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Re: Ride the Lightning (AU) (Updated 12/06/2011)

Postby Mgraham93 » Fri Dec 09, 2011 3:29 am

Astron had left home at a young age, determined to change her circumstances, determined not to be the weak woman her parents wanted her to be. On her own, Astron had become the woman that the young girl had dreamed about, a strong woman who could defend herself, whether it be with magic or with her own skills as a fighter. Yet, in her ferocity to become trained, Astron had forgotten to let herself love. The dark-haired woman didn’t let very many people in, trusted few with her emotions.

Pura understood, she had watched from afar long enough to know how Astron was. When she had first come to Astron, she had been afraid. Shape-shifters from her tribe did not show themselves to magic-users, and they only showed their true selves once they had found their mate. The tiger looked down at Astron, knowing something had to happen soon. She wanted Astron to know what she really looked like, she wanted to walk on two feet again.

I really liked this background into both Astron and Pura's past

Astron’s face broke into a wide grin as she admitted out loud what she had just barely allowed herself to see, “I love her.”

She rested her head, once again, on the cat’s side, falling into a more peaceful sleep now that she had admitted to herself something she had been fighting for so long.


aww that was really sweet

extremely glad they were able to heal Tara's leg- the description of the healing magic was brilliant.

Glad the four of them are getting on straight away Willow petting Pura was great and Ms Kitty :lmao :rofl :lol

so the destruction caused by Donald is spreading

“You must go to Rosenberg castle. They are preparing for battle as well. Gather as many witches as you can along the way. This goes deeper than a group of scared little boys, there’s evil out there that seek to aid him.”

“Him?” Charna asked.

“The man who leads the group, Donald Maclay. He has no idea what he has started.”

That was very foreboding, it makes sense that he would set in motion events that he would be unable to comprehend the seriousness of.

Glad more help is coming.

I'll admit I don't really know much about Tarot cards, but I found an explanation, really good choice with the chariot.

Also I realise now the reason I thought of King arthur was also due to Merlin (the one with ASH as Uther) with the background being a big campaign by Uther against magic
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Re: Ride the Lightning (AU) (Updated 12/06/2011)

Postby Grimm » Sat Dec 10, 2011 6:10 pm

Okay, I'm a total Ariel feedback groupie :bow !! Passion, humor and the threat of peanut butter violence...I think i'm in cyber love :luv :lmao ...

Loved the update. I hope that 'story' Astron (not La Presidente/Queen of all things dibs related) gets her head out of her culo soon and realizes that love is well within her reach. Maybe after she hears Willow's tale of love and loss she will be motivated to act on her feelings.

Very glad to know the girls will have reinforcements coming. Evil, jackass Donald is building an army of imbeciles. So, i'm glad they will have a few warriors on their side as well.
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Re: Ride the Lightning (AU) (Updated 12/06/2011)

Postby vampyregurl73 » Thu Dec 15, 2011 7:03 pm

Yay for new characters!!!!! :grin :grin

I'm looking forward to reading your plans for everyone.

This story just keeps getting better and better.
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Re: Ride the Lightning (AU) (Updated 12/06/2011)

Postby Babbles4Twillow » Thu Dec 15, 2011 9:42 pm

A few replies, and then the update! I hope you guys like it. It took a bit out of me to write it! In other words, it took a bit of a push to get out of my shell and over the initial embarrassment!

Astron - Congrats on dibs...again, lol. :whip

Oh oh it starts!!!

Yes, what we've been waiting for, right?! I also lol'd with the image of Tara craning her neck to check.

and I introduce to you, KID WILLOW!!! lol so damn adorable

Cute, huh? I didn't know if I captured that well enough.

True_Love - This story has taken on a life of its own, and I'm sorry oif the new characters are a bit confusing. More about them and their powers will be revealed as the story progresses, so if you'll bear with me, I'll explain, okay? And if you don't feel satisfied with the way its explained in the story, you can always PM me and I'll give more detail, okay? Don't want anyone feeling lost or confused. Thanks for reading!

leos_pride - I'm so glad that you're enjoying this!! Makes me giddy. I'm also glad that Tara's leg has healed. It's been kind of a pain working around that, lol.

Ariel - Whoa, a challenge!! Now, now, there will be no need ofr peanut-butter violence!! I also am a fan of the magic-related stuff, as shown in this story. I'm not a big-knowledge woman, but i love this stuff, and making it up, taking what you guys have given me and making it my own. Bad puns, well accepted!! HAHAHA. Now, I'm sorry if I've given the impression that Pura can *poof* into her other self...much more explanation coming on that one...but not in this chapter, hehe. You're right, fears ARE fun to write..the irrational/quirky ones anyhow. Crush on my fictional shape-shifting tiger? WOOHOO!! *giggles* So glad you've been sticking with me and thanks for the feedback...one more thing... Norns?

beautiful_love - Sorry that I had you worried!
But I'm liking the developing story between her and Astron. Very fun to read.
Glad you like! Fun to write, too! A gem! A piece of my writing has been called a gem!! I'm so happy...happy Babbles!! Yay!

Mgraham93 - More background of my secondary characters will be coming soon, just not right now. Thanks for the feedback on the healing magic. So awesome that you caught the Ms. Kitty!! Thanks, also, for the comment on The Chariot, it took much deliberation.

Grimm - I'm a feedback groupie too!! I loved that! hehe, cyber love...Thanks for sticking with me! It's only goingto get more intense as Donald realizes that this battle is slipping out of his control.

vampyregurl73 - Thanks sooooo much!!

Thank you all for the awesomesauce feedback! I really enjoy seeing what you all think!!

ON TO THE NEXT!!!
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Re: Ride the Lightning (AU) (Updated 12/06/2011)

Postby Babbles4Twillow » Thu Dec 15, 2011 9:48 pm

Title: Ride the Lightning

Distribution ~ I really don't care as long as it gets read. Just ask first.

Rating ~ NC-17...yes, you read that right!

Disclaimer ~ The characters are not mine and belong to their respective owners. I just play with them. The story, however, is mine.

Feedback ~ ALWAYS WELCOME

Thanks - To my wonderful Bestie and Beta - Astronsoul!

Notes ~ Sorry for the delay!! Had a bout of writer's block, but a bit of meditating, writng exercises, and some good ol' Celtic music has brought you this, my holiday gift to the Kittens! Hope you like! HAPPY HOLIDAYS!

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Chapter 11 - Discovery


“Riley! Son!” The man known as Ripper yelled as he walked inside his cabin, tossing his hood back to reveal a face that contrasted itself. While his eyes were warm, and the lines around his eyes showed that he was a happy man, his bone structure leant a stony set to his features. Hair that was a dull brown was contrasted by the shining grey that started at his temples, brushing back and fading into the rest of his hair, as if an artist had started a new painting, suddenly stopping the brushing movements as a different inspiration struck. His slate blue eyes, only slightly shrouded by his glasses, told of a past he could not let go, a past he felt determined to make up for. The dark days of his past haunted him like nothing else, but he had found solace in his son, a bright boy given him by his late wife, Jenny. Riley had grown into a great man, not tempted by the darkness like his father had been.

“In back,” Riley called out. Ripper followed his son’s voice out to the yard, finding his son drilling through his fighting techniques in slow practiced movements. His strong arms held tension as he swept them across his chest, palms out. His long legs, practically drowning is his loose trousers, were held apart from each other, knees bent as he had been taught. Riley followed through with the last movement before standing straight, shrugging off the tension, grinning at his father, “Where ya been, Pops?”

“There’s been trouble in town,” he answered. “I’ve been looking into it and-”

“Is the world ending?” Riley asked, a glint in the dark brown eyes, eyes just like his mother’s. He ran a hand through his short brown hair.

“I dare say,” Ripper said, taking off his glasses and rubbing them clean with a handkerchief he pulled out from inside his cloak.

“I dare say,” Riley mimicked. “Come on, Giles, old man. When is the world not ending in your eyes?”

Rupert Giles placed his glasses back on his face and gave his son a wry grin, “I’m afraid this is bigger, son.”

Riley searched his father’s face, and saw not only truth, but fear. He asked, his voice now quiet and utterly serious, “It’s time, then?”

Giles nodded, his eyes straying away from his son’s beloved face, gazing into the dusky sky, “If my research is correct, the time of prophecy is upon us.”

Riley’s jaw clenched, determination steeling over his features. This was the time he had prepared for all his life, since he was a young boy, sitting on the floor next to his father’s knee. Back when he had first heard the prophecy, he had wanted nothing more than to play the knight in shining armor, to protect the pretty ladies of which his father spoke. That had started his training, begging his father to teach him to fight. Now that he was older, he knew that women were not always something to protect, but something special…to stand beside. He knew in his heart that what was about to happen, what he would be doing, would be what was right, and that was all he needed.

