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Re: NEW FIC!!!! TWILIGHT REVISITED

Postby Zampsa1975 » Mon Dec 14, 2009 5:03 pm

Yay for good update-y goodness... Good that Willow made sure to thickheaded Buffy that Tara is not to be staked and if Buffy tries to interfere in their relationship Buffy is going to lose...
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Re: NEW FIC!!!! TWILIGHT REVISITED

Postby AmberGoddess » Mon Dec 14, 2009 5:56 pm

Awww sweet. Buffy's a jerk here. Again. Anya's fun, though. More soon please!
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Re: NEW FIC!!!! TWILIGHT REVISITED

Postby uuhhHHH_ditto » Mon Dec 14, 2009 6:21 pm

wow...i just realized that buffy is taking her slayer duties waaay to seriously. not that it isnt a SERIOUS job..its kind of ironic that you write her character like this, seeing as her past love interests were vampires on BTVS.

im curious what anya is...is she sort of like Dru minus the crazy side?
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Re: NEW FIC!!!! TWILIGHT REVISITED

Postby FIRESIGN » Mon Dec 14, 2009 8:37 pm

Hey Everybody!

Thanks for the great feedback! In answer to some of your questions, etc.:

1) Buffy is a jerk right now - but give her time...she'll come around ;-)

2) Anya is paralleling the character of Alice in the Twilight series in a number of ways...but she will also have her own storyline in the future.

3) No plans at this point to bring Oz into the picture...however, one of the other characters already in the storyline may take on a role a the Twilight-esque love triangle...but that has yet to be determined...I'm mulling around the idea.

4) Although the story has many parallels with the Twilight Saga...it will break off at some point and go it's own way...again - as yet to be determined. I'm not one to finish the story in my mind before writing the whole thing...I just write as the ideas come to me. :kgeek


So thanks so much for all of your feedback - and for continuing to read this story, as well as my others! I love the feedback - both positive and negative...that's what keeps me writing!

Have a Happy Holiday Season - and I'll hopefully be posting on this and my other stories by this weekend.

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Re: NEW FIC!!!! TWILIGHT REVISITED

Postby LittleBit » Tue Dec 15, 2009 4:40 am

It will be interesting to see where you're heading with this story ...
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Re: NEW FIC!!!! TWILIGHT REVISITED

Postby abarda » Tue Dec 15, 2009 5:40 am

So nice Willow telling Buffy and Xander that if she has to choose, she will...
I really loved this update! :peace
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Re: NEW FIC!!!! TWILIGHT REVISITED

Postby love_2003 » Wed Dec 16, 2009 2:37 pm

Glad to see that Buffy and Xander are willing to start over with Tara for the sake of Willow. Looking forward to the next update.
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TWILIGHT REVISITED - CHAPTER 15 is now up! 12-18-09

Postby FIRESIGN » Fri Dec 18, 2009 9:26 pm

Chapter Fifteen

Tara pulled the VW into the parking lot next to Xander’s truck, grabbing Willow’s backpack and her own as she walked around to the passenger side door.

“Thanks for the ride, baby…” Willow said, smiling as she reached down, her hand searching out Tara’s once again. “Ready to go in?”

“Ready for anything…as long as I have you with me.” Tara said, returning the smile, thinking that if it were possible for her to blush, she surely would have been at that moment.

“Looks like you’re set for anything then, ‘cause I’m not going anywhere!” Willow said with a wink.

“Ugh…corny much?” Buffy said, rolling her eyes.

“Don’t mind Buff…she’s just jealous.” Xander said, putting his arm around the Slayer’s shoulders.

“Get. Off.” Buffy said, pushing Xander’s arm off.

“Ow! Easy…I was just kidding!” He said, rubbing the top of his shoulder.

“Looks like it’s going to be an interesting day…” Willow said as the group disappeared through the school doors.

Later…

“So…are you sure it’s not going to bother you…us eating in front of you and everything?” Willow asked, genuinely.

“No…it’s fine…really…” Tara insisted, sitting down at the table with Willow, Xander, and Buffy. The experience was a bit of a new one, as she had been used to spending the lunch break alone.

“So…you don’t eat anything…ever? I mean…how does that work, exactly? Can you eat…like regular food?” Xander asked, stuffing a bite of sandwich into his mouth.

“I c-can…but it doesn’t actually taste…w-well…”

“Doesn’t taste as good as blood?” Buffy asked, matter-of-factly.

