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Re: First Fic - A Life Interrupted (updated 11/20)

Postby JustSkipIt » Tue Nov 22, 2005 5:55 am

Hey Heather,
This update was quite action packed. I mean there's dinner (and who does't like that?), spells gone awry, a bloody head for Willow and broken bone for Tara, Terri dead, 50 vampires, Riley, and Fluffy action? That's pretty action packed. Riley of course is an idiot. Glad to see him go (if he has) but too bad about Terri. Personally I'd want something more than a medical student on call. I mean sure she knows some stuff but I think I want broken bones set but a doctor. That's just me...

Ok, Mary can tell you that I'm not a fan of Buffy/Faith together but anything's better than Riley I guess. Well done and have a great holiday.
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Re: First Fic - A Life Interrupted (updated 11/20)

Postby DaddyCatALSO » Tue Nov 22, 2005 11:00 am

Tarafied;defintielya good "Wheew" as in this is an amazing start. (I'm working on ,very different, doesnt qualkify for this site) reunion fic for a challenge elsewhere and it isn't working. Yours definitely is.
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Kim: (breaks off the kissing) I l... (Sue stops her with a hand)
Sue: We don't talk about things like that right after, you know that, no saying those things in The Moment.
Kim: (moves the hand aside) Screw The Moment. I *love* you.
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Re: First Fic - A Life Interrupted (updated 11/20)

Postby Tarafied4Life » Wed Nov 23, 2005 2:56 pm

Whew! Okay, finally back after a short working holiday - made some money, but I'm exhausted - and ready for another chapter! But first:

No cookies? Probably fortunate, 'cause I'm not sure how I would have shipped them... Faith's line was originally Geena Davis' in "The Long Kiss Goodnight."

Sally McFine - No, I like writing happy stuff, but there's got to be some angst to make the happy parts better, I think. But Tara has had it rough since she came back, hasn't she? And poor Terri - we hardly knew her. I'm glad to hear you're still enjoying, and I'm flattered that you'd compare the style to that of an episode - that's what I'm usually trying to shoot for, but I'm never sure if I capture it properly.

spells42 - Welcome! I'm glad you're liking the story! As far as Lindsey...well, I can't say too much, but read on! And Buffy/Faith? We'll have to see how that plays out...

tarebear - Yeah, Riley's concept of love is more than a little out there...but then, he didn't really seem to get it even on the show, I thought. Glad to hear you liked the B/F moment...they're not going to have it easy, though...

justin - I'm glad Terri's death came as a shock - it actually kind of took me by surprise. The scene just wrote itself, and I had no idea how it was going to come out. As for its impact on the prophecy, well...we'll have to see. And Riley's interpretation is definitely out there - but what's in store for him and Lindsey?

AntigoneUnbound - Thanks for the wonderful feedback! Good guess on Faith's line, but not quite. And I'm glad you liked the use of the Immortal - short of winning a lottery or something, it was the only way I could think of to make the situation viable. Riley, Riley...just not quite bright enough to really be evil. And I always loved that line of Spike's, too - so true! I'm glad you liked Terri in her short appearance, and there's more B/F on the way!

JustSkipIt - That chapter was kind of fast and furious, wasn't it? The next one's a little more sedate. As far as having a doctor on call, it'd be nice, but then one would have to try and explain either the constant injuries to the girls or the whole slayer deal, neither of which would be easy. Plus, Sonya's a really good medical student! :-D No worries if you're not a B/F fan - it's still a W/T story, so anything between them will play a side role. Plus, as you say, anything's better than Riley.

DaddyCatALSO - Thank you so much for the lovely words! And no worries - I'm sure your story will start to click soon!
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Willow woke before sunrise to find Tara standing at her dresser, struggling to open the bottle of painkillers one-handed.

“Tara?”

She turned, and Willow was shocked to see how drawn and haggard she looked in the early-morning light. “Sorry, I didn’t mean to wake you.”

“That’s just silly, Tara. Why didn’t you wake me up and ask for help?”

“You were sleeping so peacefully – I couldn’t bear to.”

“How bad is it – and don’t say it’s fine, okay?”

“It hurts, Will. Like somebody’s grinding the ends of the bone together.”

“Have you slept?”

“Well…not really.”

Willow sighed. “Come here,” she said, leading Tara to the bed and taking the pill bottle from her. “Sit down across from me.” Tara did so. Willow took the injured hand and spoke one word – “cura.” Purple and White light flowed from her fingers into Tara’s wrist, making it glow.

“Willow, what-“

“Shh.” They sat that way quietly for almost five minutes before Willow released her hand, breathing heavily. “Better?”

“Much...what did you do?”

“Little trick I picked up in England – I used some of my life force to heal you. I would have done it yesterday, but with the headachiness and the double vision, I wasn’t sure I could do it right.”

“That’s dangerous, Will – you could hurt yourself!”

“The trick is not to try and do too much. I couldn’t heal your hand completely – that would have actually hurt me – but I repaired it enough that you should be out of the cast a lot sooner. And it shouldn’t hurt any more.”

Tara smiled. “No, it doesn’t. You do too much for me, love.”

“No such thing. Now come back to bed – I want more snuggles before morning.”

“Yes, ma’am.”
[hr]
The two witches slept late, as did most of the house. When they finally rose and kissed good morning, the sun was almost directly overhead.

“So,” said Willow as she got dressed, “what do you want for brunch?”

“I’m voting for…hmm…”

“Hmm? That sounds tasty.”

“Will…do you want to give me a hand?”

Willow looked up to see Tara holding her bra.

“I don’t think I can do this one-handed.”

Willow giggled.

“Don’t tease me! This is a serious-“ Tara dissolved into giggles as well. “Just help me, okay?”

Still snickering, Willow walked over to her. “I’ve got my own Tara doll to dress up!” She clapped her hands with glee. “Ooh, I wonder if she’s bendy? I’m never letting you take that cast off now, you know.”

“Very funny,” said Tara as she finished dressing with Willow’s help. “Now, about that brunch…”
[hr]
The two descended the spiral staircase, expecting to see a crowd either outside the kitchen or in the dining room, but they saw neither. They looked into the library, where Giles was asleep on one side of the table, his head nestled between two ancient tomes, and Dawn was asleep on the other, drooling on a textbook. They shared a quick smile and headed for the kitchen, but stopped when they heard the staircase creak. They looked up to see Faith coming slowly down the stairs, with Buffy following a measured distance behind her.

“Morning, guys,” whispered Willow. “Giles and Dawnie are asleep in the library. How did things go last night?”

Fighting back tears, Buffy laid out the events of the previous night.

“Oh, Buffy,” said Tara. “I’m so sorry.” She gave Buffy a warm hug, and Willow noticed Faith stiffen beside her.

Willow stepped in to join the hug, watching Faith stiffen even more out of the corner of her eye. “Are you…are you okay, Buff?”

“I don’t know,” she said as the three disengaged from the hug. “I don’t know what to feel right now – we stopped Riley, I think, but we don’t know anything about this big bad, or what this prophecy really says.” She sighed. “Let’s have some breakfast, and then we can wake Giles and see if he’s learned anything.” She reached out for Faith, as if to take her hand, before bringing her hand back to her side with a guilty expression. The group headed for the kitchen, all of them lost in their own thoughts.
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It was a different warehouse, but the group was the same. Riley turned to Lindsey. “What do we do now?”

Lindsey rose from the table, smoothly pulled a .45 from his waist, and shot Riley twice in the chest. “Well, you die.”

Riley gasped for air as he collapsed to the floor. “What…why?”

“Buffy was right about you, Riley. You’re not smart. Do you really think that I joined you, bringing with me some of Wolfram & Hart’s brightest clients, to help you protect the slayer?

“But…then what…?”

“It’s simple, really. Letting you ‘lead’ us gave us access to technology that would have been much harder to get on our own. Now that we’ve got the slayer convinced that we’re working to stop the prophecy, you’re no longer needed. And now that you’re gone, we can get on with the real work at hand – fulfilling the prophecy, and separating the witches.”

“Wha…Witches?”

“Yes, Riley, the witches. This was never about the slayer. She may die, she may not, and I really don’t care. What matters to me – to us, I should say – is Willow and Tara.”

“Tara?”

“She decided to come back from the dead, rather inconveniently for us. The psychics say the two of them together are all that can stop the greater plan. Fulfilling the prophecy is just the easiest way to split them – let the Tok-Mageth do our work for us…It can’t kill either of them, since they’re not prophesied to die, but it will help us get rid of Tara.”

“No…”

“Yes. We’ve had some of the best psychics working on the location of the One Who Yet Lives, and we reached him two days ago. He’s on his way here. Having everyone in place will summon the Tok-Mageth to their location, and then…well, and then the fun starts. Good news for everyone.”

“But…” Riley’s breathing was growing shallower, the pool of blood around him growing larger. “You…killed the Unseen One…”

“Not exactly. She’s not here yet – but I’ve got assurances she’s on her way.”

Riley’s breath became more sporadic, coming in shallow gasps. A tear leaked from one eye as he stared at the ceiling. “Buffy…” he whispered. “I’m s-sor…” he trailed off as the last breath left his body. Lindsey pointed to the corpse. “Can someone please get that outta here?”

He sat back down and faced the rest of the beings around the table with a grin. “Brethren. The end is coming nearer. Is everything – and everyone – where they need to be?”
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Across a silent kitchen table, Buffy stared at Giles. “It’s what?”

“It’s…unkillable, at least according to every source I can find. There’re only two references to this creature appearing before. It was in Australia in the late 18th century, and a creature that sounds remarkably similar is reported in a chronicle written in Rome in roughly 500 AD.”

“Okay, so it’s been here before. How did they get rid of it?”

“That’s the problem, Buffy. They didn’t. The creature appears, kills a slew of people, and then vanishes from recorded history. There’s no indication anyone could stand up to this creature. The records are explicit in pointing out that anyone who attempted to fight it met with…let’s just say a gruesome end. The Roman chronicle makes reference to a pagan legend that I can’t locate – the gist of it seems to be that the creature cannot be defeated by mortal hands.”

“So, we just need to find some immortal hands!” The joke fell flat. “Sorry, I guess that wasn’t all that funny.”

“So where does that leave us?” asked Willow.

“I don’t know,” admitted Giles. “We really need to find out the meaning of the line in the prophecy about the strongest having to bend. The only problem is that Brother Fredrick wasn’t regarded as terribly sane by the church, and so there’re very few commentaries on his prophecies. I’ve been in contact with the Council, and with Wesley, but we’re still working on it.”

“But…isn’t the prophecy, um, null and void since the unseen one is dead?” Tara offered from next to Willow.

“Once again, I don’t know. It could be, but we can’t take the chance.”

“Well, give me something to hit!” said Faith. “All this sittin’ around doesn’t seem to be getting us any further.”

“Faith, if there’s somewhere you’d rather be, please go there.”

“Don’t talk to her like that!” Buffy said forcefully. Noting the looks from the others in the room, particularly the curious glance Spike was giving her, she continued. “It’s not helping. And I agree with her – we’re treading water here. We need to DO something.”

Willow recognized the look on Tara’s face – she had an idea, but didn’t want to speak up.

“Tara?” she whispered. “What is it? If you’ve got anything that might help…”

Tara took her cue. “Couldn’t Angel ask the Delphi?”

“They said they wouldn’t help anyone from Wolfram & Hart again, didn’t they?” Willow replied.

“Right. But they mentioned something about another champion, right? Couldn’t we find out who that is?”

“How?”

“Couldn’t we…wait, what about Lorne?”

“Lorne?” asked Buffy.

“The empath demon Angel has on staff,” Willow explained. “I met him when I was in L.A. That’s a good idea, Tara, but who would we get to sing for him? And when did you meet Lorne?”

“Kind of a long story, Will. But as far as who should sing, I think it should be everyone. Hopefully Lorne can tell us who the Delphi will actually talk to.”

“Good thinking, T,” Faith said admiringly. “Can I get any bets on who it’s going to be? I want to start a pool.”

Spike chuckled. “Buffy’s going to sing for Lorne? Now this, I have to see.”
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Lorne couldn’t help the pained expression on his face as Buffy began the second verse of “Always Look on the Bright Side of Life.”

“Okay, sugar, that’s more than good enough,” he said into the phone. “I’ve got it.”

“What do you see?”

“Hold on, hold on…it’s not you.”

“It’s not me?” Buffy pouted. “We’re running out of people here, Lorne.”

“I know, cupcake, but I don’t make the news, I just report it.”

Buffy passed the phone to Faith.

“Hey, Lorne, what’s up?”

“Hey, Faithy. Long time no see – you don’t call, you don’t write…”

She grinned. “Sorry, Mr. Greenjeans. Not so much for the Christmas letters and sappy phone calls.”

“I sort of figured. So what’s on the playlist?”

“I actually got to sing, huh?”

“’Fraid so.”

She sighed. “Okay, here goes…” Without warning, she began a surprisingly sweet rendition of “You Are My Sunshine.” Everyone in the room stopped and stared, and in L.A. Lorne’s eyes grew to the size of large saucers. He allowed her to finish the entire song before he spoke, even though he’d read her before the end of the first verse.

“Wow…sugar, that was incredible! Why haven’t you ever sung for me before?”

Faith flushed to the roots of her hair. “Uh – not so much for the public performances. What’d you see?”

“It’s you, Faith. The Delphi will talk to you. How soon can you be in L.A.?”

“You tell me – Wolfram and Hart’s got the super fast jets, right?”

“Right – let me check with Angel.”

She listened to the aggravating hold music – apparently being a multidimensional law firm didn’t give you access to anything better than crappy musak – until he picked up the phone again.

“Angel called the Rome office and they’ve got a jet waiting. You can be here inside of four hours. What can we expect for a passenger list?”

Faith covered the phone with her free hand. “B? You up for a trip to sunny L.A.?”

Giles spoke up. “I’m not sure that given the circumstances, we should be without both of our slayers.”

“I think it’ll be okay, Giles,” Buffy consoled him. “Riley said having all of the pieces together would bring the Tok to us. If we’re out of the picture, it shouldn’t come to the house.”

“Well, it has been here once already – in case you’ve forgotten.”

“I know, but it didn’t do anything. If this thing is unkillable, and it wanted to take us out, why didn’t it do it then? It seems more like a recon mission than anything – trying to find out who’s here. I think we’ll be safe until we’re all in the same place at the same time – and we’re still missing two people anyway.”

Giles conceded the point. “Very well. Just make the trip as quick as possible, alright?”

“Can do – I’m speedy girl, trust me!” She turned back to Faith. “Sounds good!”

Faith uncovered the phone. “Sorry for the delay there, Green. Make it for two – me and Buffy. Who’s going to be our valet?”

“Angel. He’s the only one who knows how to find the Delphi.”

Faith fell silent. After a moment, Lorne spoke again. “Faith? You still there?”

She shook her head. “Yep, still here. When’s the plane leave?”

“As soon as you get to the airport”
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When Faith and Buffy had departed, everyone went their separate ways – Spike to the basement to sleep the remainder of the day, Giles back to the books, the potentials to training – and Willow and Tara found themselves alone.