“Your research is always right,” he said grimly, following his father’s gaze into the sky.

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“You know,” Tara noted, as she helped Willow carry hot water to their guests’ room, “a bath sounds lovely, now that I don’t have to keep one leg out of the water.”

“I have a tub in my room,” Willow said, grunting lightly under the weight of the two pails she was carrying. “It’s built in, with special pipes that Xan…” Her voice trailed off for a moment before she finished her sentence. “Xander installed this whole pipe-system that brings water into the washroom, hot water at that.” She shook her head, “I still have no idea how he did it. He said it was a trade secret and wouldn’t explain it to me. I’ve tried figuring it out, but…”

“You feel as if it’s something you should’ve learned from him? Something you could share?” Tara asked gently, carrying her two pails easily.

“Like that,” Willow agreed. “Also, its… it’s something that belonged completely to him, you know?”

“Yes, I know,” Tara soothed, coming to the door of one of the guest rooms. “A-astron,” she called, frustrated with the return of her stutter. The door opened and they were let into the room.

“Oh!” Astron said, her hands waving around as she gestured, so many words bubbling up behind her lips that she became flustered. She gestured, again, towards the pails, “You didn’t have to. I could’ve-”

Willow cut her off, firmly, “Guest. You’ll have enough work, soon enough. It’s your first night here, you’re exhausted. Take a break, on us.”

Astron looked at the determined set to Willow’s jaw, and the strange way the red head screwed up her face, to the glint in Tara’s eyes. “Um,” she started, waving a hand in front of her face, then pointing to Willow. “What’s with the face?”

Willow’s jaw went slack, staring in shock at her new guest as she grabbed the pails from her, then set them down, laughing along with Tara. The red head shot her eyes between their new friend and her girlfriend, “It’s my resolve face! It always works!”

“It’s very cute, love,” Tara said, trying to hold back her giggles.

Astron stifled a chuckle, glancing over to Pura, who was stretched out on the bed, but she couldn’t hold it back as Willow indignantly yelled, “Cute!”

Tara set down the pails of steaming water next to the tub, eyeing the sputtering Willow. The blonde walked purposefully towards her girlfriend, grabbed her face, and kissed her. Willow’s body dropped as all thought, indignant and otherwise, left her mind. She sighed quietly, “Enjoy your bath,” before she walked dreamily from the room.

Tara turned to look at Astron and both women erupted in laughter. After she quieted, Tara told her new friend, “Dinner should be r-ready in about two hours. You’ll get to meet Buffy. If you don’t f-find your way, one of us will come get you. The soaps and bath s-salts are over there, along with t-towels.” She pointed towards the small cabinet in the corner, knowing where the things were as she had helped Willow quickly straighten the room before showing it to their guests. The blonde gave a slight nod before gracefully exiting the room.

“Thanks,” Astron said softly, looking around at her surroundings again. Incredulously, she said out loud, to no one in particular, “Bath salts?”

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Willow led Tara up two flights of stairs, saying that the second floor was only more guest rooms. She explained, “My great-grandparents loved to entertain.” On the third floor, Tara followed her love through a small hallway. “This floor is all a master-suite, all connected on one side, the other side is reserved for family. That room there,” she pointed, “is Buffy’s.” She stopped nervously in front of a door. “This is my room.” The red head looked nervously down at her hands, twisting her fingers together.

“What is it?” Tara asked gently.

“It…will you,” Willow started, her eyes growing wide. “IwantyoutosharemyroomwithmebecauseIloveyouandIthinkweshouldsharearoom.” She smacked a hand to her forehead as her well-thought out speech turned into a jumbled mess. Tara gently took her hand, looking into Willow’s eyes, her own eyes filled with love. Willow took a deep breath, starting again, “Tara, I love you and I want this room, my room… to be our room.”

“I would love to share a room,” Tara answered, her gentle smile pulling up at one side.

“Good,” Willow said with relief, turning to open the door. Tara’s hand covered her own, and they pushed the door open together. Willow stood back as Tara surveyed the room, her wide eyes taking in the large bed, the lightly colored material with golden stars embroidered into them that surrounded the bed, the dark curtains designed, also, with stars, that were tied back at the windows. The soft light of dusk gave a glow to the room, its soft rays landing on the open books and random items strewn about the surfaces of desks and counters.

Tara turned to her love, eyes shining, “It’s beautiful.”

“Yes,” Willow agreed, looking intently at Tara, the dusky light shining through her hair, the light making her blonde hair a halo. She shook herself out of her reverie, pulling Tara into the adjoining room, which held the tub.

“Wow,” Tara said. She didn’t know whether to be amazed or intimidated by the large tub with all the gadgets. She chose amazed. “It’s big enough for two.”

Willow nodded her agreement, moving to the head of the tub, where there were two knobs, explaining one was for cold, the other for hot, showing the blonde how to stopper the drain at the bottom. After pointing out where everything was, she glanced around for more things to explain, and found nothing. “I’ll, uh, leave you to it, then.”

The red head moved quickly towards the door, but stopped, dead in her tracks, at Tara’s soft, “Willow?”

Without turning, Willow asked, “Yes?”

“Will y-you stay, p-please?”

The red head, gulping, turned to look at her love. Tara looked nervous, but sure, her eyes half-lidded. Willow looked deeply into the deep blue eyes that she loved, searching for any doubts as she moved slowly towards Tara, and found nothing but love swimming in the depths. She reached Tara, her hand going gently, with infinite patience, to Tara’s cheek. Willow leaned forward, placing a tender kiss on Tara’s lips, full of promise, heat and desire held in check. Leaning back, she smiled softly at Tara’s confusion.

“Bath,” Willow explained, setting the stopper in the drain and turning on the hot water. “Pampering, first.”

“And then?” Tara asked with a quivering voice as Willow moved behind her, silently undoing the laces to her dress.

“More pampering,” Willow whispered stroking her hands down the scar-ridden back of her love. There was no flare of anger this time, no sudden well of power waiting to be unleashed inside her. No, there was only love. She put both of her hands, palm-down, on the bit of back shown by the released laces, sliding them up and over, pushing the material away from the blonde’s shoulders. The dress fell with a light rustle, leaving Tara in only her panties.

Taking a deep breath, Tara turned to Willow, whose green eyes darkened with desire at the sight of the body laid bare before her. Tara-stomach, Willow thought staring at the taut stomach. Tara-breasts, she thought, her eyes roving over the expanse of skin, the abundant breasts, rosy nipples that grew hard beneath her intent stare.

“Beautiful, Tara,” Willow breathed. “You’re beautiful.”

Tara laughed nervously, “Oh, I’m nothing special.”

“No,” Willow objected, her eyes staring earnestly into Tara’s. “You are.”

Tara took another deep breath, trying to calm her nerves, and noticed the way the movement drew Willow’s eyes back down to her chest. She laughed, all tension released as her love looked back at her sheepishly. She lifted a questioning eyebrow, causing Willow to turn around. Glad that the red head had understood, Tara untied Willow’s laces, feeling no rush as she slowly undressed her. She gasped silently at the beauty of Willow as more and more skin was revealed, feeling her own desire pool between her legs. They faced each other, moving to take of the last bits of clothing that hid their bodies from each other.

Without taking her eyes from Tara’s, Willow leaned over and turned off the tap, her mind trying to settle on which soap and salts to place in and near the water. Coming to a decision, she turned and walked to the cabinet on the far side of the room, knowing that Tara’s eyes were on her the whole time. She would have tried swaying her hips, but didn’t think she could do it without looking ridiculous. Grabbing what she needed, she turned back to the tub and stopped at the look in the blue eyes. Blue eye’s stared at her hungrily, darkened, almost black, with desire, sending warmth shooting throughout her body.

Hands trembling, Willow poured rose and lavender scented salts into the steaming water, setting honeysuckle soap on the lip of the tub. After they had dissolved, Willow held a hand out to Tara, helping her into the water, then stepped in herself, sitting behind her love. Gently, always patient, they washed each other, hands tender with promises, desire settling in and resting as their hands explored, discovering skin, awakening love as their hearts expanded, swelling with new love as they entrusted each other with this small task, giving their bodies freely.

Willow cupped the scented water, wetting Tara’s hair before massaging soap into her scalp. Tara’s eyes closed as she moaned out, “Willow-hands.”

