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Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (UPDTED: 4/03/18)

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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (10/09/11)

Postby Grimm » Sun Oct 09, 2011 4:31 pm

Mole-y ass flashings and Nanas who have breasts so saggy that they can tuck them into their socks........ :lmao. You can only find that kind of humor in a Finey_McFine production!!

Grayson....what a dick! That's low class...perving on your little sister's girl. But, Tara gets the last laugh. The way Shelia cooks, Grayson will be busting suds until the New Year.

I am bracing myself for the return of the Shelia Monster. I hope she doesnt do anything to harsh. And if she does, I hope Granny Adele puts a boot up her ass!
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (10/09/11)

Postby leos_pride » Sun Oct 09, 2011 9:49 pm

Hello! I have finally detached myself from my perch on the wall to leave feedback on the is awesome fic :) I have absolutely loved it ever since I stumbled across it and have eagerly awaited every update since. Onto this current update...

I really enjoy the way you have portrayed Willow's family and Nana Dell has some serious spunk! You portray Willow's family with the dynamic and quirkiness of any family, especially a large one with several siblings. It is truly entertaining

I'm concerned Sheila's sudden turn around will be short lived >:( why do I get the feeling she had gone to the world of denial and thought "its just a phase/infatuation"? Grrrr...

I loved the way Tara handled Grayson and his very brazen flirting and harassing of Willow. Her revenge during karaoke was hilarious! :D

Can't wait for the next update! Hope you get a chance to update sooner that a few weeks from now but I think we all totally understand real life making things difficult

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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (10/09/11)

Postby wimpy0729 » Mon Oct 10, 2011 5:27 am

Oh, that was just so much fun, every single part of it. Nana and Leo are a real hoot, you know, what with talking about their hooters and showing their ass. OMG. More great characters. And, of course, I loved Tara putting too-full-of-himself Grayson in his place. Man, I wish he would've had to dress the part too, fishnets and all. lol

I gotta say though, if Tara would've sung to me like that, I don't think I could've sat through a movie afterwards. I would've wanted to head straight upstairs. Oh well, I'm sure you'll give us more W/T lovin soon, and you never disappoint.

I'll be waiting for whenever you manage to get back to us, cause I can't wait to see what happens next!

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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (10/09/11)

Postby beautiful_love » Mon Oct 10, 2011 4:35 pm

Very nice update. Willow's family is so... just a really good family. Yes there's the obvious issues but she has such an interesting relationship with all her siblings and her dad. It's refreshing and I commend you for writing it that way.

So her grandma was hillarious. I've had to deal with my grandma referring to my almost fiance (hopefully) for 4 years now as "that friend of yours." Grandparents can always be entertaining. And then there's Grayson. I'm not sure what I think of him. Yes, quite brazen to flirt so openly with Tara in front of Willow. But I'm not ready to write him off just yet. And the pajama bingo karaoke... very entertaining. I'll be singing the Rocky Horror soundtrack for the rest of the evening.

Definitely looking forward to the next update even if it is two to three weeks away.
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (10/09/11)

Postby Mgraham93 » Fri Oct 21, 2011 1:37 pm

Awesome chapter Nana Adele was great.

I absolutely loved the choice of songs in this chapter glad sneaky little Grayson lost hopefully he won't be causing more trouble. Glad they got out of doing the dishes.

Have to Agree with AstronSoul- Grayson does remind of Denozo.

No one was paying too much attention to them, except for Sheila; who had heard Willow’s second declaration of love in as many days. She visibly stiffened and the smile fell from her face, “Ok, ok…can we please just get on with this. It’s getting late.”


EEk sounds like Sheila is about to go back to the Mr Hyde routine. Hopefully Nana Adele can help settle things.

The ending was really nice and sweet.

Can't wait for the next update
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (10/09/11)

Postby DaddyCatALSO » Sat Oct 22, 2011 1:27 pm

The whole KAraoke Bingo sounds like a fiendish torture device. And it was used appropriately here.
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (10/09/11)

Postby Finey_McFine » Sun Oct 23, 2011 10:41 am

Hi All! In order to get you chapters in a timely manner, I gonna start doing comment replies without quotes….hope this is ok! It’s a lot faster to reply this way:)

AstronSoul:
RL is a pisser sometimes and I wish I had more time to write. It’s not even that I’m all that busy, but my child has this ridiculous schedule with homework, Girl Scouts, orchestra, school clubs and misc parties….and someone has to drive her. :p

Nanna Addy is a firecracker! We will definitely play a big part in events to come. Things are about to get interesting!!

I love singing karaoke…in my home in front of no one, lol. My kid and I do Glee karaoke on the Wii and my wife plugs her ears, lol.

Song choices…yeah that song really was a blow to Grayson’s delicate ego and masculinity. Go Tara! I do see a little Denozo in him, but he much more handsome ;-)

Sheila vs. Willow…things come to a head in the next few chapters. I’ll say no more.

Grayson and Tara…don’t lose faith in him. He’s gonna turn out ok, I promise.

THANKS FOR THE WONDERFUL FEEDBACK!!!!


zampsa19752001:
Nanna…I grew up in Miami and the elderly snowbirds there are ridiculous! She is definitely modeled after several that I used to know.

Song choices…The entire time I was writing that, I was picturing Grayson dressed for the part and it made it even funnier in my head and appropriately fitting for his pompous behavior.

Thanks for the feedback!


willowtarabuffyfaith:
You will definitely see more of Nanna Adele! Her role is pivotal:)

Thanks for the feedback!


Ariel:
Sheilamouth * Giggles *…Love it!

Thanks for the ----> :lmao and the ----> :rofl Glad you liked!

Ira and the in laws…I picture him just desperately trying to get trough the holiday in one piece, oh and drinking a lot, lol.

Yeah, I had to slip in Scooby Doo somewhere, besides how adorable would Willow be in old SD jammies anyway? You know me and adorable Wilow………….

Thanks for the feedback!


True_Love:
Nanna Adele and Sixteen Candles…HA!!!! You’re the only one that got the reference!!! YAY!!!!! :banana It’s one of my all time favorite John Hughes movies and those scenes with the grandparents from were some of my very favorites. Yeah, poor Willow. There’s really nothing worse than public family humiliation.

Traditions…we have a few holiday traditions as well, though none are karaoke related…thankfully.

Ahhhh the vet thing…it’s complicated but, all will revealed soon…I promise! Though no coven or levitation. :p

Thanks for the feedback!


SMGOVAN:
Thanks for the ----> :rofl I’m glad it played out the way it was supposed to!

Grayson…well, he more he acts like an ass, the more he’ll get what he deserves, lol. BUT…don’t give up on him yet!

Sheila monster…Yep! Brace yourself, cuz it’s a comin’!

Thanks for the feedback!


los_pride:
Yay!! Welcome to the wonderful world of ‘Delurksville!’ I’m glad you are enjoying my fic:)

Willow’s family…Thanks! I’m glad you like the family dynamic. I’m the oldest of 5 so, I get all the weirdness that comes with a large group of siblings. Even as adults, there’s still sibling rivalry, etc. Never a dull moment!

Sheila…brace yourself.

I always pictured Tara as kinda ‘silent, but deadly.’ She’s a bit quiet and unassuming, but observant and never misses a beat. Reminds me of my wife:)

Thanks for the feedback!!!


wimpy0729:
I feel like grandparents should ALWAYS be the comic relief, at least in my experience that’s always been the case!

Deep down Tara’s a natural smart ass, it just takes a little coaxing to get it out of her. She also stands up for herself…which will come in handy in the next few chapters. * tease alert * lol

It took me awhile to come up with appropriate songs for everyone to sing in my version of OMWF, but Tara’s was chosen BEFORE I even started writing the fic. I just had to figure out a way to slip it in. :P

As always…thanks for the feedback!!


beautiful_love:
Willow’s family is, ideal and I think what we all wish for. Well, maybe except for Sheila, lol. I always wondered how different canon Willow would have been if she had actual siblings and a warmer family life. I doubt we would have seen the darkness.

Fiancée??? Are congratulations in order for you and “that friend of yours?” LOL I know how that goes, mine was referred to as the “roommate” for a very looooooong time.

Grayson…yep, don’t write him off yet. He may just surprise all of us.

Rocky Horror…this time of the year I always seem to be humming a song from that movie and wishing I could go watch it in a theater. I used to go A LOT when I was a teenager and with all the fun stuff too…toast, water guns, etc. Tons of fun!

