now, I just have to remember that unless I'm planning on climbing inside my head and living there, a crush on a fictional character is not going to pan out.

I love this channel, and network for that matter.
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Re: Cataclysm Cafe - The Viewing Room

Postby Sassette » Thu Apr 28, 2005 9:25 pm

wicca-pippa-hot-mamma-yamma-chica!

I am, as always, delighted by the mere fact that a mind such as yours exists on this planet.

Just one guest that is begging to be asked - just how fast were the Train of survival and the Train of Hatred-And-Revenge going, and how far apart did they start, and if ToHAR stops every half hour and four people exit and seven people enter, and the Tos stops every 20 minutes and two people exit and three people enter, and a train stop takes 30 seconds, just how many people are going to yell "OWIE" when the trains reach each other?

Though, this IS a trick question. Because they're metaphorical trains. Y'know. Changes the math.

Which is a roundabout way of saying that I especially enjoyed the use of metaphorical trains in this update.

Though the guns were nice, too.

As was the nekkidness.

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Re: Cataclysm Cafe - The Viewing Room

Postby Reallybigpineapple » Thu Apr 28, 2005 10:32 pm

Ah, baby, it's been so long...
Actually, you had updated my favourite story (stories?) on the exact moment I had arrived home from just getting to know that I, by just a fraction, lost the job that would have made me famous and literally taken care of my career forever, so pleased is just not the word for my feelings about this update.
I've just cast an eye on the "how to leave feedback" thread, so I guess I stand corrected. Apparently , you cant just say that the story is brilliant, you have to be specific. So I shall proceed now to be specific:
I FRICKING LOVE EVERYTHING ABOUT THIS STORY. The dialogue, the plot and the whole concept of smut versus the Powers that Be.
I have a special fondness for Nine West, since I'm a Sergio Leone-ho'. I love Pacific Tides partly because you get to spend lots of time imagining Tara/Kali in a bikini... Wait, don't I spend most of the day doing that anyway...? Darn...
Writing a story where Tara/Treena is "the brawn" of a team of tricksters is just brilliant..
Please don't leave me alone again. You can tie me up in the back yard. I'd work for peanuts.
Anyway, thanks for improving my life and having such great timing. If you want to get married, just e-mail me, babe...
More smootchies would be good...
Luuurrrve, Ye Olde Fanne.
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Re: Cataclysm Cafe - The Viewing Room

Postby Boschi » Thu Apr 28, 2005 10:37 pm

O.K. - Hi there. Haven't commented before, hope you don't mind me coming late to the party.

I shoulda known better than to start reading this 12 hours ago...
So now I am going to try to write two papers and two lab reports ... hey, I've got six hours...all the time in the world, right? Wheeeee ...

Sorry - tangent. My point in replying:

Thank you for writing (and writing, and writing...)!
I add my voice to your throngs of devoted/demanding fans...

I tend to see myself as a kinda level person, but I somehow found myself doing little dances while reading this marvelous mess you've made.
The neighbors heard the guffaws.
I closed the blinds because people kept walking by and staring as I pumped my fists in the air and "woo-hoo-ed".

And then there were the times I felt like my eyes were bleeding from all the input, but I just couldn't stop reading ...

At which point you would sneak up behind me and knock me darn near stupid with a scene that carried emotional weight with dignity (I have issues with some angst..it makes me angry...angrysty??? mmm sleep deprived...).

So yada yada, I laughed, I cried...and I don't usually do much of either.

Having discovered fanfic a few months ago I have often felt that reading it is a dirty little secret. (Don't lynch me yet y'all, let me keep going here...)

However, it has gradually dawned on my rather dim self that there is no way that something that can bring this much delight is in anyway shameful. And your fic definitely takes the Delightful/Delusional cake.

I wish I could toss some constructive criticism your way, but I get so involved in the ride that is your stuff that I forget to cynically analyze...sorry. Next time I will try to have something more specific than "you are all that is great and good and strange".

So in the meantime ... I'll just stand up and say "Hi. My name's Chris, and I read fanfic... ahem: (summons a chipper smile) woo...hoo!" (enthusiasm is so strange...)