Letting out a small chuckle, her desire rising again as her hands flowed through the blonde tresses, Willow rinsed out Tara’s hair, turning when Tara nudged her, letting Tara return the favor. Tara watched her long fingers massage into the red silk, loving the feel of Willow’s long hair.

After her hair had been rinsed, Willow said, “I believe we are done.”

“I suppose so,” Tara laughed out, all her nervousness gone as she stood, grabbed a towel and wrapped it around herself. When the red head had released the drain, she held out another towel, drying Willow’s skin as she stood in front of her, then stood still as Willow did the same. Once dry, they hung up the towels, taking the other’s hand and moved silently into the bedroom.

The soft glow of dusk had left the room, so Willow let go of Tara’s hand, moving around the room to light candles and the fire. She pulled the drapes on the bed, leaving it open to them. Finally, turning back to Tara, she took her love’s face tenderly in her hands, pulling her in for a kiss. Her tongue sought entrance and was granted, their tongues slid over each other in a quiet dance.

The blonde pulled Willow backwards, onto the bed, their kiss never breaking as they lay down, Willow between Tara’s long legs. Tara moaned into Willow’s mouth as their centers met, heat meeting heat, wet meeting wet. Willow’s hands moved from Tara’s face, one moving to lift her slightly up, the other gliding softly across Tara’s skin, leaving a train of feverishly burning skin. Tara arched into Willow-hand as said hand cupped a breast. As her hand kneaded Tara’s breast, Willow broke the kiss, lips moving across Tara’s jaw before she moved to the soft skin of the blonde’s neck, lightly nipping the skin just below Tara’s ear. She trailed kisses down, across collarbone, and flicked her tongue against Tara’s rosy nipple before taking it into her hot mouth.

Tara moaned, back arching again, her eyes slamming shut as Willow’s hands and mouth made love to her breasts, alternating. Her eyes opened wide again when Willow’s hand left her breast, moving softly down the skin of her stomach, resting lightly against her curls, between their bodies.

“Willow,” she breathed, not knowing what she was begging for, but begging for it all the same. Willow shifted, lying beside Tara, desire-filled eyes staring into Tara’s. Tara answered the unspoken need, her own hand moving to Willow’s curls, as she shifted to face her love. They moved as one, their eyes never leaving each other, as their fingers delved into each other’s folds, feeling the wetness of their desire equaled in the other.

Tara’s fingers, once so unsure, moved with a purpose, knowing inside herself what she needed to give, not questioning where the knowledge came from, sliding inside her love, first with one finger, then two. Feeling Willow’s heat encase her was ecstasy, a feeling she never wanted to let go of. She gasped as Willow’s fingers rubbed against her sensitive nub, before trailing down, resting hesitantly against her entrance.

Willow looked, once more, for any doubt, searching, and found none. She leaned forward, giving Tara another tender kiss as she moved a finger inside Tara’s wet entrance, pushing against the tight barrier inside, and stilled her hand at Tara’s gasp. They lay for a moment, perfectly still, before Tara started moving against Willow’s hand.

They moved together in synchronization, fires building inside as they gave themselves to each other. It wasn’t long before they cried out their love, silence broken as they climaxed into each other’s hands. They lay back, chests heaving for air, Tara cuddled into Willow’s side.

Getting her breath back, Willow asked, “Did I hurt you, love?”

“Never,” Tara breathed. They grew quiet, eyes heavy. Tara spoke up first, “We’ll be late for dinner.”

Willow chuckled sleepily, “They’ll understand. I was with my love, I have an excuse for being a bad hostess.”

Tara chuckled, then quickly grew serious, saying into Willow’s neck, “I am, you know.”

“What?” Willow asked, almost asleep.

“Yours,” Tara breathed, before they both drifted off to sleep, smiles on their faces.

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TBC!
Note2: While writing the last section, I was listening to:
Christofori's Dream, David Lanz - Bath scene
Sargasso Sea, Suzanne Ciani - Bed scene
Very fitting if you take a listen!
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Re: Ride the Lightning (AU) (Updated 12/06/2011)

Postby AstronSoul » Thu Dec 15, 2011 9:48 pm

DIBS!

Will edit later after work :)
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Re: Ride the Lightning (AU) (Updated 12/15/2011)

Postby Ariel » Fri Dec 16, 2011 1:07 am

Oooooh, Babble-y One! :bigwave

Update! :eatme :pinky :bounce :banana

Wow, Riley as Ripper’s son – I like that! And like their relationship and the way you describe Giles – the dual qualities of who he is showing in his face: original and interesting!

Astron looked at the determined set to Willow’s jaw, and the strange way the red head screwed up her face, to the glint in Tara’s eyes. “Um,” she started, waving a hand in front of her face, then pointing to Willow. “What’s with the face?”

Willow’s jaw went slack, staring in shock at her new guest as she grabbed the pails from her, then set them down, laughing along with Tara. The red head shot her eyes between their new friend and her girlfriend, “It’s my resolve face! It always works!”

“It’s very cute, love,” Tara said, trying to hold back her giggles.

Astron stifled a chuckle, glancing over to Pura, who was stretched out on the bed, but she couldn’t hold it back as Willow indignantly yelled, “Cute!”

Tara set down the pails of steaming water next to the tub, eyeing the sputtering Willow. The blonde walked purposefully towards her girlfriend, grabbed her face, and kissed her. Willow’s body dropped as all thought, indignant and otherwise, left her mind. She sighed quietly, “Enjoy your bath,” before she walked dreamily from the room.
Oh, wow! This was funny and adorable and great in every way! You learn more about Willow, Tara, and Astron’s sense of humor. Love Willow going brainless under a Tara-kiss; that’s a magic I’d be willing to try!

Willow took a deep breath, starting again, “Tara, I love you and I want this room, my room… to be our room.”

“I would love to share a room,” Tara answered, her gentle smile pulling up at one side.

“Good,” Willow said with relief, turning to open the door. Tara’s hand covered her own, and they pushed the door open together.
I love this. How Willow transforms her room to their room, then Tara’s hand on top of hers. Touching and well done. :love

“More pampering,” Willow whispered stroking her hands down the scar-ridden back of her love. There was no flare of anger this time, no sudden well of power waiting to be unleashed inside her. No, there was only love. She put both of her hands, palm-down, on the bit of back shown by the released laces, sliding them up and over, pushing the material away from the blonde’s shoulders. The dress fell with a light rustle, leaving Tara in only her panties.

Taking a deep breath, Tara turned to Willow, whose green eyes darkened with desire at the sight of the body laid bare before her. Tara-stomach, Willow thought staring at the taut stomach. Tara-breasts, she thought, her eyes roving over the expanse of skin, the abundant breasts, rosy nipples that grew hard beneath her intent stare.

“Beautiful, Tara,” Willow breathed. “You’re beautiful.”
I like the sensual use of sound as well as sight.

Then the bath:
Gently, always patient, they washed each other, hands tender with promises, desire settling in and resting as their hands explored, discovering skin, awakening love as their hearts expanded, swelling with new love as they entrusted each other with this small task, giving their bodies freely.

Willow cupped the scented water, wetting Tara’s hair before massaging soap into her scalp. Tara’s eyes closed as she moaned out, “Willow-hands.”

Letting out a small chuckle, her desire rising again as her hands flowed through the blonde tresses, Willow rinsed out Tara’s hair, turning when Tara nudged her, letting Tara return the favor. Tara watched her long fingers massage into the red silk, loving the feel of Willow’s long hair.
Poetic, again using smell and sound and touch and sight – beautifully imagery. Thank you. :flower

Their lovemaking IS lovemaking – tender, exploring, exciting as they commit themselves to each other.

Then the final canon reference and the lines before it – so very, very sweet. :love

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Re: Ride the Lightning (AU) (Updated 12/15/2011)

Postby True_Love » Fri Dec 16, 2011 3:02 pm

Hey Allie,

Yay, you finally updated! I was gettin' a little worried there for minute. So many great stories are abandoned on PENS, I didn't want yours to be another one to add to the carnage.

Okay feedback, I am so happy Tara is up and moving around. I'm sure it was getting kind of limiting on what you could do with her in that big castle and all those stairs. Of course, as soon as she could stand she suddenly had more interest in laying back down, hmm. *wink* I'm not going to break down the sexy-goodness because it's just that -- sexy and good. I know it's hard to write the first time, maybe everytime, I don't know. I'm still blushing and my girls haven't even gone all the way yet.

Riley and the Ripper, cool. Hey, that sounded like a new show on USA or something. Maybe you could pitch it to them, lol. Interesting pairing the two of them up together. I can't wait to see how they contribute to the fight. Anyway, I'm really curious to meet all the new characters that you plan to bring into the story. You touched on a couple last time and I thought we would get a little more info on them in this update. Maybe next. . . week?