Thanks for the feedback!!


Mgraham93:
Nanna Adele does seem to have endeared her self to everyone:)

Glad the songs worked!! It took awhile to figure out which ones to use.

Grayson vs. Denozo…I can see it, sort of. But he’s not as goofy as Denozo, at least I don’t think so.

Sheila…All I can say is that the other shoe is about to fall.

Thanks for the feedback.


DaddyCatAlso:
Karaoke Bingo! Almost as treacherous as water boarding!!!

Thanks for reading!

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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (10/23/11)

Postby Finey_McFine » Sun Oct 23, 2011 10:45 am

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TITLE: Racing The Rain

AUTHOR: Finey_McFine

RATING: PG-13

DISCLAIMER: Willow, Tara and any other BtVS characters, as well as some random dialog, belong to Mutant Enemy. ALL other original characters belong to me! This includes: Willow’s siblings and teammates, plus Tara’s friends and co-workers. Mention of any ‘real’ people in this fic is brief and pure fantasy.

SUMMARY: Totally AU! Set in LA with lots of W/T fluff and some angst, but no Hellmouthyness; just good old regular day-to-day drama. Willow is attending college on an athletic scholarship and Tara is Hollywood royalty. They meet and fall in love, of course, but will they be able to survive the pitfalls of a public romance? Well, you’ll just have to read and find out! ;-)



FEEDBACK: Yes! Any glaring issues…please send me a PM!

AUTHOR’S NOTE: Hi Everyone and Happy Sunday! The chapter below begins Thanksgiving Day and I’m splitting it into at least 3 chapters. On the bright side, I’ll have another update ready for you next week! ;-) I hope you all enjoy, because things are about to get interesting.

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Chapter 48: Pangs

Thanksgiving morning came quickly and the girls found themselves up and out at the stables early. Willow volunteered to take on horse duties so Eli didn’t have to make two trips out to the ranch, and Tara volunteered to keep her girlfriend company. It took about an hour to get the horses fed, out to pasture, and stables mucked. Returning to the house they showered, dressed, and ate a light breakfast before setting out in Sheila’s car to pick up Willow’s Aunt Gertrude.

“So, this Aunt is your Mom’s sister?” Tara asked.

“She’s actually Nanna Addy’s sister, so I guess that makes her my great aunt? I dunno. Anyway, she’s about five years older than Addy and not quite firing on all cylinders…if you know what I mean,” She said with a chuckle.

“And she still lives by herself?”

“Umm hmm, refuses to move. She’s lived on that property for a million years and flat out refuses to leave. It’s actually the house my Mom grew up in.”

“Really?”

“Yep, it’s the family estate. See, my grandparents bought the property when they moved here from Pennsylvania back in the fifties; Gert was a toddler and my Mom was born in the house a few years later. Anyway, there is another small house on the property that Gerty lived in until my grandparents moved to Florida, about twenty-five years ago. Since then, she’s lived in the main house.”

“She never married?” Tara asked, quirking an eyebrow.

Willow smiled, “I know…I’ve always wondered. She always had lot’s of lady friends, but I never asked; I just figured it was none of my business. Different generation, ya know?”

“So, if all you guys were here, why did your grandparents move to Florida?”

“Oh um, Grandpa Leo’s company transferred him. He worked for Kovar Pharmaceuticals and they moved their head quarters there, so he had to go or give up his pension. Anyway, by the time he was ready to retire they’d fallen in love with Florida and decided to stay.”

“What about your Dad? Are his parents close by?”

“Umm hmm, about twenty minutes away.”

“So, w-who all is going to be there today?”

“Willow sighed, blowing her hair off her forehead, “Well, let’s see, my aunt and uncle that you already met, the twins, both sets of grandparents, Gerty, and all of us…about 22 people in all.”

Tara nodded silently and sank back in her seat; her eyes drifting to the passing landscape. “Hey, are you ok?” Willow asked.

“Yeah, I was just thinking how lucky you are to know your family history and actually have a family estate. It’s pretty cool.”

Willow nodded and smiled, turning onto a dirt road and pulling up to an old farmhouse. She threw the car in park and shut off the engine. She knew that Tara’s past and family history was a touchy subject, so she simply brought Tara’s hand to her mouth and reassuringly kissed her knuckles, “You’re my family now Tare and we’ll make our own history.”

Tara’s face flushed and she suddenly felt tingly, “I love you so much Will, I…I look at you and my heart feels like it’s going to burst; like I can’t possibly love you any more. Then you say something like that and…and I fall even more in love with you.”

Willow’s bright green eyes shined with love as she pulled Tara close and hugged her tightly, “Love you too baby…very, very much.” Willow finally pulled back and removed the keys from the ignition, “I guess we need to go in and get my aunt. Ready to get your crazy on?”

Tara was curious about the house that Sheila grew up in and examined it intently. The house was typical of the time in which it was built; a white, wood frame, southern style two-story home with an expansive wraparound porch that was decorated with aging wicker furniture.

The girls stood side by side as Willow opened the screen door and rapped on the interior door, “Aunt Gert! It’s me, Willow!” The redhead shouted.

“I’m coming, I’m coming…keep your britches on,” said the muffled voice from somewhere inside.

The door swung open and an older woman with long grey hair greeted them. Tara smiled to herself at the woman’s appearance. Where Adele had been perfectly kempt; from her head to her toes, Gertrude seem the exact polar opposite. Willow’s aunt was wearing bright orange tennis shoes, green polyester pants with a black Thanksgiving themed sweater, and a white long sleeved shirt underneath; even though it was nearly eighty degrees out. Topping off the horribly mismatched ensemble was a red and gold knit cap. The woman, despite her age, was slender and seemed fit; Tara could clearly see where Willow got her build.

They were greeted warmly and introductions were made. Aunt Gerty invited them in and then proceeded to scurry about the cluttered interior rambling and giggling to herself. She picked up random items and handed them to Willow and Tara until they were completely bogged down; then asked them to change several light bulbs around the interior and out on the porch. Willow was exasperated trying to chase the woman down in an attempt to get her out of the house and into the car, when Tara, sensing her girlfriend’s frustration, graciously intervened.

“Aunt Gerty, the casserole smells wonderful. Can I help you get it ready to go?” She said as she took Gerty by the hand and led her into the kitchen.

Willow quickly finished the bulb replacement mission and then put Gerty’s bags into the car before joining them, “Ok ladies, are we all set to go?” She asked as she watched Tara covering the last of three plastic containers in foil, at Gerty’s insistance, even though they all had matching lids on them already. Stacking them on top of each other, she handed all three to Willow. Then took Gerty by the hand and led towards the front door.

“Willow dear, did you bring that pretty horse of yours? Gerty asked.

Willow glanced at Tara with a goofy look on her face as the blonde bit her bottom lip to stifle a laugh, “No Aunt Gerty, I drove my Mom’s car.”

“Oh it’s just as well,” she said looking up at Tara and smiling sweetly, “I’m not wearing the proper riding boots anyway. Papa gave me the most wonderful boots for Christmas a few years ago.”

Tara caught Willow’s eye and the redhead just shrugged her shoulders and made another face; knowing full well that her great grandfather, who had passed away years before she was even born, had never celebrated Christmas a day in his life. Willow knew from stories that Nanna Addy had told her about her parents being devout Jews and how they had migrated from Germany in the 1930’s.

“Maybe I should go get them just in case…” Gerty mumbled.

“NO!” Both Willow and Tara shouted in unison; having finally gotten the old woman out of the house. “I mean, it’s just that everyone’s waiting and Artemis always gets Thanksgiving off...” Willow’s voice trailed as she fumbled for an explanation and rolled her eyes.

Once in the car, Willow engaged the child locks on the back doors and windows…just in case. As they drove, Gerty rambled on about mailboxes, Easter eggs and wire hangers until they finally arrived back at the ranch. Willow practically leapt from the vehicle; she’d never been happier to be home before in her entire life.

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By noon the house was filled with relatives and the festivities were in full swing. Willow’s paternal grandparents, Solomon and Miriam Rosenberg, arrived and it turned out that Grandpa Sol was also a Grant’s Park fan and chewed Tara’s ear for the better part of an hour. She was finally able to escape to the kitchen under the premise of getting a drink when the back door flew open and Milo charged through.

“Hey Milo!” Tara called out cheerfully.

“Hi,” He replied with an angry pout on his face.