Please excuse the length of this post, and any (and all) incoherence on my part...again I say...sleep deprivation is not my friend (more a constant, unwelcome companion).

Regards,

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Re: Cataclysm Cafe - The Viewing Room

Postby hermitfish » Sun May 01, 2005 12:49 pm

Woohoo…an assertive naked Wy takes down a room full of bad guys and saves the sexy bounty hunter from harm.



Now there’s a sequence that will stay snuggly in the mind for a while.

And Pac Tides next? You spoil us with your brilliance dear.

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Re: Cataclysm Cafe - The Viewing Room

Postby Nika » Tue May 03, 2005 6:22 pm

My vote: 1.NINE WEST 2. NINE WEST 3. NINE WEST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Wow!!!! What a great update!!!!!!! I looooooved it!!!!!!!!!! Why can't real t.v be like this?????? :bounce
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Oddly enough...this just popped out.

Postby Wiccachica » Fri Jun 10, 2005 7:36 pm

Nine West
The Wraith



Three Days Following: A Dust Devil Comes to Town


The railcar chuttered and swayed in a comforting tempo beneath her as she rested. She kept her hat low enough to easily avoid having to make conversation with anyone but the ticket taker. She kept one boot propped against the seat across from her and one of her hands settled on the small black satchel in the seat beside her. She hoped that it would be enough to suggest that she didn't want company during her journey. She pretended to sleep, but all the while she listened to the sounds of the train. She listened to the other riders in cabins surrounding her. The family in the cabin in front of her chattered on and on about one nonsense thing or another. They gossiped about people she didn't know or care about. She didn’t worry on them much.

The man seated in the car to her left had been snoring for five hours straight. The sound did not annoy her, but rather made her feel at ease. Sleeping folk were rarely a threat.

And then there was the man in the cabin behind her...

He had been rustling his newspaper and reading the whole way. He smelled of expensive scented water and a recent bath, which put him in the well-moneyed and dangerous category. Once during his ride he had smoked his way through a hand-rolled cigarette and asked the ticket taker how much longer it was to Juniper.

Flatbush was two stops before Juniper, so she she would know soon enough if he was a threat to her or if she was letting her mistrust of pretty much EVERYONE get the best of her these days.

Four years ago, she wouldn't have thought twice about the people around her. Law Men or not, she would have even been able to fall asleep to the soothing and rhythmic sounds of all six of them cleaning and loading their guns.

She had gone so long with that fancy black coloring in her hair (to throw the law dogs off the scent) that she was surprised these days when she looked in the mirror. She had let her true color grow out, and it made her a conspicuous target again.

Now she had several things to worry about. Or rather...several someones to worry about. Her thoughts, though partially occupied with the man behind her, never strayed too far from her quarry.

Sure the man was most likely just a wet-behind-the-ears deputy who couldn't take her in a pistol fight with one of her hands tied behind her back and both her eyes shut. He just wanted to be the one who brought in The Shepherd. How could she blame him? The reward on her was higher than just about anyone she’d ever heard of.

He would surely try to take her in, not understanding that she had other things on her mind, and that if she had to go through him to get on with her business, then he would be one unlucky son of a bitch for trying.

A favor had been called in, and she was only as good as her word.

Jas' men had let her live, broken, but alive... and now she was told he wanted recompense.

He wanted Treena Maclay and her new little "Hellfire" Sidekick dead.

Not only was Willie Shepherd honor bound to comply. The thought made her insides twist like a nest of snakes. That was as close as she ever came to happiness these days. There would be no double-crossing her again. Jas wouldn't get the better of her either...and this time.... This time, if she had to kill the blonde, she'd do it face to face...

That thought concerned her more than anything. Jas she could handle...his band of jackasses even more so. She’d even set aside a special hell for that dark-haired harpy, Sissy Spurstrap, when the time came.

She knew that only Treena Maclay could take her in a square gunfight. The only matter would be who was the better hand on that particular day. Perhaps even then it might come down to something as minute as a shift in the wind or just the will of the Fates.

But she knew she would win this time. She had to. Willie was faster now. She was faster and she had something that Treena didn't...

The element of surprise.

The blonde thought she was dead and that would be Willie Shepherd's greatest boon.