“Buff…I warned you…” Willow said, giving the Slayer both a visual and verbal warning.

“N-no…it’s okay, Will…she’s right…it d-doesn’t taste…well…good. It w-would kind of be like you eating s-sawdust…” Tara explained.

“Really? Ew.” Buffy said, somewhat surprised by the analogy.

“How about we talk about something else…” Willow suggested.

“Yeah…not so big with the blood and sawdust talk at lunch, you know?” Xander said, taking a sip of soda. “Like…so…do you make all with the bumpy face…even though you’re…you know…a veggie-vamp?”

“Xander!” Willow said, smacking him up along side the head. “Do you mind?! Geesh! And NO she does not get all lumpy-bumpy…”

“You vamped out in front of her?!” Buffy said, her body stiffening.

“Will you just stop?!” Willow said, crouching when she realized that others were looking. She continued what she was saying in a much lower, but still pointed tone. “Look…yes, I’ve seen her get ‘vamped-out’ as you so aptly put it…but she does not get all lumpy-bumpy…and she didn’t mean to! It just sort of h-happened…but it’s nothing! She’s fine…WE’RE fine!” Willow said, placing her arm around Tara, protectively.

“Let me get this straight…you don’t get all ‘grrrrr’ and ‘arrrrrggghh’ when you…” Xander asked.

“N-no…” Tara answered, meekly.

“Huh…” Buffy said, mulling things over.

“She just…her beautiful blue eyes get…well…brighter…and she gets a little toothy…but not in a bad way!” Willow said, reaching over to give Tara a reassuring kiss on the cheek.

“So if you don’t get like that…and you don’t drink human blood…are you sure you’re actually vampires?” Buffy asked, somewhat intrigued by what she was hearing. If Tara wasn’t really a vampire in the truest sense of the word, perhaps it would make things easier to get along with her.

“W-we are vampiric…but different…y-yes.” Tara said.

“Guys…can we just talk about this later…when there’s not so many people around? Please?” Willow said, getting a bit nervous.

“No problem, Wills…it’s just about time to go back in anyhow…” Xander said, finishing up his lunch.

The group disposed of their trays and headed back into the school.

“Walk you to class?” Willow said with a smile, their hands still entwined.

“Absolutely.” Tara answered as they proceeded down the hallway.

“Man…she’s got it bad.” Xander said, watching the two meander away.

“Yeah…hey, you know…I wanna talk to Giles about something…catch up with you later?” Buffy said, looking a bit pensive.

“Now…you know I can let you go pick poor Giles’ brain unattended…I’ll go with.” Xander said, and the two headed to Giles’ office.

Later, in Giles’ office…

“Hey Giles!” Buffy said, sitting on the edge of the desk, making herself at home in her Watcher’s office.

“Don’t you two have class this period?” Giles asked, giving the pair a curious look.

“Study hall for me…so I’m not really missing anything.” Xander said, fiddling with some artifacts on the shelf.

“Algebra…not so useful in the slaying business…” Buffy said, smiling.

“So…what can I do for you, two?”

“How much do you actually know about the Maclays? I mean…you know…specifics-wise…” Buffy asked.

“What exactly do you mean, ‘specifically’?” Giles said, not understanding where his young charge was going with her line of questions.

“Like…I don’t know…we were talking to Tara and Wills this afternoon…and did you know that she and the rest of her family don’t go all lumpy-bumpy in the face when they vamp out?”

“Well, when the treaty was signed between the council and the Maclays, we really didn’t get into the specifics of their physical transformations…only that they agreed to feed only on wild animals, no humans and no domestic pets.” Giles explained. “You said that they don’t have the typical facial transformations?”

“No…Wills saw Tara vamp out…and her eyes just get really blue and she gets a little toothy.” Xander answered.

“How very interesting…” Giles said, grabbing an old book from the shelf, flipping through the pages.

“Are they really vampires…or something else all demony?” Buffy asked.

“To be honest…I’m not sure.” Giles said, taking his glasses off and pinching the bridge of his nose as though a headache was coming on. “I’m going to have to research this a bit…and I have some friends over in Scotland that may be able to tell us more. Did you ask Tara about it?”

“No…” Buffy said.

“Well…that may be a good place to start. In the meantime, I’ll contact the coven and see what they may know…” Giles said, sitting back down at his desk.

Later that day…

Willow and Tara walked out to the parking lot hand-in-hand. They had just about reached Tara’s VW when a couple of guys from the football team caught up with them.