Thank you for updating! Looking forward to more!
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Re: Ride the Lightning (AU) (Updated 12/15/2011)

Postby Finey_McFine » Fri Dec 16, 2011 10:54 pm

Hey Allie!

Loooooooved this chapter! Interesting that Riley is Ripper's son. That was a nice little twist and I'm glad to see they are on the protecting the "Pretty ladies" and not the other way around.

Then there is total sweetness with Willow asking Tara to share her room. Then switching gears to total hotness in the bath and then the bed. You did a really great job with their first time...just the right mix of sweet and hot. ;-) I also loved the canon dialog squeezed in at the end.

I'm assuming that was the last "nice" chapter before the angst sets in?? Looking forward to more!
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Re: Ride the Lightning (AU) (Updated 12/15/2011)

Postby JustSkipIt » Sat Dec 17, 2011 6:49 pm

Hey there,
I'm so behind. I am really enjoying this. I'm glad for this later chapter on Astron and Pura. I have to say that from the earlier chapter where Pura is non-committal about her soulmate, I was worried that she was bad and her soulmate was bad. Now we know it/she is Astron so there is that and I feel somewhat committed to their story as well. More help is coming and it certainly seems to be a battle of epic proportions. Wow. Yay Ripper even if Riley is in this story. Not a fan but still. Their first time was quite well written. Not too detailed so to be medical but not so flowery to be yucky. Just the right balance and tone.
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Re: Ride the Lightning (AU) (Updated 12/15/2011)

Postby leos_pride » Sat Dec 17, 2011 8:18 pm

Update-y goodness!!! :D

Riley as Giles' son huh? Very interesting. I like the way you set up their dynamic while staying true to their characters. I'm guessing we will see both of them showing up at the castle soon?

And holy moly steamy bath scene! Beautifully written, very loving and passionate. Wow!

I'm very curious to know what Spike, Dru and Angel have been up too during this time. I'm sure they will surface again soon enough. I hope Pura and Astron talk soon and Pura tells Astron about who she really is. Can't wait for the next update!

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Re: Ride the Lightning (AU) (Updated 12/15/2011)

Postby Wills redemption » Sun Dec 18, 2011 4:16 pm

Another great update, your writer skills are amazing, love how you make descriptions of simple facts (f.e. Rippers haircolor) poetic without overdoing it. Our girls first time together was also beautifully written, of course. I really liked the introduction of Riley here, I'm hoping he will become Buffy's knight in shining armour and gives her the solace and love she must desperately need (funny thought that Buffy might become Giles' daughter-in-law).
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Re: Ride the Lightning (AU) (Updated 12/15/2011)

Postby Mgraham93 » Tue Dec 20, 2011 2:33 pm

Really great chapter
In his first appearence I wasn't sure who's side Ripper was on possibly just from name association Ripper with bad Giles with good.
Interesting introduction for Riley I'm interested to see what you planned for him
the mention of Xander doing the Castle's plumbing was nice it shows how close the pair were as friends and I had a feeling about the ending when Willow said this
it’s something that belonged completely to him, you know?
so i was jumping up and down happily in anticipaction for the use of one of the best Willow Tara conversations of all time.
Astrons last line was funny.
Their first time together was extremely sweet you wrote it extremely well
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Re: Ride the Lightning (AU) (Updated 12/15/2011)

Postby fhiwda » Wed Dec 21, 2011 9:58 am

I find this story to be intriquing to say the least.
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Re: Ride the Lightning (AU) (Updated 12/15/2011)

Postby Babbles4Twillow » Fri Dec 23, 2011 7:21 am

I want you all to know I am working on an update, but it's coming along slowly. It's either work through the headaches or try and find a moment of lucidity with my medication. I'm not going to give up on RTL I promise, but please bear with me. Thank you all so much for staying with me this long, I hope I dont lose any of you along the way.

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Re: Ride the Lightning (AU) (Updated 12/15/2011)

Postby Babbles4Twillow » Wed Dec 28, 2011 6:41 pm

Feedback responses!! Yays!

Astron - Congrats on dibs!
Will edit later after work

*ahem* LOL

Ariel - Babble-y One? Methinks I like it! Glad you liked it! There's so much in your feedback that I would just say "thanks" to so..THANKS!
I like the sensual use of sound as well as sight.

I do my best! Really, all it is, is that I see it in my head, playing like a movie, and I just type it out. So, in that sense, if I hear it, its probably gonna be typed out.
P.S. If that music helped you write THAT then I’d better crank it up!

Music has always been an inspiration to me, especially Celtic music, when writing this, because, to me, it just fits. If this was a movie, the whole score would be Celtic music!
Thanks so much!

True_Love - Hello! No worries about giving up on this...I hate unfinished stories and I'm determined to finish this. Thanks so much for fb. Yes, it made me blush furiously while writing and posting. I've written smut before, but it was very undetailed. This was a whole new experience for me.
You touched on a couple last time and I thought we would get a little more info on them in this update. Maybe next. . . week?

Wish granted! Lol. Truth is, my story writes itself the way it wants...I can only whisper my wants to it and hope something comes from it. Good thing it gave me a filler update, meaning a bit of explanation on some of the characters!

Finey_McFine - Hiya! I'm a bit worried that the kitten were worried about Ripper. When he said "I have a name for friends, but you sir, can call me Ripper" I thought it spoke for itself. I'm gonna have to work on that. :D Glad you enjoyed the update! Well, you assumed somewhat correctly...I believe the next few chapters will be a build-up, but yes, angst and bloddy battles are a-comin! Thankies!

JustSkipIt - I'm glad you're enjoying, its come as a bit of a surprise for me that the kittens actually like this. I'm committed to the A/P storyline as well, and I'm glad I'm not the only one. I've never been a big Riley fan either, but I hope to give his character new light. Thanks for the feedback! I was worried that their first time would come off as "yucky."

Leo - Hopefully the men get their soon...too much estrogen at that castle! Haha!
And holy moly steamy bath scene! Beautifully written, very loving and passionate. Wow!

Thanks! Glad you liked!
As to the rest? Read on!

Wills redemption - Hi!! Thanks so much for the compliments! You're making my modest self blush!
I too hope that Buffy can find solace in Riley.
(funny thought that Buffy might become Giles' daughter-in-law)

Bit ironic isn't it?

Mgraham93 - Thanks for stopping by!
so i was jumping up and down happily in anticipaction for the use of one of the best Willow Tara conversations of all time.

I'm not sure I understand what you're talking about. Thanks for the feedback, hope you continue to read and enjoy this latest installment.

fhiwda - Welcome to RtL! Thanks for the feedback and hope you stick around!

PHEW - that was a lot of fb! Thanks Kittens! ON TO THE NEXT!
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Re: Ride the Lightning (AU) (Updated 12/15/2011)

Postby Babbles4Twillow » Wed Dec 28, 2011 6:59 pm

Title: Ride the Lightning

Distribution ~ I really don't care as long as it gets read. Just ask first.

Rating ~ NC-17

Disclaimer ~ The characters are not mine and belong to their respective owners. I just play with them. The story, however, is mine.

Feedback ~ ALWAYS WELCOME

Thanks - To my wonderful Bestie and Beta - Astronsoul!

Notes ~ I'm back! Not giving up on this, I promise! Sorry it took so long. Not only was I dealing with health problems but I was away from home for the holidays! With that said, I hope you enjoy this chapter, a bit of explanation, mostly filler ;)

Thoughts and catspeak in italics

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Chapter 12 - What's your tale...


Sleeping, Pura complained to herself, as she walked around the castle, all sleeping.

She shook her head as the errant thought of waking someone up crossed her mind. Being in a new place was unsettling to her, not knowing all the ways out and in. Including the exits that don’t need thumbs, she grumbled to herself. At least Astron had thought to leave the bedroom door open, seeing as the room wasn’t large enough for her to pace. Again, she cursed herself for sleeping through dinner the previous night, feeling the emptiness of her stomach from not eating during her travels. The tiger paced the hallways for a moment before sitting right in front of the great doors, staring them down as if they might feel uneasy under her stare and open themselves. The knobs on the doors gleamed with a taunting light, making Pura let out a growl.

“They didn’t mean it,” came a laughter-filled voice from behind her. Pura stood quickly, turning to see Willow coming down the stairs. “What did the big, mean doors do?”

Funny. Make fun of the feline whose thumbs don’t move, Pura grumbled.

