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Re: Insight, Part Two: Act One(1D)

Postby littlecrazy80 » Tue Mar 25, 2003 1:27 pm

:bounce :bounce :bounce :bounce

GREAT UPDATE!!!

:bounce :bounce :bounce :bounce

I love the interaction between Willow & Tara. Hope there will be some more.:whistle



*lil´c*

Unter den Blinden ist der Einäugige König.

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Re: Insight, Part Two: Act One(1D)

Postby 4WiccanLuv » Tue Mar 25, 2003 9:37 pm

:kitty Huh, wah? Our MOP is back?



:wave Woo Hoo!! *moonwalks across the floor* MOP, so good to have you back and in one piece, no less! :applause



I haven't read the update yet, but I'm sure I will love it!! Sorry for showing up late to the party, but I'm here now, ready to harrass...um...I mean praise...yeah, that's it...praise our almighty MOP!!! *bows down gracefully*



I will join in the chorus...."We want interaction." :thud

Ahem...yes...I'll be getting back to you with some feedback!



The Tara Liberation Front Lives!! ;)



C....you're killin' me with that sig!! :rollin I love it!! :laugh





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"Let every nation know, whether it wishes us well or ill, that we shall pay any price, bear any burden, meet any hardship, support any friend, oppose any foe, to assure the survival and success of liberty." - John F. JFK

Edited by: 4WiccanLuv at: 3/25/03 7:39:37 pm
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Re: Insight, Part Two: Act One(1D)

Postby KrisBo5 » Tue Mar 25, 2003 10:34 pm

Hello, Kittens, responses for ya! Thanks for reading!



littlecrazy80, thank you. Yes, yes, I shall be bringing forth a little "interaction" in the next bit, no worries there.



Linda, hey there strange one, er, I mean, stranger. Yeah, stranger. My bad. I shall look forward to feedback, Missy. And as for "interaction," see above. Again with The Tara Liberation Front, okay, okay, I'm workin' on it. . . .



Kris

"Frell that!"

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Re: Insight, Part Two: Act One(1D)

Postby 4WiccanLuv » Wed Mar 26, 2003 10:52 pm

Kris, this was such a wonderfully sweet update, thank you. Props for how you get into :willow & :tara heads and we get to hear their thoughts about one another. It's like a second serving of dessert! :bow



I especially liked how Tara managed to bring Willow around when she was feeling so nervous and vulnerable. The role reversal with the "extra flamey" candle was perfect. *swoon* ;)



BTW, LMAO when Willow knocked the lamp over and panicked. Her line about it being school property was so right on, so Willow. :laugh



The Scooby scene was most "Exxxcellent!" I tell ya, I :love your version of the Scoobies, they're so much fun. :rollin



Keep it coming MOP!! :boot No pressure!



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"Let every nation know, whether it wishes us well or ill, that we shall pay any price, bear any burden, meet any hardship, support any friend, oppose any foe, to assure the survival and success of liberty." - John F. JFK

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Re: Insight, Part Two: Act One(1D)

Postby KrisBo5 » Thu Mar 27, 2003 8:21 pm

Linda, well, if you think it was a sweet update, who am I to disagree, huh?



Sometimes I feel like I can write thoughts of the characters pretty well, other times, I think, hmm. . . not so much. But, I think I like using thoughts as a way of expressing things that I feel couldn't work as well if a character just came right out and said them. With that, I also like to be able to use thoughts as a juxtaposition to what the characters actually say, kinda showing how we tend to not say what we truly are thinking.



I debated alot about the 'role revearsal' thing with the candle. A part of me kinda wanted to just get them, well, how should I say this? Horizontal? But, another part just thought that so much time had passed that there would be some nervousness that would need to be assuaged between them; it was a 'startover' place, and this was a familiar place to restart. I guess it worked okay.



With Willow and the lamp, yeah, a little comic-panic there, as well as the well-known fear of dissing 'authority' in any way.



Glad you like The Scoobies. I have tried to keep them a bit lighter, more supportive and funny. That, to me, was what was important in the show, something that has been missing: support and fun and love. Anyhoo. . . .



More is on the way, no worries, you!

Kris

"Frell that!"

PS Thanks for the 'Faint-A-Con,' that is almost as good as the 'Thud-A-Con.'