Tara kneeled down in front of him to adjust his little bowtie, “Well, aren’t you a handsome little devil.”

“You have no idea!” Grayson grumbled as he limped through the door behind them.

Milo whipped his head towards his uncle and glared; ripping himself away from Tara and angrily marching towards the living room.

Tara stood and brushed herself off, “Wow, what was that all about?”

Grayson simply stared at Tara with a big goofy grin on his face, “Hi Tara, Happy Thanksgiving.”

Tara looked at him quizzically, “Hi Grayson and Happy Thanksgiving. Are you alright?” She asked.

Grayson nodded, “You look really nice today. That color-”

Before he could finish, Bambi entered through the door behind him, “Grayson honey, now I need you to take this dish before I break a nail!”

Grayson glanced at Tara sheepishly as he turned to take the baking dish from his girlfriend.

Once divested of the offending corningware, Bambi set her sights on Tara, “Well hey there darlin!” She shouted and pulled the blonde into a hug; as if they were long lost friends.

“H-Hi Bambi,” Tara stammered as Bambi squeezed her tighter.

“Hey, what’s going on with Mi…lo?” Willow asked with a shocked expression crossing her face as she tried to comprehend exactly why the cleavagly slut bomb was squeezing her girlfriend.

“I asked him to help me carry something in from the car and the little bugger kicked the shit out of me,” Grayson said.

Willow quirked one side of her mouth sarcastically and tilted her head, “Gray, come on, he’s just a little boy and obviously something is bothering him.”

“Well, I’d say ask his parents, but they’re too busy…arguing,” Grayson said as he and Willow moved towards the window at the same time.

Willow let out a long sigh, “What are they arguing about now?”

“No idea, but it looks pretty intense,” He said as he craned his neck to see if Eli and Stella were still at it.

“And so it begins…” Willow mumbled as she turned around, to find her girlfriend still cornered by the platinum blonde. Bambi was telling Tara all about her ‘acting’ abilities and asking if maybe Tara could put in a word for her. She pulled some modeling shots out of a manila envelope and thrust them into Tara’s hands; making the actress promise to give them to the ‘right’ people in hopes that she could get a guest spot on Tara’s show.

A horrified look briefly flashed across Tara’s face and Willow knew it was time to rescue her from Bambi’s crazed rambling.

“Hey baby, can you give me a hand with this stuff please?” Willow asked.

“No problem sweetie. Um, excuse me,” She smiled sweetly and made her way across the kitchen to Willow; mouthing ‘thank you’ along the way.

Willow handed Tara a spoon and instructed her to stir something in a pot on the stove. She had no idea what it was or if it even needed stirring or not, but she had to make good on her initial request of needing Tara’s help. The ploy worked and Bambi grabbed Grayson by the shirtsleeve and dragged him out of the kitchen; lest her assistance be necessary as well.

Once they were out of sight, Willow lifted the lid on the dish that Bambi brought and scrunched up her face, “Ugh, gross!”

“What…?” Tara asked as she turned to see Willow’s face scrunched up cautiously sniffing and examining the putrid dish, “What is it?”

“I’m not exactly sure, I…I think it’s some sort of…Shepard’s pie?”

Tara leaned in with Willow and pointed, “Well, that looks like a cranberry and I think those are mashed potatoes with…spam? It’s hard to tell with all the bacon on top.”

“Good God, it’s horrible!” Willow chuckled, “Kinda reminds me of the crazy meat trifle that Rachel made on Friends.”

“Oh yeah! When the pages of the cookbook stuck together and she put sautéed onions and meat in with the jelly and the whipped topping!”

“And Joey loved it!” They both said at the same time as they burst into a fit of giggles.

They were completely caught up and didn’t even notice the backdoor open or the person that entered.

“Uh hello, hope I’m not interrupting anything,” The young man stammered.

Both girls looked up in unison and the smile instantly fell from Tara’s face. “Oh, Robby…hey. We um, we didn’t hear you come in,” Willow said.

“Hey Will…Tara. Happy Thanksgiving,” Robby said as he stood awkwardly with a bottle of wine in his hands, “This uh, this is for your parents.”

“Ok, thanks. I guess you can just put it over there,” Willow pointed to her left.

“Wow, everything smells great!” He exclaimed as he relaxed a little and casually leaned against the counter. “Did you make your world famous Sweet Potato Casserole?”

Willow smiled slightly and nodded, “Tara, I bet you didn’t know that our little Willow was such a fine cook!”

Tara’s eyes narrowed and she couldn’t help but glare as pangs of jealousy began to consume her. Our Willow?! Our Willow?! Correction: MY Willow. Tara thought indignantly. He may have known details from Willow’s past, but Tara’s knowledge of the redhead ran deeper, more intimate, and there was no way she was going to allow him the pleasure of making her feel like an outsider.

Tara’s mind began to churn, coming up with all sorts of things she knew about Willow that he would never know; like how she knew exactly where to touch Willow. She knew that when she wound her tongue around to the spot just behind Willow’s ears, that it drove the redhead insane. She knew other things-simple things like, how Willow preferred to sleep on her left side and that the pattern of freckles across her stomach resembled a crescent moon; a pattern that Tara had explored thoroughly. Yes, Tara knew things about her Willow that no one else on the planet knew and would never know; especially not this man.

Realizing that she hadn’t answered and suddenly feeling childish for letting him get to her, Tara smirked; wrapping an arm possessively around Willow’s waist. “As a matter of fact, I do. Willow cooks for me all the time, don’t cha sweetie? I especially love her breakfasts,” Tara said seductively as she pulled Willow a little closer.

Robby stiffened and was taken aback; crossing his arms across his chest, “Well um, I’m just gonna go see what everyone else is up to,” He mumbled as he quickly left the room.

Willow looked at Tara with arched eyebrows and a questioning smile.

Tara ducked her head. “Sorry,” She said sheepishly, “He’s just so damn smug and I can’t believe that he had the balls to show up; especially after what happened last time!”

Willow sighed and ran a smoothing hand across Tara’s back, “I know baby, let’s just try to relax and enjoy the day, ok?” Willow knew they were in for a Very. Long. Day.

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A couple hours later, dinner was in full swing with everyone enjoying the huge bounty. Tara sat close to Willow, periodically resting her hand on the redhead’s thigh and doing her best to ignore Robby; whom she’d caught staring at them on more than one occasion. The atmosphere was laid back and comfortable; even Sheila seemed relaxed.

“So, who’s up for Turkey Bowl today?” Grayson announced rubbing his hands together as a rambling chatter broke out across the table.

“Oh man, I totally forgot!” Willow exclaimed.

Robby smirked, “Will, how could you forget about our annual tradition?”

Willow answered Robby’s question; keeping her eyes trained on Tara the entire time, “I guess I just had other, more important things on my mind.”

Tara met Willow’s eyes and responded with an adorable lopsided grin, “So, what’s a Turkey Bowl?” She asked.

Robby snorted, “You don’t know what a Turkey Bowl is?” He said sarcastically.

Willow’s eyes flashed, it was the second time he’d made fun of Tara. She shot him one of her famous you’re dead to me glares just as Rachael leaned in and whispered in Robby’s ear, “Can I see you in the kitchen, please?” She asked.

A few seconds later, Rachael and Robby were headed for the kitchen as Willow explained to Tara about their annual touch football Thanksgiving tradition.

Once in the kitchen, Rachael spun around, “What the hell is your problem?”

“What?” He responded.

“You know Goddamn well what!” She hissed, “You’re trying your hardest to embarrass and belittle Tara. What exactly do you expect to accomplish? Do you really think that’s going to get you in Willow’s good graces?”

Robby crossed his arms and rolled his eyes at Rachael’s questioning, “Come on Rachael, you think this is serious? What the hell is Tara Maclay doing here with Willow anyway? I’m just trying to open Willow’s eyes, so she can see things for what they really are.”

“And what would that be Rob…in your extreme expert opinion, because you seem to have the inside track on Tara’s intentions. I mean, after having spent so much time getting to know her.”

“It’s not like you know her all that well either. What are you, star struck? You can’t see that this is all a game for her and when she gets bored…Willow’s out.”