“I’m sorry,” Willow said, instantly contrite. “I woke up in a really good mood.”

Unlike me, Pura replied. I apologize. I’m just very hungry. Is there anything worth hunting around?

“There’s a stream ‘round back with fish. I can show you,” Willow said as she opened the doors.

They walked towards the side of the castle, Pura padding along silently beside Willow. Willow usually felt the need to fill silence with pointless babbling, but found that silence with the tiger was easy. It gave her time to study Pura. The tiger’s aura was constantly shifting, it seemed, with her movements. As if each step, her magic was used. For a magical creature she was. If the talking didn’t give it away, Willow thought wryly.

As they rounded the side of the castle, the distant sound of running water could be heard.

If you have other business, I’m sure I can find it from here, Pura said.

“Oh, I’d like to come with you, if that’s okay. I have questions,” Willow answered with a self-depreciating smile.

Ah, a curious one.

“Always.”

Feel free to ask. I cannot guarantee an answer, Pura said. Although, she did feel that she could trust the redhead. Usually, her kind could not tell anyone else about their tribe. As in, literally, they could not explain. Something within themselves stopped them, just like their transformation was stopped. However, something within Pura seemed to speak with the redhead around. A friend of the tribe, Pura suddenly realized. Years ago, in the old days, there were women who came to the tribe, shared their secrets and tried to help what they called “The Cursed Ones.” Maybe Willow was a descendant of one of those women. The tiger internally shrugged.

“What are you? I tried to think of a nicer way to phrase that, but I can’t seem to find one that gets my question asked with no confusion. I can see that your magic shifts, I know that you are no ordinary tiger.”

You’re right; I am not an ordinary tiger. I am a shape-shifter, of the Inucabi tribe.

“Inucabi? That sounds familiar,” Willow said, more to herself than Pura.

Yes, it would sound familiar, I think. You seem to be what my people call a friend of the tribe, meaning I can actually tell you about myself. We were cursed, many many years ago, and because of that, I cannot tell of my tribe, or what we are.

“So you can tell me, for some reason. Very strange. Does Astron know of this?”

She does not. I am unable to tell her.

“This curse, what does it entail?”

My tribe can change back and forth from our human bodies to our spirit animal with nothing more than a blink of the eye, until we come into our teenage years. That’s when the curse sets in. Until we find our true mate, we are stuck in our animal form. When we find our true mate, they must learn to love our animal before they can see our true form. Once the love is exchanged, we can start our transformation.

“Start it?” Willow’s voice was full of confusion, her face scrunched up with her thoughts. “Can you not go back into being able to change quickly?”

If only, Pura answered, wistfully. Shape-shifters who stay in animal form for a long time have trouble shifting. It’s a very painful process.

“Painful, yet worth it,” Willow stated, as they came to the edge of the stream.

Yes, if nothing else, I miss my thumbs.

Willow laughed, but then immediately sobered. “Astron is your mate?”

If she’ll have me, Pura answered honestly. My heart is hers.

“We’ll have to see what we can do to make sure that happens,” Willow said, resolve setting into her features.


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“What was training like?” River asked, as they walked their horses. They had been traveling for some time now, having already stopped at two other magical villages, acquiring two more Wiccans along the way. Sera and Calah seemed like adept, if quiet, magic users.

“The training?” Charna mused, bringing her memories of her training to the forefront of her mind. “It was very grueling. Wake early, go to bed late, and work hard in between. It’s very rare to get a moment of rest. I’m glad I went, though. Very worth it, I can call the winds easily, and I know many ways to use it, for defense or otherwise. It was your turn to go when I returned, correct?”

“Yes,” River replied. “I worked hard while you were gone. I learned that water is everywhere, and now I can call it whenever I like, from anything. Well, almost anything.”

“Excuse me,” Calah piped up, her high-pitched voice startling the horses.

Charna turned to look at the small, mousy woman. Looks could be deceiving. “Yes?”

“What do you both mean, by calling on the winds or water? I’m confused.”

“We are elementals,” River answered. “Each magic user from our village can call upon an element for magic. Other magicks do not come to us.”

“So you can’t do spells?” Sera asked. As she asked the question, the dark haired woman fumbled her pack, spilling scrolls across the hard-packed earth of the path. Sera seemed awfully clumsy for a spell caster, a magic user who could call magicks by reading from scrolls. She was constantly fidgeting, and tripping over her own small feet.

“No, we cannot,” Charna answered. “There are many types and variants of magic, and ways to call the magicks. Elementals are born with the ability to call upon an element, sometimes more than one, and we train all our lives to become masters. Calah is a variation of an elemental, being able to call upon the earth, and weather. I cannot even begin to describe the many ways that magicks can be called.”

“That’s a lot,” Sera said, her eyes wide and child-like. She fumbled again with her pack, before she caught her glasses, pushing them back up on her nose before they could slip from her face.

“There’s a lot for all of us to learn, no matter how much we know,” River answered sagely.

Charna nodded, then narrowed her eyes as she saw dust being kicked up further along the path, “Look sharp, ladies. Company coming.”

“Oh boy,” Sera squeaked, dropping her pack.


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“Can I ask you something?” Astron asked Tara, as they stood watching Pura and Willow splash in the creak from the library window.

“You j-just did,” Tara laughed. “Go a-ahead.”

Astron enjoyed the joke for a moment before asking, very seriously, “How do you tell someone you love them?”

Tara turned from the window, a small, gentle smile on her face as she looked into Astron’s aura. When Astron started to squirm under her stare, Tara’s smile only became brighter. “You just tell her,” Tara finally said, her voice almost a whisper as she turned back to the window.

“What if it’s unconventional? Maybe that person doesn’t love me back.”

“Pura loves you, Astron. Just tell her, and see what happens.”

Astron set her shoulders, “I’ll tell her tonight, when I get the chance to speak with her alone. Until then, we have things to do.”

“What things,” Tara asked curiously.

“Training,” Astron said, spinning Sais from her belt with a laugh.

Tara looked nervously at the shining metal instruments, “Knives and I… w-well we don’t go t-together. I’m n-not very g-good with t-the…” She started swinging her hands in front of her like a dog-paddle.

“Swimming?” Astron held back a laugh.

“Violence,” Tara said with a huff. They looked at each other, very serious for a moment before breaking into raucous laughter.

Astron calmed down; then gently set her hand down on Tara’s shoulder, “Hun, you need to learn to fight. If someone gets close enough, I don’t want you getting hurt. Or if Willow is backed into a corner and I’m-”

“Teach me,” Tara said grimly, with no hint of a stutter. “No one touches my girl.”

“That’s right,” Astron said. “Both of you will learn.”


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“The time is coming,” William told Angelus.

“We’ll be ready,” Angelus answered with a sneer, rubbing his hands together, causing black sparks to jump from his palms.

“Yes, we will,” Drusilla said from the far side of the room. “Spike, be a doll and give me a puppet show. I want to play.”

With a wicked laugh, William turned in the dark room to look at his girl. He spoke a few words, and the ground started to crumble from beneath them, bodies climbing from the packed dirt. Three dead men stood in front of him, dumbly waiting for instructions.

“Dance,” Angelus said with a growl, and the bodies started jerking into an awkward jig as Drusilla clapped, getting up to dance also. Her child-like giggle filled the dark room as she grabbed the arm of one of the bodies, turning into a spin. She laughed louder when the arm she grabbed ripped off but the man kept dancing.

“I think it’s time we moved on,” Angelus said.

“Agreed,” William said, his smile growing. Together, the two men spoke, calling the dead. In the night, screams rent the air from the village, as zombies attacked the villagers. Drusilla’s laughter grew louder, William and Angelus joining in the revelry as the villagers screamed their last breaths, and the night sky was lit by the fires of burning homes.

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TBC!!
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Re: Ride the Lightning (AU) (Updated 12/15/2011)

Postby AstronSoul » Wed Dec 28, 2011 6:59 pm

DIBS!

ok since I was a bad kitten and totally forgot to edit my last post...here we go...

“They didn’t mean it,” came a laughter-filled voice from behind her. Pura stood quickly, turning to see Willow coming down the stairs. “What did the big, mean doors do?”

Funny. Make fun of the feline whose thumbs don’t move, Pura grumbled.

“I’m sorry,” Willow said, instantly contrite. “I woke up in a really good mood.”


Adorable, Pura complaining about her thumbs lol

You’re right; I am not an ordinary tiger. I am a shape-shifter, of the Inucabi tribe.

“Inucabi? That sounds familiar,” Willow said, more to herself than Pura.