Treena Maclay had left her to die, and now she would return the favor... She would return it tenfold.

The Shepherd dozed lightly for an hour, still keeping an ear out for any shift in the moneyed man's weight or change in his breathing. The only thing of note is that he rolled and lit another cigarette.

[hr]

Flatbush came up not soon enough for her, and as the train slowed to a crawl, she lifted her hat up from over her eyes, and slid her boots off the seat ahead of her. Without waiting for the train to pull to a stop, she lifted her satchel onto her shoulder and walked to the door of her cabin. The man behind her had not gotten up. The family in front of her had, however, and one of the youngish boys from the brood bumped into her as he was trying to get out of his mother's way. He craned his head to look up at her and his jaw popped open and creaked there like it was on hinges.

The Shepherd was a sight to see, she was sure. She wore a brown duster over her lanky-tall form, with dark green eyes and a long titan-red hair that she usually kept in a braid, but now looked like a mane around her shoulders and face. She had an exotic beauty that was both alluring and dangerous in one.

Silver at the bottom of a bear trap.

But despite all that, what she felt the boy's eyes fall to was the scar.

It was always the scar.

It took up so much of her life that she was surprised it didn't actually begin higher and travel longer with the stretch of her years. But she knew the mark stayed the same. It traveled, half an inch wide, from her brow line down the otherwise pretty visage of the left side of her face, and terminated in a fork at her jaw line. She used to tell people she's been kissed by a dragon when she was younger. And the bullet, still lodged in her collarbone, was a reminder that her life had actually ended the same day that scar was made...the day her sister had moved in front of her...just as she herself had tried to duck out of the way. The horrible sound of the bullet passing through her sister's chest and then the blinding red pain that had struck her down.

The scar reminded her daily of nothing but cowardice and pain...and the dirty fact that someone dear to her had died that day because she had ducked her head and hid like a yellowbelly...

And now this boy was staring at it and making her thoughts turn to blacker times. Times she liked to shove deep deep down.

She frowned down at him and watched him blush back at her. She eased past the family as they tried to gather up their belongings and make their exit. She waiting until the train had nearly pulled to a stop before she hopped off onto the platform.

It was raining in Flatbush, and people bustled around to get out of the rain too quickly to pay mind to the stranger. Somewhere in this town, Treena and her new friend would be relaxing and enjoying their perceived freedom. She would have to find her. But before she did, she would have to shake the well-bathed man who almost discreetly stepped off onto the platform as well once the train had pulled to a stop. She watched him out of the corner of her eye as she pretended to stretch and look up the small strip of Main Street. He then feigned interest in his bag. She watched him kneel and fiddle with the latch. When the family she had listened to all the way from Conicker stepped out onto the platform, they obscured her view of him. This was enough for her to step around a corner and around the nearest building. With women and children present, it was no place for a gunfight, though he might not care about that as much as claiming the reward on her.

The Shepherd stood on the corner of Main Street looking west. Three hotels. Two Saloons. A bank. A gun shop and headstone making shop combined and a mercantile.

They could have been anywhere.

But knowing Treena like she did, Shepherd walked first to Truman's Gun shop and Headstone...the well-moneyed man, having located her again as she moved, fell in step not a hundred paces behind her.

As The Shepherd walked, a thin, utterly humorless smile pulled at her lips. She was a patient woman. Patient as the water on a river stone.

[hr]

She pushed open the door to the gun/headstone shop and let it swing shut behind her. The clerk behind the counter looked over his specs at her and then did a double take before her straitened up.

“H-help you?” He offered.

She did a quick scan of the guns he had in the glass case that also served as a counter. Four seconds ticked off. She popped a knuckle on the glass over the two silver colts with the mother of pearl handles. He was very proud of those pieces, and was about to tell her so, but she squinted at him, and her scar jilted like an angry serpent across the side of her face. She slapped enough gold on the counter to cover the cost of the guns twice over.

“Load them." She instructed, wasting no time with pleasantries. He pulled them out of the case and quickly did as he was told. He set them on the counter when he was through and she unhooked a gun belt from the wall and put it around her narrow hips. She lifted the guns and drove them home with subtle aim into their holsters.