Rachael straightened, trying to get a grip on her anger, “No, I don’t know Tara all that well, but I do know my sister and I trust her instincts. And I will NOT allow you to ruin this for her. Anyway, what are your intentions Robby? Willow is GAY.” Robby just stood; staring blankly at Rachael. “Ok, let me spell it out for you. She’s into girls and no matter how many stupid little schemes you and my mother cook up, at the end of the day, she’s coming home to a woman. Period. So you need to get over it.” With that she spun and headed back to the dining room.

When Rachael returned to the table; her face was red and her forehead creased. Willow knew something was up and caught her eye. Rachael softened instantly, shaking her head, and gave Willow a soft smile. The redhead nodded in return and went back to her dinner. Several minutes later, a grumpy looking Robby returned, and Willow knew that her sister had pulled him aside to give him a stern talking to on her behalf. She found herself wishing that she had been a fly on the wall for that particular conversation.

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With dinner winding down, everyone began the task of cleaning up. The grandparents and Sheila were exempt; leaving it up to the ‘kids.’ Sheila retired to the back porch with Adele, her mother-in-law and Gertrude as Ira’s brother, Haskell, his wife and the twins had to leave early to attend another event; everyone said their goodbye’s and Ira walked them to their car. Tara grabbed Willow by the hand and pulled her into the family room, where they settled in on the couch to watch football with both of Willow’s grandfathers. Every now and then, Willow would wander into the kitchen and snap a picture of Grayson; clad in yellow rubber gloves, a pink apron and up to his ears in dishes. While Bambi stood next to him rambling and not really helping to do anything. It was truly Willow’s best Thanksgiving ever.


A couple hours later, with the dishes behind him, Grayson collapsed onto the loveseat in the family room and glanced in Willow’s direction.

Sitting cross-legged on the couch next to Tara, Willow smirked, “All done bro?” She asked.

Grayson pursed his lips and nodded his head, “Yeah, with the dishes, and now I’m ready to work off a little pent up energy. Ya’ll ready or am I dealing with a bunch of pussies here?”

Tara raised her eyebrows as Willow covered her gaping mouth with her right hand, “Such language! Especially for a guy that just took off his apron,” she quipped with mock indignation.

“Touché little sis, touché,” He replied raising his hands in surrender.

“Do we even have enough people?” Willow asked, “Rachael can’t play and the twins had to leave…”

“I think so, Robby and Jeff are a go, so as long as Tara and Molly play we should be good with four each.”

“What about Dad?”

“He’s gonna ref.”

Willow turned to her girlfriend, “Tara?”

Tara smiled and nodded, “I’m in.”

Willow flashed Tara a patented 100-watt smile and leapt from the couch, “Come on then, let’s go change!” She exclaimed as she pulled Tara up and towards the stairs.

By the time they reached Willow’s room, the redhead was babbling a mile a minute, “…so then Hunter threw this awesome pass that Eli caught and then tossed to me for the winning touchdown. It was epic! You should’ve seen the look on Grayson’s face…priceless. He thought they had the win locked up, but NO WAY were we gonna let his team win again.” By the time Willow wrapped things up, she noticed Tara sitting on her bed with a visible pout on her lips.

“Hey, what’s wrong?” Willow asked, quickly dropping down next to the blonde, “Hey, I’m sorry. Did I scare you? I didn’t mean to scare you with all the crazy talking. You don’t have to play baby, you don’t have to feel...what?”

Tara’s lips were curved in an adorable half smile, “Will, I want to play. I just…I wish you didn’t have to change out of that outfit. It’s um…it’s incredibly sexy.”

Willow’s stomach did several flips as she took in Tara’s words and then pressed their lips together; happily surprised with the results of her ensemble. When she put the outfit together, she had no idea the effect it would have on her girlfriend. She just wanted to be comfortable.

Tara, on the other hand, had to physically wipe the drool from her chin when Willow had bounced down the stairs in a knee length lacy cream colored skirt with a studded waist band, brown v-neck blouse and matching brown cowboy boots. It was the third time Willow had worn boots, with shorts or a skirt and the third time Tara thought she’d died and gone to heaven. She wasn’t even sure why it was such a turn on; it just was, and she couldn’t stop staring.

“Ummmm,” Willow moaned, “It’s been entirely too long since I got to kiss you.”

“I second that,” Tara mumbled as she captured Willow’s lips in a steamy kiss and ran a hand up her thigh and under that lovely skirt.

Willow squirmed and grasped Tara’s wrist before it had the chance to slide inward, “Ummm Tare, if you do that we’ll end up playing our own special game of touch football.”

Tara began pressing kisses across Willow’s jaw and nipping at her neck, “I know…that’s the whole point.”

Willow giggled when Tara’s warm breath tickled the sensitive spot near her ear, “Not quite the reaction I was fishing for,” Tara said.

“Mmmmm, I know baby but, everyone is waiting and they’ll know what we’re doing if we don’t go back and-”

“Shhhh Will, I was just teasing you.”

“Oh, duh…sorry,” she said sheepishly.

“It’s ok love, come on,” Tara said as she rose; taking Willow’s hand and pulling her off the bed, “Let’s get changed and go kick some ass.”
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (10/09/11)

Postby AstronSoul » Sun Oct 23, 2011 10:45 am

DIBS! YAY Update!!!!!! :banana :eatme :banana :eatme

Totally understand the whole RL thing, and hey that's WAY more important. But I do like when you update!!! :grin

“She’s actually Nanna Addy’s sister, so I guess that makes her my great aunt? I dunno. Anyway, she’s about five years older than Addy and not quite firing on all cylinders…if you know what I mean,” She said with a chuckle.


Yay another crazy relative! I love crazy family!

“Yeah, I was just thinking how lucky you are to know your family history and actually have a family estate. It’s pretty cool.”
Willow nodded and smiled, turning onto a dirt road and pulling up to an old farmhouse. She threw the car in park and shut off the engine. She knew that Tara’s past and family history was a touchy subject, so she simply brought Tara’s hand to her mouth and reassuringly kissed her knuckles, “You’re my family now Tare and we’ll make our own history.”


This moment gave me a huge grin, with Willow stating that shows the love growing even more for both of them, and how Willow wants her forever, even if it's not been that long. :love :luv :love

Willow smiled slightly and nodded, “Tara, I bet you didn’t know that our little Willow was such a fine cook!”
Tara’s eyes narrowed and she couldn’t help but glare as pangs of jealousy began to consume her. Our Willow?! Our Willow?! Correction: MY Willow.


I love Tara's reaction after this, but Robby having the gall to even say that in the first place


Realizing that she hadn’t answered and suddenly feeling childish for letting him get to her, Tara smirked; wrapping an arm possessively around Willow’s waist. “As a matter of fact, I do. Willow cooks for me all the time, don’t cha sweetie? I especially love her breakfasts,” Tara said seductively as she pulled Willow a little closer.
Robby stiffened and was taken aback; crossing his arms across his chest, “Well um, I’m just gonna go see what everyone else is up to,” He mumbled as he quickly left the room.


ZING!!!! YAY TARA!

Rachael straightened, trying to get a grip on her anger, “No, I don’t know Tara all that well, but I do know my sister and I trust her instincts. And I will NOT allow you to ruin this for her. Anyway, what are your intentions Robby? Willow is GAY.” Robby just stood; staring blankly at Rachael. “Ok, let me spell it out for you. She’s into girls and no matter how many stupid little schemes you and my mother cook up, at the end of the day, she’s coming home to a woman. Period. So you need to get over it.” With that she spun and headed back to the dining room.


YES!!!! Rachael is awesome!!! Can I have her as my sis or sis-in-law? Putting Robby in his freaking place!!!

By the time Willow wrapped things up, she noticed Tara sitting on her bed with a visible pout on her lips.
“Hey, what’s wrong?” Willow asked, quickly dropping down next to the blonde, “Hey, I’m sorry. Did I scare you? I didn’t mean to scare you with all the crazy talking. You don’t have to play baby, you don’t have to feel...what?”
Tara’s lips were curved in an adorable half smile, “Will, I want to play. I just…I wish you didn’t have to change out of that outfit. It’s um…it’s incredibly sexy.”


Oh man, that pout can do ANYONE in!

“It’s ok love, come on,” Tara said as she rose; taking Willow’s hand and pulling her off the bed, “Let’s get changed and go kick some ass.”


I really really hope if Robby tries anything in the game, Tara takes him out, he already showed he doesn't mind being rude, so I am not putting anything past him in a game of touch football. This could get messy...

Great job, I so cannot wait till next week!!!!!!