“Hey! You’re new here, aren’t you?” He said, getting uncomfortably close to the pair.

“Relatively…why?” Willow said, continuing to walk to Tara’s car.

“You know…you don’t have to hang out with Maclay, here…I’d be happy to show you a good time…” The second boy said, causing the first to start laughing.

“No thanks…I doubt you could possibly show me a better time than my girlfriend here…” Willow said, a mixture of anger and fear coursing through her body.

“You’re kidding me…you’re a dyke?” He said, skeptically. “I got nine inches I’d like to slip you that I bet will change your mind about that!”

“Yeah? You think you could get it up three times?” Willow said, pointedly.

Tara could feel her anger rising, threatening to disclose her secret publicly. She turned around just as the second boy grabbed Willow’s arm, spinning her around to face him.

“Listen bitch!” He said, turning her roughly around.

Tara raised her hand, making no actual physical contact with the boy, and suddenly, he flew across two parking spots, slamming into a tree. Her eyes now glowing a bright icy blue, she turned to the second boy, who was starting to move in on the two of them. Just as she raised her hand a second time, Buffy and Xander, hearing the commotion, arrived on scene. The second boy flew on much the same course as the first, landing in a heap with his friend.

“Whoa! Will…are you okay?” Buffy said, quickly scanning her while keeping a cautionary eye on Tara.

“I’m fine…” Willow said, more concerned about Tara than herself. “Baby…” she said, putting her arm around the blonde’s waist. “I’m fine…it’s okay…let’s go.”

“W-what?” Tara said, somewhat dazed.

“You guys get out of here…we’ll clean up this mess.” Buffy said, heading towards the boys who were just starting to get up from the ground.

“Yeah…I think I’ll have a discussion with these two idiots about gentlemanly matters…” Xander said. “…with Buffy’s help, of course.”

“Come on, baby…let’s get you home…” Willow said, guiding Tara to the passenger side of the VW. After getting Tara settled, she took the keys from her and climbed into the driver’s seat. Within minutes, the two were speeding away. Slowly, Tara started to come out of her trance…

“W-what happened?” She asked, groggily.

“I’m not exactly sure…but you definitely got all large with the butch on those assholes back there at the school! You didn’t tell me that being all ‘Miss Sexy Veggie Vamp’ included you having special powers, too…not that I mind, because…hello! Assholes! They definitely had it coming!” Willow babbled.

“I-I don’t…have magical p-powers…at least…I n-never have before…” Tara said, as surprised as Willow.

“Seriously? How did you know what to do? I mean…you got all blue-eyed…and then just waved your hand…and BAM! Assholes number one and two became members of the frequent flyer program!”

“Oh…I’m s-sorry…” Tara said, tears clouding her eyes.

“Baby…you have nothing to be sorry for…nothing at all…I was just surprised, that’s all…it was great…YOU were great!”

“M-maybe we’d better talk to William about this…” Tara suggested.

“Your father?”

“Yes…I’m j-just…I don’t know what’s g-going on…” Tara said, obviously upset.

Willow, seeing how the recent events were affecting the blonde, put her hand on the inside of Tara’s thigh, giving it a comforting gentle squeeze.

“It’s going to be fine, baby…I promise…”


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Re: NEW FIC!!!! TWILIGHT REVISITED

Postby Willowtree252 » Fri Dec 18, 2009 10:38 pm

Dibs The plot thickens those assholes need to fuck off. Tara really took care of her girl. I have not seen the movie and I love that you will take it in your own direction loving this completely. :pinky :pinky :pinky :pinky :pinky :pinky :kgeek :kgeek :kgeek
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Re: NEW FIC!!!! TWILIGHT REVISITED

Postby arsyadriani » Sat Dec 19, 2009 1:27 am

whoooaa....
that was a quite scene..getting witchyTara to deal with those assholes :pinky
hope they didn't get trouble for this :pray
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Re: NEW FIC!!!! TWILIGHT REVISITED

Postby Zampsa1975 » Sat Dec 19, 2009 4:13 am

Yay for great update-y goodness... Good that Tara took care of those two assholes... I hope Buffy's nosing around Maclay family's vampyhood cause problems....
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Re: NEW FIC!!!! TWILIGHT REVISITED

Postby abarda » Sat Dec 19, 2009 11:18 am

I looooooved this update! Tara protecting Will was so cute... And those guys had what they deserved! :kdevil
This fic keeps getting better. :peace
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Re: NEW FIC!!!! TWILIGHT REVISITED