Willow smirked at her fiancée. “Well, what could we do with all this alone time?”

Tara started to reply, then bit her lip and looked down at her feet.

Willow grabbed her chin and lifted her head until they were looking in each other’s eyes. “What’s the matter, baby?”

“It’s…I want to ask you something, but I don’t w-want to upset you.”

“Never happen!” Willow replied brightly. “What’s on your mind, Tara?”

“I thought m-maybe we could take down that wall I saw last night.”

“Oh! You don’t need to worry about that – I’ll get the potentials to do it later.”

“Well…I thought maybe we could do it together. If that would be okay?”

“Of course – if that’s what you want, that’s what we’ll do. When?”

“Is now okay?”
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Minutes later, they stood in front of the wall where Willow had spent so much time alone. Tara, her hand shaking slightly, pointed out one of the many things Willow had put up, a wistful smile on her face.

“I remember that picture – that was my birthday at the Bronze. The best night of my whole life, at least up to that point. When Dad and Donny showed up that day I thought my life was over – that I’d never get to be with you again. But you saved me – you always saved me. That was the night I knew – that we were forever.” She removed the picture, placed it in the box she’d brought down with her, and moved on to the next thing to catch her eye. “The lyrics to ‘My Immortal’ – you always were a sucker for that song.”

“But that song wasn’t even out when…oh, right,” Willow muttered with tears in her eyes. Tara saw the tears and took Willow in her arms, stroking her long hair with her good hand.

“It’s okay, my love. It’s okay – just let them come. I’m home, we’re safe, and we’re going to take every one of these photos back – make them the happy memories they should be instead of the sad memories they were. No need to be sad or alone any more, everything’s all right.”

For the next hour, the two took down the wall, reclaiming one memory at a time from its surface, until there was only one picture left – Tara’s gravestone. With a shared look, they took the picture from the wall, each holding one side. In one quick motion, they pulled their sides in opposite directions and tore the picture down the middle. They threw the halves over their shoulders and sat down with their arms around each other – not crying, but smiling contently.
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Buffy and Faith stepped off the plane in L.A., to find Angel waiting for them. Faith averted her eyes as Buffy embraced him, kissing him on the cheek. “Hi, Angel. Shouldn’t you have been holding one of those signs that said ‘Summers/Lehane’ or something?”

Angel smiled. “I can go and get one, if you want.”

“No, that’s okay. Just take us to the dolphins.”

“You want…to go to Sea World?”

“Huh?”

“What dolphins?”

“You know, the oracle ones.”

“The Delphi?”

“Yeah. Let’s see what those dolphins can tell us!”

“Uh…never mind. Car’s over there.”

Faith watched their easy conversation, growing more anxious with each passing second. She followed them to the car, not failing to notice the fact that Buffy never once turned to make sure she was there. She climbed into the back seat as Buffy and Angel took the front.
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Thus endeth the chapter. Not quite as action-packed as last time, but... I'll try and have the next chapter up before the weekend's out - it needs some rewriting. Thanks for reading!
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Re: First Fic - A Life Interrupted (updated 11/23)

Postby justin » Wed Nov 23, 2005 3:42 pm

I had thought that I had read there wouldn't be an update till the weekend, so seeing one now was definitely a pleasant surprise.

This update may not have been as action packed but there was certainly a lot going on.

I liked your explanation of WIllow's healing ability and the fact she was only able to lessen Tara's pain, rather than heal it completely. Since if Willow could heal any injury with a word it would have greatly lessened the dramatic tension.

Also the fact that WIllow's healing magic is limited and can injure her if she tries to do too much explains why she couldn't heal Terri.

I had a feeling that Lindsey was just using Riley for his own purposes. The swine :devil

So Terri isn't the unseen one. Then who is? Maybe we, and the scoobies, have been taking unseen one too literally?

I liked Faith's line about seeing the Dophins. :lol

Editted to remove spoilage of other story. *slaps wrist* ouch
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Re: First Fic - A Life Interrupted (updated 11/23)

Postby Willow~Rosenberg » Wed Nov 23, 2005 4:28 pm

That was a nice, solid update that progressed the story along nicely. Liked you limiting Willow's powers of healing and also how you had the girls take down Willow's memorial wall together. Also liked the last part about the dolphins. lol Keep up the great work.
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Re: First Fic - A Life Interrupted (updated 11/23)

Postby AntigoneUnbound » Wed Nov 23, 2005 9:19 pm

Hey Heather--Let me ditto Justin's joy. (OK, that just sounded...naughty.) So glad to see an update!

First of all, I loved this:
Still snickering, Willow walked over to her. “I’ve got my own Tara doll to dress up!” She clapped her hands with glee. “Ooh, I wonder if she’s bendy? I’m never letting you take that cast off now, you know.”
I think we should all rush to the stores to find us a Tara doll, esp. one of the bendy variety.

This was a great chapter, Heather. You mentioned it not being as action-packed, but the emotional plot moved forward in very nice ways. First of all, kudos on the execution of Riley's execution (as it were): no one saw it coming, but it was absolutely the way that Lindsey would do it. No drama, no big warm-up--just the next step in the plan. His only emotion was bewilderment that Riley could be so naive.

Taking down the memorial wall was also incredibly moving. I like the balance you're maintaining b/w moving the action forward while staying true to the fact that Willow's world has just been rocked. She's still amazed to see this person standing/sleeping beside her.

And Faith...I think this may be the best part, simply b/c you show us how she's feeling with the glance, the stiffening posture, the wavering when Angel is revealed as their companion. It's as much about what's not said as what is, and that's a really nice example of understatement.

Have a great weekend, Heather, and thanks for this story. Oh--so what is the line from? Hmm...

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Re: First Fic - A Life Interrupted (updated 11/23)

Postby tarebear » Thu Nov 24, 2005 5:05 am

hiya heather! what an update! it may not be action-packed as you say, but it is definitely revelations-packed! first the fact that lindsey had been using riley all along for his ultimate plan of fulfilling the prophecy and separating the witches... riley realizes his error but it was just too late... the Unseen One is not really Terri (who could it be then?)... the One Who Yet Lives has been summoned (yet his identity still a mystery)...the Tok-Mageth cannot be killed by mortal hands (so can he be killed by immortals like vampires???)... that faith has a great singing voice (even i was surprised)... that faith is jealous of angel (poor faith, my heart goes out for her... how more insensitive can buffy get?)... that willow still feels the loss of the two years that tara had with another willow that she didn't (but tara's words were able to soothe her heart in the end)... umm... what else? i might be forgotting some important stuff, but i just can't think of any more off the bat... forgive me?

anyways, as i've said (and as everyone else have), great chapter! i can't wait what new revelations you'll have for us next time! :bounce :bounce :bounce
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Re: First Fic - A Life Interrupted (updated 11/23)

Postby JustSkipIt » Fri Nov 25, 2005 5:21 am

Hey Heather,
Ok, another very good chapter. I would say that for me the highlights here are
1. Faith's jealosy. If Buffy is going to be with her in private and then be ashamed or just not ready in public, that's going to be hard (it always is) and now that they're with Angel--Buffy's first love--it's going to be especially hard.

2. Taking down the wall. You did a really fantastic job with this section. You portrayed the emotion that can come from doing something that could be happy or sad but doing it together as something to move through.

Well done.
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Re: First Fic - A Life Interrupted (updated 11/23)

Postby Tarafied4Life » Fri Nov 25, 2005 8:17 am

Okay - so there wasn't going to be an update till the weekend was out, but my muse is seriously bashing me over the head with this one - I wish I had a schoolwork muse this effective! I'm even dreaming updates now...

Firstly:

justin - I'm glad the update was a pleasant surprise, and not one of the "oh, no" variety. :-D Limiting Willow's healing was one of the trickiest things for me - it seems only logical that after all this time she'd have picked up a healing spell or two, but it couldn't be too powerful without messing up the story. Lindsey's a bad man...much more to come from that corner - although Riley was pretty easy to manipulate. I'm glad you liked the dolphins exchange - it was kinda fun. And no need for wrist-slapping - that hurts!

Willow~Rosenberg - Thanks so much! I really enjoyed the memorial wall scene - hard to write, but worth it in the end.

AntigoneUnbound - I didn't think it was possible to make the word ditto sound naughty, but you did it! :lol I totally agree about the bendy Tara doll - I'd buy several! I'm glad you liked Riley's execution - and I think you captured it perfectly; just the next step in the plan. Riley was just too clueless to see it coming. As for Faith, there's much more to come there - and thank you for describing it as understated - at times, I was worried I was saying too much. And the memorial wall - that was my favourite scene to write. Oh, and the line's from "The Long Kiss Goodnight" - Geena Davis says it to Samuel L. Jackson.

tarebear - I'm glad you enjoyed the update! More revelations are coming quickly - the answers to at least some of your questions, anyway! As far as Buffy - well, she's not exactly the master of sensitivity. Read on!

JustSkipIt - There's much more to come on the Faith/Buffy front, and throwing Angel into the mix is going to make things complicated. As far as the memorial wall goes, I'm glad it was a good read - it was a difficult one to write, because as you said, it could be happy or sad, but it was something they both needed to work through. Thanks so much!
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Chapter 9 - Things fall apart, the center cannot hold.
Disclaimer: See Chapter 1.
Rating: NC-17 for smut and language.
Author's Note: The song in this chapter is property of Kelly Clarkson - I've been searching for a way to include it, and I hope it works here. Also, I have to apologize for the smut scene in this chapter - it plays out perfect in my head, but I don't think I'm capturing it properly.


“Lower being – what do you seek from us?”

“First off, chica, I’m nobody’s lower being. Second, what I’m ‘seeking’ is some damn answers.”

“What are the questions?”

“God, you two are worse than the prison shrink. How do we defeat the Tok-Mageth?”

“Only a sacrifice can defeat the creature. Instruct the librarian to consult the Chronicles of Thomas. Within that tome can the answers be found.”

“Or you could just tell me.”

“We will not. Our time is precious, lower being.”

“Yeah, you look busy,” Faith muttered. “What else should I know?”

“Many things. But we simply answer questions – we may not volunteer information.”

“Fine,” Faith exhaled. She racked her brain, trying to remember the list of questions Buffy’d given her to ask. “Who is the strongest of all?”

The oracles regarded each other, and then turned back to Faith. “Are you sure you wish to know?”

“Wouldn’t have asked if I didn’t.”

“Very well. The strongest of all is the White.”

“T? So what does that mean for her?”

“That is a question we cannot answer. Not because it is not permitted, but because we simply do not know. The implications are beyond even the powers – they are governed not by destiny, but by free will.”

“Alright, I see this line of questions is going to be a damn waste. What about the One Who Yet Lives? Who is that?”

“You do not need to be told – the one in question will arrive soon enough.”

“Okay…What about the unseen one? If she’s dead, how does that affect the prophecy?”

“You are mistaken, lower being. The unseen one has not recently departed – she has been among the dead for several of your years.”

“Huh?”

“This ‘Terri’ was not the unseen one referred to in the prophecy.”

“Then who is?”

“We must depart, lower being. The information we have provided you should be more than enough for you to defeat the creature.”

“What-“ Faith got out before she was thrown from the oracles’ presence. Alone, they regarded each other.

“She asked none of the questions whose answers truly matter.”

“No. But she is a lower being, and such is to be expected from them.”

“Can they be helped?”

“No. The questions they ask are all we may answer – even if they are the wrong questions.”
[hr]
While Faith was consulting the oracles, Buffy and Angel got caught up in the cave outside.

“So, what’s it like being in charge of the evil empire?” Buffy asked with a small grin.

“It’s not like that, Buffy. We’re doing everything we can to change Wolfram & Hart – make it a force for good. I know it’s hard to see from the outside, but we’re trying.”

“I know, Angel. I know you’re doing good work.”

“What about you? What’s all this about?”

“Oh, it’s a whole big thing. There’s this prophecy, and this thing that lights people on fire – well, you know that much already - and Riley and Lindsey – we needed to talk to the oracles to see how to defeat this creature.”

“Lindsey? Wolfram & Hart Lindsey?”

“The same. We don’t know exactly what he’s up to, but he’s working with Riley to stop this prophecy. He’s killed at least one person, and probably more we don’t know about.”

“Do you want me to get the firm in on this? We can probably find him quicker than you.”

“No. I don’t think he’s a threat – we just need to find out how to defeat this thing. Besides, you’ve got enough going on here in L.A. Let us handle Rome.”

“Buffy…” he stopped. “Can I ask you something?”

“Sure.”

“Why do I smell Faith all over you?”

Buffy flushed. “Damn vampire senses. None of your business.”

“Buffy-“

“It’s not! I don’t have to justify myself to you. You’re not a part of my life anymore, Angel.”

“I know. I just thought that someday…”

“So did I, Angel. But…things change. You’ll always be in my heart, and I’ll always love you, but I was a kid when I met you. I’m grown up now, and I’m finally discovering who I am – the person I’ve become. And I just…I don’t feel that way about you anymore. I’m sorry.”

Angel smiled wistfully. “Me too. But I’m happy for you, Buffy. It takes some people a lifetime – or several – to figure out who they are. You’re a wonderful, special woman, and I’m glad it didn’t take you that long. If Faith - or anyone else - can make you happy, make you complete, then all the best to both of you.”

Buffy’s eyes shone. “Thank you, my Angel. I love you.”

“I love you too, Buffy. I always will.” He bent down and kissed her, just as Faith was thrown from the oracles’ presence back into the cave. She landed at their feet and looked up to see them in mid-kiss.

“Faith!” Buffy exclaimed as she broke the kiss. “It’s not…”

Faith stood up, staring coldly at her. “Never mind. I’ve got some shit G needs to know, so let’s get going – we got a plane to catch.” She turned and stormed out of the cave, desperately fighting the warm tears that ran down her face and clearing her throat to disguise the strangled sob that escaped her.

“Faith, wait!” Buffy called. “Hell.” She turned back to Angel. “Sorry to come and go so quick, but can you get us back to the airport?”

“No problem. Maybe sometime when there’s not an apocalypse coming, you can drop by for a real visit.”

They left the cave to find the car gone, a note held in place with a rock where it had been parked. Buffy picked up the note.

B:
Took the car. Felt like driving myself back to the airport. I’m sure ANGEL can find another way to get you there – and that he’ll be more than happy to give you a ride. Meet you there.

f.


“Shit,” Buffy muttered as she crumpled the note. “Angel, we need another way to get to the airport.”

“Hold on,” he said as he pulled his cell phone from its belt clip, punching a speed-dial button. “Wes? Can you send the helicopter to…uh, can you track me? Alright.”

He turned to Buffy. “It’ll be here in about five minutes.”

“You have a helicopter?”

“Well, the firm does.”
[hr]
They arrived at the airport to find the jet fuelled and ready to go, Faith already aboard. Buffy gave Angel a quick kiss goodbye and he wished her luck as she got out and headed for the plane. She boarded and found Faith stretched out on one of the couches, her eyes bloodshot and a dozen empty airplane bottles of liquor on the floor in front of her.