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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (10/23/11)

Postby leos_pride » Sun Oct 23, 2011 12:40 pm

:bounce Hurray for an update!

And the family craziness continues! Aunt Gerti is a very fun addition to the family dynamic. I think every family has at least one eccentric member :P keeps things interesting at family gatherings

I'm "glad" to see Bambie return. I was wondering where she was. I can't stand the woman but at least Grayson has to behave himself more with her around.

Who the hell invited Robby back? The nerve! And to think I, at first, thought he was an innocent victim of the Sheila Monster's plotting but then he turned into a complete asshole. Rock on Rachel for putting him in his place! :)

Oooooh! Football game next? Can't wait! :D

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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (10/23/11)

Postby MmmTaraSoSmexy13 » Sun Oct 23, 2011 12:48 pm

YAY!!!!!!! An Update!!!! :banana :eatme :banana :eatme :clap :clap
Finey, you got to stop teasing me with your updates. I love them all but dude...im a bit impatient but I’m glad you got to update, which is all that matters. I love this chapter very much. Its a nice way to celebrate thanksgiving and it’s a shame I don't do the same. He He touch football...now I will never be able to play without having an image of Willow and Tara going at it. Not that it’s a bad thing lol. I will be waiting patiently for your next awesome update. Can't wait :grin :grin
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (10/23/11)

Postby Grimm » Sun Oct 23, 2011 1:10 pm

Okay, I'll take the wait and see approach where Grayson is concerned. Robby, he's a dick and he gots-to-go! Aunt Gerty was great! I like the fact that Will and Tara suspect she's part of the 'Team'.

No Shelia nonsense this update (thanks for that!). But, i'm sure she will make up for that later. I hope all is well with Eli and Stella. Gold star for Rachel. I wish she would have smacked his ass right in the back of his stupid, smug and totally clueless head!

I hope things don't get rough during the Football game. If Robby takes a cheap shot at Tara, i'm gonna be pissed!!
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (10/23/11)

Postby zampsa19752001 » Mon Oct 24, 2011 4:59 am

Yay for excellent update-y goodness... Yay for another crazy relative... Big yay for Rachel to put Robby in his place... Big lol for Willow taking pictures of Grayson washing the dishes in the apron, I kinda hope that the apron is "manly" pink :-p ... I truly hope that everything is ok with Eli & Stella... I truly truly hope that if Robby has the nerve to get too touch-y feel-y with Willow or Tara in the game he gets his ass royally kicked by the rest of the family...
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (10/23/11)

Postby Ariel » Mon Oct 24, 2011 7:39 pm

Hey, Shelby!

Glad for an update! :grin

Aunt Gerty! :laugh Eli and gf arguing, nasty Robby and evil Sheila plans, mercy! The hits just keep on coming!

Ah, Bambi The Cleavage-y slut-bomb one of my favorite Willow lines, thank you for using it in your fic - *happy sigh*

And Robby is a BITCH! His catty comments and attempts to hurt Tara are infuriating. I praise Rachel for her efforts (see below) but feel strongly that a ‘sanction’ is required and I call on SMGOVAN as chief of Security to use the Fic-to-later to enter the story and deal directly with this guy who desperately needs her special attention! Who’s with me? Wait, it’s a fictional story. . . oh. . . sorry. :blush

Rachael straightened, trying to get a grip on her anger, “No, I don’t know Tara all that well, but I do know my sister and I trust her instincts. And I will NOT allow you to ruin this for her. Anyway, what are your intentions Robby? Willow is GAY.” Robby just stood; staring blankly at Rachael. “Ok, let me spell it out for you. She’s into girls and no matter how many stupid little schemes you and my mother cook up, at the end of the day, she’s coming home to a woman. Period. So you need to get over it.” With that she spun and headed back to the dining room.

Okay, Rockin’ Rachel – she may be preggers, but she’s got the Power ! Yay, Sis!!! :clap :applause :clap

Loooved Gucky Grayson and his clean fest! Yay, Tara! And loved Willow taking pix!!! Hey, she should’ve hired Blue Moon Photography and done it right! :rofl

Tara, on the other hand, had to physically wipe the drool from her chin when Willow had bounced down the stairs in a knee length lacy cream colored skirt with a studded waist band, brown v-neck blouse and matching brown cowboy boots. It was the third time Willow had worn boots, with shorts or a skirt and the third time Tara thought she’d died and gone to heaven. She wasn’t even sure why it was such a turn on; it just was, and she couldn’t stop staring.

Okay, Shelby, this is a triumph. Why? Because I’m about as fashion conscious as a rock and this actually got me excited. Whoa! I bow to you, Great One! :bow :bow

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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (10/23/11)

Postby Grimm » Mon Oct 24, 2011 9:52 pm

Ariel, i'm on it! I will lay the smacketh down on his candy ass!
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (10/23/11)

Postby Babbles4Twillow » Mon Oct 24, 2011 10:07 pm

Finey,

First....YAY I'M CAUGHT UP!! :banana :banana :bigwave
Second...OMGOMGOMGOMG I LOVE THIS STORY!!

Okay so, there are sooo many things to touch base on here, but I will only say a few things. I love athletic Willow and actress Tara. You've put such a spin on our girls, yet you've still managed to keep their characters intact and its AWESOME!!! I'm not too worried about the press and all that, our girls will make it through together, but I am interested in how you will have them handle it. I love Willow's wacky family. I'm glad that Rachael put Robbie in his place and I hope someone stands up to Sheila soon. Looking forward to more!

Thank you so much for this lovely story! :grin

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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (10/23/11)

Postby wimpy0729 » Tue Oct 25, 2011 12:57 am

Okay, first and foremost, I loved Tara and Rachael getting Robby like they did. Man, I hate assholes like that. Hopefully, something will get it through his thick skull soon that he has no chance in hell. period.

I also loved Aunt Gert. Wow, what a character, and such a snazzy dresser. lol I want to see more of her please.

And Bambi, well, ugh. nuff said.

Lastly, Willow in cowboy boots is just yum.

I'm kind of nervous about the football game though. I hope Robby or Grayson don't do anything ginormously stupid.

Great update again! Can't wait to see what's next.

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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (10/23/11)

Postby True_Love » Wed Oct 26, 2011 1:17 pm

Shel,

I don't think there is really much I can add here that hasn't already been said. Just wanted you to know; read it, loved it, can't wait for more.

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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (10/23/11)

Postby JustSkipIt » Thu Oct 27, 2011 3:14 pm

Way to go, Rachael! Where the fuck is Robby's family? Why would he be with the Rosenbergs unless they are all on a cruise or something (and didn't invite him) .

That episode of Friends is classic and one of our main conversational mainstays when Joey reveals that he ate all the trifles that people left all over the apartment and people question it and he says "meat, good... jam, good..." etc. We do that all the time. Like, what's not to like? Pie, good. Whipped cream, good. etc.

I feel like with the exception of Robby/Sheila weirdness they are having a pretty awesome holiday. I'm glad for them.
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (10/23/11)

Postby Mgraham93 » Fri Oct 28, 2011 1:37 am

Glad Rachael confronted Robby- somehow I suspect Sheila may have had some involvement with him being there.

Willow's wacky family are great. I Loved Willow saying that they are family and how they'll make their own history.

Great use of the classic Cleavagey slut bomb.

I remember as a dare I tried a 'friends style trifle' once, It was quite nice.
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (10/23/11)

Postby Finey_McFine » Sun Oct 30, 2011 9:17 am

AstronSoul:
YES! Another crazy relative…awesome! Funny how they seem to be on Sheila’s side of the family…. :hmm

Willow and family…She definitely wants to be with Tara forever, but you’re right it hasn’t been all that long. So, this was just her little way of letting Tara know without the big heavy duty talk.

Robby’s a douche and deserves everything he gets! The game will get tense and things will take a turn, that’s for sure.

Yay for Rachael! She should have thrown him out on his ass…more sibling fun to come.

I’m not sure what’s sexier…Willow in a skirt and boots or the Tara pout. I love ‘em both!


THANKS AGAIN FOR THE WONDERFUL FEEDBACK…El’ Presidente!!!!


leos_pride:
Old crazy relatives are ALWAYS the best!! They provide the necessary comic relief during those tense holiday gatherings.

Ahhh yes…Bambi Rae Swallows our resident bimbo, lol. I actually kind of love her, especially since she’s modeled after a real person. :p

Sheila invited him when he came to the BBQ. But I think she’ll soon be sorry, because he’s about to take asshole to a new level.

