.. What did that asshole kid say?
.. What did that asshole kid say?indigokane wrote:DIBS!!!!
loved the update! but i really want to know what that kid said!
Garrison defending Tara's honor was wonderful, he is definately Faiths little boy. Reminds me alot of my nephew, cussing and fighting included!
You're doing great, but I did get a little lost at the begining of the update, I had no idea why they were returning to the office, thought i might have missed an update.
It's going great, can't wait for more
beautiful_love wrote:Just a little bit of a cliff hanger. Lol. I'm definitely enjoying the story though. Love the family dynamics. Can't wait for another chapter.
P.S. Thanks for the plug on the update thread.
Bellalocke wrote:Okay, Two things:
1.) Business Willow + Suprised Tara = Total flirty hotness.
2.) Gar is awesome and I do wish that I knew what Dev (the asshole!) said to make Gar punch him.
SQUEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Can't wait for the next update!
ps ok so that was three things... what can I say, the hotness of your Willow and Tara make my brain mush
arsyadriani wrote:and you really got me to say...I can't wait for Monday to come..
]“I seem to have a little problem; I thought maybe I could use your help. Maybe over dinner sometime this week?”
hope it wasn't just Dean Maclay's Imagination.
God, Dean Maclay I even have dreamy sigh saying the name
KnightlyLove wrote:Okay, I definitely don't think that's a cliffhanger.
Principle McHottie, come on now. And dinner? Sounds like a poor excuse for an excellent date. hahahha.
pps. GAWDDAMN please tell me what that asshole said! I was just so embarrassed for everybody but Garrison right then. What could he have said? Maybe that Tara's a super slut for showing so much cleavage? hahha.
hm. Also, LOVED his comments right after they left. "she wants your bod." hahhahaha. so fun.
"a problem.... WITH MY PANTIES!!!"
mmmh-Hot-Sauce wrote:“She wants your bod.”
“I’m warning you. . .”
“You want her bod, too.”
Haha, this made me laugh... then it made me think of all those animated Axe Bod Commercials
Anyhoo, I adore Garrison, and his "sticking up for a Lady." With all the foul language and fighting he really must be Faiths son.
And now all I have left to say is I can't wait for Monday! (wow, I don't think I've ever said that before) But seriously, can't wait to find out why Principle McHottie is in Tara's office.
zampsa19752001 wrote:Yay for great update-y goodness... I'm glad that Gar didn't get into too much trouble after punching the asshole... Can't wait for their dinner date...
love_2003 wrote:Interesting start so far. Looking forward to hearing Tara's answer.
Finey_McFine wrote:Hmmmm, I wonder what Tara's answer will be??????
BTW...now I HAVE to plan a trip to D&B!!
taranwillow4ever wrote:Great update. I am pretty much in the same time zone as you. Mondays are going to be a fav now. I want to know what the jerk kid said, and I want to know if Willow's invitation is a come on, or a real dilemna.
SMGOVAN wrote:Grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr! I have a problem or 2 that I'd like Tara to help me out with to!! Willow, you sly dog!...Can't wait to read about the "Business Dinner" .. What did that asshole kid say?
JustSkipIt wrote:Ok. I blame you fully. So I read part one and then the song Hey There Delilah stuck in my head and then I downloaded it on ITunes. And now I've listened to it another like 25 times and it's still stuck in there.
Anyway, W/T seem quite sexy and I like the relationship with all Tara's friends.
DaddyCatALSO wrote:Others have said before me and better than I how smoothly this story has de3vloped its backstory and its main plot.
I like Delilah (Garrison too); I always enjoy original characters when they're well-integrtaed into the ficverse with the canon characters. (I have a slew of originals in my own subverse so I like when others pull it off, and Delilah works perfectly.)
Nit-picks (sorry, can't avoid my favorite sport) Willow's a bit too young and Tara way young for those jobs. But who really cares :-)?
This Willow seemed nervous. And talkative. And sweet. And achingly adorable. And still incredibly sexy.
Tara couldn’t help reciprocating the smile that popped up on Willow’s face; It wasn’t anything like the calm, self-assured and incredibly sexy principal she had seen that morning.
This Willow seemed nervous. And talkative. And sweet. And achingly adorable. And still incredibly sexy.

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H-O-T!



.“Well, duh. You give good cleavage, T. Consider it a gift. A very comfy, globular, D-sized present for Principal McHottie,” Faith said with a grin.
“You’re disturbing on so many levels.”
Faith shrugged and stood up from the step. “It’s why you love me.”
Garrison chuckled. “Well, in that case, you should dress comfortably. No need to wear something that’s hard to get out of.”
Tara rolled her eyes. “You’re almost as bad as you mother.”
Garrison smiled as he pulled a pair of dark denim jeans from a hanger. “It’s why you love me.”
Both quotes are funny on their own, but the symmetry between them makes them hilarious.Willow reached over and placed a single finger beneath the blonde’s chin. “Mysterious. . .Enigmatic. . .Rare. . .Beautiful.”
“Huh?” Tara swooned as her skin burned like fire where the redhead touched her.
“That’s what the blue rose means. It means you’re a beautiful mystery to me, Dr. Tara Maclay. And I plan on spending a lot of time remedying that.”

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