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Re: Insight, Part Two: Act One(1D)

Postby JennY » Fri Mar 28, 2003 3:47 pm

That update was soooo worth the wait! It broke my heart to see how nervous Willow was. She can hardly believe what's happening, let alone will her body to move. Thank you so much for this update, Kris! :applause

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JennY



"Obviously something in your bottle needs uncorking." -Faith

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Re: Insight, Part Two: Act One(1D)

Postby VampNo12 » Fri Mar 28, 2003 4:16 pm

Kris, I hope life has calmed down for you :) , as for the update I quite enjoyed it. I found you captured the "lightness" of the gang perfectly with Xander, Dawn, and Buffy. And I hope Dawn get's her "food fight"... I can envision the hilarity ensuing from this action :grin .



As for W&T... my you made their feelings so palpable to me. Firstly, I must say I got a kick out of the play on "Your shirt", with instead "Your lamp"... at least here the only "badness" was Willow's fear of destroying "school property".



I think what struck a chord with me was how the one word "Willow" (and "power" that word conveys... depth of feeling) reverberated in Tara's thoughts like a mantra. By the same token Willow, was nervous (which is quite understandable), and thus, needed some help to focus on what's most important. With this in mind, I too loved how the candle was used as a "symbol" with the role-reversal (in a sense coming full-circle). Here this allowed Willow to remember... most importantly her own mantra being "Tara". Or in other words, just like Tara, everything boils down to one "truth"... each other (ie Willow thinking, "As she felt Tara's hand close around hers, as she felt Tara's skin around hers, Willow knew that everything she had ever wanted, everything she would ever want, she would find-- here-- with this woman. With Tara. And she knew, it had been there the whole time. All she had needed to do was reach out. Just reach out."). Can't wait for the rest of their "interaction" ;) !



Vicki

Edited by: VampNo12  at: 3/28/03 2:22:26 pm
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Re: Insight, Part Two: Act One(1D)

Postby xita » Sun Mar 30, 2003 1:00 pm

Oh kris, I just finally got around to this update. Sigh, Willow's all nervous and unsure and Tara is just so ready. It's funny because we've glorified the extra flamey candle so much that it's hard to believe Willow wouldn't immediately recognize it. For them it's just a single memory of a tremendous event. But they wouldn't be able to remember the details so easily, so quickly. Thanks so much for the update!

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Re: Insight, Part Two: Act One(1D)

Postby MissQuirky » Tue Apr 01, 2003 5:25 pm

Wow...I sure had a bit to catch up on! Well all of it was amazing, Kris! I loved it! :) Actually it was only 2 updates but they were long ones! :)



I'm glad they had the 'talk' and lots of babbles from our Willow...I SO love that! Warms my heart! :heart I loved that Tara ran back into the room, screw class, Willow goodness is more important! :grin And personally I wouldn't have been able to sit through a class either! Very happy she skipped! ;) It was sweet that Willow cared about breaking the lamp, I don't know why I had to comment on that but I just needed too. :)



The last couple of lines for this last update we're very touching, never has the word 'Reach out' got me all tingly. Well done Kris!! :bow (I've been gone so long I didn't even know this lil guy existed! lol)



And please excuse my childish quirks but I didn't know what the hell this lil guy -- :dance was doing, until I read 'dance' for the title...I thought he was trying to scratch his back on the wall or something - freaky! :



All around fantastic updates!! I'm looking forward to more...soon?? :)



~Ashley~

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Re: Insight, Part Two: Act One(1D)

Postby KrisBo5 » Tue Apr 01, 2003 11:59 pm

Sorry for the big ole delay in responding, but, I was out of town for a few days and, well, I'm lazy to boot, so. . . . Anyway. . . .



JennY, well, I'm glad that the update was worth the wait for ya! Yes, nervous Willow -- fun to write. Hope you stay tuned. Thanks.



VampNo12, thank you, and yes, the times they are a-changin'. . . and getting better, whew! I always have fun writing the Scoobies. The "lightness" is always a good juxtaposition with all the drama and/or heartache that I tend to inflict on others with my stories.



Re: W&T, to be honest, I never even really noticed the whole "your shirt" and "your lamp" thing that happened in this update. I'm observant, aren't I? Actually, it's one of those nice surprises for a writer, when you write something that others pick up on.