“Hey, B.”

“Faith, listen to me-“

“Nothin’ to explain, B. It took five years, but I’m glad you finally followed my philosophy.”

“What?”

“Get some and get gone. I’m flattered you decided it was worth following, it’s just been a long time since I was on the receiving end of a fuck-and-run.”

“Faith, it’s not like that. I was telling him that we were done.”

“Sure, B. Just leave me the fuck alone, ok?” She pulled out the mp3 player Dawn had given her for Christmas and turned it up loud enough to drown out anything Buffy might have to say.

Buffy flopped down onto the cabin’s other coach, across from Faith, unsure what to do or say to heal what she’d done. Faith continued to pound back the bottles until she got up to go to the bathroom, throwing the mp3 player down on her seat and walking a very unsteady path to the back of the plane. Buffy picked up the mp3 player, more out of curiosity than anything else, and noticed it was set on repeat, playing the same song over and over – and it sounded much different than Faith’s usual choice in music. She listened for a moment:

I told you everything
Opened up and let you in
You made me feel alright
For once in my life
Now all that's left of me
Is what I pretend to be
So together, but so broken up inside
'Cause I can't breathe
No, I can't sleep
I'm barely hangin' on

Here I am, once again
I'm torn into pieces
Can't deny it, can't pretend
Just thought you were the one
Broken up, deep inside
But you won't get to see the tears I cry
Behind these hazel eyes


Hearing the toilet flush, Buffy put the device back in a hurry. She tried to engage Faith in conversation as she stumbled back to the couch, but the dark slayer would have none of it. She stuck the bud earpieces back in her ears and went back to drinking as Buffy watched her, still completely lost for words.
[hr]
When they arrived in Rome, Buffy drove them back to the house. The trip passed in silence, Faith having essentially passed out in the passenger seat – as she’d been for the latter half of the flight. When they arrived, Buffy tried to help her into the house, but Faith would have none of it. She shook off the offered help and made her way slowly to the house, falling a few times but refusing each time a hand was offered. She made her way to the library, where Willow and Tara were helping Giles research, and fell bonelessly onto one of the room’s couches.

Willow got up from the table where she’d been sitting. “You guys are back already? We really need to 'borrow' one of their jets, Buffy.” When no reply was forthcoming, she looked at where Buffy’s eyes were focused – Faith. “Buffy?”

“Hm? Oh, sorry, Will. Kinda spaced for a sec there. What was that?”

“Nothing. Did you guys get anything useful from the Delphi?”

“Uh…I don’t know.”

Giles stared at her. “What do you mean you don’t know?”

“Faith didn’t say.”

Giles regarded her for a moment before turning to Faith. “Faith? What did you discover?”

“Huh?”

“From the oracles, Faith. You’re drunk, obviously, but I still need to know what you found out.”

“That oracles are pricks,” she slurred.

“Anything useful?”

“That legend you’re looking for is in the diary – no, chronicles, that’s it, of Thomas.”

“The Chronicles of Thomas?” he asked, trying to interpret her slurred speech.

“Yes, dumbass, that’s what I said.”

“What else? Did you find out the identity of the One Who Yet Lives? Or whether the prophecy can still be fulfilled with the unseen one dead?”

“One question at a time, G. No, I don’t know who the living one is – they said they’re on their way. And the girl wasn’t the unseen one, but they won’t say who it is, just that they’ve been dead for years.”

“What about the Strongest of All? Did they tell you who that refers to?”

Faith looked at Tara for a moment. “No. That’s all they told me before they threw me out on my ass. Now, if nobody minds, I wanna hit the sack.”

“Can I give you a hand upstairs, Faith?” Buffy asked quietly.

“Nope. T? Red? You guys feel like carrying my drunk ass upstairs?”

Tara could see the hurt in Buffy’s eyes as she replied. “Um, sure, Faith.” She and Willow each took Faith under one arm and helped her up the spiral staircase to her room. They sat her down on her bed, and put their arms around her as she started to cry.

“Faith? What’s wrong?”

“God, T, I don’t know what the fuck I’m going to do. Last night, I slept with B – it was the first time.” She waited for that to sink in before she continued. “Then we get to L.A., and it’s like I don’t exist for her – she just wants to talk to Angel. Then I get tossed out of the oracles’ hole, and I land at their feet while they’re still kissing.”

“Oh, goddess. What did Buffy say?”

“That she was telling him they’re through. Didn’t look like a goodbye kiss to me, though.”

“Oh, Faith…”

“Does she hate me? Is she ashamed of what we did? Or is it just because it’s Angel?”

Willow spoke up. “Faith, I know she doesn’t hate you, and she’s not ashamed of sleeping with you. She and Angel have history-“ she held up her hand as Faith started to reply. “But they haven’t really been together for a long time. You should talk to her – I’d bet she really was saying goodbye.”

Faith wiped her eyes, which had started to tear up again. “Okay…I’ll try. But if…” she trailed off, and Willow and Tara were touched by the vulnerability in her eyes and in her voice, neither of them having seen this side of her before.

“It’ll b-be okay, Faith. Just talk to her.”

“’Kay. Can you ask her to come up?”

“Of course,” Willow said, patting her knee reassuringly. “We’ll ask her right away.”
[hr]
When the two slayers came downstairs an hour later, keeping a constant distance from each other, they found everyone still up and in the library, Willow and Tara assisting Giles while Spike paced.

“Spike?” inquired Buffy. “What’s new?”

“Sod all. I’ve been out all night trying to find out more about this thing, and I’ve come with bugger all. About the only interesting news I’ve got is that Riley isn’t in the city anymore – at least, that’s what my contacts tell me. Nobody seems to know where he went though. As far as Lindsey, I can’t get any word on him one way or the other.”

“That’s okay. I don’t think he’s a pressing concern at the moment. Thanks, Spike.”

He nodded in reply. She turned to Giles. “What about you three?”

“We’ve got a little bit more information, but we only have part one of the Chronicles here. I’m going to talk to Wesley and the Council and see if they can relay the rest. I’ll bring everyone up to speed in the morning. For now, though, my two research assistants are going to bed.” When Willow protested, he spoke again more firmly. “I insist. Tara’s hand still needs to heal, and for that she’ll need rest. And so do you.”

Willow and Tara acquiesced, and wished the group goodnight as they climbed the stairs. Buffy and Faith followed behind them, leaving Spike and Giles alone in the library.

“Giles?” Spike asked quietly.

“Yes, Spike?” Giles responded absently, still reading.

“What do you think the odds are that this bloody prophecy’s for real?”

Giles put the book down and stared. “Why?”

“Well…I got to admit, I’m sort of tickled by the thought of becoming human again.”

“I would imagine…but keep in mind, that’s only one possible interpretation of the text. There’s many things that line could mean.”

“I know. I know.”
[hr]
“I can’t sleep. Can you sleep, baby?”

“No, Will, I can’t. I don’t know how anyone could sleep right now.”

“Want me to take your mind off of all this?”

Tara rolled over to look Willow in the eyes. “Who said you get to start?”

“Well, you’re the injured one, so I’m going to take care of you. Oh boy, am I going to take care of you.”

Willow laid her on her back and climbed on top, leaning in to kiss her slowly and deeply, running her tongue around the inside of her mouth. She felt Tara respond instantly, chasing the tongue with her own. She reached down and pulled up Tara’s nightshirt as the kiss continued, running her fingernails up the blonde’s thighs and feeling her hips move in response. Tara moaned , their tongues still chasing each other. Willow pulled reluctantly away from the kiss, sitting up to pull the troublesome nightshirt the rest of the way off of her lover. Tara reached out with her good hand, trying to unbutton Willow’s pajama top, but Willow gently pushed it away with a smile.

“Uh-Uh. Not time yet.” She ran her hands through Tara’s hair, firmly grabbing the back of her head as she pulled her up and into another kiss, longer than the first. When she lowered her back to the bed, she could feel her nipples rubbing uncomfortably against her pajama top, and the wetness beginning to soak the bottoms. She clambered off, knowing that much more contact would make her lose control far too quickly. She knelt at the end of the bed and took Tara’s left foot in her hands, slowly sucking each toe - one after another. Tara thrashed on the bed, whimpering, as she continued to the right foot. From her vantage point, Willow could see how wet she was becoming. Moving up from the feet, Willow repeatedly licked each of her legs all the way up, stopping just before she reached the blonde curls she wanted so badly to taste. Every time she came close, Tara whimpered with anticipation, only to moan with frustration as Willow began at the ankles again.

Finally Willow buried her face in Tara’s mound, gently licking her most sensitive of spots. Tara writhed and moaned, grinding her hips into Willow, until the pressure on her pearl suddenly stopped, leaving her perched on the very edge of release. “Please,” she gasped. “Willow, please…” She looked down to see the wicked grin on the redhead’s face as she stood up and disrobed. “Willow…oh goddess, Will, please…”

“Please what?” she teased.

“Please...”

“Not just yet,” Willow insisted. “My turn first.” She climbed onto the bed and straddled Tara’s head, being careful to avoid her injured arm. With her sex in perfect position, Tara took her cue and began to hungrily lap at it. Willow was on the cusp when the release Tara had longed for washed over her, and her moan of Willow’s name vibrated against her sex, pushing the redhead over her threshold. Still in the throes of her own pleasure, Tara continued to drink in Willow’s wetness, driving her over the edge a second time before the first was even over. Willow cried out Tara’s name, her voice hoarse. When the wave finally passed, she gingerly lifted herself off and settled on the bed next to her, staring into her eyes.

“Oh, Tara…goddess…” she ran her hand across Tara’s bare stomach. “Are you sleepy now?”

“Mmm…very sleepy,” came the mumbled reply.

“Goodnight, Tara.”

“Goodnight, Will,” she replied. After a final exchange of “I Love You”’s and a kiss goodnight, the two quickly fell asleep in each other’s arms.
[hr]
The entire group, including all of the potentials and Dawn, gathered at the breakfast table the next morning to hear the latest news.

Buffy nodded reluctantly. “Okay. First up, Giles has some news.”

The former librarian cleared his throat. “I’ve been searching as quickly as I could, on conference call with the council and Wesley. We located the pagan legend in question exactly where the Delphi said it would be, and we’ve gleaned some important facts from it. Firstly, the battle we’re going to fight won’t happen here. The Tok-Mageth will take all of us to its own dimension. There’s no description of the dimension, as the only people it has transported there have come back dead or near enough as to make no difference.

“Wait,” interrupted Buffy. “I thought you said the reports of this thing in Australia and Rome described what happened to the people who fought it.”

“They did, but the chroniclers failed to mention that the fight didn’t happen in this dimension. The people who fought the creature disappeared with it and came back dead, so the chroniclers simply assumed that the creature caused the gruesome injuries they returned with.”

“Oh. Okay.”

“Secondly, the creature won’t be alone. The legend describes…I think the closest English word is ‘imps,’ who assist it in its mission. I would think we’ll be facing them as well.

Finally, the legend does describe a supposed weak point of the creature that requires a sacrifice, but it’s ill-defined. It seems to describe a barrier of some sort – the sacrifice is apparently what’s needed to cross it. Crossing this barrier will supposedly destroy the creature, and it’s the only thing that will.”

“Okay, so that’s the update,” said Buffy. “So priority number one in this fight is going to be that barrier. We’ll set up like this…”

With that, she froze in place, along with the rest of the room’s inhabitants – except for Willow and Tara.

They stared at Buffy, and then at each other, firing off rapid sentences that they spoke at the same time.

“Did you-“

“I didn’t, did you-“

“Then who-“

They were interrupted by a blinding flash of white light. When they could see again a woman stood before them, bathed in radiant light. Tara gasped.

“Mom?”

“Hello, my darling girl.”

Tara rose, reaching out for her mother. “Is it really you?”

“It’s really me,” said the figure, taking Tara by the hand. She turned to Willow. “Hello, Willow.”

“You know who I am?”

“Of course. You’re the woman who’s made my daughter so very happy. You two are meant to be together, and I thank you for all you’ve done for her.”

Willow nodded, speechless.

“Mom…” said Tara. “I…I don’t want to sound r-rude, but – why are you here?”

“Because I was destined to be here, at this time. I’m responsible for making sure that you both have what you need to survive what’s to come.”

Willow gasped. “You’re the unseen one!”

“Not to put too fine a point on it, but yes. Although I prefer Mary.”

“How about ‘Mrs. Maclay’?”

“If you’re going to marry my daughter, I think we should at least be on a first-name basis. Come on over here now, and take my other hand.” Willow moved to do so.

“Both of you, please hold on tight. This might be a little bit intense.”

Both Willow’s and Tara’s heads snapped back and their eyes closed as a wave of power washed over them. Their knees wanted to buckle, but they struggled to stay upright so as not to break the contact. Finally, when they were both sure they could not possibly take any more, the wave stopped. Their hands were released, and they stood back gasping. When they could open their eyes, they stared at each other in shock. Both of them now sported pure white hair, and a bright glow that suffused them.

“Just a little present,” said Mary. “Now, that’s only part of it. Here’s the rest; there will be a point in the battle to come when you will both know you have lost.” She shimmered and seemed to fade for a moment, almost imperceptibly. “When that happens, call on me, and I will turn the tide. Now, return to your friends, and enjoy the peace of the next few hours – dark times are coming.” There was another bright flash, and Willow and Tara shared a falling sensation.

“I love you, Mom!” called Tara.

“I love you too, Tara,” came an answer from the light. When the flash ended, they found themselves back at the table, with everyone staring at them.

“What…” began Buffy before trailing off.

“…happened to you two?” picked up Dawn.

Tara looked at Willow. “Go ahead, sweetie.”

“We’re halfway to fulfilling the prophecy” began Willow.

“How’s that?” asked Buffy.

“Well, as it turns out, Tara’s mom is the unseen one.”

“Remarkable,” exclaimed Giles. “And she spoke to you?”

“She’s the one who made us all glowy,” Willow explained. “And that’s not all – she promised she’d help us with fighting this thing. And the fight, by the way, seems to be coming soonish – she strongly advised us to enjoy the next few hours.”

“That can’t be,” insisted Giles. “We’re still missing-“ the sound of the door knocker on the front door interrupted. The group shared a horrified look as Buffy went to answer it. Behind the door stood the last man any of them had ever expected to see.
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Ooh, a cliffhanger...Barring another attack from my muse's hammer, the next update should be Monday or Tuesday. Happy Thanksgiving to all the American Kittens!
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Re: First Fic - A Life Interrupted (updated 11/25)

Postby tarawillowfan562 » Fri Nov 25, 2005 9:14 am

loving the story plzzz update soon
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Re: First Fic - A Life Interrupted (updated 11/25)

Postby justin » Fri Nov 25, 2005 11:18 am

That was a great update.

So they're going to have to fight this monster on another dimension which no one has returned from alive? That sounds nasty.

Silly Faith jumping to the wrong conclusion, then drinking herself silly rather than listening to Buffy. I mean if Buffy really did see what had happened between them as a one night stand, or was ashamed by it why would she say she was just saying bye to Angel? At least Willow was able to make her see sense.