Football game below!

Thanks for the feedback!


MmmTaraSoSmexy13:
Sorry about the inconsistent updates:( I’m gonna try to get back on a weekly update schedule.

I’m glad you liked the chapter! You don’t celebrate Thanksgiving? I’m originally from Florida…where do you live? Just curious, I’m from Miami:)

I know what you mean…the game will never be the same.

Thanks for the feedback!


SMGOVAN:
Yup, Robby is a dick and we find out just how much of one he really is in the next chapter.

Unfortunately, Hurricane Sheila will return as a strong Category 5…sorry!

Thanks for the feedback!


zampsa19752001:
Yeah, gotta love those wacky realtives!

Hopwfully Robby got the message not to mess with a hormonal pregnant Rachael…but I doubt it.

Of course he wore “manly” ppink…is there any other color for a macho guy? Lol

Rest assured that Eli and Stella are fine. Just the same ol’ thing for them.

Robby getting touch-y feely with the girls, hmm.

Thanks for the feedback!


Ariel:
It seems like I say cleavage-y slut bomb on a daily basis…one of my favs as well!

I think that Robby needs his ass handed to him on a platter by more than pregnant Rachael…but she does get points for trying. ;-) If only it were possible to transport into our fics…* sighs *

At least Grayson was a good sport about it. BTW…Thanks for the shameless plug!

I’m not exactly the fashion maven either, but I see a lot of cute outfits come through my studio and this one is one of my favs!!

Thanks for the feedback!


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Hi Allie!
Yay!! Welcome to the wonderful world of Racing! :bigwave I’m so glad that you are liking my little fic!

Athletic Willow = Total Hotness! Even though Willow can be a complete spazz, on the ball field she’s focused and skilled. I toyed with reversing the roles when I was in the draft stages, but this way seemed more natural to me.

The paparazzi will be an issue and the lack of privacy for Willow just might cause some tension, but we’ll just have to wait and see how things go.

Willow’s family is typical of large families. I’m the oldest of 5 and I only have 1, but my next door neighbors have 8 and there is NEVER a dull moment over there.

Willow is the baby and there is no way the older sibs are gonna let Robby get away with being an a-hole. I think they tolerated him at the bbq, but having the balls to actually show up again and try and start shit? They’re done, lol.


Thanks for the feedback!!!


wimpy0729:
Tara and Rachael are both sick of Robby’s crap and have completely lost their patience.
Things are definitely coming to a head!

Aunt Gerty…I guess you can now see where Willow gets her awesome sense of style! LOL

*sighs * Bambi…I kinda love her. :grin

Ok, I’m no fashionista, but I LOVE AH when she wears knee high boots or boots of any kind with skirts, jeans, whatever…it’s just plain hot.

The football game…..see below!

As always…thanks for the feedback!!


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Hi Lexi!
LOL…thanks for sticking with it! You definitely make feedback commenting very easy!


Thanks for the feedback!!


JustSkipIt:
Hey you’re back!

Where the fuck is Robby’s family? Well, that’s a good question. :hmm I dunno, if he was my son, I may not invite him on a cruise either, lol.

I LOVE that episode of Friends!!! I say that ALL the time:) Every July 4th I make a trifle and my wife and I say the lines non-stop…also when we eat ground beef or jam. So, pretty much all the time as well. :lmao Now I gotta go and watch that episode!

The first half of Thanksgiving was awesome, but we’ll just have to wait and see what the rest of the day holds…

Thanks for the feedback!

Mgraham93:
Sheila actually invited him a few chapters back. I think Robby mentioned it to Willow; something to the effect of, “I’ll see you in a few days…your Mom invited me” or something. I’d have to go back and look, lol.

It really upsets Willow that Tara has no family and she really wants Tara to feel loved and included in something bigger. Being the youngest, she doesn’t know anything different and can’t imagine not having that support system.

I’m not sure if I would eat a “Friends type trifle.” Maybe a bite, but that’s about it and definitely NOT Bambi’s bacon and Spam casserole!!!!!! :spam :spam :spam :spam :spam

Thanks for the feedback.
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (10/30/11)

Postby Finey_McFine » Sun Oct 30, 2011 9:24 am

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TITLE: Racing The Rain

AUTHOR: Finey_McFine

RATING: R (Language)

DISCLAIMER: Willow, Tara and any other BtVS characters, as well as some random dialog, belong to Mutant Enemy. ALL other original characters belong to me! This includes: Willow’s siblings and teammates, plus Tara’s friends and co-workers. Mention of any ‘real’ people in this fic is brief and pure fantasy.

SUMMARY: Totally AU! Set in LA with lots of W/T fluff and some angst, but no Hellmouthyness; just good old regular day-to-day drama. Willow is attending college on an athletic scholarship and Tara is Hollywood royalty. They meet and fall in love, of course, but will they be able to survive the pitfalls of a public romance? Well, you’ll just have to read and find out! ;-)



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AUTHOR’S NOTE: Hi Everyone and Happy almost Halloween! Which is appropriate because the next few chapters are scary! Angsty scary, that is, but we all knew things were coming to a head…right? Sorry about the cliffhanger, well not really, because then it wouldn’t be any fun if I didn’t throw it in there, now would it?

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Chapter 49: Friends, Lovers and Brothers


Grayson rolled his eyes for about the tenth time and whined, “Come on Will. Aren’t you ready yet?”

Willow gazed up at her brother, “Gray, I have to stretch. I can’t get hurt, it’s my senior year and I’d actually like to participate. Plus my coach would KILL me if I got injured playing touch football.”

“Fine, at least let’s draw straws for team captains while we wait,” He said.

Ira held out his arm with eight straws clutched in his fist; all appearing to be the same length. “Alright, whoever chooses the longest straws are the team captains. Then we’ll toss a coin to see who picks first,” Ira announced to the group.

Ira held out his fist as everyone pulled a straw, most of them grimaced with their choice except for the winners, of course. “Well, looks like we have a couple winners, Grayson and Hunter, call it in the air,” Their father said referring to the coin toss as he flipped the coin; allowing it to drop to the ground.

“Heads!” Shouted Hunter as the coin flipped through the air and landed tails side up.

Hunter made a face while Grayson beamed; turning towards the group and picking Robby immediately. The same person he’d chosen every time he was a team captain. Grayson and Robby had both played football in high school and both loved the sport. Hunter countered by choosing Willow and in a surprise move, on Grayson’s next pick, he chose Tara. Willow’s face fell and a slight pout appeared across her lips.

“Looks like you two are gonna have to cut the cord Will,” Grayson commented causing several giggles from the others.

Willow shot Grayson a look and then glanced over towards her girlfriend; Tara simply smiled and winked. Willow’s face relaxed, seeing that everything was ok with Tara and returned a wink of her own.

Hunter saw his opportunity and picked Elijah next causing Grayson to pick Jeff, with Hunter then choosing Molly; who was none too happy that she was chosen last by her own boyfriend.

Molly cocked her head and rolled her eyes at Hunter. “What? There was a method to my madness.” He stated as he shrugged his shoulders.

Willow decided to chime in and try to help Hunter, “Please don’t be mad Molly. See, it was actually a great strategic move because as soon as Grayson picked Tara, Hunter had to pick Eli cuz he’s a better player. Gray only chose Tara to get under my skin; and he had to choose me because I’m a really good player as well, you know…being an athlete and all. So anyway, he knew Gray would never choose you and he’d get you in the end anyway and-”

“WILLOW!” Hunter shouted, stopping the babble midstream, “Not helping Will…not even a little.”

“But…but Hunt, I was just saying…”

Molly giggled and wrapped an arm around Willow’s shoulder and gave her a reassuring squeeze as they all gathered around Ira in the middle of the field holding a cardboard box, “Don’t worry Willow, I get it,” She laughed.

“Ok,” Ira started, “My kids…you know the rules. For those who don’t, here’s the deal. This is a friendly game,” Ira said sternly, putting the emphasis on friendly and eying his children pointedly; all 4 of who’s eyes began to wander…looking in any other direction except their fathers. Ira shook his head and continued, “Ok, rushing is allowed, but the pass rusher has to count to five Mississippi’s out loud. The quarterback cannot run with the ball past the line of scrimmage, he or she must pass the ball to someone. Mild contact is allowed, but no heavy blocking and no holding. Absolutely NO tackling! Each of you will get a bandana to tuck into the waistband of your pants to use as a flag; as soon as it’s pulled, the ball is down. Whoever pulls the flag needs to stop and hold it up to mark the down. The end zone is between the barn and that oak tree on the left. At the other end it’s the pool and the birch on the right. Are we all clear?” Ira asked, eying the group. Everyone nodded and Ira tossed the ball to Grayson, “Hunter’s team receives since you guys got first pick.” He then opened the box and handed out bandanas; red to Hunter’s team and yellow to Grayson’s.