As I wrote this update, I think that what I was trying to achieve(don't know if I did or not) was that both of them were kinda "out of control" in their own way: Tara's readiness, Willow's nervousness. I felt that this would reveal a lot more about their characters in terms of what it feels like for them to renew this particular part of their relationship. As for the candle, yes, I wanted to use it as a 'full-circle' thing, a symbol of beginnings and trust and love and patience. I felt it would be fitting for Tara to 1) have kept the candle and 2) be the one to give it back to Willow. And, yes, it allowed Willow to think back and remember what is really important to her: simply them together, in their own time, in their own way, but always together. Thanks so much for reading and, as always, such great feedback.



xita, well, I'm certainly glad you finally got around to catching up with the story. I thought I might get more of a, oh I don't know, lashing for the Willow-not-right-away-recognizing-the-extra-flamey-candle, but what I think I was striving for is that we don't always remeber every little thing that happens; sometimes we need reminders. With W/T, and with all of the magic paraphernalia(including candles, eh?) in their lives, just seeing one more candle might not mean anything to them per se. But having Tara literally re-enact the episode, repleat with the 'actual' candle, well that brought it all back in vivid detail for Willow. Or, maybe I'm just a non-romantic, forgetful realist, teasing all of you Kittens relentlessly. In either case, I'm glad you enjoyed the update and I hope you keep reading.



MissQuirky, well, thank you, though saying it was amazing is pretty high praise. Shucks, I'm blushing!



I, too, love Willow-babble: both reading it and writing it. And, well, yeah, Tara had to skip that class, huh? I mean, come on. Willow smoochies or boring lectures. Hmm. . . that's a tough one. And that lamp, well, Willow's concern over its breaking seemed quite appropriate for her character; and don't worry, lots of people commented on it, too!!!



Glad 'reach out' made you all tingly, now I am blushing. And, yeah, I just saw that bowing-down guy recently, he's a hoot! So, thanks for that. LOL - childish quirks are great, and I think you're right, that little dude looks like he's got something goin' on down below. Hehehe!



Update is in progress, and should be ready shortly. Thanks for reading! Hope you keep doing so.

Kris

"Frell that!"

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Insight, Part Two: Act One(2D) Preview

Postby KrisBo5 » Mon Sep 29, 2003 12:02 am

Maybe too short, but as promised, a preview.





"Hey, no, don't worry about it," Buffy said into the receiver, a huge smile covering her face. "It's so not a big deal. I mean, it is a big deal, but you not coming-- er, well, I mean that if you don't come-- ah, what I mean is, you should stay there and don't worry about anything. . . ."



Buffy glanced around the kitchen corner into the living room. Open, empty pizza boxes, crushed soda cans, spilled chips cluttered the coffee table and floor. Xander lay on his back with his legs side-by-side in the air. Dawn sat on the bottoms of his shoes, trying in vain to remain balanced, arms flailing out from her sides. "Okay. . . okay. . . I'm set. Fire when ready, Jeeves!" Xander brought an M & M in front of his face and prepared to cast it skyward towards the teen's awaiting mouth.



Buffy leaned back against the wall, shaking her head. "We're all good." She paused briefly. "I'm so happy for you, Will. For both of you."



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Willow felt tears filling her eyes, as she smiled into the telephone. "Thanks, Buffy," she whispered, "for everything." She listened a second longer, and smiled again. "Okay, we will. Bye." As quietly as she could, Willow replaced the receiver in its cradle, her hand resting there a moment; her eyes strayed to the still-lit candle, watching the flame dance before her.



Inhaling deeply, Tara stretched the sleep from her body, reaching a hand out to touch Willow's back softly. "We will what?" she asked, her voice slightly hoarse.



Willow pulled her eyes away from the candle and glanced over her shoulder. Seeing Tara's tousled hair and sleep-worn face, she smiled. Beautiful. . . . Slowly, the redhead turned and rolled over until she was on her side facing the blonde, her head resting on the pillow inches from Tara's. "Hi," Willow whispered, staring into the deepest blue she had ever seen.



Tara felt her stomach freefall the instant Willow spoke, a feeling that accelerated times ten as the redhead continued to look into her eyes. Oh, my. . . . "Hi yourself, Willow," she sighed, touching the tip of her index finger to the redhead's nose before dropping her hand to take one of Willow's and tuck it close to her chest.



"Sorry," Willow said, whispering.



"I'm not," Tara replied, tugging a bit on the hand in hers. Willow smiled and followed the silent request, scooching closer. "Willow?" Tara hooked one ankle over the redhead's, pulling at it softly until it was cushioned between both of her own. Tipping her head forward in a secretive manner, she echoed Willow's breathy tone. "Why are you whispering?"