Yes, it would sound familiar, I think. You seem to be what my people call a friend of the tribe, meaning I can actually tell you about myself. We were cursed, many many years ago, and because of that, I cannot tell of my tribe, or what we are.

“So you can tell me, for some reason. Very strange. Does Astron know of this?”

She does not. I am unable to tell her.


Ooo so fascinating!!!! Love how you explain Pura's past a bit.

“Painful, yet worth it,” Willow stated, as they came to the edge of the stream.

Yes, if nothing else, I miss my thumbs.

Willow laughed, but then immediately sobered. “Astron is your mate?”

If she’ll have me, Pura answered honestly. My heart is hers.

“We’ll have to see what we can do to make sure that happens,” Willow said, resolve setting into her features.


Heheh I can see Willow's gears turning seeing how she can get Astron to 'open up' hehehe this will get interesting.

“No, we cannot,” Charna answered. “There are many types and variants of magic, and ways to call the magicks. Elementals are born with the ability to call upon an element, sometimes more than one, and we train all our lives to become masters. Calah is a variation of an elemental, being able to call upon the earth, and weather. I cannot even begin to describe the many ways that magicks can be called.”


This is great showing the different and so many options in magick's, even hinting that others can control more than one element. I do love back stories ^^

“Can I ask you something?” Astron asked Tara, as they stood watching Pura and Willow splash in the creak from the library window.

“You j-just did,” Tara laughed. “Go a-ahead.”


Yay for Tara's humor! Not many show her funny side, nice to see.

Astron set her shoulders, “I’ll tell her tonight, when I get the chance to speak with her alone. Until then, we have things to do.”

“What things,” Tara asked curiously.

“Training,” Astron said, spinning Sais from her belt with a laugh.

Tara looked nervously at the shining metal instruments, “Knives and I… w-well we don’t go t-together. I’m n-not very g-good with t-the…” She started swinging her hands in front of her like a dog-paddle.

“Swimming?” Astron held back a laugh.

“Violence,” Tara said with a huff. They looked at each other, very serious for a moment before breaking into raucous laughter.


Ok first off, finally Astron is gonna tell her! It's about damn time.

Second training yess! I do love training, and it will be interesting to see what weapon Tara is actually good with, among seeing what the other's know.

Hehe yay for cannon moment! Wow never thought i would see it that way but it works well!

Astron calmed down; then gently set her hand down on Tara’s shoulder, “Hun, you need to learn to fight. If someone gets close enough, I don’t want you getting hurt. Or if Willow is backed into a corner and I’m-”

“Teach me,” Tara said grimly, with no hint of a stutter. “No one touches my girl.”

“That’s right,” Astron said. “Both of you will learn.”


This shows that these two women would so anything, and Tara especially to keep Willow safe, I mean she just found her, hell yeah she's gonna protect her.

Ok no quotes for the evil trio, all I can say is ew ew ew, hate necromancers period and Dru...just creeps the hell out of me in a very bad way. ~ prays I don't have to go up against her~

Great update bestie can't wait, and seriously I can't wait for more!!!

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Re: Ride the Lightning (AU) (Updated 12/28/2011)

Postby Ariel » Thu Dec 29, 2011 12:37 am

Hail Allie, Babble-y One of the Ancient Ways!

She shook her head as the errant thought of waking someone up crossed her mind. Being in a new place was unsettling to her, not knowing all the ways out and in. Including the exits that don’t need thumbs, she grumbled to herself. At least Astron had thought to leave the bedroom door open, seeing as the room wasn’t large enough for her to pace. Again, she cursed herself for sleeping through dinner the previous night, feeling the emptiness of her stomach from not eating during her travels. The tiger paced the hallways for a moment before sitting right in front of the great doors, staring them down as if they might feel uneasy under her stare and open themselves. The knobs on the doors gleamed with a taunting light, making Pura let out a growl.

“They didn’t mean it,” came a laughter-filled voice from behind her. Pura stood quickly, turning to see Willow coming down the stairs. “What did the big, mean doors do?”
Just funny and wonderful! :lol :lmao :laugh :rofl I love the whole Pura dialogue. Also THANK YOU for the geas (binding spell) otherwise Pura would just change and say, “Hidely-Hodely – I’m in love with you!” This adds a lot to the suspense and frustration. And yes you are TEASING US! Naughty! Naughty! I want the BIG Kitten Love ASAP! And again, I am not usually in favor of inter-species dating, but this is different!

Okay Astie got there ahead of me (as usual! :impatient ) but I love the canon reference and the grim motivation which also references Tara’s great line when she goes axe-happy in S-5.
“What things,” Tara asked curiously.

“Training,” Astron said, spinning Sais from her belt with a laugh.

Tara looked nervously at the shining metal instruments, “Knives and I… w-well we don’t go t-together. I’m n-not very g-good with t-the…” She started swinging her hands in front of her like a dog-paddle.

“Swimming?” Astron held back a laugh.

“Violence,” Tara said with a huff. They looked at each other, very serious for a moment before breaking into raucous laughter.

Astron calmed down; then gently set her hand down on Tara’s shoulder, “Hun, you need to learn to fight. If someone gets close enough, I don’t want you getting hurt. Or if Willow is backed into a corner and I’m-”

“Teach me,” Tara said grimly, with no hint of a stutter. “No one touches my girl.”


Also enjoyed the elemental magicks and the various characters massing together.

As for the villains, utterly heartless and disgusting. The worst version of “Monster Mash” I ever saw! Btw, intrigued by your inspiration from Celtic music, reminds me of Heather’s playlists on her fic.

Thank you and KEEP POSTING!!!! :kgeek :whip

Love this!

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Re: Ride the Lightning (AU) (Updated 12/28/2011)

Postby True_Love » Thu Dec 29, 2011 4:58 pm

Hey Allie,

Glad you were feeling up to posting this little gem. Thanks for giving us more insight in to the various groups gathering and preparing for the battle. I can't wait until the group of traveling Magick users meet up with Willow and Tara. It's gonna be like a talent show. As for Astron and Pura, just say it, dang it. We all know you two love each other, so just get on with it. Usually it's bad enough with Willow and Tara, now we have to add these two to the angst, ahh. Finally, for the evil trio. Ick, I can't stand Dru, she just creeps the heck outta me. I can't wait till she gets her comeuppance as well as the other two. Oh yeah, let's throw in Tara's dad for good measure, too.

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Re: Ride the Lightning (AU) (Updated 12/28/2011)

Postby leos_pride » Sat Dec 31, 2011 4:50 pm

Hurray update!

I’m glad Pura was able to talk to Willow about her true nature and loving Astron. And that Tara was able to help Astron in encouraging her to tell Pura her true feelings for her “friend” I’m hoping we get to see that evening’s talk in the next update :D

I’m curious to know what “company” River, Sera and Charna just ran into. Hope it isn’t of the evil variety but I’m sure they could handle it even if it is.

Holy rising evil, batman! Spike, Dru and Angel are up to some serious no good! And this is why I kill zombies on a regular basis, one must be ready for when they attack! (thank you left 4 dead, for great zombie killing times :P) Anyways, I’m curious to see what they are really up to and if/when they end up taking over/combining “operations” with dear old Donald.

Hope you are feeling better soon and keep up with the great writing!

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Re: Ride the Lightning (AU) (Updated 12/28/2011)

Postby Mgraham93 » Sun Jan 01, 2012 4:44 am

First an explanation about my previous feedback - what I meant was when Willow mentioned the castle's plumbing was something that was completely Xander's gave me the feeling that the I am you know, what? yours conversation was going to take place (which it did)
I really liked the explanation for who Pura is and what caused her to be a cat.
The elementals and the other magic users there gathering sound interesting, I like the variety of different types of magic users
Astron and Tara's conversation was great, relationship advice and deciding to train. (Queue montage music)
Angelus, Drusilla and William are definitely my favourite canon villains and I love the way you've depicted them here
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Re: Ride the Lightning (AU) (Updated 12/28/2011)

Postby fhiwda » Sun Jan 01, 2012 1:19 pm

I'm eager to see how the love confession goes....

Great update.
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Re: Ride the Lightning (AU) (Updated 12/28/2011)

Postby Babbles4Twillow » Wed Jan 04, 2012 12:46 pm

Sorry, not an update. I'm here to tell you all that I'm moving from a bad home situation to live in a better one, BUT no internet, so I will update when I can. I do, however, have a computer, so I can keep writing. Please dont give up on me. This fic WILL go on, just with a bit of time between updates. Take care, all of you, and know that I have my phone so I can still read all of my favorite stories.
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Re: Ride the Lightning (AU) (Updated 12/28/2011)

Postby Babbles4Twillow » Fri Jan 13, 2012 1:24 am

No replies this time guys, sorry. Just a big huge THANK YOU to all you lovely readers.