While everyone was busy tucking in their bandanas, Willow wandered over to Tara, “You ok? Do you need me to explain anything?”

Tara smiled and raised an eyebrow at the redhead, “Will, I’m not completely sports ignorant, ya know?”

Willow furrowed her brow in a mild panic that she had hurt Tara’s feelings, “Oh no baby, I just meant-”

Tara quickly cut her off, “It’s ok honey, I know about football. I actually enjoy watching and playing.”

“But when…”

“We used to play on the set sometimes, when I was younger.”

Willow smiled sappily, “I love learning new things about you.”

“I just bet you do,” Tara smiled seductively and swatted Willow on the butt as she turned and jogged to the opposite end of the field with her team.

Willow stood, rooted to the spot; thoroughly admiring the view of her departing girlfriend. My God, she is amazing. Willow thought dreamily as she started to walk backwards and take her position in the backfield between Hunter and Eli. She met Tara’s eyes and grinned widely, then turned her attention to Grayson and Robby, who was getting ready to kick the ball.

Tara grinned back, then noticed Willow’s gaze shift. Willow’s grin disappeared and her game face appeared. A face that Tara had seen many times when she watched Willow on the softball field. Tara gulped audibly and acknowledged that this was, despite the friendly atmosphere, serious business. Tara glanced around the rest of the field and caught a glimpse of Jeff…admiring his fingernails. Yes, serious business to some, but apparently not Jeff.

Rachael also caught Jeff’s transgression and began to yell, “Look alive Jeff!” She shouted from her chair next to Bambi on the sidelines. Tara snickered when she saw that Bambi was distracted with her nails as well; her actions mirroring Jeff’s. Next to Rachael was both of Willow’s grandfathers, Stella and Milo; the remaining women sat on the back porch enjoying their respective cups of coffee.

Ira blew his whistle and Robby responded by punting the ball towards Hunter’s team. Tara began to surge forward in the direction of the air born football. About a quarter of the way downfield, she felt someone knock into her. She looked up to see Robby smirk as he charged forward in Willow’s direction. The redhead caught the ball and the game was officially under way. Willow ran fast; daring around people trying to avoid being caught. She managed to gain about twenty yards before Grayson pulled her flag.

The next twenty minutes passed without major incident, aside from the escalating tension between Robby and Tara. Even though both teams had scored one touchdown each, Robby had made several snide remarks directed towards Tara in regards to them missing a few scoring opportunities. Willow and Tara had been having fun goofing around and flirting quite a lot, which didn’t sit well with Robby. His jealousy was reaching redline levels.

“God damn it!” Robby groaned when Tara failed to pull Eli’s flag, which resulted in a touchdown for the other team, “If you paid as much attention to the game as you do to Willow’s ass, maybe we’d have more points on the board.” He hissed angrily.

Tara’s patience was wearing thin, the last thing she wanted to do was cause a scene, but she just couldn’t help herself, “Dick,” She mumbled under her breath.

Robby whipped around; menacingly striding towards her, “What’d you say?”

Tara threw her shoulders back and stood with confidence, “You heard me, I said you’re a dick.”

Robby snarled, “You better watch yourself Princess. You’re a bit out of your league here.”

“Is that some sort of threat?” Tara asked.

Robby smugly shrugged his shoulders, “Just stating the facts,” As he turned and walked away.

Tara glanced around to make sure Willow hadn’t seen or heard what was taking place between she and Robby. She breathed a sigh of relief when she saw that her girlfriend was too busy throwing high fives and gloating over her recent score.

Seeing that Tara looked a little down, Grayson jogged up to her and placed a reassuring hand on her shoulder, “Don’t worry about it Tara, just shake it off. No big, we’ll get ‘em next time,” He grinned.

Tara simply smiled sweetly and nodded; knowing that Grayson had no idea what was really going on. She lined up with her team, ready to receive the kick off. Willow kicked the ball and it was caught by Robby. As he began to run up field, he shifted directions at the last second and before she had time to process what was going on, Robby barreled into Tara; knocking her to the ground. Tara fell hard, skidding on her knees and elbows before coming to a stop face first in the dirt.

“Shit,” Willow exclaimed, running forward and dropping to her knees next to Tara; finding her pushing herself up and spitting grass out of her mouth simultaneously. “Baby, are you ok?” Willow asked as she helped Tara to her knees and rubbed soothing circles on her back.

“Yeah, I’m fine,” Tara said as she brushed herself off; thoroughly pissed at Robby.

Willow furrowed her brow and couldn’t hide the concern that was etched across her face. She finally stood; pulling Tara up with her and began to assist the blonde in brushing off the dirt and grass. She ran her hands across Tara’s body, checking for injuries as the others began to gather; seeing if Tara was ok. Ira decided that it was a good time to call a timeout and Grayson took the opportunity to pull Robby aside.

“Dude, what the hell was that all about? You know she’s on our team, right?” Grayson asked his teammate.

Robby shrugged his shoulders, “It was an accident.”

Grayson eyed him suspiciously, “Uh huh, just take it easy, alright?”

“Yeah ok, whatever.” He replied nonchalantly, “What’s up with you anyway? Going soft all of the sudden?”

“Like my Dad said, it’s friendly game Rob. We have two girls out here that aren’t exactly rough and tumble. Just lay off.”

“I said ok Grayson.”

Grayson knew Robby wasn’t acting right and his bad attitude was starting to grate on Grayson’s nerves. Not to mention the remarks and dirty looks towards Tara, which had not gone unnoticed, so he decided to keep a closer watch on the man.

Willow and Hunter ran in to use the restroom as Tara sat on the ground next to Molly; both drinking bottled water.

“Hey Tara, are you sure you’re ok? That fall looked pretty nasty,” Molly asked.

“Oh yeah, I’m fine,” Tara answered. The truth of the matter was that Tara’s knees and elbows were stinging like crazy, but there was no way she was going to say a word about it. She wasn’t going to give Robby the satisfaction of knowing that he had actually injured her. “So, how’s it going…you know, meeting the family and all?” Tara asked, changing the subject.

“Fine, I guess, there’s just so many of them,” Molly chuckled.

Tara laughed, “Um hmm, I know what you mean.”

Molly returned the laugh, “And this crazy competitive streak they all have going on…has it been like this all week for you? Because I’ve never seen Hunter quite like this before.”

Tara smiled in agreement, “Yeah, I kind of feel like I’m stuck in a never ending loop of ABC’s Wide World of Sports.” Tara cleared her throat, “The thrill of victory!” She said in her best sports announcer voice, And the agony of defeat! They both exclaimed at the same time, bursting into a fit of giggles and bumping shoulders. The two of them were becoming fast friends.

Willow and Hunter emerged from the house just in time to see Tara and Molly laughing hysterically.

“Looks like Tara has a new friend. Should I be worried?” Hunter quipped and elbowed his sister.

Willow snorted, “No! Should I?” She joked with her brother. “I’m actually glad they hit it off, I don’t think Tara has much in the way of real friends and no family at all.”

“Yeah, I think Molly is lacking a bit in that department as well.”

Willow looked quizzically at her brother, “I’m surprised, she seems really sweet and outgoing. I would have thought that she had lot’s of girlfriends, ya know?”

Hunter nodded in agreement, “Me too, but she did only move here about six months ago and you know how cliquish schools can be…even the adults.”

“I guess you never quite out grow all that high school bs.”

“I guess not, anyway…ready to rumble?”

“Yep! Let’s bury 'em!”

“Race ya!” hunter exclaimed and took off at full speed.

“Hey!” Willow shouted breaking into a run right behind him.

They both arrived together at full speed about the same time and completely out of breath.

Hunter collapsed on the ground and Willow bent over with her hands on her knees trying to catch her breath.

Hunter sat up and raised a hand in the air panting furiously, “I…won…Will…”

“No way Bro…no way,” Willow replied panting hard and grinning at her brother.