Tara's mother's the unseen one? Well I certainly didn't see that one coming.

So who is it at the door? The last person they expected. Is it the Spanish Inquisition?

Coz no one expects the spanish inquisition.

ETA: I forgot to say I loved this line

"That oracles are pricks,” she slurred.


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Re: First Fic - A Life Interrupted (updated 11/25)

Postby Tarafied4Life » Mon Nov 28, 2005 8:20 am

Alrighty...it's update time!

tarawillowfan562 - Glad you're enjoying! The update is nigh!

justin - Yeah, the other dimension thing could be a problem. As far as Faith goes, her problem is really that she's never opened up enough to let anyone in - and to finally do that with Buffy, only to see her kissing Angel, isn't exactly a confidence builder. I'm glad the appearance of Tara's mother came as a surprise - if it hadn't, I'd have been foreshadowing way too much! I suppose it could be the Spanish Inquisition at the door, but they would have had to lug the comfy chair a long ways! :-D Glad you liked the line about the oracles, too - I did.
[hr]
Chapter 10 - Mere anarchy is loosed upon the world
Disclaimer: See Chapter 1.
Rating: R for language, I guess.
Author's Note: Hold the tomatoes until after you've read the last line - this isn't the end of the story, and there is a happy ending coming!


“Xander?”

“Hi, Buffy. Can I come in?”

Buffy stared for a moment. “I don’t know, Xander. You left us cold during that business with the Immortal, we haven’t heard from you in a year, and you show up and just want to – what, hang out?”

“No. I heard there was something bad happening – that you might be in terrible danger, and I couldn’t sit out any more.”

“Why not? You’ve sat out the other dangers we’ve faced in all this time, why is this one important enough for you to show up?”

“Because I heard about this prophecy – says you might die, if it was explained to me right. And you’ve died more than enough times. I want to help.”

“Fine,” Buffy stood back to allow him in. “But you should know…Dawn’s not going to be happy to see you – any more so than I am.”

“I know. I deserve it.” He kicked off his shoes as Buffy closed the door behind him. “Which way?”

She pointed him to the dining room. He walked in slowly and his jaw hit the floor as he took in what he was looking at.

“How-What-Tara?”

“Xander.”

The frost in her voice startled Willow, and she made a mental note to ask about it later. She turned to stare at Buffy, who’d walked in behind him. “No…Buffy, he can’t be. We can’t let that happen.”

Xander looked at her, confused. “Can’t be what?”

Buffy took her seat and stared up at him. “Who told you about the prophecy? Who told you I was in trouble?”

“I don’t know the guy. He told me his name was Lindsey.”

Buffy shook her head. “You’re sure?”

“Yep. I remember thinking ‘what a girly name!’ What’s going on?”

Giles sighed. “I think it’s safe to say, with some certainty, that we don’t have long now. If Riley was that concerned about all of us being in the same place, I’d say the Tok-Mageth is most assuredly on its way.”

Xander stared at Buffy. “Okay, that’s it! What’s going on?”

“Xander…” sighed Buffy. “How much of the prophecy did Lindsey tell you?”

“The whole thing.”

“I think…actually I’m pretty sure…that you’re the One Who Yet Lives.”

Xander worked through the prophecy in his head. “Wait…wait a minute! You mean…”

Buffy nodded. “Don’t worry, Xander. We’re going to figure out how to stop it. You’re not going to die. I swear.” She turned to Dawn and Faith. “Go rouse the potentials, and brief them on the sitch. Get Spike up too, it’ll be dark soon enough.” She turned to Willow and Tara. “How long do we have?”

“My mom said to enjoy the next f-few hours, so I’d guess we’ve got at least a couple.”

“Okay.” She addressed the room. “I don’t know what’s going to happen tonight, but there’s something all of you need to know – I love you. I won’t willingly let any of you go. I don’t think there’s nothing else we can do to prepare for this, so my advice to you all is to take the next two hours or so for personal time. Keep weapons with you in case this thing arrives early, but don’t train or prepare. Just enjoy your time. Faith, would you meet me in my room when I finish explaining things to Xander?”

Faith nodded, angrily wiping away the tears in her eyes.
[hr]
Behind their closed double doors, Willow and Tara regarded each other in silence across the bed. Tara finally broke the ice.

“Will, in case-“

“No. No. Don’t even say it – it isn’t going to happen. I will move heaven, earth and hell before I ever let you go again.”

Unshed tears in her eyes, Tara grabbed Willow’s hand. “Please let m-me finish, Will. In case anything happens to me, I want you to know how I feel.” She let out a shaky breath. “A few days ago, my whole world turned upside down, and my life changed. I just want you to know, Willow – if I had the chance to trade these past few days for my old life, I would turn it down. I love you so completely, more than I could ever tell you – and that will never change. If this is all we have – I’m thankful for it. Goddess, I’m so thankful – I love you, and no power in this world could ever change that.”

“No!” Willow shouted, throwing the candle she held against the wall, shattering its glass base. “NO! Don’t you dare say goodbye to me, Tara Maclay! You are not coming back to me for a few days, after all this time, and then leaving me again. The powers promised-“

“The powers promised n-no early or random deaths, Will. This might be a purposeful death – this is a prophecy, it’s destiny. And more importantly, it’s free will. I choose to stay and fight, and that makes anything that’ll happen to me my decision.”

“I don’t accept that. If that’s true, I want you to leave with me now.”

“No.”

“You wouldn’t leave with me?”

“Not like that. We have a job to do here, sweetie – Mom didn’t make us all glowy because she thought it’d look nice.”

“I don’t CARE!” Willow screamed. “Don’t you understand? I can’t let you go again – I couldn’t let you go the first time! Do you know what it was like for me, visiting some stupid stone and knowing you were only six feet away from me, and I couldn’t hold you? Do you know how many nights I sat at that damn memorial wall we tore down and talked to you? Do you know what I’ve been through? I’m NOT letting you go!” She dissolved into helpless sobs.

Tara reached over and took the woman she loved in her arms. “Willow…I can’t imagine, I can’t even begin. But we don’t control the universe. If it’s our time, it’s our time. I just needed you to know how I felt…I don’t plan on letting you go – goddess knows, I don’t think I could – but I needed to feel that I’d told you what I need you to know.”

Tara held Willow in one arm while she reached out with her good hand and set the alarm clock for two hours. “Come on Will – let’s just lie down.” She did so, pulling Willow down next to her and holding her tight.

“I love you too, Tara,” Willow choked out through her sobs.
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They gathered in the library, a palpable sense of doom around them, each of them either holding a weapon or with one propped near them.

“Okay, B,” said Faith, who was holding a beer in one hand and Buffy’s hand in the other. Willow smiled as she noticed; glad that the two could face this together. “What’s the gathering for?”

“Now,” Buffy continued. “I’d like to say a few words – no. Actually, I don’t want to say a few words. We’ve had this pre-apocalypse talk so many times now, I don’t even know if I listen to it anymore. So instead I’ll just say this – I’m prepared to die if that’s what it’s going to take, but I won’t let a single one of you go.”

Everyone gathered around Buffy in a tight embrace as she turned to address the potentials. She opened her mouth to speak and vanished, along with Faith, Xander, Spike, and Willow and Tara. Dawn, Giles and the potentials stared at each other. Dawn looked to the couch where Buffy had been sitting, where the scythe was still laying. “Oh…”
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“…fuck!” exclaimed Faith. “Where the hell is everyone else? And where the hell is my crossbow?”

“I don’t know,” said Buffy. “Maybe the only ones allowed here are the ones in the prophecy – woulda been nice if Giles had mentioned that part. And the weapons – I wasn’t holding mine. Were you?”

“No.” she looked down at the ground. “But there’s the beer can I was holding. That’ll be a big help.” She looked around. “Wow. I hate to say it, but this is kind of impressive.”

Buffy followed her gaze. They were in what looked like a massive underground cavern, roughly the size of their house. The floor of the cavern was a long, almost uniformly flat rock surface, and the ceiling was about seventy-five feet above their heads. The walls looked like polished volcanic rock, with torches placed every five feet on both sides. At the far end of the cavern Buffy could see a shimmering green field, which distorted the cave behind it.

“I guess that’s the barrier?”

“I guess. What’d the legend mean about a sacrifice?”

“I don’t know – but I have a feeling we can’t give it your beer can.”

Beside them, Tara and Willow looked around the cave. They were still glowing, but the light that effused them was red.

“Um…Tara, do you know why we’re red now?”

“You’re always sort of red,” Tara said with a grin. “No, I’ve got no idea. It must be a side effect of the dimension. Kind of pretty, though.”

Xander stood up from where he’d hit the ground next to them. “So,” he remarked. “This is the demon dimension, eh? Doesn’t seem so bad.”

The words were barely out of his mouth when the Tok-Mageth popped into view near the field, surrounded by twenty smaller beings, all of which were covered in flame.

“I need to not talk. My mouth is bad.”

Spike, who’d been silent up to this point, slapped him in the back of the head.

Willow rolled her eyes as the group assumed battle positions. Buffy and Faith took the lead, Xander behind them, and Willow and Tara stood behind him with their hands intertwined.

“Are you ready?” asked Willow.

“I’m ready. Let’s get started.”
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The two witches extended their arms and cried “extinguish!” simultaneously. The flames surrounding the smaller creatures disappeared.

“Sweet!” called Faith from in front of them. “That oughta give us a fighting chance. You ready, B?”

“Remember the plan, Faith!” The two slayers charged headlong into the smaller creatures, half of whom had began to rush them as soon as their flames were extinguished. When the two sides met, the result was a wild melee. Faith and Buffy operated back-to-back, throwing punches and kicks at anything in range. Spike threw himself into the other half of the creatures, vamped out and ready to do damage. Willow and Tara continued to throw magicks at the creatures, knocking them down or simply slowing them so Spike and the slayers could hit them more easily. Xander did as Buffy’d told him to do, keeping well away from the battle. Throughout all of this, the Tok-Mageth stood silently, watching the group in action.

After nearly twenty minutes of furious battle, only two of the creatures had been put down permanently. No matter how many times they were knocked down, they seemed to keep getting up.

“Buggers!” cried Spike. “Buffy, how the hell are we going to kill these things?”

“I-“ she dodged a punch. “I don’t know! Faith?”

The dark slayer turned her head to look at Spike, and caught the Tok-Mageth’s movement out of the corner of her eye. He raised his hand and pointed at Xander. She didn’t even bother to curse, just ducked from the creature she was fighting and ran toward him. As the fireball she had been anticipating flew, she pushed him from its path and stepped in front of it.

Her eyes were squeezed shut in anticipation of the pain, but she didn’t feel a thing. Then she heard Willow’s shout.

“Goddess, Faith, MOVE!”

She opened her eyes to find the fireball hovering inches in front of her. Tara and Willow stared at it, their hands interlaced and sweat dripping from their faces. She threw herself to the ground, just in time, as their control of the fireball ran out and it continued on its course, splashing against the rock wall.

“Will!” called Buffy. “Can you guys hold these things off for a second?”

Without responding, Willow turned to Tara and the two cast the same barrier spell Willow had once used against the Knights of Byzantium. It was a tremendous strain, even with their increased energy, to hold the barrier against so many foes, and they both positively poured sweat, their bodies and clothes soaked.

“Buffy! Whatever you’re going to do, do it quickly! This won’t hold for long!”

She ran to Faith’s side and pulled her up by the hand. “Okay, this isn’t working. Let’s go for the big kill – make sense to you?”

Faith nodded. Buffy turned to face the Tok-Mageth, still standing silently. “You are mine. Do you understand me?”

It waved its hand, and Willow and Tara’s barrier collapsed. “No!” Xander shouted as the smaller creatures swarmed the group. Willow and Tara shared a look, and Tara looked to the ceiling. “Mom, if you’re there, we could use your help.”

The action across the cavern froze in a bright red flash, including Willow this time, and she appeared before her daughter. Appraising the situation, she turned back to Tara. “Things aren’t going very well, are they?”

Tara shook her head.

“Now…I don’t have as much power in this dimension, but I can get rid of those imps. There’s still the Tok to worry about, though.”

“What can we do?” gasped Tara, still out of breath from holding the barrier spell in place. “Willow and I have nothing left to try. And nothing the others are doing seems to be helping.”

Tara’s mother pulled her into a hug. “It’s okay, Tara. There is a way you can defeat it, but it won’t be an easy decision. Do you remember the one verse I told you was worth remembering from the bible?”

Tara thought, and then recited it by rote. “And now abideth faith, hope, love; these three things; and the greater of these is love.”

“Very good!” Tara beamed. “Now, your friend Giles may be smart, but he never thought to read the prophecy in Latin. The sourcebook his colleague used made a crucial mistranslation. The line that says the strongest will have to bend should actually read ‘the greatest of all will have to bend.’ Do you understand?”

“The greatest…no. I’m sorry, Mom, but I don’t.”

“The greatest of all is the one most in love.”

Tara’s face fell and her eyes shone. “So – this is why Willow’s not hearing this, right? It’s me.”

“I’m so sorry, my child. I’m going to load you both with magickal energy again, so that Willow can protect her friends while you cross the barrier. The energy I’m giving you should be enough to overload the barrier as you cross. I wish there was another way.”

“Can…” she choked off a sob. “Can I c-come back to v-visit Willow?”

“I don’t know, dear. That’s a decision the powers make. But I’ll try and make sure you can.”

Tears streaming from her eyes, Tara pulled back from her mother’s embrace. “Okay…okay. I’ll s-see you soon, Mom.”

“I’ll see you soon, Tara. I’m so proud of you, and I love you so very much. I wish I could give you the future you deserve.”

In a blinding flash, Tara found herself in the thick of things again. The glow around herself and Willow intensified tenfold, and the imps surrounding them disappeared.

Willow stared. “Did she do that?’

Tara nodded. Desperately fighting back her tears, she leaned over to whisper in Willow’s ear. “Try and protect them from the Tok. I’m going to sneak over and get a c-closer look at that b-barrier, see what spells m-might take it down.”

“Okay, baby,” Willow whispered back. “How come you’re stuttering all of a sudden?”

Tara kissed her cheek. “Just n-nervous.”

She crawled away as Willow started to throw magick at the Tok-Mageth, knocking it down. She turned back and mouthed “I Love You,” knowing Willow couldn’t see her, but needing to say it one more time.

Buffy, Spike and Faith fought for all they were worth, struggling to land blows on the creature as Willow slowed it. It quickly became obvious, however, that it wasn’t going to be enough as the Tok shrugged off their blows, knocking Faith unconscious with a well-placed fist.

“We need to take that barrier down!” yelled Buffy.

Willow looked for Tara, seeing her standing at the edge of the barrier and staring into it. A sinking feeling hit her, and she knocked the Tok down with a wave of energy and followed it up with a binding spell, hoping it would hold the creature long enough.
[hr]
Tara stood at the edge of the field, staring into the energy and gathering her courage, when she suddenly felt another hand in hers. She turned to find Willow standing next to her.

“Willow, what-“

“Tara, what do you think you’re doing?”

“What I h-have to.”

