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[love_2003]

You can't leave it on a cliffhanger like that. Glad that Willow is being bold and made the first move but I understand why Tara says she can't. Hope Tara is able to escape the twins safely and get back to Willow.
Patiently waiting for the next update.

[WolfDragonGod]

great update

[vampyregurl73]

Well, now that the kitten is out of the bag so to speak what to do, what to do? Nice little turn of the tables on WIllow's part and then what a turn of events.

Very enjoyable.

[wimpy0729]

Oh my - you take us from lustful kitchen goodness, to confusion/anger, to dangerous twins. Did you say they were vamps? hmm, very interesting. I can't wait to see what happens next, but for now, I'm going to fantasize about Tara kissing her supple neck, slowly moving lower, working her way...you get the picture. Anyway, loved it. Please don't keep us hanging too long.

Wimpy

[WiccanHandprintz]

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[vampyregurl73]

Dibs, perhaps, yes?

This story is getting more interesting with each post. I'm curious as to where you'll go with it all next.

[LonelyTara]

Man oh man, cute moment with Giles, but I was on the edge of my seat waiting to see if Tara would come back before the hour was out!

[ceridwen]

Crap! You just gave us a little taste and left us wanting more!!

Please update again soon

[wimpy0729]

Oh boy, even more tension here with Willow so on edge about whether Tara would return and, of course, about what is going on with her. But why, oh why didn't Willow just go ahead and tell Giles what was going on? Can't wait to see what happens next!


Wimpy

[Zampsa1975]

Yay for great update-y goodness... Good that Willow now knows little about Tara's past... I hope there's no more "twin friends" with Tara... I truly hope that Tara finally starts to tell the truth to Willow...

[sacinema]

Two wonderful updates. And I didn't the chance to give FB to the first one. Missed it. But all the better for me. You are to good with the cliffhangers. Might happen one time that you kill me with all this suspense.

Yes, you totally got it perfect between hot and not to much lovin' for W/T. But the best was, Tara backed off before the bad guys interrupted them. I loved that.

And another thing I love about your writing, you have a perfect sense combing fast and slow sequences. And the scene with Giles also interesting. We know more about Tara now but she is still a mystery. So there are a lot of things Willow can still discover about her.

Loved the last cliffhanger, too. Tara is back, but what happened to her? Can't wait for the next update. Thanks.

[Morrigan]

Glad to see Tara made it through her encounter with her past - looking forward to more!

[WiccanHandprintz]

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[LonelyTara]

DIBSY DIBS!!

I am all for the handcuffing! Willow can handcuff her to the chair and...torture her to make her talk. (*wink*) and when she's spilling all her...secrets, then she and Willow can finally give into that passion that's boiling out of them like lava from a freakin' volcano!!!!!!!!

MY OH MY!

[WolfDragonGod]

wow great update i can't wait to read more

[GrimCityGirl]

Wow, awesome! she needs a damn explanation though haha

[vampyregurl73]

Handcuffing would be an understatement, she should also take a stick to Giles when she get's back for not at least giving her a warning since you have alluded to him knowing what Tara really is. He had to have an idea of what would happen.

So yes, answers would be good and no dumping her off with strangers. That's just rude!

[Zampsa1975]

Yay for excellent update-y goodness... Good that Tara took care of those evil twins for the moment... She really need to tell Willow everything...

[sacinema]

Next exquisite update. Thanks. I do love how manage to express the sexual and emotional tension between those two and the seriousness of the situation. Tara has to loosen up. Willow needs to be filled into the past. She is worth to know what is really going on. And I do not understand why Giles and Tara let her run into this situation. Or does Giles know nothing about Tara's past and her status of being. At least Tara should have known that it would be dangerous to come back. We'll see. Maybe there is a good enough reason to expose Willow to the threat the Dimovas certainly became.

Nice how Willow had to struggle between getting nauseas, feeling aroused and helping Tara to take care of the wound. So we have to wait and see what the twins will do in the future. I doubt the decision leaving the country will get them out of trouble. Can't wait to see what happens next.

[love_2003]

Loved the update. Glad that we were able to hear about how Tara and Giles met and stayed in contact. Willow must be so confused by Tara's actions. Can't wait to see what will happen next.

[WiccanHandprintz]

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[vampyregurl73]

Dibs! ...Sorry, I get them so rarely it's still fun.

Yay, I've been watching for an update. So will Tara 'tell all" or only 'tell enough'? I'm looking forward to the forward of your story.

[Zampsa1975]

Yay for great update-y goodness... Big yay for and hand-holding...

[FIRESIGN]

So glad to see you haven't abandoned this story! Can't wait for more - update soon, please!

Keep up the great work!

FIRESIGN
aka Cin

[ceridwen]

I'm so happy you updated. I was just thinking about this story earlier today... about how much I wanted an update so

Is Tara taking Willow to the mountains with her clan? I hope so. It'd be nice for Tara to finally tell Willow the truth... I think it might bring them closer together, make Tara feel like she can trust Willow.

I like the fact that Willow isn't trying to dismiss her attraction for Tara anymore, but instead is acting on it. Go Willow!!

Hopefully the next and Longer update will be really Really soon? Please?

Thank you for sharing this beautiful story with us

[LonelyTara]

Blessed, blessed update, balm of the fact that I'm still at work at 5:23 on a Friday! This was an excellent update, I didn't feel like it was too short at all, it was very tight and intense. Love that we're left with the girls holding hands.

[what_we_do_is_secret]

hey, just found your fic, its really awesome, its 5.30am here. i should not have started reading addictive stories so late. liking the characterisation a lot. bit nervous about what tara is and how the heck they're going to get out of this though.

oh and for the love of god they need to get beyond kissing!

[WiccanHandprintz]

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[WR/TM]

Holy Crap!!! That was amazing ...they way you write is so amazing ...dont stop!!!

[LonelyTara]

....I...ack...wah...need...cold shower

On a serious note, that was freakin' intense. Your prose, as always, is taut and elegant. I hope that there will be more lovin' on the train. While I wish their first time had been love and not a fuck, I trust that the love is coming.

Update please?