Tara and Molly turned to each other, sharing a look as they shook their heads and rolled their eyes.

“Are ya’ll ready or did ya tucker yourselves out?” Eli asked as he held out a hand and pulled his younger brother up off the ground.

“Yep! You guys ready?” Willow asked Tara and Molly. The two women nodded their heads and Willow extended both hands and pulled them up.

Both teams once again gathered on the field as Eli prepared to kick off to the yellow team. He held the ball in front of him and punted crookedly and right towards Tara. The blonde steadied herself and prepared to catch the football when, once again, she was run into by Robby. The man knocked Tara aside and nearly to the ground again as he caught the ball and began to run…right into Willow, after only making it a few yards. She stood in the spot and held up the yellow bandana, so her Dad could mark the line of scrimmage. Robby approached to retrieve his flag and was met with a set of narrowed green eyes.

“Flag please,” He said, holding out his hand.

Willow simply held on to the bandana, “If you knock into my girlfriend one more time, I’m gonna personally knock you on your ass.” She then held out the bandana just short of his grasp and dropped it on the ground; turning on her heels and walking away.

Robby was fuming and his face was bright red as he bent over and snatched up the yellow bandana; mumbling incoherently under his breath as he joined his teammates in the huddle.

“Ok, here’s the thing: we need to score. So, Tara…you’re up,”

“Are you fucking kidding me?!” Robby exclaimed, getting a nasty glare from Grayson.

Tara ignored his comments, “Alright, what do you want me to do?”

“Catch the ball when I throw it to you and run,” Grayson chuckled, “See, they don’t expect you to be a receiver since it’s mainly been me, Rob or Jeff that have been catching all the passes…” Grayson proceeded to outline his plan, then clapped and broke the huddle.

The two teams lined up and Jeff hiked the ball to Grayson. Robby, Tara and Jeff all darted out across the field. Molly stayed at the line, counting her Mississippi’s, ready to rush as Eli covered Jeff while Willow and Hunter covered Robby…leaving Tara wide open. No one noticed as the blonde ran the pre designed screen play then turned to catch Grayson’s eye as he threw the ball in her direction. Tara caught the ball square in the chest, turned and bolted for the end zone. By the time everyone realized what was going on, it was too late and Tara had already scored.

Tara could hardly believe that she’d actually caught the bullet Grayson threw, but she did and she was elated, “WOOOOOOOO!” She shouted as she jumped up and down spiking the ball.

“IT WORKED! IT WORKED! YOU DID IT TARE!! WOO HOO!!” Grayson shouted as he ran in Tara’s direction; sweeping her off her feet and swinging her in a circle.

Even though they were on opposing teams, Willow couldn’t help but share in the excitement seeing her girlfriend so happy. Everyone on the sidelines was standing and cheering as well. Tara jogged back across the field high fiving Jeff; then locking eyes with Willow and receiving a wide smile and two thumbs up from the redhead.

“Great job baby!” Willow shouted, slapping Tara on the ass as she jogged by; giving the blonde a little dose of her own medicine from earlier.

“Hey!” Tara replied, “Isn’t that some sort of illegal procedure or something?” Tara smirked and received an innocent shoulder shrugging from Willow.

Ira blew his whistle, “Come on guys, it’s getting late. Let’s get lined up.”

The teams took their positions and Grayson kicked off. Several plays passed and the red team found themselves in a similar position as the yellow team had been only moments ago. Hunter decided to try and fake them out by making it look like they were running the same play with Molly, only the ball would be thrown to Willow instead. Molly hiked the ball and Hunter’s plan was set into motion.

The fake out worked and Willow caught her brother’s pass, but as she turned to run, Robby ran straight into her; knocking her to the ground, falling on top of her and pinning her down. What took place next was something that would be talked about for many years to come.

Robby and Willow tumbled to the ground in tangled mess of arms and legs. Robby lay awkwardly on top of Willow and raised himself with his arms on either side of her head.

“Get off me Robby,” Willow demanded as Robby just lay there; inappropriately grinding his groin into her. “What are you doing? I said get off!” Willow tried to thrust her arms out and push, but he was much bigger and her pushing was to no avail.

To the rest of the onlookers, everything seemed to be happening in slow motion, but to Willow it all happened very quickly.

“You know what your problem is Will, you just need a real man.” Robby hissed pushing his face forward and kissing Willow soundly on the mouth.
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (10/30/11)

Postby JustSkipIt » Sun Oct 30, 2011 9:36 am

Ha! Dibs!

Well first I was upset with Sheila partially on the basis of her being Texan and now I'm embarrassed about Robby. He's a Texan? I don't know any men who treat women like he's treating either Tara or Willow. And where the fuck are her brothers at jumping in to chastise the asshole? I mean one of them said to lay off Tara but the others seem to be letting it go. What happened to 3 older brothers and all that good stuff? Seriously, I hope it doesn't look like Willow is kissing him back to Tara. I also hope (and I'm not violent) that Willow knees, kicks, gouges Robby hard enough in the crotch to make his efforts irrelevant for a few days or weeks. Shit. What a dick.
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (10/30/11)

Postby True_Love » Sun Oct 30, 2011 10:06 am

Evil. Just plain evil Shelby. And I loved it!

I'm so happy that Molly and Tara are hitting it off the way that I hoped they would. Outsiders gotta stick together. The flirty playful banter back and for between Willow and Tara was great. I felt myself getting all giddy each time they would pass one another wishing they were on the same team but loving that they weren't and still supported one another.

And as for this bastard Robby, Tara called it just right. What a dick! I hope Willow knees him right in the groin causing to roll off her in agony, crying and clutching his balls for all the Rosebergs to see. That'll be the end of him!

Awesome job. Can't wait for more!
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (10/30/11)

Postby Babbles4Twillow » Sun Oct 30, 2011 10:45 am

Robby....GRRRR.....he needs his ass thoroughly whooped....update soon, K? I need to know what happens next!! :D
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (10/30/11)

Postby willowtarabuffyfaith » Sun Oct 30, 2011 11:28 am

Ohhh i hope someone beats the ever loving crap out of Robby"
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (10/30/11)

Postby Grimm » Sun Oct 30, 2011 12:07 pm

Okay, I am expecting a ass whipping of monumental proportions to be handed out by the entire Rosenberg Clan :fit ! There are no words to describe how clueless and sleazy Robby is :crazy . It's a fricking Holiday!! I hope Ira, Eli, Grayson and Tara put their feet so far up his ass that he'll be coughing up shoe laces til Easter!
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (10/30/11)

Postby zampsa19752001 » Sun Oct 30, 2011 1:50 pm

Yay for great update-y goodness... Big yay for Tara & Molly getting along so fine... I loved the flirting between Willow & Tara... Robby really deserves a good Rosenberg family ass kicking... I kinda hope Tara will be the first one to introduce her foot to his groin...
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (10/30/11)

Postby love_2003 » Sun Oct 30, 2011 3:08 pm

Great updates. Glad to see that Tara and Molly are getting along so well. Now they can talk about what it is like dating someone that comes from a big family. Can't wait to see what Tara and Willow's siblings reactions will be to how Robby acted. I'm also looking forward to what Shelia will have to say about Robby's actions.
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Re: Fic: [AU] Racing The Rain (10/30/11)

Postby faolan228 » Sun Oct 30, 2011 7:18 pm

Okay, quick driveby comment via phone, so apologies for spelling mistakes or if this comes out a giant wall of text.

First: D: I have read many a fic in my time, but this is one of the first cliffhangers to make me shreik in frustration. Evil woman.

Loving the description in the football game, and especially loving Ira's emphasis on no roughhousing.

I feel like you were tossing us a red herring with Grayson early on, making me think he was gonna end up being the antagonistic older brother villain in this, but seeing him calling Robby out on his outright douchebaggery was great.

As for Robby? I think the only way I'd hate him more is if he, Warren, and She-who-must-not-be-named fused into one giant...er, something you hate, I guess. I never had to deal with the 'you need a real man' thing that often, which I find surprising in a highschool environment. I think it's cuz I live every straight girl's dream(all my guy friends are football players, all my guy cousins look like that werewolf from Twilight) so most guys who've tried to pull a Robby on me end up bruised and bleeding. I hope the Rosenburg boys form a circle around Robby and kick his ass. Tara can join in too as her initiation into the brood.

This counts as sexual harrassment, and I'm also eager to see Sheila's reaction to her baby being subject to it.
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