Willow's eyebrows lifted and she felt a slight heat run up her throat. Uh. . . . "I-I. . . ." She shook her head softly. "I don't know," she said finally, "it just-- I thought maybe. . . maybe I should?"



Tara squeezed Willow's hand and smiled. "Why?"



Willow tucked her free arm under her head, her eyes moving from Tara's momentarily as she tried to bring her thoughts together. Looking at the blonde, she sighed. "You were sleeping. . . ."



"But?"



"But," Willow continued, ". . . I guess it just seemed kinda. . . nice, and. . . and. . . ." Willow's voice trailed off before finishing, so she just shrugged softly. Yes, folks, don't let the idiot facade fool you -- you're lookin' at a future Mensa here.



Tara felt her heart skip uncontrollably, struggling against itself to regain a proper beat. Oh, Willow. She raised Willow's hand from her chest, bringing the open palm to her lips to press a gentle, warm kiss in its center.



Wow. . . .



Tara tucked the hand back in its rightful place over her heart and smiled into Willow's eyes. "It is." She mirrored the redhead's pose by tucking her free arm under her head. "But being awake has its. . . niceness, too."



Yeah it does!



"Is Buffy okay?"



Willow paused, her mind changing tracks abruptly. Uh, segue much? "What?"



Tara rubbed her ankle against Willow's as she spoke. "Buffy Summers? You know, your best friend?" Tara's eyes flicked over Willow's head towards the phone, then back to the redhead's again. "Is she okay?"



Willow stared into Tara's eyes a moment more. You are so beautiful. She nodded slowly.



"That's good," Tara said, a soft smile crossing her lips, as she continued her soft stroking of Willow's ankle.



Really, really good.



"Are you okay?"



Willow looked into Tara's eyes, momentarily stilled by the look of concern and adoration reflecting in their blueness. A warm wave coursed through her then, but it was unlike anything she had felt earlier that day. There was no feelings of nervousness, or inadequacy, or undeservedness.



There was only Tara and her.



And with that knowledge, the knowledge of them together again, came feelings she had dreamed of but never thought she would experience again: completion. She was complete again, made whole by Tara, by Tara's love and forgiveness. All of the rest of it, it dissipated, leaving behind a calm, a feeling of easy sureness. And that feeling filled her with a peace and happiness she hadn't felt in months. She nodded slowly.



Tara smiled again. "That's good."



That's. . . really. . . good. . . . Willow flexed the hand within Tara's grasp, opening it easily, even though it remained blanketed inside Tara's; softly she pressed her palm against Tara's chest, feeling the heartbeat there pick up its pace.



Tara's smile wavered as Willow's hand shifted, then settled flat against her chest. Willow. . . . The heat from Willow's touch burned her skin, even through the fabric of her shirt; she swallowed hard, knowing only that she wanted the redhead's touch to scorch every single inch of her body.



Willow stared at their hands, struck once again at how seamless they looked together. Two forms, unique and individual, but meant to be with one another. Meant to be one. Her eyes travelled up then, moving over the delicate planes of Tara's neck until she found herself staring into deep dark blue eyes.



Oh, Goddess. Tara felt her heart skip when Willow's eyes finally fell upon hers, and she took a deep, shuddering breath under their intensity. As much as Willow's touch stirred her passion, there was something in the way the redhead was looking at her now that made her blood feel like it was on fire.



Willow moistened her lips, felt Tara's heartbeat beneath her hand, the quick change in her breathing telling her how much Tara was feeling. For her. She pushed herself up from the pillow onto her elbow, letting her other hand remain perfectly still on Tara's body. Slowly she inched closer, edging her leg further between Tara's, bending it just enough so her knee came to rest between the blonde's.



Tara's mouth opened as she took a deep breath. Willow. . . . As the redhead's leg slid between hers, feeling like silk against her skin, Tara closed her eyes. Then she felt a slight pressure on her chest, a small push from Willow's hand; she felt her body melting away as she slowly allowed Willow to roll her onto her back.



Willow moved ever closer, letting her body press against Tara's, covering her. When Tara opened her eyes, she saw Willow gazing at her, staring deeply into her eyes. As her eyes held Tara's, Willow slid her hand from beneath the blonde's; slowly, softly, she moved from over her heart to the base of her throat, feeling the heated skin beneath her fingertips.



"Oh. . . ." Tara swallowed, keeping her eyes locked with Willow's.