Title: Ride the Lightning

Distribution: Just ask.

Feedback: Yes, please.

Rating: Lets just stick to NC-17, for safety.

Thanks: To my wonderful Bestie/beta Astron

Notes: Um.... *gets down on knees and begs forgiveness* Seriously though, thanks to everyone for the well wishes and understanding, and to Ariel for the not so discreet pushing. (She even offered to send me a power cord for my computer...yeah that’s a long story) EXTRA thanks to Astron for being so wonderful as to post this for me. Everyone give her a round of applause. Enjoy!

Thoughts and cat-speak in italics


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Chapter 13 - Confessions

“I’m all sweaty!” Willow complained. She swung her short sword again, hitting the ‘dummy’ Astron had set up with the flat edge.

“I think that’s the point, sweetie,” Tara said calmly, stretching her back.

“Why do you get to do the easy-” Willow whined, then stopped mid-whine. “Oh, Goddess, I sound like Dawn.”

Tara arched an eyebrow at her lover, “Easy?”

Willow eyed the dummy Tara had been practicing on. Its canvas skin was ripped to shreds, burn marks scoring all along it. She smiled sheepishly, “I meant the magic.”

“So you think it’s easy to make my magic hold itself only on the blade, only to burn what I want it to, and not everything else?”

“I suppose not. Sorry.” Willow swung her sword again, putting more force behind it. She was about to slice through the shoulder when Astron’s loud comment scared her.

“Not so much force!” Astron sighed when Willow jumped, causing her to slice off the dummy’s head. “Well, it’s dead now.” She gently took the sword from the redhead, demonstrating as she spoke, “If you use jabs, like so, you won’t tire so quickly.”

“Less swing-y, more jab-y,” Willow nodded. She shielded her eyes with her hand, looking towards the front gate. Buffy came through, sitting on the seat of the castle’s wagon, loaded with goods from the town. “Buffy’s back.”

“Back? Is it bad that I didn’t even notice she was gone? When did she leave?” Tara fired off questions.

“Yes, back. Not bad that you didn’t notice. Buffy is a quiet person now, it’s normal for her to be a part of the background sometimes. She left last night. We arranged for a supply trip,” Willow answered. She turned to Astron, “Are we done here?”

“For now,” Astron nodded. “We’ll start back up tomorrow, Buffy too.”

“Let’s go help Buffy, then get washed up,” Tara said. She was proud that, for the last hour, she had not stuttered. Her talk with Astron, combined with the woman’s training, had helped with her nervousness.

The women headed towards the front of the castle, moving to help Buffy with the wagon-load of supplies.

“Why so much food?” Astron asked, as she followed Tara inside, carrying an arm-full of canvas bags.

“We figured we would need a lot, don’t know how many people are going to be coming,” Willow answered from behind her.

Once they were done, everyone moved off to freshen up, while Buffy cooked their dinner and Pura splashed around in the stream again.


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Dinner was a quiet affair, each person having something on their minds. Astron was thinking over the conversation she was planning on having with Pura. Willow and Tara both had the training, and each other in their head, namely how the other looked, sweat-glistened and ferocious. Buffy was day-dreaming about how dinner used to be, and wishing she hadn’t burnt the potatoes. As for Pura, she was trying to figure out how to eat at the table without causing a scene.

They continued eating their dinner in silence, the sound of the silver clanking on the plates making their lack of conversation more pronounced. Finally realizing that it didn’t matter whether or not she made a scene, Pura bent her head down and started slurping her food off her plate, making Willow let out a peal of delighted laughter, effectively breaking the reticence that had fallen over the group.
“I never thought I’d be able to say I shared the dinner table with a tiger,” Buffy noted.

It does feel quite odd sitting in this chair, Pura admitted. They bantered and conversed a while longer, all of them enjoying the feel of togetherness that they received from this dinner, their empty plates long forgotten. When the conversation had died down a bit, Astron nervously excused herself from the table, heading towards her room, followed shortly by Pura. Tara’s gaze watched them leave the room, a knowing smile on her face. She turned to see Willow giving them a smile also, less knowing, more hopeful.

“What am I missing?” Buffy asked.

“Let me tell you a story,” Willow said, setting her arms down on the table and leaning in. “Many years ago, there was a tribe...”

The two blondes leaned in also, sensing a good story, eager to hear what this story had to do with their two guests.


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Pura stood in the doorway, watching as Astron paced. The woman seemed to have a lot of nervous energy to burn; just watching made Pura tired.

You’re going to pace a rut into the carpet, Pura commented as she sauntered into the room, hopping nimbly onto the bed. She stretched out her long muscles, getting comfortable. She had a feeling this was going to take a while.

Astron stopped abruptly, turning quickly towards Pura, “People won’t understand.” With that statement, she turned back her pacing, bringing a hand up to chew on a fingernail. “Tara understands.”

Understands what?

“A woman, a tiger, it’s not normal,” Astron expelled with a huff. Pura’s eyes followed her quickened pace. The tiger sat quietly, seeing the wheels turn furiously inside her love’s head. She was muttering as she paced, working things out for herself. Suddenly, Astron seemed to come to a decision; her pacing stopped, her muttering was cut off, and all nervousness was gone. “I don’t care.”

Care to explain what this is about? Pura questioned. She had a small idea, a niggling hope that was burgeoning in her chest, could feel the hope, and something else, a feeling she hadn’t felt in a long time, growing inside her.

“Us, dear one, this is about us. I know people won’t understand, but, honestly, I could care less what other people think. I love you,” Astron said, her words coming out quickly, afraid of losing her nerve. She just wanted to be happy.

You love me? Pura questioned. I know you love me. What’s going on?

Astron walked slowly towards the bed, her silver eyes not leaving the yellow cat-eyes. Sitting gently on the edge of the mattress, she said, slowly, but with pure love, “Not just friendly love, Pura. I’m in love with you. It took me a long time to realize it, but I know now.”

As Astron spoke, the eyes she had been so closely watching for a reaction, had reacted. Definitely not in the way she had expected. The eyes of a predator had shifted, slowly changing from yellow to brown, growing and expanding the pupil, the bones around them shifting, so that now she was looking into soft, tear-filled, human eyes.

“I love you, too. So much,” Pura said, for the first time, out loud. Her voice was smooth like honey, a dance tickling the back of her throat. Astron gasped with the beauty of it, music in her ears and heart.

They held each other’s eyes for as moment, before Astron spoke, her voice quavering, “I don’t understand this.”

“You will,” Pura answered. There was a loud cracking noise, and then Pura screamed. It wasn’t the scream of a hunting tiger; it was the scream of a human in pain.


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The three other women had been cleaning up from dinner; When the scream echoed through the castle, Buffy dropped the plate she was holding, the glass shattering on impact, the crash making the scream more horrifying. They rushed from the hall to Astron’s room, where they found the dark haired woman holding the now-whimpering tiger as best she could. Tara gasped when she saw that Astron’s facial tattoo was shimmering, a tiger stretching from her right eye to her jaw. Scared tears formed in Astron’s eyes, “I don’t know what’s happening.”

Willow eyed the tiger closely. Under her scrutiny, she could see bones shifting underneath the skin. She whispered, “She’s changing.”

“What?” Tara asked. “Already?”

“You told her then? And she told you?” Willow asked Astron, for the moment ignoring Tara’s question.

“Yeah,” Astron said. “What’s going on?”

“Pura is a shape-shifter,” Tara said. “From my understanding, it will take a while for her to fully change.”

“She’ll be in pain?” Astron asked. Right this moment, it didn’t matter that there were things her friends knew about her love that she didn’t; she just needed Pura to be okay, and she needed to understand.

“Yes,” Willow answered honestly, sadly.

“I’ll stay with her then. You hear that?” she asked Pura. “You’re my forever. I’m not going anywhere.” She ran a gentle hand along Pura’s fur. Looking up, she said to Willow, “Tell me.”


*******************************************


“Can you see them?” Calah asked.

Charna shaded her eyes, “It looks like a single rider.”

“So, no danger, then,” River stated confidently, holding the vial at her neck.

“Oh don’t be too sure,” Sera piped up, finally gathering the last of the scrolls that had slipped from her bag when she had dropped it. She stood quickly, then grasped a hand to her slightly dizzy head, “Who.”

“We can take one, theres four of us,” River debated.

“Sera is right,” Charna said gravely. “Never underestimate the strength of one.”