“Then you’re not leaving without me. I’m not going to be alone again. And don’t even think about arguing with me.”

“Willow…I l-love you so much.”

“I love you too, my Tara. Hold on tight.”

They smiled at each other, saying all the words that needed to be spoken without a sound.

The two witches, hand in hand, backed up and ran toward the field. Buffy, dodging the latest fireball attack, looked up to see them dive headfirst into it. “NO!” she screamed as the field, the witches, and the Tok-Mageth disappeared. “Please, God, no!” She fell to her knees, her breath coming in screaming sobs. She never saw the last fireball the creature threw as it disappeared, and Spike knocked her from its path with a flying leap. The vampire’s hair caught fire as it passed over his head, but he quickly beat it out with his hands. He hadn’t seen Willow and Tara jump, but he knew from the look on Buffy’s face what must have happened. Xander, on the other hand, had seen everything. Beyond even tears, he put his head in his hands and sat silently as the three of them, along with Faith’s unconscious body, shimmered and dissolved, returning to their own dimension.
[hr]
And when I'm gone, just carry on... don't mourn.
Rejoice every time you hear the sound of my voice,
Just know that I'm looking down on you smiling,
And I didn’t feel a thing, So baby don't feel no pain.
Just smile back.
And when I'm gone, just carry on... don't mourn.
Rejoice every time you hear the sound of my voice,
Just know that I'm looking down on you smiling,
And I didn’t feel a thing, So baby don't feel no pain.
Just smile back...

[hr]
Squinting against the bright light that surrounded them, Willow and Tara smiled at each other.

“We made it,” Tara said wonderingly.

“We did. But…where are we?”
[hr]
Another cliffhanger, you say? I suppose it is. And to anyone who notices huge holes in the logic of Tara's mother - good! 'Cause there are - the reason why is coming in the next chapter. Speaking of the next chapter, it should hopefully be up later this week.

ETA: I forgot to credit the song - it's by Eminem. (ducks) Wait! Don't leave! It's not like I'm a fan or anything, I hate the guy with a passion actually, but my roomie had this song on (repeatedly) the other day, and I thought the chorus was pretty.
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Re: First Fic - A Life Interrupted (updated 11/28)

Postby Willow~Rosenberg » Mon Nov 28, 2005 5:13 pm

Wow! What a cliffhanger? There was so much emotion in that update. From Willow's refusal to let Tara go to them going through the barrier together. Wow. I can hardly wait to read the next update. *tapping foot nervously*
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Re: First Fic - A Life Interrupted (updated 11/28)

Postby DaddyCatALSO » Tue Nov 29, 2005 6:12 am

Wow. The thing is, they're still where they can watch each other's backs; the super-duo is still together. I know this isn't the end but, well, it reminds me of some thoughts I once had on what does or doesn't constitute a happy ending.
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Re: First Fic - A Life Interrupted (updated 11/28)

Postby FineyMcFine » Tue Nov 29, 2005 6:16 am

Hey Heather, so I come back from my vacation and there's not one, not two, but THREE updates - my cup runneth over! This story is perking right along and there's lots of drama. Is the Immortal plotline something from Buffy or Angel canon? I don't remember that storyline very well if it's canon. I'm surprised that the girls are surprised to see Xander, although I gather there was something that happened with him and the Immortal. Anyway, I'm loving the updates and the story, great job!
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Re: First Fic - A Life Interrupted (updated 11/28)

Postby tarebear » Tue Nov 29, 2005 8:00 am

Amazing! i don't even know how i'm going to write this feedback! i'm speechless right now!

anyways, great update! can't wait to find out where willow and tara ended up this time and if TPTB allow them to go back to their friends and if lindsey will now give up now that the prophecy has come to pass.
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Re: First Fic - A Life Interrupted (updated 11/28)

Postby JustSkipIt » Tue Nov 29, 2005 2:26 pm

Wow that was intense and powerful. I have to say that for a young writer, you have a true gift for writing emotion. You don't really push the tears but they come anyway. You simply write the love and emotion and it comes through. The climactic scene was very well written. I could understand exactly what was happening while still being moved by W/T's love as well as the other Scoobies. Very well done.
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Re: First Fic - A Life Interrupted (updated 11/28)

Postby Kaia » Tue Nov 29, 2005 6:54 pm

Wow...that was intense.
But I'm a little curious. I mean...is it really fair to assume that Tara is the one that loves the most? I mean, why can't they both love each other in the same way, and with the same intensity?
I dunno, it just got me thinking.
Great update. I'm already waiting for the next update.

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Re: First Fic - A Life Interrupted (updated 11/28)

Postby Tarafied4Life » Wed Nov 30, 2005 11:22 am

Okay...here we go again! But first:

Willow~Rosenberg - I'm glad you enjoyed! No nervousness required, though - happiness and warm fuzzies are guaranteed, eventually!

DaddyCatALSO - Funny you mention that, actually - in my original draft, that was the end of the story - it probably would have stayed that way, but my muse keeps hitting me with my laptop, so the story goes on...

SallyMcFine - Actually, the Immortal was kind of a one-note joke in an Angel ep called "The Girl In Question." What I've done with him really has nothing to do with how they used him - to the show, he was some kind of immortal playboy who Buffy fell for in Rome. I co-opted him because it solved some creative difficulties, and changed his role significantly. As far as Xander - there was nothing canon implied, their reactions to him are part of a flashback that's still to come. I'm glad you're enjoying the story, there's much more to come!

tarebear - I hope that's speechless in a good way! :-D As far as w/t's new locale, the powers and lindsey, the answers are below!

JustSkipIt - Thanks so much! I think that's the nicest thing anyone's ever said about anything I've written. I'm just glad the emotion doesn't feel forced - that's always my biggest concern. Thank You!

Kaia - I'm glad you're enjoying the story, and actually I completely agree with you about assuming Tara is the one who loves the most. It's one of many flaws in what Tara's mother says to her...read on!
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Chapter 11 - The blood-dimmed tide is loosed
Disclaimer: See Chapter 1.
Rating: R I guess, for language.
Author's Note: Dedicated to Amy.


“What?” Lindsey screamed, throwing everything in reach at the wall. “What the hell do you mean, they’re still together? You assured me, promised me, insisted to me that your taking over the vision of Tara’s mother would get her to kill herself! Just herself!

The psychic across the table, having seen Lindsey gun down Riley earlier, fumbled for an answer that wouldn’t get him killed. “Sir, I – it should have worked! We overrode the first vision and told her to call on her mother when things got bad, and she did, and the second vision told her to jump - but I hadn’t counted on her letting the red witch go with her. Having two juiced-up witches hit the barrier at the same time…If she’d jumped alone, it would have killed her, but with both of them – we don’t know exactly what happened, but it shorted out the barrier.”

Lindsey rubbed his eyes. “Okay. Where are they?”

“We don’t know. They’re not in the nether realms, as far as we can tell, so they’re still alive somewhere. We’ve got every contact we have working on tracking them down, but there’re a lot of dimensions out there – and we’re having trouble pinpointing which one they’re in.”

Turning to the three psychics at the end of the table, Lindsey asked “so, what’s our status?”

The three turned to face him, speaking as one. “The plan is still in motion. But as long as the witches are alive and together, they are a threat.”

“Even if they’re in another dimension?”

“Yes.”

Lindsey pulled the .45 he’d used earlier and shot the psychic across the table in the kneecap. Listening to him scream didn’t solve the problem, but it did make him feel better. He turned back to the three. “How much more time do we need?”

“Three days,” the three answered. “In three days the process will be irreversible, even by the witches.”
[hr]
Spike stared across the table at Dawn. “Where’s big sis?”

Dawn shook her head. “In her room, Spike, the same place she’s been for two weeks. She’s hardly eaten, she never comes downstairs, all she does is sit up there and cry.”

“What about you, little bit? How are you holding up?”

“I dunno, Spike. I can’t even cry – and I feel so bad that I can’t cry. Every time I look at the door, I keep expecting them to walk through it. I just can’t accept that they’re gone – there was nothing about any of this in that stupid prophecy.”

“I know, luv. But prophecies aren’t set in stone – they never consider the human element. Xander was supposed to die, but that all got buggered when Faith decided to put herself in harm’s way. That wasn’t some ancient prophecy at work; it was just a good person doing what was right. And Willow and Tara…we don’t know if that’s what was supposed to happen, or if it was their decision. Either way, they saved us all, and that’s what we need to remember.”

“But we don’t know! There was no bodies after they went through the barrier, so isn’t it possible-“

“Don’t. Please don’t go down that same sodding old road, Dawn. That’s what Buffy kept trying to convince herself when we first got back, that maybe our witches’d vanished to somewhere else, but there’s just no way. The energy in that barrier – it would have vaporized them, Dawn. That’s why there’re no bodies. You need to let go of hope, or you’ll never move on.”

“But what about you? Weren’t you supposed to be human now?”

“Don’t know, niblet. Maybe I didn’t do whatever I was bloody well supposed to do, or maybe it’s not supposed to be instant, I don’t know. But I’m not going to get all torn up about it – not the first time I’ve been lied to, yeah?”

“Are you going up to see Buffy?”

Spike sighed. “Yeah. I don’t know if she’ll talk to me – she hasn’t any of the other times I’ve tried – but someone’s got to try and get through to her.”
[hr]
“Buffy?” he called as he opened the door. “Can I come in?”

He could hear the music blaring from her stereo before he heard her voice.

And I can't stand the pain
And I can't make it go away
No I can't stand the pain

How could this happen to me
I've made my mistakes
Got no where to run
The night goes on
As I'm fading away
I'm sick of this life
I just wanna scream
How could this happen to me


“You don’t need an invite,” Buffy replied in a bleary voice.

“I know. luv, but it’s still considered polite to ask, I thought.”

“Come in, Spike.”

He closed the door behind him as he entered. Looking at Buffy, he noticed the wrinkled blouse and torn jeans she wore looked a little too familiar. “Are those the same clothes you had on last time I was up here?” He cocked his head. “Isn’t that the same bleedin’ CD that was on the last time I was up here?”

Buffy looked down at herself. “I guess so.”

“That was three days ago, Buffy, you’ve got to-“

“What, Spike? What have I got to do? Everyone’s been so great lately at telling me what I need to do. ‘Buffy, you need to eat, Buffy, you need to sleep, Buffy, you need to let go of Willow and Tara.’ You know what? I’m tired of being told what to do. If I want to sit up here for the rest of my damn life, that’s what I’m going to do.”

Spike sat down on the bed next to her, putting an arm around her and letting her head rest on his shoulder. “I know, Buffy. I know. I’m not saying it’s easy, but there’re still people here that need you. Your sister is still in shock so deep she can’t cry, and she could really use a talk with you. There’s potentials downstairs who are just wandering, without a clue what they’re supposed to be doing now, and feeling terrible that they couldn’t help you when it mattered. And I know Faith really wishes you’d talk to her.”

Buffy shook her head. “I’ve got nothing to say to any of them. I failed so miserably, and I don’t have anything to offer anyone. Is Xander still here?”

“Nope. About five minutes after we got back from…wherever the hell we were, he packed and left. I don’t think we’ll be hearing from him again anytime soon.”

“No loss,” Buffy snarled. “He was so much help – I’m glad he came back in time to help summon the creature that killed Willow and Tara. I wish you’d have told me he was leaving, though – I would have kicked him in the ass on his way out the door.”

“Buffy…what exactly happened between you and him, anyway?”
[hr]
“So…this isn’t what I thought the afterlife would look like, somehow. I thought it’d be more…glowy, or something.”

“Sweetie, I’m pretty sure we’re not dead. My wrist still hurts, and everything’s dirty.”

“So if we’re not dead, where are we?”

“I, um…I think that might have been some sort of portal we dove through.”

“A portal?”

“We should look around – this might be another dimension, or it might just be another place in the same one.”

Willow gave Tara a hand up, and wrapped her in a tight hug. “I don’t know where we are, but we’re still together.”

Stroking Willow’s hair, Tara smiled. “I…thank you for coming w-with me.”

“What, I was going to let you jump through that barrier alone? I don’t think so.” Willow grinned and snuck a quick kiss. “Okay, let’s take a look around.”

The two witches walked down the alley they’d found themselves in, taking careful stock of what they saw. The alley was dark and dirty, but that hardly made it different than any other alley. The smell of smoke and blood was thick in the air, however, and that was definitely out of the ordinary. They rounded the corner of the alley and stuck their heads out for a better view.

“Oh, no.” whispered Willow.

It was downtown Los Angeles – not far from Wolfram & Hart - but it wasn’t. The buildings were burned out and empty, the streets all but deserted. A sudden noise made them jump, and they pulled their heads back into the alley, watching as a single black car cruised the street, its windows open. Just when they were sure the car was going to pass them without incident, it stopped and the doors opened, disgorging four vampires in game face.

“Do you smell that, or is it just me?” The driver asked the vamp who’d gotten out from the seat behind him.

“No, that’s fresh meat, I’d bet my unlife on it.”

“Where do you suppose it came from? There hasn’t been fresh meat around here in months.”

“Who cares? Let’s just find it!”

Tara gasped as the vampires headed for the alley – straight for them. She and Willow began to back slowly down the alley until they heard a door open beside them and powerful hands pulled them into the building.

“Stay quiet!” a forceful voice hissed. “This building reeks of death – it should be enough to throw the flesh-eaters from your trail.”

The three stood silently until their unseen savior signaled the vampires were gone. Willow and Tara turned to find a familiar face – sort of.

“Fred?” Willow asked in shock. “What did you do to your hair?”

“There is no Fred,” came the reply. “Hers is simply the shell that contains me. You may call me Ilyria.”

“The s-shell that contains you?”

“Yes. We have no time for foolish questions. We must find a shelter for you.”

“Wait!” Willow exclaimed. “What happened to this world?”

“This world is the way it is,” Ilyria explained with a quizzical expression. “Ever since Angel fled the final battle, the armies of hell have ruled this city. There are few like us now, who have not been turned or killed. Enough questions! Stay quiet as we move, or the flesh-eaters may find us – and even I cannot protect you from all of them.”
[hr]
“Buffy?”

“I heard the question, Spike.”

“Are you going to answer it?”

“Fine,” Buffy snarled, pulling away from Spike to look at him as she spoke. “You want to know what happened with Xander? He ran. After we came to Rome to help the Immortal with his problem, he volunteered to help Willow and I with our part of the plan. He seemed all set to go, and then when things got hairy he screamed something about Anya and ran.”

“Well, it hadn’t been even a month since she died, right?” seeing the question in her eyes, he explained “I heard about it from Andrew later.”

“Oh. Well yeah, that’s right, it hadn’t been long. But that’s not why we don’t speak – I could forgive his running away, even though it made our job harder. What I couldn’t forgive was what happened after that.”

“Which was?”

“I…I don’t want to talk about it. I really don’t know where he’s been all this time.”

“It wasn’t his fault, Buffy. I don’t mean whatever it is he did to you,” he explained hastily when she glared at him, “I mean Willow and Tara.”

“Don’t say their names.”