Willow's hand was on the move again, gliding featherlight over the smooth, delicate mold of Tara's neck up to her face. Once there, she gently cupped Tara's cheek; the slightest of smiles graced her lips as the blonde leaned into her touch. . . . Goddess. . . .



"Willow," Tara said, her voice no more than a whisper. She watched as Willow's eyes left hers, travelling over the planes of her face, caressing her, loving her. "Willow," she said again, drawing the redhead's eyes back to hers. "We don't have to." Willow's hand began to retrace its path as Tara spoke. "If you're still--" Willow's hand came to a stop on Tara's breast, silencing the blonde instantly.



Willow kept her hand completely still, allowing only her thumb to pass over the covered nipple as she watched Tara. Her back arched into Willow's touch. Willow slowly shook her head, sighing audibly as Tara's body pushed against hers.



Tara covered Willow's hand with her own. "--nervous," Tara finished, more as an afterthought, and completely unconvincing.



Again Willow shook her head. The air around them was charged in the silence. They stared at each other for what seemed like an eternity, nothing but the beating of their hearts sounding between them.



Willow slowly moved then, shifting the weight of her body further on her elbow, sliding effortlessly onto Tara. She could hear-- and feel-- the blonde's sharp intake of breath as her knee pressed further between her legs, pushing her skirt up her thighs in the process. Willow felt her own breath coming faster just with that image alone. She stopped her advance only when she was directly above the blonde, only when her face was inches from Tara's, only when she could look deeply into the sparkling pools of blue. Tara. . . . Willow stared, unwavering, into those depths for second-upon-second before allowing a whisper-soft smile touch her lips.



"Willow," Tara whispered, her breath fanning over the redhead's face so close to her own.



Willow's eyes fell to Tara's full lips briefly, watching mesmerized as the blonde moistened them with the very tip of her tongue. No more. . . . No. More. Waiting. Willow lifted her eyes to Tara's once more, seeing the desire and need behind the half-closed lids. She opened her mouth slightly as she lowered her face the final inches, pushing the tip of her tongue past her lips; she closed her eyes as she at last felt-- and tasted-- Tara.



Tara found herself holding her breath as Willow's mouth moved ever-so-slowly down to hers; when the redhead's lips finally met hers, it was soft and warm and moist and. . . over way too soon. Tara opened her eyes as she felt Willow's mouth leave hers. She released the breath she had been holding softly, her brow creasing slightly. "Willow?"



Willow was motionless, completely and utterly still, her face mere inches from Tara's. She stared deeply into the blonde's eyes, feeling everything inside her coming undone. It was like fire, her blood burning and enflamed, coursing through her, heating every nerve. Oh, Goddess. . . .



Willow's mind was at war with her body. She wanted to be soft and gentle and tender; this, their first time after so long apart. Isn't that how it should be? A relearning? A reintroduction? Her mind told her to go slow. To savor and experience every single touch and taste.



But her body. . . .



Willow's body was alive. Vibrating with an intensity of desire the redhead could scarcely deny. One she didn't want to deny. After so long, after so many wishes and regrets and fantasies, she was here. With Tara. Tara was in her arms, under her, holding her, wanting her. . . .



Surely giving in to the desire that raged within her was not wrong? How could it be? This was them. Tara and her.



The blonde's other hand moved from its resting place on her pillow up into Willow's hair, running through the soft copper tresses at the back of her head before resting at the nape. "Are you okay?"



Willow swung her eyes to Tara's, staring unblinking into their depths. Unconsciously, she squeezed her hand around Tara's breast. . . . Tara.



Tara's mouth opened slightly at the simultaneous pressure on her breast and the deep intensity in Willow's gaze. She recognized it for what it was: pure, unfiltered desire. How could she forget? She lived to see that fire rage in her lover time and time again; this time was no different. She thought it should be, what with Willow's nervousness before, and the mere fact that this would again be their first time.



But the truth of who they were together remained.



She wanted Willow more than anything. She wanted Willow to take her. To have her. The way she, herself, wanted Willow. All fire. All desire. No holding back. Just letting go. There would be time enough for gentle and tender and sweet. Right now though. . . .



Tara swallowed. Willow. . . . "It's okay," she said, keeping her eyes on Willow's, watching her closely. She saw the slightest movement, Willow's head tilting ever-just-so. She licked her lips. . . . please. . . . "I-I mean. . ." she said, pausing as she swallowed. Then, the hand which had been resting against the back of Willow's neck slid softly forward, tracing over skin until her fingertips brushed over the redhead's lips. Tara made sure she held Willow's gaze as she spoke. "I'm okay. . . ."