“I’m going to use your back door... I'll be returning shortly. I have a question or two for you." She slid past the counter without waiting for permission. It was no matter; the man hadn't taken his eyes off the gold for a second.

Outside, the well-moneyed man stood waiting for her to emerge on the corner across the street. Rain pattered off the brim of his hat. He put a cigarette between his teeth and fished through his breast pockets for his matches.

“I can light that for you real nice..." Came a smooth woman's voice from just behind him and off to the left. He froze as the shiny muzzle of a gun slid around his waist and slowly upward, until it rested under his chin. “You just keep your hands right where they are." He felt her other hand relieving him of his own guns. In their search, he left her hand rattle the handcuffs at his waist, and then move on.

“I’ve come to take you in." He croaked in his least authoritative voice. In trying to remain out of sight and inconspicuous, he had hidden himself from the view of the street. Now...to any street passerby, upon closer investigation, he would look to be standing alone.

“You’re out of your element, deputy. Sorely so." She said in his ear from over his shoulder.

“You mean to kill me?" He asked...trying to put on a brave face.

“I’m not adverse to it, if that's what you're asking." She finished her search and came up with a box of matches. " Killing you won't bring me pleasure or money...but I've got other business here, I don't have much time to do it and I can't have you mucking it up...so..." With the butt of one of his own guns she rapped him on the back of the head, hard enough to make his vision blur and his thoughts swim.

The second blow was not as kind.

It sent the muddy ground up to meet him...hard. Then there was nothing for him but blackness...

The Deputy awoke with splitting head pains and his hands cuffed around a post in a shed. Oddly he wasn't angry, or worried, so much as relieved. He was hurting, alone, but alive...and that was something.

[hr]

The Shepherd stared down the gun shop owner once again. Now with the gold pocketed, his attention was on her again.

“I’m renting that shed behind your store...one night. Then I need you to go there and do what you have to." She dropped another coin on the counter.

"Sure." He agreed, ogling the coin.

“I’m also looking to find my...sister...I think she came to town today..." She lied...and watched his confused face brighten slightly.

“Of course!" He breathed, as though fitting a puzzle piece into its rightful place.

“Blonde...about yay high...wears a hat like mine" She said...only to watch his confusion return. “She’s traveling with a female friend."

“They came in here early on...bought some ammunition...Asked where the best lodgings were. I told them the Flatbush Hotel."

“Flatbush Hotel...got it." She dropped another gold piece on the counter. “You never saw me. You never heard of me."

“I understand." He said, watching her turn and walk out as mysterious and quiet as she had come in.

He plucked the coins off the counter and bit them each in turn, before conveniently forgetting that she ever existed.

TBC...
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Re: Cataclysm Cafe - The Viewing Room

Postby Wiccachica » Mon Jun 13, 2005 11:43 am

Irene73...

Thanks for your post! I don't know where that one came from, but I'm definitely goign to be doing a Pac Tides next. I feel it...it's on its way.
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Re: Cataclysm Cafe - The Viewing Room

Postby wilgen » Tue Jun 14, 2005 12:41 pm

Hey Pippa,

You updated, that's great and HOW did I miss the 28th April update?
Well now I got to read one fantastic and one fantastic mysterious update.
Love Nine West. Well actually love them all.
I'm thinking of reading TLS again from the beginning so when you update that it's all going to make sense again (not).

Thanks for continuing.
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Re: Cataclysm Cafe - The Viewing Room

Postby thebardgirl » Tue Jun 14, 2005 3:08 pm

As usual, I sit in front of the fanTAStic Cafe screen...and am honestly giddy from the humor, love, and um...Six Shooters that this fic supplies. It is a pure joy to rid your fic, chica! (as always) I await eagerly Pacific Tides, Futopia, and of course the Horse-Galore Make-Me-Drool-like-a-fool-Wy-Less-Than-A-Dress and Treena-Making-The-Glasses-Steamah-Girl. Or...you know, those two gals in your fic.

Again, fantastic (even without our fabulous ladies....it's always good to have a wonderful description on the latest villain...) update.

sincerererererely,
elizabeth (sits back down with remote and waits for more....)
You shanked my Janga Ship!
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