“It’s not, Buffy. I know how easy it is to blame him for this, but he was a sodding puppet, just like the rest of us. We got buggered, but it’s not anyone’s fault. Willow and Tara-“

Buffy leveled him with a punch that left him on the other side of the room. She stood up from the bed and glared at him. “I told you, DON’T say their names!”

Spike stood up, rubbing his jaw. “Damn right,” he said. “You did. Did hitting me make you feel any better? If it did, come do it again! Right here!” he pointed to his chin.

Buffy was across the room in a flash and had him by the collar.

“Come on! Do it! Bloody do it!”

She let his collar go and went back to the bed, laying down on it. “Leave me alone, Spike.”

“Fine,” said Spike. “Just remember there’s a little girl downstairs who needs you more than anything – she’s all alone - and there’s a girl who loves you and thinks you’re blaming her. I’m going to go take a sniff around town, seeing as how we don’t apparently patrol anymore.”

He’d only just closed the door when the stake she’d thrown buried itself in it.
[hr]
“Keep up!” hissed Ilyria as she led the two on a convoluted path through the back alleys of Los Angeles to a familiar spot.

“It’s a bar!” exclaimed Willow. “But…it’s not,” she continued as she took in the sight. The place looked like a fortress, complete with steel plating covering its entirety and what looked suspiciously like some kind of stake-firing machine guns protruding from turrets.

Ilyria motioned them to wait as she performed a complicated knock on the side of the building, in a spot that looked no different than the rest. The spot she knocked on opened as she completed the knock, revealing a door staffed by four armed guards. “New acquisitions,” Ilyria explained to the guards, indicating Willow and Tara. The guards nodded and stood aside to allow them in. As the door closed behind them, they found themselves face-to-face with an old friend.

“Hey, Red. Hey, T. Welcome to Hell A!”

“F-Faith?” The slayer’s face was scarred in several places, and she carried herself much differently than the Faith they’d been fighting alongside no more than twenty minutes ago.

“In the flesh, T. You okay? You look like hell.”

“Faith? I hate to interrupt, but where are we? And how did you know we were coming?”

“One question at a time, Red. ‘Here’ is Los Angeles. I got here last month, after I cleaned up the mess in Cleveland. I guess Angel was supposed to lead Blue and the rest of the Angel Inc. crew against some kinda hell-army. Instead, he ran away, and no-one’s seen him since. The army he was supposed to fight took out Gunn and Connor, and spread across the state. I guess the vamps and the demon types pretty much own it now.”

“How’d you know we were coming?”

“I didn’t. Blue here said she could sense people traveling dimensions – we had no idea who it was, though. How’d you get here?”

“We jumped through a portal,” Tara interjected.

“Really?” Faith asked admiringly. “Impressive. What made you do that?”

“We were fighting this creature – someone needed to jump into the portal to kill it.”

“Yeah,” replied Willow. “We’re kind of surprised ourselves, actually. We kind of counted on being dead.”

“Disappointed, Red?” teased Faith.

“Not exactly, but it is a little weird.”

“Tell me about it – I should’ve been dead about a hundred times now, and it never stops feeling weird.”

“Um…if Ilyria can sense dimensional travel, can she get us home?”

The blue-haired figure in question spoke from the corner. “No. Once I could have created the portal myself, but no longer.”

“Don’t worry,” said Faith. “Stick with us, and we’ll find you a way. I promise.”

“Why did you leave Rome?”

“Rome?”

“Weren’t you living with Buffy?”

Faith’s face fell. “B’s been dead for a year. So’ve you guys, actually – there was a time it would have shocked me that you walked through the door, but ever since I met Blue over there, not much surprises me anymore.”

“We’re dead? How?”

“Someone or something planted a bomb on the school bus while we were closing the hellmouth. Killed you two, B, Xander and Wood, and a bunch of the potentials too. I got tossed out a side window from the force, and I saved Giles and a couple of the potentials. G wanted to go to Cleveland, so we went. Been fighting the hellmouth there for two years. Then I got a call from Wesley, asking if I could help with this bitch of a problem in California.”

“How do you plan on doing that?”

“Don’t know. Don’t care. I’m gonna help this little resistance take L.A., and then I’m gonna figure it out from there.”

“You’re going to take the entire state?”

“Maybe, but I don’t think we’ll have to do it alone. The leaders of this army bunk down right here in L.A. – and killing them should put a serious kink in their plans, and let some more armies like us spring up. I haven’t managed to get much more info on any other groups, ‘cause this ain’t exactly organized resistance.”

“Who’s leading their army?”

“Don’t know – we just know they’re here.”

“Well, let me introduce you to the crew,” Faith continued. She led them around the bronze, pointing out people as she went. “That’s Larry,” she said, pointing at the ex-football player. “He told me once that he went to school with you, Red.”

“He did. Hi, Larry!”

“Hi, Willow.”

“And this charming fella here goes by Numero Cinco.”

Willow and Tara took in the sight of the small man in a wrestling mask, and decided a simple “hello” and a quick move on would be the best course of action. Before Faith could get to the next person, Tara stopped her to ask a question.

“Where’s Wesley? I don’t see him anywhere.”

“He’s out – gathering intelligence. Moving on?”

“The guy with the bad hair in the corner is Lindsey. Don’t know much about the guy – just that Blue trusts him - but Lorne tried to shoot him once.”

“Is Lorne here?”

“Not so much. The vamps got him three days ago.”

Tara hung her head – the empath demon had been one of the kindest beings she’d ever met.

“And finally, we’ve got big Blue.”

“I’ve told you repeatedly not to call me that, human.”

“Yeah, well, I don’t take orders well, Blue.”

Tara gasped as something clicked in her head. “Wait a minute…are you THE Ilyria? The Old One?”

Ilyria smirked. “Finally, I meet someone among the humans who knows me.”

“How…um, how did you end up in human form?”

“It pains me. I was resurrected in this shell by someone who deemed himself my follower. Unfortunately this shell cannot contain my full glory, and my powers are now a shadow of what they were. The desertion of the vampire has left me to lead these humans, whether I wish it or not.”

“Why? I mean…why do you lead them?”

“Because Wesley wishes it. And I find myself oddly concerned with his desires.”

A complicated knock, different than Ilyria’s, sounded at the door. The guards opened it to reveal Wesley, whose jaw dropped as he took in the sight of Tara and Willow.

“Dear lord!” he exclaimed. “How…”

“They have traveled across dimensions,” Ilyria explained tonelessly. “They have not come here intentionally.”

“How did you-“

Tara threw her head back as blue energy crackled between herself and Willow. The room disappeared in a bright flash.

“Get here?” Wesley finished. Willow and Tara took in their surroundings, which seemed to have changed completely – they were in the Sunnydale High library, Willow decided – the old library.

“Uhh…Tara?”

“Will? What on earth…”

“I’m sorry,” said Wesley. “I was just asking how you two got here. Is everything-“

FLASH!

“Okay?”

“Tara, is this Wolfram & Hart?”

“I think so. But how?”

FLASH!

“The Initiative?”

FLASH!
[hr]
In the darkness, a far more urgent conversation took place.

“What has caused this?”

“Free will – the eternal barrier was crossed.”

“The Red and the White are in flux.”

“Yes…free-falling between dimensions, tearing holes in the dimensional barriers and leaving a massive wake behind them. If this is not stopped, the damage to the dimensional barriers could be irreversible.”

“Can it be stopped?”

“Only by direct intervention.”

“Then let it be done.”
[hr]
“Dawnie?”

“Buffy? Is that you?”

Buffy rounded the corner into the dining room. “It’s me. I…Dawn, I’m so sorry. I’ve been so wrapped up in myself that I haven’t even thought about how you’re doing. It’s sad that it took Spike to make me think about my little sister.” She walked behind Dawn’s chair and put her arms around her. “How are you doing, Dawn?”

“I’m okay, Buffy. I was talking to Spike earlier, and like I told him, I just can’t seem to cry. I haven’t been able to cry since you guys came back. It…nothing seems real.”

Buffy nodded, kissing the top of Dawn’s head. “I know. It’s like you just keep expecting to wake up, to find out that it was all a bad dream and Will and Tara are safe and warm in their bed, like they should be.”

Dawn nodded. “Exactly! I’ve been in their room once a day since you guys got back – all I can think is that maybe one time I’ll open the doors and there they’ll be there.” Dawn’s lower lip began to tremble slightly. “Why did this happen, Buffy? It’s not fair and it’s not right. They’re-“ her voice cracked. “They’re the most wonderful people I’ve ever met, and the most perfect pair I’ve ever seen. It just isn’t fair.”

“No. It’s not fair, Dawn. Nothing about this is fair. It should never have happened, least of all to them…but there’s one thing you need to think about.”

“What’s that?” Dawn asked, a single tear making its way slowly down her cheek.

“Wherever they are now – whatever heaven they’ve gone to – they’re together. They went together – just like they would have wanted.”

Dawn’s face crumpled, and the shock she’d been in finally released her as she began to sob. Buffy turned her chair around and took her in her arms as Dawn’s arms beat weakly against her chest.

“It’s not fair!” she cried. “I want them back, Buffy – I just want them back.” She threw her arms around her big sister and let out everything she’d been holding in.

“I know, Dawnie” Buffy whispered, her own face streaked with tears. “I do too.”
[hr]
FLASH!

“Okay, this is just weird,” Willow said. “There’s nothing here – it’s just a big white nothing.”

“Hey, do you remember Quantum Leap?”

“Yeah…that’s it! We’re in the waiting room!”

“Ziggy!” they yelled simultaneously, and both of them burst out laughing.

“Okay…” said Tara when she’d regained control of herself. “How come we haven’t flashed again yet?”

“Because that’s been stopped,” said a voice from behind them. They turned to face the speaker.

“Mom?”

“Hello again, Tara.”

“What happened? I thought you s-said that barrier would kill me.”

“That wasn’t me, Tara. Someone used a powerful psychic to tap into the channel I was using to communicate with you and tell you lies – think about two radio stations broadcasting on the same frequency – you’ll only hear the stronger one, the one closer to you, and that was the false one. The last thing I said to you that you heard was that there would be a point in the battle where you’d know you’d lost.”

“Everything after that – telling me to call on you, making the imps disappear, telling me to jump – that was all lies?”

“Yes – I could hear what you were being told, but I couldn’t get through to you.”

Tara cocked her head, lost in thought for a moment. “You know, that explains a lot. Now that I actually have time to think about it, some of that made no sense. Giles has to have read the prophecy in Latin – he mentioned the poetry of it at one point – and he would have noticed a mistranslation like that. They must have pulled the bible verse from my head, too.”

“Yes – it was a powerful psychic, or maybe more than one, and they knew just what buttons to push and what memories to bring up to convince you to jump.”

“What about the imps? Why make them disappear if they were going to kill Buffy and Faith?”

“Because this was never about Buffy and Faith. It was about you. Well, you and Willow. The imps and even the Tok-Mageth were just tools to separate the two of you. The people behind this – who seem to have found a way to make themselves invisible to the powers - knew you were the only ones who could stop them.”

“Stop them f-from what?”

“Creating a hellmouth.”

Willow shook her head. “Sorry, you must have been talking into my crazy ear. A hellmouth is a natural occurrence, isn’t it?”

Mary smiled. “Yes, Willow, it is. But with the right ritual, a lot of time and a lot of sacrifices, one can be manufactured. That’s actually what Brother Frederick’s prophecy was about.”

“But the prophecy doesn’t mention anything like that – although that does explain the increased demonic activity in Rome.”

“Well, there’re two problems with the prophecy. Firstly, it’s vague, even for a prophecy. Second, the version you’ve been reading isn’t exactly right. Frederick wrote two prophecies that got mangled into one by a later scribe. The third verse – the one that actually mentioned the Tok-Mageth – was from the other prophecy. If it’s taken out, you’re left with the original.”

“Then Spike isn’t human yet? And Xander – he’s still going to die?”

“Most likely.”

Tara frowned. “But if the verse about the Tok was from another prophecy, how was it summoned when we were together?”

“Well, it’s a long story, but to make it short…the other prophecy was about all of you – and me – as well. It was a long, rambling prophecy about the battle you just fought. You sort of changed the ending by jumping through that barrier, though.”

“What was supposed to happen?”

“Well, the second half of my gift for you was going to be a spell to destroy the barrier. The ‘bend’ referred to in the prophecy referred to bending reality, not dying. Oh, and so you know, the second vision of me you saw didn’t give you any more power – it just made you glow brighter.”

“So what happened when we crossed the barrier?”

“Well, no-one had ever done that before. And if you’d been alone, it would have killed you like they’d planned. With two of you, though, both charged with the energy I’d given you, it transformed the barrier into a sort of super portal, which is why you’ve been flipping through dimensions like this.”

“What happens now?” asked Willow. “Can we go home and try to stop them from creating this hellmouth?”

“Well,” said Mary hesitantly. “It’s a little more complicated than that.”

Tara tensed, grabbing Willow’s hand.

“It’s okay, Tara, it’s nothing bad, just complicated. The Powers were stunned that you two chose to sacrifice yourselves to stop the Tok-Mageth – they never saw it coming. They’re so impressed that they’ve decided to offer you a choice.”

“What ch-choice?” Tara asked, moving unconsciously closer to Willow.

“You’ve proven yourselves as champions – even given your lives to save others. So…you can go home, back to the fight – or you can move on.”

“Move on?”

“To heaven, my darling girl. To your reward. A place where the two of you will be safe, and happy, and complete – and together for all eternity.”

Willow and Tara stared at each other, and Mary could see the questions and answers flying between them, communicated solely in their eyes. After a moment, Willow turned to her. “Can the hellmouth be stopped without us?”

“No.”

The two witches looked at each other for another moment, and Tara turned to her mother. “Then…I g-guess we’ll go back.”

“You’re turning down heaven?”

“Yes,” they answered together.

Mary beamed. “I knew you would. You’ve always made me proud, Tara. And Willow – there’s no-one but you I’d trust my daughter to. If both of you come over here, I’ll give you what you need to close the hellmouth.” They approached her, and she laid a hand on each of their heads, placing the knowledge they’d need into their minds.

“Wow,” said Willow as she stepped back. “What a rush!”

Mary smiled. “And Tara?”

“Mom?”

“Come closer.” Tara did, and her mother laid a hand on her stomach, which promptly began to glow. “Next time you want something of the light, don’t try and ask the dark for it.” Tara smiled, her eyes shining. Mary stepped back. “Okay, you two. Are you ready to go home?”

Tara hugged her mother and received a kiss on the cheek in return, and then linked hands with Willow. “We’re ready. Thank you, Mom. I Love You.”

“I Love you too. Both of you.”

A cool white light enveloped them both.
[hr]
Thus endeth the update. The next one should be up sometime early next week. Hope you all enjoyed, and thanks for reading!