The rider slowed to a canter, less dust kicking up around the horse’s hooves, allowing the women to see that it was another woman. She urged the horse forward, and the four women approached cautiously.

“Are you headed for the castle?” The woman called out. She was tall for a woman, with short, sandy, blonde hair. The clothes that she was wearing made her seem very ‘woodsy’.

“Who asks?” Charna asked.

“Rei, a friend of magic,” the woman answered.

“Yes, we are headed for the castle. Our mission is to gather forces on the way. How do we know you are a friend?” Charna said.

“Do you have another of those vials?” Rei asked River.

“Um, sure,” she answered, pulling a small vial from her bag. When she did, the water inside it pushed itself up, causing the cork to pop from the top. The water rose from the vial, swirled into a loop, and then dropped back into the vial without dripping down to the dirt beneath their feet.

“Friend,” Charna concluded. “That’s good. I don’t think many of us were yet prepared to fight.”

“Hey!” Sera objected, seeing the side-glances that the other women gave her.

“One more thing before we move on,” Rei said. She gave a slight nod behind her, a signal for the black wolf that was following. The wolf emerged slowly, showing she meant no harm. “This is Luna.”

“A familiar,” Sera stated, fascination filling her voice. She walked up to the wolf, staring into it’s green eyes, “You know that very few magic users are lucky enough to get one?”

“I know,” Rei said. “I’ve been very lucky. Luna has been with me for as long as I can remember.”

“Well,” Charna interrupted, her aura of leadership causing the other women to look towards her as soon as she spoke, “It’s best we get a move on.”

“We don’t want any more company,” Sera said.

“Mainly, we don’t want you to drop your scrolls again,” Calah joked.

“I’m not as clumsy as you think,” Sera objected, waving her arm furiously, which only made her pack slip from her shoulders. “Huh.”

“Point proven,” River laughed.


************************************


A loud scream echoed into the woods around them.

“What’s that?” Riley asked.

“Sounds human,” Giles answered, speeding up to a run. Riley increased his speed also, following his father out of the woods, coming face to face with the front gates of a large castle.

“This is it,” Giles said.

“Big. Scream came from inside, you think?”

“I believe so. Ready?” Giles asked.

“As I’ll ever be. Do we just knock, or go running in all crazy-like,” Riley joked as they came to a stop in front of two large doors. Instead of a reply, Giles just banged on the door.

After a few minutes of repeated knocking, the door swung open to reveal a small blonde woman, hazel eyes looking upon the men with fear, “What do you want?”

“That’s a very nice way to greet someone,” Riley said.

“We don’t get visitors often,” Buffy replied. “And when we get visitors that are men, it usually means something bad.”

“We’re here to help,” Giles offered gently, taking a moment to introduce himself and his son.

“Giles, Riley, just how do you think you can help us?” Buffy asked.

“I’ve been training my whole life as a warrior,” Riley answered.

“I can fight, plan, and use some magic,” Giles added.

“One moment,” Buffy said, then abruptly slammed the door in their faces. Giles’ mouth flopped like a fish, while Riley’s face had gone slack.

“Isn’t she beautiful, Papa?” Riley asked dreamily, reverting back to his childhood name for his father.

“I suppose so,” Giles sighed. This was going to be a difficult journey.


TBC
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Re: Ride the Lightning (AU) (Updated 12/28/2011)

Postby AstronSoul » Fri Jan 13, 2012 1:24 am

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Re: Ride the Lightning (AU) (Updated 1/13/2012)

Postby True_Love » Fri Jan 13, 2012 8:47 am

Great update, Allie.

Ahhh, I left like ten minutes of awesome feedback then it all got deleted. I'll just sum it up with... forget it. Just awesome update, liked the the Astron and Pura relationship, comic relief with the travelers, and Riley's love at first sight.

Looking forward to more.
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Re: Ride the Lightning (AU) (Updated 1/13/2012)

Postby Ariel » Fri Jan 13, 2012 2:35 pm

Hi Allie! :bigwave

Really glad you posted! :bounce :pinky :party :eatme And see me following your instructions below:

EXTRA thanks to Astron for being so wonderful as to post this for me. Everyone give her a round of applause. Enjoy!
Hail to thee, Mighty Bringer of the words of The Babble-y One! :applause :applause :applause AND to the Dibs-Mistress! :whip <=Glad you haven’t lost your edge! :wink

Oooh! Swordplay! Love it! Love Willow-whining, MUCH cuter than Dawn-whining! Minor note, if they are using a saber or its earlier variations then it is more of a slashing, weapon, but Willow being so light she’s probably using a weapon more similar to a rapier. And of course this is a fantasy piece, so you can call your own shots!

I really loved how Tara gained some confidence through her talk with Astron and her training! To me, that makes sense. I felt that in my personal life as well.

Astron was thinking over the conversation she was planning on having with Pura. Willow and Tara both had the training, and each other in their head, namely how the other looked, sweat-glistened and ferocious. Buffy was day-dreaming about how dinner used to be, and wishing she hadn’t burnt the potatoes. As for Pura, she was trying to figure out how to eat at the table without causing a scene.
I love this little moment about what they are thinking about. It rings true and just a little treat that adds more realism into their characters and into the story itslelf; and then the next scene . . .

Pura bent her head down and started slurping her food off her plate, making Willow let out a peal of delighted laughter, effectively breaking the reticence that had fallen over the group. “I never thought I’d be able to say I shared the dinner table with a tiger,” Buffy noted.
Love this! It’s funny and tender. Really like the warmth between them – how beautifully you write that. Understated and effective.

Tara’s gaze watched them leave the room, a knowing smile on her face. She turned to see Willow giving them a smile also, less knowing, more hopeful.
I love this. One of the little moments that mean so much, first that they share glances and second that they each have their own reaction. Nice.

“I love you, too. So much,” Pura said, for the first time, out loud. Her voice was smooth like honey, a dance tickling the back of her throat. Astron gasped with the beauty of it, music in her ears and heart.
Okay, I’ve said it before – I LOVE ASTRON AND PURA!!! They are my second favorite couple and it’s a close second! Great job!

Liked that the change is slower and it’s painful. It adds a sense of real magic that everything isn’t a puff of smoke and a wave of the hand. Same thing with Tara working magic to control the heated blade; interesting.

Got a HUGE kick out of the witches. Liked clumsy Sera and Rei, the new addition. Enjoyed River’s humor, too (shades of Heather, eh?):
“Mainly, we don’t want you to drop your scrolls again,” Calah joked.

“I’m not as clumsy as you think,” Sera objected, waving her arm furiously, which only made her pack slip from her shoulders. “Huh.”

“Point proven,” River laughed.
:lol :laugh :lmao Nice characterizations!

“One moment,” Buffy said, then abruptly slammed the door in their faces. Giles’ mouth flopped like a fish, while Riley’s face had gone slack.

“Isn’t she beautiful, Papa?” Riley asked dreamily, reverting back to his childhood name for his father.

“I suppose so,” Giles sighed. This was going to be a difficult journey.
Aaaaaw! Totally Riley in love! Cute! So . . . will it be Buffy and Riley or Buffy and one of those amaaaaazing witches! I’m good either way, you know I’m totally on board with this story!

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Re: Ride the Lightning (AU) (Updated 1/13/2012)

Postby JustSkipIt » Mon Jan 16, 2012 7:02 pm

Sweet. We have the declaration of love and Pura's transformation. Plus the gathering forces. And if I remember Buffy is scarred right? So if Riley loves her and thinks she is beautiful anyway, then I like him a bit better. I can't wait for more.
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Re: Ride the Lightning (AU) (Updated 1/13/2012)

Postby leos_pride » Sat Jan 21, 2012 2:39 pm

Updatey goodness!! Thank you Astron for posting this piece!

:bounce :banana :bounce

Fun times sword training with the girls. Some very nice images of a sweaty Willow and sword play :) thank you for that!

The dinner time banter was fun, especially Pura trying to figure out how to eat at the table as if she were in her human form. I'm glad she decided to just dig in and forgot the rest :) And Yay! Astron and Pura finally got to talk and Astron shared her feelings for Pura. I feel bad that the transformation will take a few days and be so painful. Can't wait to see her in her human form and see their relationship take off

Holy crap, holy crap! :bounce Yay! Thank you for using Rei and Luna! I can't wait to see what you have in store for them :D I enjoyed their meeting with our other travelers. Can't wait until everyone arrives at the castle.

And Giles and Riley are at the castle now. Hurray! I loved Riley's reaction to Buffy :lmao too funny and very Riley-like.

Can't wait for more! I hope things get better for you soon!

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