Postby taranwillow4ever » Sat Dec 19, 2009 4:01 pm

Great update and I loved the comment about how many times the guy would need to get it up to reach 9 inches. I love the visual of Tara's eyes changing.
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Re: NEW FIC!!!! TWILIGHT REVISITED

Postby AmberGoddess » Sat Dec 19, 2009 8:23 pm

Assholes. Good update though!
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Re: NEW FIC!!!! TWILIGHT REVISITED

Postby LittleBit » Sun Dec 20, 2009 2:35 pm

ooh special magical abilities!!! :D Loved the update! :D
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Re: NEW FIC!!!! TWILIGHT REVISITED

Postby uuhhHHH_ditto » Sun Dec 20, 2009 2:55 pm

*reads who alice is*
interesting..this alice character seems to be almost like dru, minus the crazy side.

interesting power for tara. she didnt even touch them, i was expecting some butch-like display. lol. but thats just me.

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Re: NEW FIC!!!! TWILIGHT REVISITED

Postby Willowtree252 » Sat Dec 26, 2009 7:24 pm

Update please
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Re: NEW FIC!!!! TWILIGHT REVISITED

Postby FIRESIGN » Sat Dec 26, 2009 9:48 pm

Hello Everybody!

Thanks for hanging in there - things have been hectic with the holidays and all...but I am working on updates - and hope to get them up on Monday or Tuesday.

Hope all of you have a wonderful holiday season!

Have a great night - and again - thanks for hanging in there!

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TWILIGHT REVISITED - Chapter 16 is up!!! Updated 1-2-10

Postby FIRESIGN » Sat Jan 02, 2010 9:49 pm

Chapter Sixteen

Willow and Tara arrived back at the Maclay residence, hurrying inside. Anya and Elizabeth were waiting as they entered the front door.

“Are you okay?” Anya asked, having seen a vision of the events that had just transpired, as well as Tara’s newly found powers.

“Yes…just a b-bit woozy…h-haven’t felt like this since…well…b-before I became one of the ‘family’.” Tara said, referring to becoming immortal. Feeling ill or out-of-sorts was something that was left behind in her human life…

“This is Willow, I presume?” Elizabeth asked, smiling warmly.

“I-I’m sorry…Will…this is Elizabeth…m-my mother…” Tara said weakly.

“So pleased to meet you, Willow. Tara, let’s get you into the living room…I’m sure you’d like to know what happened…” Elizabeth said, cryptically.

The group walked through the archway into the living room. The room was very spacious, with two steps down into a sunk-in area that included a beautiful stone fireplace. Willow guided Tara over to the overstuffed couch, easing her down onto the cushion. She sat down next to her, putting her arm around her, protectively. Her actions did not go unnoticed.
Elizabeth sat down in the chair, facing Willow and Tara, while Anya sat cross-legged on the floor near the fireplace.

“Willow…can I get you anything? Some tea, perhaps?” Elizabeth asked, smiling warmly.

“No…thank you, ma’am.” Willow politely declined. “Um…you…you kind of acted like you knew what happened…back at the school…” Willow said, somewhat confused.

“I saw it…” Anya piped in.

“You were there?” Willow asked.

“Anya can s-see things…in the f-future.” Tara explained.

“So you saw all of this before it happened?” Willow asked.

“Only a few minutes…I’m sorry, but Elizabeth and I both thought it would be best if we just let things happen the way that they did.” Anya explained.

“We knew that neither of you would be harmed…and we also knew that once Tara’s powers came to be, there wouldn’t be anything that we could do to stop the transition.” Elizabeth added.

“T-transition?” Tara stammered.

“Yes, sweetheart. Some of us…our kind…develop powers over time. Like your sister.”

“I-I just…Anya’s always been able to s-see things…”

“Not always…I wasn’t this way in the beginning…it just happened one day when I was out hunting. The first time it happened, I though it was just instinct…good intuition, you know? But then, the feelings and thoughts became actual visions…and over time, I’ve just sharpened the skill.” Anya explained.

“Not all of us have special powers, Tara. For example, William and myself…neither one of us has discovered anything out of the ordinary in our abilities.” Elizabeth said.

“B-but why did Anya and I…?”

“William has always thought that those who have developed special powers actually had the potential for such things while they were still in their human forms…being turned seems to allow those powers to come to fruition…intensify. But when that actually happens varies…” Elizabeth continued.