ETA: Okay, two things I forgot - first, the song is "Untitled" by Simple Plan. Second, the whole set-up at the beginning of the chapter with a war-torn L.A. was pretty much a red herring - that's the last you'll be seeing of it. Okay, hopefully there's nothing else I'm forgeting...
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Re: First Fic - A Life Interrupted (updated 11/30)

Postby Missocki » Wed Nov 30, 2005 11:51 am

:applause That was fab! I really do love this story, and I wish I could have left feedback sooner!
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Re: First Fic - A Life Interrupted (updated 11/30)

Postby spells42 » Wed Nov 30, 2005 3:53 pm

Wow, so many updates so quickly! Not complaining I assure you. This is a great read and I'm enjoying it very much.

Your story is moving very fast and so much happens in each update that it's very exciting without neglecting the emotional side of the story. The Buffy/ Faith thing adds interest and potential for angst.

I thought there was something sus about the apparition of Tara's mum (she says with 20/20 hindsight), but substitution hadn't occurred to me. I'm sooo glad Willow caught on to Tara's intention and went with her. The dimension slide was amusing, with the same conversation continuing across it. Naturally W&T choose to return to prevent the new Hellmouth (our heroines!), I hope Tara's mum gave them something more useful than the PTB gave Faith in the way of info earlier. I was intrigued by the last little bit of the meeting with Tara's mum.... and I'm wondering what else she might have given them. Hmmmm? :glasses
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I don't recall Tara asking the 'dark' for anything so far in this story. I even went back and skimmed the previous updates to see. Is this something in Tara's history in the other dimension that's yet to be revealed?

Your Lindsey is a cold blooded villain isn't he? And Riley ... such a misguided loser. I can't wait to see Lindsey get his comeuppance.

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Re: First Fic - A Life Interrupted (updated 11/30)

Postby Kaia » Thu Dec 01, 2005 3:51 am

WOW!!

I love the update. Now things make sense.
I'll be checking the board for thr new update. I hope you post it soon!!
Keep up the good work! Congrats!

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Re: First Fic - A Life Interrupted (updated 11/30)

Postby FineyMcFine » Thu Dec 01, 2005 5:19 am

Thanks for the clarification about the Immortal. Dimension-hopping Willow and Tara, scary! I hope they make their way back to their home dimension so everyone can stop being so sad. Great update to this story, the action never seems to stop. And haha about Blue feeling oddly concerned with what Wesley wants. I always wondered where the Ilyria storyline would have ended up if Angel hadn't been cancelled when it was. Looking forward to more!
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Re: First Fic - A Life Interrupted (updated 11/30)

Postby AntigoneUnbound » Fri Dec 02, 2005 9:32 am

Heather, I just wanted to pop in to say that I know I haven't left fb on the last updates but that has everything to do w/ travel schedules and deadlines and nothing to do w/ this fic! I'm gone for the weekend but this is on my (enjoyable) to-do list for next week!

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Re: First Fic - A Life Interrupted (updated 11/30)

Postby Tarafied4Life » Fri Dec 02, 2005 3:22 pm

Okay, so there wasn't going to be an update till next week, but I just got a new job, and between starting that on Monday and school, I'm not sure if I'll have time to get one posted, so I figured I'd get this latest one up now.

Missocki - I appreciate the feedback, whether it be sooner or later! I'm glad you're enjoying the story.

spells42 - There'll definitely be more in the way of B/F angst - I like writing angst, so it'll always be there someplace. :-D I'm glad you thought the earlier vision of Tara's mom was suspect - I was trying to be subtle while dropping enough hints to make it a head-scratcher. And not to worry - her info's much more useful than the Delphi's. As far as Tara asking the dark - you didn't miss anything, it's coming up in this update! And we'll definitely be hearing Lindsey's side of the story soon - and yeah, Riley's pretty much just a loser. I'm happy you're still liking the story!

Kaia - I'm glad things make more sense now! Thanks so much for your kind words.

SallyMcFine - They'll be home soon, I promise - very soon, actually. I'm glad you liked Ilyria's cameo - I always liked her, and I had to get her in there someplace (I always wondered, too, what would have happened with her). Thanks for continuing to read!

AntigoneUnbound - Never fear! I get the whole deadlines issue, as my own schedule is about to get much crazier with this new job. I always appreciate your feedback, and I hope the story makes for a good read when you've got the time. Hope work isn't too crazy for you!
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Chapter 12 - The ceremony of innocence is drowned
Disclaimer: See Chapter 1.
Rating: R for language.


“Faith?”

The girl in question stood up from the library couch she’d been reclining on. “B?”

“Hi. I thought…maybe we could talk. I know I haven’t exactly been accessible girl since we got back from that place.”

“No worries, B. Take all the time you need. I’ve kinda been processing this in my own way.”

“Drinking?”

“Damn straight. I-“ whatever she’d been about to say was cut off by Dawn’s scream from upstairs. The two slayers raced side-by-side up the spiral staircase.
[hr]
They found Dawn standing outside Willow and Tara’s room, wet tears on her face but sporting a huge grin nonetheless. Her arms were spread across the open doorway to keep Buffy or Faith from racing into the room.

“Dawn?”

“It’s okay, Buffy, it’s better than okay, it’s incredible, oh my god!”

“What is it, Dawn?”

“I was making my daily stop here and…” she put one arm down and stepped aside to reveal Willow and Tara standing in the room behind her. Tara raised one arm in a shy wave.

Buffy physically staggered. “Wha…but…it can’t be!”

Faith, standing beside her, started to laugh. “Holy shit, T, you really did take how to die lessons from B! Son of a bitch! Come here, both of you, I’m gonna kick your asses for scaring us like that!”

Smiling, Willow and Tara walked out and wrapped Faith in a hug. When Buffy finished sputtering she joined them, her mind still reeling. Dawn was the last one in, squeezing them tightly.

“Okay…” started Buffy. “When did you guys get here?”

Willow smiled. “About five seconds before Dawnie opened the door.”

“What the hell happened? Where have you guys been? Did you really die?”

“One question at a time, Buff.”
[hr]
“Wow. That’s…wow. I don’t know what to say. You guys actually turned down heaven to come back here?’

“It was the only way. We c-couldn’t let another hellmouth open.”

“But…heaven!”

Tara gave a half-smile. “We’ll get there someday – but not today.”

“Tara, you’re glowing.” The blonde looked down at herself. “Not like that…I can’t put my finger on it, but you’re just glowing!”

“Thank you, Buffy.”

Dawn, who’d been sitting between Willow and Tara and holding their hands, looked up at her. “You ARE glowing! What’re you hiding?”

“N-Nothing! Look, we have bigger concerns than whether or not I’m glowing!”

“So how many more times do you have to die and come back to break Buffy’s record, T?”

“Um…”

“You know what? Doesn’t matter. Dawnie, round up the potentials and see if you can find Spike. We’re havin’ a welcome home party – we can call G later on, let him know what’s up, but he’d still be in the air right now.”

Dawn leapt to her feet. “Can do!”

“But the hellmouth-“ Willow began.

“Forget it, Red. We’ll figure it out – we always do. For now, you’re coming out with us to have a party. I think we can spare the time. No arguments!”
[hr]
As the car pulled up to the club, Willow leaned over to whisper in Tara’s ear. “You ARE all glowy!” she hissed. “And what did your mom mean about wanting something of the light and not asking the dark?”

“Nothing,” Tara whispered back. Willow stared at her. “I’ll tell you later, ok? I don’t w-want to discuss this in front of everyone.”

“Okay…but you better fess up later.” She poked Tara in the side with a finger, prompting a small squeal and curious looks from the front seat.

The car stopped, and Willow and Tara climbed out the back as Faith and Buffy emerged from the front. Two other vehicles pulled up behind them, a van carrying the potentials and Dawn’s car. She walked up to join them as they entered the club.

The place was empty except for them. Faith had rescued the owner from a vampire attack not long after they’d arrived in Rome, and he insisted on paying back the debt, so she’d called in a favor and had him clear the place for the evening. He went one better and refused to accept any money for drinks from them, insisting their money was no good. He’d left her favorite bartender on duty, so she headed there first before calling up song requests to the DJ. The club’s sound system came to life with a very danceable beat as Buffy joined her on the dance floor.

“Room on your dance card for a big idiot?”

“B…please don’t do that.”

“What?”

Faith looked away uncomfortably. “Talk about yourself like that.”

“Okay. I’m still sorry, though.”

“For what?”

“Pushing you away. I’ve been so awful to you – first I ignored you when we were in L.A., then the whole thing with Angel, and then when I thought Willow and Tara were gone – I should have been with you, instead of shutting you out.”

“’S’okay, B. You were in pain, and you just wanted to be alone…believe me, I’ve been there – it’s me, remember?”

“No, it’s not okay. That’s the whole point of having someone – so you don’t have to be alone. I…I need you to know…How I feel about you.”

“How do you feel about me, B?”

Buffy leaned in for a soft, warm kiss. “Clear enough?”

Faith smiled, ducking her head to hide the shine in her eyes. “After a kiss like that, you better be ready to dance!”

“I’m ready if you are!”

As the two began to dance, Willow and Tara took seats at the bar. “I’ll have a glass of wine – white, please,” Willow told the bartender. He turned to Tara for her order.

“I’ll have a coke, please.”

Willow smiled at her. “Okay – I don’t think anyone could hear us over this noise – what’s with the glow?”

“Wait till the drinks get here, okay?”

The bartender returned moments later with their drinks and left quickly to serve the potentials and Dawn.

“Drinks are here, no more excuses. What’s going on?”

Tara took a sip of her coke and exhaled slowly. “Okay. About six months ago – in the other dimension, obviously - we decided we wanted a baby – and that I’d carry it. We tried a couple of magickal methods, ones that were well-proven, because we wanted to have a baby that was truly both of ours. Nothing seemed to work, and no-one we consulted could tell us why. Finally, about a week before I came to this dimension, I went to a fertility clinic for some tests – I didn’t tell you anything about it. The doctor…” her eyes teared up. “The doctor said there was something wrong with me. That I could never carry a child. I was so broken up…I couldn’t even bring myself to tell you. I was so afraid you’d be angry or upset with me…”

“Hey, hey,” Willow said. “I would never be. Never.”

Tara nodded. “I know that now – but my mind was racing, and I wasn’t thinking clearly. Life was tough in Cleveland, and you wanted a baby so much…I thought it would break your heart if I told you. So I booked myself a trip to L.A., and told you it was to see an old friend. I don’t think you really believed it – it was a lame excuse – but you let me go.” She sighed. “And when I got there, I went to Wolfram & Hart. Once I got there, of course, everything changed, but if it had gone the way it was going to…I was going to ask Angel…no, beg Angel to see if there was anything their doctors or science team could do to fix what was wrong with me – no matter the price.”

“Is that what your mother meant about asking the dark? You were going to get the most evil company in the world to help you bring life into it? Tara, that’s…that’s like asking the devil to hold onto your soul for safekeeping. And can you imagine what the price would have been?”

“I know!” Tara cried, attracting a few looks from the potentials. She lowered her voice. “I know it was stupid, Will – but I was scared and desperate, and it was all I could think to do.” She looked tearfully into Willow’s eyes. “Can you ever forgive me?”

Willow put her arms around her. “Of course, baby. There’s nothing to forgive – I just hope you’ll always feel you can come to me. No matter what, Tara, I’m here for you. That’s what this is all about.”

“I know,” Tara murmured into Willow’s shoulder. “Thank you.”

Suddenly struck by a thought, Willow pulled back and stared wide-eyed. “Wait a minute…She put a hand on your stomach – was that…”

Tara beamed. “She gave us what we wanted, Will. I can already feel it.”

“That’s why…with the glow…OHMYGOD!” Willow screamed. This time all the potentials turned and stared, and even Buffy and Faith stopped dancing to look over.

“You okay over there, Red?”

Willow blushed and turned to Tara. “Um…did you want to keep it a secret?”

Tara laughed and rolled her eyes. “Fortunately, no. I think you better tell them what happened before they call Sonya over to make sure you’re okay.”

“We’re having a baby!” Willow announced. She turned back to Tara. “We’re having a baby?”

“We’re having a baby,” Tara replied. They kissed deeply as a crowd gathered around them. Breaking the kiss, Willow reached up to wipe a tear from Tara’s eye, as Tara did the same for her. “We’re having a baby…” Willow whispered in wonder.

“You’re having a what now?” Buffy asked as she approached them.

“We’re having a baby,” Willow repeated with a smile.”

“But how? And who’s…” she looked at Tara. “It’s YOU! That’s why you’re glowing!”

Tara nodded.

“How?”

“It was a gift – from my mother.”

“Oh my god – congratulations, you guys! God - I’m going to be Aunt Buffy! Do you know how bad I’m going to spoil this kid?” She wrapped them both in a tight hug, which Dawn joined seconds later.

“Easy on my girl,” said Willow. Buffy let them go quickly.

“Well, T, back from the dead twice and a mom to boot! You’re really on your game lately!” She hugged Tara and Willow in succession. “I hope you’re thinking about naming her Faith!”

Willow laughed. “We don’t even know if it’s a boy or girl yet!” She turned to Tara. “Do we?”

“No, Will.”

“Get another round for everybody,” Buffy shouted. “We’re going to have a toast!” Once everyone’s glasses were filled, Buffy raised her own. “To Willow and Tara – for not only saving all of our lives, but bringing a beautiful new life into the world. Congratulations!” She raised her glass to her lips and everyone followed suit. No-one heard the club’s front door open as Spike walked in.

“What’s all this? What are we toasting?” the crowd parted in front of him to reveal Willow and Tara at the bar.

“What…sod…bloody hell…” he scanned the crowd until he found Dawn. “You couldn’t have told me this on the bloody phone?”

“And miss that face you’re making?” Dawn smirked. “Not a chance. Plus, that’s not even the best news – Tara’s pregnant!”

“Pregnant? Bloody…” he turned to Tara. “It’s a good thing my heart don’t beat, luv, ‘cause I think you’d have given me a bloody heart attack a few times over now.” He approached them and hugged her gently, giving her a quick peck on the cheek, repeating the process with Willow. “Congratulations, you two. That’s bloody brilliant. Later on, when we have some time, you’re going to have to explain all this to me – but for now…barkeep! Whiskey!” He took the offered glass and backed up a little bit. “Since I apparently missed the first toast, can we do this again?” Everyone raised their glasses. “To my favorite couple – cheers!” Everyone drank again.

Willow stood and offered her arm to Tara. “May I have this dance?”

Tara smiled. “Of course…but we better not be the only people out there!”

Faith looked around to the potentials. “You heard her! Get out there and dance!
[hr]
By the time they arrived home, it was well after two in the morning, and everyone headed for their beds with barely a goodnight.

“Tara?” Willow asked as she dressed for bed.

“Mm-hm?”

“Have you thought about names?”

Tara turned from the table where she was brushing her hair. “Will, I’ve been pregnant for about seven hours.”

“So what’ve you come up with?” Willow asked with a grin.

“I thought…maybe if it was a girl we c-could name her Anya.”

“I think that’s a wonderful idea. If it’s a boy?”

“Um…I’m not sure.”

“Well, we can think about that one, then,” she said. “Come to bed, baby.”

Tara set the brush down and crawled in with her back to Willow, who took her cue and draped an arm over her. “I guess I better enjoy this while I can,” Willow teased, “before you get so big I can’t get my arm over you anymore.”