At Tara's soft caress, Willow's lips opened slightly, allowing for the tip of her tongue to edge out and make contact with the pad of the blonde's fingertip.



Willow, I'm okay if you wa--"



Tara got no further.



Kris

"Frell that!"

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Re: Insight, Part Two: Act One(2D) Preview

Postby barnabasvamp » Mon Sep 29, 2003 5:12 am

OMG!! Faint!! :thud



I was very happy to see that you had indeed not fallen off the face of the earth, and that your new job had not done you in! :lol



A short update is ALWAYS better than none, and SMOOCHIES are always worth the wait! Now you know this means you can't make us wait as long for the next one??



So touching, and sensous. Kris, don't ever doubt your ability to write about the love.



Jean



"When choosing between two evils, I always like to take the one I've never tried before"-Mae West

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Re: Insight, Part Two: Act One(2D) Preview

Postby IsayAmberBensonsgorgeous » Mon Sep 29, 2003 5:20 am

:bigwave howdy dad! :wink MOP! :bow

well that was meanish, to leave us hanging like this! :mad desperately waiting for the next update :smash still it was :thud but you know we're insatiable, so MORE, MORE, MORE! :bounce :bounce :bounce

C. :read

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Re: Insight, Part Two: Act One(2D) Preview

Postby Puff » Mon Sep 29, 2003 9:54 am

*Fans self* You know I think I missed the last few updates so I went back and read the whole thing again. Dear God I need a cold shower or something now. I can't wait for the next part, the passion between them is just so intense.



Welcome back Kris :)



So, the day started and I knew my name and had my pants on. So far, so good. Yay.
Amber Benson

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Re: Insight, Part Two: Act One(2D) Preview

Postby 4WiccanLuv » Mon Sep 29, 2003 11:22 am

Woo Hoo!! Willow's got her groove back on! :dance And Kris, that was just so wrong to leave us hanging mid smoochie like that! Meanie! :punish



Very HOT scene and yet tender....beautiful! :love



More please!



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"Let every nation know, whether it wishes us well or ill, that we shall pay any price, bear any burden, meet any hardship, support any friend, oppose any foe, to assure the survival and success of liberty." - John F. JFK

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Re: Insight, Part Two: Act One(2D) Preview

Postby KrisBo5 » Tue Sep 30, 2003 2:42 am

Some quick responses. . .



Jean, no, no falling off the face of the Earth, but I wouldn't count the job out yet. Hehe. Well, I did promise a preview, and yeah, well, short, and yeah, well, took a year, but hey, you got one. Thanks for sticking with the story, and thanks for the compliments on the "love." You know how I feel about that. . . And, hey, thanks for the faint-a-con, you know I like that best of all!



C, well, wasn't trying to be mean, but, well, you wanted a preview of DF or Insight. . . Ya got both. And now you want more? Oiy! Thanks for the encouragement! As always, you all are great.



Puff, thank you for the welcome back. I know, I've been away far too long. I'm lazy that way, ask anyone. My thanks to you for continuing to read and comment. As always, it is appreciated. So, how was that shower?



Linda, hey, now, it wasn't intentional to leave ya hanging. . . It was a "preview." But, glad yopu liked it and glad you're still around to read it. I have been a lax MOP. Shame on me. Hehe.



Thanks all, for reading!



Kris

"Frell that!"

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Re: Insight, Part Two: Act One(2D) Preview

Postby allykat » Mon Oct 20, 2003 6:30 pm

WOW! This is just wonderful!!:clap :clap :clap

I just read the whole thing, can't wait for more!!

:bounce



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Re: Insight, Part Two: Act One(2D) Preview

Postby Little M » Tue Oct 21, 2003 4:47 am

Yieeeeeeehaaaaaaaaaaaa you wrote more!!!!!!:applause :applause Thank you so much, and what a wonderful update. Its so sweet Willow was nervous about her passion and desire, but she doesnt have to be nervous, cos its Tara, and Tara felt/feels the same :)



Once again thank you, hope you will write more soon :kiss

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Re: Insight, Part Two: Act One(2D) Preview

Postby xita » Sun Oct 26, 2003 7:56 pm

Ahh, short update but oh so.. good. You sure know how to build that tension. Tara kept repeating Willow's name and god I was too. I like seeing Willow and her needs written so beautifully. I am glad you haven't forgotten this fic :) Thanks for the update!