Willow sat patiently, listening to every detail.

“Did you know that Tara was going to have these powers?” Willow asked.

“Not really…we could never be sure about these things…but I suppose there were signs over the years.” Elizabeth said, thinking back to Tara’s earlier years.

“W-what made it h-happen now?” Tara asked.

“She was protecting me.” Willow said, matter-of-factly.

Elizabeth smiled, Willow truly was unique, and would make an excellent addition to the family someday.

“Yes, exactly right, Willow. You felt that Willow was in danger and you acted instinctively. I must say, from what Anya told me, I am very surprised at the amount of power you were able to use the first time you transitioned. It sounds as if you were quite impressive.”

“S-scary is more l-like it.” Tara said, weakly, hanging her head.

“Hey…” Willow said, lifting Tara’s chin, their eyes meeting. “…you weren’t scary to me…just those guys…and they had it coming…so don’t worry, okay?”

“Willow’s right, Tare…you didn’t do anything wrong…and the Slayer and Willow’s friend are covering up what happened…those boys are far too embarassed to have had their asses kicked by a girl…they won’t be saying anything to anybody!” Anya added.

Just then, the front door opened and William Maclay walked in.

“Hello ladies.” William said, gentlemanly. “Willow…so nice to see you see you again!” He said, walking over to Elizabeth and giving her a quick kiss on her cheek before sitting in the chair next to hers. “Are you both alright? I hear there was a bit of a scuffle outside the school…”

“We’re both fine, thank you Dr. Maclay.” Willow said. “Tara’s just a bit shook up…”

“Yes…well, that’s to be expected…it’s been quite a day for you, love.” William said, kindly.

Tara simply nodded in agreement.

“I understand that this can be a bit…well…unsettling, to say the least. But I assure you…it will be alright. I suspected that you were special from the moment that I saw you…but I had no idea what ‘special talents’ you might develop over time.” William explained.

“Y-you knew?” Tara asked. “How?”

“It was just a feeling, really…I could never be absolutely sure…there was just something about you.”

“So…is this it…her power, I mean…being able to move things without touching them…telekinesis?” Willow asked.

“Very impressive, Willow! Not too many people are familiar with telekinesis…and yes, it appears that Tara’s powers will be a form of that…but only time will tell. Her powers are so new, like Anya’s, they will develop over time.” William said, smiling. The petite red-head truly was intriguing. It was clear how his daughter had become so enamoured with her.

“H-how long will it t-take?” Tara asked.

“To be honest, I really don’t know.” William said. “It’s something that we will just have to wait and see. Anya could perhaps give you more insight into that than I.”

Tara looked to her sister.

“I haven’t been able to see anything about that, yet…but I’ll let you know as soon as I see anything important…” Anya promised.

“Th-thank you.” Tara said. “W-would you excuse us…I’d l-like to talk to Willow a-alone.”

“Certainly…take your time, dear.” Elizabeth said, getting up from her chair. “Willow…you’re welcome to stay for dinner…it would give us an excuse to use the kitchen. We don’t tend to cook around here…no need, really.”

“Yes, Willow…please, stay?” Anya said, anxious to get to know the red-head better.

“Um…I…sure!” Willow said, not wanting to offend.

“Don’t worry, dear...we’re inviting you to dinner…not for dinner.” William said, laughing.

“I know…I trust you…and dinner would be fine…if it won’t bother any of you.”

“It’ll be fun! I know we’re going to be great friends!” Anya said, giving her a unexpected hug before heading out of the room.

“Excellent. We’ll give you two some alone time…don’t forget to call home and let your father know you’ll be staying, Willow.” Elizabeth said, following William out of the room.

“I won’t…thanks.” Willow said, turning her attention back to Tara, as the two were now alone.

Meanwhile…in the other room…

“I can see it in your eyes, William…” Elizabeth said, their arms around each other.

“You know me so well, love…yes…she’ll make a wonderful addition to the family.” He said, holding her close as they continued up the staircase.

“Ahhh…but there’s more to it than that…” she said.