“Very funny,” Tara said, turning to frown at her. It only lasted a second, though, as she couldn’t keep up the pretense and laughed. “I think we have some time before that happens.”

They shared a quick kiss goodnight and peacefully drifted off to sleep.
[hr]
They woke late the next morning and headed downstairs together to find everyone, including Giles, waiting for them in the kitchen. A bright banner hung from the ceiling reading “Congratulations, Moms!” with the ‘s’ hastily painted on. They wiped their eyes as Buffy called out “surprise!”

“Morning, guys! Sorry we didn’t have time to do very much, but I promise when this whole hellmouth thing is over, we’ll throw you a real baby shower – but for now, we did make you breakfast!”

The potentials escorted them to the table, which was laden with more food than the group could possibly eat – omelets, pancakes, scrambled eggs, and hash browns, in huge quantities. Before they sat down, Giles offered them both a welcome home and congratulations with his usual reserve.

The group plowed through breakfast, the room filled constantly with happy chatter. Buffy speculated out loud about where she should buy baby clothes, while Dawn tried to get Willow and Tara to name her the baby’s sitter for life. Faith sat quietly next to Buffy, a small grin on her face as she watched her excitement. Willow and Tara, meanwhile, contributed almost nothing to the conversation, just laughing at some of the more outrageous things Buffy said and enjoying both each others company and the general mood of the house, so preferable to the gloom that had permeated it not that long ago.

“Tara?” asked Buffy.

“Yes?”

“I hate to ask, but I guess we should move this into the library and talk business.”

“I suppose. Are you finished breakfast, Will?”

“Mmph?” Willow asked, halfway through a pancake.

“No problem, Will,” laughed Buffy. “Just bring your plate with you.”
[hr]
“So do we know who’s behind it?”

“No, she didn’t know. Whoever’s doing this has some way to cloak themselves from the Powers.”

“So what do we know?”

“We know where. The ritual takes weeks, and it has to be performed in the e-exact spot where the hellmouth is being created. If we can disrupt the ritual, even once, than it’s all over. They’ve lost their shot.”

“How can we disrupt it?”

“Mom gave Willow and I a spell that should do the trick. But it’s not going to be as easy as walking in and doing it.”

“I knew you were going to say that.”

“We already know that whoever’s doing this has powerful psychics working for them. They could play a big part, making us see things that aren’t there and just generally messing with our heads.” She yawned. “Sorry – Will, could you take over for a minute? I’m just going to get some tea.”

“Don’t be too long. Okay, so like Tara was saying, there’s the psychics. And that’s the part of their arsenal we’re sure of. I’d say he’s got vampires, ‘cause you fought them earlier. And we really have no idea what else. I don’t think we can even recon, because if he’s got psychics on patrol they’ll see us coming a mile away – I think we’ll have to go in blind.”

“Hate that plan, Red.”

“So do I, but I don’t see any other way.”

Faith scratched her head. “No…I don’t either. Shit.”

Buffy patted her leg. “It’s okay, Faith. We’ll figure it out. How long do we have to stop the ritual, Will?”

“Two days,” she replied as Tara reentered the library with a cup of green tea and an extra pancake for Willow.

“Ooh, thanks, baby!” Willow exclaimed. “But you’re the mom – I should be getting stuff for you!”

“There’s time,” Tara replied. “Soon enough you’ll be going to buy me pickles and ice cream or something silly like that, so enjoy it while it lasts!”

“Guys?”

“Sorry, Buff. So…what do you think?”

“I think we’ll have to hit them at night – it means the vamps will be up and about, but it also means they might be scattered, guarding various entry points. Hopefully we can catch some of them alone or in small groups. What do you think we can expect from the psychics?”

“Well, if they’re powerful enough to tap into the lines between the living and the dead, then I’d think we can expect something almost as bad as the dreamers.”

“Damn,” Buffy breathed. “That bad?”

Tara turned to Willow and Faith turned to Buffy, and both asked the same question. “Who’re the dreamers?”

“Incredibly powerful psychics,” explained Willow. We met up with them…six years or so ago, I guess. They could bend reality – a vamp was using them to build a bridge between our reality and a demon dimension so his armies could cross over. It was…intense.”

“Once we get in their range, everyone’s going to have to be extra careful,” Buffy warned, addressing the potentials. “You might see things that aren’t there, or things that are there might look different than they should. I don’t want anybody staking a teammate or something dumb like that. Think twice about your actions, close your eyes for a second, just make sure your head’s clear before you act.” The potentials nodded and mumbled their assent. She turned back to Willow. “When do you want to do this?”

“Um…I thought you were leader-girl.”

“How long do the two of you need to get this spell ready?”

“A couple of hours,” Willow replied. “No more than three, anyway.”

“Then I’m voting we go tonight. No sense leaving things to the last minute. Dawn?” she asked, noticing her sister had her hand in the air.

“Am I coming?”

“Finished your homework?”

“Every last bit!”

“Then yes, if you’re feeling up to it. We need everyone. Are you in, Giles?”

“Of course. I’ll talk to the Council and see if they can offer anything in the way of combating psychic visions.”

Buffy turned to Faith. “Sorry – did you have anything to add?”

“Nope, all makes sense to me,” her voice dropped to a whisper. “Plus I love watching you in military mode.”

Buffy flushed. “Okay, Will and Tara, you guys get to work on that spell. The rest of you, come with Faith and I – we’re going to get some sparring in before tonight.” Seeing the questioning look on Dawn’s face, she added “you too, Dawn. We could all use a brush-up. Giles, let me know what we get from the council. Okay, let’s get going!”
[hr]
“Will, you know it’s only going to take twenty minutes to get the spell ready, right?”

“Yep.”

“What will we do for the other two and a half hours?” she asked with a smirk.

“Actually, I was hoping we could talk.”

“About?”

“Let’s do the spell first.”

“No – Will, you’re scaring me – you look like this is going to be a bad conversation. What do we have to talk about? You…you don’t want a baby, do you? It was stupid of me to think that just because we were going to in Cleveland meant…I’m sorry…” To Willow’s shock, she actually got up to leave. Willow grabbed her hand and pulled her back down.

“Tara, look at me,” Willow insisted, but she stared at her feet. “Look at me.” Tara’s head finally came up. “Of course I want a baby with you. That’s not even a question. I…okay, talk first and spell after. I just want to understand why you felt safer going to Wolfram & Hart than telling me you couldn’t have a child. I know it wasn’t me me that you didn’t tell, but I’d still like to know.”

“Will, I…it’s complicated – and it doesn’t matter, because it didn’t happen here.”

“Maybe not, but I think it would be better if I knew.” She looked at Tara and noticed her whole body was shaking. “I’m sorry, baby, I’m not trying to push you-”

Tara looked at her, and Willow was stunned by the abject terror in her eyes. She moved closer and put her arms around the shaking blonde. “I’m so sorry, Tara. I didn’t mean to hurt you.”

“It’s not-“ a choked sob escaped her. “It’s not that, Will. It’s just…hard.” She exhaled. “It’s…the last month I spent in Cleveland, there was s-something wrong between us.”

“What was it?”

“I d-don’t know. That’s what scared me so much. One evening you got a phone call – I know it was a woman, because I answered it, but I don’t know who it was. You took the call in our room, while I was out cooking us supper. I…I don’t know who it was, or what they said, but you looked devastated when you came out. I t-tried to ask you what was wrong, but you wouldn’t tell me. And after that, things weren’t the same.” Tears streamed down Tara’s cheeks as she recalled. “You were so cold – you’d barely talk to me. We stopped making love at all, and most of the time you barely noticed I was there. I told you earlier that you d-didn’t say anything about my lame excuse for going to L.A., but I’m really not even sure you’d have noticed I was gone.

That’s why I was so desperate to have a baby – I thought maybe if we could do that together, that you’d…” she swallowed the lump in her throat. “That you’d love me again. When I found out I couldn’t, I knew I couldn’t tell you – I just knew you’d l-leave me, and I couldn’t…I couldn’t…” she broke off in sobs, unable to finish the sentence.

Willow squeezed her tight, her own tears falling from her cheeks and landing in Tara’s hair. “Tara…I’m so sorry. I – I don’t know why I would ever hurt you like that, but goddess I’m sorry.”

“No, Will, it was my fault. Whatever it was, it was my fault.”

“How can you say that? You didn’t do anything!”

“I m-must have. Besides,” she sniffed, “you’re not allowed to be sorry – it wasn’t you!”

“It was me – alternate dimension or not, it was still me, so I’m allowed to be sorry. I – Tara, all I can do is beg you to forgive me.”

Tara craned her neck to look into green eyes. “There’s nothing to forgive, Willow. I was…it feels so selfish, but I was so happy when the Delphi told Angel my home was gone – because I could have a fresh start with you, a chance to not screw it all up.”

“Tara, you could never ‘screw it up.’ I know whatever happened wasn’t your fault, and I know nothing like that will ever happen here. Please believe me – I will never hurt you, and I will never leave you. We’re going to get married, and we’re going to have a baby, and I’m going to love you and take care of you forever and ever.”

“Willow…I love you so much…I just don’t ever want things to turn out like that again.”

“Never,” Willow swore, punctuating it with a kiss. “Never ever.”
[hr]
“Come on, Faith, hit me!”

“I am hitting you, B!”

“You’re my sparring partner – you’re not supposed to be taking it easy on me. I seem to remember a time when you enjoyed beating on me.”

Faith flushed. “Well, it’s different now.”

Buffy smiled, pleased she could make the brash girl embarrassed so easily. “I know. Seriously, though, let’s go for a real full-on brawl. We both need the warmup, and neither of us is going to cause any permanent damage. Hit me!”

“You asked for it!” Faith launched a series of punches, low and high, that nearly caught Buffy by surprise. She blocked each of them instinctively and spun into a high kick that caught Faith squarely in the jaw. Faith wiped away the smear of blood that had appeared on her lip, her eyes dancing as she really got into the spirit. She dropped and swept out a leg, aiming to take Buffy out at the knees, but Buffy jumped over her leg. Faith jumped to her feet in time to parry what could easily have been a knockout punch, and spin into a roundhouse of her own that Buffy blocked easily. Faith pretended to try the leg sweep again and Buffy bought it completely, leaving her wide open for an uppercut that landed her flat on her back. Faith jumped on top of her and pinned her arms to the ground beside her.

“Come on, B,” Faith said, planting a quick kiss on her lips. “Kick my ass.”

Buffy bucked her hips and tossed Faith off of her. They stood and faced each other, both grinning. “You’re so going to pay for that,” Buffy insisted.

Faith’s grin grew wider as she waggled her fingers in the universal “come get some” gesture.
[hr]
It was a little less than three hours later when the group reassembled in the library.

“Okay, status reports?’ asked Buffy. “Giles?”

“The council didn’t have a lot to offer, but there was a spell in their library that should keep our heads mostly clear. We can get to that afterwards. Other than that, they didn’t have much. There’s no recorded instances of anyone attempting this ritual before – although, given how dangerous it is, that's probably because they died and not because it wasn't tried.”

“Right…okay, that sounds good. And Xander’s nowhere near here, right?”

“No. He’s listed on a passenger manifest for a flight from Rome to Florida that left yesterday, so he should be safe.”

“Good. Will? Did you and Tara have any luck with the spell?”

“Right here, Buffy,” Willow held up a glass container full of purple smoke. “Lightning in a bottle – we just have to get close enough to the hellmouth to use it.”

“Fantastic! Are you guys okay, though? Your eyes are all bloodshot – both of you.”

“Just the smoke from the spell, Buff, nothing to worry about,” Willow assured her.

“Alright…and you guys?” she addressed the potentials. “You ready?”

They indicated they were.

“Faith?”

“I’m ready, B. I’m still kinda pissed that you wanted to quit training before I kicked your ass, but…”

Buffy grinned. “So you’re good, then. Spike – you awake?”

“Awake and bloody ready.”

“Good.” She grabbed a set of car keys from a hook on the wall and tossed them to Sonya. “You’re pulling chauffeur duty. Grab the van, okay?” She grabbed the scythe from the weapons chest and turned back to the group. “Everybody grab your pointy thing of choice – we’re rolling! Will and Tara, you guys can do the protection spell in the car, right?”

“N-No problem.”

“Good.”
[hr]
Author's Note: For anyone wondering about the reference to the Dreamers, they were in the Buffy game for xbox. It might be a few weeks, depending on work, before I can post again, but don't worry - I haven't forgotten about this story! Thanks for reading!
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Re: First Fic - A Life Interrupted (updated 12/2)

Postby DaddyCatALSO » Fri Dec 02, 2005 4:05 pm

"Aunt Buffy"; yeah, I've had certain younge rpersons call ehr that a few times :-).

What I really like is how this seems to involve adversaries on a truly myhtic scale.
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Re: First Fic - A Life Interrupted (updated 12/2)

Postby FineyMcFine » Mon Dec 05, 2005 7:54 am

Heather, as this story goes along I get more and more impressed with the plot. The elements of the plot that you laid out at the beginning and during the progression of events keep coming back and we get more information and/or they get resolved. Very nice explanation for Tara going to Wolfram & Hart in the first place - it's not something she ever would have done but her rift with Willow seemed to have put her not in her right mind.

Are we going to learn more about why Tara and Willow had problems in the alternate universe, or is that not integral to the story?

Your story is fantastic - I am SO enjoying it.
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Re: First Fic - A Life Interrupted (updated 12/2)

Postby spells42 » Tue Dec 06, 2005 5:39 pm

Hi. Unfortunately I'm running short of time, so I can't leave proper fb, but I wanted to say .... loving this fic, keep it up please. Such nice long updates too.

Yay, a baby!

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Re: First Fic - A Life Interrupted (updated 12/2)

Postby Tarafied4Life » Tue Dec 06, 2005 7:27 pm

Hi, All!

Not an update, unfortunately (stupid work), but I just wanted to pop in and thank all those that have left feedback:

DaddyCatALSO - Thanks once again! I'm glad you like the mythic scope - it's a lot of fun to write!

SallyMcFine - I'm glad you liked the explanation of Tara's visit to W&H - I was a little nervous about that part, 'cause I wasn't really sure how it'd work once I did it. I feel much better, though! :-D And we will definitely learn more about the Tara/Willow rift in Cleveland, but it might take a while - remember, it's all about the phone call... Thanks so much for the feedback!

Spells42 - Glad to hear you're still enjoying the story! There's definitely updates coming, whenever I actually get enough time to finish them! And definite cheers for the baby! Thanks for reading!

Hopefully I can get a new update posted next week - fingers crossed! Thanks to everyone who's read!
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Re: First Fic - A Life Interrupted (updated 12/2)

Postby Kaia » Wed Dec 07, 2005 4:43 am

I hope RL gives you a break so we can enjoy updates soon. :-D

I really like where you're going with this story and I'd love to hear more about what happened between W/T in the other dimension regarding that strange phone call. But I'm sure you're gonna show us that sometime later so I'd better sit and wait, patiently. :rofl
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