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-Me & Bobby
McGee

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New Year's Resolution to actually write something

Postby KrisBo5 » Mon Jan 12, 2004 2:44 am

Again, New Year. . . New Resolve -- Must. Post. Update. Soon.



xita, very glad that you thought the preview was worth the wait. And you know I am one for liking the tension. . . LOL, you were repeating Willow's name, huh? Well, I guess I'm doing something right. . . I haven't forgotten this fic, rest assured, I simply let real life get the better of me -- no more of that crapola! LOL!



Kris

"Frell that!"

KrisBo5
 


Re: New Year's Resolution to actually write something

Postby Marilda » Mon Jan 12, 2004 5:07 am

Oh please, please, please...let that not be teasing. I want to read more of your fics...and soon.



I anxiously await an update.

Marilda
 


Re: New Year's Resolution to actually write something

Postby Puff » Mon Jan 12, 2004 11:29 am

Hey Kris :) Nice to see you around again. I like the sound of your resolution and I look forward to an update. Soon.



So, the day started and I knew my name and had my pants on. So far, so good. Yay.
Amber Benson

Puff
 


Re: New Year's Resolution to actually write something

Postby Washi » Sat Feb 14, 2004 9:18 am

Still waiting patiently here. Happy Valentine's Day. Wouldn't an update be like an incredible gift on this so-far crappy day? It would. And I'm babbling, sorry. Like I said, waiting patiently. :grin

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Re: New Year's Resolution to actually write something

Postby wilgen » Sun May 09, 2004 7:16 pm

Hey Kris,



New Year's Resolution to actually write something? Have you written by any chance a new chapter for this great fic? If yes please post. If no please write.



Wilgen.

wilgen
 


Re: Fic: Insight

Postby Jennpurr » Sun May 09, 2004 8:53 pm

Kris,



Need... more... of... this... fic... soon!



Please?? :pray



Jen

~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Phoebe: I hate cemetery's at day. (They hear a noise.) What was that?
Prue: Ah, probably a zombie or vampire.
Phoebe: Great, where's Buffy when you need her?

Jennpurr
 


Re: Fic: Insight

Postby 4WiccanLuv » Sun May 09, 2004 9:10 pm

:wave Hey MOP, I'm with the other Kittens....update soonish, yes? I miss this story terribly! :sob

"Those are my principles. If you don't like them I have others." - Groucho Marx

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Re: Insight, Part Two: Act One(2D) Preview

Postby pipsberg » Sun May 09, 2004 11:20 pm

OH. MY. GOD. Incredible story! You can't leave us hanging like that!!! I just found this story and now I am fiending for more!! Please update soon...

-pipsberg



"We live our lives, do whatever we do, and then we sleep - it's as simple and ordinary as that."

Michael Cunningham, The Hours

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Re: Insight, Part Two: Act One(2D) Preview

Postby Jennpurr » Fri May 28, 2004 10:23 am

Kris, you're killing me with suspense here. :sob



Update, soon? Please? :pray



Hope you are doing okay, sweetie.



Jen

~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Phoebe: Be vewy, vewy quiet. We're hunting demons. ~ Charmed: Season 2, "P3 H20"
Quia ego cognosco cogitationes meas, quas ego cogito super vos, dicit Jehova, cogitationes pacis, et non in malum; ut dem vobis finem et expectationem. ~ Jeremiah 29:11

Jennpurr
 


Re: Insight, Part Two: Act One(2D) Preview

Postby barnabasvamp » Fri May 28, 2004 10:46 am

*flys in, changes form, sits next to Jenn*



:wave Hey Jenn, I'm with you!! I've just kinda been kinda checking in on this fic, but we may have a bit of a wait! :happycry



:bow Oh MOP, we are not worthy, but we need an update anyway! :D



BV

It's the passion in a kiss that gives to it its sweetness; it is the affection in a kiss that sanctifies it.

barnabasvamp
 


Re: Insight, Part Two: Act One(2D) Preview

Postby aka MKF » Sat May 29, 2004 11:27 pm

er, uhm, :drool



Wow, amazing update. But you can't leave it like that. I'm dying to see how the... uhm...story - that's right, the story, I'm dying to see how the story is going. Excuse me for a moment...



:shower



...okay, that's better. I really am dying to see where this story is going.



Mic



aka MKF
 

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