“Yes…she is special, of that I have no doubt…I can feel it…”


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Re: NEW FIC!!!! TWILIGHT REVISITED

Postby Willowtree252 » Sat Jan 02, 2010 10:09 pm

Dibs Cliffhanger much
“Yes…she is special, of that I have no doubt…I can feel it…”


I am blind here never saw the movie but Help save us soon I want to know what Tara and Willow will talk about plus what is William talking about Help!!!!!!! :pinky :pinky :pinky :pinky :pinky :pinky
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Re: NEW FIC!!!! TWILIGHT REVISITED

Postby Zampsa1975 » Sun Jan 03, 2010 3:36 am

Yay for great update-y goodness... I'm wondering about how special Willow is going to be and what kind of reaction Buffy & Co are going to have when Willow allow's Tara to turn her into a vampire...
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Re: NEW FIC!!!! TWILIGHT REVISITED

Postby uuhhHHH_ditto » Sun Jan 03, 2010 6:19 pm

dundunduhhhhhhhhhn...i wonder what they'll cook?

Willow truly was unique, and would make an excellent addition to the family someday.


so its no doubt that she'll be turned? and seeing as this vampire family, in your story, dont turn into the most vilest ego of their human selves. Im excited to see her transformation.

I can just see Buffy busting down the Maclay estate, looking for Willow and later being forced to eat a sit-down dinner with them. XD
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Re: NEW FIC!!!! TWILIGHT REVISITED

Postby abarda » Mon Jan 04, 2010 6:36 am

Great update! So, Willow will be turned into a vampire? I can't wait to read it...
And I'm curious about what Tara and Willow are going to talk... if they will talk.
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TWILIGHT REVISITED - CHAPTER 17 IS UP! 1-5-2010

Postby FIRESIGN » Tue Jan 05, 2010 4:12 pm

Chapter Seventeen

“Are you okay…I mean, special powers and all…kind of a lot to take in all at once.” Willow asked Tara.

Tara laughed weakly, shaking her head.

“What?” Willow asked.

“You’re asking me if I’m okay…when I should be asking you that.”

“I’m fine…never better…why?” Willow asked, somewhat confused.

“After what you saw…saw me do.” Tara said, hanging her head. “I…I don’t think that we should see each other anymore…”

“What?!” Willow said, loudly, standing up. “What part of ‘this doesn’t bother me’ don’t you understand?!”

“Willow…this new power…it’s just one more way that I could hurt you…”

“You. Will. Not. Hurt. Me! We’ve been over this…I know what you are…I know exactly what I’m getting into…and I…I…I can’t even fathom the thought of not having you in my life! We can’t be apart...” Willow said, feeling her panic rise, she began to hyperventilate. She held her hand to her side, bracing her injured ribs.

Tara, seeing her distress, rose from the couch and gently took her into her arms.

“Shhh…Will…baby…you’ve got to calm down…I w-won’t leave you…I promise…you’ve got to slow down your breathing, Will…I’m right here…” Tara said, softly placing kisses first on her forehead, then her cheek, finally coming to rest on the red-head’s trembling lips.

Willow responded immediately, clinging to Tara, pulling her tightly to her, as if they couldn’t possibly be close enough. Her tongue jutting out, hungrily seeking the cool confines that awaited her.

Tara eagerly accepted Willow’s offerring, her own needs guiding her actions. Her feelings swirling in a mix of want, need, and thirst…the first two overpowering the third, if only momentarily. How long they continued, she didn’t know…but her thirst was becoming unbearable, rushing down her throat like a hot poker. Reluctantly, she pulled back from the kiss.
“I…I’m sorry…” she said, trying to maintain enough composure that she could still hold Willow.

“No…don’t…okay? I understand...” Willow said, gently caressing Tara’s back in the embrace. “How about I give you a few minutes…and I’ll call my Dad and let him know I’ll be over here for supper and all…”

Tara nodded, closing her eyes, slowly pulling her blood-lust back into control.

Willow pulled out her cell phone and walked to the other side of the room. She got the answering machine.

“Hi Dad…it’s me…just wanted to let you know I’m at the Maclays. I’m staying for supper…might spend the night…I’ll call and let you know. Love you!”

“S-spend the night?” Tara asked, flashing Willow a nervous smirk.

“Heh…just…well…I…wishful thinking?” Willow said, blushing.

Tara crossed the room, taking Willow’s hand, kissing it softly as she looked up into her emerald eyes. “I’d l-like to make all of your wishes come true.”

Later…

Buffy and Xander did their best to ‘convince’ the boys that it would be in their best interest to keep their mouths shut about the earlier events. In an attempt to save face, the two decided that it would be more palatable to spread the story that Xander had, in fact, done the damage to their faces, rather than Tara. Afterwards, Buffy and Xander had informed Giles of the new developments, and the trio had been researching ever since…

“So…let me get this straight…” Xander began. “…you’re thinking Tara’s not really a vamp at all…or at least not the usual bad-ass blood-sucker type…so then it would be okay for Will to be around her?” He said, flipping through the brittle pages of an ancient book on celtic mythology.

“I’m still not crazy about that…Tara could still hurt her…or turn her…but after the little display we saw today…well, I guess she’s maybe not as bad as I made her out to be…you know?” Buffy said, still looking at the same page that she had been reading for the past half-hour.

“Hey Giles…did you hear this? Buffy just said she was wrong!” Xander said, excitedly.

“I did not! I just said that maybe there’s more to this than what I thought…” Buffy protested.

Giles remained on the phone, motioning for them to be quiet as he listened intently on the line.

“Thank you…yes, dear…I’ll keep in touch…cheers!” Giles said, hanging up the phone. “I think I may have something interesting about the Maclay clan…”

Meanwhile…at the Maclay’s…

Willow and Tara walked towards the kitchen, the delicious aromas eminating from within were intoxicating.

“Goddess…that smells…wonderful!” Willow said.

Tara took a deep breath, taking a moment to allow the scents to filter through her olfactory sense. “Fresh pasta…crimini and morel mushrooms…parmesan oregiano…cream…freshly baked bread…garlic…”

“Garlic? Isn’t that going to make you all ‘ewww…’ or something?” Willow said, not wanting to cause any of the Maclays any discomfort.

Tara laughed, “All ‘ewwww’? No…actually, I kind of like the smell of garlic…it’s very unique. The garlic thing…old wives’ tale. Actually came about during the plague, I think.”

“Well…yeah…but I just thought maybe the old wives’ tale was actually true…since, you know…vampires, demons, the boogey man…all real…”

They entered the kitchen, finding William and Elizabeth happily cooking, while Anya opened a bottle of red wine.

“I hope you like Italian, Willow…” William said, stirring the alfredo.

“Absolutely…one of my favorites!” Willow said, excitedly. “It smells so good…you really didn’t have to go to all of this trouble for me, though…”

“Nonsense! As I told you before, we really haven’t had an excuse to use this beautiful kitchen before…” Elizabeth said, smiling.

“Besides…it’s fun! We don’t get many visitors.” Anya added, pulling the cork from the bottle.

“Keep cooking like this, and I’ll be over here every night!” Willow said, laughing. “You’d get sick of me.”

“Never…” Tara said, kissing Willow’s cheek.

“Ahhh…young love…” Elizabeth said, smiling.

William placed his arms around her from behind, placing a soft kiss upon her neck. “…eternal love.”


To Be Continued...
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Re: NEW FIC!!!! TWILIGHT REVISITED

Postby Nue » Tue Jan 05, 2010 4:51 pm

ha, kitchen scene!

so much better!
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Re: NEW FIC!!!! TWILIGHT REVISITED

Postby uuhhHHH_ditto » Tue Jan 05, 2010 6:00 pm

"Ahhh…young love…eternal love.”


cute, I want to know more about the maclay clan. waiting for more!^_^
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Re: NEW FIC!!!! TWILIGHT REVISITED

Postby Willowtree252 » Tue Jan 05, 2010 6:57 pm

“Ahhh…young love…” Elizabeth said, smiling.

William placed his arms around her from behind, placing a soft kiss upon her neck. “…eternal love.”


I am very familiar with this in my life hehehehe I love that Tara wants to protect Willow and that Willow is perfectly ok with everything going on. wonderful.[/quote]
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Re: NEW FIC!!!! TWILIGHT REVISITED

Postby Zampsa1975 » Wed Jan 06, 2010 2:15 am

Yay for great update-y goodness... Good that Willow forcefully said no to Tara's brainfart of not seeing eachother for awhile... I really liked the kitchen scene... I'm wondering what new Giles found about Maclay clan...
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Re: NEW FIC!!!! TWILIGHT REVISITED

Postby abarda » Wed Jan 06, 2010 10:48 am

More, please! This was an great update! :peace
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Re: NEW FIC!!!! TWILIGHT REVISITED

Postby love_2003 » Wed Jan 06, 2010 10:49 am

Yay an update!! I think it's so funny how Anya is all excited to have Willow over for dinner. Hope Tara realizes that she wont be getting rid of Willow that fast; she there for the long run.
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